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Postby The United Remnants of America » Sat Jul 29, 2017 8:50 pm

Sarejo wrote:Mission Briefing

OP: Myseld
Operation Code Name: Operation: BLACKWOOD
Type of Mission: Rescue/Assassination
Location: Sukko, Ketov
Environment: Urban, Evening
Outline: Dr. Valentyn Komar, a Sokovan scientist who leads the world in nuclear weapons research, was kidnapped from his home two months ago, and taken to Ketov. It is believed that the Ketovans are forcing him to develop nuclear weaponry in order to achieve hegemony over the local region, and it is unknown the progress of their research. Four teams of operatives are to infiltrate the compound from a drop site one mile outside the city limits, retrieve Dr. Komar, destroy the research, and exfiltrate the package to the original drop site.
Primary Objectives: Retrieve Dr. Valentyn Komar, and if live extraction is not an option, neutralize the package to prevent enemy retrieval.
Secondary Objectives: None
Parameters: Don't leave any witness who might have seen you.
OpFor: 150 garrisoned troops in the compound, all armed with assault rifles, shotguns, or SMGs, and intel suggests they are all special forces. Regular patrols of 5 soldiers around the exterior compound perimeter on the ground, along with manned guard towers on every corner of the compound wall, each equipped with a spotlight.
Notes: Four teams of operatives, and expect heavy resistance. They suspect a retrieval team is coming.


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Postby ISAF-Usea » Sun Jul 30, 2017 3:08 pm

I'd be in for OP: BLACKWOOD
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Postby The United Remnants of America » Sun Jul 30, 2017 3:51 pm

ISAF-Usea wrote:I'd be in for OP: BLACKWOOD

I mean, if Sarejo wants to do it, and you can find a couple others... Go ahead.
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Postby The Knockout Gun Gals » Mon Jul 31, 2017 5:39 am



Uh, not four women. Two male and two female.

The name of the nation doesn't really meant the country is all Amazonian, though. Should it be all Amazonian?
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So Covenant declare a crusade and then wage jihad? :p

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Postby Empire of Donner land » Mon Jul 31, 2017 5:59 am

The Knockout Gun Gals wrote:


Uh, not four women. Two male and two female.

The name of the nation doesn't really meant the country is all Amazonian, though. Should it be all Amazonian?

It isn't the first time we've had all women Amazonian teams, Mon(frox) for example.
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Postby The Knockout Gun Gals » Mon Jul 31, 2017 6:02 am

Empire of Donner land wrote:
The Knockout Gun Gals wrote:
Uh, not four women. Two male and two female.

The name of the nation doesn't really meant the country is all Amazonian, though. Should it be all Amazonian?

It isn't the first time we've had all women Amazonian teams, Mon(frox) for example.


Yes, but the composition on my current team is two-two. Not entirely four operators of one gender typed.
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TriStates wrote:Covenant declare a crusade, and wage jihad against the UNSC and Insurrectionists for 30 years.

So Covenant declare a crusade and then wage jihad? :p

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Postby Empire of Donner land » Mon Jul 31, 2017 6:12 am

The Knockout Gun Gals wrote:
Empire of Donner land wrote:It isn't the first time we've had all women Amazonian teams, Mon(frox) for example.


Yes, but the composition on my current team is two-two. Not entirely four operators of one gender typed.

Whether or not it should remain the same is really up to you, I can't say.
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Postby The Knockout Gun Gals » Mon Jul 31, 2017 6:55 am

Empire of Donner land wrote:
The Knockout Gun Gals wrote:
Yes, but the composition on my current team is two-two. Not entirely four operators of one gender typed.

Whether or not it should remain the same is really up to you, I can't say.


I know.
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TriStates wrote:Covenant declare a crusade, and wage jihad against the UNSC and Insurrectionists for 30 years.

So Covenant declare a crusade and then wage jihad? :p

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Postby New Hayesalia » Mon Jul 31, 2017 6:17 pm

I'll update it when I have a moment to later today

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Postby The Knockout Gun Gals » Wed Aug 02, 2017 1:07 am

Also, I'll be out of service from posting from Thursday till Sunday. I have a spiritual vacation on those days.
The Knockout Gun Gals wrote:
TriStates wrote:Covenant declare a crusade, and wage jihad against the UNSC and Insurrectionists for 30 years.

