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Luepola
Ambassador
 
Posts: 1621
Founded: Sep 22, 2013
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Postby Luepola » Sat Mar 26, 2016 9:18 am

T O P O F T H E P A G E

Carry on.
The 'e' is silent.
Riding the Trump Train to the White House

Pro: Absolute Freedom of Speech
i am a trigendered female trans-arab jedi knight please use incorrect pronouns

Anti: Political Correctness, Abuses of Power


Enough is enough.

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Lapovo
Civilian
 
Posts: 1
Founded: Mar 27, 2016
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Postby Lapovo » Mon Mar 28, 2016 1:30 am

Application to Vasarden
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Nation Name:Lapovo
  • Short:PSR Lapovo
  • Formal: Proletarian Socialist Republics of Lapovo
Total Population (must be ≤200 million except in extremely limited cases):55,982,000
Capital City:Breznik

Ethnic Statistics (% of pop.):Northern Lapovonic(Serbian):45%, Southern Lapovonic(Bulgarian):40%, Chalcian(Greek):14%, Other:1%
National Language(s):Serbian, Bulgarian
Official Language(s):Serbian, Bulgarian

Total Military Personnel (must be ≤1% of your national population, unless you have a specific reason for going above this):600,000
  • Active Military Personnel:250,000
  • Reserve Military Personnel:350,000

Human Development Index rating:0.802
Governmental System (Presidential republic, One-party state, etc.): Single-Party Socialist State
Economic System (Nordic Model, American School, etc.):Yugoslav Economic System(Under Tito)
  • GDP Total (PPP):$343.931 billion
  • GDP Per capita (PPP):$31,720

Roleplay Examples:(I am Gorbatov from Atlas)1,2,3
Do you agree to follow the Vasari Accords:Yes
Location on map*:Lapovo's location is north of Chalcia

*Be specific in your description of this, or outline a plot on the map using a photo-editor, save it and upload it, and link the picture. Please be reasonable with plot sizes, and remember that your application may be contested due to the area you choose not being realistic in contrast to the ethnic demographics and background of the area.

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Luepola
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Posts: 1621
Founded: Sep 22, 2013
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Postby Luepola » Mon Mar 28, 2016 12:28 pm

Lapovo wrote:
Application to Vasarden
all questions require an answer

Nation Name:Lapovo
  • Short:PSR Lapovo
  • Formal: Proletarian Socialist Republics of Lapovo
Total Population (must be ≤200 million except in extremely limited cases):55,982,000
Capital City:Breznik

Ethnic Statistics (% of pop.):Northern Lapovonic(Serbian):45%, Southern Lapovonic(Bulgarian):40%, Chalcian(Greek):14%, Other:1%
National Language(s):Serbian, Bulgarian
Official Language(s):Serbian, Bulgarian

Total Military Personnel (must be ≤1% of your national population, unless you have a specific reason for going above this):600,000
  • Active Military Personnel:250,000
  • Reserve Military Personnel:350,000

Human Development Index rating:0.802
Governmental System (Presidential republic, One-party state, etc.): Single-Party Socialist State
Economic System (Nordic Model, American School, etc.):Yugoslav Economic System(Under Tito)
  • GDP Total (PPP):$343.931 billion
  • GDP Per capita (PPP):$31,720

Roleplay Examples:(I am Gorbatov from Atlas)1,2,3
Do you agree to follow the Vasari Accords:Yes
Location on map*:Lapovo's location is north of Chalcia

*Be specific in your description of this, or outline a plot on the map using a photo-editor, save it and upload it, and link the picture. Please be reasonable with plot sizes, and remember that your application may be contested due to the area you choose not being realistic in contrast to the ethnic demographics and background of the area.


Accepted. Welcome to Vasarden!
The 'e' is silent.
Riding the Trump Train to the White House

Pro: Absolute Freedom of Speech
i am a trigendered female trans-arab jedi knight please use incorrect pronouns

Anti: Political Correctness, Abuses of Power


Enough is enough.

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Vallent
Lobbyist
 
Posts: 24
Founded: Apr 13, 2015
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Postby Vallent » Tue Mar 29, 2016 8:12 am

Kaalmi wrote:
Vallent wrote:
Application to Vasarden
all questions require an answer

Nation Name: Vallent
  • Short: Vallent
  • Formal:
The Republic of Vallent
Total Population (must be ≤200 million except in extremely limited cases): 68,560,800
Capital City: Occident

Ethnic Statistics (% of pop.): 82% Vallentian (Anglo-Norman), 10% Evalys (German), 5% Iberian, 1% Celtic (long name :p), and 1% Insaeldor (Nordic)

National Language(s): None at federal level
Official Language(s): English

Total Military Personnel (must be ≤1% of your national population, unless you have a specific reason for going above this):
  • Active Military Personnel: 225,000
  • Reserve Military Personnel:
45,800

Human Development Index rating: .915 High
Governmental System (Presidential republic, One-party state, etc.): Federal president constitutional republic
Economic System (Nordic Model, American School, etc.): American School.
  • GDP Total (PPP): $3,001,560,000
  • GDP Per capita (PPP): $43,779


Roleplay Examples: prompt please?
Do you agree to follow the Vasari Accords: I agree
Location on map*: The Anglo-Norman region.

*Be specific in your description of this, or outline a plot on the map using a photo-editor, save it and upload it, and link the picture. Please be reasonable with plot sizes, and remember that your application may be contested due to the area you choose not being realistic in contrast to the ethnic demographics and background of the area.


Your HDI is rather high for a nation of 68 million. A HDI of the high .800's is more acceptable. So, if you bring your HDI down, there should be no other problem. Also, please outline a specific plot.

