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Canis Rex
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Postby Canis Rex » Thu Jul 08, 2021 2:38 pm

Kaledoria wrote:Okay, time to throw my hat into the ring as well... Say if parts of the background don't work.
I might still go more into detail, too. :)

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Name: Saoirse O'Gwalchmei
Age: 13
Gender: female
Appearance: Athletic, muscular redhead girl, often covered in bruises, dirt or warpaint

Divine Parent: Liara, goddess of freedom, chaos, rebels
fun, love, hope, optimism, athletics, music, the poetry of nature, dawn, healing, practical skills, wine, the duality of sexuality and innocence, the will to live, birth, fertility, forgiveness, free speech, jesters and a couple of other things the clergy is split about. Most critics of her faith simply describe her by the domain of freedom, if they feel positive about her or by chaos and rebels if not ... or they go all the way an derogatory call her "Goddess of Anarchy"

Inherited Abilities:
1. Vitality: Saoirse is exceptionally tough even for a demi-god. She is also full of vigor and can fully exert herself in every action but still she never tires. She is immune to most natural poisons and diseases and highly resistant to supernatural ones possibly even black snow but she does not want to put that to a test because ... obviously.
2. Indomitable mind: As the daughter of a rebel goddess, her ability to resist or shake of mind control is exceptional, believed to be absolute (but then again she did not yet have the opportunity to test it against a full-blown deity or such).

Background (This doesn't have to be long, but it can be, I hope):
13 years and a few month ago, Liara manifested to her followers and held a little competition, as she used to do every few years or at least decades. Any man or woman could challenge her in basically anything - arts, crafts, knowledge, games. Sometimes she refused the most ridiculous challenges but most of the times she accepted. The price she promised was an intimate night but rarely ever did any challenger win.
This time there was one challenger, named Caith O'Gwalchmei, a knight and imposing man. As his challenge to the Goddess was one that the general crowd of challengers and spectators considered one of the most impossible, he had the right to go first. He had challenged Liara to a wrestling match and everybody knew that among all challenges, a physical competition with a divine avatar were the ones to never succeed. But Caith waived his right to go first and gave others the chance. For two days he just watched. Watched Liara. Watched as she defeated challengers in tricky games and challenges of obscure skills. Finally after 14 failed challengers and much celebrations surrounding the event, he stepped into the ring to wrestle Liara. She met him smiling. As they locked arms, she instantly realized, that he was strong, she could understand, how he could think he was the best wrestler there was, even if she had barely started to draw upon her power and could still hold her ground against him. Certain to teach him a lesson about the differences between gods and men, she tried to throw him down, when suddenly he surged in strength and almost countered her. She was joyfully surprised. She would have never imagined a mortal challenging a god and ... holding back. She decided to focus on her defense now and instead of taking offensive actions she waited what else he had planed. Thus she was prepared when he fainted a flaw in his technique only to explode in an even stronger burst of power than before and tried to throw her down with a sacrificial throw. But due to her patience (and divine strength and agility, obviously), she ended up on top of him and prepared to control his arms and pin him down.
As they were wrestling on the ground, she could feel his heavy breath, and hear his heart beating strong and fast. It was clear that now he was fighting at full power, no more holding back. She grappled his arm, when suddenly he whispered into her ear: "You have already lost. Because you want me to win." The audacity shocked Liara in a way, she had not experienced in a century. In a moment of confusion he seized her arm and a leg and rolled the two of them over.
Suddenly below him, the goddess prepared to draw another bit of her divine power when he once again whispered into her ear. "You know it. You know the price and that nobody else here is able to seize it. You want to lose to ME."

Liara's power ebbed down. She did not want to admit it but the way he tried to control her, full well aware of the fact that she could easily overpower him physically, yet confident in his ability to charm her to not do it ... It felt nice actually. She faked a little struggle against his grip but ultimately he got into a pin. Those in the audience who knew how to read a fight probably realized that she was intentionally throwing it but this did not cause them to celebrate Caith any less then the audience who really thought, a human had beaten a god in a match of wrestling when the referee counted the pin. And Liara? She had realized, that Caith's real challenge had been, that he would be able to surprise, impress and charm her, like no human had for several generations. And she gladly accepted her defeat on that playing field.

