I mean here as in real life terms.
USN Admin wrote:
Oboi
Hey, I've been fighting a war of territorial expansion over here. I'm at dead sprint.
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by The United Remnants of America » Tue May 03, 2016 7:23 am
USN Admin wrote:

by Altito Asmoro » Tue May 03, 2016 7:52 am
The United Remnants of America wrote:Tangaliro wrote:Some kind of military alliance in Ausozera,right?
#RipAzenyanistan(the nation,not the player)
I mean here as in real life terms.USN Admin wrote:
OboiAltito Asmoro wrote:
But surely USN is able to walk slowly, yes?
Hey, I've been fighting a war of territorial expansion over here. I'm at dead sprint.

by Aeyariss » Wed May 04, 2016 7:30 pm
The United Remnants of America wrote:Hey, I've been fighting a war of territorial expansion over here. I'm at dead sprint.
Altito Asmoro wrote:Hey, I've been fighting region civil war here. I'm at dead walk, unfortunately.

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by Grande Rojo » Thu May 05, 2016 2:31 pm

by New Tuva SSR » Thu May 05, 2016 8:00 pm
OFFICIAL ANNOUNCEMENT FROM THE OFFICE OF THE GRAND ALLIED COMMANDER
- HIGH LEVEL IMPORTANCE
Hello United Socialist Nations, I, your Vice President and Grand Allied Commander have recently finished negotiations with the Minister of Defense of the International Freedom Coalition, or IFC, Salderia. At a to-be-determined date, our alliances will be strengthening our tie by conducting a joint military exercise. Both of our alliances are based on the very fabric of democracy, and I see this as a big step foward to cordial relations with the IFC.
Yours Truly,
Vice President and Grand Allied Commander Tuva
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by Aeyariss » Fri May 06, 2016 8:01 am
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by Topkekkia » Fri May 06, 2016 8:38 am
Great Feng wrote:Is Zolotov needed for a war yet?

by New Tuva SSR » Fri May 06, 2016 9:11 am
Aeyariss wrote:Well I'm putting Ex Crimson Shield on hold since this is a larger event then.
Lykens wrote:You win at life.

by Aeyariss » Fri May 06, 2016 9:12 am
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by The United Remnants of America » Fri May 06, 2016 9:39 am
Aeyariss wrote:New Tuva SSR wrote:Yes, asthe real power hereGAC, Crimson Shield will be put on hold until after our soon operation with the IFC.
Technically the real purpose for that is to test the new GAC. But yeah, might be a good chance to observe your qualities.
Don't embarrass the USN.
Also any particular reason why you apply for the IFC?

by Topkekkia » Fri May 06, 2016 9:48 am
The United Remnants of America wrote:Aeyariss wrote:Technically the real purpose for that is to test the new GAC. But yeah, might be a good chance to observe your qualities.
Don't embarrass the USN.
Also any particular reason why you apply for the IFC?
Tuva wants to be the new men, it's only obvious.
Next he'll start bumming around with SACTO, heh.

by The United Remnants of America » Fri May 06, 2016 10:05 am

by New Tuva SSR » Fri May 06, 2016 10:12 am
The United Remnants of America wrote:Aeyariss wrote:Technically the real purpose for that is to test the new GAC. But yeah, might be a good chance to observe your qualities.
Don't embarrass the USN.
Also any particular reason why you apply for the IFC?
Tuva wants to be the new men, it's only obvious.
Next he'll start bumming around with SACTO, heh.
Lykens wrote:You win at life.

