Illegal GA Proposals 2nd edition

[Grays Harbor]

Liberate The Fish

A resolution to increase the quality of the world's environment, at the expense of industry.

Category: Environmental

Industry Affected: Fishing

Proposed by: Camerra

Establishing: That the nemo depletion industry(Trout Fishing industry) cruelly tricks innocent, uneducated fish into biting a large hook which is quite painful, there by securing their fate as dinner.
Noting: That other methods are used such as nets which confine an unoffending fish to prison and afterward they are cold bloodedly executed and again served as dinner or gutted and used as wall decors.
Also noting: That fish are also caught with nets or other devilish devices, bagged and sentenced to slavery and stared at all day as some kids pet.
Stating: That murdered fish carcases are often thrown back into the sea, damaging the environment beauty.
Realizing: That the above practices are despicable, cowardly, violate basic fish rights and are down right evil.
The General Assembly hereby bans any WA nation from taking part in any Fishing whatsoever.

Contradiction, or joke proposal. You decide.

[Bears Armed]

Liberate The Fish

A resolution to increase the quality of the world's environment, at the expense of industry.

Category: Environmental

Industry Affected: Fishing

Proposed by: Camerra

Establishing: That the nemo depletion industry(Trout Fishing industry) cruelly tricks innocent, uneducated fish into biting a large hook which is quite painful, there by securing their fate as dinner.
Noting: That other methods are used such as nets which confine an unoffending fish to prison and afterward they are cold bloodedly executed and again served as dinner or gutted and used as wall decors.
Also noting: That fish are also caught with nets or other devilish devices, bagged and sentenced to slavery and stared at all day as some kids pet.
Stating: That murdered fish carcases are often thrown back into the sea, damaging the environment beauty.
Realizing: That the above practices are despicable, cowardly, violate basic fish rights and are down right evil.
The General Assembly hereby bans any WA nation from taking part in any Fishing whatsoever.

Contradiction, or joke proposal. You decide.

Both; also the "nemo depletion" reference counts as either Meta-gaming or a RL reference.

[Grays Harbor]

Ban Anime
A resolution to restrict political freedoms in the interest of law and order.

Category: Political Stability

Strength: Significant

Proposed by: Topoliani

Appalled at the dropping Birth Rates due to Anime

Concerned that the lack of Sexual Self-Control due to Anime may cause the extinction of many cultures if not nations

This Bill, Hereby Enforces the banning of Eastern Cartoons so that a mass extinction of many nations will not occur.

Joke Proposal. At least I hope it is a joke proposal.

[Bears Armed]

Ban Anime
A resolution to restrict political freedoms in the interest of law and order.

Category: Political Stability

Strength: Significant

Proposed by: Topoliani

Appalled at the dropping Birth Rates due to Anime

Concerned that the lack of Sexual Self-Control due to Anime may cause the extinction of many cultures if not nations

This Bill, Hereby Enforces the banning of Eastern Cartoons so that a mass extinction of many nations will not occur.

Joke Proposal. At least I hope it is a joke proposal.

It has been discarded as a Joke Proposal... and also declared illegal for Category incorrect, Strength incorrect, and RL reference (i.e. anime being "Eastern").

[Grays Harbor]

Reduction Of Carbon Emissions In Business
A resolution to increase the quality of the world's environment, at the expense of industry.

Category: Environmental

Industry Affected: All Businesses - Mild

Proposed by: Pafrusal

It has become known that the world is quite polluted in the name of big business. Therefore, this resolution:

Acknowledging that the world has become polluted and much environmental beauty has been lost.

Accepting that this will not change without agreement between countries.

Proposing that all countries have set limits required upon all businesses that regulate the amount of carbon emissions from them.

Does nothing

Repeal: “Safeguarding Nuclear Materials”
A resolution to repeal previously passed legislation.

Category: Repeal

Resolution: GA#418

Proposed by: Pafrusal

General Assembly Resolution #418 “Safeguarding Nuclear Materials” (Category: International Security; Strength: Mild) shall be struck out and rendered null and void.

