Star Wars: Empire's End (Character RP/OOC/Signups) [OPEN!!]

[Ormata]

I look forward to your post.

Uh it won't be good. I'm not that good at writing combat scenes. I'm not that good at writing in general

Do you want help?

[Strala]

Uh it won't be good. I'm not that good at writing combat scenes. I'm not that good at writing in general

Do you want help?

Yes?

[Ormata]

Do you want help?

Yes?

TG me the rough draft, I can go over it when I get a chance.

[Strala]

Yes?

TG me the rough draft, I can go over it when I get a chance.

Oh, thank you! However, I still need to work on the rough draft.

[Lotrisia]

I'd also say that Eriadu would be near a fortress world in strength. It's position as a drydock, industrial center and home to Imperial loyalists would make it a natural place for Imperials to retreat towards.

Time to strike fear into the Imperialist scum. Maybe if we can get a decisive victory, we can make up some of our losses by capturing Imperial ships and maybe several unfinished/finished but uncrewed Imperial ships in the drydocks. If we're lucky, we can break the will of the moff and make him retreat to the deep core just like what happened in legends.

Well I could probably lend you a fairly substantial force, though it'll have to be after Fondor since I'm committing a little raiding party centred around an MC75 alongside whatever forces you're throwing there. You wouldn't be happening to send a decent force there would you? I'd be able to use the, er, distraction, to draw defending forces off and go break some infrastructure

[Strala]

Time to strike fear into the Imperialist scum. Maybe if we can get a decisive victory, we can make up some of our losses by capturing Imperial ships and maybe several unfinished/finished but uncrewed Imperial ships in the drydocks. If we're lucky, we can break the will of the moff and make him retreat to the deep core just like what happened in legends.

Well I could probably lend you a fairly substantial force, though it'll have to be after Fondor since I'm committing a little raiding party centred around an MC75 alongside whatever forces you're throwing there. You wouldn't be happening to send a decent force there would you? I'd be able to use the, er, distraction, to draw defending forces off and go break some infrastructure

1 Dauntless, my only MC75 and 30 or 40 corvettes. I'm assuming another Rebel fleet will be devoting most of their forces for this attack.

[Elerian]

I'm debating what to re-apply as, but I'm not sure. Does anybody have any suggestions on what we could use?

[Ormata]

I'm debating what to re-apply as, but I'm not sure. Does anybody have any suggestions on what we could use?

To be honest, a (morally) good New Republic char is pretty badly needed for balance.

[Lotrisia]

Well I could probably lend you a fairly substantial force, though it'll have to be after Fondor since I'm committing a little raiding party centred around an MC75 alongside whatever forces you're throwing there. You wouldn't be happening to send a decent force there would you? I'd be able to use the, er, distraction, to draw defending forces off and go break some infrastructure

1 Dauntless, my only MC75 and 30 or 40 corvettes. I'm assuming another Rebel fleet will be devoting most of their forces for this attack.

Hmmm okay that could work but you'll need to make sure that other fleet actually shows up, otherwise we're fish food

[Lotrisia]

I'm debating what to re-apply as, but I'm not sure. Does anybody have any suggestions on what we could use?

To be honest, a (morally) good New Republic char is pretty badly needed for balance.

Yeah I really think we need more morally good NR, at the moment my existence is making the Remnants look noble by comparison

[Ormata]

Due to a combination of things, I've started up a game Discord for discussion on things.

[Abbeyverne]

Due to a combination of things, I've started up a game Discord for discussion on things.

Thank you!

[Abbeyverne]

I'm sorry if it's a little early for my second post, but I want to explain why the PA isn't already at Fondor.

[Tysklandia]

No problemo

[Ormata]

Due to a combination of things, I've started up a game Discord for discussion on things.

Thank you!

No problem. By the way, open invitation for everyone if ya need advice on writing.

I'm sorry if it's a little early for my second post, but I want to explain why the PA isn't already at Fondor.

Interesting post. I look forwards to seeing how Jeremiah will handle having an ISD...and the glories that comes from vengeful Imperials.

By the way, Strala Imma need a concise number and classes for your "30 to 40 corvettes".

[Strala]

Thank you!

No problem. By the way, open invitation for everyone if ya need advice on writing.

I'm sorry if it's a little early for my second post, but I want to explain why the PA isn't already at Fondor.

Interesting post. I look forwards to seeing how Jeremiah will handle having an ISD...and the glories that comes from vengeful Imperials.

By the way, Strala Imma need a concise number and classes for your "30 to 40 corvettes".

20 CR70s 15 CR90s

[Strala]

1 Dauntless, my only MC75 and 30 or 40 corvettes. I'm assuming another Rebel fleet will be devoting most of their forces for this attack.

Hmmm okay that could work but you'll need to make sure that other fleet actually shows up, otherwise we're fish food

The 4 original NR fleets were formed out of the four fleets pushing for Coruscant. I would think that at least one of those fleets would be focused on Fondor

To be honest, a (morally) good New Republic char is pretty badly needed for balance.

Yeah I really think we need more morally good NR, at the moment my existence is making the Remnants look noble by comparison

I would say my character is moral enough.

[Strala]

Op I have updated my fleet. Can you check it out and tell me if it's okay or not?

