Ace Combat: Ashes of War (OOC/Closed)

[Hastur]

Ok, the situation is the following, the English errors that occur are thanks to the Google translator, yes I don't know how to write in English correctly I just know the basics. When I say Estovakia in Portuguese google takes the E and leaves the word Stovakia when I say Estovakian in Portuguese it gets Stovakian which makes me correct all the time the spelling which takes more time from Roleplay altogether hence the error.

Don't worry, I have to learn even more about air maneuvers, about military radio codes and also about combat in different climates and about other and various rules and manuals about air warfare I will start reading some it will be fun but it will take a lot of time .

You'll get the hang of it, don't worry. You're doing well for someone who is using google translate to help with the posts outside of technical issues and overkill. So keep it up.

[Kassaran]

Sapim, todos nós começamos de algum lugar e você tem um bom recurso em todos nós aqui. Sinta-se a vontade para perguntar. Você pode discutir os problemas encontrados na tradução. O Google Translate é uma boa ferramenta, mas não é uma solução abrangente. Estou usando para esta mensagem agora. O importante é sempre trabalhar para melhorar sua redação.

A pesquisa é importante para se tornar um escritor melhor. Use todos os recursos disponíveis na Internet para preencher essa lacuna. Não somos pilotos de caça aqui, mas cada um de nós individualmente tem as informações. Com o suficiente das peças de um quebra-cabeça juntas, isso ajuda alguém a escrever uma imagem maior e mais completa.

Ao escrever uma tradução do Google, tente invertê-la algumas vezes para ver se a frase ou palavras mudaram. Em seguida, ajuste sua dicção para tornar o que você está escrevendo mais preciso. Demora um pouco mais, mas pode ir um pouco mais longe para ajudá-lo como escritor. Também pode ajudá-lo a encontrar maneiras novas e inovadoras de escrever uma frase que você não considerou originalmente.

No final, use esta OOC como um recurso e considere o que você está escrevendo e como isso se relacionaria com a história ou narrativa em geral.

Sapim, we all started from somewhere and you have a good resource in all of us here. Feel free to ask. You can discuss the problems encountered in the translation. Google Translate is a good tool, but it's not a comprehensive solution. I'm using it for this message right now. The important thing is to always work to improve your writing.

Research is important to becoming a better writer. Use all the resources available on the Internet to fill this gap. We are not fighter pilots here, but each of us individually has the information. With enough of the pieces of a puzzle together, it helps someone write a bigger, more complete picture.

When writing a Google translation, try flipping it a few times to see if the phrase or words have changed. Then adjust your diction to make what you're writing more accurate. It takes a little longer, but it can go a little further to help you as a writer. It can also help you find new and innovative ways to write a sentence you didn't originally consider.

In the end, use this OOC as a resource and consider what you are writing and how it would relate to the story or narrative in general.

[Herador]

Ok, the situation is the following, the English errors that occur are thanks to the Google translator, yes I don't know how to write in English correctly I just know the basics. When I say Estovakia in Portuguese google takes the E and leaves the word Stovakia when I say Estovakian in Portuguese it gets Stovakian which makes me correct all the time the spelling which takes more time from Roleplay altogether hence the error.

Don't worry, I have to learn even more about air maneuvers, about military radio codes and also about combat in different climates and about other and various rules and manuals about air warfare I will start reading some it will be fun but it will take a lot of time .

You're doing your best and aim to improve, that's all anyone can ask. Just have fun my dude.

