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Nation: Kingdom of Coastal Lazio
Side: For Cartel
Approx. TLs: Modern Tech, Modern Timeline
Leader(s) Factbook: There is also a factbook for the top Royal family. It will be the ‘Lazio Family’ of Donatello and Mikey collaborating with the cartel.https://www.nationstates.net/nation=coastal_lazio/detail=factbook/id=1582520
Military Factbook:https://www.nationstates.net/nation=coastal_lazio/detail=factbook/id=1581229
I Agree To The Rules:Yes
RP Example:https://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopic.php?f=5&t=509083 (Give an example of a previous RP post you have done. It need not be recent, just show what you, the player, are capable of.)
Doing both because I feel there is still room to explain things.

What approach to war does YN have? The Lazio family has a hold on certain military units. The family runs an organization which makes money off of war among other things. They see the chance to make money smuggling with the cartel. Many may not agree with all aspects of the cartel’s business. They will put the safety of their people first. But business is business and they hope to forge an alliance.
Does YN specialize in a particular field of combat (e.g. naval, air, land, space, etc.)? If so, which? Specialists in alpine infantry, light infantry and artillery. Mostly ground forces will be under the command of Lazio family officers.
What kinds of weapons will most troops have? Assault rifles, light and heavy machine guns, rocket launchers, man-portable combat drones, mortar teams, armored MRAP vehicles
Does YN have weapons of mass destruction? Chemical and Biological weapons
What combat capabilities does YN have? The nation has a tough army with a modern Navy and Air Force. They also posses clandestine combat forces, from highly disciplined special forces to corrupt mercenaries.

I will be signing up as soon as I am not busy.

Airden Cartel wrote:

Soveiniesberg wrote:Soveinian Mafia application
Side: Cartel
Approx. TLs: 2022 gregorian calendar
Leader description "Karl" is a tall and slender man with a mental disorder that can only be described as "similar to Patrick Bateman from the hit american movie American Pyscho". He seems to enjoy murder, among other things.
Description of armed personnel : The Soveinian Mafia owns a variety of armored vehicles. Some can be found here, and here. They also use a a variety of firearms, most Soviet and post-Soviet.
I Agree To The Rules: yeah i agree to the rules
RP Example: https://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopic.php?f=5&t=519761 this
And; sorry if this seems half-assed. I tried my best with the format. My apologies.

So far, so good, though I should ask if you have any other examples of you RPing. I don't care if it's from something off-site.

Oh, yeah. Sorry. This. There's more but I didn't see them at first glance.

Coastal Lazio wrote:Nation: Kingdom of Coastal Lazio
Side: For Cartel
Approx. TLs: Modern Tech, Modern Timeline
Leader(s) Factbook: There is also a factbook for the top Royal family. It will be the ‘Lazio Family’ of Donatello and Mikey collaborating with the cartel.https://www.nationstates.net/nation=coastal_lazio/detail=factbook/id=1582520
Military Factbook:https://www.nationstates.net/nation=coastal_lazio/detail=factbook/id=1581229
I Agree To The Rules:Yes
RP Example:https://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopic.php?f=5&t=509083 (Give an example of a previous RP post you have done. It need not be recent, just show what you, the player, are capable of.)
Doing both because I feel there is still room to explain things.

What approach to war does YN have? The Lazio family has a hold on certain military units. The family runs an organization which makes money off of war among other things. They see the chance to make money smuggling with the cartel. Many may not agree with all aspects of the cartel’s business. They will put the safety of their people first. But business is business and they hope to forge an alliance.
Does YN specialize in a particular field of combat (e.g. naval, air, land, space, etc.)? If so, which? Specialists in alpine infantry, light infantry and artillery. Mostly ground forces will be under the command of Lazio family officers.
What kinds of weapons will most troops have? Assault rifles, light and heavy machine guns, rocket launchers, man-portable combat drones, mortar teams, armored MRAP vehicles
Does YN have weapons of mass destruction? Chemical and Biological weapons
What combat capabilities does YN have? The nation has a tough army with a modern Navy and Air Force. They also posses clandestine combat forces, from highly disciplined special forces to corrupt mercenaries.

Approved. Very good RP example, that's what I like to see!