by The United Remnants of America » Fri May 06, 2016 10:14 am

by Aeyariss » Fri May 06, 2016 10:26 am
The United Remnants of America wrote:I'm currently giving a lecture on why you shouldn't have an amphibious fleet carrying a single wave of 100,00 ground troops organized and at their destination in 5-6 days.
The United Remnants of America wrote:
This is very true. A force of 100,000 light infantry would take 50 America-class amphibious assault ships to carry. And that's just light infantry with bare minimum supplies. To protect a force of 50 amphibs, you'd need proportional defensive and support units, so you'd be moving a massive fleet and you'd be moving at the speed of your slowest ship, which would most likely be the Americas, since they can only push roughly 20 knots.
Because if you waited on everyone getting ready at once and to move at once in a massive fleet, it'd take weeks upon weeks to organize, and the logistics train would be strained to deal with so much at once as well as the administration would hate to organize a movement so massive when there's simply more efficient means to do it.
That's why most large-scale movements like that move in waves. So say you have 15 Americas, you'd be moving the troops in a first wave, and then the Americas would transport back to your nation and pick up a second wave and so on. Also while this is happening, and also before your amphibious troops even landed, you'd have soldiers travelling via military air transport and civilian airlines to reach their destination as the first boots on the ground.
Now, this causes an issue, since the size of Ausozera is larger, meaning air transport wouldn't be feasible between continents due to the distance. But we could glaze over that fact in the face of making this go quicker.
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by Aeyariss » Fri May 06, 2016 10:27 am
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by Topkekkia » Fri May 06, 2016 10:30 am

