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Zarkenis Ultima
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Postby Zarkenis Ultima » Mon May 25, 2020 2:27 pm

Try using this code friend, it should fix up the formatting errors in your post.

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[b][u]Name:[/u][/b] Werakoya Eyeketrau
[b][u]Age:[/u][/b] 27
[b][u]Gender:[/u][/b] Female
[b][u]Race:[/u][/b] Goliath
[b][u]Appearance:[/u][/b][floatright]([url=https://gamepedia.cursecdn.com/themandate_gamepedia/thumb/2/2c/Blackeagle.png/187px-Blackeagle.png]Image[/url])[/floatright]
[b][u]Mage?:[/u][/b] No
[b][u]Bio:[/u][/b] Werakoya was cast out from her family at a very early age. She grew up with the life of an orphan in a human settlement in Dascus and was hired by the local Street Crawlers. You see, she was desperate for a means to keep her large stomach full, and they were desperate for someone with enough strength to break the tough locks and brute force through the tougher situations. Everyone involved quickly learned, however, that Werakoya was not cut out for the life of a thief. No matter how many tricks of the trade they taught her, she was always too clumsy and too... well, big to keep hiding in the shadows. The only reason why she stayed on so long was because the more experienced rogues sacrificed their freedom to get the guards off her tail and keep their strong-woman active. Thus she led to the capture and dissolution of the entire guild, finally banished from the city in which she grew up.

She travelled though Dascus, taking up small jobs: a farmhand, a miner, a traveling performer. Things that required strength and easily-learnable talent. None of the jobs lasted more than a year, and few of them lasted more than a season. All the while, she honed her craft as the sole free survivor of her thieves' guild. The sole survivor. The new chapter of Street Crawlers that settled in Dascus isn't worthy to wear the same name. Her glimpse of good fortune came when a royal Dascian official noticed her skill at crafting small, handheld traps. She wasn't a natural, but she knew exactly where to find problems with the traps. The Dascians needed a representative who could find the relevant booby traps inside the ancient temple. She was offered a position on the spot, and she hesitatingly accepted. Whether this would be just another seasonal gig was a matter to be determined.
[b][u]Fighting Style:[/u][/b] Rogue
[b][u]Abilities:[/u][/b]
[box][list][*][b][[url=http://gilligansisland.org/Home_Sweet_Hut]Loose Twig[/url]]:[/b] She can point out any error in any set of machinations as a way to confound the trap. She has to notice the trap first, and even then it will take her some time. If the contraption is anything short of flawless, however, she will find it out.
[*][b][Not So Secret Anymore]:[/b] She can find a secret entrance and, if possible to reach by foot, remove all barriers to entry. The obstacle would be removed by means of strength and by no other way; if impossible to move via strength, it cannot be moved.
[*][b][Silence and Noise]:[/b] She can adjust the volume of her voice and actions to be as quiet or as loud as she sees fit. This does not affect her visual profile, just her auditory profile.
[*][b][Whittle]:[/b] She can take a small pieces of metal and wood and fashion a mechanism, about the size of a human hand, of poor quality. The mechanism must have been seen before and must be able to be replicated without the work of machines or like tools.[/list][/box]
[b][u]Limitations:[/u][/b]
[box][list][*] Clumsiness: Werakoya has a big and bulky frame, and she spent her entire life trying to fit into crammed and inescapable situations. It's not for lack of trying or experience that she gets stuck all the time; she's just naturally clumsy.
[*] Chains of the Past: The loss of her biological, orphan, and professional families have given her a mild depression. Her happy and optimistic personality is a facade. As a result, she makes acquaintances with everyone but doesn't quite get to the level of friendship with anyone.
[*] Not Quite Right: Even though she can find flaws in the work of others, she can't replicate the work of others perfectly. She can't set up functional traps larger than a human hand, even if she's seen them before.
[*] Timidity: Her strong will had been beaten into submission by her guild, to the point where her future employers had to reteach her self-confidence. Regardless of will, she is a natural follower and can be convinced to do just about anything (within reason).[/list][/box]
[box][b][u]Equipment:[/u][/b]
[list][*][b]Crowbar[/b]
[*][b]Wire Cutters[/b]
[*][b]Palette Knife[/b]
[*][b]Ball Bearings[/b][/list][/box]

[size=150]Optional Questionnaire[/size]
[b][u]Favorite Factions:[/u][/b] Bank of Ashar, Wanderers
[b][u]Least Favorite Factions:[/u][/b] Street Crawlers, Haruza's Horde, Honor Guild
[b][u]Favorite Memory:[/u][/b] Playing marbles with fellow orphans
[b][u]Greatest Fear:[/u][/b] Getting her compatriots killed, dying alone
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Postby Tomia » Mon May 25, 2020 3:24 pm

IC is up!

viewtopic.php?f=31&t=485998

If you have questions/need advise on how to start feel free to ask!