The Orwell Society wrote:I will be signing up as soon as I am not busy.

Sounds good. I understand that RL and other obligations can keep a person busy; that's fine, that takes precedence. Take your time, there's no rush!

Soveiniesberg wrote:

Airden Cartel wrote:
So far, so good, though I should ask if you have any other examples of you RPing. I don't care if it's from something off-site.

Oh, yeah. Sorry. This. There's more but I didn't see them at first glance.

A few of these have some pretty decent descriptions actually. Like, your third post in that RP, I want to draw attention to that as producing some evocative imagery - from just those brief descriptions, I get a pretty decent idea of who this guy is! This is good, and should be celebrated.

However, all of these posts appear to be fairly short. I even checked the more recent pages of that RP to see if you were making improvements - you do seem to have picked up a bit of formatting (not bad!), but the posts don't look like they're getting any longer; some actually seem to be getting smaller. Short replies mean you aren't giving your fellow RPers much to work with. Do you have any longer posts to provide as an example?

Airden Cartel wrote:

Soveiniesberg wrote:
Oh, yeah. Sorry. This. There's more but I didn't see them at first glance.

A few of these have some pretty decent descriptions actually. Like, your third post in that RP, I want to draw attention to that as producing some evocative imagery - from just those brief descriptions, I get a pretty decent idea of who this guy is! This is good, and should be celebrated.

However, all of these posts appear to be fairly short. I even checked the more recent pages of that RP to see if you were making improvements - you do seem to have picked up a bit of formatting (not bad!), but the posts don't look like they're getting any longer; some actually seem to be getting smaller. Short replies mean you aren't giving your fellow RPers much to work with. Do you have any longer posts to provide as an example?

Hopefully this. If I manage to find the second Hidranian Civil War RP thread I will link it, despite me not having as many posts in there as I would've liked.

Soveiniesberg wrote:

Airden Cartel wrote:


A few of these have some pretty decent descriptions actually. Like, your third post in that RP, I want to draw attention to that as producing some evocative imagery - from just those brief descriptions, I get a pretty decent idea of who this guy is! This is good, and should be celebrated.

However, all of these posts appear to be fairly short. I even checked the more recent pages of that RP to see if you were making improvements - you do seem to have picked up a bit of formatting (not bad!), but the posts don't look like they're getting any longer; some actually seem to be getting smaller. Short replies mean you aren't giving your fellow RPers much to work with. Do you have any longer posts to provide as an example?

Hopefully this. If I manage to find the second Hidranian Civil War RP thread I will link it, despite me not having as many posts in there as I would've liked.

Ah. These are better. Though I will ask you please not use that hue of gray for text for this RP - it's really hard to see on dark mode.

It's fine. I'm not looking for quantity of posts. I don't care how often you've posted all that much. I care how good the individual posts are. Post quality over post quantity.

Alright, you're accepted.

Airden Cartel wrote:

Soveiniesberg wrote:
Hopefully this. If I manage to find the second Hidranian Civil War RP thread I will link it, despite me not having as many posts in there as I would've liked.

Ah. These are better. Though I will ask you please not use that hue of gray for text for this RP - it's really hard to see on dark mode.

It's fine. I'm not looking for quantity of posts. I don't care how often you've posted all that much. I care how good the individual posts are. Post quality over post quantity.

Alright, you're accepted.

Yeah, in hindsight, now that I use dark mode I now realize that I should get maybe a lighter gray colour than that.

Nation: (What is your nation's IC name?) Imperial Principate of the Imperium
Side: (For Cartel, Against Cartel, Self-Interest, etc.) Self-Intrests/Against Cartel
Approx. TLs: (What TL is your nation?) 7th gen MT to PMT
Leader(s) Factbook: https://www.nationstates.net/nation=awe ... id=1731346
Military Factbook: My military factbook needs work and is outdated and my Ic posts can give more information but here's along to all my military factbooks: https://www.nationstates.net/nation=awe ... tegory=107
I Agree To The Rules: Yes.
RP Example: (Give an example of a previous RP post you have done. It need not be recent, just show what you, the player, are capable of.)

