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by Athara Magarat » Mon Oct 17, 2016 5:59 am
by Taziristan » Sun Oct 23, 2016 12:26 pm
by Atnaia » Sun Oct 23, 2016 12:40 pm
Taziristan wrote:So what's the start date gonna look like.
by The Grand Force » Sun Oct 23, 2016 12:52 pm
by Taziristan » Sun Oct 23, 2016 12:52 pm
by Atnaia » Sun Oct 23, 2016 12:58 pm
The Grand Force wrote:Atnaia wrote:I already started the IC. I've mentioned it onn the RMB, but forgot here I guess? I know I edited the OP.
I'll introduce Ranger as he was waiting for a target in another building and saw first hand as yellowsash was shot and fell through the tower then he'll investigate it.
by The Grand Force » Sun Oct 23, 2016 1:05 pm
Atnaia wrote:The Grand Force wrote:I'll introduce Ranger as he was waiting for a target in another building and saw first hand as yellowsash was shot and fell through the tower then he'll investigate it.
No, because I have yet to approve that character. I'm a little confused as to how you expect the character to fit into the style of story. I'm fine with villains, but I don't have a good read on your expectations.
by Atnaia » Sun Oct 23, 2016 1:08 pm
The Grand Force wrote:Atnaia wrote:No, because I have yet to approve that character. I'm a little confused as to how you expect the character to fit into the style of story. I'm fine with villains, but I don't have a good read on your expectations.
He's a mercenary a gun for hire but he's not a monster he never kills children or women and if the job is too dirty he will out right refuse it, once his ''wife'' and ''son'' were killed he believed he had to avenge them and did that by killing the people who killed them. You said whoever is doing this is targeting the best and brightest TWI has to offer and he is great at being a mercenary, so he wants to find who is doing this and kill them before they kill him even if it means working with people he would rather avoid.
by The Grand Force » Sun Oct 23, 2016 1:16 pm
Atnaia wrote:The Grand Force wrote:He's a mercenary a gun for hire but he's not a monster he never kills children or women and if the job is too dirty he will out right refuse it, once his ''wife'' and ''son'' were killed he believed he had to avenge them and did that by killing the people who killed them. You said whoever is doing this is targeting the best and brightest TWI has to offer and he is great at being a mercenary, so he wants to find who is doing this and kill them before they kill him even if it means working with people he would rather avoid.
I'll be up front: the concept of this whole story is a Crisis Crossover comic book story akin to Crisis on Infintie Earths or Secret Wars or something.
The bad guy is a cosmic entity, which I thought was implied in the opening quote and picture.
How do you see your guy fitting into that dynamic? Not saying no, just asking about your vision for the character within that concept.
by Atnaia » Sun Oct 23, 2016 1:21 pm
The Grand Force wrote:Atnaia wrote:I'll be up front: the concept of this whole story is a Crisis Crossover comic book story akin to Crisis on Infintie Earths or Secret Wars or something.
The bad guy is a cosmic entity, which I thought was implied in the opening quote and picture.
How do you see your guy fitting into that dynamic? Not saying no, just asking about your vision for the character within that concept.
He is an expert in technology and who knows maybe he has some mutations he doesn't know about, perhaps he could have been implanted with Yellowsash DNA(hint hint). Plus if the cosmic entity has any ground forces he's the one that would wage war with them.
by The Grand Force » Sun Oct 23, 2016 1:23 pm
Atnaia wrote:The Grand Force wrote:He is an expert in technology and who knows maybe he has some mutations he doesn't know about, perhaps he could have been implanted with Yellowsash DNA(hint hint). Plus if the cosmic entity has any ground forces he's the one that would wage war with them.
Hmmm.
Write a post. Just remember that I am DMing, which means that this RP will be a little different. I will explain to you the situations your character faces, and you will write how he faces them, and I will then describe the ultimate results.
by Atnaia » Sun Oct 23, 2016 1:25 pm
The Grand Force wrote:Atnaia wrote:Hmmm.
