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CivilDefense Industries is THE company for all your cheap weapon/security needs, with high-quality weapons usable for most situations you might get into!

For sale today we have the:

SAR-27




SAR-10




P-5




OOC: This is my first real attempt at an rp, so some form of feedback would be great, thanks.

Invoice from the corporate offices of Liibertine Marketplace,

Greetings from Liibertine Marketplace, Niicha's premier retail shopping center! We offer many products to our discriminating customers, from our well stocked and diverse grocery department to our newest department, "Thatsa Rugg", featuring exotic and beatiful rugs from all over the continent.

Due to our nation's new compulsary gun laws, we are RUNNING OUT OF INVENTORY, which is WONDERFUL news to YOU! We are looking for high quality weapons and we are sure you won't disappoint.

Our order is as follows:

50,000 SAR-27

50,000 SAR-10

100,000 P-5

Enclosed is our order form and one of our famous Wacko Jacko's Ultimate Coupon Value Books, with over 500 dollars worth of savings!

From the desk of Larry Irris, Corporate

To the corporate offices of Liibertine Marketplace,

Greetings! Being CivilDefense Industries' first customer, you have earned a 10% discount on the weaponry you have ordered! Therefore, your price is:

50,000 SAR-27s= $40,000,000
50,000 SAR-10s= $60,000,000
100,000 P-5s= $15,000,000

Price: $115,000,000 with a 10% discount, your final price is $103,500,000!

These high-quality weapons are now en-route to the port of your choice via cargo ship, and will remain offshore until the money is wired to our account. We hope you have a fine day!

From, Nicholas Johanson, CEO of CivilDefense Industries

Message from CivilDefence Industries


Thanks to new business flowing in from all parts of the globe, CivilDefense Industries is glad to present 2 NEW, BETTER rifles to add to its stock. We hope that you will all consider buying these rifles, and further fund CivilDefense for our hopes to create some of the best small-arms in the world!

New Rifles:

MAR-2




SMAR-5




Message from Nicholas Johanson, CEO of CivilDefence Industries

To: Nicholas Johanson, CEO of CivilDefense Industries
From: Lauren Kies, Commander of Songri Dominion

The Songri Dominion is very interested in asking CivilDefense Industries to become the primary supplier of small arms for the armed forces. However before we commit to such a venture would you mind answering a few questions and offering a demonstration?

Have your weapons been tested in a Jungle enviroment?

How easy are your weapons to maintain and how reliable are they?

Would a discount be applied for a large bulk order? If yes how much?

If you are interested in seeking this contract please contact me to arrange a demonstration of the: effect on a unarmoured individual, armoured individual (both body and head), ease of training personell with this weapon, ease of maintaining the weapon and how well the weapons cope in a jungle envirmoent.

I look foward to working with CivilDefense in the near future.

Regards, Lauren Kies, Commander of Songri Dominion

OOC: Why do 'Trash-Threads' like this steal people from a quality thread like mine? WHY? I offer better services and such, and yet I get 1 customer per day!

oc: I am interested in Infantry weapons and this thread is offering to sell them, after looking through your thread the only infantry weapons you offered were side-arms with the sole exception of a single sniper rifle. If/When i start purchasing vehicles and an air force i will consider your store, until then it does not provide what i am interested in and i would rather focus my business into a compony that does

Grittonia wrote:OOC: Why do 'Trash-Threads' like this steal people from a quality thread like mine? WHY? I offer better services and such, and yet I get 1 customer per day!

OOC:Well, I will make a list:

1. This isn't a "trash thread" thank you very much, and I will consider any further unconstructive criticism flaming.
2. You have just one big list from what I can see, and no pictures of any quality to evaluate what your products look like.
3. You get more than "one customer a day" from what I saw, so stop complaining.

Now, if you don't want to either help me with this so-called "trash thread", or buy something IC, then I would kindly suggest that you GTFO.

We would like 20,000 SAR-27 Riffiles and we will wire said money when our order arrives.

Northern Delmarva wrote:

Grittonia wrote:OOC: Why do 'Trash-Threads' like this steal people from a quality thread like mine? WHY? I offer better services and such, and yet I get 1 customer per day!

OOC:Well, I will make a list:

1. This isn't a "trash thread" thank you very much, and I will consider any further unconstructive criticism flaming.
2. You have just one big list from what I can see, and no pictures of any quality to evaluate what your products look like.
3. You get more than "one customer a day" from what I saw, so stop complaining.

Now, if you don't want to either help me with this so-called "trash thread", or buy something IC, then I would kindly suggest that you GTFO.

