Illegal GA Proposals 2nd edition

[Blueflarst]

I sent yesterday two resolutions
My first one

ACKNOWLEDGING the world assembly is great but have a lot of laws which are cause of disturbs and intrigue beetwen it is members SEEING disturbing division and inefficiency inside the world assembly obstacled by a lot of interested nations in and out of the assembly something to be removed
CONCERNED about the relevant fact of a each day less nations remaining inside
ENCOURAGING to renovate the world assembly in other way less conflictive as a new HRE with voluntary membership BECOMING each state leader no matter if monarchy or republic or other type a prince/princess of the new HRE
ALLOWING free entry and exit of princes to the HRE max one nation as before PROPOSING that the delegates are changed to electors for electing one emperor each month AWARDING some prices to the volunters to become HRE emperor
PUTTING in a system to change a international law without the repeal
PUTTING IN an elective monarchy as form of HRE governement
MAINTAINING the before international laws but permitting the emperors to change it
AWARDING each emperor/empress the legislative power of the HRE to make and reject laws more kick without a heavy debate eachtime SECURING the imperial nations independence and security doing an imperial army with some princes commanding it
HORRIFIED that the actual assembly has gone in a intrigue system with a lot of changes corruption and no gain for the members worst than the papal curia in medieval time
CONCERNED that the emperor/empress will not dictate the type of governement of the princes and neither his policies excepting some changes by international law as before but less harassing
APPLYING CUO REGNO CUO RELIGIO policy to each prince/princess will be allowed to dictate the national religion of his/her country FORBIDDING the emperors/empresses to do laws without profit to the new HRE for preventing corruption ones like especial taxes
HEREBY PROCLAIMS THE RENOVATIO IMPERI

It was discarded cause they said it modifies the game mechanics i revised the rules and it do not especify that changing world assembly form is changing game mechanics


My second one

General Assembly Resolution #6 “Humanitarian Transport” (Category: Human Rights; Strength: Mild) shall be struck out and rendered null and void.

ACKNOWLEDGING that this resolution dictate a nation how to care about war prisioners

CONCERNED that there is no international territory cause that territory do not belong to noone for that the point of making laws in it is useless

DEEPLY DISTURBED for the international intervention in war affairs saying how to manage prisioners and putting restrictions

OBSERVING that maintaining laws on no nation area is costly and do not guarantee the enforcement cause the large extension of oceans and seas

DECLARING that the nations do not have to ensure nothing to refugees for international order the refugee catcher is the only responsible

CONSIDERING this resolution entering in conflict with national affairs of nations in war

SAYING that is a form of international opression over minor nations

HEREBY REPEAL Humanitarian transport

It is declared illegal 26 minutes ago: Christian Democrats: Illegal — Language Rule: "Proposals must use understandable English."
I sent a message asking why and saying that is good written on english and he do not say
Support me i believe the GenSec is bullying me

[Frisbeeteria]

The GenSec cheating me

You've posted this identical post in multiple places. Stop doing that. You're spamming. You've been given polite advice on how to improve your resolutions. Follow it.

Frisbeeteria, Senior Game Moderator

[Grays Harbor]

Nuclear Ban Treaty

A resolution to slash worldwide military spending.

Category: Global Disarmament

Strength: Strong

Proposed by: Devah

The States Parties to this Treaty,
- Deeply concerned about the catastrophic humanitarian consequences that would result from any use of nuclear weapons;
- Mindful of the risks posed by the continued existence of nuclear weapons, including from any nuclear-weapon detonation by accident, miscalculation or design;
- Recognizing the consequent need to completely eliminate such weapons, which remains the only way to guarantee that nuclear weapons are never used again under any circumstances;
- Emphasizing that these risks concern the security of all humanity, and that all States share the responsibility to prevent any use of nuclear weapons;
- Reaffirming the need for all States at all times to comply with applicable international law, including international humanitarian law and international human rights law;
- Considering that any use of nuclear weapons would be contrary to the rules of international law applicable in armed conflict, in particular the principles and rules of international humanitarian law.