It was only after Caith had claimed his price and layed with Liara, that he talked about his true intentions. He carried an old guilt. A taint of evil, that no matter to what standards he held himself now, he could not balance out. She looked at his soul and saw it, too, a stain of guilt under the shell of virtue. And since he could not forgive himself, it was true, that for now he was bound for the Void. Thus it was no surprise when he told her: "I want to father a child of yours, and I want you to claim me as yours in purgatory in return." Caith truly was a champion of her faith, Liara realized. Threatened by Eiryia herself, he did not lose hope but had thought of a way to fight his fate. His request had not been unique. She had taken the life of willing lovers before, a child in return for a way to cheat Eiryia out of a soul for the Void. And none of the others had be as worthy of the deal as Caith.

Newborn, Saoirse was given into the care of the Stellarum Tripudium, a group of people who were something akin to an Holy Order among the (rather disorganized) followers of Liara. Their leader Kylie was herself an descendant of Liara's children, making her a great-grand-half-niece of Saoirse, despite being 33 years older. The Order's main missions were patronship of the arts, protection of politically prosecuted and speaking truth to power. However, despite their devotion to life as a concept, they knew, that to protect the innocent against tyrants sometimes required violence and thus they honed their martial skills, too, focusing on personal combat and asymmetric warfare. Thus, while Saoirse also got an education in arts and useful skills like writing and math, wilderness training and physical education did not fall short.
She was not treated much different then most other children in the care of the order, she did not have any more privileges, however she did have more duties, which was necessary to saturate her massive energy. In fact her childhood could easily have been overly strict and stressful if it had not been for the many holidays and celebrations, the Stellarum Tripudium celebrated throughout the year, teaching Saoirse that diligence gets rewarded, to enjoy life and to form friendships with the other children of her age. This all changed, when the gods disappeared and the monsters rose...

Liara had always been a very involved goddess in the affairs of the mortals. When she suddenly did not answer anymore and the prayers of her followers were the loudest, the Stellarum Tripudium changed the focus of their Order to find out why she and the other goods vanished and how to free her from whatever kept her off Dystrairia. Saoirse was still to young to be of any help but the disciples assumed, that she was their best connection to the goddess and continuing her education was more important then before. Fighting training was added to Saoirse's schedule. As the neighboring nations fell and the remote parts of Ayrtica that the Order lived in became more and more de-facto wilderness, Saoirse's wilderness skills had to be put to use, as she had to help the adults foraging supplies.
The great festival times were becoming increasingly rare. And ultimately, the young child was confronted with death, as some members of their Order did not return from their quests. Their resources faded while their new mission made little progress, while Saoirse became a teenager. Seeing the dire situation of the Stellarum, she stood up in a membership assembly and brought a new quest to the schedule: The conquest of her inheritance...

... but not that inherited through her mother, but that of her father. Throughout her childhood, the others had often talked of Caith O'Gwalchmei, a chosen of Liara who had been a loose affiliate of the Order himself. And a well-off knight, who had owned a massive estate with several attached cottages and over a hundred serfs, which, due to the absence of children, had fallen to his brother.
Saoirse demanded the Order's support to claim this inheritance and offered to make it their new base of operation afterwards. The decisive tone and great confidence convinced the others and they relocated to the fortified house of her father, known as Caer Gwain. Obviously Saoirse's uncle did not believe her claim to be Caith's daughter. She challenged him to a duel but when she won, he claimed she was using evil witchcraft. However, his house-guards did not stand a chance against the well-trained fighters of the Stellarum. Nevertheless she allowed him and his family to stay in the same building on the edge of the estate, that he had also lived 11 years ago, while Caith was still the head of the family.

