[DRAFT] Improving Public Education

[United Socialist Ecuador]

This is my draft proposal. Give me your opinion.

Improving Public Education Standards

Category:Education and Creativity

Area of Effect: Educational

Proposed By: Me

Description: Reminding on the Fact that Public Education is by the masses, and it is gradually slowing and going down. Many nations are starting to get less of the education that it is important for nations. Such as Politics, Economics, Military Jobs, the most important of them. And other jobs, Diplomatic, Markets, Sellers, Creators, to less important jobs, but we need education to keep many nations afloat.

Recognizing that without education, many nations aren't that stable, crime goes up, unemployment goes down, to the wage gaps getting bigger and bigger. Overall, nations would be in danger of collapsing and vulnerable to depressions etc,

Declares that:

(I)Improving the quality of technology, that gives students more access to databases. Makes students more easily to get their assignments, help students learn more and expand their knowledge. And provide free internet access and putting an internet blocking program to make it only for school purposes. This will also provide jobs for the school curriculum.

(II)To cut budgets at school programs that only a few people join. So we can put money on the programs that the masses of the students want and need, instead of raising taxes.

(III)Provide healthy foods. Like routine checking, and to join many programs for healthy snacks. And to make obesity, drug, bullying etc. awareness. And to make programs of sports and more that the masses of the students enjoy to slow down all of these things.

(IV)Finally, the subjects and teaching at school needs to get a refresh. To teach more advanced things and stop teaching too many frequent things. And students who need help at certain subjects can get into a type of program that has tutors and interactive learning capabilities and applications online as well.

What do you guys think?

[Blaist Blaland]

I generally support improving public education, but I think the draft could be improved by being more specific on how it would improve the education. Examples could be hireing more teachers per student or investing more in books/school equipment. I also think it should be considered that private school standards may vary a lot between World Assembly nations, so aiming for those standards may not be very specific.

[United Socialist Ecuador]

I generally support improving public education, but I think the draft could be improved by being more specific on how it would improve the education. Examples could be hireing more teachers per student or investing more in books/school equipment. I also think it should be considered that private school standards may vary a lot between World Assembly nations, so aiming for those standards may not be very specific.

Public Education is necessary for our advantage in intelligence and our power in the global stage. Including teaching can bring our view in the world in another way due to scientific advancements. And then again more of our understanding in politics, military and diplomacy. By improving Public Education to PRIVATE SCHOOL standards, these advantages can help us for our future.
And at the same time we will need it, due to the rank of Public Education worldwide, is gradually falling. It may be falling slow, we cannot lead it onto the ground.
https://www.nationstates.net/nation=uni ... My proposal will try and give students a better future and help us understand the world we have today, and helping annual income due to good jobs and more equality because of people learning skills that private schools and other sectors teach.

Now what we can do to start this is by giving equal pay to women and men, leading to more happy employees and more employment as well. And by using more technology for the curriculum, advanced computers, downloaded textbooks, better quality of teaching by teaching more advanced stuff and less frequent subjects. And the students who are behind can get extra education after school, or in recess by tutors or computer programs. To more drug awareness, more sports programs for after school, better and healthier food as well.
Finally, Teaching Politics and skills that the students want to learn can be very important for their future.

Anymore ideas?

[The Greater Siriusian Domain]

Terran Saber: "This discussion is nice and everything, but where's the actual proposal? You can't simply submit a talking point as a proposal."

OOC: Please read the Rules and General advice for the General Assembly.

[United Socialist Ecuador]

Terran Saber: "This discussion is nice and everything, but where's the actual proposal? You can't simply submit a talking point as a proposal."

OOC: Please read the Rules and General advice for the General Assembly.

This is just an Idea. I want to do this, but this is my first draft. I am still trying to create it.

[United Socialist Ecuador]

Terran Saber: "This discussion is nice and everything, but where's the actual proposal? You can't simply submit a talking point as a proposal."

OOC: Please read the Rules and General advice for the General Assembly.

