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G-Tech Corporation
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Inoffensive Centrist Democracy

Postby G-Tech Corporation » Sat Sep 18, 2021 7:42 am

Indiana Controlled Florida wrote:
Author Applicaiton
Name: Craigi Valorgock
Age: 26
Height and Weight: 5'4 s and 137 pounds
Skin, hair, and eye description: White, Blond, Blue
( Optional ) Picture: NEIN

Prior Profession: US Congressman
Level of education ( specify degrees or note worthy): Bachelors Degree in Political Science
Useful skills: Charismatic, Smart

National Origin: American
What were you doing prior to falling asleep and awakening in the past?: Writing a bill Social Security bill
Description of personality: Funny, Judging, Political, Charismatic, Religious
Where in the world are you landing?: in Tenochtitlan (Mexico City)

Autobiography/Biography ( paragraph minimum ): Before arriving in this world, Craigi Valorgock was an extremly smart and Funny person. He was a Congressman, and a man of the people. He loved to play games with his son, and would always arrive to church on time. His wife and him were very close, and they were happy together. Craigi was writing a Bill when he awakened in the past. Craigi is now very scared, and sad that he will not be able to see his family again.

Writing Sample:


( Optional on down)
What are your intentions for this RP, what's the long term goal?: To take most of Mexico and Mesoamerica, and if any colonizers come stop them from colonizing.
What people or places are you taking inspiration from?: The Aztecs
Why did you chose to land where you did?:
What vibe should we get from your civilization and it's culture?: Kinda erie
What are your character's motivations?:
Theme Song?:
What do you wanna see in this RP? What would make it better?:

APP


Hmm. Looks reasonably good. I should note, though, that we prefer our RPers base their Authors on themselves - if you're actually a Congressperson that's great, but if not it'd be great if you could edit to reflect that.
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Civil Rights Lovefest

Postby Saxony-Brandenburg » Tue Sep 21, 2021 8:51 am

G-Tech Corporation wrote:
Indiana Controlled Florida wrote:
Author Applicaiton
Name: Craigi Valorgock
Age: 26
Height and Weight: 5'4 s and 137 pounds
Skin, hair, and eye description: White, Blond, Blue
( Optional ) Picture: NEIN

Prior Profession: US Congressman
Level of education ( specify degrees or note worthy): Bachelors Degree in Political Science
Useful skills: Charismatic, Smart

National Origin: American
What were you doing prior to falling asleep and awakening in the past?: Writing a bill Social Security bill
Description of personality: Funny, Judging, Political, Charismatic, Religious
Where in the world are you landing?: in Tenochtitlan (Mexico City)

Autobiography/Biography ( paragraph minimum ): Before arriving in this world, Craigi Valorgock was an extremly smart and Funny person. He was a Congressman, and a man of the people. He loved to play games with his son, and would always arrive to church on time. His wife and him were very close, and they were happy together. Craigi was writing a Bill when he awakened in the past. Craigi is now very scared, and sad that he will not be able to see his family again.

Writing Sample:


( Optional on down)
What are your intentions for this RP, what's the long term goal?: To take most of Mexico and Mesoamerica, and if any colonizers come stop them from colonizing.
What people or places are you taking inspiration from?: The Aztecs
Why did you chose to land where you did?:
What vibe should we get from your civilization and it's culture?: Kinda erie
What are your character's motivations?:
Theme Song?:
What do you wanna see in this RP? What would make it better?:

APP


Hmm. Looks reasonably good. I should note, though, that we prefer our RPers base their Authors on themselves - if you're actually a Congressperson that's great, but if not it'd be great if you could edit to reflect that.


^^
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Saxony-Brandenburg
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Postby Saxony-Brandenburg » Tue Sep 21, 2021 8:52 am

Damn, y’all are really gonna make me triple post aren’t you?
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G-Tech Corporation
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Inoffensive Centrist Democracy

Postby G-Tech Corporation » Tue Sep 21, 2021 8:53 am

Saxony-Brandenburg wrote:Damn, y’all are really gonna make me triple post aren’t you?


Sorry lad, busy gearing up a Different World :P

Soon, soon. Anyone seen Joohan around?
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Northern Socialist Council Republics
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Ex-Nation

Postby Northern Socialist Council Republics » Tue Sep 21, 2021 10:01 am

Oh hey this is still a thing huh.
Call me "Russ" if you're referring to me the out-of-character poster or "NSRS" if you're referring to me the in-character nation.
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Postby Saxony-Brandenburg » Tue Sep 21, 2021 11:34 am

Northern Socialist Council Republics wrote:Oh hey this is still a thing huh.