The local Baron was more easily convinced, that Saoirse was indeed Caith's daughter and rightful heir and legitimized her annexation of Caer Gwain. With a base of operation, the situation for the Stellarum Tripudium improved. They filled their numbers with some of the (former) serfs, and secured the adjacent farms, protecting it from monsters and dotting the fief with little shacks for the farmers to seek refuge in, so they would not be as much at risk of getting surprised by black snow during their field-work.
Over the next years, Saoirse even made friends with her cousins and her grandmother, even though the relation to her uncle remained cold.
It had been two and a half years as Lady of Caer Gwain, Saoirse earned some respect by the order members and despite the young age they looked at her as one of their peers. Now she wanted to return to the previous main mission of finding out what happened to Liara, when the rumor of the moonchild reached them. And for some reason - some inner voice - Saiorse knew that this was more then a rumor.


Other: -slightly claustrophobic
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Whoa, surprised anyone wanted to go into as much detail considering how basic the application is, nice effort. Accepted.
Oh, notes on her vitality abilities though, the kids mostly don't have to worry about diseases or poisons. It would take high-level mythical beast venom to even have an effect and those will stop short of killing them(though they would be left on death's doorstep and thus easy prey). Black snow will kill them, though in an even more dragged out process than humans get. Her extra vitality could make her completely immune to anything besides the snow, that's fine.
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Postby Cainesland » Thu Jul 08, 2021 2:47 pm

Welcome, Kaledoria :). Your character and deity have been added to the list.

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Postby Canis Rex » Thu Jul 08, 2021 2:49 pm

Cainesland wrote:There was an interesting rp recommendation online that might be neat to include with my character, and if anyone else wants to do the same.

I noticed some characters have longer backgrounds than others, but since our characters are fairly powerful I am considering proposing the inclusion of 5 optional rumours about our characters. Two good, two bad, one false.

That way our reputations have preceded us by a bit when we meet and there’s something to bite into in the first meeting.

What do you think?

Edit: Here is the source of that rp recommendation
https://mobile.twitter.com/PinkDiceGM/s ... 7292427264


This sounds like a really clever idea on helping to introduce everyone. Sure, anybody that wants the rumors feel free.
As for bad ones, maybe they can be things that are true but made a little worse from the rumor mill? Using Armir as an example, the rumor might be he is a woods-stalking murdering cannibal. The truth might be that no he won't be the one that killed them but if he happens to find a human corpse in the forest he will eat it same as any other animal. Does that sound like what it's going for?
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Postby The H Corporation » Thu Jul 08, 2021 4:11 pm

Name: Nephele
Age: 13
Gender: Female
Appearance: Long dark hair, pale skin, skinny, light green eye color.
Divine Parent: Eir Goddess of Healing
Inherited Ability: Healing
My name is Nephele, I live in a big cave in a mountain far away from the civilization and I know that since I can see from the top of the mountain a lot of houses living their comfortable lives down there but I don't complain, I love living here, since every day I am blessed to eat small creatures that I am able to hunt, but I am always aware of other big creatures that roam around the cold mountains but it's okay I already know how to hide in the snow. I sometimes go down the hill to get some wood for myself, although the journey is rough which is why I made small checkpoints to get some rest but sometimes it is not enough so I always wear lots of fur around me to bear with the cold, my mother blessed me with this fur clothing so there is nothing I can fear as long as I can feel her.

Mother left me nearby this mountain I call home, my Lyfjaberg, I used to fear the mountain and roam around the forests to hunt for myself and stole from the people around me, there was this time I found 2 explorers lying on the floor injured, their injuries were a lot of tiny scratches all around their bodies. I touched them praying mother to cure them, so I close my eyes and pray for them and when I opened my eyes they were fine. Since they were still unconscious I took an axe and a round shield for myself hoping to be ready to tame the mountain and so I did


Idk if this is okay I hope it is :P
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Postby Canis Rex » Thu Jul 08, 2021 4:35 pm

The H Corporation wrote:Name: Nephele
Age: 13
Gender: Female
Appearance: Long dark hair, pale skin, skinny, light green eye color.
Divine Parent: Eir Goddess of Healing
Inherited Ability: Healing
My name is Nephele, I live in a big cave in a mountain far away from the civilization and I know that since I can see from the top of the mountain a lot of houses living their comfortable lives down there but I don't complain, I love living here, since every day I am blessed to eat small creatures that I am able to hunt, but I am always aware of other big creatures that roam around the cold mountains but it's okay I already know how to hide in the snow. I sometimes go down the hill to get some wood for myself, although the journey is rough which is why I made small checkpoints to get some rest but sometimes it is not enough so I always wear lots of fur around me to bear with the cold, my mother blessed me with this fur clothing so there is nothing I can fear as long as I can feel her.

