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Postby Europa Undivided » Sun Jun 28, 2020 7:20 pm

Imperialisium wrote:
Europa Undivided wrote:There's another slot for a Primarch yah?


Yes. Endem, Astarten, and yourself would take the last available Primarch slots as we'd have 20.

Good... what canon legions don't have an equivalent here yet?
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Postby Endem » Sun Jun 28, 2020 7:22 pm

Imperialisium wrote:
Europa Undivided wrote:There's another slot for a Primarch yah?


Yes. Endem, Astarten, and yourself would take the last available Primarch slots as we'd have 20.

By the way, my app is ready to be reviewed, I posted it on the previous page so it can be found more easily
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Postby Imperialisium » Sun Jun 28, 2020 7:30 pm

Endem wrote:TL;DR I'm making the Death Guard of this RP

The Primarch
Name: Nikolai
Alias: N/A
Appearance: his face is perpetually shrouded by a gas mask he is unable to take off, as it has burned into his skin, the only thing that can be discerned is that his eyes are deep green, as for his hair, he has gone bald, possibly due to his experience on Osowiec, his mask makes sentences uttered by him drawn out.
Personality: He is incredibly loyal to whoever he serves, often overperforming on tasks given by his overlord, he has a very strong sense of kinship with his sons, as well as any other people he serves alongside it, if such a person is killed, Nikolai will undoubtedly seek vengeance on the killer
Backstory:
Nikolai, as his brothers and sisters, he was wisked away from the Emperor by the malevolent Chaos Gods, and hurled across the void towards a planet, a beautiful and lush Garden World, it's beauty would astound, it's opulence could rival even the most revered Pleasure Worlds in the Imperium, artists produced beatiful works of art, musicians produced music which could mesmerize even those on the brink of deafness, truly, you would be able to describe the beauty of Osowiec all day long and there would yet be still more.

And it is here that Nikolai would land, adopted by the nobility, he would live a life of pleasure and he could have mastered whatever fine art he would have wanted, he was intelligent, he was skilled, he was handsome, it was as if Osowiec channelled it's enchating beauty into him, he would eventually become the leader of his noble house, and under him it prospered, wine and honey flowed freely.

Yet, all things beautiful come to an abrupt stop, in the span of but a decade, the world would experience a shift unheard of, suddenly, the political machinations of noble houses could not be housed within the confines of the high chambers, dwelling in whispers and shadows as decadence festered among the population, the tumor that has grown over the centerries could not longer be ignored, Osowiec was going to war.

The world geared, and the world fought, it was destructive, it was grim, the green valleys became dotted with craters, the sky went from blue to a sickly green, in but a decade, the world transformed itself into a Death World, where perpetual war raged and sky was polluted to the point of being unbearable, and Nikolal, in the middle of all it, a general, was not spared, a gas attack nearly crippled him as his own gasmask burned into his skin, but he survived with the help of a mystical object and a family relic, the Caduceus, which kept him alive.

It was in this state of the world that the Imperium found it, and found Nikolai, he was given his legion, and he was given that world, he asked for but one thing, for the state of eternal war on it be preserved, as it would help weed out the week for the Legion, and be a perfect training ground for the Acolytes.
War Gear:[/b]
CaduceusIt is said that it can heal from any injury, it is said it can bring a man back to life, under one condition, it must be wielded by the one which it heals, some of it's abilities are exaggerated as per any legend, but it is what keeps Nikolai alive, and he carries it, buried in his armor, everywhere

Reaper's StaffA large scythe, it is said that it's tip contains every poison known to man, it is unknown wherever it is true, but it stings with every hit, a being that was touched by it's blade struggles to survive through the next hour, and it is almost unknown in Osowiec's folklore or the recorded history anybody survived three hours after being hit by it

The Legion

Numeration: Legio XVII - Alternatively called "The Immortal Scourge" sometimes abbreviated just to "The Scourge"
Primogenitor: Nikolai
Noteworthy Domains: Osowiec - Homeworld of the Legion, also a Death World who's atmosphere is now mostly sulphur, requiring gas masks to live on it, and the most precious resource being unpolluted air, most of the recruits come from here
Combat Doctrine: Chemical and Biological Warfare
Appearance: Most of their armor is colored in deep dark sickly green, their shouldpads however, sport pure black coloration, with the legion insignia ( a white circle with a hazmat sign on it ) on the right one
Origins and History:
Legio XVII was originally intended as stalwart defenders of the Imperium's realms, and on many times they proved to be as such, defending fervently of Imperium's holdings, but this was to change, as they were reunited with their lost Primarch, he incorporated what he knew of warfare, the Legion became more balanced, being able to hold their own in both attack and defense, on Osowiec, chemical and biological warfare was used, and so did the Legion started using it, on Osowiec little care was given over civillians, and so the Legion also stopped caring about it, some may consider the changes to be for the worse, but one thing can be given, they have become much more efficient and deadly.
Legion Organisation and Structure: the Legion has a loose hierarchy due to Nikolai viewing all his sons as equals, on the battlefield however, it is usually those with most leadership skills that take charge, making them unofficial lieutenant's, whoever it may be, it is also expected that the marines will follow the one weilding the power of the burning gas, all of the marines are also required to follow Nikolai's every order
Legion Command Hierarchy: as detailed in the previous section, a command hierarchy isn't in place but forms naturally
Specialist Formations:

Biesy a group of marines that wield the burning chemicals that are used in warfare by this legion, they are given the modified flamers which shoot these chemicals, they are trained to know wherever they can deploy a devastating chemical assault, they are tasked to leave nothing in their path, but misery, death, and sickly fumes.
Legion Wargear: nothing special really, the only thing is the modified Flamers that are able to spew chemical weapons
Legion Vehicles: nothing out of the ordinary
Legion Fleet: The Immortal Scourge's fleet is led by a mighty Gloriana "Tchaikovsky", accompanied by three battle barges five battleships, ten cruisers and fifteen escorts
Legion Relics:nah


Accepted

For the Reaper's Staff keep in mind that it won't be one shotting Astartes/Primarchs with one hit. This is part of Seg's and I trying to avoid potential conflicts in any PvP fights. For fluff you can keep the description but OOCly keep this in mind.
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Postby Endem » Sun Jun 28, 2020 7:32 pm

Imperialisium wrote:
Endem wrote:TL;DR I'm making the Death Guard of this RP

The Primarch
Name: Nikolai
Alias: N/A
Appearance: his face is perpetually shrouded by a gas mask he is unable to take off, as it has burned into his skin, the only thing that can be discerned is that his eyes are deep green, as for his hair, he has gone bald, possibly due to his experience on Osowiec, his mask makes sentences uttered by him drawn out.
Personality: He is incredibly loyal to whoever he serves, often overperforming on tasks given by his overlord, he has a very strong sense of kinship with his sons, as well as any other people he serves alongside it, if such a person is killed, Nikolai will undoubtedly seek vengeance on the killer
Backstory:
Nikolai, as his brothers and sisters, he was wisked away from the Emperor by the malevolent Chaos Gods, and hurled across the void towards a planet, a beautiful and lush Garden World, it's beauty would astound, it's opulence could rival even the most revered Pleasure Worlds in the Imperium, artists produced beatiful works of art, musicians produced music which could mesmerize even those on the brink of deafness, truly, you would be able to describe the beauty of Osowiec all day long and there would yet be still more.

And it is here that Nikolai would land, adopted by the nobility, he would live a life of pleasure and he could have mastered whatever fine art he would have wanted, he was intelligent, he was skilled, he was handsome, it was as if Osowiec channelled it's enchating beauty into him, he would eventually become the leader of his noble house, and under him it prospered, wine and honey flowed freely.

Yet, all things beautiful come to an abrupt stop, in the span of but a decade, the world would experience a shift unheard of, suddenly, the political machinations of noble houses could not be housed within the confines of the high chambers, dwelling in whispers and shadows as decadence festered among the population, the tumor that has grown over the centerries could not longer be ignored, Osowiec was going to war.

The world geared, and the world fought, it was destructive, it was grim, the green valleys became dotted with craters, the sky went from blue to a sickly green, in but a decade, the world transformed itself into a Death World, where perpetual war raged and sky was polluted to the point of being unbearable, and Nikolal, in the middle of all it, a general, was not spared, a gas attack nearly crippled him as his own gasmask burned into his skin, but he survived with the help of a mystical object and a family relic, the Caduceus, which kept him alive.

It was in this state of the world that the Imperium found it, and found Nikolai, he was given his legion, and he was given that world, he asked for but one thing, for the state of eternal war on it be preserved, as it would help weed out the week for the Legion, and be a perfect training ground for the Acolytes.
War Gear:[/b]
CaduceusIt is said that it can heal from any injury, it is said it can bring a man back to life, under one condition, it must be wielded by the one which it heals, some of it's abilities are exaggerated as per any legend, but it is what keeps Nikolai alive, and he carries it, buried in his armor, everywhere

Reaper's StaffA large scythe, it is said that it's tip contains every poison known to man, it is unknown wherever it is true, but it stings with every hit, a being that was touched by it's blade struggles to survive through the next hour, and it is almost unknown in Osowiec's folklore or the recorded history anybody survived three hours after being hit by it

The Legion

Numeration: Legio XVII - Alternatively called "The Immortal Scourge" sometimes abbreviated just to "The Scourge"
Primogenitor: Nikolai
Noteworthy Domains: Osowiec - Homeworld of the Legion, also a Death World who's atmosphere is now mostly sulphur, requiring gas masks to live on it, and the most precious resource being unpolluted air, most of the recruits come from here
Combat Doctrine: Chemical and Biological Warfare
Appearance: Most of their armor is colored in deep dark sickly green, their shouldpads however, sport pure black coloration, with the legion insignia ( a white circle with a hazmat sign on it ) on the right one
Origins and History:
Legio XVII was originally intended as stalwart defenders of the Imperium's realms, and on many times they proved to be as such, defending fervently of Imperium's holdings, but this was to change, as they were reunited with their lost Primarch, he incorporated what he knew of warfare, the Legion became more balanced, being able to hold their own in both attack and defense, on Osowiec, chemical and biological warfare was used, and so did the Legion started using it, on Osowiec little care was given over civillians, and so the Legion also stopped caring about it, some may consider the changes to be for the worse, but one thing can be given, they have become much more efficient and deadly.
Legion Organisation and Structure: the Legion has a loose hierarchy due to Nikolai viewing all his sons as equals, on the battlefield however, it is usually those with most leadership skills that take charge, making them unofficial lieutenant's, whoever it may be, it is also expected that the marines will follow the one weilding the power of the burning gas, all of the marines are also required to follow Nikolai's every order
Legion Command Hierarchy: as detailed in the previous section, a command hierarchy isn't in place but forms naturally
Specialist Formations:

Biesy a group of marines that wield the burning chemicals that are used in warfare by this legion, they are given the modified flamers which shoot these chemicals, they are trained to know wherever they can deploy a devastating chemical assault, they are tasked to leave nothing in their path, but misery, death, and sickly fumes.
Legion Wargear: nothing special really, the only thing is the modified Flamers that are able to spew chemical weapons
Legion Vehicles: nothing out of the ordinary
Legion Fleet: The Immortal Scourge's fleet is led by a mighty Gloriana "Tchaikovsky", accompanied by three battle barges five battleships, ten cruisers and fifteen escorts
Legion Relics:nah


Accepted

For the Reaper's Staff keep in mind that it won't be one shotting Astartes/Primarchs with one hit. This is part of Seg's and I trying to avoid potential conflicts in any PvP fights. For fluff you can keep the description but OOCly keep this in mind.

Of course
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Postby Imperialisium » Sun Jun 28, 2020 7:36 pm

Europa Undivided wrote:
Imperialisium wrote:
Yes. Endem, Astarten, and yourself would take the last available Primarch slots as we'd have 20.

Good... what canon legions don't have an equivalent here yet?


All the canon legions have an equivalent to a degree. There will be some overlap since these are original Legions and not directly from the original lore and having close to 20 players. Could always go with a jack-of-all-trades Legion?
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Postby Prusslandia » Mon Jun 29, 2020 12:28 am

Endem wrote:TL;DR I'm making the Death Guard of this RP

The Primarch
Name: Nikolai
Alias: N/A
Appearance: his face is perpetually shrouded by a gas mask he is unable to take off, as it has burned into his skin, the only thing that can be discerned is that his eyes are deep green, as for his hair, he has gone bald, possibly due to his experience on Osowiec, his mask makes sentences uttered by him drawn out.
Personality: He is incredibly loyal to whoever he serves, often overperforming on tasks given by his overlord, he has a very strong sense of kinship with his sons, as well as any other people he serves alongside it, if such a person is killed, Nikolai will undoubtedly seek vengeance on the killer
Backstory:
Nikolai, as his brothers and sisters, he was wisked away from the Emperor by the malevolent Chaos Gods, and hurled across the void towards a planet, a beautiful and lush Garden World, it's beauty would astound, it's opulence could rival even the most revered Pleasure Worlds in the Imperium, artists produced beatiful works of art, musicians produced music which could mesmerize even those on the brink of deafness, truly, you would be able to describe the beauty of Osowiec all day long and there would yet be still more.

And it is here that Nikolai would land, adopted by the nobility, he would live a life of pleasure and he could have mastered whatever fine art he would have wanted, he was intelligent, he was skilled, he was handsome, it was as if Osowiec channelled it's enchating beauty into him, he would eventually become the leader of his noble house, and under him it prospered, wine and honey flowed freely.

Yet, all things beautiful come to an abrupt stop, in the span of but a decade, the world would experience a shift unheard of, suddenly, the political machinations of noble houses could not be housed within the confines of the high chambers, dwelling in whispers and shadows as decadence festered among the population, the tumor that has grown over the centerries could not longer be ignored, Osowiec was going to war.

The world geared, and the world fought, it was destructive, it was grim, the green valleys became dotted with craters, the sky went from blue to a sickly green, in but a decade, the world transformed itself into a Death World, where perpetual war raged and sky was polluted to the point of being unbearable, and Nikolal, in the middle of all it, a general, was not spared, a gas attack nearly crippled him as his own gasmask burned into his skin, but he survived with the help of a mystical object and a family relic, the Caduceus, which kept him alive.

It was in this state of the world that the Imperium found it, and found Nikolai, he was given his legion, and he was given that world, he asked for but one thing, for the state of eternal war on it be preserved, as it would help weed out the week for the Legion, and be a perfect training ground for the Acolytes.
War Gear:[/b]
CaduceusIt is said that it can heal from any injury, it is said it can bring a man back to life, under one condition, it must be wielded by the one which it heals, some of it's abilities are exaggerated as per any legend, but it is what keeps Nikolai alive, and he carries it, buried in his armor, everywhere

Reaper's StaffA large scythe, it is said that it's tip contains every poison known to man, it is unknown wherever it is true, but it stings with every hit, a being that was touched by it's blade struggles to survive through the next hour, and it is almost unknown in Osowiec's folklore or the recorded history anybody survived three hours after being hit by it

