OOC: Ghosts in the Fog is a writing project that goes back to 2015 when I first attempted to tell the story of the nation of Tnemrot. However, due to a lack of direction, the thread petered out after only 14 posts. The concept itself morphed and changed into a second attempt, titled Ghosts in the Fog: Redux in 2016. This one had legs but after 41 posts, again it was cut off as the story had wandered beyond the original intent. So here we are, hoping that the adage "Third time's a charm" holds true. This thread is largely closed, intent on being a narrative detailing the complex history of a new nation named the Corporate Republic of Vokhodia. Vokhodia itself is the metamorphosis of Tnemrot, a more mature idea cursed with a campy username. Thus, I hope you enjoy what's to come.
Background
The Corporate Republic of Vokhodia (Vokhodian: Korporativnaya Respublika Vokhodiya, KRV) is a totalitarian country located in northern Greater Dienstad. The country is an international pariah with an all-pervasive government that elevates "the State" above all aspects of society. The Vokhodian people are taught that "the State" is infallible and that to question "the State" is tantamount to treason. "The State" provides for the people of Vokhodia, as is its duty, expecting unquestioning and unwavering loyalty.
The Vokhodian government promotes a State ideology called Doroga or "The Road." Doroga is a variation of corporatism with certain aspects of communist and fascist ideologies. Under Doroga, "the State" wields all of the power and all of the authority and "corporate groups" are tasked with carrying out their duties handed down from "the State." Doroga requires that "the State" provide for all of its people meaning everyone is given a residence, an education, a job, clothing, and food without cost. However, "the State" does not provide this without limit and Vokhodians receive only what is considered necessary. Employment does pay a wage that Vokhodians may use, within reason, to purchase additional amenities above the minimum provided by "the State." Doroga is also deeply skeptical of foreign influence and takes a very strong, even draconian stance towards internal security, essentially creating a totalitarian police State. Doroga does not push for isolation or a closed country but it does call for strict and thorough review of foreign nations and people to ensure that they will not compromise Doroga or the society of Vokhodia, remember there can be no challenge to "the State."
Vokhodia is a bureaucratically heavy State but the most important bureaucracy for the purpose of this thread is the Ministry of State Security or the Ministerstvo Gosudarstvennoy Bezopasnosti, MGB. It is the task of the MGB to oversee all domestic and foreign intelligence gathering and analysis, domestic law enforcement, courts and prisons, and protect the State at all costs. The MGB is a gargantuan bureaucracy, the largest within Vokhodia, and it maintains a sizeable military force dedicated to internal operations. The Ministry of Defense or the Ministerstvo Oborony, MO, is charged with defending Vokhodia from external threats. The militaries of Vokhodia are strong and powerful but only in respect to their mission and within the confines of those missions. This means that the MGB's forces are focused on internal defense and are ill-equipped to fight against a foreign aggressor while the MO's forces are tasked only with defending the borders and territories of Vokhodia and is almost purely defensive in its capabilities, meaning that it is geared to respond to an invasion or an attack versus initiate one itself.
A major aspect of Doroga is a theme that centers around "the narrative." What this means is that Doroga dictates what people are taught to believe about not only "the State" but also "the State's" history. Doroga applies a revisionist approach to history and is responsible for the general theme of all education in Vokhodia. The emphasis is on a history that "the State" determines to present itself in the most positive light possible, with the aim of suppressing dissent or any notion of "life on the other side."
[More will be added as the story progresses]
Synopsis
Ghosts in the Fog intends to take the reader inside of Vokhodia and behind the eyes of a loyal agent of the State, Major Arkady Bykov. It will present, through narrative, a glimpse into the everyday society of Vokhodia and delve further into the philosophical and political themes and dilemmas of the country. Our main character will become a character in the very history that Doroga seeks to suppress as he unravels truths that have long since been suppressed forcing him to make a choice. Can he achieve freedom? Will he perish at the insistence of the State? Ghosts in the Fog will pose questions but it won't give answers. It's up to you to figure out those answers yourselves. The story is set to the theme of the Fear Factory album Obsolete, a fitting story in and of itself.
Characters
Chapters
Ghosts in the Fog
The masses never revolt of their own accord,
and they never revolt merely because they are oppressed.
Indeed, so long as they are not permitted to have standards of comparison,
they never even become aware that they are oppressed.
