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by Agadar » Fri Jun 10, 2011 9:33 am
by African-Union » Fri Jun 10, 2011 9:41 am
by Agadar » Fri Jun 10, 2011 9:50 am
African-Union wrote:Jedi, I edited my bio so I am guessing you accept? Also I didn't hear from Agadar or Warhaven or Alby, so I await your judgement with anticipation!
by Earth Sphere Coalition » Fri Jun 10, 2011 10:47 am
Agadar wrote:African-Union wrote:Jedi, I edited my bio so I am guessing you accept? Also I didn't hear from Agadar or Warhaven or Alby, so I await your judgement with anticipation!
Alice
Approved: Karaig
Disapproved: Jedi8246, ESC, Agadar
AU
Approved: ESC, Agadar
Disapproved: -
Zark
Approved: Jedi8246, Agadar
Disapproved: -
Laneige
Approved: Agadar, ESC
Disapproved: -
by Bastinia » Fri Jun 10, 2011 10:48 am
Bastinia wrote:Character Name: Kasimir Walter
Age: 31
Height: 6'1"
Weight: 183 lbs
Eye Color: Blue-Grey
Hair Color: Platinum Blond
Powers: Blood Manipulation, Slight Accelerated Healing
Description of Powers: Kasimir can control his blood in a variety of ways and other people's blood as long as he has physical contact with their blood. He can concentrate blood into a variety of shapes and even turn it into a solid mass that can be held and keep its shape. The downside of this power is the more blood Kasimir uses from his own body the less he has inside him so it becomes harded for his body to function. His secondary power only starts working after he uses his first power. His healing power allows him to quickly regain any lost blood he used and heal slight wounds like cuts quicker then normal humans.
Abilities: Billiards Expert, Martial Arts Style: Bojutsu
Weaknesses: His abilities have obvious limits to them for one. Kasimir also can't not accept a challenge under punishment of own his pride.
Short Biography: Kasimir was born in Adorf Germany he was the youngest of three children. He had a completely normal life until he turned 11 That was when all of his direct family died of a strange disease (The Neo-stigma). He was forced to go live with his godfather who had become an alcholic after his wife died of cancer two years earlier. His godfather would always bring Kasimir to the bar with him but being a minor he couldn't do anything but play billiards so every night he would play biliards and quickly got good at it. He also joined a school of Bushido after his godfather's friend offered to train him for free.
This lasted for many years until he turned 18 and left his godfather. His life was normal again and he soon got married at the age of 24 and had a daughter two years later. He would still occasionaly go to the bar and accept challenges from people he felt may have a chance against him. One of the people he didn't accept a chalenge from was slightly insane and he killed Kasimir's wife. Then he came at Kasimir with a knife he cut him and he started bleeding. Kasimir's blood became a blade and he used it to decapitate his wife's killer in rage. Now he constantly kills others that harm and steal from others, but still caringly takes care of his only daughter.
Role-play Example:
The night was a cold one, Kasimir was once again at his favorite bar playing billiard ball. The neon glow illuminated the table as he sunk the 8 ball into the corner pocket with a bank shot that gracefully slipped past his opponents efforts to block the shot. Kasimir puts his hand out to the opponent who angrily grunts as he hands over $50 in cash.
An hour later, after playing mutiple games of Billiards and making alot of money Kasimir left the bar. After, walking for a few minutes he came across a jewlery store being robbed. The robber instantly started to flee when he spoted Kasimir approach. Kasimir giggled in glee as he chased the culprit into an alleyway. They both pulled knives but Kasimir just cut his hand and droped his knife to the ground. The blood poured out much to rapidly for a normal cut and quickly took the shape of a bo. He charged the robber, who tried to run in fear before his skull was crushed. The man's body fell to the ground with a soft splash in his own blood. Kasimir grabed the bag that held the stolen goods and took a single diamond necklace he shoved it in his pocket and dropped the rest in the spreading pool of blood.
Once Kasimir made it home he walked into a small violet room and took a tooth from under his daughter's pillow and easily switched it with the necklace.