“Nuclear weapons are unique in their destructive power, in the unspeakable human suffering they cause, in the impossibility of controlling their effects in space and time, and in the threat they pose to the environment, to future generations, and indeed to the survival of humanity.” – International Committee of the Red Cross, 2010

“Climate change may be the global policy issue that has captured most attention in the last decade, but the problem of nuclear weapons is at least its equal in terms of gravity – and much more immediate in its potential impact.” – International Commission on Nuclear Non-Proliferation and Disarmament, 2009

When it comes to nuclear weapons, there are no safe groups to have a nuke. So long as any country has these weapons, others will want them, and the world will be in a precarious state. Unless we eliminate nuclear weapons, they will almost certainly be used again, either intentionally or by accident, and the consequences will be catastrophic. Any use of these weapons would violate moral and international law because they would indiscriminately kill civilians and cause long-term environmental harm. It could and should be classified as terrorism to use a nuclear weapon.

The building and safeguarding of nuclear weapons takes lots of money away from welfare and education.

Blogerific, and chock full of RW references.

[New Min]

https://www.nationstates.net/page=UN_view_proposal/id=pafrusal_1532454843

Real life reference

[Frisbeeteria]

Real life reference

A) it was reported in the post immediately prior to yours, and ...
B) posting links doesn't help once the proposal has expired or been taken down. You need to post the text, no links.

[Imperium Anglorum]

Which reminds me: any word on the technical thing of saving the proposals?

[Frisbeeteria]

Which reminds me: any word on the technical thing of saving the proposals?

Nope. I poked [v] again, but our admins must have too much else on their plates.

[Grays Harbor]

Reducing Unfair Influence On Changing Trade Policies

A resolution to reduce barriers to free trade and commerce.

Category: Free Trade

Strength: Significant

Proposed by: Uhh Meincrat

Accepting that any individual nation has the right to try to persuade other nations to change it's trade policies to come more in line with said nation's own policy on trade for the improvement of diplomatic/economic relations.

Desiring for nations with power in their respective regions (e.g World Assembly delegate, Minister of Finance) should not be able to use their upper level of influence in said region to unwillingly change another nation's policy/agenda on trade through (for example, but not limited to) bribing, while also remembering that smaller nations are capable of executing the same acts, so not to disregard them in the process.

Believing that the best way to ensure freedom in trade is eliminate any abuse of power from nations in order to unwillingly change another nation's trade policy.

Hereby,

1) In due course the International Commission on Trade Policy Changes (ICTPC) should be set up in order to investigate suspicious changes in trade policy.

2) Recognising that the ICTPC should always act professionally and treat all investigations and internal affairs with seriousness.

3) Asserting that the ICTPC can set it's own rules and regulations on how it carries out it's investigations as long as the rules and regulations make the commission act professionally and without any internal abuse of power for personal gain etc.

4) Setting that the ICTPC's main goals are to:

i) Eliminate any abuse of power from nations in order to unwillingly change another nation's trade policy (Aforementioned above).
ii) Discourage nations from unwillingly changing another nation's trade policy, while also educating them on the consequences of doing so.
iii) Create a safe trading environment free of abuse and unfair influence.
5) Remembering that the ICTPC should not discourage nations from changing their trade policy legitimately, as this could harm the commission's reputation and the worldwide economic environment.

6) Assuring that action should be taken if a nation is found guilty of unfair influence, judging the severity of the act and series of events leading up to the incident to make a fair call on the action taken.

7) Reminding that trying to change another nation's economic policy unwillingly in revenge for a previous grievance should have no impact on the investigation that follows, yet the action taken (If the nation is found guilty of unfair influence) can be modified due to the previous events.

metagaming (regions)

[Grays Harbor]

Repeal Gun Control
A resolution to tighten or relax gun control laws.

Category: Gun Control

Decision: Relax

Proposed by: The united socialist countries

Gun control is the devil, and the countries that have it are more Liberal then Communist

Bumperstcker, and you can't very well repeal a resolution that doesn't exist.

[Grays Harbor]

INTERNET, A Human Right

A resolution to improve worldwide human and civil rights.

Category: Human Rights

Strength: Mild

Proposed by: Brazilian Community

Having access to the internet means having access to all the content and wisdom of humanity, after all, would you take a child's book?
Some aspects about the internet:

Democracy becomes routine

taking into consideration that the internet would not have efficient ways of restricting content, in this is a good side, the content.
With the internet we could be aware of everything from cake recipes to political scandals. Basically, in this factor, we can realize that the internet is a valuable tool both for staff, both for a nation.

its good utilization can reveal great discoveries, ensuring in this way, a free choice of the subject.