Prompt: A suppressed ethnic minority holds violent riots nationwide demanding for equality. Using either diplomacy or your military (or both), you must stop the riots and restore peace.


Right, I'll fix that, and sorry for the late response I'm on vacation. I'll have a map and the finished prompt to you shortly.

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Aknembar
Civilian
 
Posts: 1
Founded: Apr 03, 2016
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Postby Aknembar » Sun Apr 03, 2016 8:44 am

Application to Vasarden
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Nation Name: Aknembar
  • Short: PSAR Aknembar
  • Formal: People's Socialist Arab Republic of Aknembar

Total Population (must be ?200 million except in extremely limited cases): 79,633,472
Capital City: Ratanem

Ethnic Statistics (% of pop.): 63% Aknembarans; 34% Latkems; 3% others/minor ethnic groups
National Language(s): Latkemian, Aknembaran, Arabic
Official Language(s): Aknemberan

Total Military Personnel (must be ?1% of your national population, unless you have a specific reason for going above this): 1,083,630
  • Active Military Personnel: 673,400
  • Reserve Military Personnel: 410,230
Human Development Index rating: 0.521
Governmental System (Presidential republic, One-party state, etc.): Dominant-party presidential republic
Economic System (Nordic Model, American School, etc.): Market socialism
  • GDP Total (PPP): $784.42bn
  • GDP Per capita (PPP): $984.0

Roleplay Examples: (Btw, it's me Srpska)
viewtopic.php?f=31&t=345269
viewtopic.php?f=31&t=363581&start=50
viewtopic.php?f=31&t=347071&start=25
Do you agree to follow the Vasari Accords: Yes, I do.
Location on map*: In Dark Green color, south of Tarazakhstan, west of Huda and east of Lapovo

*Be specific in your description of this, or outline a plot on the map using a photo-editor, save it and upload it, and link the picture. Please be reasonable with plot sizes, and remember that your application may be contested due to the area you choose not being realistic in contrast to the ethnic demographics and background of the area.

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District XIV
Negotiator
 
Posts: 5990
Founded: Dec 01, 2012
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Postby District XIV » Sun Apr 03, 2016 12:56 pm

Aknembar wrote:
Application to Vasarden
all questions require an answer

Nation Name: Aknembar
  • Short: PSAR Aknembar
  • Formal: People's Socialist Arab Republic of Aknembar

Total Population (must be ?200 million except in extremely limited cases): 79,633,472
Capital City: Ratanem

Ethnic Statistics (% of pop.): 63% Aknembarans; 34% Latkems; 3% others/minor ethnic groups
National Language(s): Latkemian, Aknembaran, Arabic
Official Language(s): Aknemberan

Total Military Personnel (must be ?1% of your national population, unless you have a specific reason for going above this): 1,083,630
  • Active Military Personnel: 673,400
  • Reserve Military Personnel: 410,230
Human Development Index rating: 0.521
Governmental System (Presidential republic, One-party state, etc.): Dominant-party presidential republic
Economic System (Nordic Model, American School, etc.): Market socialism
  • GDP Total (PPP): $784.42bn
  • GDP Per capita (PPP): $984.0

Roleplay Examples: (Btw, it's me Srpska)
viewtopic.php?f=31&t=345269
viewtopic.php?f=31&t=363581&start=50
viewtopic.php?f=31&t=347071&start=25
Do you agree to follow the Vasari Accords: Yes, I do.
Location on map*: In Dark Green color, south of Tarazakhstan, west of Huda and east of Lapovo

*Be specific in your description of this, or outline a plot on the map using a photo-editor, save it and upload it, and link the picture. Please be reasonable with plot sizes, and remember that your application may be contested due to the area you choose not being realistic in contrast to the ethnic demographics and background of the area.

Accepted.

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Bas Tonal
Secretary
 
Posts: 31
Founded: Jun 26, 2008
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Postby Bas Tonal » Mon Apr 04, 2016 3:12 pm

Application to Vasarden
all questions require an answer

Nation Name: Bas Tonal
  • Short: Tonal
  • Formal:
The Republic of Tonal (Bas is just a player name)
Total Population (must be ≤200 million except in extremely limited cases): 147,670,000
Capital City: Ixtlambo

Ethnic Statistics (% of pop.): Mangdne (40%), Lungo (25%), Koazande (20%), Kiluba (10%), Vasaluba (5%)
National Language(s): Bas Bangi, Magdungo (Lingua franca pidgin of the Mangdne and Lungo tribes), and Vasaluba
Official Language(s): French

Total Military Personnel (must be ≤1% of your national population, unless you have a specific reason for going above this):
  • Active Military Personnel: 130,000
  • Reserve Military Personnel:
200,000

Human Development Index rating: .483 (Low)
Governmental System (Presidential republic, One-party state, etc.): One party state (military dictatorship)
Economic System (Nordic Model, American School, etc.): Mixed market capitalism
  • GDP Total (PPP): $146,000,000,000
  • GDP Per capita (PPP):
$900

Roleplay Examples: I've done a lot of offsite RPing, but as Tonal, I have this:
viewtopic.php?f=5&t=365124

I also played as the opposing force (Dienstad African National Congress) in this RP, though I no longer control that account.
viewtopic.php?f=5&t=333037

Do you agree to follow the Vasari Accords: Yes
Location on map*: As agreed, am waiting for the Africa continent to be returned. I'm also not picky, give me a relatively large plot so I can have low population density, that's about all I ask (and that's of course negotiable).