[South Americanastan]

Name: Nick Callahan
Nationality: Emmerian
Age (21 at youngest): 26
Gender: Male

Rank (O-1, O-2 or O-3): O-1
Callsign: Whiteout

Appearance: Caucasian, Green Eyes, Short Hair
Height: 6 feet
Weight: 157 Pounds

Aircraft: McConnell Douglas F-4E Phantom II
Aircraft Appearance: Painted White, with his emblem on the tail and an Emmerian roundel on each wing
Emblem: A White Fire on a Black Background
Funds 29,250

Personality: The living, breathing, personification of "Hold my Beer", Nick has a habit of not thinking ahead, and often ends up making stupid decisions. He is also a notable adrenaline junkie, and gets into dangerous situations for fun.
Strengths: Nick has unusually high resistance to G-Force caused by a multitude of genetic factors, once withstanding 9 Gs for 10 seconds before blacking out during training. (There's a video somewhere showing a pilot withstanding 9 Gs for ten seconds before the training is stopped, so this isn't out of the realm of possibility)
Weaknesses: Nick is very cocky, often underestimating his opponents, resulting in him being caught off guard by almost anything more complex than a barrel roll.
Likes: Whiskey, Action, Explosions
Dislikes: Smoke, Losing, Being Insulted

Bio: Born to an upper-class family in eastern Emmeria, Nick was given nearly everything he asked for as a child. It soon became clear that this parenting strategy was not a good one, and Nick was expelled from Middle School in 6th grade for "Igniting a cherry bomb in a toilet". He was enrolled in a new middle school, which he flunked out of in 9th grade. Seeing no other option for their hellspawn child, Nick's parents enrolled him in a military school. Nick, being an adrenaline junkie, quickly became enamored with the military, but hated the discipline. Once he became old enough, he enlisted in the air force and became a pilot, due to the constant action it offered. He quickly realized that the Air Force wasn't as glamorous as he had believed, and he turned to alcohol due to the hardships of life in the military. He became a hardened pilot, and showed skill in combat. Due to his skill, he became cocky, and was nearly shot down due to underestimating a hostile fighter. He would soon be transferred to the 4th Consolidated Fighter Squadron.

Crew Members:
Radar Interception Officer (RIO)-Daniel "Phoenix" Johnson


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[Rupudska]

-54.4°F (-48°C) Blizzard Conditions

Absolute bruh moment. If the Emmerian troops can get ahold of heaters, we can probably win by just waiting for the Stovies to freeze to death. Wouldn't even take long.

Probably can't post today, but I can post tomorrow, or with the next post update.

[Anowa]

Name: Nick Callahan
Nationality: Emmerian
Age (21 at youngest): 26
Gender: Male

Rank (O-1, O-2 or O-3): O-1
Callsign: Whiteout

Appearance: Caucasian, Green Eyes, Short Hair
Height: 6 feet
Weight: 157 Pounds

Aircraft: McConnell Douglas F4-E Phantom II
Aircraft Appearance: Painted White, with his emblem on the tail and an Emmerian roundel on each wing
Emblem: A White Fire on a Black Background
Funds Dirt Poor

Personality:
Strengths: Nick has unusually high resistance to G-Force caused by a multitude of genetic factors, once withstanding 9 Gs for 8 seconds before blacking out during training. (There's a video somewhere showing a pilot withstanding 9 Gs for ten seconds before the training is stopped, so this isn't out of the realm of possibility)
Weaknesses: Nick is very cocky, often underestimating his opponents, resulting in him being caught off guard by almost anything more complex than a barrel roll.
Likes: Whiskey, Action, Explosions
Dislikes: Smoke, Losing, Being Insulted

Bio: Born to an upper-class family in eastern Emmeria, Nick was given nearly everything he asked for as a child. It soon became clear that this parenting strategy was not a good one, and Nick was expelled from Middle School in 6th grade for "Igniting a cherry bomb in a toilet". He was enrolled in a new middle school, which he flunked out of in 9th grade. Seeing no other option for their hellspawn child, Nick's parents enrolled him in a military school. Nick, being an adrenaline junkie, quickly became enamored with the military, but hated the discipline. Once he became old enough, he enlisted in the air force and became a pilot, due to the constant action it offered. He quickly realized that the Air Force wasn't as glamorous as he had believed, and he turned to alcohol due to the hardships of life in the military. He became a hardened pilot, and showed skill in combat. Due to his skill, he became cocky, and was nearly shot down due to underestimating a hostile fighter. He would soon be transferred to the 4th Consolidated Fighter Squadron.