The internet can propagate government acts

From awareness campaigns to news about the country itself ... The internet can help develop the intellectual of anyone who uses it ... In addition to that, in some cases it gets to the point of becoming a JOB.

The internet can not suppress you

It is more than true, the internet is the starting point of global knowledge. This is not limited to news stories, but news from outside the national field.

The internet can be a small engine for national income

Several virtual stores and trade options are available, it is up to the capitalization to know how to use them.

- Minister of Brazilian Community.

Branding and blogging

[Old Hope]

Enforce Government controlled diets

A resolution to improve worldwide human and civil rights.

Category: Human Rights

Strength: Strong

Proposed by: AGGARNA

Make them eat what the government decides. This is to keep the people strong preventing skinny or fat people to roam this once beautiful planet. Eating anything other than what the government has selected should be punishable by the countries choice of sentence. Each individual government may decide on their own countries diet.

Approvals: 0
GenSec Status: LEGAL
Info

Status: Lacking Support (requires 85 more approvals)

Voting Ends: in 3 days 9 hours

This is never ever Human Rights. It is Moral Decency. Wrong Category. It gives the government power over the choices of the people.

Voluntary Rehabilitation Act

A resolution to increase the quality of the world's environment, at the expense of industry.

Category: Environmental

Industry Affected: Mining

Proposed by: Kal Chauyan

Individuals or companies should be able to apply to voluntarily rehabilitate an existing mine hazard that they did not create on Crown-held land, without becoming liable for pre-existing environmental issues on the site

Should be able to... is not an operative clause.
The proposal must do something.

[Grays Harbor]

Voluntary Rehabilitation Act

A resolution to increase the quality of the world's environment, at the expense of industry.

Category: Environmental

Industry Affected: Mining

Proposed by: Kal Chauyan

Individuals or companies should be able to apply to voluntarily rehabilitate an existing mine hazard that they did not create on Crown-held land, without becoming liable for pre-existing environmental issues on the site

Should be able to... is not an operative clause.
The proposal must do something.

And there is that "Crown-held Land" thing, which seems a bit out of place.

[Grays Harbor]

Ban On Communism And Socialism
A resolution to improve worldwide human and civil rights.

Category: Human Rights

Strength: Significant

Proposed by: Conservative Christian American States

The World Assembly
CONCERNED by the number of nations declaring themselves to be communist or socialist
ACKNOWLEDGING the numerous crimes committed by communist regimes throughout history, totaling to several hundred million dead
DECLARING that communism and socialism are ideologies which invariably lead to the establishment of totalitarian regimes

The ideologies of communism and socialism are hereby
OUTLAWED in all member nations of the WA
ALL communist and socialist political parties are to be declared disbanded and their leaders arrested and tried for crimes against humanity at a World Assembly Tribunal
Nations which DECLARE an official ideology of communism and socialism must abandon those ideologies or face sanctions from the WA
ALL symbols of communism and socialism, including but not limited to: the hammer and sickle, the red flag, the red star, the song 'The Internationale', the motto 'Workers of the World, Unite!' (and any varying translations) are to be banned in all member nations outside of educational or historical contexts.

IN ADDITION
This resolution will create a Memorial to the Victims of Communism and Socialism, which will serve as a reminder to the hundreds of millions killed by regimes such as the USSR, China, Vietnam, the Khmer Rouge, and North Korea, to be placed at the World Assembly Headquarters

Ideological ban, RW references (soooo many)

Upgrading To New Technologies
A resolution to develop industry around the world.

Category: Advancement of Industry

Area of Effect: Labor Deregulation

Proposed by: Vooperian Paradise

OBSERVING: That the current nations use obsolete technologies such as “telegrams”.

CONCERNED: That nations won’t be able to communicate well enough with other nations.

NOTING: That new technologies allows us to communicate faster and easier.

We propose to change the current technologies to more modern ones like “Email”.

Not seeing where this does much of anything other than say "use email".

[Grays Harbor]

Free Flights For All Citizens

A resolution to promote funding and the development of education and the arts.

Category: Education and Creativity

Area of Effect: Artistic

Proposed by: Red light zone

provide all citizens at least 2 business class air line tickets per year to travel. vacation is a cilvil right!

Wrong category
Wrong area of effect
Joke

[Grays Harbor]

Anti-Bullying Act
A resolution to improve worldwide human and civil rights.