The Legion

Numeration: Legio XVII - Alternatively called "The Immortal Scourge" sometimes abbreviated just to "The Scourge"
Primogenitor: Nikolai
Noteworthy Domains: Osowiec - Homeworld of the Legion, also a Death World who's atmosphere is now mostly sulphur, requiring gas masks to live on it, and the most precious resource being unpolluted air, most of the recruits come from here
Combat Doctrine: Chemical and Biological Warfare
Appearance: Most of their armor is colored in deep dark sickly green, their shouldpads however, sport pure black coloration, with the legion insignia ( a white circle with a hazmat sign on it ) on the right one
Origins and History:
Legio XVII was originally intended as stalwart defenders of the Imperium's realms, and on many times they proved to be as such, defending fervently of Imperium's holdings, but this was to change, as they were reunited with their lost Primarch, he incorporated what he knew of warfare, the Legion became more balanced, being able to hold their own in both attack and defense, on Osowiec, chemical and biological warfare was used, and so did the Legion started using it, on Osowiec little care was given over civillians, and so the Legion also stopped caring about it, some may consider the changes to be for the worse, but one thing can be given, they have become much more efficient and deadly.
Legion Organisation and Structure: the Legion has a loose hierarchy due to Nikolai viewing all his sons as equals, on the battlefield however, it is usually those with most leadership skills that take charge, making them unofficial lieutenant's, whoever it may be, it is also expected that the marines will follow the one weilding the power of the burning gas, all of the marines are also required to follow Nikolai's every order
Legion Command Hierarchy: as detailed in the previous section, a command hierarchy isn't in place but forms naturally
Specialist Formations:

Biesy a group of marines that wield the burning chemicals that are used in warfare by this legion, they are given the modified flamers which shoot these chemicals, they are trained to know wherever they can deploy a devastating chemical assault, they are tasked to leave nothing in their path, but misery, death, and sickly fumes.
Legion Wargear: nothing special really, the only thing is the modified Flamers that are able to spew chemical weapons
Legion Vehicles: nothing out of the ordinary
Legion Fleet: The Immortal Scourge's fleet is led by a mighty Gloriana "Tchaikovsky", accompanied by three battle barges five battleships, ten cruisers and fifteen escorts
Legion Relics:nah

Hey, I took the time to make my own spin on the bio/chemical warfare concept, and it’s discouraging to see someone just take the speciality of my Primarch/legion anyway. I don’t want to discourage you in turn, a death-guard inspired endurance force could be super interesting. However it feels kind’ve shitty to me that you’ve just taken the exact speciality of the Sixteenth.
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Here come the Reasonable Marines, WIP

Postby Europa Undivided » Mon Jun 29, 2020 1:22 am

The Primarch or Astartes
Name: Sergei Karamazov
Alias: Winter’s Claw
Appearance: https://fc05.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2014 ... 7pi0l8.jpg
Personality:
Backstory:
War Gear:

The Eternal Seeker: A sniper rifle that is said to be a relic of the Dark Age of Technology, though this can never be proven. It has been blessed by the psyker lords of Sevasta IV and by the Adeptus Mechanicus, turning the already potent weapon into a tool of utter vengeance, firing bullets that could cross an ocean to slay its target.

The Legion
Numeration: Legion II: The Shadow Guard
Primogenitor: Sergei Karamazov
Noteworthy Domains:

Sevasta IV: Homeworld of the Shadow Guard and a harsh arctic planet.
Sevasti Confederacy: A realm of fifty planets in and around the Sevasta System that were united by the Winter’s Claw before being found by the Emperor.
Combat Doctrine: Stealth, Shock and Awe, and Rapid Assault
Appearance: https://1d4chan.org/images/thumb/f/fd/R ... marine.png

Unlike every other Space Marine legion that emphasizes the glory of their colour and heraldry, the Shadow Guard prefers to blend into their environment, rendering themselves unseen as their precise weaponry purifies their filthy foes from the shadows. In ice worlds, they will paint their armor white. In jungles, green, and so on. The only time they use heraldry is when they are in the parade grounds, wherein they will keep their armor painted stark white.
Origins and History: The Shadow Guard have always been the stealthiest and most practical of the 20 legions. While others seek for glory and renown, the Shadow Guard considered these to be vain things compared to simply serving the Imperium in practical and effective ways.
Legion Organisation and Structure:
Legion Command Hierarchy:
Specialist Formations:

Legion Wargear:
Legion Vehicles:
Legion Fleet:
Legion Relics:
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Postby Endem » Mon Jun 29, 2020 3:01 am

Prusslandia wrote:
Endem wrote:TL;DR I'm making the Death Guard of this RP

The Primarch
Name: Nikolai
Alias: N/A
Appearance: his face is perpetually shrouded by a gas mask he is unable to take off, as it has burned into his skin, the only thing that can be discerned is that his eyes are deep green, as for his hair, he has gone bald, possibly due to his experience on Osowiec, his mask makes sentences uttered by him drawn out.
Personality: He is incredibly loyal to whoever he serves, often overperforming on tasks given by his overlord, he has a very strong sense of kinship with his sons, as well as any other people he serves alongside it, if such a person is killed, Nikolai will undoubtedly seek vengeance on the killer
Backstory:
Nikolai, as his brothers and sisters, he was wisked away from the Emperor by the malevolent Chaos Gods, and hurled across the void towards a planet, a beautiful and lush Garden World, it's beauty would astound, it's opulence could rival even the most revered Pleasure Worlds in the Imperium, artists produced beatiful works of art, musicians produced music which could mesmerize even those on the brink of deafness, truly, you would be able to describe the beauty of Osowiec all day long and there would yet be still more.

And it is here that Nikolai would land, adopted by the nobility, he would live a life of pleasure and he could have mastered whatever fine art he would have wanted, he was intelligent, he was skilled, he was handsome, it was as if Osowiec channelled it's enchating beauty into him, he would eventually become the leader of his noble house, and under him it prospered, wine and honey flowed freely.