Crew Members:
Radar Interception Officer (RIO)-Daniel Johnson


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Accepted

[Anowa]

MISSION 03.0: OPERATION WHIPLASH
MISSION 03.5: OPERATION GARM
Toredo Valley, Emmeria
0941, December 13th 2015
-58°F (-50°C) Blizzard Conditions


A scenic valley that is home to a number of ski lodges and a few hot springs, Toredo Valley is a popular tourist destination. However the few eye sores of the munitions factory and it's annex have proven to divert attention from the once bustling resort area to other valleys and mountains in northern Khesed.

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E N E M Y
TOREDO VALLEY
Operation ALPHA (Annex)
• 4x T-80U(M) TGT
• 10x T-72B2 TGT
• 1x BMP-2 TGT
• 1x BMP-2
• 6x Truck
• 12x Infantry Formation

Operation BRAVO (Factory)
• 2x T-72B2
• 6x BRDM-2MS

GENERAL AIR SPACE
• 8x Su-17M3 TGT
• 2x Su-25TM TGT
• 1x MiG-21SM

VALLEY GENERAL
• 2x Highway Tunnels [945 lbs of explosive load required]

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A L L Y
SIPLI PLATEAU
ALPHA
• 1x Patria AMV CMD (Lt. Gen Morgan Harris) VIP
• 4x Structure, Heavy VIP
• 3x Structure, Light VIP
• 8x Patria AMV
• 6x Patria AMV (MGS)
• 12x Infantry Formation (Anvil)

THE GAUNTLET
• 1x MAN HX3 (Cpl. Manuel Sullivan) VIP

BRAVO
• 14x Structure, Light VIP
• 3x Patria AMV (MGS)
• 10x Patria AMV
• 5x Infantry Formation (Buttress)
• 4x Artillery

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KILLS
ALLY

ENEMY


Sciabola - 2x T, 2x TL, 2x APC, 1x F2

Rondine - 3x T, 1x T [D], 1x TL, 2x F2

Voron - 1x F3, 2x T

Razorback - 2x APC, 1x F3

Drifter - 8x A

MoonVigil - 4x T, 2x TL, 2x APC

DirtyBones - 3x TL, 1x T [D]

Frog - 3x F2

Rattler - 1x F3, 2x F2

Merlin - 1x F3, 2x F2

Dragon - 2x F2

Abel - 2x T, 2x APC, 1x APC [D], 4x G

Wiseass - 2x F2

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Primary mission objective is to prevent the destruction or capture of Toredo Munitions Factory.

SOUNDTRACK 4A

[Anowa]

Alright, 8 open aces are incoming.
4 of them dedicated to Air to Ground
4 of them dedicated to Air to Air.

Dibs time.

[Laka Strolistandiler]

Can I get at least one A-G? (Or if allowed 2 A-G for each character)

[Empire of Donner land]

Alright, 8 open aces are incoming.
4 of them dedicated to Air to Ground
4 of them dedicated to Air to Air.

Dibs time.

Moonvigil will dibs

[Hastur]

Alright, 8 open aces are incoming.
4 of them dedicated to Air to Ground
4 of them dedicated to Air to Air.

Dibs time.

I'll take an air to air if nobody else takes it.

[Dayganistan]

I'm going to dibs one of the air to ground aces.

[Kyraina]

I'll take one or another If no one else claimss anymore before claiming period is up

[Anowa]

Can I get at least one A-G? (Or if allowed 2 A-G for each character)

1 only

3 Air to Ground
4 Air to Air

[Anowa]

Moonvigil will dibs

I'll take an air to air if nobody else takes it.

I'm going to dibs one of the air to ground aces.

I'll take one or another if any are not claimed

Giving you an AtA.

Witnessed.

1 Air to Ground
2 Air to Air.

[Langenia]

Moonvigil will dibs

Awaiting specific response

I'll take an air to air if nobody else takes it.

I'm going to dibs one of the air to ground aces.

I'll take one or another if any are not claimed

Giving you an AtA.

Witnessed.

