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Tuboo Shippers
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Postby Tuboo Shippers » Fri Mar 25, 2022 12:21 pm

Camper Name: VuVu Fawner
Age: 15
Divine Parentage: Unclaimed
Apearance:
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Known Abilities:
Demigod-normality
Has the same strength,speed,battle skills, and she can understand as much Latin as all other demigods.

Affinity of the fox
VuVu has fox ears, and a fox tail. she can control both at will, as well as rotating her ear 150 degrees.

Weapons

Lock pick: A single magical lock pick made of celestial bronze that can turn into a dagger. It can also open any door with a physical lock on it.

Biography:

VuVu was left at an adoption center in Manhattan, and lived there for several years before finally being adopted by a private investigator. During her time there, she developed a sense of curiosity like no other, and discovered an innate ability to gather information and almost never getting caught.

When she turned 12, she started to notice things others didn't, like the time where a man in a pinstripe suit appeared on the corner of a street and dissipated after watching a coal-haired girl in a black leather jacket. This led her on a hunt to spot all of them. Eventually, she found camp Half-Blood. She's a new arrival. (please note-she knows about her tail and ears, but she doesn't talk about them because she assumes nobody can see them.)


Sample of Roleplay:

You probably don't remember me, so i'll just list some anyway.
    The Tavern, (Deleted due to mod all chill/chat thread removal, but it was, in fact, an active roleplay.)
    Portal to the Parralell (Deleted because a mod's character was a Mary sue, and wasn't let in.)
    Somewhere, buried, is my appereance in TotG.
    Also, not sure if it counts, but I'm on the twitch streamer DroppedfromAbove's minecraft SMP. My username is Porstand, Nickname por. First couple of episodes are gearing up and normal minecraft, but we're hoping to plan a war.
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The Anarcho-Syndicalist Commune
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Postby The Anarcho-Syndicalist Commune » Sat Mar 26, 2022 2:06 pm

Tuboo Shippers wrote:Camper Name: VuVu Fawner
Age: 15
Divine Parentage: Unclaimed
Apearance:

Known Abilities:
Demigod-normality
Has the same strength,speed,battle skills, and she can understand as much Latin as all other demigods.

Affinity of the fox
VuVu has fox ears, and a fox tail. she can control both at will, as well as rotating her ear 150 degrees.

Weapons

Lock pick: A single magical lock pick made of celestial bronze that can turn into a dagger. It can also open any door with a physical lock on it.

Biography:

VuVu was left at an adoption center in Manhattan, and lived there for several years before finally being adopted by a private investigator. During her time there, she developed a sense of curiosity like no other, and discovered an innate ability to gather information and almost never getting caught.

When she turned 12, she started to notice things others didn't, like the time where a man in a pinstripe suit appeared on the corner of a street and dissipated after watching a coal-haired girl in a black leather jacket. This led her on a hunt to spot all of them. Eventually, she found camp Half-Blood. She's a new arrival. (please note-she knows about her tail and ears, but she doesn't talk about them because she assumes nobody can see them.)


Sample of Roleplay:

You probably don't remember me, so i'll just list some anyway.
    The Tavern, (Deleted due to mod all chill/chat thread removal, but it was, in fact, an active roleplay.)
    Portal to the Parralell (Deleted because a mod's character was a Mary sue, and wasn't let in.)
    Somewhere, buried, is my appereance in TotG.
    Also, not sure if it counts, but I'm on the twitch streamer DroppedfromAbove's minecraft SMP. My username is Porstand, Nickname por. First couple of episodes are gearing up and normal minecraft, but we're hoping to plan a war.


Right, so we have a lot to review here. First of all, I'll need to know who her parent is, because there's zero clues to it being any sort of hellenic god besides you slapping on demigod physiology into her powers. Second, you'll need to pick an actual human appearance for her. This is a well established universe and there has been no demigod character in it thus far that's had anything close to that appearance. Maybe an Egyptian god but they're neither part of this rp at the moment or capable of producing demi-gods.

The backstory here is sparse at best. You'll need to significantly flesh it out. The first and foremost issue with it is that this character seems to be roman in origin, yet has never been brought to the Wolf House or Camp Jupiter, nor is there any explanation for why they are at Camp Halfblood. While some of the characters have shorter backstories they give details about their lifes, who they are, and where they are coming from. Vu's gives none of this.

You're correct in your assumption that I don't remember ever interacting with you before you started spamming the IC for the rp. I'm going to need an actual, multi-line example of your writing in character for this RP. I can't see either of these deleted rps, and as far as I can tell from asking around you've never made a real appearance in TotG, you just spammed the IC page in the same manner as this one.

There's a lot of work that needs to go into this app, and to be quite frank at this point I see nothing that indicates that you will be able to bring it up to quality. I'm going to reject this character wholesale, and if you'd like to try again with a fresh one that fits the rules of the PJO universe and actually write out a sufficient sample piece, I'll give it another look. Otherwise I ask that you stop spamming our IC and try to get some more experience. It's clear that you're new to this so I'm trying not to be harsh but this is very substandard compared to the other apps in the thread and it comes after you've spammed our IC. I wish you the best in future writing and hope that you can either get a working app up for our RP or find one that fits you!