*Be specific in your description of this, or outline a plot on the map using a photo-editor, save it and upload it, and link the picture. Please be reasonable with plot sizes, and remember that your application may be contested due to the area you choose not being realistic in contrast to the ethnic demographics and background of the area.



The basic outline for the Republic of Tonal is a military dictatorship not unlike Zaire under Mobutu, but with less executive corruption. The president, who I have yet to name as I'm reconfiguring Tonal from a Nigeria/Libya clone into a sub-Saharan style nation, genuinely wants to progress Tonal, but is impeded by corruption at the lower levels and the generally poor standing of the country. Its an overwhelming task attempting to slowly build Tonal into a modern nation, with infrastructure, education, and industry, given the rural nature of the country and the relative isolation of large pockets of the population in dense rainforest.

Internally, there'll be a number of tribal insurrections and civil discontent. Some tribes want to secede and form their own nations, some military commanders are overly ambitious, and other political groups want to see the country move into other directions, be it towards a democratic republic, or towards a Maoist communist state. The population is relatively huge, mostly in poverty, and has little hope of a better life. I basically plan to RP Tonal as a country with enormous problems and turmoil, not an economic and military powerhouse that's typical among most NS countries.
Last edited by Bas Tonal on Mon Apr 04, 2016 3:30 pm, edited 2 times in total.

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District XIV
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Posts: 5990
Founded: Dec 01, 2012
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Postby District XIV » Mon Apr 04, 2016 3:54 pm

Bas Tonal wrote:
Application to Vasarden
all questions require an answer

Nation Name: Bas Tonal
  • Short: Tonal
  • Formal:
The Republic of Tonal (Bas is just a player name)
Total Population (must be ≤200 million except in extremely limited cases): 147,670,000
Capital City: Ixtlambo

Ethnic Statistics (% of pop.): Mangdne (40%), Lungo (25%), Koazande (20%), Kiluba (10%), Vasaluba (5%)
National Language(s): Bas Bangi, Magdungo (Lingua franca pidgin of the Mangdne and Lungo tribes), and Vasaluba
Official Language(s): French

Total Military Personnel (must be ≤1% of your national population, unless you have a specific reason for going above this):
  • Active Military Personnel: 130,000
  • Reserve Military Personnel:
200,000

Human Development Index rating: .483 (Low)
Governmental System (Presidential republic, One-party state, etc.): One party state (military dictatorship)
Economic System (Nordic Model, American School, etc.): Mixed market capitalism
  • GDP Total (PPP): $146,000,000,000
  • GDP Per capita (PPP):
$900

Roleplay Examples: I've done a lot of offsite RPing, but as Tonal, I have this:
viewtopic.php?f=5&t=365124

I also played as the opposing force (Dienstad African National Congress) in this RP, though I no longer control that account.
viewtopic.php?f=5&t=333037

Do you agree to follow the Vasari Accords: Yes
Location on map*: As agreed, am waiting for the Africa continent to be returned. I'm also not picky, give me a relatively large plot so I can have low population density, that's about all I ask (and that's of course negotiable).

*Be specific in your description of this, or outline a plot on the map using a photo-editor, save it and upload it, and link the picture. Please be reasonable with plot sizes, and remember that your application may be contested due to the area you choose not being realistic in contrast to the ethnic demographics and background of the area.



The basic outline for the Republic of Tonal is a military dictatorship not unlike Zaire under Mobutu, but with less executive corruption. The president, who I have yet to name as I'm reconfiguring Tonal from a Nigeria/Libya clone into a sub-Saharan style nation, genuinely wants to progress Tonal, but is impeded by corruption at the lower levels and the generally poor standing of the country. Its an overwhelming task attempting to slowly build Tonal into a modern nation, with infrastructure, education, and industry, given the rural nature of the country and the relative isolation of large pockets of the population in dense rainforest.

Internally, there'll be a number of tribal insurrections and civil discontent. Some tribes want to secede and form their own nations, some military commanders are overly ambitious, and other political groups want to see the country move into other directions, be it towards a democratic republic, or towards a Maoist communist state. The population is relatively huge, mostly in poverty, and has little hope of a better life. I basically plan to RP Tonal as a country with enormous problems and turmoil, not an economic and military powerhouse that's typical among most NS countries.

Accepted. I'll make sure Luepola (re)adds the African continent as soon as he can.

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Sudeheim
Civil Servant
 
Posts: 10
Founded: Apr 06, 2016
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Postby Sudeheim » Thu Apr 07, 2016 11:57 am

Application to Vasarden
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Nation Name: Südeheim
  • Short: Südeheim
  • Formal: The Republic of Südeheim
Total Population (must be ≤200 million except in extremely limited cases): ~29,000,000
Capital City: Kasenberg

Ethnic Statistics (% of pop.): Sudhen 84%, Vierz 15%, Luepolan 1%
National Language(s): English, Vierz
Official Language(s): Vierz

Total Military Personnel (must be ≤1% of your national population, unless you have a specific reason for going above this):
  • Active Military Personnel: ~12,000
  • Reserve Military Personnel: ~19,000

Human Development Index rating: 0.785
Governmental System (Presidential republic, One-party state, etc.): Presidential republic (indirect democracy)
Economic System (Nordic Model, American School, etc.): Nordic model
  • GDP Total (PPP): $198 billion USD
  • GDP Per capita (PPP): $11,291 USD

Roleplay Examples: kek, topkek, yes
Do you agree to follow the Vasari Accords: Yes
Location on map*: In pink

*Be specific in your description of this, or outline a plot on the map using a photo-editor, save it and upload it, and link the picture. Please be reasonable with plot sizes, and remember that your application may be contested due to the area you choose not being realistic in contrast to the ethnic demographics and background of the area.
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District XIV
Negotiator
 
Posts: 5990
Founded: Dec 01, 2012
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Postby District XIV » Thu Apr 07, 2016 12:22 pm

In case it was not clear, Südeheim has been accepted.

