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A staging-point for declarations of war and other major diplomatic events. [In character]

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Postby Aeyariss » Wed Feb 15, 2017 5:39 am

New Aeyariss wrote:Greater East Asian Co-Prosperity Sphere (GEACPS) ;).


Alright, I think later on we could use some more background info on GEACPS, the nuts and bolt, specifically its operating principles, key policies, and what are the relations in economic aspect between the members and the Nifonese. I'm reading into the whole 'One Belt; One Road' concept at the moment, and the original Japanese Greater Asia sphere.

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(The territories look so juicy, but sadly the Nifonese in this canon wont be that large.)


I'm in the process of writing Episode 1; but for some reason, what initially supposed to be a simple single scene about the "Fengese economic woes" turns out into more complex. The idea was to present the fuck of Fengese economy; (because of something - this something is still bugging me, I drafted it at the time being that because of Nifonese led campaign, and the GEACPS the Fengese economic is so fucked up because of a trade sanctions (maybe total embargo, maybe not, so I don't know yet because I'm still writing the draft - one reason why I need to know about the GEACPS.

The whole decision will become part of the instigating incidents; as the Fengese sort of operates based on:
""What this country needs is a short, victorious war to stem the tide of revolution." - Vyacheslav von Plehve
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Postby Aeyariss » Fri Feb 17, 2017 8:18 pm

Deian salazar wrote:Meh I choose Prussia. Feng is dead, even from my mind.


Tried several times and I got error messages; refreshed and saw you deleted that message from that IFC thread. Oh what the hell...

Good, that you finally let go of Feng.

Feng: Blood and Fire is expected to be published on December 26th 2017. While it won't be a legndarium it will be closest to epic I've ever written, I think you might enjoy reading it, as instead of basing that Feng off your original work I re imagined it into something more realistic, or at least better from my personal preferences. And you might not be seeing much, I know (I don't want to show too much without having real results now), but just so you know, I spent too much time and energy into this novel project that already.

As for the request that you sent through 3rd Party concerning giving back the account, let me say this about that publicly; no.

For two reasons:

1. Security. (Sharing account is a very bad idea, I saw how you lot got your account DEAT. If I ever return Great Feng to you it means I am risking not just my main account, but also Cuscy's New Aeyariss; I don't trust you, and for this, ownership of Great Feng shall remain with me).

2. Future Plans. Contrary to your personal belief, I actually, in fact, have future plans using Great Feng. But of course, this is after the conclusion of the Blood & Fire so I don't want to talk about it at this time; still too early for that. For the time being, at least for the duration of the Blood and Fire project I will resume the 'Feng' persona - and I will bury it in the best way possible.

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Postby Gigaverse » Sat Feb 18, 2017 12:33 am

hey Aey, can you send me a TG on what becomes of Feng if everything goes according to how you planned
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Obsolete Feng timeline (Deian's original work)

Postby Great Feng » Sat Feb 18, 2017 9:04 pm

Since I may adapt some of these elements into the new re-imagined Feng canon; and because I'm going to delete it from the factbook.