(George Orwell Nineteen Eighty-Four, Part II, Chapter IX)
The masses never revolt of their own accord,
and they never revolt merely because they are oppressed.
Indeed, so long as they are not permitted to have standards of comparison,
they never even become aware that they are oppressed.
(George Orwell Nineteen Eighty-Four, Part II, Chapter IX)
Background
The Corporate Republic of Vokhodia (Vokhodian: Korporativnaya Respublika Vokhodiya, KRV) is a totalitarian country located in northern Greater Dienstad. The country is an international pariah with an all-pervasive government that elevates "the State" above all aspects of society. The Vokhodian people are taught that "the State" is infallible and that to question "the State" is tantamount to treason. "The State" provides for the people of Vokhodia, as is its duty, expecting unquestioning and unwavering loyalty.
The Vokhodian government promotes a State ideology called Doroga or "The Road." Doroga is a variation of corporatism with certain aspects of communist and fascist ideologies. Under Doroga, "the State" wields all of the power and all of the authority and "corporate groups" are tasked with carrying out their duties handed down from "the State." Doroga requires that "the State" provide for all of its people meaning everyone is given a residence, an education, a job, clothing, and food without cost. However, "the State" does not provide this without limit and Vokhodians receive only what is considered necessary. Employment does pay a wage that Vokhodians may use, within reason, to purchase additional amenities above the minimum provided by "the State." Doroga is also deeply skeptical of foreign influence and takes a very strong, even draconian stance towards internal security, essentially creating a totalitarian police State. Doroga does not push for isolation or a closed country but it does call for strict and thorough review of foreign nations and people to ensure that they will not compromise Doroga or the society of Vokhodia, remember there can be no challenge to "the State."
Vokhodia is a bureaucratically heavy State but the most important bureaucracy for the purpose of this thread is the Ministry of State Security or the Ministerstvo Gosudarstvennoy Bezopasnosti, MGB. It is the task of the MGB to oversee all domestic and foreign intelligence gathering and analysis, domestic law enforcement, courts and prisons, and protect the State at all costs. The MGB is a gargantuan bureaucracy, the largest within Vokhodia, and it maintains a sizeable military force dedicated to internal operations. The Ministry of Defense or the Ministerstvo Oborony, MO, is charged with defending Vokhodia from external threats. The militaries of Vokhodia are strong and powerful but only in respect to their mission and within the confines of those missions. This means that the MGB's forces are focused on internal defense and are ill-equipped to fight against a foreign aggressor while the MO's forces are tasked only with defending the borders and territories of Vokhodia and is almost purely defensive in its capabilities, meaning that it is geared to respond to an invasion or an attack versus initiate one itself.
A major aspect of Doroga is a theme that centers around "the narrative." What this means is that Doroga dictates what people are taught to believe about not only "the State" but also "the State's" history. Doroga applies a revisionist approach to history and is responsible for the general theme of all education in Vokhodia. The emphasis is on a history that "the State" determines to present itself in the most positive light possible, with the aim of suppressing dissent or any notion of "life on the other side."
[More will be added as the story progresses]
Synopsis
Ghosts in the Fog intends to take the reader inside of Vokhodia and behind the eyes of a loyal agent of the State, Major Arkady Bykov. It will present, through narrative, a glimpse into the everyday society of Vokhodia and delve further into the philosophical and political themes and dilemmas of the country. Our main character will become a character in the very history that Doroga seeks to suppress as he unravels truths that have long since been suppressed forcing him to make a choice. Can he achieve freedom? Will he perish at the insistence of the State? Ghosts in the Fog will pose questions but it won't give answers. It's up to you to figure out those answers yourselves. The story is set to the theme of the Fear Factory album Obsolete, a fitting story in and of itself.
Characters
- Vokhodian State
- The Resistance
- Alina Kharitonova
- [Photo]
- Alina Kharitonova
Chapters
- Chapter I: The Fear Factory
- Chapter II: [To be posted]
- Chapter III: [To be posted]
- Chapter IV: [To be posted]
- Chapter V: [To be posted]
- Chapter VI: [To be posted]
- Chapter VII: [To be posted]
- Chapter VII: [To be posted]
- Chapter IX: [To be posted]
- Chapter X: [To be posted]