War breaks out between North and South Rawaii

[South rawaii]

War has broke out between north and south rawaii due to rising tensions on the border the war broke out after north rawaiian troops entered south rawaii

[Tiami]

Greetings, I am Tiami, but you can call me Chris (or Tiami if you prefer). I hope you don't mind me offering some advice.

Firstly, instead of one line RPs, try to expand on the subject. Why specifically is the reasoning behind North Rawaiian having it's troop cross your border? How many troops are they sending. Also, realize that an entire military is not just combat; you have logistics, behind-the-line personnel… these are the men who make war truly happen. Moving on, if you find it troubling to further expand your post, why not back track and explain some history between North and South Rawaii; if they had split from a greater Rawaii, or if they have always been two parts- give some cultural aspects, and maybe what type of government is operated by both respective sides.

I'd also advise to watch grammar, use saucier words (ex. instead of 'rising' you could use escalating- marched instead of 'entered.' I can only offer advice, as it you who ultimately decide what to do. Never let anyone else tell you otherwise.

I hope this helps,

Tiami

[Davinhia]

OOC: try expanding on it abit.
I'll help whatever side.

[Russoviskia]

czar Alexander sat in His mansion, Smoking a ciggerate and watching The news. An aide came in with the news that North and South Rawaii has hostilities commence. " heh." he says " let's support the South and send the Ist brigade." The Aide nodded then left. he Then got dressed and walked down to the dining room to his beautiful wife Csarriss Assmand the Ist.

[North Rawaii]

The Northern Troops Never Entered The South and Are APPALLED by the propaganda lies
The North Calls For Internation Help from wherever it can be sent.
This Is A Crisis, This Is A War.

[Ifaltannia]

Seeing the lies that the south has produced, Ifaltannia Announces Support For The North and will soon call on the eastern powers

[Detland]

The Kingdom of Detland

To: North Rawaii
From: King Zackariah of Detland
Encryption: High

Greetings O great nation! The current crisis between you and your southern neighbour is of much concern to us. We do not wish to see a war nor do we wish too see innocents die. We are more than willing to send military personnel and equipment to your nation to secure the peace. We want to work closely with your government to deal with this in a swift and non-violent way. We look forward to your response, a response that is better sooner rather then later.

Signed, King Zackariah Droveo of The Kingdom of Detland, Protector of the Dettish Island.

[North Rawaii]

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The Kingdom of Detland

To: North Rawaii
From: King Zackariah of Detland
Encryption: High

Greetings O great nation! The current crisis between you and your southern neighbour is of much concern to us. We do not wish to see a war nor do we wish too see innocents die. We are more than willing to send military personnel and equipment to your nation to secure the peace. We want to work closely with your government to deal with this in a swift and non-violent way. We look forward to your response, a response that is better sooner rather then later.

Signed, King Zackariah Droveo of The Kingdom of Detland, Protector of the Dettish Island.

Equipment to be sent to North Rawaii should they agree to it..

30,000 x Dettish Army Troops
200 x Leopard 2 MBT's
40 x RM-70 MLRS
600 x Armoured Vehicles
2 x Type 45 Destroyers
1 x Aircraft Carrier /w 35 F-18's

All in all it will take almost 1 week to get all this equipment there.

[Detland]

We're glad to see our offer accepted and are now beginning preparations to send the equipment to North Rawaii. The 2 Destroyers, HMS Annihilation and HMS Slammer along with the aircraft carrier HMS Target are en-route to the nation and are expected to arrive within 2-3 days.

10,000 of the 30,000 troops are ready to be flown to North Rawaii by the Royal Dettish Airforce and will arrive in the next 12-24 hours. 30 of the Leopard MBT's are also being airlifted into the nation and will arrive around the same time as the soldiers arrive.

[United States Kingdom]

OOC: Is this an open thread?

[North Rawaii]

As Naroth Smith Was Alone In his room He recalled The Rawaiin Split

As The Empire Fell Due To It's Aggressive Neibourgh It Was Liberated In 2013 And Split Into North And South With A Plan To unify them overtime, to reduce warlord power, However As time progressed And the southerners terrorised the north and things went hostlie, and that wasn't good.

He went to sleep with the idea of writing a book about it, he would never wake up.

[New Prime Minister: Garith Natali

OOC: Is this an open thread?

