Carabana wrote:
Well, where do I begin?
I am not one to issue a 'no' answer initially without giving the applicant sufficient chance to work on the application. In this case, my first response was indeed no. Quite simply put, the application tells me nothing about the culture, politics, and history of your nation. Furthermore, it tells precious little about the economy (apart from 'lots of resources that Europeans wanted' and being 'industrialized'). Certainly I am not against applications that aren't fully fleshed out, but the more specifics, the better the application (usually). Sometimes I am able to glean what kind of nation you're interested in playing with simple and vague applications. Sometimes I am not. This is one time I am not.
My suggestion would be to rethink your claim, give us a good idea of what kind of nation you wish to play in our RP group, and resubmit your application.