Yet, all things beautiful come to an abrupt stop, in the span of but a decade, the world would experience a shift unheard of, suddenly, the political machinations of noble houses could not be housed within the confines of the high chambers, dwelling in whispers and shadows as decadence festered among the population, the tumor that has grown over the centerries could not longer be ignored, Osowiec was going to war.

The world geared, and the world fought, it was destructive, it was grim, the green valleys became dotted with craters, the sky went from blue to a sickly green, in but a decade, the world transformed itself into a Death World, where perpetual war raged and sky was polluted to the point of being unbearable, and Nikolal, in the middle of all it, a general, was not spared, a gas attack nearly crippled him as his own gasmask burned into his skin, but he survived with the help of a mystical object and a family relic, the Caduceus, which kept him alive.

It was in this state of the world that the Imperium found it, and found Nikolai, he was given his legion, and he was given that world, he asked for but one thing, for the state of eternal war on it be preserved, as it would help weed out the week for the Legion, and be a perfect training ground for the Acolytes.
War Gear:[/b]
CaduceusIt is said that it can heal from any injury, it is said it can bring a man back to life, under one condition, it must be wielded by the one which it heals, some of it's abilities are exaggerated as per any legend, but it is what keeps Nikolai alive, and he carries it, buried in his armor, everywhere

Reaper's StaffA large scythe, it is said that it's tip contains every poison known to man, it is unknown wherever it is true, but it stings with every hit, a being that was touched by it's blade struggles to survive through the next hour, and it is almost unknown in Osowiec's folklore or the recorded history anybody survived three hours after being hit by it

The Legion

Numeration: Legio XVII - Alternatively called "The Immortal Scourge" sometimes abbreviated just to "The Scourge"
Primogenitor: Nikolai
Noteworthy Domains: Osowiec - Homeworld of the Legion, also a Death World who's atmosphere is now mostly sulphur, requiring gas masks to live on it, and the most precious resource being unpolluted air, most of the recruits come from here
Combat Doctrine: Chemical and Biological Warfare
Appearance: Most of their armor is colored in deep dark sickly green, their shouldpads however, sport pure black coloration, with the legion insignia ( a white circle with a hazmat sign on it ) on the right one
Origins and History:
Legio XVII was originally intended as stalwart defenders of the Imperium's realms, and on many times they proved to be as such, defending fervently of Imperium's holdings, but this was to change, as they were reunited with their lost Primarch, he incorporated what he knew of warfare, the Legion became more balanced, being able to hold their own in both attack and defense, on Osowiec, chemical and biological warfare was used, and so did the Legion started using it, on Osowiec little care was given over civillians, and so the Legion also stopped caring about it, some may consider the changes to be for the worse, but one thing can be given, they have become much more efficient and deadly.
Legion Organisation and Structure: the Legion has a loose hierarchy due to Nikolai viewing all his sons as equals, on the battlefield however, it is usually those with most leadership skills that take charge, making them unofficial lieutenant's, whoever it may be, it is also expected that the marines will follow the one weilding the power of the burning gas, all of the marines are also required to follow Nikolai's every order
Legion Command Hierarchy: as detailed in the previous section, a command hierarchy isn't in place but forms naturally
Specialist Formations:

Biesy a group of marines that wield the burning chemicals that are used in warfare by this legion, they are given the modified flamers which shoot these chemicals, they are trained to know wherever they can deploy a devastating chemical assault, they are tasked to leave nothing in their path, but misery, death, and sickly fumes.
Legion Wargear: nothing special really, the only thing is the modified Flamers that are able to spew chemical weapons
Legion Vehicles: nothing out of the ordinary
Legion Fleet: The Immortal Scourge's fleet is led by a mighty Gloriana "Tchaikovsky", accompanied by three battle barges five battleships, ten cruisers and fifteen escorts
Legion Relics:nah

Hey, I took the time to make my own spin on the bio/chemical warfare concept, and it’s discouraging to see someone just take the speciality of my Primarch/legion anyway. I don’t want to discourage you in turn, a death-guard inspired endurance force could be super interesting. However it feels kind’ve shitty to me that you’ve just taken the exact speciality of the Sixteenth.

Sorry didn't knew, *sigh*, I'll remake my app
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Postby Prusslandia » Mon Jun 29, 2020 3:18 am

Endem wrote:
Prusslandia wrote:Hey, I took the time to make my own spin on the bio/chemical warfare concept, and it’s discouraging to see someone just take the speciality of my Primarch/legion anyway. I don’t want to discourage you in turn, a death-guard inspired endurance force could be super interesting. However it feels kind’ve shitty to me that you’ve just taken the exact speciality of the Sixteenth.