by Paoga » Fri May 06, 2016 10:30 am
![]() THE UNITED SOCIALIST NATIONS OFFICIAL MEMBERSHIP APPLICATION FORM SECTION 1: NATIONAL INFORMATION Full Nation's Name: The Colony of Paoga Short Nation's Name: Paoga RP Population: 37.96million. Government Type: Commune. Head of State: Mfundo Gwembeshe Head of Government: Allo Kelam Political Leaning:Left Brief Introduction of Your Nation: National News Broadcast, Paoga, 6th May 2015: A brief explanation of the events which have occured in the past few months, after the Sudan-Eritrea conflict in December 2015: ◊ 5th of January, 2016: Eritrean troops move are dissipated and moved out of Sudan, due to sanctions imposed by the African Security Committee. ◊ 16th of January, 2016: Eritrean leader, Isaias Afwerki is found dead in his apartment. Country descends into riots due to unsolicited media gossip. ◊ 7th of February, 2016: Sudan strikes back into Eritrea, pushing borders tightly and killing many. Riots continue, civil war ensues. ◊ 19th of February, 2016: African Committee moves in and takes control of Eritrea, electing Mfundo Gwembeshe as the new leader. ◊ 6th of March, 2016: Fighting in Eritrea stops. Sudan is now on the verge of a hostile invasion from the UN due to their previous actions. ◊ 25th of March, 2016: UN and Eritrean troops invade Sudan alongside the aid of the African Committee. ◊ 3rd of May, 2016: Sudan's government implodes and collapses upon it's citizens, essentially disbanding the nation. ◊ 4th of May, 2016: The African Committee elects a socialist commune into the ruined area, naming it Paoga. ◆ Present day, 6th May, 2016: African citizens and the entire world is left devestated at the events. Looking back upon the past three months, over 5million innocent citizens were killed, 2million of which were soldiers. Cuba, as always, is acting compassionately, sending foreign aid money to Paoga. The citizens of Paoga are scared, and thus rally together to support each other. Activist movement groups roam streets, and the police force is almost null. The country needs work - therefore the commune will work, progress, and move forth through these turbulent times to resolve their problems, and enforce a utopian society amongst the nation of Paoga. Brief Overview of Your Nation's Civil Rights Policies*: Excellent. Main focus of Paoga is to stabilise the Civil Rights and political freedoms, within the unfortunate limitations that the failing economy has provided us with. Brief Overview of Your Nation's Economic Policies*: Good economy. Not bad considering we just recovered from a complete governmental overhaul, change of government type, war and civil riots. Brief Overview of Your Nation's Political Freedom*: World Benchmark. Political freedoms are held sacrosanct. Children are educated to love all, to hate no-one. Adults are of course, educated the same. Elections held every 2 years for a new minister of each department in the Commune.
SECTION 2: NATIONAL MILITARY INFORMATION TOTAL TROOPS: >87,000 Total Regular Forces: <45,000 Total Reserve Forces: >42,000 Military Factbook:(None as of yet, we're new- we'll get one sorted if it's really so necessary.) Military Power Category: Land. Your Favourite Warfighting Style: Naval, occasionally land. Overview of the Threat Level & Environment to Your Nation's Security: Civil War and riots, terrorism. Brief Overview of Your Nation Defense Policy: Pacifist. We will defend against those who attack us, for the good of our citizens, but engaging in stark conflict against an innocent nation is not in our policies and will not be a right upheld by any citizens who wish to remain in Paoga. SECTION 3: MISCELLANEOUS ALLIANCE INFORMATION Other than the USN, are you a member of any other organizations?: No. Does your nation holds any ranks or position in other organizations?: N/A Primary reason on why you are applying for this Alliance?: We would like to regain a sense of balance between the schools of politics, and will do so accordingly, so that our citizens may thrive and live happily and prosperously, without a sense of conflict or anguish to disturb their daily ongoings. Why should the USN accept your nation?: If we were to join the USN, we feel that we could enrich the society and bring a better sense of community (it's already great, don't worry too much). We're pretty much always active throughout the day, and we can provide information about our beautiful nation at any moments notice. The USN should accept our nation because we're compassionate, accepting, tolerant and overall friendly and approachable. SECTION 4: PLAYER OOC INFORMATION Have you been involved with any Moderation incidents in the pasts?: Nope, we're a completely law abiding nation. RL Time Zone: GMT, Dublin/London whatever time. Roleplays Credentials: Erm. ERM. We're new to NS, we haven't RPed much. At. All. Do you know any existing USN members that can provide character referral and vouch your membership?: ... No? SECTION 5: DECLARATION I, BY SUBMITTING THIS APPLICATION, HEREBY DECLARES THAT:
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by Topkekkia » Fri May 06, 2016 10:34 am
Paoga wrote:
(Image)
THE UNITED SOCIALIST NATIONS
OFFICIAL MEMBERSHIP APPLICATION FORM
SECTION 1: NATIONAL INFORMATION
Full Nation's Name: The Colony of Paoga
