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Belle Ilse en Terre
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Postby Belle Ilse en Terre » Wed Feb 14, 2018 2:12 pm

Code name: Ratman
Secret Identity: Ryan Delamer
Ethnicity: English
Age: 34
Physical Description: Ryan is wiry, short, and slightly hunched. His face is pinched and his nose is abnormally long, and he has a look of emaciation about him.
Costume Description: He wears a soiled, patched, grey-blue trench coat and an ancient fedora. The sleeves of the trench coat have thumbholes. He wears only socks, with his toes and heels exposed.
Powers: He can communicate very well with rats, and can hold limited conversation with other rodents. He is also immune rodent born diseases.
Skills:
- Persuasion
- Sneakiness
- Sleeping in any environment
- Strong Teeth

Quick Character Biography: Ryan was an illegitimate child, an unwanted accident, in the callous words of his father. Neither his father not mother, both of the lesser nobility, wish to be marred by his presence, so his father snuck out the night of his birth and deposited Ryan in a convenient sewer, covering his mouth with cloth so Ryan’s cries could not be heard. Left alone, Ryan was eventually found by a fugitive, a con artist, who raised him, and taught him to speak, to walk, and to understand the ever present rats, whom the con artist, named Delamer, admired, for their common sense of purpose, and persistence. This continued for several years, until Delamer tried to trick the wrong people, and was killed by two knights. Ryan was alone once more.

One day, after having almost wholly failed to find food in the past week, he desperately looked at a rat imploringly, facially expressing his sole desire of food. The rat brought him food. Ryan began to supply himself, even eat quit well, off of what the rats brought him. He slowly learned to manipulate their wills, first using facial expressions, but eventually only his mind. He also helped the rats, and would disable rat traps and discover other sources of food for them, so that they had a surplus of necessities.

Having ensured his survival, he began to talk to the rats, and to discover their emotions. He then saw a women get mugged in a dark alley near his abode. Though he did not show himself, he assaulted and drove out the muggers with a horde of smaller rats. A gun discharged, but when he realised his friends were unaffected, he ignored, to discover too late that it had hit the victim. As the older women lay dying, she looked at Ryan vexedly, and then cried out in pain. It was none other than his mother. She desperately apologise, and was only half able to articulate their relation through her tears an convulsions, but Ryan understood, and was gladdened by news of his father’s suicide. With a loathing of the crime and a sense of fulfilment, he moved to Purth-Graje, hiding in the shadows, and fighting crime.


How much of an anti-hero can Ratman be?
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Atnaia
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Founded: Dec 08, 2015
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Postby Atnaia » Wed Feb 14, 2018 4:25 pm

Belle Ilse en Terre wrote:
Code name: Ratman
Secret Identity: Ryan Delamer
Ethnicity: English
Age: 34
Physical Description: Ryan is wiry, short, and slightly hunched. His face is pinched and his nose is abnormally long, and he has a look of emaciation about him.
Costume Description: He wears a soiled, patched, grey-blue trench coat and an ancient fedora. The sleeves of the trench coat have thumbholes. He wears only socks, with his toes and heels exposed.
Powers: He can communicate very well with rats, and can hold limited conversation with other rodents. He is also immune rodent born diseases.
Skills:
- Persuasion
- Sneakiness
- Sleeping in any environment
- Strong Teeth

Quick Character Biography: Ryan was an illegitimate child, an unwanted accident, in the callous words of his father. Neither his father not mother, both of the lesser nobility, wish to be marred by his presence, so his father snuck out the night of his birth and deposited Ryan in a convenient sewer, covering his mouth with cloth so Ryan’s cries could not be heard. Left alone, Ryan was eventually found by a fugitive, a con artist, who raised him, and taught him to speak, to walk, and to understand the ever present rats, whom the con artist, named Delamer, admired, for their common sense of purpose, and persistence. This continued for several years, until Delamer tried to trick the wrong people, and was killed by two knights. Ryan was alone once more.

One day, after having almost wholly failed to find food in the past week, he desperately looked at a rat imploringly, facially expressing his sole desire of food. The rat brought him food. Ryan began to supply himself, even eat quit well, off of what the rats brought him. He slowly learned to manipulate their wills, first using facial expressions, but eventually only his mind. He also helped the rats, and would disable rat traps and discover other sources of food for them, so that they had a surplus of necessities.

