Illegal GA Proposals 2nd edition

[Jebslund]

Repeal The Barbaric Acts Against Nazi Europa
A resolution to restrict civil freedoms in the interest of moral decency.

Category: Moral Decency

Strength: Significant

Proposed by: Kyumbria

I write this proposal out of growing concern and disgust at peoples lack of open mindedness.

Concerned at the propsals to so called "liberate" places like Nazi Europa

Disgusted at people's hiporcsy about raiding, do they not realise by breaking down these walls and flooding the region's with anti-facists and expelling facists , they themselves become raiders.
I propose that it be banned to do this barbaric acts against facist nations to stop a repeat of places like Westphalia on the nazis

Meta-Gaming, not written as a law, suspect category and strength, doesn't do anything, branding.

Seriously thinking there ought to be a rule against Sour Grapes proposals...

[Frisbeeteria]

Seriously thinking there ought to be a rule against Sour Grapes proposals...

I've never seen one that didn't break several other rules, so not seeing a need for a rule change.

[Jebslund]

Seriously thinking there ought to be a rule against Sour Grapes proposals...

I've never seen one that didn't break several other rules, so not seeing a need for a rule change.

Eh, fair enough.

[Living Corporations]

Universal Slavery Ban

A resolution to improve worldwide human and civil rights.

Category: Human Rights

Strength: Significant

Proposed by: Northeast Liberland

Article One
(1) Slavery will be banned in all WA member nations.
(2) Nations who refuse to comply will face expulsion from the WA.
(3) Regions who refuse to comply may or may not have their regions liberated (like always, a security council vote must take place first)

Duplication, Game Mechanics, Metagaming (regions, security council, liberation)

[Jebslund]

Ban On WMDs

A resolution to slash worldwide military spending.


Category: Global Disarmament

Strength: Strong

Proposed by: Holandie


Noticing that the use of Weapons of Mass Destruction is harmful and kills millions of people when used.

Understanding that WMDs were implemented to be used in times where other countries attack.

Deciding on whether or not WMDs are really needed.

Changing the law that allows the effective use of WMDs.

Understanding that if WMDs are removed from World Assembly nations, then that means invasions will highly decrease. Therefore stopping the unreasonable deaths of millions of innocent people each year.

Hereby declaring that the use of Weapons of Mass Destruction in all World Assembly nations is banned, and any nation to disobey this law to be removed from the World Assembly immediately.

Game Mechanics, Contradiction of Previous Legislation. Were Honest Mistake violations applicable to writing new proposals...

[Grays Harbor]

Mandatory Gun Education In Public Schools
A resolution to tighten or relax gun control laws.

Category: Gun Control

Decision: Tighten

Proposed by: Squidnation

In light of the recent attacks on the topic of gun control, me and my advisors have discussed a lot of the matter.

According to statistics from the SAOI and many other large government organizations countries with higher gun education and more encouragement to own guns, have lower rates of gun related casualties not related to Terrorist attacks or war.

Because of these statistics, I would like to propose the following;

I. That schools within nations with high crime rates will subject to the laws imposed by this bill.

II. That schools within these nations will have mandatory gun education as a graduation requirement for the nation and all states or provinces that it contains.

III. That the curriculum for the gun education will include the following topics;
> To be taught the value of human life, and that to end one is a very serious
thing.
> To be taught the proper safety and handling of firearms, and the dangers of
improper use.

IV. That teachers within the school, among other staff, will have a job requirement to report any instances of bullying to a school administrator, in order to prevent school shootings in the long term

V. That students will have access to a school counselor that they can talk to their personal issues with, so that they can have someone to turn to in a state of depression.

I greatly thank you if you have taken the time to read this proposal, and hope for the best future for your nation.

Best Regards,
Hans Oberst, Chancellor of Squidnation

Branding. Not seeing this as "tighten" either.

[Jebslund]

Mandatory Gun Education In Public Schools
A resolution to tighten or relax gun control laws.

Category: Gun Control

Decision: Tighten

Proposed by: Squidnation

In light of the recent attacks on the topic of gun control, me and my advisors have discussed a lot of the matter.

According to statistics from the SAOI and many other large government organizations countries with higher gun education and more encouragement to own guns, have lower rates of gun related casualties not related to Terrorist attacks or war.

Because of these statistics, I would like to propose the following;

I. That schools within nations with high crime rates will subject to the laws imposed by this bill.

II. That schools within these nations will have mandatory gun education as a graduation requirement for the nation and all states or provinces that it contains.