Short Nation's Name: Paoga
RP Population: 37.96million.
Government Type: Commune.
Head of State: Mfundo Gwembeshe
Head of Government: Allo Kelam
Political Leaning:Left
Brief Introduction of Your Nation:
National News Broadcast, Paoga, 6th May 2015:
A brief explanation of the events which have occured in the past few months, after the Sudan-Eritrea conflict in December 2015:
◊ 5th of January, 2016: Eritrean troops move are dissipated and moved out of Sudan, due to sanctions imposed by the African Security Committee.
◊ 16th of January, 2016: Eritrean leader, Isaias Afwerki is found dead in his apartment. Country descends into riots due to unsolicited media gossip.
◊ 7th of February, 2016: Sudan strikes back into Eritrea, pushing borders tightly and killing many. Riots continue, civil war ensues.
◊ 19th of February, 2016: African Committee moves in and takes control of Eritrea, electing Mfundo Gwembeshe as the new leader.
◊ 6th of March, 2016: Fighting in Eritrea stops. Sudan is now on the verge of a hostile invasion from the UN due to their previous actions.
◊ 25th of March, 2016: UN and Eritrean troops invade Sudan alongside the aid of the African Committee.
◊ 3rd of May, 2016: Sudan's government implodes and collapses upon it's citizens, essentially disbanding the nation.
◊ 4th of May, 2016: The African Committee elects a socialist commune into the ruined area, naming it Paoga.
◆ Present day, 6th May, 2016: African citizens and the entire world is left devestated at the events. Looking back upon the past three months, over 5million innocent citizens were killed, 2million of which were soldiers. Cuba, as always, is acting compassionately, sending foreign aid money to Paoga. The citizens of Paoga are scared, and thus rally together to support each other. Activist movement groups roam streets, and the police force is almost null. The country needs work - therefore the commune will work, progress, and move forth through these turbulent times to resolve their problems, and enforce a utopian society amongst the nation of Paoga.
Brief Overview of Your Nation's Civil Rights Policies*: Excellent. Main focus of Paoga is to stabilise the Civil Rights and political freedoms, within the unfortunate limitations that the failing economy has provided us with.
Brief Overview of Your Nation's Economic Policies*: Good economy. Not bad considering we just recovered from a complete governmental overhaul, change of government type, war and civil riots.
Brief Overview of Your Nation's Political Freedom*: World Benchmark. Political freedoms are held sacrosanct. Children are educated to love all, to hate no-one. Adults are of course, educated the same. Elections held every 2 years for a new minister of each department in the Commune.
*(In relations or comparison with socialism)
SECTION 2: NATIONAL MILITARY INFORMATION
TOTAL TROOPS: >87,000
Total Regular Forces: <45,000
Total Reserve Forces: >42,000
Military Factbook:(None as of yet, we're new- we'll get one sorted if it's really so necessary.)
Military Power Category: Land.
Your Favourite Warfighting Style: Naval, occasionally land.
Overview of the Threat Level & Environment to Your Nation's Security: Civil War and riots, terrorism.
Brief Overview of Your Nation Defense Policy: Pacifist. We will defend against those who attack us, for the good of our citizens, but engaging in stark conflict against an innocent nation is not in our policies and will not be a right upheld by any citizens who wish to remain in Paoga.
SECTION 3: MISCELLANEOUS ALLIANCE INFORMATION
Other than the USN, are you a member of any other organizations?: No.
Does your nation holds any ranks or position in other organizations?: N/A
Primary reason on why you are applying for this Alliance?: We would like to regain a sense of balance between the schools of politics, and will do so accordingly, so that our citizens may thrive and live happily and prosperously, without a sense of conflict or anguish to disturb their daily ongoings.
Why should the USN accept your nation?: If we were to join the USN, we feel that we could enrich the society and bring a better sense of community (it's already great, don't worry too much). We're pretty much always active throughout the day, and we can provide information about our beautiful nation at any moments notice. The USN should accept our nation because we're compassionate, accepting, tolerant and overall friendly and approachable.
SECTION 4: PLAYER OOC INFORMATION
Have you been involved with any Moderation incidents in the pasts?: Nope, we're a completely law abiding nation.
RL Time Zone: GMT, Dublin/London whatever time.
Roleplays Credentials: Erm. ERM. We're new to NS, we haven't RPed much. At. All.
Do you know any existing USN members that can provide character referral and vouch your membership?: ... No?
SECTION 5: DECLARATION
I, BY SUBMITTING THIS APPLICATION, HEREBY DECLARES THAT:
- ALL THE INFORMATION I HAVE PROVIDED IS TRUE AND IS NOT FALSIFIED;
- I ACCEPT AND WILLING TO ADHERE TO THE RULES AND REGULATIONS AS WELL AS THE WRITTEN OR UNWRITTEN NORMS THE USN AT ALL TIMES WITHOUT FAILURE;
- I WILL TRY MY BEST OF ABILITIES TO BECOME AN ACTIVE PARTICIPANT OF THE USN THREAD AND ITS ACTIVITY
#RED_IS_MIGHT
TRACKING TAG:DO NOT REMOVE