Yes it is!!! It’s never stopped homie! Just need people to post :)
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Postby G-Tech Corporation » Tue Sep 21, 2021 3:19 pm

Saxony-Brandenburg wrote:
Northern Socialist Council Republics wrote:Oh hey this is still a thing huh.

Yes it is!!! It’s never stopped homie! Just need people to post :)


Just for you I'm currently crunching up a post about ancient Greek agriculture heh.
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Postby Saxony-Brandenburg » Tue Sep 21, 2021 3:21 pm

G-Tech Corporation wrote:
Saxony-Brandenburg wrote:Yes it is!!! It’s never stopped homie! Just need people to post :)


Just for you I'm currently crunching up a post about ancient Greek agriculture heh.

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Madmunch
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Postby Madmunch » Wed Sep 22, 2021 3:06 am

Tagging this for interest. :blush:

Can anybody let me know what kind of major civs are already in play? So that I can see what kind of nations are left to app for
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Postby Saxony-Brandenburg » Wed Sep 22, 2021 5:12 am

Madmunch wrote:Tagging this for interest. :blush:

Can anybody let me know what kind of major civs are already in play? So that I can see what kind of nations are left to app for


Absolutely! Welcome aboard and thank you for the interest in this here humble rp!

To go from the largest on down, we start off with the Imperium of Man, led by Viktor Nemtsov. They can be described as a Christian, Germanic, militaristic, & autocratic society which has successfully banded many of the disparate tribes of central Europe together in a long string of settlements along the Danube, stretching from Serbia up to Denmark!

Secondly is the "Chinese Empire", led by one Aaron Dawson. It is a highly bureaucratic, centralized, harsh, and cruel state which demands absolute obedience and sacrifice for her state building project. They harshly punish their enemies big or small, and will raise massive numbers of conscripts to throw at their problems. This being said, their size may not be all that it seems, (as much of her control over territories which is claimed is far less in reality).

The next largest in relative terms is the Sumerian kingdom, led once by the mysterious slave turned vizier Luther. They were a centralized and chaotic monarchy which established itself as controler of all the city-states of mesopotamia and even into Syria and turkey by way of large displays of wealth and resources. However, they were constantly beset by a chaos of civil war and neglect - massive catastrophies and plague left the region it a husk of its former self.

After that is the Nestos League - led by one eccentric Victor Speer. a Bulgarian and Macedonian based trading empire which projects itself through peculiar and quazi-religious orders of roaming scholars, who travel in search of knowledge and opportunities both diplomatic and mercantile.

Then you have Aksum, a despotic monarchy held firm by a strong royal army led by Andrew Marks. While officially worshipping its indigenous folk religion, Andrew has shaped the country to be far more Christian, and far stronger, than it had ever been before. They model themselves often after Rome - taking on its aesthetics and some of her policies, such as the settling of veterans in the lands of conquered peoples, and the mass taking of slaves.

Next I would put the Hejazi confederacy (me), led by the mystic Olifia and her warrior wife Alya. Hejaz is a strong tribal confederation and republic, with a working agreement made between the more populous seaside settlements, which specialize in trade and maritime economics, and the far more sparse and pastoral interior tribes. Despite this, most of the economic activity and political influence is centered in one settlement, the largest by far, Yanbu. They are proudly pagan and have a militaristic bent - taking up piracy and fighting amongst themselves for their ideals, such as a hatred of slavery or foreign influence.

I don't know too much on the others to take too much detail to count - but Hibernia is a scholarly-focused kingdom in Ireland and some of Great Britain, with a strong love of gold and trade with the Imperium.

Icedonia was once a harshly chauvinistic and spartan society in England, but which met its match against the Imperium. A massive defeat caused their society to become what might be compared of a failed state, with her author nowhere to be seen.

In japan, a monastic and Buddhist society of Lesbian nuns and tribal queens exist - though that was many years ago, and I am sure much has changed.

In Burma, the small kingdom nurtured by Holly long is forming, with a blend of Buddhism and Animism and with the goals of a Mandala-system forming around her city.

And there's several more, but thats enough for now. We have a big cast of characters, and many who recon they're the perfect autocrat! I hope you consider giving this rp a chance, and remember to base your character on yourself! Remember, its YOU sent back into the bronze age- so have fun with it! Write a story! Don't just play a game!
"When Adam delved and Eve span, who was then the gentleman?"