[Flarbinia]

Name: Jebb Vid
Faction: New Republic
Appearance: An elderly Ithorian in a New Republic officer's uniform
Personality: Jebb sees Ithorian Pacifism as the weakness that allowed the Empire to gain control over his Homeworld. Sees the Republic as the true successor to the Republic he fought against during the Clone Wars, as the Empire has committed greater atrocities
Skills: Marksman with blaster rifles. He has experience leading troops into battle
Weapons: E-5 blaster rifle
Ship: Ithor's Liberation (Victory-II Class Star Destroyer)
Rank: General
Bio: Jebb Vid was never one for tradition, advocating for his people to take up arms against the Republic, as he believed that his world would benefit more from joining the Confederacy. Naturally, being pacifists, most Ithorians ignored him and being pro-Republic, Ithor's government began arresting his supporters. By the time he got into contact with the Separatist, Jeb was all that was left of the Pro-Separatist faction who had not been arrested. The Separatist spy, knowing that the Ithorian could be a potential puppet, agreed to have him smuggled out of the Ottega System on the condition that he join the Separatist Military. With arrest being the only alternative, Jebb accepted his terms and within a week, he headed out of Republic space. His first taste of combat would be on Jabiim, where he was forced to take command of what was left of his platoon when the Republic attempted to retake Choal. It was on Jabiim that his unit would continue fighting after the deactivation of the droid army, hoping that their efforts would spark a Separatist uprising that would drive the newly formed Empire off the planet. The sad reality is that they didn't have large scale support as the Nationalists, led by Thorne Khaym, had sworn loyalty to the Empire and the Loyalists, having fought for the Republic, were unwilling to provide their former foes with anything more than a token amount of supplies.

However, Jebb's activities had not gone unnoticed and he was soon contacted by the growing Rebellion. He reluctantly agreed to join them, as his troops were growing disillusioned with his leadership due to spending years fighting for a losing cause without making any significant gains. The Rebels on Jabiim spent months preparing for its liberation, strategizing, performing reconnaissance and espionage, recruiting locals to their cause, training their recruits, and stockpiling weapons. When news of the the Emperor's demise reached Jabiim, Jebb Vid gave the order to attack. Weeks passed as the demoralized Imperial garrison was overwhelmed, strongholds and other strategically important locations falling to the Rebels. It was not long before the surviving Imperials surrendered, Jebb declaring that Jabiim was now freed. Once the celebration had ended and a fleet had been gathered and organized, they were ordered to redeploy to Ithor to aid in its liberation. A battle during which the victory-II Class Star Destroyer Desolation was captured after being heavily damaged, Jebb Vid renaming it and making it his flagship. Now, years after the Battle Of Ithor, the army and fleet under Jebb's command are preparing to head to Fondor.

[Ormata]

OP, could we get numbers for the local Fondor forces?

[Ormata]

Name: Jebb Vid

Obligatorily, I have to state that I'm no OP at all and the following is just some things I've come up with for expanding on the character/fixes.

1. May want to expand his personality a bit more. I have no idea what the heck his drives are for being a CIS supporter, how he treats with the NR, whether or not he takes prisoners, etc.
2. Why is a General in command of a Victory II-class?
3. Why was he never one for tradition/wanted to join the CIS?
4. Are you saying that he fought between 18 BBY and 4 ABY...? I have severe, severe doubts that he just...was never found. Have you made Star Wars OBL?
5. "A battle during which the victory-II Class Star Destroyer Desolation was captured, Jebb Vid renaming it and making it his flagship." is not really a sentence. How was it captured?
6. What does the army and fleet under Jebb Vid's command consist of?

[Flarbinia]

Name: Jebb Vid

Obligatorily, I have to state that I'm no OP at all and the following is just some things I've come up with for expanding on the character/fixes.

1. May want to expand his personality a bit more. I have no idea what the heck his drives are for being a CIS supporter, how he treats with the NR, whether or not he takes prisoners, etc.
2. Why is a General in command of a Victory II-class?
3. Why was he never one for tradition/wanted to join the CIS?
4. Are you saying that he fought between 18 BBY and 4 ABY...? I have severe, severe doubts that he just...was never found. Have you made Star Wars OBL?
5. "A battle during which the victory-II Class Star Destroyer Desolation was captured, Jebb Vid renaming it and making it his flagship." is not really a sentence. How was it captured?
6. What does the army and fleet under Jebb Vid's command consist of?

1. I agree on your first, third point, and fourth. I may have condensed his original backstory too much.
2. It is symbolic of the Rebellion's transformation from a small collection of individual groups to the great power known as the New Republic, not to mention that a flagship needs to be powerful.
3. I will elaborate on the Liberation.
4. I will address that in my Faction APP

[Strala]

OP are you willing to increase the size of the Home One type ships? I never thought of the canonical and legends length to be long/large enough

[Tysklandia]

OP are you willing to increase the size of the Home One type ships? I never thought of the canonical and legends length to be long/large enough

Can you list the stats you want it to have compared to the those listed on the wiki's?

[Ormata]

OP are you willing to increase the size of the Home One type ships? I never thought of the canonical and legends length to be long/large enough

Can you list the stats you want it to have compared to the those listed on the wiki's?

He wants to increase length/width from the 1.2 km listed on wiki to something like 2.5 km with a proportional increase in armaments carried.