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by Madrinpoor » Tue Mar 16, 2021 7:20 pm
by Abbeyverne » Wed Mar 17, 2021 5:18 am
“...My only complaint is that this guy seems to have plot armor thicker than the hull of a battleship. What’s this Holy Grail thing, anyway? I tried looking it up using foreign information networks but I kept seeing footage of knights being butchered by a rabbit... I don’t think that was a legitimate source.”
...and Josephus sorta started a nuclear war, so I'll just ignore the fact that Kakistopia has almost 50% of deaths due in some part to the God-Empress, and I'll also ignore that Josephus XII was raised as a child-soldier, and I'll say Josephus is the more horrible leader.
by Abbeyverne » Wed Mar 17, 2021 5:19 am
Lotrisia wrote:Abbeyverne wrote:
Here's what I've got:
I didn't include your frigates because I wanted to make sure I got fleet positions and major ships right first.
Hmmm yeah that really does look clean. I made a quick and dirty version in a default editor of what I'd imagined as being force position immediately after my post that I'll also post here quickly
“...My only complaint is that this guy seems to have plot armor thicker than the hull of a battleship. What’s this Holy Grail thing, anyway? I tried looking it up using foreign information networks but I kept seeing footage of knights being butchered by a rabbit... I don’t think that was a legitimate source.”
...and Josephus sorta started a nuclear war, so I'll just ignore the fact that Kakistopia has almost 50% of deaths due in some part to the God-Empress, and I'll also ignore that Josephus XII was raised as a child-soldier, and I'll say Josephus is the more horrible leader.
by Madrinpoor » Wed Mar 17, 2021 5:27 am
by Abbeyverne » Wed Mar 17, 2021 5:28 am
Madrinpoor wrote:Name: Alestare Aie
Faction: Aie Syndicate
Appearance: 62 year old human, silvery hair, otherwise unassuming but likes expensive clothing.
Personality: Cold, calculating, brutal, doesn't reveal emotions.
Skills: Strategic genius. He is a master of manipulating and intimidating and knows when to press for an edge when negotiating. He is also quite good at sabacc.
Weapons: He is not a master of shooting, so he has a blaster that does most of the work for him, like aiming and balancing, and it is very expensive. He mostly uses it for intimidation though, and has two bodyguards named Jalik and Ser who follow him everywhere.
Ship: He owns a large silver SoroSuub PLY 3000 Space Yacht called Pareyela, heavily modified with expensive Wroshyr paneling, as well as a high tech security system with hidden cannons to be fired at enemies. There are also concealed passageways throughout the vessel.
Rank:He is the don of the Aie Syndicate
Bio:
Nobody knows where he was born (though it was Coruscant). Nobody knows about his family (born to a discharged Senate Guard and a bartender of a casino) or how he grew up (in the coruscant slums). They only know of the mark he's left on the galaxy. At age 15, he ran away from his home (in the Coruscant slums) and joined a smuggling vessel bringing spice from Coruscant to Onderon. He was not a good fighter, and was almost killed in a pirate attack when he was 17. Aie managed to survive the attack by turning in the smuggler captain to the pirates, which led to the pirates stealing some of the spice. The smugglers then returned to Coruscant to get more spice, enough to complete the shipment, but Aie stole some spice and escaped the ship, trading the spice for a ticket to Nar Hutta. In Nar Hutta, he quickly climbed the ranks of the Hutt syndicates, learning tricks of the trade, and became assistant to the Major Domo of a small hut lord that controlled parts of Nar Bo Sholla. He and the Major Domo clashed frequently, and he discovered a plot by the Major Domo to poison him with a Spor Crawler, by trying to jab him with the stinger in the Hutt lord's antechamber. The plot failed, and Aie pushed the Major Domo out of the antechamber and through the curtain, into the Hutt's throne room. He accused the Major Domo of attempting to kill the Hutt lord, and a fistfight ensued. The Spor escaped, and almost stung the Hutt, but Aie shot it with a blaster he took from a guard — then shot the major domo in the face, killing him. A riot ensued, and in the riot the Hutt ended up being stabbed with a vibropike. The riot ended when Aie and his loyalists killed the Domo's loyalists, and Aie stole the Hutt's money, spices, expensive possessions and slaves and loaded them into the Hutt's space yacht, making sure the evidence was planted that the Major Domo cause the riot and killed the Hutt, and Aie buried him in a bog so as to seem like he stole the Hutt's things too. Aie began selling the spice for more spice, as with the slaves, right as Palpatine declared himself leader of the Galactic Republic and the slave price bottomed. Aie secured partnerships with some corrupt imperial warlords in the outer rim, providing them with spices, bribes, and slaves, and eventually built his empire larger than any hutt competitors in his area (away from Hutt Space). Throughout the Imperial period he enjoyed prosperity and loose laws, with enough corrupt officials for him to continue his businesses without worry. The Galactic Civil War never really affected him much, because both sides needed spice and slaves and weapons. In fact, the war profiteering helped him greatly and after the war he found it was one of his main sources of income. He also was faced with harsher slavery and spice laws, and smuggling quickly became more expensive. So he begun to transfer from a pan-Galactic organization, dealing with trades in the space between different planets, to having branches in unstable planets where he could extort and smuggle all he wanted. Now, the Aie syndicate is one of the largest non-Hutt syndicates and employs a plethora of Bounty Hunters, pirates, smugglers, mercenaries, and the like. Aie's cruel methods of shifting consequences to others outside his syndicate and his manipulative strategies have paid off in creating a massive criminal organization.