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G-Tech Corporation
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Inoffensive Centrist Democracy

Postby G-Tech Corporation » Wed Sep 22, 2021 6:10 am

Saxony-Brandenburg wrote:Icedonia was once a harshly chauvinistic and spartan society in England, but which met its match against the Imperium. A massive defeat caused their society to become what might be compared of a failed state, with her author nowhere to be seen.


A lovely summary in general!

Just singling this out since Joohan won't appreciate the cheek :P
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Madmunch
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Founded: Apr 27, 2019
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Postby Madmunch » Wed Sep 22, 2021 6:51 am

Saxony-Brandenburg wrote:And there's several more, but thats enough for now. We have a big cast of characters, and many who recon they're the perfect autocrat! I hope you consider giving this rp a chance, and remember to base your character on yourself! Remember, its YOU sent back into the bronze age- so have fun with it! Write a story! Don't just play a game!


Oooo nice! Many thanks for the warm welcome and the awesome summary of the civs in play. Lemme explore and think up abit more of what I wanna RP as. Just to be sure, are we sticking to specifically just RL ancient civs that existed during this time period?
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Postby Endem » Wed Sep 22, 2021 9:59 am

Saxony-Brandenburg wrote:
Madmunch wrote:Tagging this for interest. :blush:

Can anybody let me know what kind of major civs are already in play? So that I can see what kind of nations are left to app for


Absolutely! Welcome aboard and thank you for the interest in this here humble rp!

To go from the largest on down, we start off with the Imperium of Man, led by Viktor Nemtsov. They can be described as a Christian, Germanic, militaristic, & autocratic society which has successfully banded many of the disparate tribes of central Europe together in a long string of settlements along the Danube, stretching from Serbia up to Denmark!

Secondly is the "Chinese Empire", led by one Aaron Dawson. It is a highly bureaucratic, centralized, harsh, and cruel state which demands absolute obedience and sacrifice for her state building project. They harshly punish their enemies big or small, and will raise massive numbers of conscripts to throw at their problems. This being said, their size may not be all that it seems, (as much of her control over territories which is claimed is far less in reality).

The next largest in relative terms is the Sumerian kingdom, led once by the mysterious slave turned vizier Luther. They were a centralized and chaotic monarchy which established itself as controler of all the city-states of mesopotamia and even into Syria and turkey by way of large displays of wealth and resources. However, they were constantly beset by a chaos of civil war and neglect - massive catastrophies and plague left the region it a husk of its former self.

After that is the Nestos League - led by one eccentric Victor Speer. a Bulgarian and Macedonian based trading empire which projects itself through peculiar and quazi-religious orders of roaming scholars, who travel in search of knowledge and opportunities both diplomatic and mercantile.

Then you have Aksum, a despotic monarchy held firm by a strong royal army led by Andrew Marks. While officially worshipping its indigenous folk religion, Andrew has shaped the country to be far more Christian, and far stronger, than it had ever been before. They model themselves often after Rome - taking on its aesthetics and some of her policies, such as the settling of veterans in the lands of conquered peoples, and the mass taking of slaves.

Next I would put the Hejazi confederacy (me), led by the mystic Olifia and her warrior wife Alya. Hejaz is a strong tribal confederation and republic, with a working agreement made between the more populous seaside settlements, which specialize in trade and maritime economics, and the far more sparse and pastoral interior tribes. Despite this, most of the economic activity and political influence is centered in one settlement, the largest by far, Yanbu. They are proudly pagan and have a militaristic bent - taking up piracy and fighting amongst themselves for their ideals, such as a hatred of slavery or foreign influence.

I don't know too much on the others to take too much detail to count - but Hibernia is a scholarly-focused kingdom in Ireland and some of Great Britain, with a strong love of gold and trade with the Imperium.

Icedonia was once a harshly chauvinistic and spartan society in England, but which met its match against the Imperium. A massive defeat caused their society to become what might be compared of a failed state, with her author nowhere to be seen.

In japan, a monastic and Buddhist society of Lesbian nuns and tribal queens exist - though that was many years ago, and I am sure much has changed.

In Burma, the small kingdom nurtured by Holly long is forming, with a blend of Buddhism and Animism and with the goals of a Mandala-system forming around her city.