Category: Human Rights

Strength: Mild

Proposed by: United States 16

Whereas students in every country have the right to be treated equally.
Whereas students in every country shall have the right of protection against bullying, sexual harassers, and cyberbullying.
Whereas students in every country have the right of equal education and learning oppurtunities.

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Resolved within the Chambers Assembled

That last "whereas" would appear to make it duplication of A Promotion of Basic Education. The other two don't do much of anything.

INCREASING SECURITY TERMS FOR WEAPONS POSSESSION
A resolution to tighten or relax gun control laws.

Category: Gun Control

Decision: Tighten

Proposed by: Fetra

Since not all nations have laws on legitimate weapons control, since civilians need a certainty, Fetra's legislature internationally proposes a check on the complete legitimacy of possession and the carrying of firearms , or other types of weapons , for civilians.

The main idea is to submit at the time of purchase of a firearm, or whatever weapon it is, by a citizen, to a careful test on the legitimacy of the citizen to own a weapon.
Based on the fact that: who has a criminal record, who has the face of a murderer, who commits contradictions during the test, who belongs to organized crime , who had the idea of organizing any crime and who has mental psyche problems, to NOT own a weapon, whatever it is, and to let it belong only to honest citizens with the simple intention of protecting their homes and family

So for this reason we conclude all in simple points :

- recognizing that: banning weapons, will take away the right of self-defense and will facilitate the free entry of thieves into the home of citizens

-pointing out that: not all people who possess weapons are psychotic killers, but also house-keepers who want to protect their family

-adding that: obviously we must make sure that the individual is suitable to own a weapon by controlling mental health and any previous crimes committed with weapons

-stating that: not everyone therefore has to possess weapons, but that some legitimate people must have this right

-with the precedents it is stated that: each state must check that no criminal , or person without the legitimate right , possesses a weapon, but affirm and grant the main right to be able to defend with weapons the own house , only for a civil and honest person with the sole intention of feeling safe and protect their family. We must confirm that every weapon sold today or granted to a free citizen is required to confirm a special government health status license, good intentions and purity of mind to ensure a free, but controlled use of weapons whatever they are.

The noble and pure spirit of the Supreme Legislator of Fetran Colonial Empire : Michael Burnes

And "The noble and pure spirit of the Supreme Legislator of Fetran Colonial Empire : Michael Burnes" is guilty of branding

[Grays Harbor]

Prohibit Hazing
A resolution to improve worldwide human and civil rights.

Category: Human Rights

Strength: Significant

Proposed by: Fetra

The practice that consists in humiliating or subjugating a "newcomer" in a place such as the militia, the university or the job is called "hazing".

hazing causes serious damage to its victims, while the perpetrators of violence remain unpunished.

From this we understand how the law is sometimes unjust, or simply incomplete.
The law must instead provide substantial help and protection to victims of hazing and prevent this acts, simply by punishing the perpetrators of violence

So with this law you want to outlaw the hazing and punish the authors, for the respect of innocent victims with physical, psychological damage, or death as a problem. Overpowered by the bullies who cause these serious and unpunished damages, they should be punished and should be dismissed this ignorant , cruel , and insane practice, since no one who is already in a militia, a university or a job can afford to insult, hurt, or humiliate another person who has just arrived in that place.

With this law therefore:

- the practice called hazing is outlawed.

-The victims will be compensated by the agressors.

-The authors of hazing, towards anyone, will be punished seriously.

Not really seeing this as "significant"

Improve Democracy
A resolution to increase democratic freedoms.

Category: Furtherment of Democracy

Strength: Strong

Proposed by: Northalabama

This is a resolution that would condemn all dictators in the world Assembly and pressure them to become a democracy

One-liner. Resolutions cannot mandate condemnations. Doesn't really do much of anything.

[Grays Harbor]

Ban On Weaponry For A Better World

A resolution to slash worldwide military spending.

Category: Global Disarmament

Strength: Strong

Proposed by: Cresent Land

Dearest General Assembly,
As long as my country survives, my country hates war and don’t want war to happen.
Thus, I make this proposal to recommend to Ban Weaponry, such as ban on guns, ammo and any kind of weapons.
I hoped that General Assembly read my proposal and decided my proposal.

Branding, and resembles a bad (change dot org) petition

[Grays Harbor]

No Guns Allowed In School

A resolution to tighten or relax gun control laws.