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Dastakert
Civilian
 
Posts: 1
Founded: Apr 08, 2016
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Postby Dastakert » Fri Apr 08, 2016 9:42 pm

Application to Vasarden
all questions require an answer

Nation Name:
  • Short: Dastakert
  • Formal: Republic of Dastakert
Total Population (must be ≤200 million except in extremely limited cases): 17 million

Capital City: Syunik

Ethnic Statistics (% of pop.): 99% Armenian
National Language(s): Armenian
Official Language(s): Armenian

Total Military Personnel (must be ≤1% of your national population, unless you have a specific reason for going above this): 170,000
  • Active Military Personnel: 85,000
  • Reserve Military Personnel: 85,000

Human Development Index rating: .789
Governmental System (Presidential republic, One-party state, etc.): Presidential Republic
Economic System (Nordic Model, American School, etc.): American School
  • GDP Total (PPP): $20.831 billion
  • GDP Per capita (PPP): $6,128

Roleplay Examples:
Do you agree to follow the Vasari Accords: Yes
Location on map*: On hold

*Be specific in your description of this, or outline a plot on the map using a photo-editor, save it and upload it, and link the picture. Please be reasonable with plot sizes, and remember that your application may be contested due to the area you choose not being realistic in contrast to the ethnic demographics and background of the area.

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Gham and Ftel
Political Columnist
 
Posts: 3
Founded: Apr 14, 2016
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Postby Gham and Ftel » Fri Apr 15, 2016 12:40 pm

Application to Vasarden
all questions require an answer

Nation Name: Gham and Ftel
  • Short: The Republic of Gham and Ftel, La Republique de Gham et Ftel
  • Formal:The Glorious Revolutionary Republic of Gham and Ftel, La Republique Revolutionnaire Glorieuse de Gham et Ftel
Total Population (must be ≤200 million except in extremely limited cases): NS says it's 6 million, but more like 20 million
Capital City: Ngu'dto

Ethnic Statistics (% of pop.): 66.2% Ftelian (Mainland, dominant Tribes), 18.1% Ghamian (Island Tribes), 10.5% Terit (Non-Ftelian mainland tribes), and 5.2% Qinnish (French)
National Language(s): English, French, Gham-Ftel, and Dindu
Official Language(s): English, French, Gham-Ftel

Total Military Personnel (must be ≤1% of your national population, unless you have a specific reason for going above this):
  • Active Military Personnel: 67,000
  • Reserve Military Personnel:
105,000

Human Development Index rating: 0.452
Governmental System (Presidential republic, One-party state, etc.): Effective dictatorship where elections are held when leader dies.
Economic System (Nordic Model, American School, etc.): Very corrupt "socialist" economy. Actually extremely capitalistic with massive state presence in the economy
  • GDP Total (PPP): $17,668,100,000
  • GDP Per capita (PPP):
$883.40
All economic info can be found here: http://www.broomdces.com/nseconomy/nati ... m+and+ftel

Roleplay Examples: I'm experienced in roleplay, but I don't have anything specific to point to. I've had previous nations that RP a lot but I became innactive several years ago and am just now coming back. I'm willing to prove myself however, I'd like to rp first with Bas Tonal (why I want to have a border with him)
Do you agree to follow the Vasari Accords: yes
Location on map*: South East of Bas Tonal, starting from the central-african lake (not sure of the name) and going along eastward before veering down towards the bay with all the islands (those islands are also a part of the country). I'm not to concerned with exact borders, but something like this would be great so long as I border Bas Tonal. Borders would probably look similar to Ghana's.

*Be specific in your description of this, or outline a plot on the map using a photo-editor, save it and upload it, and link the picture. Please be reasonable with plot sizes, and remember that your application may be contested due to the area you choose not being realistic in contrast to the ethnic demographics and background of the area.

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District XIV
Negotiator
 
Posts: 5990
Founded: Dec 01, 2012
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Postby District XIV » Fri Apr 15, 2016 3:17 pm

Gham and Ftel wrote:
Application to Vasarden
all questions require an answer

Nation Name: Gham and Ftel
  • Short: The Republic of Gham and Ftel, La Republique de Gham et Ftel
  • Formal:The Glorious Revolutionary Republic of Gham and Ftel, La Republique Revolutionnaire Glorieuse de Gham et Ftel
Total Population (must be ≤200 million except in extremely limited cases): NS says it's 6 million, but more like 20 million
Capital City: Ngu'dto

Ethnic Statistics (% of pop.): 66.2% Ftelian (Mainland, dominant Tribes), 18.1% Ghamian (Island Tribes), 10.5% Terit (Non-Ftelian mainland tribes), and 5.2% Qinnish (French)
National Language(s): English, French, Gham-Ftel, and Dindu
Official Language(s): English, French, Gham-Ftel

Total Military Personnel (must be ≤1% of your national population, unless you have a specific reason for going above this):
  • Active Military Personnel: 67,000
  • Reserve Military Personnel:
105,000

Human Development Index rating: 0.452
Governmental System (Presidential republic, One-party state, etc.): Effective dictatorship where elections are held when leader dies.
Economic System (Nordic Model, American School, etc.): Very corrupt "socialist" economy. Actually extremely capitalistic with massive state presence in the economy
  • GDP Total (PPP): $17,668,100,000
  • GDP Per capita (PPP):
$883.40
All economic info can be found here: http://www.broomdces.com/nseconomy/nati ... m+and+ftel

Roleplay Examples: I'm experienced in roleplay, but I don't have anything specific to point to. I've had previous nations that RP a lot but I became innactive several years ago and am just now coming back. I'm willing to prove myself however, I'd like to rp first with Bas Tonal (why I want to have a border with him)
Do you agree to follow the Vasari Accords: yes
Location on map*: South East of Bas Tonal, starting from the central-african lake (not sure of the name) and going along eastward before veering down towards the bay with all the islands (those islands are also a part of the country). I'm not to concerned with exact borders, but something like this would be great so long as I border Bas Tonal. Borders would probably look similar to Ghana's.

