☠ Mutation ☠ [OOC][OPEN][HORROR MILITARY THRILLER]

[Trioad]

Is it too late to join, this rp looks very interesting

[Urran]

Is it too late to join, this rp looks very interesting

Open means open. nods

[Vanquaria]

Is it too late to join, this rp looks very interesting

This rp is always open for players, mate! Come join us for tacticool fun!

[Vanquaria]

Unit Zero has finally come into contact with Manstein's team!

[Drifterica]

When I get home, ima make the new chars. It’s annoying to to try and format it on mobile

[Vanquaria]

When I get home, ima make the new chars. It’s annoying to to try and format it on mobile

Sweet!

[Anowa]

Mission Report

Mission Name: Operation Empty Grave


Location: Wooded area 2km West of Castle Kersteng


Primary Objective: Find the remains of the AADS W-400 bomber, nicknamed 'Charon'.


Secondary Objective:If at all possible your are also requested to find and retrieve the 11 bodies of the crew if at all possible, or at the very least determine their fates.


OPFOR: Wildlife, potential bandits and raiders.


Risk Assessment:On April 19th 1948, Four AADS W-400 strategic bombers took off from Holmestead Air Force Base in eastern Anowa. The payload for three would become readily evident when they reached their target. The fourth craft was not officially recognized until 1997, and even then it's payload remains heavily classified. Last radio contact put it near Castle Kersteng upon final touchdown, and modern trajectory estimates put it to the west of the castle.

Recent satellite imagery indicates that the crash site itself remains somewhat untouched, though background radiation is making the images somewhat fuzzy. the Anowan government is requesting a on site confirmation of the site's status. They are also requesting final records of the plane's crew to give closure to their next of kin.

You will be wandering into a place that may very well be a mass tomb. Respect is required.

It is also very much recommended that all who participate gear up in level 4 MOPP with P3 level gas mask filters. A dose of Abacavir and Umifenovir should be taken immediately prior to insertion. Once every three hours for the next four days, Umifenovir should be taken, and the operators undergo chemical sterilisation baths. And all equipment involved should be sterilized in the utmost capacity or incinerated if full sterilization cannot be attained.

[Vanquaria]

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Insertion Arc is finished! My next post will be a time skip where our characters will be in the Zone's safehouse. This is the perfect time for character apps as you can have them join via the deployment of reinforcements for the Task Force and introduce them in a safe, social setting!

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Mersdon: Your English writing skills are very good, easily better than one of the II RP mentors! However, the problem with your post isn't with your writing ability but rather your understanding of the roleplay which is a common problem amongst roleplayers. Because of this, I'll have to render your well-written post non-canon. I'll talk to you more about this in the server!

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For those that don't know already, the season is currently Spring and it is 10-20 degrees Celsius in Moscow right now! Whatever snow is remaining would be in the middle of melting.

[Drifterica]

I made my new characters, and accidentally exited out of the page. I’ll get them done today because when that happened I lost my mind lol.

[Vanquaria]

I made my new characters, and accidentally exited out of the page. I’ll grt them done today because when that happened I lost my mind lol.

[Vanquaria]

Nice post Mersdon, I enjoyed reading it

[Urran]

Nice post Mersdon, I enjoyed reading it

Except that he's using equipment that we haven't got yet and I stated the mutant was in a vat of preservative, not a freezer.

[Vanquaria]

Nice post Mersdon, I enjoyed reading it

Except that he's using equipment that we haven't got yet and I stated the mutant was in a vat of preservative, not a freezer.

Ah, alright then lmao

Mersdon: It's only been a day since Unit Zero arrived in the Zone. So, the characters won't be using any equipment they requested and received via airdrop. And the other error, as Urran stated, would be the mutants being in vats rather than freezers but since I know that English ain't your first language, it's all cool, there's no problem. Your post is canon and lookin good besides those small canonical errors.

[Urran]

Unless there are morgue freezers that I'm not aware of.

[Vanquaria]

Unless there are morgue freezers that I'm not aware of.

Lol nah

[Vanquaria]

Operator Profile

Full Name: Staff Sergeant Brandein L. Fowler


Nationality: Vanquarian


Age: 27


Gender: Male


Combat Role: Combat Medic


Callsign: Tomahawk


Height and Weight: 5'11" foot, 81kg


Psyche Eval Results: Blunt-voiced, Mr Fowler is a daredevil who enjoys risk over safety. His tendencies have been shackled by the presence of his commanding officer, Lt.Colonel Manstein, but he expresses his desire for an adventure through his danger-packed job as a soldier


Background Information:

Mr Fowler was born in the port city of Marie Jois, one of a few sons of a working-class family. His records as a youth indicate excellence in sport and the subject of physical health and development. He joined the Marines upon turning 18 and completed qualifications for medical certifications. At the age of 20, he successfully passed selection tests for the Vanquarian Special Operations Forces.