OOC: There are photo's available if needed. But let me just help you:
1. Get a opening's thing something like:
CivilDefense Industries began in 1999 and has a long blah blah blah (I have had 5 threads, and everyone knows what I produce so I don't need one AND I am too lazy).
2. Try to offer something others don't have, for example I just made Customer Ranks to get more people to buy.
3. Get more than 2/3 designes, and make more than small arms. Also, don't copy ANYTHING of a Storefront without asking, seriously don't.
4. Don't tell me to Get The Fuck Out. Just Don't.

Songri wrote:To: Nicholas Johanson, CEO of CivilDefense Industries
From: Lauren Kies, Commander of Songri Dominion

The Songri Dominion is very interested in asking CivilDefense Industries to become the primary supplier of small arms for the armed forces. However before we commit to such a venture would you mind answering a few questions and offering a demonstration?

Have your weapons been tested in a Jungle enviroment?

How easy are your weapons to maintain and how reliable are they?

Would a discount be applied for a large bulk order? If yes how much?

If you are interested in seeking this contract please contact me to arrange a demonstration of the: effect on a unarmoured individual, armoured individual (both body and head), ease of training personell with this weapon, ease of maintaining the weapon and how well the weapons cope in a jungle envirmoent.

I look foward to working with CivilDefense in the near future.

Regards, Lauren Kies, Commander of Songri Dominion

To: Lauren Kies, Commander of Songri Dominion
From: Nicholas Johanson, CEO of CivilDefense Industries

Welcome! CivilDefense Industries is glad to hear that the glorious nation of Songri is considering us for a main supplier!
To answer your questions, we have recently put our weapons through a brutal jungle testing routine, and have found these results:

The SAR-27 and SAR-10 have shown promising results for jungle terrain, as they have worked with only 1 reported jam due to the mud. The P-5, however is less suited to jungle terrain, as the laser sight seems to malfunction due to the humidity, however we are working on a solution for this.

One of our weapons' main selling points are their durability and reliability in all forms of terrain with minimal maintenance, and can be cleaned very easily in the field, mainly via field-strip and cleaning the barrel with anything available, apparently a shoestring with knots tied in it has worked very well.

Although we have not considered discounts for bulk orders, the first 5 customers we have will earn a 10% discount.

We can arrange a demonstration in our testing laboratories, if you should come for a visit.

We hope that once you see a demonstration of our weapons you will choose CivilDefense Industries for all your small arms needs!

Sent from: The offices of Nicholas Johanson

Grittonia wrote:OOC: Why do 'Trash-Threads' like this steal people from a quality thread like mine? WHY? I offer better services and such, and yet I get 1 customer per day!

I've been looking at a lot of storefronts in light of my desire to refit the armed forces and...better services? I wouldn't bank on that if I were you.

As for the topic at hand, I'd like to know if CDI would be willing to sell the Domestic Production Rights to the P9. We are in need of a useful sidearm.

To: Nicholas Johanson, CEO of CivilDefense Industries
From: Lauren Kies, Commander of Songri Dominion

Could you arrange a demonstration in 3 days time for myself and 10 members of the Songri Dominion Military?

I request that during the demonstration all testing of weapons is to be done by the soldiers i will be bringing along. You are welcome to provide instructors, maintenence manuals or whatever else you feel required to teach my soldiers everything they need to know about your guns.

Assuming the tests go well we will place our order in two stages, the first will be a trial deployment for a small portion of our army. If that proves successful then we will be more then willing to enter into a contract making CivilDefense the primary Small Arms supplier for The Songri Dominion.

I look forward to meeting you and observing your equipment in person in 3 days time.

Regards
Lauren Kies, Commander of Songri Dominion

New Fijia Islands wrote:We would like 20,000 SAR-27 Riffiles and we will wire said money when our order arrives.

To: The Leader of New Fijia Islands
From: Nicholas Johanson, CEO of CivilDefense Industries

Greetings from the headquarters of CivilDefense Industries! Your order for 20,000 SAR-27s has been noted, prepared, and shipped, we are now waiting for confirmation of arrival, and wiring of funds to our account, with a price of:

20,000 SAR-27s: $16,000,000 minus a 10% first 5 customer discount: $14,400,000.

Have a nice day!

Songri wrote:To: Nicholas Johanson, CEO of CivilDefense Industries
From: Lauren Kies, Commander of Songri Dominion

Could you arrange a demonstration in 3 days time for myself and 10 members of the Songri Dominion Military?

I request that during the demonstration all testing of weapons is to be done by the soldiers i will be bringing along. You are welcome to provide instructors, maintenence manuals or whatever else you feel required to teach my soldiers everything they need to know about your guns.