“...My only complaint is that this guy seems to have plot armor thicker than the hull of a battleship. What’s this Holy Grail thing, anyway? I tried looking it up using foreign information networks but I kept seeing footage of knights being butchered by a rabbit... I don’t think that was a legitimate source.”
...and Josephus sorta started a nuclear war, so I'll just ignore the fact that Kakistopia has almost 50% of deaths due in some part to the God-Empress, and I'll also ignore that Josephus XII was raised as a child-soldier, and I'll say Josephus is the more horrible leader.
by Abbeyverne » Wed Mar 17, 2021 5:29 am
Madrinpoor wrote:Do I need to fill out a faction app for my character's crime syndicate?
“...My only complaint is that this guy seems to have plot armor thicker than the hull of a battleship. What’s this Holy Grail thing, anyway? I tried looking it up using foreign information networks but I kept seeing footage of knights being butchered by a rabbit... I don’t think that was a legitimate source.”
...and Josephus sorta started a nuclear war, so I'll just ignore the fact that Kakistopia has almost 50% of deaths due in some part to the God-Empress, and I'll also ignore that Josephus XII was raised as a child-soldier, and I'll say Josephus is the more horrible leader.
by Madrinpoor » Wed Mar 17, 2021 5:56 am
by Madrinpoor » Wed Mar 17, 2021 5:56 am
by Abbeyverne » Wed Mar 17, 2021 6:14 am
Madrinpoor wrote:I also edited my first app
“...My only complaint is that this guy seems to have plot armor thicker than the hull of a battleship. What’s this Holy Grail thing, anyway? I tried looking it up using foreign information networks but I kept seeing footage of knights being butchered by a rabbit... I don’t think that was a legitimate source.”
...and Josephus sorta started a nuclear war, so I'll just ignore the fact that Kakistopia has almost 50% of deaths due in some part to the God-Empress, and I'll also ignore that Josephus XII was raised as a child-soldier, and I'll say Josephus is the more horrible leader.
by Madrinpoor » Wed Mar 17, 2021 6:25 am
by Abbeyverne » Wed Mar 17, 2021 6:39 am
Madrinpoor wrote:Abbeyverne wrote:
Awesome. Can you answer my question about storyline? It doesn't have to be in your app, and also how do you intend to develop the character and faction?
For the storyline, I want to basically defeat the Hutts. I want to become the largest crime syndicate in the galaxy, and I am willing to use and sacrifice anyone and anything to do that. Aie will be relentlessly pursuing his goals, and his vaulting ambition will make him forget about everything else. If he does succeed, it will be his downfall, like Macbeth. The faction will have to be able to develop around that and bend to the will of the galaxy, even when Aie is deadset on having it face one way and do one thing.
“...My only complaint is that this guy seems to have plot armor thicker than the hull of a battleship. What’s this Holy Grail thing, anyway? I tried looking it up using foreign information networks but I kept seeing footage of knights being butchered by a rabbit... I don’t think that was a legitimate source.”