So Covenant declare a crusade and then wage jihad? :p

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Postby Hurtful Thoughts » Wed Aug 02, 2017 7:30 pm

So far resisting urge for a Hurti rifle platoon to show up and intimidate everybody with their 1337 dancing skillz in the bar.

Like bunnyhopping and rocket-jumping, is skill that is dying-out.
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Postby Parcia » Wed Aug 02, 2017 11:40 pm

viewtopic.php?p=31929779#p31929779

tfw your not on the unit list
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Postby The United Remnants of America » Thu Aug 03, 2017 11:56 am

Parcia wrote:- Project Warfighter Application -

Name of Nation: Empire of Parcia

Name of Organization: 226th Special operations Wing, Parcian Air Force

Name of Unit: "Ghost Eye"

Detailed Unit Loadout:
Team 1: 3 man assault team
Howa Type 89 Rifle x4 5.56 mags - Optional Holo sight, suppressors, lights/lasers, and fore-grips.
Glock 17 Gen 4 x4 9mm mags - optional lights/lasers and suppressors.
ACB-90 combat/utility fighting knife
IFAK
x2 M67 Fragmentation grenades
M40 Gas mask
AN/PVS-7 NVGs
Field Pack
Tier three Ballistics Vest
Series 3, Mk4 HUD Glasses
x2 M18 Smoke grenade (Both colored and white)
Team 2: Sniper Recon team (2 man)
Type 101 "LSS" Long range Sniper System (Arctic Warfare rifle platform) x4-x5 7.62mm mags (optional .338 Magnum) with optional Sights, suppressors, light/lasers, and grips.
MP7A1 x6 4.6x30mm - Optional sights, lasers/lights, and suppressors
Howa Type 89 Rifle x4 5.56 mags - Optional Holo sight, suppressors, lights/lasers, and fore-grips.
ACB-90 combat/utility fighting knife
IFAK
x2 M67 Fragmentation grenades
M40 Gas mask
AN/PVS-7 NVGs
Field Pack
Tier three Ballistics Vest
Series 3, Mk4 HUD Glasses
x2 M18 Smoke grenade (Both colored and white)
Appearance/Description of Operator:
http://vignette3.wikia.nocookie.net/ghostrecon/images/1/1e/Grfs_image_render_30k.jpg/revision/latest?cb=20120609221101

Biography of Unit:
As time went on, the 226th become more then an airborne unit, as the men (and later) women who volunteered for this unit were often the best of the best in the imperial military. In the early 90s the unit would be upgraded from tier three (irregular Forces) to tier 2 (Special Forces) Thus receiving a boost in security clearance and tech. This was due to the 226th deployment to the middle east during the “Sandtrap War”, a series of military campaigns to pacify various Islamic countries that had revolted after the end of the 20 year long military invasion by the Pueterane SSR (think Soviets).
While most of the unit’s actions are highly classified, the 226th were the first ones dropped in and the last Parcian unit pulled out in early 2009.

When the war with Itloand (Think Fascist Australia) flared up, the 226th were one of the first units deployed when the Itolandian invasion forces caught the whole Southern Imperial military command completely off guard. Being dropped in to Indochina to “hold the line” (what was essentially a suicide mission to fend off invading forces as long as possible) They quickly became known under the nick name “Jungle Demons” by the invaders. They were almost whole responsible for stopping the invasion in the southern sectors of the empire, with the 450-man unit holding of nearly 24,000 Itolandian regulars in a 18 month long guerrilla war, inflicting massive casualties were ever possible. When the war turned in Parcia’s favor, with the defeat of the Northern prong of the invasion by Admiral Hochiki’s 7th fleet, the 226th were finally relived. Despite this, the unit has suffered nearly 96% casualties, with only 20 of the originally 450-man unit surviving the war. With the war ending, the unit was deactivated and its surviving members either retiring, or moving to become instructors for other units.

In early 2010, the unit was reactivated in secret, with a fresh batch of soldiers, trained by the now legendary 20, forming “Ghost Eye” an elite black Ops recon unit. With this reactivation, the unit was given a designation Upgrade from tier 2 to tier 1 (Black Ops) and put under command of Section 7 of the Parcian office of Naval Intelligence. Each soldier was erased from public record, any surviving family ordered to stay quiet, and most of the previous operational restrictions the unit faced under Military control loosened while under ONI employ. Since 2010, the 5 soldiers of “Ghost Eye” have been operating across the world in secrecy, assassinating terrorist leaders, destabilizing rouge governments, and doing the not so morally great bidding of ONI.
As f recently, “Ghost Eye” has been transferred in to “Task Force Atlas”.