Write a post. Just remember that I am DMing, which means that this RP will be a little different. I will explain to you the situations your character faces, and you will write how he faces them, and I will then describe the ultimate results.
Thank you it will just be him waiting for a target watching Sash slam into the building and investigating. What type of wounds do you want him to have?
by The Grand Force » Sun Oct 23, 2016 1:27 pm
Atnaia wrote:The Grand Force wrote:Thank you it will just be him waiting for a target watching Sash slam into the building and investigating. What type of wounds do you want him to have?
No. It happened in broad daylight in downtown Port Gray. I severely doubt your gritty mercenary anti-hero would be first on the scene.
by Taziristan » Sun Oct 23, 2016 1:27 pm
Atnaia wrote:The Grand Force wrote:He's a mercenary a gun for hire but he's not a monster he never kills children or women and if the job is too dirty he will out right refuse it, once his ''wife'' and ''son'' were killed he believed he had to avenge them and did that by killing the people who killed them. You said whoever is doing this is targeting the best and brightest TWI has to offer and he is great at being a mercenary, so he wants to find who is doing this and kill them before they kill him even if it means working with people he would rather avoid.
I'll be up front: the concept of this whole story is a Crisis Crossover comic book story akin to Crisis on Infintie Earths or Secret Wars or something.
The bad guy is a cosmic entity, which I thought was implied in the opening quote and picture.
How do you see your guy fitting into that dynamic? Not saying no, just asking about your vision for the character within that concept.
by Atnaia » Sun Oct 23, 2016 1:32 pm
Taziristan wrote:Atnaia wrote:I'll be up front: the concept of this whole story is a Crisis Crossover comic book story akin to Crisis on Infintie Earths or Secret Wars or something.
The bad guy is a cosmic entity, which I thought was implied in the opening quote and picture.
How do you see your guy fitting into that dynamic? Not saying no, just asking about your vision for the character within that concept.
I'm imagining that this cosmic enemy would be smart enough to use the local villains and what not to carry out its grunt work. The path I'm going to have shade follow is a bottom up path. Leads he had, but couldn't understand. He kept trying to route it back to a physical and existing villain, but couldn't imagine how this was being put together. Once our great Heman fell from the sky, I could imagine he was sent into a flurry of confusion, 0ressing his leads harder while looking for anyone who could possess such a power.
Some of the things that would have made him suspicious would be these:
-An unusual level of organization among mainly alien groups and organizations, especially those that communicate telepathically and operate mainly by themselves.
-increase of alien activity in general
-maybe kidnappings of humans, or mysterious deaths related to it? That's depending on the nature of said cosmic foe.
In his attempt to find who could have found the way to kill our local superhero, his path would first lead to the body, probably hacking into government servers to obtain any analysis they may have done to the body. Where he goes after that will be dependent on his findings.
by Atnaia » Sun Oct 23, 2016 1:33 pm
by The Grand Force » Sun Oct 23, 2016 1:34 pm
Atnaia wrote:The Grand Force wrote:Thank you it will just be him waiting for a target watching Sash slam into the building and investigating. What type of wounds do you want him to have?
No. It happened in broad daylight in downtown Port Gray. I severely doubt your gritty mercenary anti-hero would be first on the scene.
It's more likely that you hear about it some other way. I think ti would make more sense if you were on a bounty for a superpowered being and you get there to find them already fried, and you go out to try and find the person who stole your kill or something.
by Atnaia » Sun Oct 23, 2016 1:35 pm
Atnaia wrote:Taziristan wrote:I'm imagining that this cosmic enemy would be smart enough to use the local villains and what not to carry out its grunt work. The path I'm going to have shade follow is a bottom up path. Leads he had, but couldn't understand. He kept trying to route it back to a physical and existing villain, but couldn't imagine how this was being put together. Once our great Heman fell from the sky, I could imagine he was sent into a flurry of confusion, 0ressing his leads harder while looking for anyone who could possess such a power.
Some of the things that would have made him suspicious would be these:
-An unusual level of organization among mainly alien groups and organizations, especially those that communicate telepathically and operate mainly by themselves.