Public Education is necessary for our advantage in intelligence and our power in the global stage. Including teaching can bring our view in the world in another way due to scientific advancements. And then again more of our understanding in politics, military and diplomacy. By improving Public Education to PRIVATE SCHOOL standards, these advantages can help us for our future.
And at the same time we will need it, due to the rank of Public Education worldwide, is gradually falling. It may be falling slow, we cannot lead it onto the ground.
https://www.nationstates.net/nation=uni ... My proposal will try and give students a better future and help us understand the world we have today, and helping annual income due to good jobs and more equality because of people learning skills that private schools and other sectors teach.

Now what we can do to start this is by giving equal pay to women and men, leading to more happy employees and more employment as well. And by using more technology for the curriculum, advanced computers, downloaded textbooks, better quality of teaching by teaching more advanced stuff and less frequent subjects. And the students who are behind can get extra education after school, or in recess by tutors or computer programs. To more drug awareness, more sports programs for after school, better and healthier food as well.
Finally, Teaching Politics and skills that the students want to learn can be very important for their future.
This was the commentary. Now this is the rough proposal

Improving Education shall include-

Employment:
1. Starting to give equal pay to women and men
2. Will lead to more happy and attentive employees
3. To lower unemployment

Technology:
1. Better subjects and extra education for the troubled and low grades
2. Advancing and funding in more technology like Computers, downloaded assignments and virtual teachers
3. Cutting funds on paper and pencils, textbooks, and more due to taking up more space

Health:
1. More onto Drug Awareness
2. More Sport programs
3. Healthier food

Education:
1. Teaching Politics and skills on separate parts of the school curriculum
2. Teaching more advanced things and learning less frequent subjects
3. Ending misinformation in textbooks

[United Socialist Ecuador]

Anymore suggestions?

[Tinfect Diplomatic Enclave]

Anymore suggestions?

OOC:
The time difference between this and your previous post was 15 minutes. Calm down.

Secondly, There is nothing we can do without having a Draft prepared. You should've waited to start this thread until you actually had one. When you've got one, then we might be able to take a look at it.

[United Socialist Ecuador]

Anymore suggestions?

OOC:
The time difference between this and your previous post was 15 minutes. Calm down.

Secondly, There is nothing we can do without having a Draft prepared. You should've waited to start this thread until you actually had one. When you've got one, then we might be able to take a look at it.

Public Education is gradually falling and I am worried that soon many students won't be able to learn and the problems would be terrible. This law states that it can save public education, rise in annual income, intelligence, and public education. And lower crimes. This would be the changes in the education standards.
Improving Education shall include-

Employment:
1. Starting to give equal pay to women and men
2. Will lead to more happy and attentive employees
3. To lower unemployment

Technology:
1. Better subjects and extra education for the troubled and low grades
2. Advancing and funding in more technology like Computers, downloaded assignments and virtual teachers
3. Cutting funds on paper and pencils, textbooks, and more due to taking up more space

Health:
1. More onto Drug Awareness
2. More Sport programs
3. Healthier food

Education:
1. Teaching Politics and skills on separate parts of the school curriculum
2. Teaching more advanced things and learning less frequent subjects
3. Ending misinformation in textbooks
Any ideas?

[Tinfect Diplomatic Enclave]

[Snip]
Any ideas?

OOC:
You can't mean to say that this is your Draft, right?

Okay... here's some advice; read the Rules, and trawl through the standing resolutions on the subject of Education to ensure that your topic is not already covered.

Once you've done that, you should have seen from the standing legislation what a decent proposal should look like. Your draft should look like that. When you have that, rather than a half-baked list of unrelated goals, we can actually do something.

[United Socialist Ecuador]

[Snip]
Any ideas?

OOC:
You can't mean to say that this is your Draft, right?

Okay... here's some advice; read the Rules, and trawl through the standing resolutions on the subject of Education to ensure that your topic is not already covered.

Once you've done that, you should have seen from the standing legislation what a decent proposal should look like. Your draft should look like that. When you have that, rather than a half-baked list of unrelated goals, we can actually do something.

ok.

[Araraukar]

OOC: Relevant: viewtopic.php?p=1639404#p1639404 and viewtopic.php?p=6551614#p6551614

There are others, I'm sure, but I'm too sleep-deprived to do more searches in the passed resolutions thread.