From Global Affairs IC:

The Orcas and Dolphins located in the Main Marsilian force use Delphaic signal detectors and interceptors capable of catching on to Encrypted signals and transmission to a degree and Sonar. All Electronic Warfare systems were online and active and were being assisted by and had communications with Delphi Station 46 and the Imperial Cybersecurity Force.

"Sir we've located the fleet. There's also some vessels behind them with sonar but we cant identify them."

"Send the Coordinates and Information to the Romanic Imperium fleet and alert all ships in the area. Open up a Comms Channel with them."

"Yes sir."

"G'day Marsilian Naval Force this is Captain Mark Lucius of the Imperial 4rth fleet Sub force. Please state intensions."
Principate (Imperial Commonwealth) of Awesome

Nation: (The) Armed Republic of Gonswanza, or Gonswanza
Side: For Cartel
Approx. TLs: MT. Straight up MT. Modern tech. Current year of 2022.
Leader(s) Factbook: https://www.nationstates.net/nation=gon ... id=1607353
Military Factbook: Gear n stuff Doctrine (I was too lazy to fix it.)
I Agree To The Rules: Yes.
RP Example: The most recent sample I could draw that wasn't just a short response, with actual effort. Yes, I like to put in the effort, but sometimes there's too little to work off of.

Awesome Imperium wrote:Nation: (What is your nation's IC name?) Imperial Principate of the Imperium
Side: (For Cartel, Against Cartel, Self-Interest, etc.) Self-Intrests/Against Cartel
Approx. TLs: (What TL is your nation?) 7th gen MT to PMT
Leader(s) Factbook: https://www.nationstates.net/nation=awe ... id=1731346
Military Factbook: My military factbook needs work and is outdated and my Ic posts can give more information but here's along to all my military factbooks: https://www.nationstates.net/nation=awe ... tegory=107
I Agree To The Rules: Yes.
RP Example: (Give an example of a previous RP post you have done. It need not be recent, just show what you, the player, are capable of.)

From Global Affairs IC:

The Orcas and Dolphins located in the Main Marsilian force use Delphaic signal detectors and interceptors capable of catching on to Encrypted signals and transmission to a degree and Sonar. All Electronic Warfare systems were online and active and were being assisted by and had communications with Delphi Station 46 and the Imperial Cybersecurity Force.

"Sir we've located the fleet. There's also some vessels behind them with sonar but we cant identify them."

"Send the Coordinates and Information to the Romanic Imperium fleet and alert all ships in the area. Open up a Comms Channel with them."

"Yes sir."

"G'day Marsilian Naval Force this is Captain Mark Lucius of the Imperial 4rth fleet Sub force. Please state intensions."
Principate (Imperial Commonwealth) of Awesome

Would you like me to mark you down as against, or self-interest?

Gonswanza wrote:Nation: (The) Armed Republic of Gonswanza, or Gonswanza
Side: For Cartel
Approx. TLs: MT. Straight up MT. Modern tech. Current year of 2022.
Leader(s) Factbook: https://www.nationstates.net/nation=gon ... id=1607353
Military Factbook: Gear n stuff Doctrine (I was too lazy to fix it.)
I Agree To The Rules: Yes.
RP Example: The most recent sample I could draw that wasn't just a short response, with actual effort. Yes, I like to put in the effort, but sometimes there's too little to work off of.

Accepted.

So on that note, how do we open up on the IC thread? Coz I've only read up a long story about some maps and a location, but... I'm not sure how to kick it off.

Airden Cartel wrote:

Awesome Imperium wrote:Nation: (What is your nation's IC name?) Imperial Principate of the Imperium
Side: (For Cartel, Against Cartel, Self-Interest, etc.) Self-Intrests/Against Cartel
Approx. TLs: (What TL is your nation?) 7th gen MT to PMT
Leader(s) Factbook: https://www.nationstates.net/nation=awe ... id=1731346
Military Factbook: My military factbook needs work and is outdated and my Ic posts can give more information but here's along to all my military factbooks: https://www.nationstates.net/nation=awe ... tegory=107
I Agree To The Rules: Yes.
RP Example: (Give an example of a previous RP post you have done. It need not be recent, just show what you, the player, are capable of.)