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Tuboo Shippers
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Postby Tuboo Shippers » Sun Mar 27, 2022 12:43 pm

I sincerely apologize for spamming this IC. I am fairly new to this type of role play, and I didn't know I had to have permission to join. As for the said spamming in TotG, this is actually untrue. I got a telegram invite telling me to join in, and who I would be. Not knowing any better, I joined in, assuming I could because of the telegram. However, after a while, I got telegrams telling me to leave. So I did.

As for VuVu's parentage, Her mother is the Teumessian fox, who is a descendant of the elder gods. The Teumessian Fox is one of Typhon and Echidna's Daughters. In Greek mythology, the Teumessian Fox is both a god and a monster. This explains her ears and tail, as most monsters have something similar.

While the Teumessian Fox was turned into a constellation in Greek mythology, I imagined that VuVu was created the same way Annabeth was.

I did, in fact, leave clues. VuVu is shorthand for Vulpes Vulpes, the Latin word for fox. Vulpes Vulpes is also the scientific name for the red fox. Her last name, Fawner, is a synonym of the word Canine, the family of animals that includes dogs, wolves, and foxes.

I understand this character's been rejected and I will take your advice to heart.
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Scandinavia21
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Postby Scandinavia21 » Sun Jun 12, 2022 9:11 pm

I am thinking of creating a Roman demigod.
Nation: Kingdom of Scandinavia
Technology: MT- PMT
Year: 2025
Territory: Norway, Sweden, Finland, Denmark, Iceland, Estonia, Latvia, Lithuania, Kola Peninsula
Leader: Queen Anastasia the 3rd
GENA Ambassador: Thomas Hauger

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Nations United for Conquest
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Postby Nations United for Conquest » Mon Jun 13, 2022 6:12 am

Scandinavia21 wrote:I am thinking of creating a Roman demigod.


Activity has been a bit slow, but I think you're still good to app. Any ideas?
National Information
Leader - Prime Minister Alaro Kuhn
Capital - Gesno
Population - 325,581,223
Currency - Krot ($)
Roleplay Information
OP Gatelord - [OOC]
The Coming Storm - PLANNED
TBA FE RP - PLANNED

THE DEMOCRATIC SOCIALIST REPUBLIC OF OSKANO
COBALT NETWORK MEMBER
Est. 1663

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Postby Scandinavia21 » Mon Jun 13, 2022 7:07 pm

Nations United for Conquest wrote:
Scandinavia21 wrote:I am thinking of creating a Roman demigod.


Activity has been a bit slow, but I think you're still good to app. Any ideas?

I was thinking of making a daughter of Mars.
Nation: Kingdom of Scandinavia
Technology: MT- PMT
Year: 2025
Territory: Norway, Sweden, Finland, Denmark, Iceland, Estonia, Latvia, Lithuania, Kola Peninsula
Leader: Queen Anastasia the 3rd
GENA Ambassador: Thomas Hauger

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Nations United for Conquest
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Postby Nations United for Conquest » Mon Jun 13, 2022 7:16 pm

Scandinavia21 wrote:
Nations United for Conquest wrote:
Activity has been a bit slow, but I think you're still good to app. Any ideas?

I was thinking of making a daughter of Mars.


A classic then. Most of the current Roman characters are from the 5th Cohort, including both Optios and one or two rank and file. There is also a PC that is a Centurion from the 3rd. One of the 5th's Centurions [The female one] is an NPC, as is the male Centurion of the 3rd and one of the Praetors, just to give a rough overview of the Roman cast. Those apps aren't a bad place to look for inspiration and/or information. Feel free to ask more questions if you're curious about something. Myself or someone else will be able to answer them
National Information
Leader - Prime Minister Alaro Kuhn
Capital - Gesno
Population - 325,581,223
Currency - Krot ($)
Roleplay Information
OP Gatelord - [OOC]
The Coming Storm - PLANNED
TBA FE RP - PLANNED

THE DEMOCRATIC SOCIALIST REPUBLIC OF OSKANO
COBALT NETWORK MEMBER
Est. 1663

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Postby Emus Republic Of Australia » Wed Jul 20, 2022 8:21 am

aye a PJO one? Nice
Tier 8 Type 7 according to this Index: viewtopic.php?f=23&t=453617
NS stats ain’t canon


Hi, I’m ERoA, basically I’m just what if sentient emus decided to take over Australia.

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Nations United for Conquest
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Postby Nations United for Conquest » Wed Jul 20, 2022 10:53 am

Emus Republic Of Australia wrote:aye a PJO one? Nice


This RP isn't running anymore, unfortunately
National Information
Leader - Prime Minister Alaro Kuhn
Capital - Gesno
Population - 325,581,223
Currency - Krot ($)
Roleplay Information
OP Gatelord - [OOC]
The Coming Storm - PLANNED
TBA FE RP - PLANNED

THE DEMOCRATIC SOCIALIST REPUBLIC OF OSKANO
COBALT NETWORK MEMBER
Est. 1663

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Emus Republic Of Australia
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Postby Emus Republic Of Australia » Sat Aug 06, 2022 6:47 pm

Nations United for Conquest wrote:
Emus Republic Of Australia wrote:aye a PJO one? Nice


This RP isn't running anymore, unfortunately

Damnit
Tier 8 Type 7 according to this Index: viewtopic.php?f=23&t=453617
NS stats ain’t canon


Hi, I’m ERoA, basically I’m just what if sentient emus decided to take over Australia.

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