Mother left me nearby this mountain I call home, my Lyfjaberg, I used to fear the mountain and roam around the forests to hunt for myself and stole from the people around me, there was this time I found 2 explorers lying on the floor injured, their injuries were a lot of tiny scratches all around their bodies. I touched them praying mother to cure them, so I close my eyes and pray for them and when I opened my eyes they were fine. Since they were still unconscious I took an axe and a round shield for myself hoping to be ready to tame the mountain and so I did


Idk if this is okay I hope it is :P


It's mostly fine. With the background I think I get what you're trying to say but it could benefit from some grammar/punctuation cleanup. I'm willing to accept but could you maybe write a small paragraph of Nephele going about her day or some activity? It doesn't have to be here, you can TG me if you want to wait for the rp itself to start writing. Maybe it's just me and everyone else gets it fine(in which case I apologize for the extra hassle) but want to be sure we can all understand each other's writing.
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Postby The H Corporation » Thu Jul 08, 2021 4:55 pm

Canis Rex wrote:
The H Corporation wrote:Name: Nephele
Age: 13
Gender: Female
Appearance: Long dark hair, pale skin, skinny, light green eye color.
Divine Parent: Eir Goddess of Healing
Inherited Ability: Healing
My name is Nephele, I live in a big cave in a mountain far away from the civilization and I know that since I can see from the top of the mountain a lot of houses living their comfortable lives down there but I don't complain, I love living here, since every day I am blessed to eat small creatures that I am able to hunt, but I am always aware of other big creatures that roam around the cold mountains but it's okay I already know how to hide in the snow. I sometimes go down the hill to get some wood for myself, although the journey is rough which is why I made small checkpoints to get some rest but sometimes it is not enough so I always wear lots of fur around me to bear with the cold, my mother blessed me with this fur clothing so there is nothing I can fear as long as I can feel her.

Mother left me nearby this mountain I call home, my Lyfjaberg, I used to fear the mountain and roam around the forests to hunt for myself and stole from the people around me, there was this time I found 2 explorers lying on the floor injured, their injuries were a lot of tiny scratches all around their bodies. I touched them praying mother to cure them, so I close my eyes and pray for them and when I opened my eyes they were fine. Since they were still unconscious I took an axe and a round shield for myself hoping to be ready to tame the mountain and so I did


Idk if this is okay I hope it is :P


It's mostly fine. With the background I think I get what you're trying to say but it could benefit from some grammar/punctuation cleanup. I'm willing to accept but could you maybe write a small paragraph of Nephele going about her day or some activity? It doesn't have to be here, you can TG me if you want to wait for the rp itself to start writing. Maybe it's just me and everyone else gets it fine(in which case I apologize for the extra hassle) but want to be sure we can all understand each other's writing.

Okay. I will edit later, since I am burned out of work
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Postby Canis Rex » Thu Jul 08, 2021 4:59 pm

The H Corporation wrote:
Canis Rex wrote:
It's mostly fine. With the background I think I get what you're trying to say but it could benefit from some grammar/punctuation cleanup. I'm willing to accept but could you maybe write a small paragraph of Nephele going about her day or some activity? It doesn't have to be here, you can TG me if you want to wait for the rp itself to start writing. Maybe it's just me and everyone else gets it fine(in which case I apologize for the extra hassle) but want to be sure we can all understand each other's writing.

Okay. I will edit later, since I am burned out of work


No problem, take your time.
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Postby Cainesland » Thu Jul 08, 2021 9:19 pm

Canis Rex wrote:
Cainesland wrote:There was an interesting rp recommendation online that might be neat to include with my character, and if anyone else wants to do the same.

