NationStates

• Prince Silas Shalmaneser
• (and any other unmarried, male royal family members; Victoria is currently looking for a husband)

Vorindeum wrote:Guest List
Nation Name The Empire of Vorindeum
Head of Government Emperor Albert of Vorindeum
Head of State Emperor Albert of Vorindeum
Foreign Minister or equivalent Ottokar Wendt, Minister of Foreign Affairs
Guests (up to 4; please include correct title and form of address if important)
Emperor Albert of Vorindeum
Empress Isabel, Princess of Garza (RPed by Garza)
Martin, Crown Prince of Dakmoor
Maria, Crown Princess of Dakmoor, Princess of Garza (RPed by Garza)
Picks for conversation
Queen Mara
Princess Jocasta
King Elijah
Thomas Lalery
Camilla Sharra

Rhunnland wrote:Guest List
Nation Name: Rhunnland
Head of Government: Chancellor Heinz von Rabenhaus
Head of State: Crown Princess Victoria (To be crowned on June 21st)
Foreign Minister or equivalent: Alfred von Halbrack
Guests (up to 4; please include correct title and form of address if important):

• Her Highness Crown Princess Victoria
• His Highness Prince Frederick (Victoria's Brother)

Picks for conversation

• Prince Silas Shalmaneser
• (and any other unmarried, male royal family members; Victoria is currently looking for a husband)

Terre Australes wrote:Guest List
Nation Name le Royaume-Uni de Terre Australes / The United Kingdom of Australia
Head of Government Duc François de Roullois (Duke François of Roullois, duke of Roullois)
Head of State Sa Majesté Roi Louis V. d'Australes, sa Majesté roi Louis XX de France, duc d'Anjou (His Majesty king Louis V of Australia, king Louis XX of France, duke of Anjou TITULAR)
Foreign Minister or equivalent ministre des affaires Étrangères comte François Terrinier-Deurôme, comte de Deurôme. (Minister of foreign affairs count François Terrinier-Deurôme, count of Deurôme)
Guests (up to 4; please include correct title and form of address if important)
Sa Majesté Louis V. d'Australes, / His Majesty Louis V of Australia
Son Altesse Royale Prince Jean d'Alphonsiane / His Royal Highness prince Jean of Alphonsiana
Sa Altesse Royale Princesse Marie de Nouvelle-Zélande / Her Royal Highness princess Marie of New Zealand
(Our minister of foreign affairs is currently very busy with the Munkcestrian slave crisis.)
Picks for conversation
- H.M Elijah IV of New Edom
- H.M. Mara I of New Edom
- H.R.H. Jacosta of New Edom (I don't know what your princular titles are, and I couldn't find them in your factbooks.)

I'm a new RPer, but I really like the look of this RP. I hope this suffices as a RP sample

Ironenia wrote:OOC: This account is new but i have had other accounts that have since been deleted. If you turn me down I will hold no hard feelings.
Guest List
Nation Name: The Empire of Ironenia
Head of Government: Emperor Stürm IV
Head of State: Emperor Stürm IV
Foreign Minister or equivalent: Princess Alessia
Guests (up to 4; please include correct title and form of address if important)
Prince Hans - Head Of War
Emperor Guard Heindrich
Picks for conversation: King Elijah IV
Queen Mara I,
Captain Count Alexander Domris,
General Jonathan Unwerth

New Edom wrote:

Ironenia wrote:OOC: This account is new but i have had other accounts that have since been deleted. If you turn me down I will hold no hard feelings.
Guest List
Nation Name: The Empire of Ironenia
Head of Government: Emperor Stürm IV
Head of State: Emperor Stürm IV
Foreign Minister or equivalent: Princess Alessia
Guests (up to 4; please include correct title and form of address if important)
Prince Hans - Head Of War
Emperor Guard Heindrich
Picks for conversation: King Elijah IV
Queen Mara I,
Captain Count Alexander Domris,
General Jonathan Unwerth

I would need to see a better sample of roleplaying than that which is shown in your current account.

Ironenia wrote:

New Edom wrote:
I would need to see a better sample of roleplaying than that which is shown in your current account.

Honestly, I doubt I will be able to find an example of my roleplaying. I can assure you, however, I do write in long paragraphs with good attention to detail.

New Edom wrote:

Ironenia wrote:
Honestly, I doubt I will be able to find an example of my roleplaying. I can assure you, however, I do write in long paragraphs with good attention to detail.

Could you please write an example here?

Ironenia wrote:

New Edom wrote:
Could you please write an example here?