*Be specific in your description of this, or outline a plot on the map using a photo-editor, save it and upload it, and link the picture. Please be reasonable with plot sizes, and remember that your application may be contested due to the area you choose not being realistic in contrast to the ethnic demographics and background of the area.

I want to disclaim that, firstly, we don't use NS stats in Vasarden, so whatever information is given on your nation's page and associated websites (as a result of answers to issues) doesn't mean anything here.

Secondly, I don't see any outlying issues with your application other than the lack of RP examples provided. If you could link to an RP or two you've done on your other nations (and prove those nations are yours), or write up a sample right here, that would solve this problem.

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Gham and Ftel
Political Columnist
 
Posts: 3
Founded: Apr 14, 2016
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Postby Gham and Ftel » Fri Apr 15, 2016 5:26 pm

Apologies for that. Below is a sample RP:

MERCENARY TROOPS ROLL INTO GHAM

Over the past several hours, various mercenary groups have begun pouring into cities across the island of Gham. In the leadup to the election of 12 term President Jean Dilman, this action has already garnered criticism from the international community. When reached out to for comment, Dilman, and his party, the Gham Revolutionary Party, had nothing to say. However, an unnamed source close to the President has stated that these forces are "meant to ensure that the right outcome is had in this extremely important election.
*International Center for News*


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Outskirts of Gham City, 0500 hours

A small boy is walking through the streets, clothed only by a soccer jersey and a pair of worn out sandals. He seems to be searching for something in the dusty alleyways between rundown shacks. In the distance, the barking of dogs can be heard and the one or two bullets being fired. Rien d'extraordinaire the boy thinks to himself, nothing out of the ordinary. As he bends over to pick up another handful of sand to sift through, an engine is heard, racing through the streets. Before he can jump to the side, the boys bones are shattered by the front end of an Armored Personnel Carrier. The APC, containing a group of punishingly strong looking men, hardly stops to see what has happened, before racing forward. A mother peers through the window of her hovel, and begins weeping. As she runs out into the street, the blood begins to cake itself on the torso of the boy's dark body. She holds his hand as the life seeps from him, and cries out into the night.

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Gham City High School, 0800 hours

Men clad in black fatigues have surrounded the high school polling station and begin to march forward. Inside, a three-man observer committee from a now distant NGO cower in fear, realizing that this year isn't the year for democracy in Gham. As boxes are stuffed with pre-printed ballots, the three-man-committee are bound and gagged before being loaded into a toyota and hauled off to an unknown location.

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Kaalmi
Spokesperson
 
Posts: 177
Founded: Oct 10, 2015
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Postby Kaalmi » Sat Apr 16, 2016 12:41 pm

Gham and Ftel wrote:Apologies for that. Below is a sample RP:

MERCENARY TROOPS ROLL INTO GHAM

Over the past several hours, various mercenary groups have begun pouring into cities across the island of Gham. In the leadup to the election of 12 term President Jean Dilman, this action has already garnered criticism from the international community. When reached out to for comment, Dilman, and his party, the Gham Revolutionary Party, had nothing to say. However, an unnamed source close to the President has stated that these forces are "meant to ensure that the right outcome is had in this extremely important election.
*International Center for News*


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Outskirts of Gham City, 0500 hours

A small boy is walking through the streets, clothed only by a soccer jersey and a pair of worn out sandals. He seems to be searching for something in the dusty alleyways between rundown shacks. In the distance, the barking of dogs can be heard and the one or two bullets being fired. Rien d'extraordinaire the boy thinks to himself, nothing out of the ordinary. As he bends over to pick up another handful of sand to sift through, an engine is heard, racing through the streets. Before he can jump to the side, the boys bones are shattered by the front end of an Armored Personnel Carrier. The APC, containing a group of punishingly strong looking men, hardly stops to see what has happened, before racing forward. A mother peers through the window of her hovel, and begins weeping. As she runs out into the street, the blood begins to cake itself on the torso of the boy's dark body. She holds his hand as the life seeps from him, and cries out into the night.

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Gham City High School, 0800 hours

Men clad in black fatigues have surrounded the high school polling station and begin to march forward. Inside, a three-man observer committee from a now distant NGO cower in fear, realizing that this year isn't the year for democracy in Gham. As boxes are stuffed with pre-printed ballots, the three-man-committee are bound and gagged before being loaded into a toyota and hauled off to an unknown location.


