Illegal GA Proposals 2nd edition

[Arasi Luvasa]

General Assembly Proposal
ID: the_endorian_state_1546655679

Constitution Of The People
A resolution to improve worldwide human and civil rights.

Category: Civil Rights

Strength: Significant

Proposed by: The Endorian state

BELIEVING that this august body has the responsibility and purpose of improving the world.

NOTING that many people, in certain nations, do not have access to fundamental civil rights, which shall be stated in Article 1.

Article 1

Clause A: People do not have access to fair uncorrupt trials before prosecution.

Clause B: People do not have access to free and equal education.

Clause C: People do not have access to enough food and water to survive.

Clause D: People do not have the freedom to decide their own actions. Even if those actions do not undermine their nations law.

Clause E: People do not have the freedom to move without hindrance.

Article 2

THEREFORE a committee known as: The People's Committee should be created to enforce and grant the rights as stated in (Clause 1- Clause 5) to all people.

The committee shall act as an international center for aid and shall hear all the cases presented to it by people who need protection from their government.

All cases which have merit and substantial evidence (Whether the evidence is substantial enough shall be decided by said committee) to prove a governments misconduct shall be presented to the international community. This being all nations

This community shall then hear the full facts of the case and shall decide whether to condemn the implicated nation/nations.

Below are the rights which the committee shall enforce.

Clause 1: The right that all people should be able to access a fair uncorrupt trial before prosecution. Which means that all people must be equal before the law.

Clause 2: The right that all people should have access to education.

Clause 3: The right that all people should have access to enough food and water to survive.

Clause 4: The right that all people should have the freedom to choose their own actions. Unless those actions go against the laws set out by the nation in which they reside.

Clause 5: The right that all people must have the freedom of movement. Which means that people may move from one nation to another without being forcefully prevented. Unless the said person does not have the legal documents required by the nation which they wish to leave.

To not pass this resolution would be a gross miscarriage of justice.

I believe condemning nations amount to metagaming. Aside from that, I believe this breaks the 'committee only' rule. Also honest mistake, as a few of the issue's 'addressed' are already dealt with by other resolutions.

[Araraukar]

I believe condemning nations amount to metagaming. Aside from that, I believe this breaks the 'committee only' rule. Also honest mistake, as a few of the issue's 'addressed' are already dealt with by other resolutions.

Honest mistake rule only applies to repeals. But the proposal duplicates too many resolutions to count, and contradicts (the free movement bit) a few others.

[Grays Harbor]

End Slavery In All Regions

A resolution to improve worldwide human and civil rights.

Category: Civil Rights

Strength: Strong

Proposed by: Strong union state

Nations should not be push around by dictatorship. The buck stops here which means I am proposing all regions be commanded to stop dictatorship in all of NationStates it is wrong on so many levels and should not be a part of freedom of speech or choice for regions at all! I would encourage nations and regions to vote and support this proposal. Nations should not be pushed around by their regions with that being said I am not saying end rules in regions I am saying for regions not to be over powering and same with letting nations leave regions with being hassled and mocked or picked on about it. I think this proposal really needs to be enforced in nationstates for the good of the nations and regions at stake.

Branding, blogging, meta-gaming, and ideological ban. This has it all.

[Grays Harbor]

Repeal: “WA General Fund”

A resolution to repeal previously passed legislation.

Category: Repeal

Resolution: GA#17

Proposed by: Suternia

General Assembly Resolution #17 “WA General Fund” (Category: Furtherment of Democracy; Strength: Mild) shall be struck out and rendered null and void.

The World Assembly,

Recognizes the lack on necessity for nations to contribute money with this institution, which could in theory, be better spent to provide individual citizens in each nation things such as: A better quality of life; more invesment in public services (healthcare, schools, police, etc); helping in the protection of the environment; more investment in infrastructure; as well as any other national spendings which each individual government may consider beneficial for their nation.

Regretting that, instead of using such a valuable and important resource for invesment in each individual nation, this institution is utilizing it's money for poorly described purposes, causing a wasteful spending of national resources from nations member of this institution.