Each State Party undertakes never under any circumstances to:
(a) Develop, test, produce, manufacture, otherwise acquire, possess or stockpile nuclear weapons or other nuclear explosive devices;
(b) Transfer to any recipient whatsoever nuclear weapons or other nuclear explosive devices or control over such weapons or explosive devices directly or indirectly;
(c) Receive the transfer of or control over nuclear weapons or other nuclear explosive devices directly or indirectly;
(d) Use or threaten to use nuclear weapons or other nuclear explosive devices;
(e) Assist, encourage or induce, in any way, anyone to engage in any activity prohibited to a State Party under this Treaty;
(f) Seek or receive any assistance, in any way, from anyone to engage in any activity prohibited to a State Party under this Treaty;
(g) Allow any stationing, installation or deployment of any nuclear weapons or other nuclear explosive devices in its territory or at any place under its jurisdiction or control.

Seems a clear cut NAPA violation, to me anyhow.

[Grays Harbor]

International Aid And Compliance Act

A resolution to modify universal standards of healthcare.

Category: Health

Area of Effect: International Aid

Proposed by: Unaslavia

Increase International aid for impoverished countries and war-torn nations.

When the title is almost longer than the proposal, you might be illegal.

[Grays Harbor]

Free Education

A resolution to promote funding and the development of education and the arts.

Category: Education and Creativity

Area of Effect: Educational

Proposed by: Arcecia

My dear Delegates,
Today, the newly founded socialist nation, Arcecia, is going to propose on the topic of Free Education.

Education is the most important part of the economy, and it is, through education, the future workforce of the economy develops. So, let us, all, come to a common conclusion to increase the educational spendings and provide free education. And, I am proposing this, as Education is a primary need of all human beings, rich and poor.

Branding and blogging

[Bears Armed]

FYI _

Declare NationStates Illegal
A resolution to increase democratic freedoms.

Category: Furtherment of Democracy
Strength: Strong
Proposed by: Quantipapa

This resolution seeks to declare NationStates - www.nationstates.net, illegal.

Upon passing, servers must be shut down, and all nations deleted.

Approvals: 1 (Thembria SSR)

GenSec Status: ILLEGAL — DISCARDED
Info
Mod-Discarded by Frisbeeteria
Discard (3): Separatist Peoples, Bananaistan, Bears Armed

Seconds ago: Bears Armed: Discard
6 hours ago: Bananaistan: Discard
10 hours ago: Separatist Peoples: Discard

[Grays Harbor]

Institution Of Historical Resolution Number 10

A resolution to improve world security by boosting police and military budgets.

Category: International Security

Strength: Mild

Proposed by: Greitens Missouri

According to Historical Resolution number 1o:

"We feel alarmed by the increasing intrusion of privacy by the governments in the world. Therefore, we propose that legislation is passed by each UN member that all personal communication, including, but not limited to:

face-to-face conversations, mail, telephone, radio, LAN and Internet

shall NOT be intercepted by the government, unless there is serious evidence of a planned or committed crime. This evidence shall be reviewed and approved by the Judiciary before eavesdropping, phone tapping, network traffic monitoring, and other kinds of interception of communications is allowed."

With the passage of this resolution:
(1) The international effort to end piracy will begin
(2) All WA members will give at least 5% of their GDP to the effort to fight piracy
(3)this resolution will be repealed when 2 years after piracy if no longer a problem.

Duplication, and maybe plagiarism if permission was not secured.

[Grays Harbor]

Isolation For The New Generation

A resolution to improve worldwide human and civil rights.

Category: Human Rights

Strength: Strong

Proposed by: Freddys Utopia

It ain’t the WA’s damn business what we can and can’t do. FIGHT THE POWER!

Wrong category. Pretty sure there ain’t a right category.

[Grays Harbor]

Increase Educational Funding

A resolution to promote funding and the development of education and the arts.

Category: Education and Creativity

Area of Effect: Educational

Proposed by: Arcecia

Realizing that Education is a very important tool for the development of human resource
Further Realizing that Education helps to increase the cultural richness of the country

The World Assembly,

Urges member nations to increase the funding of education

Doesn’t seem to actually do much of anything

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Repeal: “Restrictions On Child Labor”

A resolution to repeal previously passed legislation.

