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by Zarkenis Ultima » Thu Jun 09, 2011 9:26 pm
by SuperHappySmileyWorld » Thu Jun 09, 2011 9:31 pm
Zarkenis Ultima wrote:The bone power sounds like this guy from an anime... Oh, yeah, Orochimaru. I think.
Also, another guy with Heterochromia. *Hi-five*
by Agadar » Fri Jun 10, 2011 3:25 am
by Jedi8246 » Fri Jun 10, 2011 4:13 am
Zarkenis Ultima wrote:Zarkenis Ultima wrote:Application
Character Name: Milus (Mih-loos). (Last name unknown)
Age: 22
Height: 1.76
Weight: 78 Kg
Eye Color: Left: Olive Green. Right: Light Brown. (Heterochromia)
Hair Color: Black
Powers: An advanced form of Telekinesis, Lifeforce Telekinetic Boost.
Description of Powers:
First Power: In adittion to the usual "Push and pull and move around objects", Milus can use kinetic force to add pressure to an object by directing multiple kinetic force vectors towards the same object from several directions, and use kinetic force to augment his speed or increase the strenght of his strikes, for example. He can also "Influence something that's inside another thing". This means he can, for example, move around an object that's inside a box, or something similar. This power, if used correctly, can be highly lethal, as it could, for instance, tear appart a man's heart. Milus, however, does not know this and would not use it unless absolutely necessary if he did.
Approved again.
Second Power: The Lifeforce Telekinetic Boost is a very strong power that concentrates a portion of Milus' vital force and uses it to fuel Milus' kinetic powers for a limited ammount of time, effectively putting him into a state of "Super telekinesis" where his abilities are incredibly augmented greatly, making his kinetic blasts much more damaging and such. However, the vital force used up greatly decreases Milus' lifespan whenever it is used.
Abilities: Milus doesn't have any specific abilities, besides pheraps his great, yet still human, intelligence.
Weaknesses: Milus can't tolerate extreme temperatures, and he isn't exactly in the best physical condition. Additionally, he hasn't fully mastered his telekinetic powers yet, so, despite being highly unlikely, Milus could fail to use his powers, or worse yet, have them go out of control, even if only for a very short time.
Short Biography: Milus' mother died when he was born, leaving him as an orphan due to the fact that his father died while fighting on WWIII. He was taken in by his father's friend, a relatively wealthy businessman, who treated him as his own child. Milus had a good education. Eventually, Milus fell in love with his father's friend's daughter, who was his sister. Milus supressed this feeling for as long as he could, but one day, he just couldn't take it anymore. He was determined to tell her, but she was at a concert. On her way back, she suffered a car accident and died. This devastated Milus, who became very distant with his own father and the world in general. Eventually, his father died, leaving Milus as the sole heir to his vast fortune.
Role-play Example: Milus was calmly walking through the streets. It was another fine day, the sun was shining high in the sky, which was crystal-clear. Milus, however, did not care about these things, being the distant and somewhat indifferent person he was. Thus, he simply walked forward with the only thing in his mind being his wish to wrap up his business once and for all.
However, just then, he saw a robber broke into a jewelry store, threatening the clerk and running off with a huge stash, leaving the glass shattered on the ground. Milus considered the idea of taking advantage of this for a second, but he dismissed it quickly. He had enough wealth to maintain him well, he didn't need to do such unreasonable and deplorable acts.
Then, Milus considered other options. Calling the police would be useless. The robber was already getting away, and the police were, well, very good at slacking off. Walking off seemed like a reasonable enough thing, but it was rather mean, and the robber could have noticed him and make an attempt on his life in order to get rid of all witnesses.
Finally, he came to his last option. To pursue him. Milus wasn't exactly in the best physical condition, but he could easily run, and aid himself with his powers if he needed to. Besides, there was always the possibility that the jewelry store's clerk was a rather... Influential person, one way or another.
Thus, Milus began to run after the culprit, slowly catching up with him. When the time was right, he threw a trash can on the ground next to the robber, making him trip and fall to the ground. Milus used this oportunity to deliver a punch to the man's face, backed up by a strong kinetic impulse, which knocked the man down. He then picked up the jewels and walked back to the man's store.
Milus gave the jewels back to the store's clerk. The clerk thanked him, but Milus stated that it was his pleasure to help a fellow human being. Milus then asked the man's name, and after receiving it, walked away. "Mr. Roberts, huh? He could prove useful." Milus thought to himself as he walked towards his appointment. "I hope I'm not late."
I edited the app. Took out the "Soul Bullet" power, put in something else.
Conservative Morality wrote:When you call Bieber feminine, you insult all women.
Agadar wrote:Next thing you know, God turns out to be some weird green space monster with tentacles and a monocle.
Khadgar wrote:Oddly enough, a lot of people who are plotting to harm other people aren't really interested in legal niceties.
by Jedi8246 » Fri Jun 10, 2011 4:21 am
Agadar wrote:Has any fellow councilor kept track of the score, and if so, could you post it for me?
Conservative Morality wrote:When you call Bieber feminine, you insult all women.
Agadar wrote:Next thing you know, God turns out to be some weird green space monster with tentacles and a monocle.
