Already changed it, mister. That comment was before I edited it more better.
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by Manaime » Thu Aug 17, 2017 7:11 pm
by Manaime » Thu Aug 17, 2017 8:56 pm
by Essu Beti » Thu Aug 17, 2017 9:00 pm
National News Radio: A large-scale infrastructure project will soon be underway. During this time, for safety reasons, the island will be closed to tourists and foreign news agents. We do expect a minor loss in revenue due to this, but this will be greatly offset by both the long and short-term benefits of the infrastructure project. If your job is negatively impacted by the island closure, please send a letter or verbal message via courier to the Council so that we can add you to the list of beneficiaries of foreign aid.
by Manaime » Thu Aug 17, 2017 9:07 pm
Essu Beti wrote:((OOC: It's been sent too early. Proposals take time to perfect. Your English is still blocky, and I have no idea why your initial paragraph mentions micro-organisms from polutants when the real problem is the polutants themselves. And you're still using 'conservative' instead of 'conservation,' and there's still some humanocentrism that needs purged. Also it really doesn't do much at all except establish a committee.
Seriously, give it a lot more than just a few hours without comments before you submit it next time. It's a marathon, not a sprint.))
by The Sheika » Thu Aug 17, 2017 9:26 pm
Manaime wrote:Essu Beti wrote:((OOC: It's been sent too early. Proposals take time to perfect. Your English is still blocky, and I have no idea why your initial paragraph mentions micro-organisms from polutants when the real problem is the polutants themselves. And you're still using 'conservative' instead of 'conservation,' and there's still some humanocentrism that needs purged. Also it really doesn't do much at all except establish a committee.
Seriously, give it a lot more than just a few hours without comments before you submit it next time. It's a marathon, not a sprint.))
Sure! I'll just wait for a few hours before I can send my proposal, done!
by Nessuna-Arma » Fri Aug 18, 2017 3:30 am
Manaime wrote:Knowing that the environment is at risk of being affected with micro-organisms that may have spread from pollutants, often to endanger living organisms such as trees and mammals, by tending to break out into smaller forms of particles, at which, may seem to cause global warming,
by Araraukar » Fri Aug 18, 2017 4:00 am
Apologies for absences, non-COVID health issues leave me with very little energy at times.Giovenith wrote:And sorry hun, if you were looking for a forum site where nobody argued, you've come to wrong one.
by Imperium Anglorum » Fri Aug 18, 2017 4:01 am
Araraukar wrote:OOC: Why the hell did you submit this? It's still full of nonsense.
by Wrapper » Fri Aug 18, 2017 4:05 am
7 hours ago: Manaime withdrew a proposal from the WA General Assembly titled "Conservation to Save natural life".
7 hours ago: Manaime submitted a proposal to the General Assembly Environmental Board entitled "Conservation to Save natural life".
by Manaime » Fri Aug 18, 2017 8:18 pm
by Essu Beti » Fri Aug 18, 2017 8:20 pm
National News Radio: A large-scale infrastructure project will soon be underway. During this time, for safety reasons, the island will be closed to tourists and foreign news agents. We do expect a minor loss in revenue due to this, but this will be greatly offset by both the long and short-term benefits of the infrastructure project. If your job is negatively impacted by the island closure, please send a letter or verbal message via courier to the Council so that we can add you to the list of beneficiaries of foreign aid.
by Manaime » Fri Aug 18, 2017 8:22 pm
by Essu Beti » Fri Aug 18, 2017 8:29 pm
National News Radio: A large-scale infrastructure project will soon be underway. During this time, for safety reasons, the island will be closed to tourists and foreign news agents. We do expect a minor loss in revenue due to this, but this will be greatly offset by both the long and short-term benefits of the infrastructure project. If your job is negatively impacted by the island closure, please send a letter or verbal message via courier to the Council so that we can add you to the list of beneficiaries of foreign aid.
by The Sheika » Fri Aug 18, 2017 8:58 pm
Araraukar wrote:So, what exactly would you want to do with this proposal? Are you trying to reduce pollution or littering, or what? You have a better chance of passing something if it's a specific solution to a specific problem. Making a vague "let's make the environment better" statement, even wrapped up in pretty language, is unlikely to pass or really to even make much sense.