Looks good. Standby for password.
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Enara
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Postby Enara » Wed Apr 20, 2016 1:26 am

Application to Vasarden
all questions require an answer

Nation Name: The Harmonious Hegemony of Enara
  • Short: Enara, the Hegemony
  • Formal:
The Harmonious Hegemony of Enara
Total Population: 195,000,000
Capital City: Miinatal (de jure) and Saraci (de facto)

Ethnic Statistics (% of pop.):
<1% Enaran (Tibetan/Nepali)
~2% Tsequaya (Sikh/Bhutanese)
35% Yvsvwi
25% Hodtlv
14% Lunvha (all South Asian/Turkic)
25% other (small tribes/no RL equivalencies)

National Language(s): Tlinesv, Doquuda, Vukahna, & various others
Official Language(s): Tlinesv

Total Military Personnel: 1,350,000

  • Active Military Personnel: 615,000
  • Reserve Military Personnel:
750,000

Human Development Index rating: 0.595

Governmental System: Theocratic Oligarchy

Economic System: Regulated Capitalism with SOEs in critical sectors

  • GDP Total (PPP): $2.925 trillion
  • GDP Per capita (PPP):
$15,000

Roleplay Examples: I would like to request a prompt.

Do you agree to follow the Vasari Accords: I do so agree.

Location on map*: The nation concept is one of a large, highly multi-racial empire (inspired by the large land empires that persisted into the early 20th Century such as Austria-Hungry, the Ottomans, or the Qing) which has managed to begin on the path towards modernization. As a result, all the ethnic groups are mostly made up based (loosely) on some mixture of real life models. As a result, I think I could best be accommodated by taking a large swath of the area where the Chinese, Indo-Aryan, and Ambiguous ethnicities meet. Furthermore, I am comfortable being landlocked to preserve coastline for those who need it for their nation concepts.


*Be specific in your description of this, or outline a plot on the map using a photo-editor, save it and upload it, and link the picture. Please be reasonable with plot sizes, and remember that your application may be contested due to the area you choose not being realistic in contrast to the ethnic demographics and background of the area.

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Kaalmi
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Postby Kaalmi » Wed Apr 20, 2016 12:58 pm

Enara wrote:
Application to Vasarden
all questions require an answer

Nation Name: The Harmonious Hegemony of Enara
  • Short: Enara, the Hegemony
  • Formal:
The Harmonious Hegemony of Enara
Total Population: 195,000,000
Capital City: Miinatal (de jure) and Saraci (de facto)

Ethnic Statistics (% of pop.):
<1% Enaran (Tibetan/Nepali)
~2% Tsequaya (Sikh/Bhutanese)
35% Yvsvwi
25% Hodtlv
14% Lunvha (all South Asian/Turkic)
25% other (small tribes/no RL equivalencies)

National Language(s): Tlinesv, Doquuda, Vukahna, & various others
Official Language(s): Tlinesv

Total Military Personnel: 1,350,000

  • Active Military Personnel: 615,000
  • Reserve Military Personnel:
750,000

Human Development Index rating: 0.595

Governmental System: Theocratic Oligarchy

Economic System: Regulated Capitalism with SOEs in critical sectors

  • GDP Total (PPP): $2.925 trillion
  • GDP Per capita (PPP):
$15,000

Roleplay Examples: I would like to request a prompt.

Do you agree to follow the Vasari Accords: I do so agree.

Location on map*: The nation concept is one of a large, highly multi-racial empire (inspired by the large land empires that persisted into the early 20th Century such as Austria-Hungry, the Ottomans, or the Qing) which has managed to begin on the path towards modernization. As a result, all the ethnic groups are mostly made up based (loosely) on some mixture of real life models. As a result, I think I could best be accommodated by taking a large swath of the area where the Chinese, Indo-Aryan, and Ambiguous ethnicities meet. Furthermore, I am comfortable being landlocked to preserve coastline for those who need it for their nation concepts.


*Be specific in your description of this, or outline a plot on the map using a photo-editor, save it and upload it, and link the picture. Please be reasonable with plot sizes, and remember that your application may be contested due to the area you choose not being realistic in contrast to the ethnic demographics and background of the area.


The only problem I really see with your population is your population. If you could reduce it by about 100 million then I'd see no problem with your application.
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Enara
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Postby Enara » Wed Apr 20, 2016 3:51 pm

Kaalmi wrote:
Enara wrote:
Application to Vasarden
all questions require an answer

Nation Name: The Harmonious Hegemony of Enara
  • Short: Enara, the Hegemony
  • Formal:
The Harmonious Hegemony of Enara
Total Population: 195,000,000
Capital City: Miinatal (de jure) and Saraci (de facto)

Ethnic Statistics (% of pop.):
<1% Enaran (Tibetan/Nepali)
~2% Tsequaya (Sikh/Bhutanese)
35% Yvsvwi
25% Hodtlv
14% Lunvha (all South Asian/Turkic)
25% other (small tribes/no RL equivalencies)

National Language(s): Tlinesv, Doquuda, Vukahna, & various others
Official Language(s): Tlinesv

Total Military Personnel: 1,350,000

  • Active Military Personnel: 615,000
  • Reserve Military Personnel:
750,000

Human Development Index rating: 0.595

Governmental System: Theocratic Oligarchy

Economic System: Regulated Capitalism with SOEs in critical sectors

  • GDP Total (PPP): $2.925 trillion
  • GDP Per capita (PPP):
$15,000

Roleplay Examples: I would like to request a prompt.

Do you agree to follow the Vasari Accords: I do so agree.

Location on map*: The nation concept is one of a large, highly multi-racial empire (inspired by the large land empires that persisted into the early 20th Century such as Austria-Hungry, the Ottomans, or the Qing) which has managed to begin on the path towards modernization. As a result, all the ethnic groups are mostly made up based (loosely) on some mixture of real life models. As a result, I think I could best be accommodated by taking a large swath of the area where the Chinese, Indo-Aryan, and Ambiguous ethnicities meet. Furthermore, I am comfortable being landlocked to preserve coastline for those who need it for their nation concepts.


*Be specific in your description of this, or outline a plot on the map using a photo-editor, save it and upload it, and link the picture. Please be reasonable with plot sizes, and remember that your application may be contested due to the area you choose not being realistic in contrast to the ethnic demographics and background of the area.