The World Assembly hereby repeals the “WA General Fund” resolution.

seems rather bloggy.

[Bears Armed]

Repeal: “WA General Fund”

A resolution to repeal previously passed legislation.

Category: Repeal

Resolution: GA#17

Proposed by: Suternia

General Assembly Resolution #17 “WA General Fund” (Category: Furtherment of Democracy; Strength: Mild) shall be struck out and rendered null and void.

The World Assembly,

Recognizes the lack on necessity for nations to contribute money with this institution, which could in theory, be better spent to provide individual citizens in each nation things such as: A better quality of life; more invesment in public services (healthcare, schools, police, etc); helping in the protection of the environment; more investment in infrastructure; as well as any other national spendings which each individual government may consider beneficial for their nation.

Regretting that, instead of using such a valuable and important resource for invesment in each individual nation, this institution is utilizing it's money for poorly described purposes, causing a wasteful spending of national resources from nations member of this institution.

The World Assembly hereby repeals the “WA General Fund” resolution.

seems rather bloggy.

1 minute ago: Bears Armed: Illegal — Honest Mistake: this institution is NOT using its money"for poorly described purposes", it is using it for purposes defined in other resolutions.

[Sierra Lyricalia]

The very picture of a NatSov-only repeal, also.

[Arasi Luvasa]

General Assembly Proposal
ID: history_club_1547169070

Repeal: “Preventing Groundwater Contamination”
A resolution to repeal previously passed legislation.

Category: Repeal

Resolution: GA#453

Proposed by: History club

General Assembly Resolution #453 “Preventing Groundwater Contamination” (Category: Environmental; Industry Affected: All Businesses - Mild) shall be struck out and rendered null and void.

The act Preventing Groundwater Contamination is a useless act for the very fact that it is an act not voted on by all of the members of the World Assembely

Blogging, Also it does not address any arguements and could be reasonably read as an appeal to natsov.

General Assembly Proposal
ID: novo_ecijano_1547170152

Repeal: “Preventing Groundwater Contamination”
A resolution to repeal previously passed legislation.

Category: Repeal

Resolution: GA#453

Proposed by: Novo Ecijano

General Assembly Resolution #453 “Preventing Groundwater Contamination” (Category: Environmental; Industry Affected: All Businesses - Mild) shall be struck out and rendered null and void.

Though the very essence of the approved resolution is perhaps valid and legal in a matter of requisites intended for a proposal to be legal but the legal of effect of which is not binding to all the member states of the Assembly for lacking of necessary enforcement and supervision.
The said law is lacking of enforceable and binding effect to the said resolution

Honestly, I am not entirely sure what they are trying to argue (so understandable English may apply) otherwise it seems to perhaps be arguing that the initial proposal was illegal (stating that it is not binding to all nations) and references it lacking enforcement (disregarding that most WA resolutions do not actually detail how enforcement is enacted, this is prescribed by other resolutions).

[Grays Harbor]

End Food Shortage In All Regions

A resolution to enact uniform standards that protect workers, consumers, and the general public.

Category: Regulation

Area of Effect: Consumer Protection

Proposed by: Strong union state

I propose we make sure Regions are not making food go short for many Regions. This is a safety issue we cannot let Nations forceful ration their peoples food and same with Regions we cannot let Regions force food shortage on any Nation. I hope my bill proposal is found appropriate cause it seems like a very important issue that should be voted across all Regions & Nations.

Branding and blogging and metagaming

International Ban Of Smoking

A resolution to modify universal standards of healthcare.

Category: Health

Area of Effect: Healthcare

Proposed by: South Krimelski

Many scientists have proofen that smoking affects the health of all citizens, not just people who smoke, but all people around them. It promotes lung cancer, several skin diseases, teeth issues, etc. On the one hand, the ban on smoking will help people who do not smoke because they are exposed to the smoke of these substances, on the other hand, it will help the people who consume these substances to lead a healthier and better life.

Blogging

[Bears Armed]

End Food Shortage In All Regions

A resolution to enact uniform standards that protect workers, consumers, and the general public.