Category: Gun Control

Decision: Tighten

Proposed by: Eraver

You Know,Gun Violence Is Killing The People,Guns Are Not Allowed In The World And Schools,Only Use Guns In Grand Theft Auto 5,You Know It's The Law For Guns People,And If Any Guns In School,They Ran Away From School,I Am Happy That Guns Is Not Allowed In Schools,We Need Peace To The World,Save America From Gun Violence,This Is Gun Control,We Are People,Your Freedom,Your Control,Your Laws.

DaFuq is this incoherent rambling mess??

RW references and branding

[Grays Harbor]

The Standard Of Zoos
A resolution to increase the quality of the world's environment, at the expense of industry.

Category: Environmental

Industry Affected: All Businesses - Mild

Proposed by: The Narwhalian Republic of the North

Improvement of zoos so that the animals are happier and healthier.

The standards of owning a zoo:

1. The animal’s enclosure must match its natural habitat.

2. Animal’s enclosure must have easy access for food and water that the animal would be similar to what it would actually eat. Giraffes eat leafy greens and lions would eat raw meat

3. No mixing of species unless the two or more species would be able to live together naturally. Don’t mix carnivores and herbivores!

4.proper medical treatment for animals is readily available if needed.

5. Zoo must be educational and promote awareness.

6. Zoo must have proper security and tracking systems if an animal does some how escape

7. Animals in the zoo will be treated with care and will not be physically punished.

All zoos who fail to meet these standards will be closed until they can do so.

Category and Area of Effect failure.

[Grays Harbor]

Require Nations To Have Rehabilitation Centers

A resolution to modify universal standards of healthcare.

Category: Health

Area of Effect: Healthcare

Proposed by: Romanovano

Many countries have very lax or non existent drug laws, with this proposal we can ensure that those that abuse narcotics and alcohol can get help, if they so desire.

With this proposal we can prevent countless overdoses and deaths.

This is not a proposal to ban drug use or enact more regulation; this is just to help those negatively affected by drugs that are unable to help themselves.

I implore you to take into consideration this proposal and help to pass it through.

Branding, and quite literally does nothing.

[Grays Harbor]

Protecting Race Extinguiment

A resolution to improve worldwide human and civil rights.

Category: Human Rights

Strength: Strong

Proposed by: Fetra

Is seen for to much race mixing and ethnic cultures losing.

With this resolution is proposed to:

-Worldwide protect the typical race by extinguiment

-Ban the race-mixed Union

-Rest the typical populace of a Place in this Place and remove all the foerigners invadere that make a trash pot of the originale community

-But : not only protect , how now, aboriginal and tribal culture , tradiction , people and race cleaness , but also make the sale things for civil people in more organizer citizenship

So with the precedent is inclused:

-remove foerigners

-ban race mixing

-protect typical culture and people by race

-help , if necessary , the removed foerigners.

For make a clean , better , and friendly , wealthy human different races biodiversity. To see only sale race people in their own hearth terrain and to be all Happy.

Grossly offensive, and pure bullshit.

[Bears Armed]

Protecting Race Extinguiment

A resolution to improve worldwide human and civil rights.

Category: Human Rights

Strength: Strong

Proposed by: Fetra

Is seen for to much race mixing and ethnic cultures losing.

With this resolution is proposed to:

-Worldwide protect the typical race by extinguiment

-Ban the race-mixed Union

-Rest the typical populace of a Place in this Place and remove all the foerigners invadere that make a trash pot of the originale community

-But : not only protect , how now, aboriginal and tribal culture , tradiction , people and race cleaness , but also make the sale things for civil people in more organizer citizenship

So with the precedent is inclused:

-remove foerigners

-ban race mixing

-protect typical culture and people by race

-help , if necessary , the removed foerigners.

For make a clean , better , and friendly , wealthy human different races biodiversity. To see only sale race people in their own hearth terrain and to be all Happy.

Grossly offensive, and pure bullshit.

Also incorrect Category, contradiction of existing GA legislation, and [arguably] failing the 'Understandable English' rule...

[Bananaistan]

Grossly offensive, and pure bullshit.

Also incorrect Category, contradiction of existing GA legislation, and [arguably] failing the 'Understandable English' rule...

I went with definitely failing the Understandable English rule and therefore I couldn't say what else it does other than it appears offensive. Eitherway, I think it was clearly worthy of a discard.