The Planet of Majkilhi [Closed]

by **Nafistan** » Thu May 19, 2011 7:50 am

Captain Ziring looked out of the oval window of the RNSS Ptac. He could see a sight no human had seen before. The Planet of Majkilhi seemed extraordinarily beautiful. He did not know what was down there but his crew of 142 men and women were prepared for any circumstance. He left the window but if he had his way he would just stay there and stare at it, the beauty of the planet was hypontising. He began to walk towards the shuttle bay were he would pilot the first human shuttle to land on this exotic planet. While he walked, he took out the letter from the Maharaj and began to re read the letter, a letter he read a thousand times before but felt that the words needed to be rread again.

'To Captain Ziring

Good luck. Do not forget your humanity.

Maharaj Nafis I'

by **The Planet of Majkilhi** » Thu May 19, 2011 8:52 am

A young Zememkir-likumu noticed a quickly moving star in the distance, and he let curiosity get the best of him. Pulling the ground up beneath them as they jumped in a circular motion leaving what looked like a series of mountains his path. "It's a ship?" he said to himself, he jumped to the edge of the newly made mountain, and slid down. Once at the bottom of the mountain he slammed his feet and pushed his hands forward, the mountain dissipated. "I must warn father." he said to himself, as he ran about the forest.

by **Nafistan** » Thu May 19, 2011 12:13 pm

Captain Ziring and his crew of 8 men descended onto Majkilhi. The landing was prefect with no damage to the shuttle. "Buddy up and check your partners equipment." Sgt Ershad checked the Captains equipment quietly but efficently. "Sir, all checks cleared." The Captain briefly checked the Sgt equipment and nodded. "Right men, we do not know what to expect here so weapons at the ready. Disembark!" A ramp lowered down at the rear end of the shuttle. The men filed out just as they trained to do. Each man wore a space suit as no one knew if the air was breathable. They pointed their modified BD08 rifles towards the surrounding area. Each man however was thinking the same thing: My God, this place is stunning.

by **The Planet of Majkilhi** » Fri May 20, 2011 5:43 am

A teenager dressed in a variation of colors, that was covered in dirt that somewhat scrawny, with black hair and blue eyes and a copper skin tone was sitting in a tree not that far away from the landing site. He looked at a small fennec fox he was holding in his backpack, "The ship's too large to be a Nervbraiain ship and they don't have as a bulbous as they do... what do you think should we go check it out Zazo? " Zazo jumped out off his backpack and made her way for the space crew, sliding down the tree in a strange cat like manner clawing down the bark, then jump around bushes until she made her way to the crew "I guess that's a yes." The teenager chose a different path "Hey Zazo, wait for me!" he said in a friendly yet scared manner. He jumped about the trees, from tree limb to tree limb until the reach the space crew they were holding things he had never seen before and wasn't sure of how to greet them but he couldn't control his inner child, and he dropped down upside down, smiled and tapped on of the spaceman heads "Hello?"

by **Nafistan** » Fri May 20, 2011 11:05 am

Cpl Rahman felt a little tap on his head and heard a voice say 'hello.' As he felt and heard this he aimed his rifle to the creature. He did not know what to do. "Siiirrrrr. Come here ppppplease." He was frightened what is this? he thought. The rest of the squad heard this stuttering voice and also aimed at the alien. All were surprised and frightened. None were prepared to find intelligent life here. The Captain had no orders on what to do if he made contact with an alien species. Captain Ziring came over to the Cpl and the dangling alien. "Did that just say hello?"
"I think so sir."
He motioned for the Cpl to go away. Rahman complied with this order very quickly and joined the rest of the squad who were now no longer in a defensive formation around the shuttle but all staring at this...thing. Captain ZIring was unsure how to proceed. "Hello?"

by **The Planet of Majkilhi** » Sat May 21, 2011 6:37 am

The boy jumped down from the tree doing a flip in the air. Once he was down from the tree he brushed himself off and pulled the sticks and leaves out of his hair. "So much for a first impression huh Zazo? I probably looked like some kind of forest alien." He walked around the Captain in circles before saying hello, as he wasn't completely sure as to why he was here. He tapped on his glass helmet, "Hello? Anybody in there? Do you come in peace? Or better yet to come bearing gifts? No wait food yest food, I haven't eaten since last night." He said as he rubbed his stomach, "I'm a homo-sapien and or human and you are?" he said in an annoyingly somewhat demeaning manner.