[Bears Armed]

OOC: Relevant: viewtopic.php?p=1639404#p1639404 and viewtopic.php?p=6551614#p6551614

There are others, I'm sure, but I'm too sleep-deprived to do more searches in the passed resolutions thread.

On the matter of equal pay, viewtopic.php?f=9&t=30&start=25#p414 .

[United Socialist Ecuador]

Improving Public Education Standards

Category:Education and Creativity

Area of Effect: Educational

Proposed By: Me

Description: Reminding on the Fact that Public Education is by the masses, and it is gradually slowing and going down. Many nations are starting to get less of the education that it is important for nations. Such as Politics, Economics, Military Jobs, the most important of them. And other jobs, Diplomatic, Markets, Sellers, Creators, to less important jobs, but we need education to keep many nations afloat.

Recognizing that without education, many nations aren't that stable, crime goes up, unemployment goes down, to the wage gaps getting bigger and bigger. Overall, nations would be in danger of collapsing and vulnerable to depressions etc,

Declares that:

(I)Improving the quality of technology, that gives students more access to databases. Makes students more easily to get their assignments, help students learn more and expand their knowledge. And provide free internet access and putting an internet blocking program to make it only for school purposes. This will also provide jobs for the school curriculum.

(II)To cut budgets at school programs that only a few people join. So we can put money on the programs that the masses of the students want and need, instead of raising taxes.

(III)Provide healthy foods. Like routine checking, and to join many programs for healthy snacks. And to make obesity, drug, bullying etc. awareness. And to make programs of sports and more that the masses of the students enjoy to slow down all of these things.

(IV)Finally, the subjects and teaching at school needs to get a refresh. To teach more advanced things and stop teaching too many frequent things. And students who need help at certain subjects can get into a type of program that has tutors and interactive learning capabilities and applications online as well.

What do you guys think?

[Araraukar]

OOC: I'll dissect it tomorrow or Thursday, unless someone else has done so before that. But right now the grammar looks a bit weird. Are you a native English user? Proposals need to be written as international laws, so they should be grammatically correct. Also, did you read the links to some of the existing resolutions that Bears and I gave you? Or do additional searches on your own?

[United Socialist Ecuador]

OOC: I'll dissect it tomorrow or Thursday, unless someone else has done so before that. But right now the grammar looks a bit weird. Are you a native English user? Proposals need to be written as international laws, so they should be grammatically correct. Also, did you read the links to some of the existing resolutions that Bears and I gave you? Or do additional searches on your own?

OOC: No I am not. My first language is Spanish. Yes I did. So anything else you would like to say?

[Araraukar]

OOC: So anything else you would like to say?

OOC: Plenty, but...

OOC: I'll dissect it tomorrow or Thursday, unless someone else has done so before that.

...real life needs attention. I'll get back to you on this later.

[United Socialist Ecuador]

OOC: So anything else you would like to say?

OOC: Plenty, but...

OOC: I'll dissect it tomorrow or Thursday, unless someone else has done so before that.

...real life needs attention. I'll get back to you on this later.

OOC: ok.

[United Socialist Ecuador]

:/

[Radicalania]

I can't speak for the legality of this, but I can at least edit it so there are clearer aims.

Description: Reminding nations that Public Education is for the masses, and is gradually losing quality. Many nations are failing to provide the level of education necessary for their citizens to advance in life.

Recognizing that without good education, many nations stablity may be at risk, with crime and unemployment a symptom of this, alongside increasing wage gaps.

Defining students as anyone in a system of Education, and of any age.

Declares that:

(I)Nations will commit to improve the quality of technology available to the genral public during their school life, making students easily get their assignments, learn more and expand their knowledge bases. The provide free internet access and putting an internet blocking program to make it only for school purposes. This will also provide jobs for the school curriculum.
I believe this was covered by a recent piece of legislation?

(II)Nations will create budgets which do not limit the ability of students to gain this vital education. So we can put money on the programs that the masses of the students want and need, instead of raising taxes.
In order to provide the necessary budget, money will need to be raised somehow. How is up to those nations

(III)Allowing for those in abject poverty access to healthy food whilst in educationTo educate on the subjects of obesity, drugs, bullying etc. alongside initiatives which promote sports accessible to all of the students.
I began to edit this part, but realised it could be covered in your below point

(IV) Allowing for a broad range of subjects- including arts, humanities, sciences, and languages- to be taught from a young age, providing a broad based start for these young people, and providing further education which will allow them to focus their interests into studies relevant to their prefered fields.