Knowing that the environment is at risk of being affected with chemical emissions that may have spread from pollutants, often to endanger living organisms such as trees and mammals, by tending to break out into smaller forms of particles, at which, may seem to cause global warming,
Planning a better future for mankind, both in matters of government changes to release a conservative campaign against the reduce of factories and other types of pollutants that tend to be wasted,
by Manaime » Fri Aug 18, 2017 9:53 pm
Essu Beti wrote:OOC: A couple of days is hardly quite a while. If you look at some of the passed resolutions, you'll see. The most recent passed resolution, Trade of Endangered Organisms? Its thread started in October of 2016. Proposals can't just be cranked out in a few days, if you want them to be good enough to be passed.
by Essu Beti » Fri Aug 18, 2017 10:10 pm
National News Radio: A large-scale infrastructure project will soon be underway. During this time, for safety reasons, the island will be closed to tourists and foreign news agents. We do expect a minor loss in revenue due to this, but this will be greatly offset by both the long and short-term benefits of the infrastructure project. If your job is negatively impacted by the island closure, please send a letter or verbal message via courier to the Council so that we can add you to the list of beneficiaries of foreign aid.
by Manaime » Fri Aug 18, 2017 10:36 pm
by Araraukar » Sat Aug 19, 2017 12:11 am
Manaime wrote:Shall I include you and Arakauar as co-author since you helped me in this proposal?
Apologies for absences, non-COVID health issues leave me with very little energy at times.Giovenith wrote:And sorry hun, if you were looking for a forum site where nobody argued, you've come to wrong one.
by Wallenburg » Sat Aug 19, 2017 3:40 am
by Manaime » Sat Aug 19, 2017 12:01 pm
Wallenburg wrote:Could you explain to me the goals of this proposal, as to both mandates on member states and further recommendations to them? I get that you want to reduce pollution, but the way that this proposal seems to be going about it has a very orange-blue mentality to it.
by Essu Beti » Sat Aug 19, 2017 12:09 pm
National News Radio: A large-scale infrastructure project will soon be underway. During this time, for safety reasons, the island will be closed to tourists and foreign news agents. We do expect a minor loss in revenue due to this, but this will be greatly offset by both the long and short-term benefits of the infrastructure project. If your job is negatively impacted by the island closure, please send a letter or verbal message via courier to the Council so that we can add you to the list of beneficiaries of foreign aid.
by Wallenburg » Sat Aug 19, 2017 12:17 pm
Manaime wrote:Wallenburg wrote:Could you explain to me the goals of this proposal, as to both mandates on member states and further recommendations to them? I get that you want to reduce pollution, but the way that this proposal seems to be going about it has a very orange-blue mentality to it.
All I just wanna do is increase conservative ideas throughout NS Nations. No one has ever made it to grant authority of conservative ideas, and I just want to do just that.
by Bitely » Sat Aug 19, 2017 5:22 pm
Wallenburg wrote:Manaime wrote:All I just wanna do is increase conservative ideas throughout NS Nations. No one has ever made it to grant authority of conservative ideas, and I just want to do just that.
1) This is conservative. This is conservative. This is not. That is conservationism. Big difference.
2) "I just want more conservationism" isn't helpful. Legislation requires a specific goal or goals in mind, and means by which to achieve that goal. If I don't even know what exactly you want to do, I can't help you to make this proposal work.
by Bears Armed » Sun Aug 20, 2017 5:03 am
by Araraukar » Sun Aug 20, 2017 5:23 am
Apologies for absences, non-COVID health issues leave me with very little energy at times.Giovenith wrote:And sorry hun, if you were looking for a forum site where nobody argued, you've come to wrong one.
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