...and Josephus sorta started a nuclear war, so I'll just ignore the fact that Kakistopia has almost 50% of deaths due in some part to the God-Empress, and I'll also ignore that Josephus XII was raised as a child-soldier, and I'll say Josephus is the more horrible leader.
by Madrinpoor » Wed Mar 17, 2021 6:41 am
Abbeyverne wrote:Madrinpoor wrote:For the storyline, I want to basically defeat the Hutts. I want to become the largest crime syndicate in the galaxy, and I am willing to use and sacrifice anyone and anything to do that. Aie will be relentlessly pursuing his goals, and his vaulting ambition will make him forget about everything else. If he does succeed, it will be his downfall, like Macbeth. The faction will have to be able to develop around that and bend to the will of the galaxy, even when Aie is deadset on having it face one way and do one thing.
Ok, so he'll kind of be doing a side storyline? That may eventually draw the attention of the IR and NR?
by Abbeyverne » Wed Mar 17, 2021 6:42 am
“...My only complaint is that this guy seems to have plot armor thicker than the hull of a battleship. What’s this Holy Grail thing, anyway? I tried looking it up using foreign information networks but I kept seeing footage of knights being butchered by a rabbit... I don’t think that was a legitimate source.”
...and Josephus sorta started a nuclear war, so I'll just ignore the fact that Kakistopia has almost 50% of deaths due in some part to the God-Empress, and I'll also ignore that Josephus XII was raised as a child-soldier, and I'll say Josephus is the more horrible leader.
by Madrinpoor » Wed Mar 17, 2021 6:43 am
by Lotrisia » Wed Mar 17, 2021 8:10 am
by Abbeyverne » Wed Mar 17, 2021 10:52 am
“...My only complaint is that this guy seems to have plot armor thicker than the hull of a battleship. What’s this Holy Grail thing, anyway? I tried looking it up using foreign information networks but I kept seeing footage of knights being butchered by a rabbit... I don’t think that was a legitimate source.”
...and Josephus sorta started a nuclear war, so I'll just ignore the fact that Kakistopia has almost 50% of deaths due in some part to the God-Empress, and I'll also ignore that Josephus XII was raised as a child-soldier, and I'll say Josephus is the more horrible leader.
by Abbeyverne » Thu Mar 18, 2021 4:41 am
“...My only complaint is that this guy seems to have plot armor thicker than the hull of a battleship. What’s this Holy Grail thing, anyway? I tried looking it up using foreign information networks but I kept seeing footage of knights being butchered by a rabbit... I don’t think that was a legitimate source.”
...and Josephus sorta started a nuclear war, so I'll just ignore the fact that Kakistopia has almost 50% of deaths due in some part to the God-Empress, and I'll also ignore that Josephus XII was raised as a child-soldier, and I'll say Josephus is the more horrible leader.
by Abbeyverne » Thu Mar 18, 2021 4:45 am
“...My only complaint is that this guy seems to have plot armor thicker than the hull of a battleship. What’s this Holy Grail thing, anyway? I tried looking it up using foreign information networks but I kept seeing footage of knights being butchered by a rabbit... I don’t think that was a legitimate source.”
...and Josephus sorta started a nuclear war, so I'll just ignore the fact that Kakistopia has almost 50% of deaths due in some part to the God-Empress, and I'll also ignore that Josephus XII was raised as a child-soldier, and I'll say Josephus is the more horrible leader.
by Madrinpoor » Thu Mar 18, 2021 5:38 am
by Abbeyverne » Thu Mar 18, 2021 5:49 am
“...My only complaint is that this guy seems to have plot armor thicker than the hull of a battleship. What’s this Holy Grail thing, anyway? I tried looking it up using foreign information networks but I kept seeing footage of knights being butchered by a rabbit... I don’t think that was a legitimate source.”
...and Josephus sorta started a nuclear war, so I'll just ignore the fact that Kakistopia has almost 50% of deaths due in some part to the God-Empress, and I'll also ignore that Josephus XII was raised as a child-soldier, and I'll say Josephus is the more horrible leader.
by Madrinpoor » Thu Mar 18, 2021 5:55 am
by Abbeyverne » Thu Mar 18, 2021 6:22 am
“...My only complaint is that this guy seems to have plot armor thicker than the hull of a battleship. What’s this Holy Grail thing, anyway? I tried looking it up using foreign information networks but I kept seeing footage of knights being butchered by a rabbit... I don’t think that was a legitimate source.”
...and Josephus sorta started a nuclear war, so I'll just ignore the fact that Kakistopia has almost 50% of deaths due in some part to the God-Empress, and I'll also ignore that Josephus XII was raised as a child-soldier, and I'll say Josephus is the more horrible leader.
by Madrinpoor » Thu Mar 18, 2021 6:26 am
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