Sorry didn't knew, *sigh*, I'll remake my app

That came out rudely, I apologize. The only particular thing I have issue with is the specialization, everything else is cool! Endurance specialists that fight in hellholes sounds interesting if you would want to go that route
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Postby Endem » Mon Jun 29, 2020 8:28 am

Prusslandia wrote:
Endem wrote:Sorry didn't knew, *sigh*, I'll remake my app

That came out rudely, I apologize. The only particular thing I have issue with is the specialization, everything else is cool! Endurance specialists that fight in hellholes sounds interesting if you would want to go that route

I really just wanted to spout phosphex and other assorted chemical weapons at my enemies :D ( that reminds me, I need to mention the bane wolf In the app )
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Postby Prusslandia » Mon Jun 29, 2020 2:55 pm

Endem wrote:
Prusslandia wrote:That came out rudely, I apologize. The only particular thing I have issue with is the specialization, everything else is cool! Endurance specialists that fight in hellholes sounds interesting if you would want to go that route

I really just wanted to spout phosphex and other assorted chemical weapons at my enemies :D ( that reminds me, I need to mention the bane wolf In the app )

You could do a flame and Phosphex weapon focus, perhaps.
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Postby Endem » Mon Jun 29, 2020 4:07 pm

Prusslandia wrote:
Endem wrote:I really just wanted to spout phosphex and other assorted chemical weapons at my enemies :D ( that reminds me, I need to mention the bane wolf In the app )

You could do a flame and Phosphex weapon focus, perhaps.

I mean, phosphex and other assorted chemical weapons ( as well as some biological warfare )
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Postby Lunas Legion » Mon Jun 29, 2020 4:23 pm

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Prusslandia wrote:You could do a flame and Phosphex weapon focus, perhaps.

I mean, phosphex and other assorted chemical weapons ( as well as some biological warfare )


There's also rad-weaponry, a destroyer-focused legion would differentiate them enough I feel.
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Postby Endem » Mon Jun 29, 2020 4:52 pm

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Endem wrote:I mean, phosphex and other assorted chemical weapons ( as well as some biological warfare )


There's also rad-weaponry, a destroyer-focused legion would differentiate them enough I feel.

What do you mean by "destroyer"
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Postby Lunas Legion » Mon Jun 29, 2020 4:58 pm

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There's also rad-weaponry, a destroyer-focused legion would differentiate them enough I feel.

What do you mean by "destroyer"


Destroyer squads, a.k.a the Heresy-era units issued phosphex and rad weaponry.
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Postby Endem » Mon Jun 29, 2020 5:06 pm

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Endem wrote:What do you mean by "destroyer"


Destroyer squads, a.k.a the Heresy-era units issued phosphex and rad weaponry.

Okay, so, basically my specialist formation, so, I already have them in a way
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I might just settle to app an imperial army regiment. Anybody who wants to make a primarch for the 2nd legion can go ahead :)

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Name: Segail Fitheach
Alias: The Ghost, Unseen One
Appearance: Alabaster white skin with shoulder length raven-black hair and of slimmer build and shorter stature compared to the other Primarchs. Eyes entirely black like shards of shadow.
Personality: Reserved and quiet, preferring to observe than engage in conversation and only exchanging precious few words when he has no choice but to talk. Comes off as cold and distant.
Backstory: Like his siblings, Segail was snatched by the Ruinous Powers from the Emperor whilst still an infant and flung across the galaxy. He was ultimately discovered on Cailleach, a small world shrouded in mist and rain that had been overrun by Orkz. Prior to the greenskins, Cailleach had attained a level of development equivalent to that of early 20th Century Terra but this mattered little in the face of the savage horde that descended upon the world.

Much of Cailleach's population had been killed or enslaved by the xenos, though a number of survivors went to ground to form a resistance movement. It was some resistance fighters who came across the infant Primarch in the sewers below one of Cailleach's ruined and xenos ravaged cities. The resistance fighters took pity upon the strange and curious child they'd found and took him in to raise as one of their own, though they were soon surprised by Segail's rapid growth. Within the span of only a few years, the young Segail had surprised everyone with his unnatural growth and was soon taking part in resistance attacks against the Orkz.

Segail's crowning achievement came when he managed to sneak into an Ork encampment and killed a Warboss without being seen, the resultant confusion amongst the greenskins when the resistance then attacked the encampment allowed the humans liberate territory from the savage xenos. Segail would continue to undermine the Orks, moving as a ghost and negating their strength in numbers by taking out their leadership and causing havoc in their encampments. At the same time Segail took what he learnt from the resistance and with the aid of knowledge planted in his mind trained up a cadre of specialist stealthers, then used them to great effect against the xenos.

By the time the tendrils of the Great Crusade reached Cailleach, humanity had reclaimed two-thirds of their world from the greenskins thanks to the efforts of Segail and his warrior cadre. The first to make contact with Segail were Astartes from the 13th Legion, the Lightbringers, who recognised him for what he was and had word sent to the Emperor. Short time later the Master of Mankind arrived and met, alone, with Segail before leaving the following day. Though the two spoke at length for a great many hours, it remains unknown what was exchanged between them.

With the Emperor's departure, Segail returned to the task of defeating the xenos menace that still plagued Cailleach. Though the greenskins had been greatly weakened, they still remained a potent threat. What more, a new Warboss had emerged to take charge of the Ork warbands and would soon challenge humanity once more for control of the world. Having made the 13th Legion agree to make an all-out attack on the Orks, Segail personally led his cadre to infiltrate the compound that the new Warboss had claimed as his own; an old missile silo.

The silo had been intended for the defence of Cailleach, but the compound had been overrun early on during the greenskin invasion and thus it's atomic weapons remained dormant. Segail's plan was two-fold, take out the Warboss and then detonate the ancient warheads to destroy a large chunk of the xenos forces. Though he was also aware that the compound contained hundreds of human slaves, who would most likely die. It was something that Segail grimly accepted, the price that needed to be paid to save thousands if not millions from the Orkish scourge. The resultant blossom of atomic fire signalled the Orks' defeat, though the remnants would scatter and still pose an admittedly reduced threat to the people of Cailleach.