Category: Regulation

Area of Effect: Consumer Protection

Proposed by: Strong union state

I propose we make sure Regions are not making food go short for many Regions. This is a safety issue we cannot let Nations forceful ration their peoples food and same with Regions we cannot let Regions force food shortage on any Nation. I hope my bill proposal is found appropriate cause it seems like a very important issue that should be voted across all Regions & Nations.

Branding and blogging and metagaming

and incorrect Category: This should be Social justice, if anything.

International Ban Of Smoking

A resolution to modify universal standards of healthcare.

Category: Health

Area of Effect: Healthcare

Proposed by: South Krimelski

Many scientists have proofen that smoking affects the health of all citizens, not just people who smoke, but all people around them. It promotes lung cancer, several skin diseases, teeth issues, etc. On the one hand, the ban on smoking will help people who do not smoke because they are exposed to the smoke of these substances, on the other hand, it will help the people who consume these substances to lead a healthier and better life.

Blogging

I don't think it's quite bad enough for that verdict... but 'No Operative Clause' does apply.

And now:

bHumanism Be Declared The National Religion Of Each S
A resolution to restrict civil freedoms in the interest of moral decency.

Category: Moral Decency
Strength: Significant
Proposed by: The Alsasian Union

It is hereby proposed by the Alsasian Union of Region North Pacific, that Humanism be declared the sole or additional National Religion(if any) of every nation. This, according to the Ministry of HRD of our nation, would reduce crime rate of every nation by at least 11.7%. And that this noble measure would ensure that every citizen has equal right and opportunity to practise their ethnic religion in private or public while ensuring substantially the RELIGIOUS UNITY of the Nation through reduction of Intrareligio-conflicts.Thank you.

Approvals: 0

GenSec Status: ILLEGAL — HELD
Info
Illegal (1): Bears Armed
2 minutes ago: Bears Armed: Illegal — Branding (Proposals must be written from the viewpoint of the WA as a whole, and can't even MENTION any individual nation [or person]); Meta-gaming (Because national religion is a choice that players can set this would force players to take a specific action, which you can't do); No Operative Clause ("It is hereby proposed" doesn't actually DO anything).

Status: Lacking Support (requires 79 more approvals)
Voting Ends: in 3 days 2 hours

[Grays Harbor]

International Smoking Ban

A resolution to enact uniform standards that protect workers, consumers, and the general public.

Category: Regulation

Area of Effect: Consumer Protection

Proposed by: The Ayrus Tayth Nuky

Smoking is proven to be addicting and harmful to the mind, body, and spirit. Every day, people die from the side effects of cigarettes such as lung cancer. The General Assembly should do something to protect its citizens from the harmful effects of smoking. Therefore, let it be noted that cigarettes are banned in every single country. Let us make a lasting impact and protect our future citizens.

Near identical to the one above. Different submitter, so along with “does nothing” it has potential for plagiarism or multiing.

[Blueflarst]

General Assembly Proposal
ID: the_endorian_state_1546655679

Constitution Of The People
A resolution to improve worldwide human and civil rights.

Category: Civil Rights

Strength: Significant

Proposed by: The Endorian state

BELIEVING that this august body has the responsibility and purpose of improving the world.

NOTING that many people, in certain nations, do not have access to fundamental civil rights, which shall be stated in Article 1.

Article 1

Clause A: People do not have access to fair uncorrupt trials before prosecution.

Clause B: People do not have access to free and equal education.

Clause C: People do not have access to enough food and water to survive.

Clause D: People do not have the freedom to decide their own actions. Even if those actions do not undermine their nations law.

Clause E: People do not have the freedom to move without hindrance.

Article 2

THEREFORE a committee known as: The People's Committee should be created to enforce and grant the rights as stated in (Clause 1- Clause 5) to all people.

The committee shall act as an international center for aid and shall hear all the cases presented to it by people who need protection from their government.

All cases which have merit and substantial evidence (Whether the evidence is substantial enough shall be decided by said committee) to prove a governments misconduct shall be presented to the international community. This being all nations

This community shall then hear the full facts of the case and shall decide whether to condemn the implicated nation/nations.