1800BC: The Kingdom of Guan is founded and expands around Yujing(Also known as Yichang.
1600BC: The King of Guan becomes Emperor of Guan
1476BC: Guan collapses
1398BC: The King of Zhang founds the Zhang dynasty.
1397-1100BC: The empire of Zhang gradually conquers much of inner China(Known modernly as "Xien(Shee-en)".
1100BC: A power struggle in the empire results in a usurper.
1095BC: The emperor of Zhang defeats the usurper, and spends time rebuilding the empire
1087BC: The emperor acknowledges the empire's decline and passes on the throne peacefully to the new emperor of Xie.
1067-954BC: After rebuilding the empire from 1087BC-1067BC, the empire greatly expands and conquers much of Korea, and begins expanding it's famous arm west, just north of Tibet, west towards the stans.
954BC: The empire reaches it;s height
954BC-762BC: The empire steadily stagnates and eventually declines, then collapses.
654BC: Empire reunified under the Guo dynasty.
654-438BC: Empire expands and captures parts of northern Korea.
438-117BC: Empire collapses, the "Warring states period".
215BC: Cao Long introduces the concepts of democracy that briefly become popular but are eventually forgotten.
116BC: Battle of Chengdu, reunification under the Chai dynasty.
116-84BC: Chai reorganizes the empire to become far more stable under the legendary administrator king Longwu Guan.
83BC-347AD: Chai expands greatly, reconquers Korea, extends it's arm.
326AD: Strong ties cultivated with Tibet for centuries to come.
348AD: Fall of the empire, the "Five Kingdoms period" begins.
569AD: Reunification under one of the five kingdoms, Jiang
570-630AD: Internal administration restabilizes the nation and the military becomes the strongest in the world.
631AD-1054AD: The empire gradually reaches it's peak and conquers most of modern day Feng, including SouthEast Asia, Eastern India, and defeats the Arabs in the battle of Talas, halting Islamic expansion. The empire becomes known as the most powerful in the world.
1054-1167AD: Decline of the empire, and ultimate collapse.
1167-1385AD: Rule under the Mongol empire, until a Christian reunifies the empire under the Feng dynasty.
1385-1413AD: The 1st emperor of Feng(Taoyu Yin) is a pro-christian, pro-western emperor and modernizes the empire and also manages to further boost internal stability.
1413-1586AD: The empire stays out of Japanese affairs, and expands and reconquers most of the Jiang empire, and also begins overseas conquests, but unlike Europeans, is friendly to the natives ans tries to incorporate them into the idea of a greater feng state with many subultures in their native homes that are loyal to Feng.
1586AD: The Feng empire backs the Japanese Shimazu clan, decisively resulting in their conquest of Kyushu.
1587AD: The Feng empire supports the Shimazu clan in conquering Japan, and also becomes friendly with the Date clan, who ultimately surrender to the Shimazu clan, but are treated very well.
1588AD: The heirless emperor of Feng adopts the heir of the Shimazu clan and also has him marry his daughter, making him the heir, and merging Japan under the Shimazu clan and Xien under the Feng Empire together.
1589-1675AD: Losses of Southeast asia and Eastern India, but conquests of territories in Africa.
1724AD: The empire transfers to an executive constitutional monarchy after popular opinion in the empire but no protests, as the elite backed this idea. The emperor's powers are scaled back but he still has some powers and holds more in total war time, and with this move it further legitimizes the already revered Feng dynasty into becoming a key element in Feng nationalism, and most Fengs support the constitutional monarchy to the death.
1726AD: Feng conquest of Borneo and Sumatra from the Russians.
1776AD: Feng supports the USA's rebellion, and decisively defeats the British and Spanish in naval battles, dooming their empires to not become as powerful as Feng's.
1814AD- Ethnic tensions between the Russian population of Borneo and Sumatra and the Chinese population of Feng rise to an all time high. In the beginning of Fengese democracy, a vote is held, giving Borneo and Sumatra independence under the name 'The Republic of [nation=short]Topkekkia[/nation]', but allies itself with Feng and becomes a key Feng ally.
1800's: Feng conquers much of africa and the european powers fear and respect Feng power and attempt to ally with it.
Eventually, the empire gives them many of it's overseas territories to use as colonies at the Berlin conference of 1871. Feng allies itself with Germany, Italy, and Austria-Hungary, forming the "Quadruple alliance".
It also stays neutral in world affairs for a while, but becomes friendly with many nations of the world.
1914: World War 1 begins. The Feng empire sides with the central powers and pressures the USA to do so as well.
1916: The Central powers decisively win World War 1, but the Ottoman Empire collapses. Feng helps the formation of the republic of Syria and Republic of Iraq, who happily agree to become part of a confederation in Feng.
1917: Feng opposes the spread of communism in Russia, but gradually becomes indifferent.
1939-1946AD: World War 2 begins, with [nation=short]New Chilokver[/nation] invades Feng, and a war happening in Europe, but Feng only fights in Asia and Africa against invaders and eventually drives them back, and is allowed to annex Annam as it has a high native Feng population.
1947AD: Feng grants many overseas territories independence, and forms a democratic confederation with the others who agree to stay.
1947AD-2000AD: Feng cultivates ties with many nations, and grants nations independence, but gain Sri Lanka who vote to join the empire in fear of the Hudans, and eventually becomes as closely economically and politically linked with the empire as the other overseas confederal states. Strong ties cultivated with [nation=short]Mangjukoia[/nation], The Royally United Provinces, Greater Carloso, and much, much more.
2000AD: Feng ends it's neutrality streak and begins getting active in world affairs again.
Early 2000's: Strong ties cultivated with [nation=short]Aravea[/nation], and Acharastan
2014AD: Feng joins the International Freedom Coalition.
2016AD: Feng accidentally leaves the coalition as the ambassador was drunk and had been told to do something about the Ausitorian PM of the IFC, which Feng saw as a dictator. His dumb solution is to leave and boycott the IFC, and the Ausitorians don't let the Feng back in. This also creates an opportunity for many Feng enemies to form a coalition against the nation, and they declare war. Feng replies by gathering many of it's allies in a war to defend Feng and defeat the invaders.