It was early in the morning in the Empire of Ironenia, The birds chirped peacefully and the soft summer breeze fluttered past. The sun was rising over the mountains, Which were snow peaked like icing glazed on a cake, creating a warm glow on the city below the castle. Emperor Sturm was eating his breakfast in the dining area which was close to the balcony while his daughter, Princess Alessia, sorted through his mail. Prince Hans learnt on the balcony with his right elbow, looking down upon the view.
"Father, I have 200 instances of fan mail what should I do with them?" Questioned Alessia
"Burn it" Emperor Sturm responded, spurting out bits of chewed up bacon and egg all over the table. "I already know what the people think of me," Continued the Emperor
Prince Hans turned around looking concerned at his father. "You do know Communist and other political dissident groups are gaining numbers right?"
"Yes, Of course I do, your point?" Emperor Sturm responded aggressively
"Well, seeing as these groups are gaining power maybe it would be a good idea to raise Public Opinion of you. Before we know it our heads could end up being chopped off by guillotines or we'll all be shot in a tiny house in the northern sector." Prince Hans said arrogantly and in a condescending manner.
The Emperor ignored his son's arrogant gesture causing him to scoff and look back at the view of the Empire from the balcony. On the table sat a black letter with golden swirls braided on around the border of it. The Emperor picked it up turning it around and examining it with his hands.
"That's an invitation from Queen Mara I of New Edom it's was her birthday and wishes us to attend the party. Maybe it's a good idea to go, as Hans just said we need to improve public opinion and going and meeting with over monarchs will do just that. Perhaps, You, Me, Hans and maybe Prince Harold can go?" Princess Alessia asked excitingly hoping that her father would say yes.
"Okay we are going, now. Forget about Harold it will be too much effort getting his wheelchair into the plane. Ask Emperor Guard Heindrich to come with us we may need protection." The Emperor said while putting on his coat and leaving a half-full plate of breakfast on his table. His two children followed quickly behind.

New Edom wrote:

Ironenia wrote:It was early in the morning in the Empire of Ironenia, The birds chirped peacefully and the soft summer breeze fluttered past. The sun was rising over the mountains, Which were snow peaked like icing glazed on a cake, creating a warm glow on the city below the castle. Emperor Sturm was eating his breakfast in the dining area which was close to the balcony while his daughter, Princess Alessia, sorted through his mail. Prince Hans learnt on the balcony with his right elbow, looking down upon the view.
"Father, I have 200 instances of fan mail what should I do with them?" Questioned Alessia
"Burn it" Emperor Sturm responded, spurting out bits of chewed up bacon and egg all over the table. "I already know what the people think of me," Continued the Emperor
Prince Hans turned around looking concerned at his father. "You do know Communist and other political dissident groups are gaining numbers right?"
"Yes, Of course I do, your point?" Emperor Sturm responded aggressively
"Well, seeing as these groups are gaining power maybe it would be a good idea to raise Public Opinion of you. Before we know it our heads could end up being chopped off by guillotines or we'll all be shot in a tiny house in the northern sector." Prince Hans said arrogantly and in a condescending manner.
The Emperor ignored his son's arrogant gesture causing him to scoff and look back at the view of the Empire from the balcony. On the table sat a black letter with golden swirls braided on around the border of it. The Emperor picked it up turning it around and examining it with his hands.
"That's an invitation from Queen Mara I of New Edom it's was her birthday and wishes us to attend the party. Maybe it's a good idea to go, as Hans just said we need to improve public opinion and going and meeting with over monarchs will do just that. Perhaps, You, Me, Hans and maybe Prince Harold can go?" Princess Alessia asked excitingly hoping that her father would say yes.
"Okay we are going, now. Forget about Harold it will be too much effort getting his wheelchair into the plane. Ask Emperor Guard Heindrich to come with us we may need protection." The Emperor said while putting on his coat and leaving a half-full plate of breakfast on his table. His two children followed quickly behind.

Thank you for writing an example. A few observations to improve this.

1. Separate your paragraphs, it makes it easier to read.

2. No one in the modern world travels entirely on whim at the last minute, even mad autocrats. All kinds of arrangements need to be made. The idea of 'let's go right now' is not how things work. Your government would have had to have made travel arrangements including with my own.

3. A wheelchair can, in fact, be brought on a plane, especially if it is that of a VIP.

Ironenia wrote:

New Edom wrote:
Thank you for writing an example. A few observations to improve this.

1. Separate your paragraphs, it makes it easier to read.

2. No one in the modern world travels entirely on whim at the last minute, even mad autocrats. All kinds of arrangements need to be made. The idea of 'let's go right now' is not how things work. Your government would have had to have made travel arrangements including with my own.

3. A wheelchair can, in fact, be brought on a plane, especially if it is that of a VIP.

Would you like me to rewrite it to improve?

New Edom wrote:

Ironenia wrote:Would you like me to rewrite it to improve?

Sure, that would be nice.

Ironenia wrote:

New Edom wrote:
Sure, that would be nice.

It was early in the morning in the Empire of Ironenia, The birds chirped peacefully and the soft summer breeze fluttered past. The sun was rising over the mountains, Which were snow peaked like icing glazed on a cake, creating a warm glow on the city below the castle. Emperor Sturm was eating his breakfast in the dining area which was close to the balcony while his daughter, Princess Alessia, sorted through his mail. Prince Hans learnt on the balcony with his right elbow, looking down upon the view.