Khadgar wrote:Oddly enough, a lot of people who are plotting to harm other people aren't really interested in legal niceties.
by African-Union » Fri Jun 10, 2011 5:09 am
Jedi8246 wrote:African-Union wrote:
Sounds like a plan my friend I'll change the background accordingly tomorrow, along with establishing a reason for the deterioration of National Socialism (should be easy considering the mass amount of flaws in the German implementation of the ideology)
Cool beans.
Do you have any plans for Jean at all? He would be in his 70's at this point,if he is still alive.
African-Union wrote:Character Name: Benedikt Schweitzer
Age: Unknown (i'll build on that)
Height: 6'3"
Weight: 191 lbs
Eye Color: Light Blue
Hair Color: Dirty Blond
Image:(Image)(Image)
Powers: Immortality (A varied form)
Description of Powers: Can suck the life force out of other supers through physical contact, he can then use the spare power as an energy source for weaponry.
Abilities: Very Charismatic (as such he can attract large amounts of followers), Skilled Surgeon, Highly Intelligent
Weaknesses: With each time he sucks out somebodies life force, the powers last for a shorter and shorter time, therefore he now must suck out people's life force at an alarming rate.
Short Biography: (Since I wrote such a long one before and it got deleted this one will be much shorter, but I'll add onto it a lot for the official bio)
Benedikt Schweitzer was born in Frankfurt Germany in the mid-1700s. His father was a farmer, and his mother a midwife, meaning the family often lived in adequate conditions. Over the years formal education and standards of society began to bore him and he ventured into reading various texts regarding surgical procedures and the anatomy of human beings. Throughout the 1800s he developed a reputation as an unknown serial killer, allowing various criminals though history take credit for his murders. By the time World War 1 arose, Benedikt served the German Empire, alongside a then unknown man by the name of Adolf Hitler. Throughout their service they became close comrades, and after the war continued a most fruitful relationship. With the age of the Weimar Republic coming to a close, Schweitzer was heavily hunted by law enforcement for his ruthless murders of the many people. As the National Socialists rose to power, Hitler acknowledged Benedikt's powers, and a curious dictator granted him a high ranking position in the Schutzstaffel as an expert surgeon. Leading several expeditions with elite German forces, Benedikt caputred numerous supers from across the world, conducted disturbing experiments, and reported back to Hitler. Feeling content with his life, Benedikt felt as though he had finally found where he belonged. When Germany was united into the Londim Empire, a great deal of digust arose among fellow members of the empire regarding national socialism. Since the death tole from the holocaust was so high, a fledgling, young empire couldn't afford to hold such a heavy burden, and as such they rounded up major National Socialist figured, and executed them. Benedikt narrowly escaped this purge in a fury. For the rest of his life, no matter how long that was, Benedikt dedicated his life to hunting down and ruthlessly slaughtering every super, as he had gained knowledge they assisted in the purge of the National Socialist's, and bringing the reclamation of Germany for the rise of the 4th Reich. Benedikt now runs a quiet, small underground worldwide network dedicated to overthrowing necessary forces in order to bring a new age of National Socialism to Germany, and capturing every possible super in order to utilize their powers to extend his immortality (with an exception of those who please the ruthless man).
Role-play Example: You know me, I promise not to abandon the RP again.
by SuperHappySmileyWorld » Fri Jun 10, 2011 5:11 am
African-Union wrote:Jedi8246 wrote:Cool beans.
Do you have any plans for Jean at all? He would be in his 70's at this point,if he is still alive.
Actually, yes I did have plans for the death of Jean actually at the hands of my new character. It won't be that epic a battle since Jean still can't figure out how to utilize his powers, combined with his age means he doesn't put up a great fight. But I feel obligated to bring closure to him as a character.
by African-Union » Fri Jun 10, 2011 5:15 am
SuperHappySmileyWorld wrote:African-Union wrote:
Actually, yes I did have plans for the death of Jean actually at the hands of my new character. It won't be that epic a battle since Jean still can't figure out how to utilize his powers, combined with his age means he doesn't put up a great fight. But I feel obligated to bring closure to him as a character.
I'll put Taps on standbye for you
by SuperHappySmileyWorld » Fri Jun 10, 2011 5:21 am
by African-Union » Fri Jun 10, 2011 5:28 am
by SuperHappySmileyWorld » Fri Jun 10, 2011 5:31 am
African-Union wrote:SuperHappySmileyWorld wrote:
you know, Taps, that song they play on the trumpet at military funerals. very depressing song purportedly, i'll have it on standbye for you for when Jean dies
Ohh I thought you meant TAPS as in the atlanta-based ghost study group haha. Yeah that'd be cool my brutha
by African-Union » Fri Jun 10, 2011 5:37 am
SuperHappySmileyWorld wrote:African-Union wrote:
Ohh I thought you meant TAPS as in the atlanta-based ghost study group haha. Yeah that'd be cool my brutha
yep, and though i do not have any real control over the plot, perhaps thats were we begin, every character knew Jean and are attending his funeral
by SuperHappySmileyWorld » Fri Jun 10, 2011 6:31 am
African-Union wrote:SuperHappySmileyWorld wrote:
yep, and though i do not have any real control over the plot, perhaps thats were we begin, every character knew Jean and are attending his funeral
Well that'd be good with the "good guys" like Alby and Agadar (since he's playing Pip I presume). But all the bad guys wouldn't much care I am sure.
by The Alice in Wondeland » Fri Jun 10, 2011 6:38 am
Jedi8246 wrote:Agadar wrote:Has any fellow councilor kept track of the score, and if so, could you post it for me?