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Postby New Aeyariss » Sun Feb 19, 2017 5:13 am

1167-1385AD: Rule under the Mongol empire, until a Christian reunifies the empire under the Feng dynasty.


I know it's Deian cannon, but Feliks Koneczny, a polish historian, wrote about "Christian period in Mongol History" such as Nestorian domination of Nayman tribe of the Mongols, or several wives of Khans practicing Christian faith; so what interests me is what form of Christianity do the Fengese practice? I think that Nestorianism would make most sense at this point, since it successfully reached China in VII century A.D.

I think it would be interesting if Feng had it's own church, considering that many people tend to ignore the role religion plays in politics, especially powerful, multinational religions such as Roman Catholicism. The Pope now travels across the globe, speaks at UN summits and has considerable amount of soft power - and several centuries ago he was virtually ruler of Europe. On the other hand, religious disputes tend to have profound political consequences - just take a look how 30 years war arose out of hatred between Protestants & Catholics.

The role of religion in Bosnian war should not be underestimated also - and now it appears we are seeing resurgence of religious warfare. It would be even more interesting if we consider what impact it could have on Kogyokist - dominated Nifon and it's relationship with Feng - as different Christian denominations like to fight with each other, look Northern Ireland...
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Postby Aeyariss » Sun Feb 19, 2017 5:29 am

New Aeyariss wrote:So what interests me is what form of Christianity do the Fengese practice? I think that Nestorianism would make most sense at this point, since it successfully reached China in VII century A.D.

I think it would be interesting if Feng had it's own church, considering that many people tend to ignore the role religion plays in politics, especially powerful, multinational religions such as Roman Catholicism.


For simplicity, I created a fictional Church of Feng , which protestant base, (Aravean traders help seeded this system long ago and then local clergy evolved it into the present CoF) and some other more 'questionable' denomination that will spark the ethnic/religious conflict between the majority Han/Buddhist and Fengese/Christian. But due to the scale of this project; they're secondary plot device. They played a key role as a catalyst to the the fall of the Feng Dynasty; but the real 'game of thrones'-esque will be fought by those wishing to replace the Fengs; provincial feudal lords and their armies; powerful generals.

The role of religion in Bosnian war should not be underestimated also - and now it appears we are seeing resurgence of religious warfare. It would be even more interesting if we consider what impact it could have on Kogyokist - dominated Nifon and it's relationship with Feng - as different Christian denominations like to fight with each other, look Northern Ireland...


Certainly we can develop this part, as a backstory of as a plot device, if you can enlighten more on those Kogyokist.

Still, I needed a place for future references in case I wanted to remodeled Feng timeline; which I already done by the way. Deian's original working is as good as dead. The NIfonese side, I only fictionalized the political aspect, but the finer nuts and bolts for the cultural or military aspects going to need your input.

And Aravean in this whole closed universe is purely fictionalized as I'm afraid I only have Iohan to work them; I don't want to retconned the whole Aravean relations with Feng in this series though.

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Postby New Aeyariss » Sun Feb 19, 2017 5:40 am

Certainly we can develop this part, as a backstory of as a plot device, if you can enlighten more on those Kogyokist.