"Good night sweety," cooed Kasimir quietly as he kissed her forehead. He walked to his own room and slept.
by Agadar » Fri Jun 10, 2011 11:00 am
by Albertasby » Fri Jun 10, 2011 11:22 am
by Jedi8246 » Fri Jun 10, 2011 11:55 am
Conservative Morality wrote:When you call Bieber feminine, you insult all women.
Agadar wrote:Next thing you know, God turns out to be some weird green space monster with tentacles and a monocle.
Khadgar wrote:Oddly enough, a lot of people who are plotting to harm other people aren't really interested in legal niceties.
by Zarkenis Ultima » Fri Jun 10, 2011 12:18 pm
Warhaven wrote:Though I do not recall the score either, I approve all new apps across the board, having read through pages and pages of posts, and reviewed them all in turn.
by Jedi8246 » Fri Jun 10, 2011 12:23 pm
Conservative Morality wrote:When you call Bieber feminine, you insult all women.
Agadar wrote:Next thing you know, God turns out to be some weird green space monster with tentacles and a monocle.
Khadgar wrote:Oddly enough, a lot of people who are plotting to harm other people aren't really interested in legal niceties.
by Zarkenis Ultima » Fri Jun 10, 2011 12:33 pm
Earth Sphere Coalition wrote:Zarkenis Ultima wrote:
I was actually thinking something else. This is gonna sound a little silly, but I thought more like, the Horcruxes of Harry Potter. Except, this guy shoots them off and it does huge damage.
The 2 months idea is actually better, though, but, how would it work? Unless you throw in some divine elements and say that a person's lifespan is set in stone.
We can have you have a dream where your subconscious tells you how long you have left in life. Then you can just subtract the 2 months from that number.
Zarkenis Ultima wrote:Earth Sphere Coalition wrote:It's not really supernatural. Your subconscious picks up on things that you don't pay attention to in your waking moments. So it's not to farfetched to have a dream that will tell you info that you might have missed when you used your powers for the first time.
The rest: My subconscious COULD tell me I have 2 months of life left, but I still doubt it would tell me how much time I have left, unless, again, it's set in stone.
Or my mind can subconsciously read all my... Biological processes or something and stuff. Then again, there's diseases, the probability of a violent death, etc...
Zarkenis Ultima wrote:Earth Sphere Coalition wrote:You misunderstood. I'm saying that if you are originally going to live till 90 and you use your psionic blast once then you will live only to be 89 and 10 month.
...If I misunderstood, then I'm still misunderstanding, but... How would anyone or anything not so supernaturalish know how long I'm originally going to live?
Zarkenis Ultima wrote:Earth Sphere Coalition wrote:Your subconscious warns you after you first use your powers the first time because it feels the damage it does you your body.
Either I'm not completely understanding you, or you're not completely understanding me.
There are several factors at every point in life that could potentially alter, for better or worse, a person's lifespan. That is what I mean. This is why I'm saying that unless we introduce some sort of "Fate", a supernatural way in which our lifespans are set in stone, the "2 months substraction" would make sense.
That said, if this does happen, then I'd buff the substraction up to 5 years. It IS a very powerful ability. It is supossed to NEVER be used. It WILL take a huge toll on the person that uses it.
by SuperHappySmileyWorld » Fri Jun 10, 2011 12:35 pm
SuperHappySmileyWorld wrote:revision-
Character Name: Samual Hitch
Height: 5’ 7”
Weight: 203 lb
Eye Color: has heterochromia iridum (one eye is a ice blue, other is a deep hazel)
Hair Color: dyed purple and orange, originally platinum blonde
Powers: Limited Direct Flight, Power Augmentation, Enhanced Durability Due to Bone Manipulation
Description of Powers: Limited direct flight- He has the ability to increase kinetic force of his forward movement to an extent in which he is able to fly, but only in one direction. Until he stops via something of suitable mass like a cement wall or an airplane getting in his way, or is stopped like a super strong man punching him to the ground, essentially turning himself into a human bullet. While with practice he has learned to shoot himself in other directions while in flight, it is always a straight line.