by The United Remnants of America » Fri May 06, 2016 10:41 am
Topkekkia wrote:The United Remnants of America wrote:Hopefully.
I'm currently giving a lecture on why you shouldn't have an amphibious fleet carrying a single wave of 100,00 ground troops organized and at their destination in 5-6 days.
Good. I have a legitimate IC reason for being able to organize large deployments quickly, and that's just a result of me clustering most of my forces in defensible locations and letting thepeasantsnoble proletariat hold the enemy off for awhile. It lowers my overall defense, but a good offense makes a good defense as well. But even then, I don't go for 100k deployments. Ever.

by Topkekkia » Fri May 06, 2016 10:44 am
The United Remnants of America wrote:Topkekkia wrote:Good. I have a legitimate IC reason for being able to organize large deployments quickly, and that's just a result of me clustering most of my forces in defensible locations and letting thepeasantsnoble proletariat hold the enemy off for awhile. It lowers my overall defense, but a good offense makes a good defense as well. But even then, I don't go for 100k deployments. Ever.
I mean, in that same war, I've mobilized 400,000 soldiers, but the difference is that I've ICly been doing military buildups for weeks on the border of the nation I'm invading, whereas everyone else has to load up after I invaded and come to me.
100k deployments is possible, it just takes time.

by Paoga » Fri May 06, 2016 12:06 pm
Topkekkia wrote:Paoga wrote:
(Image)
THE UNITED SOCIALIST NATIONS
OFFICIAL MEMBERSHIP APPLICATION FORM
SECTION 1: NATIONAL INFORMATION
Full Nation's Name: The Colony of Paoga
Short Nation's Name: Paoga
RP Population: 37.96million.
Government Type: Commune.
Head of State: Mfundo Gwembeshe
Head of Government: Allo Kelam
Political Leaning:Left
Brief Introduction of Your Nation:
National News Broadcast, Paoga, 6th May 2015:
A brief explanation of the events which have occured in the past few months, after the Sudan-Eritrea conflict in December 2015:
◊ 5th of January, 2016: Eritrean troops move are dissipated and moved out of Sudan, due to sanctions imposed by the African Security Committee.
◊ 16th of January, 2016: Eritrean leader, Isaias Afwerki is found dead in his apartment. Country descends into riots due to unsolicited media gossip.
◊ 7th of February, 2016: Sudan strikes back into Eritrea, pushing borders tightly and killing many. Riots continue, civil war ensues.
◊ 19th of February, 2016: African Committee moves in and takes control of Eritrea, electing Mfundo Gwembeshe as the new leader.
◊ 6th of March, 2016: Fighting in Eritrea stops. Sudan is now on the verge of a hostile invasion from the UN due to their previous actions.
◊ 25th of March, 2016: UN and Eritrean troops invade Sudan alongside the aid of the African Committee.
◊ 3rd of May, 2016: Sudan's government implodes and collapses upon it's citizens, essentially disbanding the nation.
◊ 4th of May, 2016: The African Committee elects a socialist commune into the ruined area, naming it Paoga.
◆ Present day, 6th May, 2016: African citizens and the entire world is left devestated at the events. Looking back upon the past three months, over 5million innocent citizens were killed, 2million of which were soldiers. Cuba, as always, is acting compassionately, sending foreign aid money to Paoga. The citizens of Paoga are scared, and thus rally together to support each other. Activist movement groups roam streets, and the police force is almost null. The country needs work - therefore the commune will work, progress, and move forth through these turbulent times to resolve their problems, and enforce a utopian society amongst the nation of Paoga.
Brief Overview of Your Nation's Civil Rights Policies*: Excellent. Main focus of Paoga is to stabilise the Civil Rights and political freedoms, within the unfortunate limitations that the failing economy has provided us with.
Brief Overview of Your Nation's Economic Policies*: Good economy. Not bad considering we just recovered from a complete governmental overhaul, change of government type, war and civil riots.
Brief Overview of Your Nation's Political Freedom*: World Benchmark. Political freedoms are held sacrosanct. Children are educated to love all, to hate no-one. Adults are of course, educated the same. Elections held every 2 years for a new minister of each department in the Commune.
*(In relations or comparison with socialism)
SECTION 2: NATIONAL MILITARY INFORMATION
TOTAL TROOPS: >87,000
Total Regular Forces: <45,000
Total Reserve Forces: >42,000
Military Factbook:(None as of yet, we're new- we'll get one sorted if it's really so necessary.)
Military Power Category: Land.
Your Favourite Warfighting Style: Naval, occasionally land.
Overview of the Threat Level & Environment to Your Nation's Security: Civil War and riots, terrorism.
Brief Overview of Your Nation Defense Policy: Pacifist. We will defend against those who attack us, for the good of our citizens, but engaging in stark conflict against an innocent nation is not in our policies and will not be a right upheld by any citizens who wish to remain in Paoga.
SECTION 3: MISCELLANEOUS ALLIANCE INFORMATION
Other than the USN, are you a member of any other organizations?: No.
