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[DRAFT] Education in Environment and Sustainable Development

Postby Ruldoisia » Fri Nov 02, 2012 3:07 am

The World Assembly,

Aware that education and sustainable development go hand in hand;

Noting with regret that despite many conferences and campaigns all over the world, environmental degradation is gradually increasing;

Taking into consideration environmental education represents a relevant means of prevention because this type of education encourages learner's awareness of their environment's ambient conditions, as well as their active participation in solving local problems;

Alarmed by rising levels of global warming, ozone layer depletion, greenhouse effects, raise in sea water level, improper monsoon and acid rain.

Convinced that the current system for dealing with the environment while at the same time development being sustainable is erroneous, ineffective, and unreliable;

Thereby;

Urges nations to help each other by providing resources , financial and professional aid to promote education and to make the local communities and people living in rural areas aware of the importance of education in sustainable development and environmental protection;

Authorizes an independent WA enquiry team to be given the task of submitting an annual report stating the improvements made by the member countries with respect to educational level, sustainable development and the environment keeping in mind factors such as deforestation, status of renewable resources, literacy level and gross school attendance

Emphasizes the need for international cooperation, on the part of all countries, and give WA full power to decide on and enforce sanctions on any countries unwilling to cooperate, which includes not complying with the set deadline;

Urges the concerned governments of member countries to shift its focus from strategy developments to implementation , support development/implementation of specific policy instruments and policy package to promote Education for Sustainable Development ( ESD ) practises that have been identified as critical in achieving the sustainable development goals;

Considers that an indicator is needed for comparing the relative progress made by different countries towards sustainable development at a given time or for measuring progress made by a given country or region over time as various processes of education – which lie at the heart of promoting changes in behaviour – on a global level will help turn things around and enhance its progress;

Requests that the new revised curricula for education in the member nations should include the following :

1) Encompass the curricula to include environmental science as a major subject in their school curriculum;

2) The methods of science and technology to deal with pollution already produced and with pollution prevention and reduction by incorporating the know –how and skills and also the moral imperatives and to bring about the change of attitude in education by moral and ethical philosophy where in the young minds it is essential to reinforce the environment respecting moral values;

3) Apart from the introduction of environmental science as a major subject , it should include hands-on activities and projects to arouse the interest , awareness and enthusiasm among students in green issues;

Further requests that the communication between their respective nations and their habitants should be increased in propagating the values of environmental sustainability and sustainable development by defining responsible environmental behavior as it allows to consider it not only from the individual perspective but also from a social perspective through workshops , seminars, campaigns and public debates;

Expresses its hope by enhancing the interactions between researchers , teachers , NGOs and others in the field of ESD in order to strengthen knowledge sharing , enhance curriculum development and promote more valid and reliable ways of evaluating ESD and actively participating in international joint research on mechanisms and indicators monitoring and evaluation of ESD performances;

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Postby Bears Armed » Fri Nov 02, 2012 4:31 am

Category and (either Strength or 'Area of Effect', as appropriate to the category)?
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Postby Ruldoisia » Fri Nov 02, 2012 4:50 am

i did not get you ! Can you please explain ?

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Postby Bears Armed » Fri Nov 02, 2012 5:01 am

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Postby Ruldoisia » Fri Nov 02, 2012 5:42 am

Its category is Environment.

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Postby Goddess Relief Office » Fri Nov 02, 2012 6:18 am

Ruldoisia wrote:The World Assembly,

Aware that education and sustainable development go hand in hand;

Noting with regret that despite many conferences and campaigns all over the world, environmental degradation is gradually increasing;

Taking into consideration environmental education represents a relevant means of prevention because this type of education encourages learner's awareness of their environment's ambient conditions, as well as their active participation in solving local problems;

Alarmed by rising levels of global warming, ozone layer depletion, greenhouse effects, raise in sea water level, improper monsoon and acid rain.

Convinced that the current system for dealing with the environment while at the same time development being sustainable is erroneous, ineffective, and unreliable;

Thereby;

Urges nations to help each other by providing resources , financial and professional aid to promote education and to make the local communities and people living in rural areas aware of the importance of education in sustainable development and environmental protection;

Authorizes an independent WA enquiry team to be given the task of submitting an annual report stating the improvements made by the member countries with respect to educational level, sustainable development and the environment keeping in mind factors such as deforestation, status of renewable resources, literacy level and gross school attendance

Emphasizes the need for international cooperation, on the part of all countries, and give WA full power to decide on and enforce sanctions on any countries unwilling to cooperate, which includes not complying with the set deadline;

Urges the concerned governments of member countries to shift its focus from strategy developments to implementation , support development/implementation of specific policy instruments and policy package to promote Education for Sustainable Development ( ESD ) practises that have been identified as critical in achieving the sustainable development goals;

Considers that an indicator is needed for comparing the relative progress made by different countries towards sustainable development at a given time or for measuring progress made by a given country or region over time as various processes of education – which lie at the heart of promoting changes in behaviour – on a global level will help turn things around and enhance its progress;

Requests that the new revised curricula for education in the member nations should include the following :

1) Encompass the curricula to include environmental science as a major subject in their school curriculum;

2) The methods of science and technology to deal with pollution already produced and with pollution prevention and reduction by incorporating the know –how and skills and also the moral imperatives and to bring about the change of attitude in education by moral and ethical philosophy where in the young minds it is essential to reinforce the environment respecting moral values;