Power augmentation- for some reason he has yet to understand, when he is within 50 yards of any super, their powers increase to a scale of at most 2 fold, the strong become stronger, the fast faster, etc. it is unknown if he himself is affected by this augmentation, for he has never not been able to do it
Enhanced durability due to bone manipulation- he is able to create new bone mass in a rate that is superhuman, he is also able to use the kinetic energy from before to launch his bones out of his body, but this usually brings incredible pain. Because of his quick healing bones (they are still human durability, they will shatter if hit hard enough, and the shards will stay there, he will just make more bones) the ones he shoots out will simply grow back, for example he once forced his thigh out of his body to be used has a club, or shooting the tips of his fingers out like a bullet.
Abilities: Mathematician, Strategist, near photo graphic memory, fighting skills: Situational i.e. No true training, watched others fight and read about the martial arts and took bits that he himself were able to do
Weaknesses: the aforementioned bones being still as durable as a normal man’s, being brash and not all there, suffers from Epilepsy, sticks out like a sour thumb
Short Biography: Samuel Hitch is a 31 year old man in the mid stages of Vitiligo, but was originally Caucasian. He was born a test tube baby in the SFR, formerly Norway. His parents were geneticists trying to make a genetically superior baby, they got what they wanted. Though Samuel was epileptic and his genes could not sync properly and he would die, they constantly tortured, maimed and made him suffer, all in the name of science. After they got all the required information on his healing ability they began to toy around with a few others of his, such as his limited flight. He quickly came to resent his parents, so after much timeing he broke out of his chambers at the age of 12.
He was able to take a faire to Londim, only to find that the people of Londim that do not speak the same language as he. Over a few months he saw how the large people who looked at him strangely spoke, and learned as well.
After this he stumbled onto a college campus, made small living courters in the boiler room and occasionally stole books from above. It was not long till custodians found him and he, fearing of being sent back, made friends with them. The custodians enjoyed the small boy’s company so they decided they will help him out. They routinely brought books and food for Samuel until he was 18, over this time taught himself to read and learned the stores of Hannibal, son of Hamilcar Barca, the great Napoleon, and calculus. At this time he was able to enroll in the school, and with this knowledge he attempted to join the school after reading a book on forgery and making records, past history, grades, and letters of recommendation, of course.
He is still living in the college, he being a sort of pet and school mascot due to his prolonged tenure at said college, but he is allowed to leave when he wishes, and does, but was forced back into hiding after an incident, here’s how it went down
Role-play Example:
Man… these items are almost as beauties as you” mused Samuel to the female clerk, she giggling at his words but the other clerks gawking at his appearance “I mean look at these sapphires, just a shade darker than your lovely Irish eyes-” he is suddenly cut off, buy a man with a gun, which is pointed at his head.
“And those rubies… those are… like your blood…GIVE ME THE FUCKEN MONEY” he begins to point his gun around to everyone, clearly unstable to say the least, probably crack addict, muses Sam.
He orders everyone on the ground and begins to steal whatever he can carry, Sam crawls over to the woman he was flirting with earlier “I can stop him… you just need to promise, lie for me… ok?”
The scared woman looks up to him and replies ‘yes’
“Well stand back a little… it has been a while…” Samuel aims his hand at the assailant, like extending his hand for a handshake, suddenly, the distal phalanxes of his hand shoots out like a gun and hits the thief in the back, but, Samuel screams in pain, the ends of his fingers limply hanging without the bone, but already they are beginning to re-build themselves, the female clerk screams in horror and Samuel knows it’s time to go
The assailant falls forward through the table in front of him, as people try to figure out what just happened, Samuel sneaks out the back door, away from the police, away from the flashing lights. he then uses this opportunity to get to the college as quick as he can, kneels down, and shoots himself at a perfect 30 degree angle, going around 70 MPH, he will be there in no time
I hope this is suffices, I am sort of new at this
by Agadar » Fri Jun 10, 2011 12:48 pm
by Jedi8246 » Fri Jun 10, 2011 12:52 pm
Conservative Morality wrote:When you call Bieber feminine, you insult all women.