As a member of Vanquarian Special Operations Forces, he had a military career full of merit and commendations, most of them resulting from his assignments in Reutoa as part of the Vanquarian counter-terrorism team there whose job was officially to provide advisory duties and training for the Reutoan police forces there though Vanquarian operators actively participated in anti-insurgency operations in the country.

He was handpicked by Lt.Colonel Manstein to be apart of the Alpha Force unit assigned to the Zone, the most elite team of Vanquarian commandos operating in the region thus far.

[Anowa]

Scientist Profile

Full Name: Doctor Hamidi Gitau


Nationality: Anowan


Age: 54


Gender: Male


Specialisation: PhD in Genetics, MSc in Anatomy


Height and Weight: 6'2, 176 lbs


Psyche Eval Results: Doctor Gitau's psychiatric record is surprisingly sparse. Few disciplinary issues during his mandatory service, no real legal troubles, all in all a well behaved and law abiding individual. That being said, the reports that are there don't give a great outlook for cooperation. Doctor Gitau is described as obliviously abrasive, and holding a needlessly high degree of expectations for others. Despite this he has a knack for success and track record of maintaining goals that cannot be ignored, he is also noted as being exceedingly humble. His drive for discovery and understanding of both anatomy and genetics would suit the Zone well.

Background Information Born in Port Heliostadt on the Winter Solstice of 1965, Hamidi was somewhat of a star child. The pride of his family, the boy exceeded in academics, and found himself a career in medicine. With Kubati's induction as a fully fledged state of Anowa in 1987, Hamidi decided to travel abroad to pursue a career in biology. using the Anowan military's benefits as a kickstart. After a small 5 year stint in the military, Hamidid returned to Kubati to practice medicine, while a small insurrection grew in his homeland.

By 2007, most of his homeland had been blanketed with gunfire or bombs, but Port Heliostadt remained a bastion of tranquility. On November 18th, the very same city would be home to the Battle of Port Heliostadt, something the city would be rather fittingly nicknamed 'The Anvil of Heroes' as a result of.

By all official accounts, Hamidi would organize a defense of the university he was employed at, maintaining a triage and evacuation train that would run for the whole 38 hours the battle would occur in. His actions would net him a Legion of Heroes medallion, and a statue in the center of his hometown. Despite this, Hamidi would continue his life as normally as he could, making slow but sure progress with his assigned research, and helping out where he could. Now, he's been given the offer of a lifetime, one, that despite his wish for normalcy, he can't turn down.:

[Vanquaria]

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Sweet! Happily accepted

[Drifterica]

Operator Profile

Full Name: Specialist Shimoda Misato


Nationality: Manchu


Age: 27


Gender: Female


Combat Role: Engineer/Explosive Expert


Callsign: Hoshi


Height and Weight: 6'0, 150lbs


Psyche Eval Results: A competitive and strong fighter, she has been shown to make risks if she deems them necessary. Mentally Stable and Strong, she is ready for the battlefield.


Background Information: She grew up in the mountains of Tai City. She grew up working with her father as a junior mechanic, and excelled in school. As she grew older, and graduated high school, she would go to Stanford University in America.

When she came back to Drifterica, she would be conscripted into the 23rd Paratrooper division as a Combat Engineer. After suffering a leg injury in Operation Anbākatana, she would be tasked with training new combat engineers and paratroopers. She would get bored and would ask her CO time and time again to be put in something else. She would be sent to train and be a part of the Drifterican Expeditionary International Corps (D.I.C.E) After Fighting in the War on Terror, she would be picked from a large group of other soldiers to be sent to Vanquaria to assist them.

[Vanquaria]

Happily Accepted

[Drifterica]

Operator Profile

Full Name: Specialist Anno Kokan


Nationality: Manchu


Age: 25


Gender: Male


Combat Role: Field Medic


Callsign: Kōun'na


Height and Weight: 6'2, 207


Psyche Eval Results: He has been considered and stable for the battlefield. Over time, during trainings and active field missions he has shown to risk his body to rescue and save his comrades in arms.


Background Information: He lived in the former capital city Kyuwagrad. His mother was a world renown surgeon, who saved the formed Empress of Drifterica when Anno was 14. He would pass high school with flying grades and went to the Drifterican Medical School.

When he turned old enough, instead of being conscripted he would choose to enlist into the Army as a field medic. He would be sent to Afganistan and Iraq and would receive the Amber Rose, a medal rewarded for heroic deeds. He would enlist to join the Drifterican Special Forces and when he passed training, he would join D.I.C.E, training new field medics. He would be chosen to be a medic with the other Driftericans in Vanquaria.