And there's several more, but thats enough for now. We have a big cast of characters, and many who recon they're the perfect autocrat! I hope you consider giving this rp a chance, and remember to base your character on yourself! Remember, its YOU sent back into the bronze age- so have fun with it! Write a story! Don't just play a game!

And now I'll need to make a post just to get included in this summary.
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Madmunch
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Postby Madmunch » Wed Sep 22, 2021 10:16 am

Hmm ..I have an idea for a civ based in West Africa. Something along the lines of a prehistoric Ghana or Mali-type nation. But since I do want interactions with other civs eventually, I'm not sure if the location is ideal.

Also leaning more towards a trading civ rather than a militaristic one. I want to be rich off of dem gold and diamonds asap before dem white folks come and take em all :lol:
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Postby Endem » Wed Sep 22, 2021 10:21 am

Madmunch wrote:Hmm ..I have an idea for a civ based in West Africa. Something along the lines of a prehistoric Ghana or Mali-type nation. But since I do want interactions with other civs eventually, I'm not sure if the location is ideal.

Also leaning more towards a trading civ rather than a militaristic one. I want to be rich off of dem gold and diamonds asap before dem white folks come and take em all :lol:


May I propose the Horn of Africa? Just be wary of Aksum. Or perhaps the Island of Hormuz.
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Postby Madmunch » Wed Sep 22, 2021 10:27 am

Endem wrote:
May I propose the Horn of Africa? Just be wary of Aksum. Or perhaps the Island of Hormuz.


Ooo possible locations yea. But I most probably don't want to be THAT close to any civ yet. I believe Aksum would literally be my next door neighbor and that would be scary for a naked newborn like me :p
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Postby Endem » Wed Sep 22, 2021 10:49 am

Madmunch wrote:
Endem wrote:
May I propose the Horn of Africa? Just be wary of Aksum. Or perhaps the Island of Hormuz.


Ooo possible locations yea. But I most probably don't want to be THAT close to any civ yet. I believe Aksum would literally be my next door neighbor and that would be scary for a naked newborn like me :p

Yeah that would be a bit of a problem, however the Somali climate would give you a bit of a shield from the Aksumite armies, if you utilize it well. Hormus meanwhile is pretty much around dead husks, Sumer is weak, embroiled in battle, so is the state in India, and Elam is most likely weakened by the loss of three trading partners that had a bit of a golden circle going on in the Persian Sea. The only author led civ in the region is mine, which is still in its infancy after destroying the Dilmun civilization.
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Cainesland
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Authoritarian Democracy

Postby Cainesland » Wed Sep 22, 2021 10:53 am

I don’t foresee posting again for awhile. I think I will be dropping out of the rp. My apologies. Good luck and have fun as it continues.

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Authoritarian Democracy

Postby Cainesland » Wed Sep 22, 2021 10:59 am

Saxony-Brandenburg wrote:
Madmunch wrote:Tagging this for interest. :blush:

Can anybody let me know what kind of major civs are already in play? So that I can see what kind of nations are left to app for


Absolutely! Welcome aboard and thank you for the interest in this here humble rp!

To go from the largest on down, we start off with the Imperium of Man, led by Viktor Nemtsov. They can be described as a Christian, Germanic, militaristic, & autocratic society which has successfully banded many of the disparate tribes of central Europe together in a long string of settlements along the Danube, stretching from Serbia up to Denmark!

Secondly is the "Chinese Empire", led by one Aaron Dawson. It is a highly bureaucratic, centralized, harsh, and cruel state which demands absolute obedience and sacrifice for her state building project. They harshly punish their enemies big or small, and will raise massive numbers of conscripts to throw at their problems. This being said, their size may not be all that it seems, (as much of her control over territories which is claimed is far less in reality).

The next largest in relative terms is the Sumerian kingdom, led once by the mysterious slave turned vizier Luther. They were a centralized and chaotic monarchy which established itself as controler of all the city-states of mesopotamia and even into Syria and turkey by way of large displays of wealth and resources. However, they were constantly beset by a chaos of civil war and neglect - massive catastrophies and plague left the region it a husk of its former self.

After that is the Nestos League - led by one eccentric Victor Speer. a Bulgarian and Macedonian based trading empire which projects itself through peculiar and quazi-religious orders of roaming scholars, who travel in search of knowledge and opportunities both diplomatic and mercantile.