Having ensured his survival, he began to talk to the rats, and to discover their emotions. He then saw a women get mugged in a dark alley near his abode. Though he did not show himself, he assaulted and drove out the muggers with a horde of smaller rats. A gun discharged, but when he realised his friends were unaffected, he ignored, to discover too late that it had hit the victim. As the older women lay dying, she looked at Ryan vexedly, and then cried out in pain. It was none other than his mother. She desperately apologise, and was only half able to articulate their relation through her tears an convulsions, but Ryan understood, and was gladdened by news of his father’s suicide. With a loathing of the crime and a sense of fulfilment, he moved to Purth-Graje, hiding in the shadows, and fighting crime.


How much of an anti-hero can Ratman be?

Christopher Nolan Batman, not Zac Snyder Batman. I want to avoid these heroes going around MURDERING muggers and street gangs. There's a reason that people like the Punisher generally work alone: alone they are a vigilante, together they're a mob.
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Atnaia
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Postby Atnaia » Wed Feb 14, 2018 4:52 pm

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Belle Ilse en Terre
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Founded: Aug 26, 2016
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Postby Belle Ilse en Terre » Wed Feb 14, 2018 6:19 pm

Atnaia wrote:
Belle Ilse en Terre wrote:
Code name: Ratman
Secret Identity: Ryan Delamer
Ethnicity: English
Age: 34
Physical Description: Ryan is wiry, short, and slightly hunched. His face is pinched and his nose is abnormally long, and he has a look of emaciation about him.
Costume Description: He wears a soiled, patched, grey-blue trench coat and an ancient fedora. The sleeves of the trench coat have thumbholes. He wears only socks, with his toes and heels exposed.
Powers: He can communicate very well with rats, and can hold limited conversation with other rodents. He is also immune rodent born diseases.
Skills:
- Persuasion
- Sneakiness
- Sleeping in any environment
- Strong Teeth

Quick Character Biography: Ryan was an illegitimate child, an unwanted accident, in the callous words of his father. Neither his father not mother, both of the lesser nobility, wish to be marred by his presence, so his father snuck out the night of his birth and deposited Ryan in a convenient sewer, covering his mouth with cloth so Ryan’s cries could not be heard. Left alone, Ryan was eventually found by a fugitive, a con artist, who raised him, and taught him to speak, to walk, and to understand the ever present rats, whom the con artist, named Delamer, admired, for their common sense of purpose, and persistence. This continued for several years, until Delamer tried to trick the wrong people, and was killed by two knights. Ryan was alone once more.

One day, after having almost wholly failed to find food in the past week, he desperately looked at a rat imploringly, facially expressing his sole desire of food. The rat brought him food. Ryan began to supply himself, even eat quit well, off of what the rats brought him. He slowly learned to manipulate their wills, first using facial expressions, but eventually only his mind. He also helped the rats, and would disable rat traps and discover other sources of food for them, so that they had a surplus of necessities.

Having ensured his survival, he began to talk to the rats, and to discover their emotions. He then saw a women get mugged in a dark alley near his abode. Though he did not show himself, he assaulted and drove out the muggers with a horde of smaller rats. A gun discharged, but when he realised his friends were unaffected, he ignored, to discover too late that it had hit the victim. As the older women lay dying, she looked at Ryan vexedly, and then cried out in pain. It was none other than his mother. She desperately apologise, and was only half able to articulate their relation through her tears an convulsions, but Ryan understood, and was gladdened by news of his father’s suicide. With a loathing of the crime and a sense of fulfilment, he moved to Purth-Graje, hiding in the shadows, and fighting crime.


How much of an anti-hero can Ratman be?

Christopher Nolan Batman, not Zac Snyder Batman. I want to avoid these heroes going around MURDERING muggers and street gangs. There's a reason that people like the Punisher generally work alone: alone they are a vigilante, together they're a mob.

I researched rat communicable diseases, and I think I am going to make a different character, otherwise Ratman would have to isolate himself so as not to infect anyone, which probably would make him a better villain than hero.
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Thuzbekistan
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Founded: Dec 29, 2017
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Postby Thuzbekistan » Wed Feb 14, 2018 7:10 pm


I'll take a look see tomorrow
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Athara Magarat
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Founded: Oct 08, 2015
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Postby Athara Magarat » Wed Feb 14, 2018 7:28 pm

Atnaia, what do you think of Butterfly Effect scenarios. Or is it overused and shouldn't appear?
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Atnaia
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Postby Atnaia » Wed Feb 14, 2018 8:50 pm

Athara Magarat wrote:Atnaia, what do you think of Butterfly Effect scenarios. Or is it overused and shouldn't appear?