It got lost in the sauce, but here is best I remember
Alice
Approved: Agadar, Karaig
Disapproved: Jedi8246, ESC
AU
Approved- (Me once he edits his history), ESC
Disapproved-
Zark
Approved-Jedi8246, Agadar(Since he changed his power)
Disapproved-
Don't remember all of the others.
by The Alice in Wondeland » Fri Jun 10, 2011 6:41 am
Jedi8246 wrote:The Alice in Wondeland wrote:I'm a Ni,as in 2, dan.OK,3rd in Kendo Bushido and Shotokan
Oh. Sorry, not as familiar with Bushido. Anyways you now have my approval, although work on your grammar.The Alice in Wondeland wrote:
Approved: Agadar, Karaig, Jedi8246
Disapproved:ESCZarkenis Ultima wrote:
Approved: Jedi8246
Disapproved: AgadarZirilrath wrote:
Approved: Agadar
Disapproved: -
by Warhaven » Fri Jun 10, 2011 6:43 am
The Alice in Wondeland wrote:Jedi8246 wrote:I'm a Ni,as in 2, dan.OK,3rd in Kendo Bushido and Shotokan
Oh. Sorry, not as familiar with Bushido. Anyways you now have my approval, although work on your grammar.The Alice in Wondeland wrote:
Approved: Agadar, Karaig, Jedi8246, Warhaven
Disapproved:-Zarkenis Ultima wrote:
Approved: Jedi8246, Warhaven
Disapproved: AgadarZirilrath wrote:
Approved: Agadar Warhaven
Disapproved: -
by The Alice in Wondeland » Fri Jun 10, 2011 6:44 am
by Warhaven » Fri Jun 10, 2011 6:49 am
by African-Union » Fri Jun 10, 2011 7:22 am
SuperHappySmileyWorld wrote:African-Union wrote:
Well that'd be good with the "good guys" like Alby and Agadar (since he's playing Pip I presume). But all the bad guys wouldn't much care I am sure.
true, but still that is a starting place right? i mean Jean was one of the original people, it should be costomay that some of the others show up for his funeral
by Laneige » Fri Jun 10, 2011 8:37 am
by Warhaven » Fri Jun 10, 2011 8:44 am
Laneige wrote:
Abilities: Street fighting perhaps? Akira was made coming from a terrible background after all.
by Laneige » Fri Jun 10, 2011 8:48 am
Warhaven wrote:Laneige wrote:
Abilities: Street fighting perhaps? Akira was made coming from a terrible background after all.
Perhaps? PERHAPS?!
Perhaps I should deny you, until you can figure this out for yourself.
"Made coming from a terrible Background"
You make it sound like you don't even totally understand your own idea.
Take 24 hours minimum, and further think over Akira. Until then, No. A writer must understand his or her own creation first, before anyone else can. This is law, beyond the scope and boundaries of this RP, and Nationstates, and is endemic to all works of a literary nature, and so long as you violate this law by not understanding a character you yourself created, I shall have to block you at every turn.
Better define his abilities thus proving your improved understanding of your own idea, and I shall change my mind, that is your only flaw.
by Laneige » Fri Jun 10, 2011 9:04 am
Warhaven wrote:Laneige wrote:
Abilities: Street fighting perhaps? Akira was made coming from a terrible background after all.
Perhaps? PERHAPS?!
Perhaps I should deny you, until you can figure this out for yourself.
"Made coming from a terrible Background"
You make it sound like you don't even totally understand your own idea.
Take 24 hours minimum, and further think over Akira. Until then, No. A writer must understand his or her own creation first, before anyone else can. This is law, beyond the scope and boundaries of this RP, and Nationstates, and is endemic to all works of a literary nature, and so long as you violate this law by not understanding a character you yourself created, I shall have to block you at every turn.
Better define his abilities thus proving your improved understanding of your own idea, and I shall change my mind, that is your only flaw.
by Jedi8246 » Fri Jun 10, 2011 9:20 am
The Alice in Wondeland wrote:Jedi8246 wrote:It got lost in the sauce, but here is best I remember
Alice
Approved: Agadar, Karaig
Disapproved: Jedi8246, ESC
AU
Approved- (Me once he edits his history), ESC
Disapproved-
Zark
Approved-Jedi8246, Agadar(Since he changed his power)
Disapproved-
Don't remember all of the others.
Jedi approved me.
Conservative Morality wrote:When you call Bieber feminine, you insult all women.
Agadar wrote:Next thing you know, God turns out to be some weird green space monster with tentacles and a monocle.
Khadgar wrote:Oddly enough, a lot of people who are plotting to harm other people aren't really interested in legal niceties.
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