Atlas Of Stars OOC Thread [FT Galaxy/Community]

[The Orson Empire]

New app up.

Now you are carbon copying the Geth? That's no better.

[Vortukia]

I'm not carbon copying the geth just what they look like.

[Toishima]

So, as for my parasite bombs, what should the parasites consume? It can't be blood, or spinal fluid. I'm looking for any ideas, no matter how bizarre.

This is what I think they ought to look like. One of the only non-airborne creatures on Shollog.

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Definitely brain matter. Then they get into the now-empty brain cavity and take over the host body for some time. Would definitely look unrealistic or just plain wrong, so no infiltration there, but would let the parasites carry weapons etc.

[The Orson Empire]

I'm not carbon copying the geth just what they look like.

What is the difference between the Geth and the Volus then?

[Vortukia]

New app up.

it is a very poorly written and this time it looks rather that openly saying your going to copy the [insert race here] you are trying to hide the fact you are coping the geth per verbatim again. If you want to change my opinion on this tell us how they differ from the geth in a meaningful way and show us you are willing to develop them somewhat.

For starters they actually want to interact with organics.

[Alidina]

New app up.

Now you are carbon copying the Geth? That's no better.

No, he is trying to hide the fact that he is carbon copying the geth that is why is app is so bare bones. I would like him to explain his spin on them, sense that could shed some light on whether or not he actual going to make them different or if he is just going to copy something word for word again.

[Vortukia]

I'm not carbon copying the geth just what they look like.

What is the difference between the Geth and the Volus then?

Geth are robots that shy away from organics and tend to keep to themselves
I want to interact with organics and share knowledge.
Volus like to own people and think they're biotic gods...

[Alidina]

it is a very poorly written and this time it looks rather that openly saying your going to copy the [insert race here] you are trying to hide the fact you are coping the geth per verbatim again. If you want to change my opinion on this tell us how they differ from the geth in a meaningful way and show us you are willing to develop them somewhat.

For starters they actually want to interact with organics.

And legion was specially made to communicate with organics in the ME verse.

Tell us all the ways they differ from them not just a for starters and be detailed it wont hurt.

[Yortini Systems]

So, as for my parasite bombs, what should the parasites consume? It can't be blood, or spinal fluid. I'm looking for any ideas, no matter how bizarre.

This is what I think they ought to look like. One of the only non-airborne creatures on Shollog.

(Image)

Definitely brain matter. Then they get into the now-empty brain cavity and take over the host body for some time. Would definitely look unrealistic or just plain wrong, so no infiltration there, but would let the parasites carry weapons etc.

I like the brain matter, but as for the zombie soldiers thing, well I feel like I could get accused of god modding for that. Maybe, though, the parasites would then lay eggs in the empty skull and use the body as a trojan horse of sorts to get into populated areas. So rule of thumb, don't collect the bodies in a shoggothian attack.

[Vortukia]

Updated

[Toishima]

Not sure if I should have some state-run businesses alongside the private ones...

[The Nuclear Fist]

Not sure if I should have some state-run businesses alongside the private ones...

Everything must be run by the state. Space Juche must live on!

[Yortini Systems]

Hmm, I think for the next future tech RP I'm in, I'm going to do a synthetic one. Only, with a huge twist. Instead of having a hive-mind like most AI nations have, they'll have individual intelligences. They'll also look almost organic, or maybe they'll be organic. They'll act like an actual government, and were built by precursors thousands of years of go.

[The Nuclear Fist]

Hunzoi are obsessed with loud noises, to the point where most of their technology is designed to be as loud as possible.

[Canuckland]

Hunzoi are obsessed with loud noises, to the point where most of their technology is designed to be as loud as possible.

I can imagine the blood coming out of the clone troopers ears as the loud sounds cover the battlefield, each of them falling one by one as they are distracted by the sounds...
wait.
Wat?

[Toishima]

Hunzoi are obsessed with loud noises, to the point where most of their technology is designed to be as loud as possible.

I can imagine the blood coming out of the clone troopers ears as the loud sounds cover the battlefield, each of them falling one by one as they are distracted by the sounds...
wait.
Wat?

Looks like you could use some Takaoka brand earplugs! Now only 200 Yen!

[The Nuclear Fist]

Hunzoi are obsessed with loud noises, to the point where most of their technology is designed to be as loud as possible.

