We got bugs! (PMT OOC OPEN)

[Crimetopolis]

May I join?

[Ultramarine]

May I join?

Errr how do you want to take part?

[Northern Poland]

I can keep my spaceship


Yaay

[Crimetopolis]

May I join?

Errr how do you want to take part?

MUltiplee ways sending civil defense units to help evacuate people and domestic pets from danger, Using flame tanks and fuel air bombs on the bugs, and giving bomber, missile , and long range artillery support.

[Ultramarine]

Errr how do you want to take part?

MUltiplee ways sending civil defense units to help evacuate people and domestic pets from danger, Using flame tanks and fuel air bombs on the bugs, and giving bomber, missile , and long range artillery support.

I'm ok with it, if everyone else is.

[Inyourfaceistan]

Okay buddy... Let me help you with RP'ing real fast.

To the Republic of Ultramarine: Crimetopolis is sending military, Fire/RESCUE/EMS/Animal control units to help you. We have surrounded a bug hive position with millions of automatic land mines. Type 95 SPAACG Anti Aitrcraft tanks and flame tanks, Leopard 2a7 MBTs They are reinforced by MLRS, Paladin artillery. We have A-10s , Apaches and F-16s over head. Word has reaxhed the the the nearby has been evacuated including the local clinic.

First, you need to clarify if your characters are writing a communique to Ultramarine or if you are narrating presence on the battlefield. Your post initially starts reading as if it were the former but then you start adding a bunch of narrative information about what your armies have been doing.

Second, you need to think logically. How did your army surround the bugs with millions of landmines so fast? Seems impossible to me.
The more impossible your feats become the less people will want to RP with you.

We attack now! Shells, rockets, and missiles slam into the bug hive. The swarm arachnids got decimated by the land mines. But the air fight was tougher by far...

I'm not even sure what this means? Who is yelling "We attack now"? What is going on?

[Shackley]

Seconded. Don't want to sound like a cunt, Crimetopolis, but maybe some more thought should be put into your future posts. I would recommend rewriting your first post.

[Ultramarine]

Hey ladies and gents sorry i'm late I've been dealing with family stuff again! Will be posting on the IC thread soon!

Also Crimetopolis i'm not sure your post is clear enough?

[Allanea]

Just to be clear...

1. Is this still open?
2. Now obviously this is not a 100% super-realistic thread, and obviously I will not bring out my FT stuff, but just how off-script can we go here? Do the bugs have some psychic/supernatural/'magic' abilities?

[UniversalCommons]

I want to do attack on Shaggy Island where there is a mammoth preserve with hunting lodge. A short piece. Would like to include some bugs from the Roughnecks series of cartoons.
http://www.misterhook.net/roughnecks/guide.htm#fg52

[Ultramarine]

Not to seem random but I think this rp is over....mainly due to the fact I forgot to post for ages.

[Northern Poland]

Not to seem random but I think this rp is over....mainly due to the fact I forgot to post for ages.

I mean, we can revive it if we want.

[Ultramarine]

Not to seem random but I think this rp is over....mainly due to the fact I forgot to post for ages.

I mean, we can revive it if we want.

Well we most certainly can do that! Would be happy to revive this thread, or restart it!

[Northern Poland]

I mean, we can revive it if we want.

Well we most certainly can do that! Would be happy to revive this thread, or restart it!

Agreed. I would be up for it.

[Shackley]

I would not be against a reboot.

[Allanea]

We could just continue from where we are, or start a Chapter 2.

[Ultramarine]

We could just continue from where we are, or start a Chapter 2.

A chapter 2 sounds good to me!