3) Apart from the introduction of environmental science as a major subject , it should include hands-on activities and projects to arouse the interest , awareness and enthusiasm among students in green issues;

Further requests that the communication between their respective nations and their habitants should be increased in propagating the values of environmental sustainability and sustainable development by defining responsible environmental behavior as it allows to consider it not only from the individual perspective but also from a social perspective through workshops , seminars, campaigns and public debates;

Expresses its hope by enhancing the interactions between researchers , teachers , NGOs and others in the field of ESD in order to strengthen knowledge sharing , enhance curriculum development and promote more valid and reliable ways of evaluating ESD and actively participating in international joint research on mechanisms and indicators monitoring and evaluation of ESD performances;



hi Ruldoisia,

A good effort for a first timer. Some minor comments:

Noting with regret that despite many conferences and campaigns all over the world, environmental degradation is gradually increasing;
<snip>
Alarmed by rising levels of global warming, ozone layer depletion, greenhouse effects, raise in sea water level, improper monsoon and acid rain.

Where's the proof in the claims above? Remember, what's happening in the real world =/= the NS world.

Authorizes an independent WA enquiry team to be given the task of submitting an annual report stating the improvements made by the member countries with respect to educational level, sustainable development and the environment keeping in mind factors such as deforestation, status of renewable resources, literacy level and gross school attendance

While I understand why you have literacy level and gross school attendance in there, I think you're going to open a can of worms by trying to legislate education, which is in an entirely different category.

Emphasizes the need for international cooperation, on the part of all countries, and give WA full power to decide on and enforce sanctions on any countries unwilling to cooperate, which includes not complying with the set deadline;

What set deadline? When's the deadline? It's not mentioned anywhere else in your entire passage.

Expresses its hope by enhancing the interactions between researchers , teachers , NGOs and others in the field of ESD in order to strengthen knowledge sharing , enhance curriculum development and promote more valid and reliable ways of evaluating ESD and actively participating in international joint research on mechanisms and indicators monitoring and evaluation of ESD performances;

Shouldn't the resolution end with a full stop?

Also, you may wish to cut down some of your clauses. They don't need to be so long.

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Postby Omicron » Fri Nov 02, 2012 6:36 am

Thanks for letting me now my mistakes.However , I'll cut the two clauses mentioned in your first statement.For the second one , I would like to say that since education and environment are co-related , I have focused on the education part too as the topic states.For the third one , I did not understand the term "dateline".What is it ?

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Postby Omicron » Fri Nov 02, 2012 6:36 am

Also , how to edit it so that i can put a full-stop ?

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Postby Goddess Relief Office » Fri Nov 02, 2012 6:46 am

Omicron wrote:Thanks for letting me now my mistakes.However , I'll cut the two clauses mentioned in your first statement.For the second one , I would like to say that since education and environment are co-related , I have focused on the education part too as the topic states.For the third one , I did not understand the term "dateline".What is it ?


I meant deadline, it was in your text. You mentioned it but didn't specify a time when the tasks should be completed by.
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General Assembly:
GA#053 - Epidemic Response Act
GA#163 - Repeal LOTS
GA#223 - Transboundary Water Use Act

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SC#044 - Commend Texas (co-author)
SC#066 - Repeal "Liberate Wonderful Paradise"
SC#108 - Liberate South Pacific
SC#135 - Liberate Anarchy (co-author)
SC#139 - Repeal "Liberate South Pacific"

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Postby Omicron » Fri Nov 02, 2012 6:52 am

Here deadlines refers to all future possibilities of some significant tasks ,

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Postby Moronist Decisions » Fri Nov 02, 2012 11:18 am

Per the rules, for environmental resolutions

Any proposal written for this category should preferably talk about industry having to somehow pay for environmental improvements. Of course, this could be abstracted by saying that the government taxes industry more to implement an environmental plan of some kind.


What is the industry affected (per the rules)?

I'm not sure that your resolution actually would cause much (if any) of a hit to industry.
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Postby Cherokee Children » Sat Nov 03, 2012 3:45 pm

One problem I see is that this proposed resolution "urges" which carries the same weight as suggests and recommends. Which are not requirements only suggestions of actions to take. Then this proposed resolution authrises sanctions against those who do not follow the suggestions.
It must be clear whether these are suggestions or required actions to be taken by nations.

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Postby Free South Califas » Sun Nov 04, 2012 1:31 am

Convinced that the current system for dealing with the environment while at the same time development being sustainable is erroneous, ineffective, and unreliable;


This is a clumsy clause with several serious linguistic problems.

1. “the current system for...”: reductionist; essentialist; uses undefined term to make sweeping generalizations.

2. “dealing with the environment”: so vague as to verge on euphemism.

3. “while at the same time development being sustainable”: awkward sentence order. You’re trying to shove a Noun Phrase ("development being sustainable") into the slot where a Verb Phrase should go; it also suffers from a passive voice on the role of government. A suitable replacement to this section would be “while at the same time promoting sustainable development”, for example. That is, the last three words should go Verb-Adjective-Noun rather than the Noun-Verb-Adjective structure in the current draft.

4. “is erroneous, ineffective, and unreliable;”: prove it.

There are more deep and surface issues with subsequent clauses, but there are bigger questions to answer first, like how this can legally be an Environment proposal without any significant hit to industry; the conflation between real-world and NS issues; and how the draft seems to waver on optionality. So, we will refrain from further proofreading unless these issues are well resolved, which would signify that this draft could be taken seriously and promoted. For what it’s worth, I hope your draft gets there.
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