I noticed some characters have longer backgrounds than others, but since our characters are fairly powerful I am considering proposing the inclusion of 5 optional rumours about our characters. Two good, two bad, one false.

That way our reputations have preceded us by a bit when we meet and there’s something to bite into in the first meeting.

What do you think?

Edit: Here is the source of that rp recommendation
https://mobile.twitter.com/PinkDiceGM/s ... 7292427264


This sounds like a really clever idea on helping to introduce everyone. Sure, anybody that wants the rumors feel free.
As for bad ones, maybe they can be things that are true but made a little worse from the rumor mill? Using Armir as an example, the rumor might be he is a woods-stalking murdering cannibal. The truth might be that no he won't be the one that killed them but if he happens to find a human corpse in the forest he will eat it same as any other animal. Does that sound like what it's going for?


Thank you :).

I think so. Something true that involves something that went wrong in the past, or something bad or negative. Your example would probably work as well, having some truth that maybe is viewed negatively by others or has the negative impression made worse by its being a rumour and being passed around.

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Postby Canis Rex » Thu Jul 08, 2021 9:25 pm

No problem, it's a good plan. :)
Alrighty, I'll see what I can do then.
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Postby Cainesland » Thu Jul 08, 2021 9:36 pm

Cool. Thank you :).

It seems like fairly loose way to encourage rp. People don’t need to go big on the bad or good or false items if they don’t want to. Smaller items are ok as well.

For those that do want to do the rumours, do you think it would be better to state which ones are good, bad, and which one is fake? Or lump them all together for added mystery?

Edit:
For example
Good
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Bad
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False
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Or

Rumours
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Postby Canis Rex » Thu Jul 08, 2021 9:47 pm

I would vote to lump them together so our characters can reveal a little about themselves in how they react to different ones. I'm guessing there will be some different morals among the group so good/bad might not be the same from each perspective.
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Postby Cainesland » Thu Jul 08, 2021 9:58 pm

Canis Rex wrote:I would vote to lump them together so our characters can reveal a little about themselves in how they react to different ones. I'm guessing there will be some different morals among the group so good/bad might not be the same from each perspective.


That’s fair. Thank you :).

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Postby Canis Rex » Thu Jul 08, 2021 10:03 pm

No problem. :)
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Postby Canis Rex » Fri Jul 09, 2021 12:24 am

Armir Rumors
Will help guide/feed kids lost in the woods.
Has stalker/voyeur tendencies.
Will sabotage hunting efforts from nobility.
Displays territorial behavior akin to apex predators.
Surprisingly well-mannered/reasonable for a hermit.

Something like these seem right?
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Postby Barapam » Fri Jul 09, 2021 3:54 am

Rumours about Julia:

These ended up not following the two good/two bad/one false formula entirely, but I like them anyway.

1. Myrcons daughter...
2. ... which makes her inherently evil... (false if you ask me, but I don't know exactly how divine blood works here)
3. ... which is displayed in her behaviour. She's supposedly arrogant, a cheater, likes to boss people around, and used her abilities in order to achieve unfair advantages (not entirely true, but it's understandable why some people might think so).
4. She's an excellent fighter (she's actually average for a demigod her age, but compared to normies there might be some truth to it).
5. A teenage girl living with all those men? Surely something suspicious and inappropriate is going on!
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Postby Cainesland » Fri Jul 09, 2021 5:59 am

Canis Rex wrote:Armir Rumors
Will help guide/feed kids lost in the woods.
Has stalker/voyeur tendencies.
Will sabotage hunting efforts from nobility.
Displays territorial behavior akin to apex predators.
Surprisingly well-mannered/reasonable for a hermit.

Something like these seem right?


Yes. These seem good.

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Postby Canis Rex » Fri Jul 09, 2021 8:45 am

Cainesland wrote:
Canis Rex wrote:Armir Rumors
Will help guide/feed kids lost in the woods.
Has stalker/voyeur tendencies.
Will sabotage hunting efforts from nobility.
Displays territorial behavior akin to apex predators.
Surprisingly well-mannered/reasonable for a hermit.

Something like these seem right?


Yes. These seem good.