"Father, I have 200 instances of fan mail what should I do with them?" Questioned Alessia
"Burn it" Emperor Sturm responded, spurting out bits of chewed up bacon and egg all over the table. "I already know what the people think of me," Continued the Emperor
Prince Hans turned around looking concerned at his father. "You do know Communist and other political dissident groups are gaining numbers right?"
"Yes, Of course I do, your point?" Emperor Sturm responded aggressively
"Well, seeing as these groups are gaining power maybe it would be a good idea to raise Public Opinion of you. Before we know it our heads could end up being chopped off by guillotines or we'll all be shot in a tiny house in the northern sector." Prince Hans said arrogantly and in a condescending manner.
The Emperor ignored his son's arrogant gesture causing him to scoff and look back at the view of the Empire from the balcony.

On the table sat a black letter with golden swirls braided on around the border of it. The Emperor picked it up turning it around and examining it with his hands.
"That's an invitation from Queen Mara I of New Edom, it was her birthday and wishes us to attend the party. Maybe it's a good idea to go, as Hans just said we need to improve public opinion and going and meeting with over monarchs will do just that. Perhaps, You, Me, Hans and maybe Prince Harold can go?" Princess Alessia asked excitingly hoping that her father would say yes.
"Okay we are going, I'm going to call New Edom see if I can arrange for us to go. Forget about Harold it will be too much effort to look after him and his needs there, I doubt he wants to go anyway he isn't good in social situations. Ask Emperor Guard Heindrich to come with us we may need protection." The Emperor said while putting on his coat and leaving a half-full plate of breakfast on his table. His two children followed quickly behind.

Vionna-Frankenlisch wrote:Hey, Edom. Exams are over so I can get back to posting. How should I go about it, what should I put in my next post? I'm afraid I'm a little behind in what's going on.

New Edom wrote:

Vionna-Frankenlisch wrote:Hey, Edom. Exams are over so I can get back to posting. How should I go about it, what should I put in my next post? I'm afraid I'm a little behind in what's going on.

In the OP there is now a timeline. Click on the link and follow it, find a place to insert your characters. If you have more questions do not hesitate to ask.

Rhunnland wrote:

New Edom wrote:In the OP there is now a timeline. Click on the link and follow it, find a place to insert your characters. If you have more questions do not hesitate to ask.

Just so i've got everything straight: RN everyone's at a grandstand watching a military demonstration?

New Edom wrote:

Ironenia wrote:
It was early in the morning in the Empire of Ironenia, The birds chirped peacefully and the soft summer breeze fluttered past. The sun was rising over the mountains, Which were snow peaked like icing glazed on a cake, creating a warm glow on the city below the castle. Emperor Sturm was eating his breakfast in the dining area which was close to the balcony while his daughter, Princess Alessia, sorted through his mail. Prince Hans learnt on the balcony with his right elbow, looking down upon the view.

"Father, I have 200 instances of fan mail what should I do with them?" Questioned Alessia
"Burn it" Emperor Sturm responded, spurting out bits of chewed up bacon and egg all over the table. "I already know what the people think of me," Continued the Emperor
Prince Hans turned around looking concerned at his father. "You do know Communist and other political dissident groups are gaining numbers right?"
"Yes, Of course I do, your point?" Emperor Sturm responded aggressively
"Well, seeing as these groups are gaining power maybe it would be a good idea to raise Public Opinion of you. Before we know it our heads could end up being chopped off by guillotines or we'll all be shot in a tiny house in the northern sector." Prince Hans said arrogantly and in a condescending manner.
The Emperor ignored his son's arrogant gesture causing him to scoff and look back at the view of the Empire from the balcony.

On the table sat a black letter with golden swirls braided on around the border of it. The Emperor picked it up turning it around and examining it with his hands.
"That's an invitation from Queen Mara I of New Edom, it was her birthday and wishes us to attend the party. Maybe it's a good idea to go, as Hans just said we need to improve public opinion and going and meeting with over monarchs will do just that. Perhaps, You, Me, Hans and maybe Prince Harold can go?" Princess Alessia asked excitingly hoping that her father would say yes.
"Okay we are going, I'm going to call New Edom see if I can arrange for us to go. Forget about Harold it will be too much effort to look after him and his needs there, I doubt he wants to go anyway he isn't good in social situations. Ask Emperor Guard Heindrich to come with us we may need protection." The Emperor said while putting on his coat and leaving a half-full plate of breakfast on his table. His two children followed quickly behind.

This looks a lot better. I will accept your application. My suggestion for your first post as well as for any other newcomers would be to jump right in and presume that your characters would be at the review--see the link at the bottom of the OP. Presume that your people would have been greeted with appropriate courtesy at the airport, given a suite of rooms as needed for your emperor and his family/entourage at the Majestic Hotel. Let me know if you have any questions.