Serious problem!!! might affect all countries!!!

[Landesta]

All of this started with Issac. Issac is a man who happens to be very rich. He wanted to make a new company to make electronics. People did not take it seriously, but he got to work. Before long it was all done. 500 devices were made per minute due to the very fast production lines. But, then something terrible began to happen. Pollution came out like crazy. When 20 different people bought stocks and made more factories, the country turned into a terrible wasteland. Nobody could escape. So, a small group of the military was sent to the HQ. It was shut down, and the problem soon went away. A replacement was closely regulated by the goverment. Then, a group of people who saw this as proof electronics was awful, built 12 computers, each hosting a virus. They shut down within five minutes of being turned on. when a repair shop figured out about the virus, the internet was shut down. But, it was too late. The computer viruses merged into one and began to shut down all electronics. So, power was shut down everywhere, not just in that city. The virus could not go anywhere now. That is, until one lay guard slipped and turned it back on. Thousands rejoiced about the return of power while the virus escaped. The electricity was finally shut down by the virus, and the country is doing terrible. Then, we had an idea. tell us how you dealt with it so we might have ideas to stop this menace once and for all.

[The small land]

I think that you should find out who made the virus and question them.

[Landesta]

I think that you should find out who made the virus and question them.

That might be a good idea. It will probably be a long and difficult trial though, given that we have little proof guiding us to who did it. I shall find the best lawers to help.

[Final nation]

well, at least you know it was somebody who works in that company, if you said their name we could help easier.

[Landesta]

well, at least you know it was somebody who works in that company, if you said their name we could help easier.

no!!! That is top secret and none of your buissness. Are you a spy?

[AHSCA]

Please read the sticky threads or consult the Mentor players so that you might be able to properly construct a good roleplay post. Right now this looks like you have something interesting but it's chaotic and random and needs more structure to be taken seriously.

[Landesta]

Please read the sticky threads or consult the Mentor players so that you might be able to properly construct a good roleplay post. Right now this looks like you have something interesting but it's chaotic and random and needs more structure to be taken seriously.

OOC : Good idea, I have just one question: what are these sticky threads you mentioned?

[AHSCA]

OOC : Good idea, I have just one question: what are these sticky threads you mentioned?

These are posts at the top of every board. It outlines basic advice and rules for posting in any board and they will help you learn how to better construct a proper Roleplay. This one is a good start.

[Landesta]

OOC: Thanks for the help. IT gave good advice on quite a few things. I will try to inprove this role-play.

[Nawawi]

I'm confuse with this