The only problem I really see with your population is your population. If you could reduce it by about 100 million then I'd see no problem with your application.


I can understand your concern with having a highly populated nation in the region. It seems as though people on the internet are generally fond of equating large populations to large amount of power, and this is forgivable as the world could appear that way at a glance. However, I understand that a higher population, especially for a developing country like the one I have presented above, is often a greater inhibitor than it is a benefit. I don't plan on using a large population to bend my neighbors to my will, rather, the idea is that the country is somewhat powerful but is forced to focus primarily internally due to the many different ethnic, tribal, and linguistic groups within the Hegemony. These problems are only made worse by a very visible rich-poor divide, the economic strength of the minority residing in cities compared to the destitute state of the rural areas where much of the population resides.

However, I still see your point and so I'd like to propose a compromise. Could we agree to lowering the population by fifty million rather than a hundred? I think this would go a long way towards bringing me closer to regional average population without too significantly curtailing my nation concept. I'll lay out the effects of those changes to save you from having to perform the calculations yourself. If I maintained my current GDP per capita of $15,000 that would result in a new GDP of $2.175 trillion and a population of 145,000,000. Furthermore, this would reduce the military size to about 1,000,000 (for the sake of an even number), which would be split between 450,000 active and another 550,000 reserves. Would something like this be more acceptable?

Also, would you be so willing to provide for me a writing prompt?

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District XIV
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Founded: Dec 01, 2012
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Postby District XIV » Wed Apr 20, 2016 4:22 pm

Enara wrote:
Kaalmi wrote:


The only problem I really see with your population is your population. If you could reduce it by about 100 million then I'd see no problem with your application.


I can understand your concern with having a highly populated nation in the region. It seems as though people on the internet are generally fond of equating large populations to large amount of power, and this is forgivable as the world could appear that way at a glance. However, I understand that a higher population, especially for a developing country like the one I have presented above, is often a greater inhibitor than it is a benefit. I don't plan on using a large population to bend my neighbors to my will, rather, the idea is that the country is somewhat powerful but is forced to focus primarily internally due to the many different ethnic, tribal, and linguistic groups within the Hegemony. These problems are only made worse by a very visible rich-poor divide, the economic strength of the minority residing in cities compared to the destitute state of the rural areas where much of the population resides.

However, I still see your point and so I'd like to propose a compromise. Could we agree to lowering the population by fifty million rather than a hundred? I think this would go a long way towards bringing me closer to regional average population without too significantly curtailing my nation concept. I'll lay out the effects of those changes to save you from having to perform the calculations yourself. If I maintained my current GDP per capita of $15,000 that would result in a new GDP of $2.175 trillion and a population of 145,000,000. Furthermore, this would reduce the military size to about 1,000,000 (for the sake of an even number), which would be split between 450,000 active and another 550,000 reserves. Would something like this be more acceptable?

Also, would you be so willing to provide for me a writing prompt?

This seems fair. I'll give you a prompt:

As political instability in eastern Vasarden reaches an all-time high, with proxy wars raging on multiple fronts, Enara begins to struggle with the lack of foreign support in the event of civil conflicts, or an invasion, occurring. Enara's government, angered by Erinaumese 'aggression' from the north, is planning (or executing) an invasion of Erinaum's southern regions.

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Maretta
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Posts: 38
Founded: Jan 28, 2015
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Postby Maretta » Thu Apr 21, 2016 1:47 pm

Application to Vasarden
all questions require an answer

Nation Name: The Republic of Maretta
  • Short: Maretta
  • Formal:
Total Population (must be ≤200 million except in extremely limited cases): 1,814,695
Capital City: Concord

Ethnic Statistics (% of pop.): 99% Marettan
National Language(s): English, Marettan Creole
Official Language(s): English

Total Military Personnel (must be ≤1% of your national population, unless you have a specific reason for going above this):
  • Active Military Personnel: 17,670
  • Reserve Military Personnel: 23,500


Human Development Index rating: 0.905
Governmental System (Presidential republic, One-party state, etc.): Presidential Republic
Economic System (Nordic Model, American School, etc.): Mixed market capitalism
  • GDP Total (PPP): $212,440,000,000
  • GDP Per capita (PPP): $38,200

Roleplay Examples: http://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopic ... 7&t=331302, http://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopic ... 7&t=342454
Do you agree to follow the Vasari Accords: Yes
Location on map*: TBD



*Note - Population and military numbers are rather small because we are a small island nation.
Last edited by Maretta on Thu Apr 21, 2016 2:07 pm, edited 2 times in total.
Basic Info
Area: 318,770 sq.miles
Population: 18,930,500
Capital City: Concord
Largest City: Greenville
President: John Andrews

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District XIV
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Posts: 5990
Founded: Dec 01, 2012
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Postby District XIV » Thu Apr 21, 2016 3:49 pm

Maretta wrote:
Application to Vasarden
all questions require an answer

Nation Name: The Republic of Maretta
  • Short: Maretta
  • Formal:
Total Population (must be ≤200 million except in extremely limited cases): 1,814,695
Capital City: Concord

Ethnic Statistics (% of pop.): 99% Marettan
National Language(s): English, Marettan Creole
Official Language(s): English

Total Military Personnel (must be ≤1% of your national population, unless you have a specific reason for going above this):
  • Active Military Personnel: 17,670
  • Reserve Military Personnel: 23,500


Human Development Index rating: 0.905
Governmental System (Presidential republic, One-party state, etc.): Presidential Republic
Economic System (Nordic Model, American School, etc.): Mixed market capitalism
  • GDP Total (PPP): $212,440,000,000
  • GDP Per capita (PPP): $38,200

Roleplay Examples: viewtopic.php?f=7&t=331302, viewtopic.php?f=7&t=342454
Do you agree to follow the Vasari Accords: Yes
Location on map*: TBD



*Note - Population and military numbers are rather small because we are a small island nation.