Category: Repeal

Resolution: GA#4

Proposed by: Republica comunista del Sur

General Assembly Resolution #4 “Restrictions on Child Labor” (Category: Human Rights; Strength: Strong) shall be struck out and rendered null and void.

Solemn Worldwide Assembly,

Always considering the importance of upholding the rights of all working children,

We call for the repeal and modification of the current legislation of the World Assembly on the above mentioned subject.

Always believing that the rights of each and every member and working citizen should be safeguarded without regard to race, gender, age or nationality.

We ask the WA:

1. Repeal the current legislation that prohibits child labor for violating the right of children to decent work within industries because it harms the development and use of their skills, since many use their talents to earn money in industries and help the economy of their families.

2. Underage children will be able to work in military service, industries, handling heavy equipment, chemical companies, work involving dangerous machinery, dangerous equipment or dangerous tools. The state is committed to ensuring their safety, training, and that they are provided with adequate equipment.

Your salary will be the same as that of adults, doing the same work.

4. They may participate in armed conflicts, always supervised by the state and with primary attention to adults, guaranteeing the human rights of children.

5. They may consent to sexual acts as employment only if they are 17 years of age or older. Physical and psychological abuse and the use of violence are prohibited.

Publicize and comply

Branding and legislating in a repeal.

[Frisbeeteria]

Branding and legislating in a repeal.

I thought we allowed "We" in proposals. "I" is definitely branding, but "we" can be read as "We, the WA ambassadors" or "We members of the WA".

It's moot because of the legislating in repeal, of course, but I wanted to be sure we were on the same page.

[Grays Harbor]

Branding and legislating in a repeal.

I thought we allowed "We" in proposals. "I" is definitely branding, but "we" can be read as "We, the WA ambassadors" or "We members of the WA".

It's moot because of the legislating in repeal, of course, but I wanted to be sure we were on the same page.

I believe that in the context it was used here it seems branding. They were clearly using “we” in the context of themselves, not the WA as a whole. Just my opinion, we could be wrong.

[Bears Armed]

Increase Educational Funding

A resolution to promote funding and the development of education and the arts.

Category: Education and Creativity

Area of Effect: Educational

Proposed by: Arcecia

Realizing that Education is a very important tool for the development of human resource
Further Realizing that Education helps to increase the cultural richness of the country

The World Assembly,

Urges member nations to increase the funding of education

Doesn’t seem to actually do much of anything

Agreed. A single 'Urges' clause might suffice for a Mild proposal, but Areas-of-Effect have stronger effects so should have stronger wording.

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Repeal: “Restrictions On Child Labor”
[spoiler]A resolution to repeal previously passed legislation.

Category: Repeal

Resolution: GA#4

Proposed by: Republica comunista del Sur

General Assembly Resolution #4 “Restrictions on Child Labor” (Category: Human Rights; Strength: Strong) shall be struck out and rendered null and void.

Solemn Worldwide Assembly,

Always considering the importance of upholding the rights of all working children,

We call for the repeal and modification of the current legislation of the World Assembly on the above mentioned subject.

Always believing that the rights of each and every member and working citizen should be safeguarded without regard to race, gender, age or nationality.

We ask the WA:

1. Repeal the current legislation that prohibits child labor for violating the right of children to decent work within industries because it harms the development and use of their skills, since many use their talents to earn money in industries and help the economy of their families.

2. Underage children will be able to work in military service, industries, handling heavy equipment, chemical companies, work involving dangerous machinery, dangerous equipment or dangerous tools. The state is committed to ensuring their safety, training, and that they are provided with adequate equipment.

Your salary will be the same as that of adults, doing the same work.

4. They may participate in armed conflicts, always supervised by the state and with primary attention to adults, guaranteeing the human rights of children.

5. They may consent to sexual acts as employment only if they are 17 years of age or older. Physical and psychological abuse and the use of violence are prohibited.

Publicize and comply[spoiler]

Branding and legislating in a repeal.

Yep. Also contradiction of GAR #299, clause 4, for trying to set a specific age-threshold in the last clause here.

[Grays Harbor]

Clone Peace Keepers

A resolution to improve world security by boosting police and military budgets.

