Saint Kanye wrote:Xanneria wrote:Hey Kanye,
several of the incidents referred to in my RP took place in prior races (I'm referring to Brooke having the slowest time in Newark, not Jebslund).
Fine, I changed it.
You never mentioned Newark or any other race but the Fortress Run in your article though, so how am I supposed to know which one you were talking about? Here's a tip: When making news articles, you're supposed to fill in the readers on what's going on, rather than assuming that they already do know. Unless this Iyokoka guy is intentionally making errors, like when you made him say Qiang was a taxi driver, and now when you had him write that Mayhem makes clothes. Then that would be saying a lot about the state of the Xannerian press, ICly.
I think we all know the Xannerian press is ICly a little wonky.