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[Arcerion]

So what do you think of the Factbook?

I like it. I am working on mine now. I don't have a lot of heavy armour or vehicles, so to substitue I am going to be using the HEAM launcher. I am basically giving it the title of 'Pinnacle of Anti-Armour Weaponry'


High-Explosive Anti-Matter launcher:

[Kornosia]

Thats something my Heavy armor can't defend against LOL

I am writing up a new section as well for a group called the "Khraawls Chossen Blood Prophets". They are an elite band of skilled warriors who have an odd mix and background and I think will give Khraawl a much needed amount of detail as well.

[Arcerion]

Thats something my Heavy armor can't defend against LOL

I am writing up a new section as well for a group called the "Khraawls Chossen Blood Prophets". They are an elite band of skilled warriors who have an odd mix and background and I think will give Khraawl a much needed amount of detail as well.

Nice. I have to actually get a working framework for my raiding teams.

[Arcturus IV]

Post is up on the trade summit RP. I'm about to head to bed in a bit though so I probably won't post again tonight.

[Arcerion]

Post is up on the trade summit RP. I'm about to head to bed in a bit though so I probably won't post again tonight.

That's fine. Posted a response. Thoughts?

[CATACOM]

Where are Hob and Mohawk Clans?

[Kornosia]

As in...? Where are they in the galaxy? Where are they in an RP? Detail man! LOL

[Arcerion]

Where are Hob and Mohawk Clans?

Pardon?

[Kornosia]

Hey Arcerion... mind if I send a few operators (just two) to try and kill the Dominar?

[Arcerion]

Hey Arcerion... mind if I send a few operators (just two) to try and kill the Dominar?

I responded to your TG.

[Kornosia]

same...

[Arcerion]

same...

We can hammer out the details over TG.

[Arcturus IV]

Post is up on the trade summit RP. I'm about to head to bed in a bit though so I probably won't post again tonight.

That's fine. Posted a response. Thoughts?

Looks good. I have been informed OOC of the planned assassination attempt, and am looking forward to it. I had actually hoped someone would try just such a thing.

[Arcerion]

That's fine. Posted a response. Thoughts?

Looks good. I have been informed OOC of the planned assassination attempt, and am looking forward to it. I had actually hoped someone would try just such a thing.

This is the gist of what will happen:

Kornosia's second guy running away towards the cottage. My guys would react like this.
Kornosia's guys open fire, and my guys go down. Two of them stand up, and begin walking towards you, concentrating fire in short bursts. For a sound that the rifles make, its high-pitched and fast-firing.
After my two guys kill one of Kornosia's, they score a lucky hit on one, sending him down, and the other gets a ricochet off your second. They fire, kill my last guy, and run. Along the way he encounter another team, who fire at him. The last assassin wound two of them, but in addition to the second guy's chest wound he get a plasma round to the leg.
Wounded, he makes it to the front lawn, seemingly safe and empty, but upon coming onto it, and then is surrounded by about two dozen troopers, firing into him and closing in a tightening circle, pretty much executing him on the front lawn.
How is that?

[Arcturus IV]

Looks good. I have been informed OOC of the planned assassination attempt, and am looking forward to it. I had actually hoped someone would try just such a thing.

This is the gist of what will happen:

Kornosia's second guy running away towards the cottage. My guys would react like this.
Kornosia's guys open fire, and my guys go down. Two of them stand up, and begin walking towards you, concentrating fire in short bursts. For a sound that the rifles make, its high-pitched and fast-firing.
After my two guys kill one of Kornosia's, they score a lucky hit on one, sending him down, and the other gets a ricochet off your second. They fire, kill my last guy, and run. Along the way he encounter another team, who fire at him. The last assassin wound two of them, but in addition to the second guy's chest wound he get a plasma round to the leg.
Wounded, he makes it to the front lawn, seemingly safe and empty, but upon coming onto it, and then is surrounded by about two dozen troopers, firing into him and closing in a tightening circle, pretty much executing him on the front lawn.
How is that?

Too many "they"s and "him"s. Restate it with names used in each case (e.g. "Kornosia's guy", "Arcer's guy", "Arcturus' guy") so I can understand exactly what's going to happen.

[Voldoviana]

Again, was busy, will get posts out and some info on the Coalition's tanks.

Also, Canuck, some pieces of advice for your Armored Corps:

1. Try and make a central chassis and build all the other armored vehicles (except any IFV's) on top of it. It'll save time in logistical issues and it'll make sure your engineers aren't overworked.
2. Never put two guns on a tank. It's never worked in the real world for a reason. Why are you putting two guns on a single tank unless you have the room, and if you have the room (which I seriously doubt), why don't you just put one, bigger gun on there that'll be able to penetrate more armor, and will take up less space with its ammo?
3. This is more from the artwork, but it's a huge pet peeve of mine: quad tracked tanks. Don't. You're asking for four times the more most common injuries which take tanks out of battle.
4. If you have tanks and IFV's, why do you have Mechs alongside them?