Great. And Barapam, nice as well.
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Postby Kaledoria » Fri Jul 09, 2021 8:59 am

Rumors:
- She dueled her uncle for her castle and only struck him twice, with the flat of her sword. (true)
- When she took over her father's estate, she immediately uplifted all the serfs to freemen but almost all of them stayed on her lands as properly hired workers (true)
- She has picked up some bad habits from the marauders from Cwarensgard* (true, although "refugees" would be the more appropriate term for the people)
- She and her Order were associating with an ominous Blood Mage** a few years ago (kind of true, they hired one to locate Liara through Saoirse's blood as a sympathetic link but it did not work)
- Her Guardian, "Aunt" Kylie is making her decisions for her (used to be true but no longer is)



*Cwarensgard: A former nations, that lied somewhere northeast of Ayrtica. The Kingdom had a weak king and a strong council of nobles. Tribal tendencies were still running strong in the general population. It used to be the source of many bandits and mercenaries, which made them rather disliked by most of the people in their neighboring nations. When the monsters rose, their lands seemed to be affected earlier and stronger then most and it was one of the first "nations" to collapse.

**(if Blood Magic is a thing in this setting)
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Postby Canis Rex » Fri Jul 09, 2021 9:13 am

Kaledoria wrote:Rumors:
- She dueled her uncle for her castle and only struck him twice, with the flat of her sword. (true)
- When she took over her father's estate, she immediately uplifted all the serfs to freemen but almost all of them stayed on her lands as properly hired workers (true)
- She has picked up some bad habits from the marauders from Cwarensgard* (true, although "refugees" would be the more appropriate term for the people)
- She and her Order were associating with an ominous Blood Mage** a few years ago (kind of true, they hired one to locate Liara through Saoirse's blood as a sympathetic link but it did not work)
- Her Guardian, "Aunt" Kylie is making her decisions for her (used to be true but no longer is)



*Cwarensgard: A former nations, that lied somewhere northeast of Ayrtica. The Kingdom had a weak king and a strong council of nobles. Tribal tendencies were still running strong in the general population. It used to be the source of many bandits and mercenaries, which made them rather disliked by most of the people in their neighboring nations. When the monsters rose, their lands seemed to be affected earlier and stronger then most and it was one of the first "nations" to collapse.

**(if Blood Magic is a thing in this setting)


Great, and yes blood magic is indeed a thing. Rare because it requires life and blood (doesn't have to be of the user) to work, but it can be learned.
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Authoritarian Democracy

Postby Cainesland » Fri Jul 09, 2021 10:14 pm

After looking for backstory suggestions from dnd and pathfinder books there seem to be a few suggestions. The problem then becomes what to propose for inclusion and what not to. If one includes to much, the backstory becomes cluttered, possibly traumatic for the character, and less to do in the rp rather than the backstory. Include to little and there’s less meat in the backstory and rumours to draw from.

Some ideas I found were:
”In the medieval period children were given tasks in keeping with their ages. For younger children this meant looking after their smaller siblings, or running errands. As they grew older they might be allocated lighter domestic or agricultural duties, but they were not capable of doing serious work until about the age of puberty when they began to acquire strength of an adult kin”
https://www.representingchildhood.pitt. ... _child.htm

“Tried to find products for the tanners

Tried to collect salvage materials to sell

Tried to collect rats for gambling games

Tried to pickpocket
https://www.bbc.co.uk/teach/school-radi ... en/z6b3nrd

You were captured by a cult and nearly sacrificed
on an altar to the foul being the cultists served.
You escaped, but you fear they will find you.

You met a demigod, an archdevil, an archfey, a de-
mon lord, or a titan, and you lived to tell the tale.

You visited a holy site and felt the presence of the divine there.

A celestial or a fiend visited you in your dreams to give a warning of dangers to come.

A distant relative left you a stipend that enables you to live at the comfortable lifestyle for ld20 years.

I was always an avid reader, and I learned much about my favorite topic on my own.

I learned what was right and wrong from my family.

One of my family members who belonged to the guild made a place for me.
I was always good with my hands, so I took the op- portunity to learn a trade.