From Global Affairs IC:

The Orcas and Dolphins located in the Main Marsilian force use Delphaic signal detectors and interceptors capable of catching on to Encrypted signals and transmission to a degree and Sonar. All Electronic Warfare systems were online and active and were being assisted by and had communications with Delphi Station 46 and the Imperial Cybersecurity Force.

"Sir we've located the fleet. There's also some vessels behind them with sonar but we cant identify them."

"Send the Coordinates and Information to the Romanic Imperium fleet and alert all ships in the area. Open up a Comms Channel with them."

"Yes sir."

"G'day Marsilian Naval Force this is Captain Mark Lucius of the Imperial 4rth fleet Sub force. Please state intensions."
Principate (Imperial Commonwealth) of Awesome

Would you like me to mark you down as against, or self-interest?

Gonswanza wrote:Nation: (The) Armed Republic of Gonswanza, or Gonswanza
Side: For Cartel
Approx. TLs: MT. Straight up MT. Modern tech. Current year of 2022.
Leader(s) Factbook: https://www.nationstates.net/nation=gon ... id=1607353
Military Factbook: Gear n stuff Doctrine (I was too lazy to fix it.)
I Agree To The Rules: Yes.
RP Example: The most recent sample I could draw that wasn't just a short response, with actual effort. Yes, I like to put in the effort, but sometimes there's too little to work off of.

Accepted.

How about put me in against but I'm also in a Self interest stance.

Gonswanza wrote:So on that note, how do we open up on the IC thread? Coz I've only read up a long story about some maps and a location, but... I'm not sure how to kick it off.

Right. To answer your question, the first posts will probably show what business as usual looks like, maybe anyone's political maneuvering for/against us before we've actually attacked (you can totally do that), or the establishment of alliances. The first post sets the stage for what will come.

I know I didn't leave a lot to work with here. Sorry. This took quite a while, and I know everyone was already waiting; and this post was already this big. I was trying to show how we were going to get to Chekbria, establish some characters, and give a pretty good idea who we are, how we operate, and what local level power looks like. I hope it helps.

Awesome Imperium wrote:
How about put me in against but I'm also in a Self interest stance.

Sounds good. I will put you in as against.

Hope everyone else is doing alright. If anyone has any questions, don't be afraid to ask!

We've had some good posts so far.

Still waiting on BGA to post though. Last time I had checked with them they said something about their computer being down, or something of that nature. I'll have to check on them again.

How's everyone else doing?

Doing Good

Airden Cartel wrote:We've had some good posts so far.

Still waiting on BGA to post though. Last time I had checked with them they said something about their computer being down, or something of that nature. I'll have to check on them again.

How's everyone else doing?

By the way, when is my turn?

Kingdom of Bornai wrote:By the way, when is my turn?

As you have not posted yet, feel free to make your post. Once you have, then we wait until everyone else has posted.

There isn't a set turn order, it's just more-so making sure everyone gets a chance to post once before more posts are made. That way nobody gets left behind. Everyone gets an equal to chance to act, and the RP doesn't end up moving faster than anyone's ability to post in it.

Because, let me tell you, I've seen, and even been in, RPs that move faster than people's ability to post. It's not enjoyable. It can cause some pretty nasty schisms, too. That's why I don't mind a slower-paced RP. Also comes with the added advantage that it gives people more time to think out and plan their posts.

Just checking in on everyone again. Hope everyone is doing alright.

So, I just noticed something in this OOC

You were buying children,
For the fae...
If I am reading that right...
and we can 'wander' in at this point in the game might be interesting to throw the Var into this pot...

United Lords of War wrote:So, I just noticed something in this OOC

You were buying children,
For the fae...
If I am reading that right...
and we can 'wander' in at this point in the game might be interesting to throw the Var into this pot...

Yes, the Airden Cartel has a long history of trade with the fae. Like many cartels in the Wartorn Realms, it is practically built on its relationship with the fae. The fae pay very well for mortal children, as decent chunks of their society is built upon mortals as a resource. Put these two together, the Airden Cartel, like many other cartels in the Wartorn Realms, is going to trade mortal children to the fae in exchange for wealth, magic, and services.

Go ahead! :3