Still, I needed a place for future references in case I wanted to remodeled Feng timeline; which I already done by the way. Deian's original working is as good as dead. The NIfonese side, I only fictionalized the political aspect, but the finer nuts and bolts for the cultural or military aspects going to need your input.


Here is the primary canon Kogyokist church, but I need to rewrite the history due to my upcoming project.

And Aravean in this whole closed universe is purely fictionalized as I'm afraid I only have Iohan to work them; I don't want to retconned the whole Aravean relations with Feng in this series though.


I will try to contact Aravea then.
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Postby Gigaverse » Sun Feb 19, 2017 6:07 am

Oooh, so actual Japan is still Feng clay?
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Postby Aeyariss » Sun Feb 19, 2017 6:45 am

Gigaverse wrote:Oooh, so actual Japan is still Feng clay?

Well the Japan in this series is basically Nifonese; I'm not concern about 'actual Japan' since I basically erased the entire Deian's original Feng's timeline.

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Postby Gigaverse » Sun Feb 19, 2017 12:08 pm

Aeyariss wrote:
Gigaverse wrote:Oooh, so actual Japan is still Feng clay?

Well the Japan in this series is basically Nifonese; I'm not concern about 'actual Japan' since I basically erased the entire Deian's original Feng's timeline.

Cus is playing Japan on the map?
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Postby Aeyariss » Mon Feb 20, 2017 1:19 am

Gigaverse wrote:Cus is playing Japan on the map?


Well not exactly 'playing'; but in this series canon he will be depicted as the Nifonese Empire #NotJapan. (Map/Geopolitics)

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Postby Gigaverse » Mon Feb 20, 2017 9:11 am

Aeyariss wrote:
Gigaverse wrote:Cus is playing Japan on the map?


Well not exactly 'playing'; but in this series canon he will be depicted as the Nifonese Empire #NotJapan. (Map/Geopolitics)

This is kinda sad on my end. :meh:
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Postby Aeyariss » Mon Feb 20, 2017 11:45 pm

Deian salazar wrote:...Would it be too much to play a role as my new nation?

Well judging from what you've sent, I believe adding another foreign European power will only complicated the nexus of all the existing great power hierarchy in the re imagined canon.

I actually rather like this new canon, and feel like my nation(Now named Brussen) would do well to get involved. However don't think Brussen is as wankey and admittedly ridiculous as Feng was, I'm planning to make it a more realistic nation. Brussen would control the Sinai, Greater Ethiopia(minus Aeyariss's lands), and Tanzania. Since I don't expect Kenya and Somalia to be major focuses of the RP, I think we could let such a minor continuity error slide(They're officially part of me). They also hold Venice and Tyrol(Look at my map or I'l send you it so you can see what they look like) as vassals/puppets. I can also show you what my nation there looks like. I have an idea that Germany looks at Feng's situation and observes what's happening, as well as viewing Feng as it's eastern brother in a way(Despite not being allies, they just view each other similarly) and realizing that if it isn't careful, it could land in the same situation(Which would translate to me OOC'ly "learning from my mistakes" but putting in the IC in a sense.).


I hate to break this to you, but in this re-imagined canon, the series already have a #NotGermany, which is the Aravean Imperium. I have no plans to swap them out with the Brussens, and besides, if you wish to play as the Brussens in this combined canon, that version of Brussens will never get past Aeyariss Empire influence in Africa, let alone ventures further into Asia where the Fengese, Nifonese and Aeyariss are already balancing against one another imperial ambitions.

Looking at my past record, does it seem likely for me to achieve this? Probably not, but hey, that'd just make it more interesting right? And be a god learning experience?


There's nothing interesting in seeing a half baked idea ends up a major cluster-fuck in an already complicated project (I hate editing and rewrite , and I still plan to publish the finished eNovel on Christmas Day). As for the so called 'god learning experience', I am having my own reservation. If you wanted to learn, observe, then ask question. No need to get into the ring...and besides, where were you, when Cuscy and I kept telling you to accept our RP challenges; we told you that facing SACTO and being defeated by us in a RP can be a good learning experience for you, but if I recall correctly, you always shied away from accepting any of our challenges. Sorry Deian, I have no intention to turn this project into an education platform; what I need are writers who possess at least a minimal understanding of international relations, foreign policies decision making and RL based military knowledge and concepts. (Knowing you, I'd probably end up having to rewrite majority of your ideas).