My people lived on the edges ofcivilization, and I learned the methods ofsurvival from my family” https://dnd.wizards.com/products/tablet ... everything

“Ongoing Patron: When you were young, a person with money or power took an interest in your art and sponsored you. Most of what you created was dictated by the patron’s tastes, and you probably still work for this patron, who maintains a strong influence over your life.

Oathbound: You have made a solemn oath, and you pursue that oath with headstrong determination.

Accidental Discovery: Your keen intellect has
always been an asset in your studies of the alchemical arts, but along with your logic and rationale, you have a “sense” for alchemy. This intuition sometimes leads to discoveries through methods most of your peers would never have thought possible, but that you somehow know will work.

Alchemical Intuition: You are often struck with epiphanies about alchemical processes and substances.

Major Disaster: You witnessed—and survived—a major disaster in your childhood years, such as a great fire, flood, earthquake, volcano, or storm.
It obliterated the settlement where you lived, whether a small village, large city, or entire island.

Mentorship/Patronage: A mentor or patron took an interest in your development and volunteered to train or sponsor you. This creature’s motives might not be entirely clear, but without its influence you would not be who you are.

Mentored: A tutor or private instructor guided you in learning your art, profession, or trade, and through your education, you became capable of teaching and guiding others.

Ordinary Childhood: Your childhood was fairly ordinary, with no major blessing or catastrophe—a stark contrast to an adventuring life. You lived your life in anticipation of growing up so you could affect the dull backdrop upon which your mundane life was painted. Now that you’ve grown, it’s easy to miss those tranquil days where nothing ever seemed to happen.

Ordinary: The only thing extraordinary about your appearance is its ordinariness. You carry yourself in an understated way, and many people who see your face soon forget it.

Inheritance: A great sum of wealth or property was bequeathed to you at an early age, providing you with extraordinary means. Daily costs of living have ceased to concern you, and you’ve learned that there is little that money cannot buy.

Rich Parents: You were born into a rich family, perhaps even the nobility, and even though you turned to a life of adventure, you enjoy a one-time benefit to your initial finances.

Academy Training: You attended a private academy where you studied a number of skills and gained training in your current profession. Whether you were a brilliant student or a dropout, the university environment was your home for a good portion of your formative years.

Focused Mind: Your childhood was dominated either by lessons of some sort (whether musical, academic, or other) or by a horrible home life that encouraged your ability to block out distractions and focus on the immediate task at hand.

Civilized: You are well versed in the local laws, customs, and politics.

Adopted

Artisan: You spent time working under artisans, or your parents were artisans who were particularly skilled at their trade.” https://pathfinderwiki.com/wiki/Ultimate_Campaign

I was captured by bandit cultists and nearly was sacrificed until I finally escaped.

Accident caused a problem with the lighthouse or alchemy experiment

Bought the wrong item at the market

Accidentally turned someone into a frog or sheep

Accidentally damaged a beekeeping hive


Maybe something for Merlin could be:
Erudite, he is very knowledgeable about scholarly topics and alchemy
He was involved in a bandit cult
He enjoys painting
He is Superstitious. Seeing dark clouds is a sign of issues. Ravens are a sign of good favour. One should not harm a Raven.
He cannot say no

Not for sure this, just considering.
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Canis Rex
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Democratic Socialists

Postby Canis Rex » Fri Jul 09, 2021 10:28 pm

Brainstorming is always good and it does make for a nice contribution. I'll look into those too.
viewtopic.php?f=31&t=493577
My SAO inspired RP.

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Cainesland
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Authoritarian Democracy

Postby Cainesland » Fri Jul 09, 2021 10:44 pm

Canis Rex wrote:Brainstorming is always good and it does make for a nice contribution. I'll look into those too.


Thank you :).

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Democratic Socialists

Postby Canis Rex » Fri Jul 09, 2021 11:29 pm

No problem and thank you for the helping hand. :)

Also, I'm surprised at the size of the roster we have. Didn't expect this to get much attention, but it is cool to see. Once we get Nephele, Archipelago, and the rumors worked out, would everyone want to start or wait for more apps?
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