-increase of alien activity in general
-maybe kidnappings of humans, or mysterious deaths related to it? That's depending on the nature of said cosmic foe.
In his attempt to find who could have found the way to kill our local superhero, his path would first lead to the body, probably hacking into government servers to obtain any analysis they may have done to the body. Where he goes after that will be dependent on his findings.
Oh! Oh! Kind of a neater idea came up from that...
As you are investigating the deaths and sort of hitting walls, an entire alien fleet appears above Port Gray (the Commisar seem likely). Everyone is like "so this was all an invasion" and they are like "fuck no, we're refugees! Please take us in, all our most powerful entities are being killed by some sort of energy!" and everyone is like fuuuuuuuuck...
by Atnaia » Sun Oct 23, 2016 1:36 pm
The Grand Force wrote:Atnaia wrote:
No. It happened in broad daylight in downtown Port Gray. I severely doubt your gritty mercenary anti-hero would be first on the scene.
It's more likely that you hear about it some other way. I think ti would make more sense if you were on a bounty for a superpowered being and you get there to find them already fried, and you go out to try and find the person who stole your kill or something.
I'll let a few more heroes die then Ranger getting scared for his own life will break into where ever you will be keeping the dead heroes and try to figure it out himself.
by Taziristan » Sun Oct 23, 2016 1:38 pm
Atnaia wrote:Taziristan wrote:I'm imagining that this cosmic enemy would be smart enough to use the local villains and what not to carry out its grunt work. The path I'm going to have shade follow is a bottom up path. Leads he had, but couldn't understand. He kept trying to route it back to a physical and existing villain, but couldn't imagine how this was being put together. Once our great Heman fell from the sky, I could imagine he was sent into a flurry of confusion, 0ressing his leads harder while looking for anyone who could possess such a power.
Some of the things that would have made him suspicious would be these:
-An unusual level of organization among mainly alien groups and organizations, especially those that communicate telepathically and operate mainly by themselves.
-increase of alien activity in general
-maybe kidnappings of humans, or mysterious deaths related to it? That's depending on the nature of said cosmic foe.
In his attempt to find who could have found the way to kill our local superhero, his path would first lead to the body, probably hacking into government servers to obtain any analysis they may have done to the body. Where he goes after that will be dependent on his findings.
Oh! Oh! Kind of a neater idea came up from that...
As you are investigating the deaths and sort of hitting walls, an entire alien fleet appears above Port Gray (the Commisar seem likely). Everyone is like "so this was all an invasion" and they are like "fuck no, we're refugees! Please take us in, all our most powerful entities are being killed by some sort of energy!" and everyone is like fuuuuuuuuck...
by Atnaia » Sun Oct 23, 2016 1:40 pm
Taziristan wrote:Atnaia wrote:
Oh! Oh! Kind of a neater idea came up from that...
As you are investigating the deaths and sort of hitting walls, an entire alien fleet appears above Port Gray (the Commisar seem likely). Everyone is like "so this was all an invasion" and they are like "fuck no, we're refugees! Please take us in, all our most powerful entities are being killed by some sort of energy!" and everyone is like fuuuuuuuuck...
That would be really interesting. Especially with access to a treasure trove of information like that. Learning the exact nature of the deaths would be priority number one so they could discern the make up of the weapon.
Man thst would make the shade feel small, though. He's ultimately an awesome spy. He gathers info and assassinated people. What can he do vs this kind of enemy? Interesting character development.
by Taziristan » Sun Oct 23, 2016 1:43 pm
by Atnaia » Sun Oct 23, 2016 1:44 pm
Taziristan wrote:You posted faster than I could respond lol. But yeah, that would be an automatic assumption. Hmmm my character would be the type to seek out his allies. I'll let this develop and see which way thr story gets pushed.
As for your last post regarding shades abilities, I was thinking his methods, not really what he is. His motivations are different from a spy, as he's driven by a sense of the greater good. But his methods of gathering information are similar to a Jason Bourne character, while his motivations are batman styled, and his solutions like the punisher.
by The Grand Force » Sun Oct 23, 2016 1:44 pm
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