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Bolslania
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The Poppies blow in Flanders Field(OOC)(OPEN)(CHAR)

Postby Bolslania » Thu Oct 08, 2020 10:15 am

In Flanders fields the poppies blow
Between the crosses, row on row,
That mark our place; and in the sky
The larks, still bravely singing, fly
Scarce heard amid the guns below.
We are the Dead. Short days ago
We lived, felt dawn, saw sunset glow,
Loved and were loved, and now we lie
in Flanders fields.
Take up our quarrel with the foe:
To you from failing hands we throw
The torch; be yours to hold it high.
If ye break faith with us who die
We shall not sleep, though poppies grow
In Flanders fields.

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October 17, 1914.

3 months ago, the Central Powers of Austro-Hungary and the German Empire, went to war with the Triple Entente of France, England, and the Russian Empire. Now, both sides are engaged in a back and forth struggle to seize the northern flank of their opponent. The Germany Army has been on the attack for several months, however, the Entente powers have held them off, beating the German first Army at the Marne. Now, a month later, the German 4th Army is on the attack, pressing on the Ypres region of Belgium. French, British, and Belgian forces are rushing to stop them, and maybe even launch a counterattack. This battle will set the tone for the rest of the war, categorized by months of stagnate fighting and tens of thousands of casualties. This battle will forever be remembered by history, the men who died at this battle will never be forgotten. But the outcome of the battle is yours to affect. Your leadership as a general might save the lives of thousands or change the tide of the battle, your bravery as an infantryman might save the frontline and buy your side time to react to the new scenario and change the tempo of the fight. Its up to you, how will you fight?

Now, you can fight in the 1st Battle of Ypres, either as the Germans, or the French or English. You can fight in the trenches, miles back with the field artillery, or at Headquarters commanding the great armies as they struggle for dominance in the War to End All Wars.


1. As the OP I am the final authority on matters. I will hear both sides of an argument equally but I make the final decision
2. When making an attempt to kill another player character, both parties will have a chance to post on the IC, and then me and any Co-Ops will discuss the situation and decide what happens.
3. Don't godmod, be realistic. This is WW1 casualties on both sides were atrocious, so be prepared to have to re-app
4. Be civil. No hate speech will be tolerated, and I request that everyone be polite to each other on the OOC
5. Co-ops are extensions of my will
6. Rules are subject to change
Put "Ypres" in the notes section of your app if you have read and understood the rules



Name:
Age:
Nation:
Rank:
Personality description:
Weapons(Be realistic here):
Bio(1-2 paragraphs):
Notes:
Last edited by Bolslania on Thu Oct 08, 2020 10:41 am, edited 2 times in total.

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Byamba
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Don't you dare review this

Postby Byamba » Thu Oct 08, 2020 1:00 pm

Name: James Chamberlain
Age: 20
Nation: The United kingdom
Rank: Lance corporal
Personality description: WIP
Weapons(Be realistic here): pattern 1914 Enfield, Webley MK V revolver and the pattern 1907 Bayonet
Bio(1-2 paragraphs): WIP
Notes: Ypres

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Postby Elevanos » Thu Oct 08, 2020 1:15 pm

Name: Hans Doissen
Age: 19
Nation: German Empire
Rank: Oberst
Personality description: Fierce, determined, charming, intelligent.
Weapons(Be realistic here): Mauser Gewehr 98.
Bio(1-2 paragraphs): Born and raised in Berlin, son of stay-at-home mother and factory working-father. Has five siblings, all older, with both of his brothers along him in the army. Was conscripted at eighteen, and has a seven-month pregnant girlfriend in Berlin.
Notes: None.
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Bolslania
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Postby Bolslania » Thu Oct 08, 2020 1:50 pm

Elevanos wrote:Name: Hans Doissen
Age: 19
Nation: German Empire
Rank: Oberst
Personality description: Fierce, determined, charming, intelligent.
Weapons(Be realistic here): Mauser Gewehr 98.
Bio(1-2 paragraphs): Born and raised in Berlin, son of stay-at-home mother and factory working-father. Has five siblings, all older, with both of his brothers along him in the army. Was conscripted at eighteen, and has a seven-month pregnant girlfriend in Berlin.
Notes: None.

REJECTED

Point 1: Oberst is a Colonel, so It's impossible that a 19 son of a factory ,worker is going to be a colonel in the German army
Point 2: That bio isn't a paragraph
Point 3: You do not have the tag in your notes section that mean you read the rules

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Postby Byamba » Thu Oct 08, 2020 2:07 pm

Bolslania wrote:
Elevanos wrote:Name: Hans Doissen
Age: 19
Nation: German Empire
Rank: Oberst
Personality description: Fierce, determined, charming, intelligent.
Weapons(Be realistic here): Mauser Gewehr 98.
Bio(1-2 paragraphs): Born and raised in Berlin, son of stay-at-home mother and factory working-father. Has five siblings, all older, with both of his brothers along him in the army. Was conscripted at eighteen, and has a seven-month pregnant girlfriend in Berlin.
Notes: None.

REJECTED

Point 1: Oberst is a Colonel, so It's impossible that a 19 son of a factory ,worker is going to be a colonel in the German army
Point 2: That bio isn't a paragraph
Point 3: You do not have the tag in your notes section that mean you read the rules

The rank of colonel was and still is considered a big step up in promotions and in no way can a teenager even become an officer
It takes skill, time and hard work to become an officer because that's how it works, this isn't an anime, people can't make OP characters who are perfect in every way and in my opinion a flawed character is much better which also has more opportunities to create a character with more depth, potential and unique


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