Below are the rights which the committee shall enforce.

Clause 1: The right that all people should be able to access a fair uncorrupt trial before prosecution. Which means that all people must be equal before the law.

Clause 2: The right that all people should have access to education.

Clause 3: The right that all people should have access to enough food and water to survive.

Clause 4: The right that all people should have the freedom to choose their own actions. Unless those actions go against the laws set out by the nation in which they reside.

Clause 5: The right that all people must have the freedom of movement. Which means that people may move from one nation to another without being forcefully prevented. Unless the said person does not have the legal documents required by the nation which they wish to leave.

To not pass this resolution would be a gross miscarriage of justice.

I believe condemning nations amount to metagaming. Aside from that, I believe this breaks the 'committee only' rule. Also honest mistake, as a few of the issue's 'addressed' are already dealt with by other resolutions.

YOU WILL NOT APPROVE THA RUBISH DETAINED PEOPLE WHICH COMMITED MUDERING SEXUAL ATTACKS OR ASSASINATION ATTEPTS AFTER PROVEN GUILTY MUST NOT HAVE RIGTHS

[Bears Armed]

International Smoking Ban

A resolution to enact uniform standards that protect workers, consumers, and the general public.

Category: Regulation

Area of Effect: Consumer Protection

Proposed by: The Ayrus Tayth Nuky

Smoking is proven to be addicting and harmful to the mind, body, and spirit. Every day, people die from the side effects of cigarettes such as lung cancer. The General Assembly should do something to protect its citizens from the harmful effects of smoking. Therefore, let it be noted that cigarettes are banned in every single country. Let us make a lasting impact and protect our future citizens.

Near identical to the one above. Different submitter, so along with “does nothing” it has potential for plagiarism or multiing.

Noted. Reported to Moderation through a relevant thread in the GenSec subforum.

[Grays Harbor]

Free Slave Trade

A resolution to reduce barriers to free trade and commerce.

Category: Free Trade

Strength: Significant

Proposed by: New kazakstine

slave trade is a significant part of some nations economy, i say we make it compulsory for every nation to allow slave trains, ships, etc to pass through their country, whether or not the buying of slaves is legal in their country is legal.

Contradicts current resolution 23

[Bears Armed]

Free Slave Trade

A resolution to reduce barriers to free trade and commerce.

Category: Free Trade

Strength: Significant

Proposed by: New kazakstine

slave trade is a significant part of some nations economy, i say we make it compulsory for every nation to allow slave trains, ships, etc to pass through their country, whether or not the buying of slaves is legal in their country is legal.

Contradicts current resolution 23

Got it, thank you. So far today that makes 2 proposals marked as legal, 5 marked as illegal, and 2 not only marked as illegal but discarded (one for definite plagiarism; the other because the author is either a plagiarist or a multi).

[Bears Armed]

Discarded:

Condemn Debtor Voting Rights
A resolution to restrict civil freedoms in the interest of moral decency.

Category: Moral Decency
Strength: Strong
Proposed by: Strong union state

We shall not let debtors who served jail time the right to vote. They committed a crime so they should not have voting rights at all and My Region believes this also. If a Nation or Region has imprisonment he should not have the right for voting!

Approvals: 0

GenSec Status: ILLEGAL — DISCARDED
Info
Discard (1): Bears Armed
Seconds ago: Bears Armed: Discard
Seconds ago: Bears Armed: Illegal — Branding; and attempted Contradiction of what will [almost certainly] be a passed GA Resolution.

Status: Lacking Support (requires 78 more approvals)
Voting Ends: in 2 days

[Bears Armed]

Just Discarded:

Dissolve The North Pacific
A resolution to develop industry around the world.

Category: Advancement of Industry
Area of Effect: Commercial Enterprise
Proposed by: Gerista

I would like you dissolve the north pacific for the reason of making the confederation of corrupt dictators higher on the ranking on most nations

Approvals: 0

GenSec Status: ILLEGAL — DISCARDED
Info
Discard (1): Bears Armed
Seconds ago: Bears Armed: Discard
Seconds ago: Bears Armed: Illegal — Category incorrect; Proposal Basics (Format); Branding; Meta-gaming; Game Mechanics; No Operative Clause.