Does your nation holds any ranks or position in other organizations?: N/A
Primary reason on why you are applying for this Alliance?: We would like to regain a sense of balance between the schools of politics, and will do so accordingly, so that our citizens may thrive and live happily and prosperously, without a sense of conflict or anguish to disturb their daily ongoings.
Why should the USN accept your nation?: If we were to join the USN, we feel that we could enrich the society and bring a better sense of community (it's already great, don't worry too much). We're pretty much always active throughout the day, and we can provide information about our beautiful nation at any moments notice. The USN should accept our nation because we're compassionate, accepting, tolerant and overall friendly and approachable.
SECTION 4: PLAYER OOC INFORMATION
Have you been involved with any Moderation incidents in the pasts?: Nope, we're a completely law abiding nation.
RL Time Zone: GMT, Dublin/London whatever time.
Roleplays Credentials: Erm. ERM. We're new to NS, we haven't RPed much. At. All.
Do you know any existing USN members that can provide character referral and vouch your membership?: ... No?
SECTION 5: DECLARATION
I, BY SUBMITTING THIS APPLICATION, HEREBY DECLARES THAT:
- ALL THE INFORMATION I HAVE PROVIDED IS TRUE AND IS NOT FALSIFIED;
- I ACCEPT AND WILLING TO ADHERE TO THE RULES AND REGULATIONS AS WELL AS THE WRITTEN OR UNWRITTEN NORMS THE USN AT ALL TIMES WITHOUT FAILURE;
- I WILL TRY MY BEST OF ABILITIES TO BECOME AN ACTIVE PARTICIPANT OF THE USN THREAD AND ITS ACTIVITY
#RED_IS_MIGHT
TRACKING TAG:DO NOT REMOVE
While I would like to accept your application, the lack of an RP sample is a bit problematic. Would you mind writing one briefly here? It doesn't have to correspond to anything real, just a taste of your writing abilities.
"Get out! Out of the house, whore!" said the Sudanese officer, gesturing with his rifle. The woman sat crying in the corner, holding her child in one hand and covering it's eyes with the other. She had black, soft skin, and spoke properly. Another woman, perhaps her mother, spoke up against the officer.
"You will leave our abode, or face the creator's wrath. Now, please." she gestured and stood firmly.
"Who are you, old woman, for fucks sake!" he pushed her to the floor, beside the other girl.
Standing up again, resiliently, she spoke out once again. "You will leave our abode, or face the creator's wrath. Now, please." she gestured again.
"What the-- SIT DOWN!" he pushed her against the wall, and the sound of brittle bones could be heard cracking. She cried out, but stood up once again.
"Man, you will leave our a-abode, or f-face the creat--"
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by Topkekkia » Fri May 06, 2016 12:10 pm
Paoga wrote:Topkekkia wrote:
While I would like to accept your application, the lack of an RP sample is a bit problematic. Would you mind writing one briefly here? It doesn't have to correspond to anything real, just a taste of your writing abilities.
I can most certainly do that.Uando roamed the streets hopelessly. The soles on his worn shoes were starting to unpeel, and the boiling sun hit him like a speeding car. The Sudan Eritrean conflict had left his entire family scattered, torn, even. Between themselves. They were greedy. All the bloody lot of them.
Removing the G6xY Handgun from it's holster, he shot down two soldiers which had just turned the corner. A killing machine. He felt... controlled. Controlled in a way in which he could not perform rudimentary tasks, and could not help his wife and children from being killed by monsters. Controlled, in a way that he himself was unable to mentally grip.
It was time for revenge. That was it. Revenge, his sole purpose for this journey..."Get out! Out of the house, whore!" said the Sudanese officer, gesturing with his rifle. The woman sat crying in the corner, holding her child in one hand and covering it's eyes with the other. She had black, soft skin, and spoke properly. Another woman, perhaps her mother, spoke up against the officer.
"You will leave our abode, or face the creator's wrath. Now, please." she gestured and stood firmly.
"Who are you, old woman, for fucks sake!" he pushed her to the floor, beside the other girl.
Standing up again, resiliently, she spoke out once again. "You will leave our abode, or face the creator's wrath. Now, please." she gestured again.
"What the-- SIT DOWN!" he pushed her against the wall, and the sound of brittle bones could be heard cracking. She cried out, but stood up once again.
"Man, you will leave our a-abode, or f-face the creat--"
That was it. That was how it had happened. It took the officer five bullets before she finally fell to the floor and stopped mumbling. Uando looked at his bloody, dirty hands.
"What have we become?"
Moving onwards another 100 yards, he found three dead bodies, a broken car, and several bags packed with vitamins and mineral; probably heading to a nearby hospital. He didn't know these regions well. All he knew was home. Sweet home. Sweet, war-torn home.
Sorry if it's brief and not looked over, tad busy at the mo. Hit me up with what you think; I've had experiences with story writing but not RP in a NS applicable form, or not that it's been important to me in the past.