Operators of the Unit:
Team One
"Python" Captain Hikaru Kazuki -Commander - Type 89|G17
"Ice Queen" lieutenant Noriko Miho - Sniper - Type 101| MP7A1
Team Two
"Flash" Lieutenant Daisuke Yoshiro -Assault - Type 89|G17
"Specter" Master Sargent Shou Takahiro -Assault - Type 89|G17
Wolf" Staff Sargent Shun Yoshirou -Assault - Type 89|G17
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I guess accepted.
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Postby Anowa » Sat Aug 05, 2017 10:07 am

Cruxa, NUC, I'm giving you exactly 120 minutes to post before you lose effectively half your teams.
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Postby Nations United for Conquest » Sat Aug 05, 2017 10:28 am

Anowa wrote:Cruxa, NUC, I'm giving you exactly 120 minutes to post before you lose effectively half your teams.

Looks like I came on at the perfect time...
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Postby The United Artherian Federation » Sat Aug 05, 2017 10:38 am

- Project Warfighter Application -

Name of Nation: The United Artherian Federation

Name of Organization: AATU (Artherian Anti-Terrorism Unit)

Name of Unit: Wolf Squadron

Detailed Unit Loadout: Weapons, right? Then they have M60E6(1),M4(5), Flash bangs(x1 per operator), frag grenades (x1 per operator),Flak jackets(x1 per operator, Glocks(x1 per operator.), Med kit (x1) Radio unit (x1 per operator), night vision (x1 per operator), extra ammo (3 according to each operators weapons). FT: Plasma grenades (1 per two operators).

Appearance/Description of Operator: http://www.dw.com/en/germanys-new-anti-terror-units-a-paramilitary-excess/a-19010175 (First Image of the unit)
([url=Place URL Here]Image[/url]) or [url=Place URL Here]Name of Outfit Here[/url]

Biography of Unit: Formed after the passing of H.R 3 to combat terrorism at home and abroad, this specialized unit has taken down more than 6 terrorist plots. Max Wolfe is the leader of the squad, and hand picked each member of the Unit to his specifications. Jewel Patterson is the Machine Gunner of the squad, taking down the enemy about as quietly as a brick going through a window. William Shatner, Katie Couric, Bill Welch and Reagan Sole are the regular operators, the grunts.

Operators of the Unit: Max Wolfe, Jewel Patterson, William Shatner, Katie Couric,
Bill Welch, Reagan Sole


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Tech Era: MT with a few FT elements.

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Postby Anowa » Sat Aug 05, 2017 10:42 am

The United Artherian Federation wrote:- Project Warfighter Application -

Name of Nation: The United Artherian Federation

Name of Organization: AATU (Artherian Anti-Terrorism Unit)

Name of Unit: Wolf Squadron

Detailed Unit Loadout: Weapons, right? Then they have M60(1), M16 (3), Flash bangs(x10 per operator), frag grenades (x6 per operator), AR-15(1), Flak jackets(x1 per operator, Glocks(x1 per operator.

Appearance/Description of Operator: http://www.dw.com/en/germanys-new-anti-terror-units-a-paramilitary-excess/a-19010175 (First Image of the unit)
([url=Place URL Here]Image[/url]) or [url=Place URL Here]Name of Outfit Here[/url]

Biography of Unit: Formed after the passing of H.R 3 to combat terrorism at home and abroad, this specialized unit has taken down more than 6 terrorist plots. Max Wolfe is the leader of the squad, and hand picked each member of the Unit to his specifications. Jewel Patterson is the Machine Gunner of the squad, taking down the enemy about as quietly as a brick going through a window. William Shatner, Katie Couric, Bill Welch and Reagan Sole are the regular operators, the grunts.

Operators of the Unit: Max Wolfe, Jewel Patterson, William Shatner, Katie Couric,
Bill Welch, Reagan Sole


RP Example: viewtopic.php?f=5&t=416496&hilit=Doyasi

Tech Era: MT with a few FT elements.

NS Activity: About everyday whenever I can.