Then you have Aksum, a despotic monarchy held firm by a strong royal army led by Andrew Marks. While officially worshipping its indigenous folk religion, Andrew has shaped the country to be far more Christian, and far stronger, than it had ever been before. They model themselves often after Rome - taking on its aesthetics and some of her policies, such as the settling of veterans in the lands of conquered peoples, and the mass taking of slaves.

Next I would put the Hejazi confederacy (me), led by the mystic Olifia and her warrior wife Alya. Hejaz is a strong tribal confederation and republic, with a working agreement made between the more populous seaside settlements, which specialize in trade and maritime economics, and the far more sparse and pastoral interior tribes. Despite this, most of the economic activity and political influence is centered in one settlement, the largest by far, Yanbu. They are proudly pagan and have a militaristic bent - taking up piracy and fighting amongst themselves for their ideals, such as a hatred of slavery or foreign influence.

I don't know too much on the others to take too much detail to count - but Hibernia is a scholarly-focused kingdom in Ireland and some of Great Britain, with a strong love of gold and trade with the Imperium.

Icedonia was once a harshly chauvinistic and spartan society in England, but which met its match against the Imperium. A massive defeat caused their society to become what might be compared of a failed state, with her author nowhere to be seen.

In japan, a monastic and Buddhist society of Lesbian nuns and tribal queens exist - though that was many years ago, and I am sure much has changed.

In Burma, the small kingdom nurtured by Holly long is forming, with a blend of Buddhism and Animism and with the goals of a Mandala-system forming around her city.

And there's several more, but thats enough for now. We have a big cast of characters, and many who recon they're the perfect autocrat! I hope you consider giving this rp a chance, and remember to base your character on yourself! Remember, its YOU sent back into the bronze age- so have fun with it! Write a story! Don't just play a game!


Adding on, there is also the Single Market, Northwest Company, and Hudson’s Bay Company. The Single market is a free trade and free movement agreement area around the Black Sea with organized associations carrying out trade with grain backed currency. It has a defence pact and leadership made up from members elected by the tribes of the member areas. It has close relationships with Nestos, uneasy relationships with the Northwest and Hudsons Bay corporations, and I’m guessing difficult relations with the imperium.

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Inoffensive Centrist Democracy

Postby G-Tech Corporation » Wed Sep 22, 2021 12:42 pm

Madmunch wrote:Oooo nice! Many thanks for the warm welcome and the awesome summary of the civs in play. Lemme explore and think up abit more of what I wanna RP as. Just to be sure, are we sticking to specifically just RL ancient civs that existed during this time period?


Certainly no need to do that. Part of the beauty of 3000 BCE is that it is, outside of very specific areas, not far from a blank slate.
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Saxony-Brandenburg
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Civil Rights Lovefest

Postby Saxony-Brandenburg » Wed Sep 22, 2021 3:18 pm

G-Tech Corporation wrote:
Saxony-Brandenburg wrote:Icedonia was once a harshly chauvinistic and spartan society in England, but which met its match against the Imperium. A massive defeat caused their society to become what might be compared of a failed state, with her author nowhere to be seen.


A lovely summary in general!

Just singling this out since Joohan won't appreciate the cheek :P


Hey- that's how I interpreted you two's wild flurry of posts followed by Joohan's forfeiture to move off to Tibet
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Indiana Controlled Florida
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Postby Indiana Controlled Florida » Sun Sep 26, 2021 4:58 pm

Author Application
Name: Craigi Valorgock
Age: 26
Height and Weight: 5'4 s and 137 pounds
Skin, hair, and eye description: White, Blond, Blue
( Optional ) Picture: NEIN

Prior Profession: Doctor
Level of education ( specify degrees or note worthy): Bachelor's Degree in Medical Science
Useful skills: Charismatic, Smart

National Origin: American
What were you doing prior to falling asleep and awakening in the past?: Treating a Patient
Description of personality: Funny, Judging, Political, Charismatic, Religious
Where in the world are you landing?: in Tenochtitlan (Mexico City)

Autobiography/Biography ( paragraph minimum ): Before arriving in this world, Craigi Valorgock was an extremely smart and Funny person. He was a doctor that was political, supporting the democrats. His patients loved him and his wife loved him too. He loved to play chess with his son, always letting him win. He was about to treat a patient when all of a sudden he awakes in the past. He is scared and prays to god for him to return to his family.