[Arcerion]

This is the gist of what will happen:

Kornosia's second guy running away towards the cottage. My guys would react like this.
Kornosia's guys open fire, and my guys go down. Two of them stand up, and begin walking towards you, concentrating fire in short bursts. For a sound that the rifles make, its high-pitched and fast-firing.
After my two guys kill one of Kornosia's, they score a lucky hit on one, sending him down, and the other gets a ricochet off your second. They fire, kill my last guy, and run. Along the way he encounter another team, who fire at him. The last assassin wound two of them, but in addition to the second guy's chest wound he get a plasma round to the leg.
Wounded, he makes it to the front lawn, seemingly safe and empty, but upon coming onto it, and then is surrounded by about two dozen troopers, firing into him and closing in a tightening circle, pretty much executing him on the front lawn.
How is that?

Too many "they"s and "him"s. Restate it with names used in each case (e.g. "Kornosia's guy", "Arcer's guy", "Arcturus' guy") so I can understand exactly what's going to happen.

1. Kornisia's two assassins land and begin their way to the Dominar's cottage
2. they run into a patrol (4 man team)
3. off the cuff they kill two, but the others stand up and begin walking towards them, gun down one of Kornisia's assassins
4. Second assassin takes a wound to the chest, kills both of the remaining security team
5. Runs for the residence
6. On the way engages another patrol that was routed to assist the 1st team
7. Wounds two of them, but takes another round to the leg
8. Makes it to the front lawn, sees that the cottage is undefended
9. Steps a few feet closer, the night erupts with fire
10. About two dozen troopers in a circle fire and walk closer, devastating the remaining assassin
11. They continue to shoot until they are about 2 metres away and the assassin stops moving

Surprise! Dominar is safe. When first contact was reported he was evacuated with the other ambassador to the barracks with a full platoon defending it.

[Arcturus IV]

Too many "they"s and "him"s. Restate it with names used in each case (e.g. "Kornosia's guy", "Arcer's guy", "Arcturus' guy") so I can understand exactly what's going to happen.

1. Kornisia's two assassins land and begin their way to the Dominar's cottage
2. they run into a patrol (4 man team)
3. off the cuff they kill two, but the others stand up and begin walking towards them, gun down one of Kornisia's assassins
4. Second assassin takes a wound to the chest, kills both of the remaining security team
5. Runs for the residence
6. On the way engages another patrol that was routed to assist the 1st team
7. Wounds two of them, but takes another round to the leg
8. Makes it to the front lawn, sees that the cottage is undefended
9. Steps a few feet closer, the night erupts with fire
10. About two dozen troopers in a circle fire and walk closer, devastating the remaining assassin
11. They continue to shoot until they are about 2 metres away and the assassin stops moving

Surprise! Dominar is safe. When first contact was reported he was evacuated with the other ambassador to the barracks with a full platoon defending it.

Alright, sounds good. It also keeps the dominar's secret (that he is a doppelganger and not the actual dominar) safe for a bit longer.

[Arcerion]

1. Kornisia's two assassins land and begin their way to the Dominar's cottage
2. they run into a patrol (4 man team)
3. off the cuff they kill two, but the others stand up and begin walking towards them, gun down one of Kornisia's assassins
4. Second assassin takes a wound to the chest, kills both of the remaining security team
5. Runs for the residence
6. On the way engages another patrol that was routed to assist the 1st team
7. Wounds two of them, but takes another round to the leg
8. Makes it to the front lawn, sees that the cottage is undefended
9. Steps a few feet closer, the night erupts with fire
10. About two dozen troopers in a circle fire and walk closer, devastating the remaining assassin
11. They continue to shoot until they are about 2 metres away and the assassin stops moving

Surprise! Dominar is safe. When first contact was reported he was evacuated with the other ambassador to the barracks with a full platoon defending it.

Alright, sounds good. It also keeps the dominar's secret (that he is a doppelganger and not the actual dominar) safe for a bit longer.

Yep, sounds good. Sucks though, one of the guys I am having killed is that young 3rd Class that was at the gym with Blackford.

[Kornosia]

YAY! Khraawl get his blood!

[Arcerion]

:clap:

YAY! Khraawl get his blood!

As I said, write up to him stepping onto the lawn, the second guy that is.

[Kornosia]

Writing it now

[Arcerion]

Writing it now

I am looking forward to it.

[Kornosia]

and done...

[Caecuser]

I'm getting a post up now - anyone I need to send a response to except Acerion?