Now since this is a big project and I don't want to contaminate it, I'm going to think up characters and provide drafts before I post to the people in charge of this roleplay. I'm going to make this my big "Quality RP" and it'll help me get back into the game.


I think I ought to put a sign somewhere in the OP announcing that this is not a planned RP but instead a collaborative writing project. Pretty sure I wrote something along the line. But by all means if you wish to contribute come up with a good proposal, and maybe, maybe, I will consider it.

P/S: In case you are wondering, the people in charge of this "Roleplay" are New Aeyariss and I.

Deian salazar wrote:Lastly Brussen despite winning the great war stagnated from the 20's-40's before being revived by a man known as "Joachim von Ribbentrop", chief Prime Minister of Brussen.
However, unlike actual history, Ribbentrop was a...not awful guy. He was still racist towards Jews, but not nearly as much in this timeline and he didn't conduct awful experiments. He did upset the liberals a bit and cut back slightly on civil rights during the time, but he had a successful foreign policy which resulted in Germany selling most of it's colonies and working to rebuild relations with Russia, Greece, and other major powers.
He strategized the "Eastern Pivot" where Germany would focus on strengthening relations with countries in asia and capturing territories that would allow them to control trade in the very lucrative Maritime Silk Road. This resulted in them focusing on gaining Sinai from Egypt, buying Ceuta from Spain, selling colonies to numerous nations, and relying on the east in an attempt to discourage powers to it's west from attacking it as Brussen's full force would be ready to counter such an invasion. It also resulted in Brussen renovating it's Navy and strengthening it's position on the global scale more definitively as an eastern power. This foreign policy focus resulted in Brussen's economy stagnating somewhat though it was helped by the new favorable conditions brought on by this new foreign policy.
In the 60's and 70's, economic policy became the new focus and they focused on modernizing the economy as much as possible. The 80's were marked by the Brussen-Panama war that resulted in western powers getting involved and fighting reached a stalemate, and this reduced confidence in the nation's military power, leading to a large scale renovation and modernization of the military forces(Smaller scale pushes had been put in before, but nonetheless failed to vastly modernize the military. The last time major military modernization had happened was the late 50's and early 60's.).
The 90's saw the rejuvenation of national pride and the Brussen success in a few conflicts around the globe(Yet to be finalized), and the 2000's saw the economy thriving, though a recession occurred in 2005 and took until 2010 to be completely over, though large scale military modernization employed hundreds of thousands and resulted in the economy getting back on it's feet.
This leaves us in the present day, where Brussen has finally solved the majority of internal divisions, it's economical problems, and solved it's outdated military, it now looks east where it sees the foolish Feng Empire crumbling and sees a chance to gain some profitable colonies in the east.


I failed to see whether this is supposed to contribute to the Blood and Fire series or it's just you, worldbuiling your new IC nation here in a thread about the final days of your other former IC nation, Great Feng.

In case the thread is TLDR for you Deian; here's the important information you should understand. The most important ones is probably the geopolitics considerations; I need writers to adapt their writing into the existing unified settings and geopolitics and not imparting their own nations universe into this already complicated world-building. I am still going through the challenge of recreating Feng from scratch, and then I have to mixed in with two other canons (Aeyariss and Nifonese) adding another supposedly great power in a far away European continent isn't going to make the writings, editing, and rewriting any easier. (And there's still the Aravean factor; the Protector of the Feng Empire; and other things like SACTO or IFC doesnt even exist in this new closed canon).

1. General settings.
2. Geopolitics Considerations
3. New Fengese timeline

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Postby Aeyariss » Sun Feb 26, 2017 12:57 am

Hey, Deian, can I edit the IIWiki page for Feng?

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11/03/2017 Notes

Postby Aeyariss » Sat Mar 11, 2017 5:46 am

1. My apologies for all these 'fencing', but my personal life simply doesn't allow me the freedom to stay on this hobby site for hours. Nuh-huh; not anymore. But, this story project is still ongoing.