[Vanquaria]

Operator Profile

Full Name: 1st Lieutenant Frend Asvin


Nationality: Vanquarian


Age: 32


Gender: Male


Combat Role: Breacher/Grenadier


Callsign: Boombox


Height and Weight: 5 foot 11, 81kg


Psyche Eval Results: Never flinching even in the face of danger, Frend Asvin's combat experience has dumbed his sensitivity to the deadly tasks an operator is required to do


Background Information:

Hailing from a middle-class family in the lands around the capital islet of Auraxis, his being the youngest son of his father's youngest wife helped him actively pursue a career different from those of his older brothers. Deviating from the common route of business and commerce, Frend joined the Imperial Army when he was old enough.

In a couple of years, he tried repeatedly for Special Reconnaissance Service selection but failed. On his 3rd attempt, Frend successfully passed out of sheer mental resilience which impressed the instructors there. Receiving special operations training, he saw action in 1st and 2nd Helsan Wars against Donnerland, his unit's success in the field of battle highlighting his talents as a soldier to Colonel Manstein who subsequently recruited him for an Alpha Force unit that was to be dispatched to the Zone.

[Mersdon]

Nice post Mersdon, I enjoyed reading it

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Insertion Arc is finished! My next post will be a time skip where our characters will be in the Zone's safehouse. This is the perfect time for character apps as you can have them join via the deployment of reinforcements for the Task Force and introduce them in a safe, social setting!

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Mersdon: Your English writing skills are very good, easily better than one of the II RP mentors! However, the problem with your post isn't with your writing ability but rather your understanding of the roleplay which is a common problem amongst roleplayers. Because of this, I'll have to render your well-written post non-canon. I'll talk to you more about this in the server!

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For those that don't know already, the season is currently Spring and it is 10-20 degrees Celsius in Moscow right now! Whatever snow is remaining would be in the middle of melting.

First of all, thank you very much!

Secondly, go commit toaster bath. Fortnite is dead.

[Urran]

First of all, thank you very much!

Secondly, go commit toaster bath. Fortnite is dead.

I hate to nitpick you, but firstly, the lab equipment is second rate high school science stuff. You would not be able to sequence DNA with it. A few decent surgical tools, tables, and a standard microscope are all it has other than what the scientists brought them. The types of machines needed to sample and process DNA are very big, so I doubt Alejandro could have lugged them there.

Secondly, Okada did not enter the lab. He went to his sleeping quarters. Also, saying he knocked over something is not your call. Controlling what another person's character had done is called a "god-mod" and is very much frowned upon. Many players take personal offense to it.

That's not to say that your post was all bad. You've got great RP potential. The most important thing is to read carefully, and if you are unsure about something or have questions, ask.

I'm an ESL/EFL teacher IRL so I understand that you are still learning English, a process that never stops. Just keep those tips in mind and you'll make a great role player!

[Vanquaria]

Mersdon: Alright, look. Your writing skill is simply superb and I commend you on your quality posts. Keep up the good writing!

However, your recent IC posts particularly your latest post have shown a repeated habit of either you not reading previous posts by fellow players OR not fully comprehending what has been written and instead choosing to fill in supposed gaps with what you BELIEVE is in the scene rather than what is ACTUALLY in the scene.

Roleplay is about working off other's people's posts rather than creating something entirely new from your imagination. Anowa's post does NOT describe any active shooters in the scene. Instead, it describes a SINGLE creature, an unidentified mutant if you will, attacking the characters. What your post did is that it concocted the imaginary presence of black-clad shooters in neighboring apartment buildings, completely missing what is actually happening in the previous posts made by Anowa and me.

Now, I'm fine with players being creative and utilizing what is stated in previous posts to create something original but it is clear that in your post, you did not utilize what was stated in previous posts and that you created something that was both original and godmod.

Godmod refers to a player describing what happens to another player's creations. In your post, you wrote, "forcing friend and foe alike to duck down for fear of getting hit."

You can state things that are happening in a scene but you cannot describe the actions of another player's characters unless there is an agreement between that player and you, which, in this case, there is not.

So basically, your latest post displays both a lack of understanding of other player's posts and godmod. This is why I must render your latest post NON-CANON and hereby BAN from posting in the IC thread for the time being.

Given the repeated issues with your posts regarding their non-canonicity, it seems the best option, in my opinion, would be to direct you to a RP mentor and ask that they give you some tips. I HIGHLY encourage you to work with them, ask them questions about character roleplaying and just roleplaying in general, because I very much want a writer of your caliber in Mutation, we just have a really small issue to fix before we can enjoy roleplaying together.