Agadar wrote:Next thing you know, God turns out to be some weird green space monster with tentacles and a monocle.
Khadgar wrote:Oddly enough, a lot of people who are plotting to harm other people aren't really interested in legal niceties.
by Agadar » Fri Jun 10, 2011 12:55 pm
Jedi8246 wrote:I have run into a problem. I have discovered the post length limit of 60,000 characters.
Which basically means I am going to have to move some parts of the OP elsewhere. The question is where?
I do have one post fairly close to the top of the 1st page, that I could put info in. It still is somewhat sloppy. The only other option is to create another thread to hold stuff, but I don't think there is one section of group of sections that would fit together well as a thread.
by Jedi8246 » Fri Jun 10, 2011 12:55 pm
Agadar wrote:Jedi8246 wrote:I have run into a problem. I have discovered the post length limit of 60,000 characters.
Which basically means I am going to have to move some parts of the OP elsewhere. The question is where?
I do have one post fairly close to the top of the 1st page, that I could put info in. It still is somewhat sloppy. The only other option is to create another thread to hold stuff, but I don't think there is one section of group of sections that would fit together well as a thread.
We could simply create a new thread for the FOG2 OOC chattering where you reserve the first few posts.
Conservative Morality wrote:When you call Bieber feminine, you insult all women.
Agadar wrote:Next thing you know, God turns out to be some weird green space monster with tentacles and a monocle.
Khadgar wrote:Oddly enough, a lot of people who are plotting to harm other people aren't really interested in legal niceties.
by Jedi8246 » Fri Jun 10, 2011 12:59 pm
Conservative Morality wrote:When you call Bieber feminine, you insult all women.
Agadar wrote:Next thing you know, God turns out to be some weird green space monster with tentacles and a monocle.
Khadgar wrote:Oddly enough, a lot of people who are plotting to harm other people aren't really interested in legal niceties.
by Zarkenis Ultima » Fri Jun 10, 2011 1:00 pm
Agadar wrote:Alice - Disapproved by majority vote
AU - Approved by majority vote
Zark - Approved by majority vote
Laneige - Approved by Agadar, Esc, Albertasby, disapproved by none thus far
Bastinia - Approved by majority vote
Snow - Approved by Jedi, Agadar, disapproved by none thus far
SuperHappySmileyWorld - Approved by none, disapproved by Agadar
SuperHappy, your character seems decent and deep enough, but your grammar and spelling are frankly somewhat horrible here and there. Is there any way you could improve those?
by SuperHappySmileyWorld » Fri Jun 10, 2011 1:02 pm
Agadar wrote:Alice - Disapproved by majority vote
AU - Approved by majority vote
Zark - Approved by majority vote
Laneige - Approved by Agadar, Esc, Albertasby, disapproved by none thus far
Bastinia - Approved by majority vote
Snow - Approved by Jedi, Agadar, disapproved by none thus far
SuperHappySmileyWorld - Approved by none, disapproved by Agadar
SuperHappy, your character seems decent and deep enough, but your grammar and spelling are frankly somewhat horrible here and there. Is there any way you could improve those?
by Jedi8246 » Fri Jun 10, 2011 1:03 pm
Conservative Morality wrote:When you call Bieber feminine, you insult all women.
Agadar wrote:Next thing you know, God turns out to be some weird green space monster with tentacles and a monocle.
Khadgar wrote:Oddly enough, a lot of people who are plotting to harm other people aren't really interested in legal niceties.
by Zirilrath » Sat Jun 11, 2011 5:50 pm
by Warhaven » Sat Jun 11, 2011 5:59 pm
Zirilrath wrote:First of all, you've seemingly forgotten about me, which makes me a very sad panda.
Second, I'm afraid that I won't have the time necessary to devote to a serious RP like this, so I'll have to withdraw my application.
by Agadar » Sat Jun 11, 2011 6:00 pm
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