2 Air to Ground
2 Air to Air.

Are there any air-to-ground aces left?

[Anowa]

Awaiting specific response




Giving you an AtA.

Witnessed.

2 Air to Ground
2 Air to Air.

Are there any air-to-ground aces left?

1 left

[Sapim]

Alright, 8 open aces are incoming.
4 of them dedicated to Air to Ground
4 of them dedicated to Air to Air.

Dibs time.

air to air here

[Herador]

Air to ground ace please, if available

[Anowa]

air to air here

Air to ground ace please, if available

Langenia has claimed the last AtA

Witnessed.

0 Air to Ground
0 Air to Air.

[Anowa]

MISSION 03.0: OPERATION WHIPLASH
MISSION 03.5: OPERATION GARM
Toredo Valley, Emmeria
0941, December 13th 2015
-58°F (-50°C) Blizzard Conditions


A scenic valley that is home to a number of ski lodges and a few hot springs, Toredo Valley is a popular tourist destination. However the few eye sores of the munitions factory and it's annex have proven to divert attention from the once bustling resort area to other valleys and mountains in northern Khesed.

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E N E M Y
TOREDO VALLEY
Operation ALPHA

Valley Mouth East
• 6x T-80U(M) TGT
• 12x T-72B2 TGT
• 8x BMP-3 TGT
• 14x Trucks (w/ Mounted IF)
• 3x Trucks w/ Protected Symbols

Annex
• 4x T-80U(M) TGT
• 5x T-72B2 TGT
• 1x BMP-2
• 3x Truck
• 8x Infantry Formation

Operation BRAVO

Valley Mouth West
• 4x T-14 Armata TGT
• 14x T-72B2 TGT
• 12x BMP-2 TGT
• 16x Trucks w/ Mounted IF
• 4x Trucks w/ Protected Symbols
• 2x BTR-80 SKJ

Factory
• 2x BRDM-2MS

GENERAL AIR SPACE
• 4x MiG-25RBT "Heretic" [ACE]TGT
• 4x MiG-21-97 "Judicar" [ACE]TGT
• 3x MiG-29M2 "Rusalka" [ACE]TGT
• 1x F-3/ASF-X Shinden II "Shinigami" [ACE]TGT
• 12x Mi-24VP w/ Mounted IF
• 2x An-12 w/ Mounted IF

VALLEY GENERAL
• 2x Highway Tunnels

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A L L Y
SIPLI PLATEAU
ALPHA
• 1x Patria AMV CMD (Lt. Gen Morgan Harris) VIP
• 4x Structure, Heavy VIP
• 3x Structure, Light VIP
• 8x Patria AMV
• 6x Patria AMV (MGS)
• 12x Infantry Formation (Anvil)

THE GAUNTLET
• 1x MAN HX3 (Cpl. Manuel Sullivan) VIP

BRAVO
• 14x Structure, Light VIP
• 3x Patria AMV (MGS)
• 10x Patria AMV
• 5x Infantry Formation (Buttress)
• 4x Artillery

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KILLS
ALLY

ENEMY


Sciabola - 2x T, 2x TL, 2x APC, 2x F2

Rondine - 3x T, 1x TL, 3x F2

Voron - 1x F3, 5x T

Razorback - 2x APC, 1x F3

Drifter - 8x A

MoonVigil - 4x T, 2x TL, 2x APC

DirtyBones - 3x TL, 1x F3, 1x APC, 1x T

Frog - 6x F2

Rattler - 2x F3, 3x F2

Merlin - 1x F3, 2x F2

Dragon - 2x F2

Abel - 2x T, 2x APC, 1x APC [D], 4x G

Wiseass - 2x F2

Whiteout - 2x T, 2x APC, 1x F2

Bono - 1x F3

Spectre - 1x F2, 2x T, 1x G

Serpent - 4x IF, 2x G

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Primary mission objective is to prevent the destruction or capture of Toredo Munitions Factory.

The first reinforcements of the Estovakian 7th Guards Armor have arrived.