Category: International Security

Strength: Mild

Proposed by: Free The Lagich

grow clone peace keepers and have them go into crap holes instead of our people and we allow countries with slaves so why not this. a group of nations will be chosen to grow and train the clones if this passes. They will also inforce other passed proposals.

Blogposal, no WA military, and we don’t allow slaves.

[Essu Beti]

Remove Paid Stamps

A resolution to increase democratic freedoms.

Category: Furtherment of Democracy

Strength: Strong

Proposed by: Quantipapa

I hereby propose to remove the need for stamps to be purchased with real-world money as it completely destroys the democratic process of the WA.

1) It limits power to campaign to people who have a credit card/PayPal account, and are of a particular economic class to consider spending in this game.

2) It basically encourages a pay-to-influence mechanism in the game, and is not in the spirit of Nation States.

Branding, game mechanics

[Bears Armed]

Remove Paid Stamps

A resolution to increase democratic freedoms.

Category: Furtherment of Democracy

Strength: Strong

Proposed by: Quantipapa

I hereby propose to remove the need for stamps to be purchased with real-world money as it completely destroys the democratic process of the WA.

1) It limits power to campaign to people who have a credit card/PayPal account, and are of a particular economic class to consider spending in this game.

2) It basically encourages a pay-to-influence mechanism in the game, and is not in the spirit of Nation States.

Branding, game mechanics

Category incorrect, Branding, Game Mechanics, and Meta-gaming, in fact...
Discarded.

[Grays Harbor]

Act For The Freedom Of Religion

A resolution to improve worldwide human and civil rights.

Category: Human Rights

Strength: Significant

Proposed by: Carlist New Chimanguacaro

The General Assembly

Believing that it is around time for the World Assembly to pass a resolution talking aboit the rights of the citizen according to religion

Acknowledging that many people suffer from discrimination due to the obligatory practice of the State Religion.

Strongly requests
-The Creation of the World Assembly International Religious Union

-That the WAIRU protects the rights of the citizen related to freedom of religion.

to help the citizen have a better life in a nation.

Blogging, incoherent, does nothing but “request”

[Grays Harbor]

WA Law Enforcement

A resolution to improve world security by boosting police and military budgets.

Category: International Security

Strength: Strong

Proposed by: Free The Lagich

It has come to my attention that several nations have violated international law. My proposed laws are as follows.

Mandatory 1. all member states of the WA must comply with WA laws to a certain degree.

Urged 2. states that violate WA laws and are WA members can be put under sanctions.

Strongly Urged 3. If a state is discovered to be violating WA laws WA members are Highly urged to unendorse the violating state.

Branding

[Essu Beti]

WA Proposal Protocall

A resolution to restrict civil freedoms in the interest of moral decency.

Category: Moral Decency

Strength: Mild

Proposed by: Free The Lagich

This is for those who sort through and decide what is illegal and what is legal and to make it easier for new nations to chip in ideas. this is a set of guidelines for delegates and will have no physical effect.

1. before considering discarding proposals they must be viewed on by more than 1 WA member

2. message what exactly is wrong with the proposal if it is to be discarded

3. avoid discarding with out consulting with other WA members.

4. if it is copying an existing law memo the state that proposal is copying (being similar is not copying for example a ban on slavery VS a ban on slave labor are similar but not the same one is owning people and the other is putting them to work)

5. make certain to read thoroughly as slip ups can be costly.

This proposal is just to make it slightly easier on newer nations who are trying to chip in ideas and is simply a set of guidelines.

Hella game mechanics and metagaming

[Grays Harbor]

WA Proposal Protocall

A resolution to restrict civil freedoms in the interest of moral decency.

Category: Moral Decency

Strength: Mild

Proposed by: Free The Lagich

This is for those who sort through and decide what is illegal and what is legal and to make it easier for new nations to chip in ideas. this is a set of guidelines for delegates and will have no physical effect.

1. before considering discarding proposals they must be viewed on by more than 1 WA member

2. message what exactly is wrong with the proposal if it is to be discarded

3. avoid discarding with out consulting with other WA members.

4. if it is copying an existing law memo the state that proposal is copying (being similar is not copying for example a ban on slavery VS a ban on slave labor are similar but not the same one is owning people and the other is putting them to work)

5. make certain to read thoroughly as slip ups can be costly.