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[Ifaltannia]

The Ifalt Troops Have Arrived On The Border

[China SDC]

Chairman hirito has declared war on north rawaii and has announced support for south rawaii we will send 400,000 troops

[Baughistan]

I declare support for south rawaii and declare war on north rawaii

[England-Ireland]

Seeing the lies that the south has produced, Ifaltannia Announces Support For The North and will soon call on the eastern powers

I will support my ally but I will no get involved I will be involved diplomatically

[United States Kingdom]

The United States Kingdom which controls the land of the United States of America has ordered that its forces will go and help the North Rawaii government as it seeks to represent democracy all around the world.

500 Navy Seals will go to North Rawaii to help the government in special forces training

To: North Rawaii
From: USK
Encryption: High
The USK government is greatly troubled by this and has decided to send 500 Navy Seals to your country to help with the training of your armed forces

[Pimps Inc]

To:North Rawaii
From:Secretary of International Incidents
President Ryan has decided to offer the International Incidents Intervention Force 2nd Army to support North Rawaii.If you are to accept,please state the area you wish our forces to arrive in.

Sincerely,Secretary of International Incidents Gustavo Sorola

1 Nimitz-Class Carrier w/20 F-15,20 F-18,10 F-22,3 B-2 Stealth Bombers
3 Arleigh Burke-Class Destroyer
3 Slava-Class Cruisers
3 Assault Carriers

10,000 Regular Infantry
250 Leopard 2A6M
500 M1117
300 Panzerhaubitze 2000
10 PL-01
2 MQ-1 Predator

[China SDC]

my troops are landing on north rawaiian soil as I speak within a hour 450,000 troops will be in north rawaii

[Pimps Inc]

my troops are landing on north rawaiian soil as I speak within a hour 450,000 troops will be in north rawaii

Stop the one-liners.Try to give details.First you said you would send 400,000 troops.Now 450,000.
Where are you sending them?How are you transporting them?What are they doing once they land?450,000 troops without any air/naval/armor/anything support can be destroyed pretty easily.

[Tiami]

OoC: To expand on Pimps Inc. When posting (and this includes everyone ICly participating) troop movements, one must be wary of how said troops will get to the country. Is the country landlocked? Do I border this country? Does this nation have access to the sea or ocean? Is an amphibious landing the best chance? Take these questions into consideration, as the more you know about another nation, the more likely you can commence with military actions sufficiently and effectively. Keep in mind, it is logistically impossible to show up with troops out of nowhere. You need to RP said troops leaving their home nation, and then sailing/flying/driving or whatever other means of transportation. It's also advisable to realize that sending 400,000 soldiers is ridiculous and expensive. Realize that of those 400,000, some should be behind-the-lines men and women, and logistics. You can't war without people to run the war. Never forget armored infantry and ground support. Also consider the cost effectiveness of mass deployment, and always know the exact amount of soldier, logistics, and armored transports you will need, be it land, air, naval. If you can take that into consideration, then just maybe… maybe a war can be ran efficiently. Otherwise, you will see your soldiers get massacred without amor or air power. Remember, the bigger military does not always win. The military that has the technological, training, and home-field edge will usually be hold the victory flag at the end of the day. Any questions, feel free to TG me!

Hope this is helpful,

Tiami

[Krontzaika]

OOC: At first, I thought the forum topic was "War breaks out between North and South Korea"

[Heco]

We will send the 4th brigade to keep the peace on the border before it breaks out and millions die like in Qunan invades diasun rest in peace my fallen troops your million lives will never be forgotten.

[Heco]

OoC: To expand on Pimps Inc. When posting (and this includes everyone ICly participating) troop movements, one must be wary of how said troops will get to the country. Is the country landlocked? Do I border this country? Does this nation have access to the sea or ocean? Is an amphibious landing the best chance? Take these questions into consideration, as the more you know about another nation, the more likely you can commence with military actions sufficiently and effectively. Keep in mind, it is logistically impossible to show up with troops out of nowhere. You need to RP said troops leaving their home nation, and then sailing/flying/driving or whatever other means of transportation. It's also advisable to realize that sending 400,000 soldiers is ridiculous and expensive. Realize that of those 400,000, some should be behind-the-lines men and women, and logistics. You can't war without people to run the war. Never forget armored infantry and ground support. Also consider the cost effectiveness of mass deployment, and always know the exact amount of soldier, logistics, and armored transports you will need, be it land, air, naval. If you can take that into consideration, then just maybe… maybe a war can be ran efficiently. Otherwise, you will see your soldiers get massacred without amor or air power. Remember, the bigger military does not always win. The military that has the technological, training, and home-field edge will usually be hold the victory flag at the end of the day. Any questions, feel free to TG me!

Hope this is helpful,

Tiami

Thanks this advice will really help my RP skills improve.

[PetzConfederation]

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[South rawaii]

150,500 troops are being sent to the front