2. To centralize planning, and ensure smooth transition from the planning phase, to writing and post-production phase, I have decided not to accept any more writers. I'm sorry for those who had expressed their interest in participating.

3. As of now, the final release date is still on December 26th, 2017.

4. [strike]redacted

5. Cheerios! Until next time.
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18.03.2017

Postby Aeyariss » Sat Mar 18, 2017 8:06 am

Reminder to self:

1. Review publication date.
2. Finalize story format.
3. Organize character database.
4. Reorganize story arcs; main events.
5. Post review.
6. Finalize a new character/story arc creation sheet.
7. Any other business?
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Postby Aeyariss » Thu Mar 30, 2017 11:00 pm

Soft reboot coming up next; in the form a semi RP/ semi collaborative writing.

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Scene 1

Postby Aeyariss » Fri Mar 31, 2017 7:10 am

The story begins in Yujing, the capital city of the Fengese Empire. Marshal-Premier Yin Long, the strong man that holds true power in Feng (he is both the Prime Minister and Supreme Commander in Chief of the Military; and is also the uncle to the Emperor, which made him the Regent as well) was being briefed by the Second Finance Minister who revealed that the economic situation for that current quarter did not met the projection at all, and was way under-performing - rising inflation, extreme budget deficit, industries over capacity, lack of resources to fuel the industries growth and the most important thing is that the effectiveness of the Nifonese led trade sanctions by the rest of Asia Pacific region is seriously hurting the Fengese Economy.

The Fengese imperial cabinet found it insulting that the Nifonese Empire is flaunting the economic miracle experienced by their Nifonese Greater Asia Co-Prosperity Sphere member states and they need to do something before the balance of power shifted irreversibly toward the Nifonese favors. The hawkish members of the Imperial cabinet suggested that they annexed the nearby South East Asia nations and absorb their materials, sparking debate between the moderates and the radicals but finally the Marshal-Premier overruled everyone; starting a war is the last thing they needed; not when domestic situations are far more dangerous than ever; re-surging Buddhist movement among the majority Han ethnics which threaten the political dominance of the Christians Fengese ethnic, and newly rising democratic movement and communist elements. The cabinet agrees that they needed to take bold actions; Yin Long ordered the Ministry of State Security (MSS) - his own inner circles friends - to step up internal security program, essentially giving them a blank checks to do whatever they want in order to maintain the regime security.

They then touched the issues of the incoming replacement for Aravean representative to Feng Empire which will be replacing the retiring old Imperial Lord Protector ('whom they considered 'an annoying old fart'), and members of the Fengese cabinet expected that the new representative will be another nuisance but they needed Aravean Imperium - one of few allies, and remaining trade partner - support. The radicals believed that since their arch rival the Nifonese and Aravea are both member of SACTO, the Imperium is unlikely to choose a losing horse and hence a useless alliance partner but they can still reap benefits from their personal union between the two great powers.

Yin Long says that he may have a solution, but that would need careful planning; one that can both restore Feng to its former glory, and at the same time improve its position vis-a-vis with that of the Nifonese.

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Scene 2 (Beginning)

Postby Aeyariss » Fri Mar 31, 2017 7:14 am

Meanwhile, somewhere in North Eastern China, recently promoted Colonel Lee Zhao Feng (also known as The Northern Tiger; The Butcher of Qingdao; The Hero of Qingdao) is having his final lunch with his old friend, mentor and Commanding General; Lieutenant General Han Baoxin. He will be transferring to the Central Military Directorate (CMD) to become the chief of staff of Operations Planning; one of the most prestigious staff slot at the highest level of military administration in the Feng Empire.

The older officer congratulated Zhao Feng on his well deserved promotion, and told him that he will one day rose to become a prominent general officer but warned him to be careful as the politicking in CMD is worst than what he had experienced. Bao Xin gave him his contacts in the CMD; a former pupil and protege who is now one of the junior commanding generals, and thinks that the two might help one another in advancement of their career.

They both reminisce going to war fighting alongside one another during the Qingdao Uprising; and Zhao Feng lamented that he will miss their duel together, and that Bao Xin complained he is going to need to work on his new replacement; and how he managed to govern the region peacefully (and lazily) when Zhao Feng had managed to get things done so effectively in the past.