This proposal is just to make it slightly easier on newer nations who are trying to chip in ideas and is simply a set of guidelines.

Hella game mechanics and metagaming

Both the above, and I would chip in “wrong category” as well. Not that there is a right category for this.

[Jebslund]

International Aid Act of 2018

A resolution to modify universal standards of healthcare.


Category: Health

Area of Effect: International Aid

Proposed by: Greitens Missouri


The World Assembly:

NOTING: that there are resolutions involving international aid.

NOTING: that there are some WA members who do not have any international aid in their budget.

PROPOSING:
a) that at least 1% of every WA member nation's budget will be given to international aid.
b) WA delegates will give 2% of their nation's budget to international aid.

PRESENTING) that past resolutions are not being enforced

PRESENTING) The motto of the General Assembly is "Improving the World One Resolution at a Time"

PROPOSES: the passage of "The International Aid Act of 2018"

GA can't directly meddle with internal national budgeting. Proposals must be written as the laws they will be once adopted, not as suggestions to implement new laws.

[Bears Armed]

International Aid Act of 2018

A resolution to modify universal standards of healthcare.


Category: Health
Area of Effect: International Aid
Proposed by: Greitens Missouri


The World Assembly:

NOTING: that there are resolutions involving international aid.

NOTING: that there are some WA members who do not have any international aid in their budget.

PROPOSING:
a) that at least 1% of every WA member nation's budget will be given to international aid.
b) WA delegates will give 2% of their nation's budget to international aid.

PRESENTING) that past resolutions are not being enforced

PRESENTING) The motto of the General Assembly is "Improving the World One Resolution at a Time"

PROPOSES: the passage of "The International Aid Act of 2018"

GA can't directly meddle with internal national budgeting. Proposals must be written as the laws they will be once adopted, not as suggestions to implement new laws.

GA can meddle with international budgeting a bit, by mandating that at least some certain proportion of any basic section of the budget must be spent on a particular aspect of the relevant topic (e.g. that at least 10% of the Education section of the budget is used for funding universities): What it can't do is mandate changes, such as these, that would effectively require direct changes to the OOC pie-chart that shows the division between those basic sections.
You're correct on the second point.
Also, the mention of "WA delegates" is -- under current interpretation of the rules -- an example of Meta-gaming.

[Jebslund]

Also, the mention of "WA delegates" is -- under current interpretation of the rules -- an example of Meta-gaming.

*facepalm* Can't believe I missed that...

[Bears Armed Mission]

Also, the mention of "WA delegates" is -- under current interpretation of the rules -- an example of Meta-gaming.

*facepalm* Can't believe I missed that...

Well, I missed it myself until after I'd already labelled the proposal as illegal for the other two reasons...

[Arasi Luvasa]

https://www.nationstates.net/page=UN_vi ... 1536877415

Less Restraint Against Weapons Production
A resolution to improve world security by boosting police and military budgets.

Category: International Security

Strength: Significant

Proposed by: Vurradeen

We must allow nations to expand there military, armory, and weapons production. A nation should not have to rely on other countries for protection they should be able to defend them selves. As well they should be allowed to have a wider range of types of weapons they can make like ICBM's, Poison gas, flame throwers, etc. Its for countries to defend them selves and allows countries to sustain them selves if there main source of income is arms production and trading.

Doesn't seem to do anything, also blogging I believe.

[Grays Harbor]

https://www.nationstates.net/page=UN_view_proposal/id=vurradeen_1536877415

Less Restraint Against Weapons Production
A resolution to improve world security by boosting police and military budgets.

Category: International Security

Strength: Significant

Proposed by: Vurradeen

We must allow nations to expand there military, armory, and weapons production. A nation should not have to rely on other countries for protection they should be able to defend them selves. As well they should be allowed to have a wider range of types of weapons they can make like ICBM's, Poison gas, flame throwers, etc. Its for countries to defend them selves and allows countries to sustain them selves if there main source of income is arms production and trading.

Doesn't seem to do anything, also blogging I believe.

Blogging, or a “letter to the editor”.