"Atlas Shrugged"(Do Not Delete)

Ten flashbangs and six frag grenades per person...

That ain't gonna happen. Also, AR-15s and M16s are damn near the same gun.
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Postby The United Artherian Federation » Sat Aug 05, 2017 10:42 am

Anowa wrote:
The United Artherian Federation wrote:- Project Warfighter Application -

Name of Nation: The United Artherian Federation

Name of Organization: AATU (Artherian Anti-Terrorism Unit)

Name of Unit: Wolf Squadron

Detailed Unit Loadout: Weapons, right? Then they have M60(1), M16 (3), Flash bangs(x10 per operator), frag grenades (x6 per operator), AR-15(1), Flak jackets(x1 per operator, Glocks(x1 per operator.

Appearance/Description of Operator: http://www.dw.com/en/germanys-new-anti-terror-units-a-paramilitary-excess/a-19010175 (First Image of the unit)
([url=Place URL Here]Image[/url]) or [url=Place URL Here]Name of Outfit Here[/url]

Biography of Unit: Formed after the passing of H.R 3 to combat terrorism at home and abroad, this specialized unit has taken down more than 6 terrorist plots. Max Wolfe is the leader of the squad, and hand picked each member of the Unit to his specifications. Jewel Patterson is the Machine Gunner of the squad, taking down the enemy about as quietly as a brick going through a window. William Shatner, Katie Couric, Bill Welch and Reagan Sole are the regular operators, the grunts.

Operators of the Unit: Max Wolfe, Jewel Patterson, William Shatner, Katie Couric,
Bill Welch, Reagan Sole


RP Example: viewtopic.php?f=5&t=416496&hilit=Doyasi

Tech Era: MT with a few FT elements.

NS Activity: About everyday whenever I can.

"Atlas Shrugged"(Do Not Delete)

Ten flashbangs and six frag grenades per person...

That ain't gonna happen. Also, AR-15s and M16s are damn near the same gun.

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Postby Kassaran » Sat Aug 05, 2017 11:08 am

That's a no, until you change the app.
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Postby The United Artherian Federation » Sat Aug 05, 2017 11:08 am

Kassaran wrote:That's a no, until you change the app.

Yessir!
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Postby The United Artherian Federation » Sat Aug 05, 2017 11:11 am

Kassaran wrote:That's a no, until you change the app.

New app:
- Project Warfighter Application -

Name of Nation: The United Artherian Federation

Name of Organization: AATU (Artherian Anti-Terrorism Unit)

Name of Unit: Wolf Squadron

Detailed Unit Loadout: Weapons, right? Then they have M60(1), M16 (5), Flash bangs(x3 per operator), frag grenades (x2 per operator),Flak jackets(x1 per operator, Glocks(x1 per operator.)

Appearance/Description of Operator: http://www.dw.com/en/germanys-new-anti-terror-units-a-paramilitary-excess/a-19010175 (First Image of the unit)
([url=Place URL Here]Image[/url]) or [url=Place URL Here]Name of Outfit Here[/url]

Biography of Unit: Formed after the passing of H.R 3 to combat terrorism at home and abroad, this specialized unit has taken down more than 6 terrorist plots. Max Wolfe is the leader of the squad, and hand picked each member of the Unit to his specifications. Jewel Patterson is the Machine Gunner of the squad, taking down the enemy about as quietly as a brick going through a window. William Shatner, Katie Couric, Bill Welch and Reagan Sole are the regular operators, the grunts.

Operators of the Unit: Max Wolfe, Jewel Patterson, William Shatner, Katie Couric,
Bill Welch, Reagan Sole


RP Example: viewtopic.php?f=5&t=416496&hilit=Doyasi

Tech Era: MT with a few FT elements.

NS Activity: About everyday whenever I can.

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Postby Vacif » Sat Aug 05, 2017 12:07 pm

The United Artherian Federation wrote:snip

Not a mod, but just some critique.

The most glaring issue I see is the fact that basically everything is in bold. Remember to put your text after the [/b].

The second gripe I have is the image format. There is a provided image format after your link. Not sure how comfortable you are with the BB code but I've gone out and set it up for you anyway. 'AATU, Wolf Squadron'.

Third is really just curiosity, what exactly is the "FT" element in your tech?