by **Nafistan** » Sat May 21, 2011 6:48 am

The Captain was momentarily speechless. "Sir." Sgt Ershad shouted from behind the saftey of Cpl Rahman, "We were not told this place had intelligent life."
"Shut up Sergeant!" The Captain looked more closely at the alien. Did it just claim it was human? Did I just understand what it said? What the f... Ziring gained his composure slightly. He pointed towards himself and began to speak slowly and more loudly as if he was speaking to a foreigner who didnt quite understanad English. "I...Captain Ziring of..er" He pointed towards the sky. "the Rajjoutho of Nafistan. We have come to claim this planet for the Maharaj. We come in peace." He pointed at the alien. "Who are you?"

by **Union Confederation** » Sat May 21, 2011 6:57 am

The Union and Confederate Armies invaded the starship of the Captain. We executed the crew and its captain. Then we invaded the planet below. After we massacred there Armies. We used are ultimate space weapon. AF 29 (aka Laser of doom) and blew up the entire planet.

by **The Planet of Majkilhi** » Sat May 21, 2011 7:08 am

"My names Po, and this is Zazo, she's my best friend." he said as he picked up the fennec fox and held it in The Captains face. "What's a Maharaj and why does it what this planet? It's ours already, this is the planet of Majkilhi, she's composed of five five nations: Tulzar composed mainly of fire benders, Zememkir composed mainly of earth benders, Oravru composed mainly of air benders, Swaniens composed mainly of water benders, and The evil nation of the Nervbraiains, they have the ability to read your mind, levitate, and actually control what you do. Anyways are you going to take off your mask you know the ozone here is composed of almost seventy percent oxygen."

by **Nafistan** » Sat May 21, 2011 7:20 am

The Captain looked skeptical at what Po had said. He thought briefly before taking his helmet off. He took a deep breath. The air was different from Earth but he felt fine. The rest of the squad followed their Captain. The Captain patted the fox on its head. He had to admit it looked cute for an alien thing. "The Maharaj, Po, is our leader. A man of great honour and respect. We did not realise this planet was inhabited." The Captian turned to the Sgt. "Sergeant, send a communique back to the RNSS Ptac and say what we have found here. They will not believe this." He turned back to Po. "Ok Po take me to your leader." Ive always wanted to say that!. The Captain thought.

by **The Planet of Majkilhi** » Sat May 21, 2011 7:49 am

"I don't really have a leader, so to speak the closest thing to a leader was my father and he was captured and enslaved by the Nervbraiains. Since he was a well known opposition member of their ways. We're currently in the nation of Zememkir. The King doesn't regularly see people unless it's necessary however due to the fact that you guys are aliens and all he may make an exception, follow me to Nacuershingsay" Po picked up Zazo and put her in his backpack, then he began to skip about through the forest.

by **Nafistan** » Sat May 21, 2011 8:18 am

The Captain orderd Sgt Ershad and two men to stay with the shuttle and to keep in contact with the RNSS Ptac. The rest and Ziring himself followed the funny jumping alien which was surprisingly fast.

Meanwhile back on Earth

Towhid Alam, the Chief Advisor, read the reports from the RNSS Ptac and couldnt believe them. He droped them on his desk and began to pace up and down his office. "No, I dont believe this. Intelligent aliens? This is crazy. I tell this to the Maharaj and he will think Ive gone made!"
"But we need to inform the Maharaj... it was his idea to colonise a nearby planet and take its resources. Hell, it was a brilliant idea! The whole project would boost our economy." Babur Jahan, the Deputy Chief Advisor advised. Jahan began to shake his head. "Aliens, why did no one think of that?"
"How the flying f*** was anyone to know that!....this whole colony project has to stop. I suppose it can be changed to a exploration mission. Do you know if Ptac is equipped with the relevant scanners and such for it to do that?"
"It shouldnt have to stop us. We could just take the land. We know nothing of the natives, if they are inferior maybe we could just take it?" Alam stopped dead and stared at the DCA. "Get out of my office NOW!" Jahan left without a word. Alam was about to call out to Jahan to apologise for his outburst but thought better of it. He must inform the Maharaj himself and explain that these natives changed everything.

by **The Planet of Majkilhi** » Sat May 21, 2011 9:23 am

Po was half through the forest when he suddenly stopped. Trees had been broken and in some cases they even looked liked they were stepped on. He bent down and looked forward, then left, then right, and felt the ground. "Shit..., Paraceratherium have been through here. We must cross quickly, they're powerful but cowardly they're like giant mice except they have to control the earth beneath them. So should one come across you do not look it in the eye, and if you do scare it well... we'll get to that later."