Looks fine to me. Would putting you in the Anglo region of the map work?

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Enara
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Founded: Nov 09, 2015
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Postby Enara » Fri Apr 22, 2016 12:21 am

District XIV wrote:
Enara wrote:
I can understand your concern with having a highly populated nation in the region. It seems as though people on the internet are generally fond of equating large populations to large amount of power, and this is forgivable as the world could appear that way at a glance. However, I understand that a higher population, especially for a developing country like the one I have presented above, is often a greater inhibitor than it is a benefit. I don't plan on using a large population to bend my neighbors to my will, rather, the idea is that the country is somewhat powerful but is forced to focus primarily internally due to the many different ethnic, tribal, and linguistic groups within the Hegemony. These problems are only made worse by a very visible rich-poor divide, the economic strength of the minority residing in cities compared to the destitute state of the rural areas where much of the population resides.

However, I still see your point and so I'd like to propose a compromise. Could we agree to lowering the population by fifty million rather than a hundred? I think this would go a long way towards bringing me closer to regional average population without too significantly curtailing my nation concept. I'll lay out the effects of those changes to save you from having to perform the calculations yourself. If I maintained my current GDP per capita of $15,000 that would result in a new GDP of $2.175 trillion and a population of 145,000,000. Furthermore, this would reduce the military size to about 1,000,000 (for the sake of an even number), which would be split between 450,000 active and another 550,000 reserves. Would something like this be more acceptable?

Also, would you be so willing to provide for me a writing prompt?

This seems fair. I'll give you a prompt:

As political instability in eastern Vasarden reaches an all-time high, with proxy wars raging on multiple fronts, Enara begins to struggle with the lack of foreign support in the event of civil conflicts, or an invasion, occurring. Enara's government, angered by Erinaumese 'aggression' from the north, is planning (or executing) an invasion of Erinaum's southern regions.


I'm glad we could reach a consensus, and I appreciate the prompt. I've already gotten to work on a response, though I have a major final paper due Monday so I may be distracted for a few days. I trust that I'm not operating under a time constraint?

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Maretta
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Founded: Jan 28, 2015
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Postby Maretta » Fri Apr 22, 2016 2:26 am

District XIV wrote:
Maretta wrote:
Application to Vasarden
all questions require an answer

Nation Name: The Republic of Maretta
  • Short: Maretta
  • Formal:
Total Population (must be ≤200 million except in extremely limited cases): 1,814,695
Capital City: Concord

Ethnic Statistics (% of pop.): 99% Marettan
National Language(s): English, Marettan Creole
Official Language(s): English

Total Military Personnel (must be ≤1% of your national population, unless you have a specific reason for going above this):
  • Active Military Personnel: 17,670
  • Reserve Military Personnel: 23,500


Human Development Index rating: 0.905
Governmental System (Presidential republic, One-party state, etc.): Presidential Republic
Economic System (Nordic Model, American School, etc.): Mixed market capitalism
  • GDP Total (PPP): $212,440,000,000
  • GDP Per capita (PPP): $38,200

Roleplay Examples: http://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopic ... 7&t=331302, http://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopic ... 7&t=342454
Do you agree to follow the Vasari Accords: Yes
Location on map*: TBD



*Note - Population and military numbers are rather small because we are a small island nation.

Looks fine to me. Would putting you in the Anglo region of the map work?


Yes it would!
Basic Info
Area: 318,770 sq.miles
Population: 18,930,500
Capital City: Concord
Largest City: Greenville
President: John Andrews

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Kaalmi
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Posts: 177
Founded: Oct 10, 2015
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Postby Kaalmi » Fri Apr 22, 2016 2:15 pm

Maretta wrote:
Application to Vasarden
all questions require an answer

Nation Name: The Republic of Maretta
  • Short: Maretta
  • Formal:
Total Population (must be ≤200 million except in extremely limited cases): 1,814,695
Capital City: Concord

Ethnic Statistics (% of pop.): 99% Marettan
National Language(s): English, Marettan Creole
Official Language(s): English

Total Military Personnel (must be ≤1% of your national population, unless you have a specific reason for going above this):
  • Active Military Personnel: 17,670
  • Reserve Military Personnel: 23,500


Human Development Index rating: 0.905
Governmental System (Presidential republic, One-party state, etc.): Presidential Republic
Economic System (Nordic Model, American School, etc.): Mixed market capitalism
  • GDP Total (PPP): $212,440,000,000
  • GDP Per capita (PPP): $38,200

Roleplay Examples: viewtopic.php?f=7&t=331302, viewtopic.php?f=7&t=342454
Do you agree to follow the Vasari Accords: Yes
Location on map*: TBD



*Note - Population and military numbers are rather small because we are a small island nation.


Might wanna check your math. If you were to have that GDP per capita, your GDP total would be 69,321,349,000.
Aminist nominee for WA Secretary-General 2016. Came #4th in the fraudulent general election, 1st in the hearts of all those non Obote.

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District XIV
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Founded: Dec 01, 2012
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Postby District XIV » Fri Apr 22, 2016 3:49 pm

Enara wrote:I've already gotten to work on a response, though I have a major final paper due Monday so I may be distracted for a few days. I trust that I'm not operating under a time constraint?

You're fine.

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