III. That the curriculum for the gun education will include the following topics;
> To be taught the value of human life, and that to end one is a very serious
thing.
> To be taught the proper safety and handling of firearms, and the dangers of
improper use.

IV. That teachers within the school, among other staff, will have a job requirement to report any instances of bullying to a school administrator, in order to prevent school shootings in the long term

V. That students will have access to a school counselor that they can talk to their personal issues with, so that they can have someone to turn to in a state of depression.

I greatly thank you if you have taken the time to read this proposal, and hope for the best future for your nation.

Best Regards,
Hans Oberst, Chancellor of Squidnation

Branding. Not seeing this as "tighten" either.

Proposal Basics, No Operative Clause ("I propose..." does nothing.)

[Grays Harbor]

Limiting Uses On Torture

A resolution to improve worldwide human and civil rights.

Category: Human Rights

Strength: Significant

Proposed by: Pakistani India Bangalore and Ceylon

To the General Assembly,

REALIZING that torture is widespread and inhumane use's are also normal among these cases.

ALSO REALIZING that many methods of torture could be deadly or permanently damaging.

NOTICING that uses of torture from the Medieval times are not used any more, but equally more horrific uses have evolved.

If this proposal passes, the following happens:

(A)Defines torture as inflicting pain while trying to find information.

(B)Bans torture in the following scenarios:
(1)To gain information
(2)To gain power
(3)To gain information IF the victim is innocent
(4)To gain information IF the victim is first proven guilty without known trial
(5)Being sadistic and torturing innocent victims for no known reason.

Hereby bans the use of worldwide torture.

Duplication of #9, Prevention of Torture

[Jebslund]

The Right to Try new and innovative medicines

A resolution to modify universal standards of healthcare.

Category: Health

Area of Effect: Healthcare

Proposed by: Bax-Landia

Noting that many people die sometimes unnecessarily due to:

1) Not being able to access medical proceeders or drugs in trials

2) Not being available to travel to other member nations where they could be cured

Defines "medical proceeders in trials" as proceeders that have yet to become readily available to the public due to lack of information, knowledge of side effects, and/or doctors who have the skills to perform them

Defines " drugs in trials " as drugs that have yet to reach open public access due to lack of information about them, side effects, and/or ability to mass produce

Defines "licensed medical staff" as a doctor, nurse, and/or anyone else involved in any medical procedure, and/or drug research that is actively licensed to perform or provide medical assistance in their home country

Herby mandates

1) That all member nations allow patients who could be cured of their disease or ailments to try untested and/or proceeders and drugs that are in trial regardless of risk

2) That all member nations allow patients to travel to other member nations where they could be potentially cured or their disease or ailment

3) That all member nations allow immediate, secure, and safe passage of patients, their immediate family, and any doctor, nurse, or any licensed medical staff member to accompany them to the nearest place of care that can provide the necessary proceeders

4) That all member nations allow prescription drugs and licensed medical staff to pass into their nation to treat and provide care to an ill patient. As well as, gather data on the effectiveness and side effects of the drug.

5) That all member nations provide all available information that is available to patients, whom can benefit from these new proceeders or drugs

Note this still reserves the right of member nations to keep track of and carefully watch any of the above-mentioned persons to prevent acts of espionage or intellectual theft/intellectual espionage

Debating whether to call Proposal Basics/Basic English on this with that constant use of "proceeders". It's a bit distracting in this case.

[Grays Harbor]

Protect Political Opinions Of Independent Regions

A resolution to increase democratic freedoms.

Category: Furtherment of Democracy

Strength: Strong

Proposed by: The Republic of Brenland States

Understanding that all political opinions of independent regions must be respected and allowed.

Realizing that independent regions and their government may do whatever they want In their own regions.

Hoping to protect independent regions from unlawful or unprovoked harassment from other regions.

Understanding that all political opinions of independent regions must be respected and allowed.

Realizing that independent regions and their government may do whatever they want In their own regions.

Hoping to protect independent regions from unlawful or unprovoked harassment from other regions.

Enforcing that regions may not be liberated if the government and members don’t want or need a liberation.

The rules for liberation’s are as follows: that regions may not be liberated if the government and members don’t want or need a liberation. This definition must be recognized and enforced by senior WA leadership.

Metagaming, game mechanics, “liberation” is an SC thing.

[Rafterland]

Protect Political Opinions Of Independent Regions

A resolution to increase democratic freedoms.

Category: Furtherment of Democracy

Strength: Strong

Proposed by: The Republic of Brenland States

Understanding that all political opinions of independent regions must be respected and allowed.