SOUNDTRACK 4A

[The Oshian Federation]

I am leaving with immediate effect. Good luck and have fun to you all.
You may transfer but not kill off my characters.

[Sapim]

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[Parcia]

Bruh.

[Anowa]

Name: Aleksandar "Alek" Zupan
Nationality: Estovakian
Age (21 at youngest): 41
Gender: Male

Rank (O-1, O-2 or O-3): O-1
Callsign: Hydra

Appearance: Red hair going gray, blue eyes, and a scar from the left eye to the cheek from an attack a long time ago.
Height: 5' 7"
Weight: 162lbs

Aircraft: Panavia Tornado GR1
Aircraft Appearance: Red blood dorsal, Black Camber Stripes, Black Ventral.
Emblem:

(Image)

Funds Ƶ0

Personality: Aleksander has a calm and fair personality unlike many of his colleagues in the Estovakian Air Force, the Estovakian civil war has taken a toll on him, losing colleagues and wife but he remains convinced of his just ideals.
Strengths: Experienced, Works with his companions, Sense of justice.
Weaknesses: Can become stubborn about going after an enemy
Likes: Tea, Sweet Foods, Osean Rock
Dislikes: Estovakian Nationalist Faction (The Generals), incompetent ward

Bio:

As third son Aleksander grew up in the middle of the upper Estovakian nobility, his mother a person of considerable influence in Estovakian politics before the civil war. His father an army soldier killed during a failed military exercise, with his death Aleksander was responsible for continuing the legacy of his family at just 13 years old, at age 16 Aleksander fell in love with the air force during a military parade in the Estovakian capital and began making plans to become an air force pilot.

He joined the air force in 1993 and was almost expelled the following year in 1994 when he was caught sleeping with the base commander's daughter marrying her in early 1995 under the influence of his family. Alek did acrobatic maneuvers with his F-2, before finding work for Ustio's air force during the Belkan War. Easily the most brutal air conflict of the 20th century, this war made him change his philosophy and his life a lot during his life. First missions his wife had sent a telegram announcing the birth of their daughter Tatiana. Alek made his own name during the Allied forces' attack on the “Round Table” shooting down nearly a dozen enemy pilots, which, added to his existing kill count, made him little more of a triple ace. He came out of the war a changed man a little richer like several others who went to war and with an offer to instruct at the Estovakian Air Academy back home. An offer he gladly accepted.

Like other Estovakian pilots who went to war, He remained there for 20 years, helping to train the next generation of Estovakian pilots and becoming one of the most military celebrities among the civilian population in Estovakia. Then came the meteor to the economic crisis in Estovakia that will turn into civil war. He joined the Lyes United Front (LUF) after a bombing in the city where he lived was hit by the eastern faction killing his wife in the process.

During a battle against Eastern Faction forces he was hit by a missile leaving him with a scar across his face he managed to eject from his plane, but was captured by Eastern Faction forces, during the prison period his daughter will visit him. very important to him. After the end of the war there was the Judgment of the purge of officers to decide the future of Aleksander who was declared innocent.

After that he was appointed Colonel as he is considered a celebrity by the Eastern faction, he was put to command a squad consisting of Tornado's an airplane which he will get used to during the civil war. Using the nickname "Hydra" he will turn his squad into one of the 3rd best squads in Estovakia. During this time his daughter will begin to grow up to be a young woman, he has learned that she will join the same flight school he will attend. The invasion started and she was sure to be sent to basic flying school to military flying school, a smart Alek managed to pull some strings and put her as his second line of command.

When the invasion started he was already resenting the Junta due to the civil war, when he learned that one of his people had deserted to Emmeria he did the same thing, one night he knocked out a guard took his daughter and her tornado and fled towards the Emmerian territory. How he managed to escape undetected by radar? to this day is a mystery.



Crew Members: Tatiana "Valkyre" Zupan

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I ran this through a plagarism app.

On word similarity alone. The bio is 15.3% copied, the first paragraph being over 30%.

Delete the app, stay with the one you have.