This is the current version and it has too many typos:
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A political and legally binding treaty that all nations must try to implement in their administrations and governments.
Political goals:
1. Reduce the worlds CO2 emissions by 20 percent before the year 2020.
2. Increase the green and clean energy industry in every nations larger than a population at 10 billion.
3. The government must take the initiative to educate and develop a more efficient green industry.
4. All rich nations must show solidarity to poor nations wich will be affected by the climate changes, in distributing ressouces and food.
5. All nations should implement green taxes on automobiles wich contributes to carbon-dioxide to the atmosphere.
6. All nations must build cricis centers to climate affected refugees.
Legally binding treaty:
Part one.
1. All nations must cooperate to follow the strict goal of reducing the worlds CO2 emissions by 20 percent, by the year 2020.
2. All nations should increase clean and egologically energy production by 15 percent, by the year 2030.
3. All nations must stick to the following legally binding treaty, even so if the administration will be electoral changed, and a new governmet will be implemented.
4. All nations must increase reseach funding by 25 percent, and ecourage scientific reseach on hybrid-cars.
5. Morale company taxes should be implemented on industries wich contributes with more than 3 ton CO2 emissions in a month, as a punishment.
NOTE that all the political goals are not binding as such, but should be interpretated as an initiative all governments should take.
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Edited version:
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This is a political and legally binding treaty that all nations must try to implement in their administrations and governments.
Political goals:
1. Reduce the worlds CO2 emissions by 20 percent before the year 2020.
2. Increase the green and clean energy industry in every nation with a population larger than 10 billion.
3. The government must take the initiative to educate and develop a more efficient green industry.
4. All extremely wealthy nations must show solidarity to poor nations which will be affected by the climate changes, in distributing resources and food.
5. All nations should implement green taxes on automobiles that emit greenhouse gases.
6. All nations must build crisis centers to climate affected refugees.
Legally binding treaty:
Part one.
1. All nations must cooperate to follow the strict goal of reducing the worlds CO2 emissions by 20 percent, by the year 2020.
2. All nations should increase clean and ecological energy production by 15 percent, by the year 2030.
3. All nations must stick to the following legally binding treaty, even if the administration is changed, and a new government is implemented.
4. All nations must increase research funding by 25 percent, and encourage scientific research on hybrid-cars.
5. Morale company taxes should be implemented on industries which contribute emit 3 tons or more of CO2 in a month.
Note that all the political goals are not binding as such, but should be interpreted as an initiative all governments should take.
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I fully support this proposal, but it has way too many grammar and spelling errors. If you see any issues with this re-draft or have any ideas to make it better please post your re-draft below. If the previous version passes we will repeal it. If it does not, somebody please submit this or whichever version is finalized within this thread.