by **Nafistan** » Sat May 21, 2011 10:05 am

A giant mouse, what harm can that d?o Guardsman Yoah thought as he treked through the forrest. He noticed that the whole squad was not in any tactical formation but just following this random alien. He didnt think it was a good idea at all. Maybe this thing is leading us in a trap? How do we know we can trust it? But he knew no one would question the judgement of the Captain. All had served with him in Skira and all knew he was a great leader. As Guardsman Yoah thought these thoughts he did not notice a large creature lurking just a few feet away from him. Yoah heard a snap of a twig and turned, only to look straight into the eyes of a Paraceratherium. All the Captain heard, who was a a few hundred feet in front was a scream from Yoah.

by **The Planet of Majkilhi** » Sat May 21, 2011 11:10 am

The Paraceratherium that Yoah had looked extended its next up high then let out a short roar that sounded almost like a mix of wolf howl and a rooster crow, than a large roar than sound just like an elephant. It stood up on it's hind legs, then immediately stomped its feet on the ground. The ground shook, Po and the gentlemen fell to ground and boulders up to ten feet in width arose from the ground. However the boulders didn't fall they simply levitated in the air.

Po stayed down on the ground and simply look at them "Play dead, and hide between the logs it just called for help."

Once The Paraceratherium heard them it kicked the several boulders in front of it each one separated itself into smaller rocks and covered them.

by **Nafistan** » Sat May 21, 2011 11:22 am

The Captain and his men lay dead still while hidden behind some logs. Although they had just met Po it seems it would be best that they listened to him. However Yoah was frantic and whispered "Sir, I have a clear shot at its head. Let me open fire." Before the Captain was able to say no, Yoah fired a burst of BD-08 rounds into the creature.

by **The Planet of Majkilhi** » Sat May 21, 2011 11:52 am

The Paraceratherium shook its head back and forth its head and legs were the strongest part of its part of its body. The Paraceratherium made its way for Yoah and began to stomp on the trees surrounding him. Soon the ground suddenly began to shake... hundreds of paraceratherium were visible in the horizon with dust clouds underneath their feet.

Po looked at them, "You idiots, I said play dead!, their underbellies are their weakest points but they, but it's still practically an armor coating. Crawl and follow me, or be stupid and shot him."

by **Nafistan** » Sat May 21, 2011 12:09 pm

The Captain and his men crawled and followed Po. The men were silent. They knew that listening to Po was the only chance they had to survive. Yoah followed the others. He kep trying to make eye contact with the Captain to see how annoyed he was at him. Yoah was only picked since his father was a high ranking official in the Advisory of Defence back in Nafistan. He knew he was the least qualified man in the entire crew of the RNSS Ptac but he was determined to prove to them that he was cut out for the job. They continued to crawl until Po told them to stop.

by **The Planet of Majkilhi** » Sat May 21, 2011 12:59 pm

Po let Zazo out his backpack "Lead the way, you know your way through here better than I do." Zazo just looked at Po then tilted her head, in a manner that said yes but showed confusion. Po followed but Zazo didn't truly take notice to the fact that everyone was crawling on the ground, and jumped over certain things. Making it so it was practically impossible for them not to get noticed, however they luckily made it through the trampled trees without being seen.

"Okay we can all stand up now." He said then he glared at Yaoh in an annoyed manner, as he grabbed Zazo and put her back in his backpack. The wall of the city of Nacuershingsay was some what visible in the distant so Po continued about his path.

by **Nafistan** » Sat May 21, 2011 1:08 pm

As soon as Po told them to stop crawling Captain Ziring went straight for Yoah. "What the f*** do you think you are doing Guardsman? Did I tell you to fire? No! Why did you fire?"
"I thought..."
"Dont think you f***ing ar******. You follow orders. You do not do that again or I will personally take my bayonet and...
"Sir look!"
"What!? Cant you see Im..."
The Captain saw what his men were staring at. He saw in the distant a walled city. Although it was alien, it seemed almost familiar.
"Po, what is this place?"