Writing Sample:


( Optional on down)
What are your intentions for this RP, what's the long term goal?: To take most of Mexico and Mesoamerica, and if any colonizers come stop them from colonizing.
What people or places are you taking inspiration from?: The Aztecs
Why did you chose to land where you did?:
What vibe should we get from your civilization and it's culture?: Kinda erie
What are your character's motivations?:
Theme Song?:
What do you wanna see in this RP? What would make it better?:

APP

REVISED, has my actual occupation

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Saxony-Brandenburg
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Civil Rights Lovefest

Postby Saxony-Brandenburg » Sun Sep 26, 2021 8:59 pm

Indiana Controlled Florida wrote:
Author Application
Name: Craigi Valorgock
Age: 26
Height and Weight: 5'4 s and 137 pounds
Skin, hair, and eye description: White, Blond, Blue
( Optional ) Picture: NEIN

Prior Profession: Doctor
Level of education ( specify degrees or note worthy): Bachelor's Degree in Medical Science
Useful skills: Charismatic, Smart

National Origin: American
What were you doing prior to falling asleep and awakening in the past?: Treating a Patient
Description of personality: Funny, Judging, Political, Charismatic, Religious
Where in the world are you landing?: in Tenochtitlan (Mexico City)

Autobiography/Biography ( paragraph minimum ): Before arriving in this world, Craigi Valorgock was an extremely smart and Funny person. He was a doctor that was political, supporting the democrats. His patients loved him and his wife loved him too. He loved to play chess with his son, always letting him win. He was about to treat a patient when all of a sudden he awakes in the past. He is scared and prays to god for him to return to his family.

Writing Sample:


( Optional on down)
What are your intentions for this RP, what's the long term goal?: To take most of Mexico and Mesoamerica, and if any colonizers come stop them from colonizing.
What people or places are you taking inspiration from?: The Aztecs
Why did you chose to land where you did?:
What vibe should we get from your civilization and it's culture?: Kinda erie
What are your character's motivations?:
Theme Song?:
What do you wanna see in this RP? What would make it better?:

APP

REVISED, has my actual occupation


This is... a little barebones. maybe flesh out a lot of what you have here first.
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Indiana Controlled Florida
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Postby Indiana Controlled Florida » Mon Sep 27, 2021 4:18 am

Saxony-Brandenburg wrote:
Indiana Controlled Florida wrote:
Author Application
Name: Craigi Valorgock
Age: 26
Height and Weight: 5'4 s and 137 pounds
Skin, hair, and eye description: White, Blond, Blue
( Optional ) Picture: NEIN

Prior Profession: Doctor
Level of education ( specify degrees or note worthy): Bachelor's Degree in Medical Science
Useful skills: Charismatic, Smart

National Origin: American
What were you doing prior to falling asleep and awakening in the past?: Treating a Patient
Description of personality: Funny, Judging, Political, Charismatic, Religious
Where in the world are you landing?: in Tenochtitlan (Mexico City)

Autobiography/Biography ( paragraph minimum ): Before arriving in this world, Craigi Valorgock was an extremely smart and Funny person. He was a doctor that was political, supporting the democrats. His patients loved him and his wife loved him too. He loved to play chess with his son, always letting him win. He was about to treat a patient when all of a sudden he awakes in the past. He is scared and prays to god for him to return to his family.

Writing Sample:


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What are your intentions for this RP, what's the long term goal?: To take most of Mexico and Mesoamerica, and if any colonizers come stop them from colonizing.
What people or places are you taking inspiration from?: The Aztecs
Why did you chose to land where you did?:
What vibe should we get from your civilization and it's culture?: Kinda erie
What are your character's motivations?:
Theme Song?:
What do you wanna see in this RP? What would make it better?:

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REVISED, has my actual occupation


This is... a little barebones. maybe flesh out a lot of what you have here first.

So the minute I change my app, I have to change it again. Oh my god.

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Inoffensive Centrist Democracy

Postby G-Tech Corporation » Mon Sep 27, 2021 5:54 am

Indiana Controlled Florida wrote:
Saxony-Brandenburg wrote:
This is... a little barebones. maybe flesh out a lot of what you have here first.

So the minute I change my app, I have to change it again. Oh my god.


A minor fleshing out is good for the soul. You're going to have to spin entire nations, dozens of characters and cities, and far more - out of thin air and creativity alone. Writing practice on the character you're going to RP is just a warmup!
Quite the unofficial fellow. Former P2TM Mentor specializing in faction and nation RPs, as well as RPGs. Always happy to help.

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