I believe this reads a lot easier, but can I stress that I haven't checked this against any laws, and am unsure of the legality of it.

[United Socialist Ecuador]

I can't speak for the legality of this, but I can at least edit it so there are clearer aims.

Description: Reminding nations that Public Education is for the masses, and is gradually losing quality. Many nations are failing to provide the level of education necessary for them to advance in life.

Recognizing that without good education many nations stablity may be at risk, with crime and unemployment a symptom of this, alongside increasing wage gaps.

Defining students as anyone in a system of Education, and of any age.

Declares that:

(I)Nations will commit to improve the quality of technology available to the genral public during their school life, making students easily get their assignments, learn more and expand their knowledge bases. The provide free internet access and putting an internet blocking program to make it only for school purposes. This will also provide jobs for the school curriculum.
I believe this was covered by a recent piece of legislation?

(II)To create budgets which do not limit the ability of students to gain this vital education. So we can put money on the programs that the masses of the students want and need, instead of raising taxes.
In order to provide the necessary budget, money will need to be raised somehow. How is up to those nations

(III)Allowing for those in abject poverty access to healthy food whilst in educationTo educate on the subjects of obesity, drugs, bullying etc. alongside initiatives which promote sports accessible to all of the students.
I began to edit this part, but realised it could be covered in your below point

(IV) Allow for a broad range of subjects- including arts, humanities, sciences, and languages- to be taught from a young age, providing a broad based start for these young people, and providing further education which will allow them to focus their interests into studies relevant to their prefered fields.

I believe this reads a lot easier, but can I stress that I haven't checked this against any laws, and am unsure of the legality of it.

This is good.

[United Socialist Ecuador]

Description: Reminding nations that Public Education is for the masses, and is gradually losing quality. Many nations are failing to provide the level of education necessary for them to advance in life.

Recognizing that without good education many nations stablity may be at risk, with crime and unemployment a symptom of this, alongside increasing wage gaps.

Defining students as anyone in a system of Education, and of any age.

Declares that:

(I)Nations will commit to improve the quality of technology available to the genral public during their school life, making students easily get their assignments, learn more and expand their knowledge bases.

(II)To create budgets which do not limit the ability of students to gain this vital education. By setting up fundraisers, or raising taxes for the budget.

(III)Allowing for those in abject poverty access to healthy food whilst in education.

(IV) Allow for a broad range of subjects- including arts, humanities, sciences, and languages- to be taught from a young age, providing a broad based start for these young people, and providing further education which will allow them to focus their interests into studies relevant to their prefered fields. To educate on the subjects of obesity, drugs, bullying etc. alongside initiatives which promote sports accessible to all of the students.

[Radicalania]

I've editted it again because I believe I messed something up.

[United Socialist Ecuador]

I've editted it again because I believe I messed something up.

oh what?

[United Socialist Ecuador]

Description: Reminding nations that Public Education is for the masses, and is gradually losing quality. Many nations are failing to provide the level of education necessary for their citizens to advance in life.

Recognizing that without good education, many nations stablity may be at risk, with crime and unemployment a symptom of this, alongside increasing wage gaps.

Defining students as anyone in a system of Education, and of any age.

Declares that:

(I)Nations will commit to improve the quality of technology available to the general public during their school life, making students easily get their assignments, learn more and expand their knowledge bases.

(II)Nations will create budgets which do not limit the ability of students to gain this vital education. By setting up fundraisers, or raising taxes for the budget.

(III)Allowing for those in abject poverty access to healthy food whilst in education. And to make strict school laws to cut down junk food.

(IV) Allowing for a broad range of subjects- including arts, humanities, sciences, and languages- to be taught from a young age, providing a broad based start for these young people, and providing further education which will allow them to focus their interests into studies relevant to their prefered fields. To educate on the subjects of obesity, drugs, bullying etc. alongside initiatives which promote sports accessible to all of the students.