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Postby Aeyariss » Sat Apr 01, 2017 2:51 am

Blood and Fire is now an RP. (Novelization can come later, that is if we still want to do in the future once we concluded this RP)

Rules and Regulations

RP Format:
  • Collaborative Writing;
  • Non Competitive;
  • Character Based

RP Participation:
  • Closed
  • Invitation

RP Pace: Slow; weekly-monthly basis; this will be a very long term RP

Important things for everyone; current and future participants


1. This isn't going to become another competitive Nation vs Nation RP, where a player wrote "I shoot your goddamn tank; post losses" and you write "Bull fucking shit; my tank got APS." There will be none of that typical egoistical ITG disability in this format.

2. Instead, character based writing will take precedence as this is a collaborative RP where 'winning' is define as having this RP successfully concluded with a big lettered THE END, and all the story arcs and individual characters goals and conflict successfully concluded.

3. The RP (Story) will have a pre-agreed outline; and there will be an overall theme, and multiple story arcs in this writing. Your role as a player is to take control of a character; you're to write a story about them reacting to events (The Plot), and you're free to have your own individual story arc; theme as long as it suitable to the overall big picture of this Story and everyone else agreed with it.

4. To ensure overall quality; and plot coherence; everyone will post a draft of their post in the OOC first before posting on the IC and each of the writers will contribute ideas; provide criticism to improve one post - this way, at least we're going to help each other grow. (Also, this is to prevent what I call 'masturbation RP' where a writer post things purely for themselves and that no one else wants to read)

RP Objective:
  • To create a first class literally masterpiece depicting the fall of the Feng Dynasty (or at least an epic above average writings that concludes with a wonderful big lettered THE END instead of merely die like the rest of the RPs in NS ).

RP Rationale:
- Feng needs to die; lets kill it as best as we can and have fun doing it,
- Novel writing takes too much time, and RL constrains prevent me (Aeyariss) from properly launching it. (Also, I decided if I am really going to write my first novel; it would be about something else that I can really be passionate about. Feng doesn't worth my time IRL.)
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Postby Aeyariss » Fri Apr 07, 2017 9:08 pm

"Greetings, honorable sir!" Teinosuke quietly said into the phone "To what do I owe the honor to have this call with you, Mori-san?"

"We have a matter to set at the embassy. Please do come as soon as you can! We will talk here." and with that, the conversation cut off.

Within minutes, the Nifonese military official was at the embassy, meeting with a plump older man officially being advisor to the Nifonese ambassador and a female "reporter" of a Nifonese TV that officially came to ask the Ambassador for the interview. She indeed was going to get it, as soon as her briefing on what sort of information was she to gather from Fengese politicians and where to deliver it.

"We have a confirmation" Mori's face narrowly moved. One could not fathom just how cunning was this small, plump man with official background in business "Our friend here confirmed that the minister of finance met today with the rest of the cabinet, providing them with a long briefing. Our friend, thanks to rather... disgusting actions she had committed, was able to carry out a copy of presentation he delivered. You need to have a look at this."

"Do not mention it again, Mori-sama!" despite her respect to her superior's authority, the girl was visibly enraged. "You know too well that I had to commit a deplorable act of whoring with one of Ministry of Finance's high officials to obtain this! Won't you at least honor the fact that I lost my dignity with some bakayaro for Kojiro-sama's honor?"

"Your act will be remembered, Yuki. Worry not" Mori smiled as he looked at the girl while Teinosuke was finishing his read "Heavenly Father will understand, as you did it not for yourself, but for a greater good. Who knows how many lives can be saved one day due to that..."

"Forgive me Mori-sama, are you sure that this information is true?" after receiving a confirming nod, the Admiral continued "If this is so, we just need to pack it into a diplomatic letter and send it to Ishikawa, and await our pile of gold. If they are really interested in GACPS, then Kojiro-sama needs to know ASAP."

"I like the way you think..." smiled Mori, as they continued their talk. When the negotiations begin, Nifonese were going to begin with an advantage...