by Paoga » Fri May 06, 2016 12:12 pm
Topkekkia wrote:Paoga wrote:I can most certainly do that.Uando roamed the streets hopelessly. The soles on his worn shoes were starting to unpeel, and the boiling sun hit him like a speeding car. The Sudan Eritrean conflict had left his entire family scattered, torn, even. Between themselves. They were greedy. All the bloody lot of them.
Removing the G6xY Handgun from it's holster, he shot down two soldiers which had just turned the corner. A killing machine. He felt... controlled. Controlled in a way in which he could not perform rudimentary tasks, and could not help his wife and children from being killed by monsters. Controlled, in a way that he himself was unable to mentally grip.
It was time for revenge. That was it. Revenge, his sole purpose for this journey..."Get out! Out of the house, whore!" said the Sudanese officer, gesturing with his rifle. The woman sat crying in the corner, holding her child in one hand and covering it's eyes with the other. She had black, soft skin, and spoke properly. Another woman, perhaps her mother, spoke up against the officer.
"You will leave our abode, or face the creator's wrath. Now, please." she gestured and stood firmly.
"Who are you, old woman, for fucks sake!" he pushed her to the floor, beside the other girl.
Standing up again, resiliently, she spoke out once again. "You will leave our abode, or face the creator's wrath. Now, please." she gestured again.
"What the-- SIT DOWN!" he pushed her against the wall, and the sound of brittle bones could be heard cracking. She cried out, but stood up once again.
"Man, you will leave our a-abode, or f-face the creat--"
That was it. That was how it had happened. It took the officer five bullets before she finally fell to the floor and stopped mumbling. Uando looked at his bloody, dirty hands.
"What have we become?"
Moving onwards another 100 yards, he found three dead bodies, a broken car, and several bags packed with vitamins and mineral; probably heading to a nearby hospital. He didn't know these regions well. All he knew was home. Sweet home. Sweet, war-torn home.
Sorry if it's brief and not looked over, tad busy at the mo. Hit me up with what you think; I've had experiences with story writing but not RP in a NS applicable form, or not that it's been important to me in the past.
Good writing. ACCEPTED, glad to have you. Also, NS applicable RP format isn't very different from anywhere else. Basically, the only difference is that some people might take more of a story centric focus while others take a purely tactical approach to the whole affair.
- Democracy
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- Punk
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- Pacifism
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- Fascism
- Capitalism
- Racism
- Hate against religions
- Anyone who doesn't like CHON
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I am currently listening to: Refused, 'Elektra
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