by **The Planet of Majkilhi** » Sat May 21, 2011 1:51 pm

"It's Nacuershingsay the main city of the Zememkir kingdom. The city has been on the defense since the war started several decades ago. The wall is over four hundred twenty yards tall, and fifty yards thick, while it's composed of the planets mantle not the crust so it's incredibly strong. The wall was made by the strongest and oldest of the Zememkir-likumu many Nervbraiain armies have attempted to break it down however they've all had little progress due to its strong foundation. So you can either hide your weapons here, or they'll more than likely be confiscated once we enter the city." Po looked at them and pointed out then pointed out several places "Underneath that tree root would be a good spot but make sure it's completely covered. Whenever I go hunting I hide my bow up high so I suggest the branches in all honesty, but that's just my opinion. Anyways if you're not up for hiding them, then shall we carry on? Also you might want to talk those funky suits off..." He laughed under his breath then set Zazo down and then walked casually out of the forest into the hot sand waiting for the spacecrew.

by **Nafistan** » Sat May 21, 2011 2:41 pm

"You want us to disarm?" The Captain thought long and hard about this. Although this alien seemed friendly he did not know about the others. "Corporal, your thoughts?"
"Well sir, it seems we dont have a choice if Po is correct."
"Ok Po, we will leave our weapons under the tree."
"Sir what about are combat kn..." Ziring shook his head. He knew his men needed to defend themselves and the concealed knives would be useful.
"Take off the suits and leave them here as well."
The men undressed. Underneath the suits the men wore standard Royal Maharaj's Guards green overalls. They began to follow Po to the alien city.

by **The Planet of Majkilhi** » Sat May 21, 2011 3:30 pm

Po silently sang to himself "Winter, spring, summer, and fall." then he continuously repeated the song until he made his way to the city's gate.

Then suddenly, two men unanimously screamed "Halt!" Po looked up and waved "Hello..." two large guards dressed in green and yellow stared him down. "What's your country of origin, and homo species?" Po rolled his eyes as he was continuously forced to answer this question whenever he left the nation due to the nations security measures. "Zememkir, homo-sapien." the guards looked at each other. "Please, extend your right arm forward quickly, your left arm out to the left, your legs spread apart, and a closed fist." Po did so and nothing happened. The guards looked at each other "He's not, a fire bender, or earth bender." They then looked at him "Please extend your legs as far apart as possible once again, and wave your arms down towards the ground." They looked at each other once again. "He's not an earth bender, or air bender. While visually he's obviously not an Nervousa bender." The men walked out of Po's sight. The sound of gongs, and horns began to ring throughout the air. While they

Po ran back nearly ten yards, suddenly one part of the wall of the city began to move backward, while the other half began to move forward. Po's eyes widened, "God I never get tired that." He ran incredibly fast into the city expecting the men to make their way just the same.

by **Nafistan** » Sun May 22, 2011 10:43 am

The Captain and his men went to follow Po. "Halt!" The same guards that stopped Po now halted the men from the Rajjoutho. "What's your country of origin, and homo species?"
"Well, we are from a country called Nafistan from the planet Earth and he are homo sapiens. We wish to speak to your leader and that delightful alien over there was guiding us to him. So can we go past?" The guards looked at the five men in front of them. "They do not look like fire, earth or air benders."
"Thats because we arent..errr...benders." Yoah stiffled a laugh after hearing what the Captain said. "Please, extend your right arm forward quickly, your left arm out to the left, your legs spread apart, and a closed fist." The men looked at the Captain. "Do it." They did as the guards instructed and nothing happened. "Please extend your legs as far apart as possible once again, and wave your arms down towards the ground." The men did this odd dance and nothing occurred. "Very well. You pose no threat, you can pass strange ones."

As before one part of the wall of the city began to move backward, while the other half began to move forward. The men looked astounded. How did this work? None of them knew but the now saw Po waiting for them and quickly went to join the alien.

by **Zememkir** » Sun May 22, 2011 11:36 am

Po was waiting on the other side, while also getting sniffed by security.

"I already said I don't have, any outside food." a two headed dog called a cerberus was sniffing up and down Po to check and make sure he wasn't bringing in anything that wasn't allowed into the city. These items included weapons, outside food, blasting jell, and in some cases animals, but above all insects. The insects throughout the planet of Majkilhi were incredibly deadly. As soon as Po saw them he immediately walked towards them.

Po stepped in front of them and immediately whistled a Rhino larger than a tank immediately ran for them, and Po showed no fear and simply stood there. The Rhino continued to run towards them but Po instead of continuing to stand there, he actually stepped in front of the Rhinos path, and put his hand out. The Rhino continued to run until it made its path with Po. The People around Po and the crew didn't take a second look, Po patted the Rhino on the Head "Hi Zorlo, Hop on guys, he's the fastest transportation throughout the city, right now we're in the lower district, the center district has the king and is some ways away." Po hopped on and signaled for them to hop on.

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