Hey Cusc, what you did here with 'Yuki' is metagaming through godmodding. Though we can use it as it is, since this isn't a strict competitive roleplay.

There's only one problem though - the meeting hasn't ended, and that villain Yin Long hasn't really decided anything (and when he does, I was going to have him and his smaller inner circle discussing in a more private matter, maybe in their Pleasure Palace, whoring with pretty girls).

Not much needed to be change though, (and frankly, I was going to write the Finance Minister to be a Nifonese agent) :lol: not some small character 'Yuki', sorry should have mention it, but it was going to be a plot surprise.
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Postby New Aeyariss » Sat Apr 08, 2017 3:13 am

Aeyariss wrote:
"Greetings, honorable sir!" Teinosuke quietly said into the phone "To what do I owe the honor to have this call with you, Mori-san?"

"We have a matter to set at the embassy. Please do come as soon as you can! We will talk here." and with that, the conversation cut off.

Within minutes, the Nifonese military official was at the embassy, meeting with a plump older man officially being advisor to the Nifonese ambassador and a female "reporter" of a Nifonese TV that officially came to ask the Ambassador for the interview. She indeed was going to get it, as soon as her briefing on what sort of information was she to gather from Fengese politicians and where to deliver it.

"We have a confirmation" Mori's face narrowly moved. One could not fathom just how cunning was this small, plump man with official background in business "Our friend here confirmed that the minister of finance met today with the rest of the cabinet, providing them with a long briefing. Our friend, thanks to rather... disgusting actions she had committed, was able to carry out a copy of presentation he delivered. You need to have a look at this."

"Do not mention it again, Mori-sama!" despite her respect to her superior's authority, the girl was visibly enraged. "You know too well that I had to commit a deplorable act of whoring with one of Ministry of Finance's high officials to obtain this! Won't you at least honor the fact that I lost my dignity with some bakayaro for Kojiro-sama's honor?"

"Your act will be remembered, Yuki. Worry not" Mori smiled as he looked at the girl while Teinosuke was finishing his read "Heavenly Father will understand, as you did it not for yourself, but for a greater good. Who knows how many lives can be saved one day due to that..."

"Forgive me Mori-sama, are you sure that this information is true?" after receiving a confirming nod, the Admiral continued "If this is so, we just need to pack it into a diplomatic letter and send it to Ishikawa, and await our pile of gold. If they are really interested in GACPS, then Kojiro-sama needs to know ASAP."

"I like the way you think..." smiled Mori, as they continued their talk. When the negotiations begin, Nifonese were going to begin with an advantage...


Hey Cusc, what you did here with 'Yuki' is metagaming through godmodding. Though we can use it as it is, since this isn't a strict competitive roleplay.

There's only one problem though - the meeting hasn't ended, and that villain Yin Long hasn't really decided anything (and when he does, I was going to have him and his smaller inner circle discussing in a more private matter, maybe in their Pleasure Palace, whoring with pretty girls).

Not much needed to be change though, (and frankly, I was going to write the Finance Minister to be a Nifonese agent) :lol: not some small character 'Yuki', sorry should have mention it, but it was going to be a plot surprise.


My apologies, but I thought we were going to play a bit different set of rules here than conventional roleplay. That said, as I mentioned earlier, I will edit the entire post later today.

Let's follow with this arc: I will have the Gunpeitai team being briefed about possible meeting of Fengese cabinet and ordered to gather what happened on it. Does that suit you?
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Postby Aeyariss » Sat Apr 08, 2017 3:27 am

New Aeyariss wrote:
My apologies, but I thought we were going to play a bit different set of rules here than conventional roleplay. That said, as I mentioned earlier, I will edit the entire post later today.

Let's follow with this arc: I will have the Gunpeitai team being briefed about possible meeting of Fengese cabinet and ordered to gather what happened on it. Does that suit you?


We are, that's why I'm not being strict about it. Don't worry about it.

Sure, I will come up with a short post within 48 hours. Still busy.

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Postby Aeyariss » Sat Jun 03, 2023 8:12 am

... 2,247 days later.

Yeah, I think I'll finish this project too sometime in this lifetime. Cross out the back log of writing projects.

Where were we?

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