Realizing that independent regions and their government may do whatever they want In their own regions.

Hoping to protect independent regions from unlawful or unprovoked harassment from other regions.

Understanding that all political opinions of independent regions must be respected and allowed.

Realizing that independent regions and their government may do whatever they want In their own regions.

Hoping to protect independent regions from unlawful or unprovoked harassment from other regions.

Enforcing that regions may not be liberated if the government and members don’t want or need a liberation.

The rules for liberation’s are as follows: that regions may not be liberated if the government and members don’t want or need a liberation. This definition must be recognized and enforced by senior WA leadership.

Metagaming, game mechanics, “liberation” is an SC thing.

I would have thought the fact it was obvious copy-paste was sufficient

[Jebslund]

Protect Political Opinions Of Independent Regions

A resolution to increase democratic freedoms.

Category: Furtherment of Democracy

Strength: Strong

Proposed by: The Republic of Brenland States

Understanding that all political opinions of independent regions must be respected and allowed.

Realizing that independent regions and their government may do whatever they want In their own regions.

Hoping to protect independent regions from unlawful or unprovoked harassment from other regions.

Understanding that all political opinions of independent regions must be respected and allowed.

Realizing that independent regions and their government may do whatever they want In their own regions.

Hoping to protect independent regions from unlawful or unprovoked harassment from other regions.

Enforcing that regions may not be liberated if the government and members don’t want or need a liberation.

The rules for liberation’s are as follows: that regions may not be liberated if the government and members don’t want or need a liberation. This definition must be recognized and enforced by senior WA leadership.

Metagaming, game mechanics, “liberation” is an SC thing.

Proposal basics. They literally copy/pasted the first three statements of the preamble to make the second three, and then the "Enforcing" clause minus the word "enforcing" for the "The rules..." clause. Blatant padding like that is a clear violation.

[Frisbeeteria]

I would have thought the fact it was obvious copy-paste was sufficient

Not obvious to me. Could you link to the source, please?

[Rafterland]

I would have thought the fact it was obvious copy-paste was sufficient

Not obvious to me. Could you link to the source, please?

I will admit there is no proof but viewing as another identical proposal, this time having only one of the repeating clause group has already been ousted from the queue, it seems clear that the person behind this posted another proposal, copy pasting the first one's contents. Spam, in other words.

[Grays Harbor]

I would have thought the fact it was obvious copy-paste was sufficient

Not obvious to me. Could you link to the source, please?

Protect Political Opinions Of Independent Regions

A resolution to increase democratic freedoms.

Category: Furtherment of Democracy

Strength: Strong

Proposed by: The Republic of Brenland States

1. All political opinions of independent regions must be respected and allowed

2. Independent regions and their government may do whatever they want in their own region.

3. Protecting independent regions from unlawful and/or unprovoked harassment from other countries/regions.

4. Regions may not be liberated if the government and memebers don’t want/need liberation .

5. Regions may only be liberated if they are being raided by a hostile region.

6. The definition of liberation in Nation States must be strictly defined and enforced by senior WA membership.

Approvals: 0

GenSec Status: ILLEGAL — HELD
Info
Illegal (2): Bears Armed, Christian Democrats

4 minutes ago: Christian Democrats: Illegal — Meta-gaming; Game Mechanics.
7 hours ago: Bears Armed: Illegal — Meta-gaming; Game Mechanics. (This simply isn't something that the GA can do, or even talk about doing.)

[Alpha Cassiopeiae]

Gun Safety Act

A resolution to tighten or relax gun control laws.

Category: Gun Control

Decision: Tighten

Proposed by: Squidnation

In light of the recent attacks on the topic of gun control, me and my advisors have discussed a lot of the matter.

According to statistics from the SAOI and many other large government organizations countries with higher gun education and more encouragement to own guns, have lower rates of gun related casualties not related to Terrorist attacks or war.

Because of these statistics, I would like to propose the following;

I. That schools within all nations regardless of crime rates will subject to the laws imposed by this bill.

II.[/b That schools within these nations will have mandatory gun education as a graduation requirement for the nation and all states or provinces that it contains.

[b]III. That the curriculum for the gun education will include the following topics;
> To be taught the value of human life, and that to end one is a very serious
thing.
> To be taught the proper safety and handling of firearms, and the dangers of
improper use.

IV. That teachers within the school, among other staff, will have a job requirement to report any instances of bullying to a school administrator, in order to prevent school shootings in the long term

V. That students will have access to a school counselor that they can talk to their personal issues with, so that they can have someone to turn to in a state of depression.