Assuming the tests go well we will place our order in two stages, the first will be a trial deployment for a small portion of our army. If that proves successful then we will be more then willing to enter into a contract making CivilDefense the primary Small Arms supplier for The Songri Dominion.

I look forward to meeting you and observing your equipment in person in 3 days time.

Regards
Lauren Kies, Commander of Songri Dominion

To: Lauren Kies, Commander of Songri Dominion
From: Nicholas Johanson, CEO of CivilDefense Industries

We would be glad to provide a demonstration for you and your group of soldiers! We can provide local instructors who have worked with these weapons since our company's founding, as well as detailed instruction manuals in whatever language you require for your soldiers and yourself.If you so desire, we can also provide a tour of our facility also with our company's history! We await your arrival in our headquarters in Wilmington, the capital city of Northern Delmarva, and we can provide local transport, as well as local hotel accommodations.

Warm regards,
Nicholas Johanson, CEO of CivilDefense Industries

My order was ignored so I'm cancelling it.

McPsychoville wrote:

Grittonia wrote:OOC: Why do 'Trash-Threads' like this steal people from a quality thread like mine? WHY? I offer better services and such, and yet I get 1 customer per day!

I've been looking at a lot of storefronts in light of my desire to refit the armed forces and...better services? I wouldn't bank on that if I were you.

As for the topic at hand, I'd like to know if CDI would be willing to sell the Domestic Production Rights to the P9. We are in need of a useful sidearm.

To: McPsychoville
From: Nicholas Johanson, CEO of CivilDefense Industries

Hello! The P-9 pistol is an excellent sidearm for any need your military may need it for, and we would be willing to sell a DPR for the P-9 for the price of $180,000,000. CivilDefense Industries hopes that you will consider this offer, and we would be willing to consider any counter-proposals you may offer.

Regards,
Nicholas Johanson, CEO of CivilDefense Industries

Edit for double post.

New Fijia Islands wrote:My order was ignored so I'm cancelling it.

OOC: I put your order in a post right here:

Northern Delmarva wrote:

New Fijia Islands wrote:We would like 20,000 SAR-27 Riffiles and we will wire said money when our order arrives.

To: The Leader of New Fijia Islands
From: Nicholas Johanson, CEO of CivilDefense Industries

Greetings from the headquarters of CivilDefense Industries! Your order for 20,000 SAR-27s has been noted, prepared, and shipped, we are now waiting for confirmation of arrival, and wiring of funds to our account, with a price of:

20,000 SAR-27s: $16,000,000 minus a 10% first 5 customer discount: $14,400,000.

Have a nice day!

Northern Delmarva wrote:

McPsychoville wrote:

Grittonia wrote:OOC: Why do 'Trash-Threads' like this steal people from a quality thread like mine? WHY? I offer better services and such, and yet I get 1 customer per day!

I've been looking at a lot of storefronts in light of my desire to refit the armed forces and...better services? I wouldn't bank on that if I were you.

As for the topic at hand, I'd like to know if CDI would be willing to sell the Domestic Production Rights to the P9. We are in need of a useful sidearm.

To: McPsychoville
From: Nicholas Johanson, CEO of CivilDefense Industries

Hello! The P-9 pistol is an excellent sidearm for any need your military may need it for, and we would be willing to sell a DPR for the P-9 for the price of $180,000,000. CivilDefense Industries hopes that you will consider this offer, and we would be willing to consider any counter-proposals you may offer.

Regards,
Nicholas Johanson, CEO of CivilDefense Industries

Accepted.

Reserved for future expansion.

Oh Sorry,

The money is wired to your account

Northern Delmarva wrote:To the corporate offices of Liibertine Marketplace,

Greetings! Being CivilDefense Industries' first customer, you have earned a 10% discount on the weaponry you have ordered! Therefore, your price is:

50,000 SAR-27s= $40,000,000
50,000 SAR-10s= $60,000,000
100,000 P-5s= $15,000,000

Price: $115,000,000 with a 10% discount, your final price is $103,500,000!

These high-quality weapons are now en-route to the port of your choice via cargo ship, and will remain offshore until the money is wired to our account. We hope you have a fine day!

From, Nicholas Johanson, CEO of CivilDefense Industries

From the corporate offices of Liibertine Marketplace,

Thank you SO MUCH for completing our order!
$103,500,000
Is such a great deal! The money will be wired directly to your account!

Don't forget to check out our clothing department! Going to your first school dance? Expecting a new baby? Looking for something hip and fashionable? Need any size between XXXS to XXXXL? Yep, we got 'em all! Mention this invoice and recieve a WHOPPING 20% off!

From the desk of Larry Irris, Corporate

We would like to purchase 500 SMAR-5's for $1500000