I can imagine the blood coming out of the clone troopers ears as the loud sounds cover the battlefield, each of them falling one by one as they are distracted by the sounds...
wait.
Wat?

One of the more common Hunzoi weapons, for example, is a 'rattle gun'. It fires a beam of condensed, rapidly fluctuating soundwaves that oscillates cells until rupture and breaks apart inorganic objects, such as metal, at the atomic level.

It's also very, very loud. Hunzoi soldiers often charge into battle high out of their minds on warp dust, with vocal amplifiers making every one of their war cries deafening.

[Canuckland]

I can imagine the blood coming out of the clone troopers ears as the loud sounds cover the battlefield, each of them falling one by one as they are distracted by the sounds...
wait.
Wat?

One of the more common Hunzoi weapons, for example, is a 'rattle gun'. It fires a beam of condensed, rapidly fluctuating soundwaves that oscillates cells until rupture and breaks apart inorganic objects, such as metal, at the atomic level.

It's also very, very loud. Hunzoi soldiers often charge into battle high out of their minds on warp dust, with vocal amplifiers making every one of their war cries deafening.

Something tells me my Plasma infused bolts won't even be fired off before the troops start screaming their heads off, unable to stop covering their ears.

[The Nuclear Fist]

To put it in perspective, I'm basing my Hunzoi off of the idea of Slaanesh-worshipping Orks.

[Yortini Systems]

TNF, your sound wielding soldiers remind me of the fremen from dune. Any connection?

[The Nuclear Fist]

TNF, your sound wielding soldiers remind me of the fremen from dune. Any connection?

Why do they remind you of the Fremen?

[The Nuclear Fist]

Oh. . . oh god.

I just. . . I just had the best idea for the Hunzoi.

Once their planet is destroyed, the few actual survivors left will be in possession of digital 'copies' of those who died on Hunzoi Prime, uploaded moments just before destruction. The copies will be partially corrupted. New bodies of synthetic, rubbery flesh and robotics will be built for them, but they will not be the same. Combined with the corruption of the hasty transfer and the existential despair, all-consuming fatalism, and shock of losing their planet will render them quite insane. An entire race of scattered, insane doom cultists. Depraved, hedonistic, and vicious almost to a man and raiders of fame, the ever present threat of Hunzoi raids is one that grips the hearts of many post-civil war leaders.

Their cruelty and brutality are legendary, their depravity infamous. It will be common to see wealthier Hunzoi have their synthetic flesh replaced with flesh from captured slaves, ensuring some of them look like frankenstein monster cyborgs.

Now that sounds good, doesn't it?

[Canuckland]

To put it in perspective, I'm basing my Hunzoi off of the idea of Slaanesh-worshipping Orks.

If we're talking about basing things:

I've said this before: I'm basing a majority of my entire race off of the Republic and Empire from Star Wars, while the ships are way, way smaller. Instead of being two kilo's long, it'll be only just under 1 kilo, the Executor Class Super Star Destroyer being only two.

Aside from that, I'm also taking the Senate and Supreme Chancellor, but eschewing the Jedi and Order 66, because that'll be stupider than you think. Hmm...what else do I need? Oh yeah, they'll be freaking rich to fund their armies of clones. But, it comes at a cost, lots of people are poor, and the rich survive. Crime and drug riddled streets reign supreme, while the high rise towers house the rich and the successful.

There will be splinter factions within my own splinter faction.

[Canuckland]

Oh. . . oh god.

I just. . . I just had the best idea for the Hunzoi.

Once their planet is destroyed, the few actual survivors left will be in possession of digital 'copies' of those who died on Hunzoi Prime, uploaded moments just before destruction. The copies will be partially corrupted. New bodies of synthetic, rubbery flesh and robotics will be built for them, but they will not be the same. Combined with the corruption of the hasty transfer and the existential despair, all-consuming fatalism, and shock of losing their planet will render them quite insane. An entire race of scattered, insane doom cultists. Depraved, hedonistic, and vicious almost to a man and raiders of fame, the ever present threat of Hunzoi raids is one that grips the hearts of many post-civil war leaders.

Their cruelty and brutality are legendary, their depravity infamous. It will be common to see wealthier Hunzoi have their synthetic flesh replaced with flesh from captured slaves, ensuring some of them look like frankenstein monster cyborgs.

Now that sounds good, doesn't it?

[The Nuclear Fist]

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"Do you wanted to be violated before or after I flay you?

. . .

Oh, who am I kidding? During, of course!"