I greatly thank you if you have taken the time to read this proposal, and hope for the best future for your nation.

Best Regards,
Hans Oberst, Chancellor of Squidnation

Branding, category rule (the proposal does not address gun control in the slightest).

[Jebslund]

Gun Safety Act

A resolution to tighten or relax gun control laws.

Category: Gun Control

Decision: Tighten

Proposed by: Squidnation

In light of the recent attacks on the topic of gun control, me and my advisors have discussed a lot of the matter.

According to statistics from the SAOI and many other large government organizations countries with higher gun education and more encouragement to own guns, have lower rates of gun related casualties not related to Terrorist attacks or war.

Because of these statistics, I would like to propose the following;

I. That schools within all nations regardless of crime rates will subject to the laws imposed by this bill.

II.[/b That schools within these nations will have mandatory gun education as a graduation requirement for the nation and all states or provinces that it contains.

[b]III. That the curriculum for the gun education will include the following topics;
> To be taught the value of human life, and that to end one is a very serious
thing.
> To be taught the proper safety and handling of firearms, and the dangers of
improper use.

IV. That teachers within the school, among other staff, will have a job requirement to report any instances of bullying to a school administrator, in order to prevent school shootings in the long term

V. That students will have access to a school counselor that they can talk to their personal issues with, so that they can have someone to turn to in a state of depression.

I greatly thank you if you have taken the time to read this proposal, and hope for the best future for your nation.

Best Regards,
Hans Oberst, Chancellor of Squidnation

Branding, category rule (the proposal does not address gun control in the slightest).

It basically breaks every rule it did before, except for the rule against resolutions that are selectively applied only to certainly Nations.

[Grays Harbor]

Repeal: “Protecting Minority Languages”

A resolution to repeal previously passed legislation.

Category: Repeal

Resolution: GA#426

Proposed by: Elvis Depressly

General Assembly Resolution #426 “Protecting Minority Languages” (Category: Education and Creativity; Area of Effect: Cultural Heritage) shall be struck out and rendered null and void.

peepeelol i no likey other people speaky aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa my nama jeff

Ay
Fonsi
DY
Oh
Oh no, oh no
Oh yeah
Diridiri, dirididi Daddy
Go
Sí, sabes que ya llevo un rato mirándote
Tengo que bailar contigo hoy (DY)
Vi que tu mirada ya estaba llamándome
Muéstrame el camino que yo voy (Oh)
Tú, tú eres el imán y yo soy el metal
Me voy acercando y voy armando el plan
Solo con pensarlo se acelera el pulso (Oh yeah)
Ya, ya me está gustando más de lo normal
Todos mis sentidos van pidiendo más
Esto hay que tomarlo sin ningún apuro
Despacito
Quiero respirar tu cuello despacito
Deja que te diga cosas al oído
Para que te acuerdes si no estás conmigo
Despacito
Quiero desnudarte a besos despacito
Firmo en las paredes de tu laberinto
Y hacer de tu cuerpo todo un manuscrito (sube, sube, sube)
(Sube, sube)

Joke proposal, not in English, spamming the queue.

[Bears Armed]

Repeal: “Protecting Minority Languages”

A resolution to repeal previously passed legislation.

Category: Repeal

Resolution: GA#426

Proposed by: Elvis Depressly

General Assembly Resolution #426 “Protecting Minority Languages” (Category: Education and Creativity; Area of Effect: Cultural Heritage) shall be struck out and rendered null and void.

peepeelol i no likey other people speaky aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa my nama jeff

Ay
Fonsi
DY
Oh
Oh no, oh no
Oh yeah
Diridiri, dirididi Daddy
Go
Sí, sabes que ya llevo un rato mirándote
Tengo que bailar contigo hoy (DY)
Vi que tu mirada ya estaba llamándome
Muéstrame el camino que yo voy (Oh)
Tú, tú eres el imán y yo soy el metal
Me voy acercando y voy armando el plan
Solo con pensarlo se acelera el pulso (Oh yeah)
Ya, ya me está gustando más de lo normal
Todos mis sentidos van pidiendo más
Esto hay que tomarlo sin ningún apuro
Despacito
Quiero respirar tu cuello despacito
Deja que te diga cosas al oído
Para que te acuerdes si no estás conmigo
Despacito
Quiero desnudarte a besos despacito
Firmo en las paredes de tu laberinto
Y hacer de tu cuerpo todo un manuscrito (sube, sube, sube)
(Sube, sube)

Joke proposal, not in English, spamming the queue.

and Plagiarism...