It would be difficult to pull off well in this format.
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Thuzbekistan
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Postby Thuzbekistan » Wed Feb 14, 2018 9:39 pm

Now, I understand that you want to take over the what's and how's of what happens when fights occur, so how would you like us to introduce our characters here? Taking shelter, immediately reacting, or what?

Am d by this I mean how to what level of freedom do we have in terms of action?
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Atnaia
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Postby Atnaia » Thu Feb 15, 2018 12:36 pm

Thuzbekistan wrote:Now, I understand that you want to take over the what's and how's of what happens when fights occur, so how would you like us to introduce our characters here? Taking shelter, immediately reacting, or what?

Am d by this I mean how to what level of freedom do we have in terms of action?

So, basically what I want to avoid is people unilaterally claiming that they defeat an enemy. You don't know what abilties or equipment baddies might have, so saying something like "He punched the baddie in the head and the bad guy collapsed, unconscious." Leave out the results. So let's say you were playing a super speedster. You could write "Hermes darted from thug to thug, landing quick blows with the palm of his hand". I might respond "Three of the thugs crumpled like wet paper, but the last didn't even budge, as though his feet were cemented to the floor. He grinned wickedly. 'I ain't so easy to break, speedy.'"

Aside from that, explore your posts with freedom. How you guys react right now is entirely dependent on how you think your characters would react.
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Thuzbekistan
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Postby Thuzbekistan » Thu Feb 15, 2018 1:30 pm

Atnaia wrote:
Thuzbekistan wrote:Now, I understand that you want to take over the what's and how's of what happens when fights occur, so how would you like us to introduce our characters here? Taking shelter, immediately reacting, or what?

Am d by this I mean how to what level of freedom do we have in terms of action?

So, basically what I want to avoid is people unilaterally claiming that they defeat an enemy. You don't know what abilties or equipment baddies might have, so saying something like "He punched the baddie in the head and the bad guy collapsed, unconscious." Leave out the results. So let's say you were playing a super speedster. You could write "Hermes darted from thug to thug, landing quick blows with the palm of his hand". I might respond "Three of the thugs crumpled like wet paper, but the last didn't even budge, as though his feet were cemented to the floor. He grinned wickedly. 'I ain't so easy to break, speedy.'"

Aside from that, explore your posts with freedom. How you guys react right now is entirely dependent on how you think your characters would react.

Ok this clears up a lot of questions I had. Ty. I'll post tonight if I'm not dog tired.
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Postby Atnaia » Fri Feb 16, 2018 10:35 am

I'm waiting to respond to Polar's intro until after a few more people throw out some posts. I need to know what the initial response from your heroes is.
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Thuzbekistan
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Postby Thuzbekistan » Fri Feb 16, 2018 10:46 am

Atnaia wrote:I'm waiting to respond to Polar's intro until after a few more people throw out some posts. I need to know what the initial response from your heroes is.

Again, gonna do my best
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Caber
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Founded: Sep 18, 2017
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Postby Caber » Fri Feb 16, 2018 10:58 am

I'll get a post out sometime today or tomorrow.
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Atnaia
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Postby Atnaia » Fri Feb 16, 2018 12:00 pm

Polar, is Viking's helmet face-concealing? Something like this maybe? With horns, obviously?
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Polar Svalbard
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Postby Polar Svalbard » Fri Feb 16, 2018 1:14 pm

Atnaia wrote:Polar, is Viking's helmet face-concealing? Something like this maybe? With horns, obviously?

Indeed, since we are trying to be secretive. Maybe one day, if it goes that far, he can get a costume change
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Thuzbekistan
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Postby Thuzbekistan » Sat Feb 17, 2018 11:01 am

My guy doesn't have his costume on him. I wonder how he can maintain his Identity.
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Postby Atnaia » Tue Feb 20, 2018 5:49 pm

So you all pretty much did a wait-and-watch thing...assume continued escalation until someone steps in.
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San Montagna
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Postby San Montagna » Tue Feb 20, 2018 7:44 pm

speaking of that, I still need to get a post up.
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Thuzbekistan
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Postby Thuzbekistan » Tue Feb 20, 2018 8:32 pm

I hope I didn't take too much liberty there moving the guys around.

Also, I'm kinda imagining what this would look like in a comic book. When he sends out his waves of focus, I could imagine yellow waves of energy spreading out form his head while he makes that typical teeth showing face of concentration that you see in comics.
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