The deed done, Segail left Cailleach and ventured out into the void to join the Legion that he was the progenitor for.

War Gear:

The Sable Armour: Fashioned for the master of the Spectral Stalkers by the Emperor's own artificers, this suit of highly sophisticated Power Armour not only offered the Primarch defence against outside attack, it also masked its sensor signature and could be used to disrupt enemy sensors and transmissions in his immediate vicinity.

Raven's Claws: Artificer-crafted Lightning Talons able to shred the heaviest armour with ease.

Shroud Bombs

Two Archeotech Pistols

The Legion
Numeration: VI Legion, Shadow Ravens
Primogenitor: Segail Fitheach
Noteworthy Domains: Cailleach (homeworld)
Combat Doctrine: Stealth and infiltration
Appearance: Black power armour with dark grey pauldrons.
Origins and History:

Like the other Legions, the VIth was raised on Terra itself and fought during the Unification Wars as the Emperor sought to re-unify the cradle of Mankind. Just like the other Legions the VIth was created with a specific role in mind; the role of the Emperor's hidden hand, vengeful sentinels against recidivists and harrowers of those who would sooner flee than bend knee before their new master.

Drawing on the demeanour of the techno-savages from which it recruited, the proto-Legion quickly demonstrated its skill at reconnaissance and target identification, and it ability to transition from inscrutable watchfulness to rapid attack in the blink of an eye. Its Legionaries waged war by infiltrating into position, studying their enemy and, when the time was right, striking from the least anticipated quarter and slaying the foe outright in a bloody, yet brief assault.

The Legion would spend most of the Unification Wars waging a hidden war, striking from the shadows and it's hand remaining hidden even after the battle was done. Even when the Great Crusade got underway, the VIth remained one of the smaller Legions and preferred it's 'shadow war' style of fighting. During the early campaigns of the Crusade it regularly fought alongside the XIth, letting the much larger Legion engage the enemy before the VIth's own warrior struck from the shadows.

For a long time the VIth Legion was dubbed the 'Ghost Legion' due to it's style of warfare, striking as it did from the shadows like 'ghosts'. This moniker almost stuck if it wasn't for the tragic circumstances surrounding the unification of the Legion with it's Primarch.

When news of Segail's discovery, much of the Legion assembled into a fleet to go meet their gene-father after almost two centuries. The exact circumstances of what happened next isn't fully clear, but it is generally believe that the fleet got caught in a sudden warp storm that destroyed most of the vessels. The survivors, only a few hundred strong, were in a sorry state when they finally met their Primarch. Segail, for his part, blames himself for the few thousand Legionnaires would still live if it they hadn't journeyed to meet him.

Severely weakened by the disaster, the VIth had to recruit heavily from Cailleach in order to rebuild it's strength. So far it has only been able to build it's number up to the seven thousand figure. Segail has overseen much of the training of the recruits, building upon the skill-set the Cailleach resistance fighters had used against the Orks. Due to it's small numbers, the Legion has played on it's mastery of stealth and shadow warfare to off-set it's limited numbers and has frequently deployed small units to various warzones to build up it's combat experience.

Legion Organisation and Structure: The VIth Legion is split into seven battalions of a thousand Legionnaires strong, these battalions are further split into ten companies with each containing a hundred or so Legionnaires. Though when deployed, the VIth tends to operate in platoon or squad sized formations.
Legion Command Hierarchy: Segail maintains a fairly loose chain of command, but grudgingly acknowledges the usefulness of defined organisation. Each battalion is led by a Shadow Master with Shade Captains heading up each company.
Specialist Formations:

Maighstirean sgàil: The Maighstirean sgàil, more informally known as 'Shadow Masters', is an elite unit of reconnaissance troops or scouts. These elite Legionaries were rumored to have inherited a modicum of the unique trait of their genetic father that allowed them to "Shadow-Walk", enabling them to deny their presence to anything with a mind, making them effectively invisible. They were exclusively formed from Cailleach-born Astartes who inherited more of their Primarch's genome than their Terran-born brethren, thus enabling them to use the same 'Shadow-Walk' ability of their gene-father. Segail formed these Astartes into a specialist unit and, using his formidable knowledge of stealth and sabotage to the fullest extent, trained these specially selected Legionaries to be called upon to perform highly dangerous reconnaissance and guerilla missions deep behind enemy lines.

Legion Wargear: Legion Commanders make heavy use of Lighting Claws and sniper rifles are frequently carried by most squads.
Legion Vehicles: Thunderhawk and Darkwing Storm Eagle gunships.
Legion Fleet: Operates a handful of strike cruisers and escorts.
Legion Relics: N/A


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Commander Name: Général d'Armée Jean Francois Baptiste

Commander Age: 66

Unit Name: Légion Étrangère

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Organization: The Légion Étrangère consists of several armies consisting of 50 million men in total, taken in large part from the fighting age male population of Ophelia VII, though they do recruit from other places. They usually accompany the XIII legion on campaign.