[Jebslund]

This proprosal consists of three main concerns:

1. It should be easier to recruit nations in a region.
2. There should be other means of obtaining stamps other than the outrageous fees one must currently pay.
3. These alternate means of stamp obtainment should be difficult and require long-winded political campaigns, stimulating legistlative creativity, or stunning & incredible statistics and nation/region performance.

Another person who didn't read the bloody rules and thinks the GA is a fancy suggestion box...

Anywho... Game Mechanics, Proposal Basics, No Operative Clause ("It/There/they should" does nothing.)

[Grays Harbor]

Basic Income For All Peoples Of The World
A resolution to reduce income inequality and increase basic welfare.

Category: Social Justice

Strength: Strong

Proposed by: Truly free peoples socialist republic

As a means of redistributing wealth from the hands of the few wealthy individuals & overly powerful corporation. I, leader of our socialist republic hereby request that all other nations seriously consider implementing a Basic Citizen Income to all peoples earning below the national average.
The amount would vary according to each person's need, but the total annual Income should be level with each nation's annual average salary.
This would enable those on low wages to pay their bills & if required debts, it would give a sense of security, it would decrease crime, thereby freeing police services to tackle larger & more pressing criminal & terrorist problems.
It would redistribute wealth throughout the economy. As these are the very people that would purchase the items & services needed in everyday modern life. Such as food, clothing, household goods & furniture, cars, homes, etc. Purchase required services such as utilities, water, gas, electricity, phone & internet services, insurances, etc.
Not only would this Basic income ensure financial security it would also ensure societal security, increase levels of personal satisfaction & happiness. This would also provide a corresponding lift in physical & mental health, thereby decreasing the overall costs of each nation's budgetary requirements.
I hope that other nations will consider our proposal & I hope that you find in our favour & vote yes! For a more balanced, fair & happier world. Thank you for your time

Branding, bloggy, not written as a law.

[Grays Harbor]

Delegate Power Control
A resolution to restrict political freedoms in the interest of law and order.

Category: Political Stability

Strength: Significant

Proposed by: Laarcanecro

Section 1:
Delegates may not do anything unethical, if done they will be forced to resign as a Delegate.

Section 2:
Delegates may have full control over world superpowers.

Game Mechanics, meta gaming, something something something, illegal.

[Grays Harbor]

Proposal For The World Development Plan
A resolution to modify universal standards of healthcare.

Category: Health

Area of Effect: International Aid

Proposed by: Imperio del Brasil

Recognizing that Major Nations of the World have significant income, the World Development Plan (WDP) proposes that countries of a massive size must dedicate part of their GDP to assisting smaller, less developed nations. Other nations with strong economies, large or small, are permitted and encouraged by this Resolution and the Plan therein to use their income for the betterment of their fellow nations. Smaller nations should take precedence over ourselves, lest we fall victim to the self-centered idea that we are superior to these nations inherently. We have a duty as humanitarians to assist these nations and raise them to prosperity.

Signed,
Crown Prince Luis, Brazilian WA Delegate.

The usual; Branding and not doing anything. "Health" seems a bit suspect as category, too. A bit bloggy as well. Too long for a t-shirt, though.

[Jebslund]

Proposal For The World Development Plan
A resolution to modify universal standards of healthcare.

Category: Health

Area of Effect: International Aid

Proposed by: Imperio del Brasil

Recognizing that Major Nations of the World have significant income, the World Development Plan (WDP) proposes that countries of a massive size must dedicate part of their GDP to assisting smaller, less developed nations. Other nations with strong economies, large or small, are permitted and encouraged by this Resolution and the Plan therein to use their income for the betterment of their fellow nations. Smaller nations should take precedence over ourselves, lest we fall victim to the self-centered idea that we are superior to these nations inherently. We have a duty as humanitarians to assist these nations and raise them to prosperity.

Signed,
Crown Prince Luis, Brazilian WA Delegate.

The usual; Branding and not doing anything. "Health" seems a bit suspect as category, too. A bit bloggy as well. Too long for a t-shirt, though.

GA also isn't allowed to mess with how a nation spends it's funds so long as other requirements of a resolution are met, IIRC.

[Grays Harbor]

Human Rights

A resolution to improve worldwide human and civil rights.

Category: Human Rights

Strength: Strong

Proposed by: Vatian Sac

This is resolution to improve Human Rights,vote for if you agree that in every country Humans should have more rights...

Strength, does nothing, pimping for votes in the proposal, I would say it duplicates COCR if it actually said anything.