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NS Nation Name: United Hemand Insia
Character Name: Logan Frazier
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 35
Character Height: 6'4"
Character Weight: 200 lbs.
Character Position/Role/Job: Whatever is open
Appearance: (Photo preferred, not required) Mixed between Jim Carrey and JFK.
Character State of Origin: Washington
Character State of Residence: New Mexico
Character Party Affiliation: Republican
Main Strengths: Debates, presenting and using facts, persuasive
Main Weaknesses: Short temper, fake know-it-all
Biography: (Minimum 2-3 paragraphs) Logan Frazier was born in Bellingham, Washington, where he was surrounded by left-leaning people wherever he walked. After a tough beginning with abuse, neglect, drugs, and alcohol, he became a front-runner in politics at the schools he attended. He was president of his Middle School's and High School's student council. He was also head of his High School's debate team.
Frazier graduated High School at the age of 17 as a Valedictorian. Frazier attended Yale School of Law and moved to New Mexico to start his career as a lawyer. After 15 years working as Albuquerque's most prolific lawyer, he turned to politics to find peace in New Mexico.
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Greetings and thank you for applying for the RP. Here are some areas where the app could be expanded upon:
1: Overall, I’d suggest that you might want to specify a particular position for Frazier, perhaps a Representative would be a wise position to start off with?
2: I’d suggest expanding on the strengths and weaknesses in order to ensure that the character is fully balanced, for example past controversies for a weakness as well as perhaps a strong fundraiser in terms of a strength may work.
3: I would also advise a potential expansion on the biography in order to fully develop Frazier further, for example, the type of family he was raised in, his date of birth, alma matar etc.
4: Furthermore, it is most likely unfeasible for Frazier to attend law school after graduating High School on account of them largely providing graduate education (J.D. and so on and so forth), consequently, I’d suggest expanding on Frazier’s college experiences in order to provide clarification on that particular matter.
Once again, thank you for applying and I look forward to seeing the app develop.