Général d'Armee- In charge of the entire Légion Étrangère
Général de Brigade- In charge of an Armee under the Légion Étrangère
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Lieutenant-Colonel
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Sous-Lieutenant
Aspirant

Campaigns Unit has participated in:
Castigation of Terentius
Pacification of Schravaan
Compliance of the Araaki Spiral
Compliance of Molech
Xenocide of the Osiran Psybrids
Assault on Dulan
Compliance of Thorium Abominiplex
The Fall of the Lords of Gardinaal
The Krypt Persecution
Pacification of the Cheraut System
Compliance of Melchior
The Ullanor Crusade

Doctrine: Blitzkreig, same as the Astartes Legion that hails from their homeworld. They specialize in massed, rapid assault with a combination of air, armor, and artillery strikes to break through enemy lines and then massed infantry charges to clean up the remains of enemy forces.

Notable Character Backstory: Général d'Armée Jean Francois Baptiste is a success story, both within the Légion Étrangère and the Imperium itself. He started off as a peasant on Ophelia VII, the son of two farmers, and joined the Légion Étrangère as soon as he was 16 years old. He spent his life in campaign after campaign, winning every commendation for bravery and tactical brilliance that there was in both the Imperial Auxilia and within the Légion Étrangère itself, until at 46 he was promoted to the Général d'Armée. He has spent the last 20 years leading the army on campaigns with wildly successful results.

Unit Relics:
Standard of the Lady: A standard belonging to the 1st Armee of the Légion Étrangère, bearing the stylized sun of Ophelia VII and the thirteen Fleur de Lis of the XIII legion, surrounding a stylized version of the Maid of Ophelia VII, otherwise known as Angeline Alpharia.
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Commander Name: Grand Marshal Sellyus Avaricci "Lord of the Seven Winds"
Commander Age: 75
Unit Name: Salutaris Militiae
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Organization: The Salutaris Militiae is recruited from Laeron and its surrounding worlds, and numbers around 15 million. The regiment hosts 4 main elements: Infantry forces, artillery forces, mechanised forces and air forces (although when needed a 5th, naval force can be established). These forces are structured separately and have their own command structures for line officers, but work closely with each other and higher level officers command all 4 simultaneously.

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Grand Marshal (Commander of the Salutaris Militiae as a whole)
Marshal (Commander of Salutaris Militiae forces in specific sectors or warzones)
Lord General (Commander of groups of regiments, usually focusing on single worlds)
General (Commander of a single regiment)

- Although not specifically noted here each of the above ranks have networks of supporting staff members and juniour officers to aid them organised into "Officer courts". Each officer is required to have a representative from all 4 branches of the Salutaris Militiae. Ranks below this are considered "line officers" and often looked down upon. Whereas the above and their supporting staff are often well-educated nobles the below are usually promored from regular troops. The above ranks also integrate all 4 branches of the Salutaris Militiae into being led by one commander. Below this line each branch uses their own officers and are commanded seperately but ranks are the same from branch to branch -

Captain (Commander of a platoon)
Lieutenant Captain (The Captain's second in command)
Sergeant (Leader of individual combat squads)
Juniour Sergeant (The Sergeant's second in command)

Campaigns Unit has participated in: The Rangdan Xenocides, The Pacification of Molech, Compliance of Cerberus, Pacification of the Cheraut System, Compliance of Melchior.

Doctrine: Mechanised defense

Notable Character Backstory: Sellyus Avaricci is the 3rd son of the Duke Avaricci of Hespanis. One of the original human resistance commanders upon Laeron before the arrival of Sendrilon Duke Avaricci led a desperate struggle in Laeron's mountains and hills but made little progress. Upon the arrival of Sendrilon and the success of his rebellion, he was rewarded for his struggles and granted the sprawling palatial estate of Hespanis and governance of the 10 million-strong city of Lavenza, a title which has passed down through generations. Tutored from a young age on High Gothic, Laeronese, Ancient Bath'Alen, History, Art, Critical Thinking, Horse Riding, and Philosophy young Sellyus, not in line to inherit much was a natural fit for the prestigious Nunziatella Military Academy. Military prowess was evidently in his blood as he scored a rare 80/80 in his final exam and graduated at the top of his class. Sellyus was hand-picked by the legendary Grand Marshal Seana Lisor to serve as a junior officer in his court. Sellyus learned and grew under the tutelage of the best the Salutaris Militiae had to offer, and after around 10 years had achieved the rank of General and took command of his own regiment: the 131st Combattents "Vir Fortis". Sellyus saw little combat but his impeccible conduct and his men's high standards of discipline led to successive promotions. Sellyur's outstanding leadership during the Compliance of Melchior and the passing of Seana led to Sellyur being elevated to Grand Marshal and overall commander of the Salutaris Militiae.
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Postby Lunas Legion » Thu Jul 09, 2020 3:48 pm

Erin Islands wrote:Working on an application, had some lore drawn up by a contact for his Fan Fiction. Is the Second available?


Yup, only legion still available.

Edit: Although the IXth might become available later, ask Imps.
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Postby Erin Islands » Thu Jul 09, 2020 4:07 pm

Lunas Legion wrote:
Erin Islands wrote:Working on an application, had some lore drawn up by a contact for his Fan Fiction. Is the Second available?


Yup, only legion still available.

Edit: Although the IXth might become available later, ask Imps.

Alrighty then.

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Postby Ormata » Fri Jul 10, 2020 1:27 am

Erin Islands wrote:Working on an application, had some lore drawn up by a contact for his Fan Fiction. Is the Second available?


What does that mean, "had some lore drawn up by a contact for his Fan Fiction"?

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