Status: Lacking Support (requires 78 more approvals)
Voting Ends: in 3 days 1 hour

[Grays Harbor]

The Destruction Of Absolute Rule

A resolution to increase democratic freedoms.

Category: Furtherment of Democracy

Strength: Strong

Proposed by: Bednardia

Democracy must be sustained throughout the world. Us democratic nations must uphold our high values and destroy the evils of absolutism, anarchies, communism, and psychotic dictatorships.

Hereby Presenting:

All nations classified as an Anarchy, Communist, or a Psychotic Dictatorship will have their World Assembly membership revoked immediately.

Membership will be reinstated once the nation is reclassified as a peaceful democratic nation.

All of this in good hope will help people under the iron fists of evil see the light of freedom.

Game mechanics, ideological ban.

Ending Capital Punishment

A resolution to improve worldwide human and civil rights.

Category: Civil Rights

Strength: Strong

Proposed by: Bednardia

Capital Punishment shall be considered inhuman and henceforth illegal.

Duplication?

[Arasi Luvasa]

PtEoI is technically not duplicated by it though.

[Bears Armed Mission]

PtEoI is technically not duplicated by it though.

Agreed.

[Grays Harbor]

Increase The Price Of Fish

A resolution to develop industry around the world.

Category: Advancement of Industry

Area of Effect: Commercial Enterprise

Proposed by: Republic of Commieland

increase the price of fish so the trout industry could expand and many nations who rely on trout fishing could expand their gdp

I ... huh?

Enforce Capital Punishment

A resolution to improve world security by boosting police and military budgets.

Category: International Security

Strength: Strong

Proposed by: Carsonopia

1# That Nations need to know that Capital Punishment is needed in today's Society.
2# That Theocracy Nations need the use of Capital Punishment for Religious reasons depending on their beliefs.
3# That serious crimes be be enforced with the Death Penalty for heinous crimes against the state.

Contradiction?

[Falcania]

Increase The Price Of Fish

A resolution to develop industry around the world.

Category: Advancement of Industry

Area of Effect: Commercial Enterprise

Proposed by: Republic of Commieland

increase the price of fish so the trout industry could expand and many nations who rely on trout fishing could expand their gdp

I ... huh?

I mean I kinda liked it. It had some panache

[Grays Harbor]

I ... huh?

I mean I kinda liked it. It had some panache

Apparently our dictionaries differ as to the meaning of “panache”.

[Falcania]

I mean I kinda liked it. It had some panache

Apparently our dictionaries differ as to the meaning of “panache”.

I for one welcome our new fish-based economy. We're gonna be rich!

[Arasi Luvasa]

Increase The Price Of Fish

A resolution to develop industry around the world.

Category: Advancement of Industry

Area of Effect: Commercial Enterprise

Proposed by: Republic of Commieland

increase the price of fish so the trout industry could expand and many nations who rely on trout fishing could expand their gdp

I ... huh?

Enforce Capital Punishment

A resolution to improve world security by boosting police and military budgets.

Category: International Security

Strength: Strong

Proposed by: Carsonopia

1# That Nations need to know that Capital Punishment is needed in today's Society.
2# That Theocracy Nations need the use of Capital Punishment for Religious reasons depending on their beliefs.
3# That serious crimes be be enforced with the Death Penalty for heinous crimes against the state.

Contradiction?

Are you even allowed to single out Theocracy nations for actions they should take? Also it may not even do anything. Not sure on that though, but this does seem more like a list of statements that actual laws.

I thought you don't like one-liner proposals, or am I confusing you with someone else?
Anyway that proposal probably would have the opposite of the desired effect.

[Falcania]

I thought you don't like one-liner proposals, or am I confusing you with someone else?
Anyway that proposal probably would have the opposite of the desired effect.

I fear my accent may have obscured the irony inherent in my statement.