Other than that you've pretty much filled out every requirement of the app. Might I ask what kind of ethnic background your unit is? Western European?
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Postby The United Artherian Federation » Sat Aug 05, 2017 12:10 pm

Vacif wrote:
The United Artherian Federation wrote:snip

Not a mod, but just some critique.

The most glaring issue I see is the fact that basically everything is in bold. Remember to put your text after the [/b].

The second gripe I have is the image format. There is a provided image format after your link. Not sure how comfortable you are with the BB code but I've gone out and set it up for you anyway. 'AATU, Wolf Squadron'.

Third is really just curiosity, what exactly is the "FT" element in your tech?

Other than that you've pretty much filled out every requirement of the app. Might I ask what kind of ethnic background your unit is? Western European?

American.
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Postby The United Remnants of America » Sat Aug 05, 2017 12:11 pm

The United Artherian Federation wrote:New app:
- Project Warfighter Application -

Name of Nation: The United Artherian Federation

Name of Organization: AATU (Artherian Anti-Terrorism Unit)

Name of Unit: Wolf Squadron

Detailed Unit Loadout: Weapons, right? Then they have M60(1), M16 (5), Flash bangs(x3 per operator), frag grenades (x2 per operator),Flak jackets(x1 per operator, Glocks(x1 per operator.)

Appearance/Description of Operator: http://www.dw.com/en/germanys-new-anti-terror-units-a-paramilitary-excess/a-19010175 (First Image of the unit)
([url=Place URL Here]Image[/url]) or [url=Place URL Here]Name of Outfit Here[/url]

Biography of Unit: Formed after the passing of H.R 3 to combat terrorism at home and abroad, this specialized unit has taken down more than 6 terrorist plots. Max Wolfe is the leader of the squad, and hand picked each member of the Unit to his specifications. Jewel Patterson is the Machine Gunner of the squad, taking down the enemy about as quietly as a brick going through a window. William Shatner, Katie Couric, Bill Welch and Reagan Sole are the regular operators, the grunts.

Operators of the Unit: Max Wolfe, Jewel Patterson, William Shatner, Katie Couric,
Bill Welch, Reagan Sole


RP Example: viewtopic.php?f=5&t=416496&hilit=Doyasi

Tech Era: MT with a few FT elements.

NS Activity: About everyday whenever I can.

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I'll just go by this line-by-line, to make it easier on myself and you.

- A Unit Loadout is indeed weapons, as well as whatever other equipment your unit would have.

- The original M60 had several design issues, and I would dare say should not be used ever. For several reasons such as weight, jamming issues, and the fact it's about 60 years old. I don't see why it should be used after the late-60s.

- To go with the above, the base M16 is a shit gun that's almost as old a design as the M60. I see no reason why it should ever be used outside of the Vietnam War, where it proved how bad it was. Self-cleaning my ass.

- In a team of 6, not everyone needs 3 flashbangs and 2 frags. That weight and space could be used more efficiently for other equipment with some operators.

- I know flak jacket is a colloquialism, but I like details, so I can only assume you're using a literal flak jacket from the 50s-60s. My only question: Why? There's so much better protection. Literally anything would be better than a flak jacket.

- Since Glock is a line of weapons, I have to assume it's the Glock 17, then.

- Your appearance doesn't in any way match your unit. You've given a loadout I'd expect some line grunts from Vietnam to have rather than a current special forces team.

- To add, calling a special forces operator a grunt is kind of insulting. In addition to that, I'd suggest adding more equipment for the fact that you don't need to have a squad of a CO, a SAW gunner, and 4 riflemen. Variety.

- Don't tell me you got Max Wolfe from the novel series. Also, I will assume it's the actual William Shatner and Katie Couric because I have to. If you can't be bothered to be creative and not use celebrity names without any indication its a coincidence, I can't be bothered to imagine them as anything else.

- That is the worst RP example I've ever been given, bar-none. I mean that sincerely. One-liners are an absolute no-no, and the mix of OOC and IC chatter in an RP thread is just... I can't even.

- When you say "FT elements", what do you mean? What about what you posted is future tech? Because the most modern thing you have is a Glock, and even then, that could be 30-odd years old at this point, depending on which Glock you meant.
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Postby Anowa » Sat Aug 05, 2017 12:16 pm

And as 12:00 passes, Cruxa will deal with the consequences... When I have time to post that is.
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