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Postby Tomia » Mon May 25, 2020 3:33 pm

Zjaum wrote:Name: Werakoya Eyeketrau
Age: 27
Gender: Female
Race: Goliath
Appearance:
Mage?: No
Bio:
Fighting Style (Warrior, Mage, Archer, etc): Rogue
Abilities: Werakoya was cast out from her family at a very early age. She grew up with the life of an orphan in a human settlement in Dascus and was hired by the local Street Crawlers. You see, she was desperate for a means to keep her large stomach full, and they were desperate for someone with enough strength to break the tough locks and brute force through the tougher situations. Everyone involved quickly learned, however, that Werakoya was not cut out for the life of a thief. No matter how many tricks of the trade they taught her, she was always too clumsy and too... well, big to keep hiding in the shadows. The only reason why she stayed on so long was because the more experienced rogues sacrificed their freedom to get the guards off her tail and keep their strong-woman active. Thus she led to the capture and dissolution of the entire guild, finally banished from the city in which she grew up.

She travelled though Dascus, taking up small jobs: a farmhand, a miner, a traveling performer. Things that required strength and easily-learnable talent. None of the jobs lasted more than a year, and few of them lasted more than a season. All the while, she honed her craft as the sole free survivor of her thieves' guild. The sole survivor. The new chapter of Street Crawlers that settled in Dascus isn't worthy to wear the same name. Her glimpse of good fortune came when a royal Dascian official noticed her skill at crafting small, handheld traps. She wasn't a natural, but she knew exactly where to find problems with the traps. The Dascians needed a representative who could find the relevant booby traps inside the ancient temple. She was offered a position on the spot, and she hesitatingly accepted. Whether this would be just another seasonal gig was a matter to be determined.
  • Loose Twig: She can point out any error in any set of machinations as a way to confound the trap. She has to notice the trap first, and even then it will take her some time. If the contraption is anything short of flawless, however, she will find it out.
  • Not So Secret Anymore: She can find a secret entrance and, if possible to reach by foot, remove all barriers to entry. The obstacle would be removed by means of strength and by no other way; if impossible to move via strength, it cannot be moved.
  • Silence and Noise: She can adjust the volume of her voice and actions to be as quiet or as loud as she sees fit. This does not affect her visual profile, just her auditory profile.
  • Whittle: She can take a small pieces of metal and wood and fashion a mechanism, about the size of a human hand, of poor quality. The mechanism must have been seen before and must be able to be replicated without the work of machines or like tools.

Limitations:
  • Clumsiness: Werakoya has a big and bulky frame, and she spent her entire life trying to fit into crammed and inescapable situations. It's not for lack of trying or experience that she gets stuck all the time; she's just naturally clumsy.
    [box]
    • Chains of the Past: The loss of her biological, orphan, and professional families have given her a mild depression. Her happy and optimistic personality is a facade. As a result, she makes acquaintances with everyone but doesn't quite get to the level of friendship with anyone.
      [box]
      • Not Quite Right: Even though she can find flaws in the work of others, she can't replicate the work of others perfectly. She can't set up functional traps larger than a human hand, even if she's seen them before.
        [box]
        • Timidity: Her strong will had been beaten into submission by her guild, to the point where her future employers had to reteach her self-confidence. Regardless of will, she is a natural follower and can be convinced to do just about anything (within reason).

Equipment:
  • Crowbar
  • Wire Cutters
  • Palette Knife
  • Ball Bearings


Optional Questionnaire
Favorite Factions: Bank of Ashar, Wanderers
Least Favorite Factions: Street Crawlers, Haruza's Horde, Honor Guild
Favorite Memory: Playing marbles with fellow orphans
Greatest Fear: Getting her compatriots killed, dying alone

What do you mean exactly by mechanism? It's not completely clear. Other than that the app looks great! Accepted pending we settle the mechanism thing

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Postby Ceystile » Mon May 25, 2020 4:01 pm

My other WIP

Name: Thérèse "Essie" Valsier, known as Essie Stormcrow
Age: 18
Gender: Female
Race: Human
Appearance (pics if possible): Image
Mage?: Yes
Bio: Thérèse Mirabelle Valsier was born in Dascus to Emira Valsier and Jaune Valsier, growing up with her parents among a cabal of wizards that lived and studied together in a mountain town some miles from the capital, known as Wizard's Peak to the locals due to the high concentration of mages that lived there. Emira at the time was one of the King's Mages, splitting her time between her home at the Peak and in the castle when called upon or needed, thus Essie got acquainted with court life and was close childhood friends with the king's son, Prince Adrain (the current king Adrain V), even apprenticing under the main court sorcerer when she was there. Her energies were aimed toward becoming court sorcerer one day, while her mother hoped that one day she'd lead the cabal. Perhaps she could eventually do both, who really knew? In any case, only time would really tell...and tell it did. A year and a half ago, the former king passed away, putting the then sixteen year old Adrain upon the throne as the new king and like any new monarch, one of the first tasks he set about doing was the important job of choosing his councilors. He wrote Essie a letter asking if she would be his new court sorcerer and advisor in waiting, a task she accepted more out of a desire to protect her friend (and eventual lover, but that's known to a small handful of people) rather than any desire for power or political position. The new king was a kind-hearted young man, if somewhat naive and inexperienced and so the royal sorcerer (whom she would study under and take advise from until a point where he could retire) as well as some loyal councilmen of his father were kept on in order to help guide their new leader through the slippery curves of statecraft.
Working with the new king to help strengthen his government, Essie did all in her power...except due to her own youth and inexperience, that power was great but not quite great enough in the long run, and she knew it. She knew that it would take years of building up her own strength before she became useful to anyone, and although they were surrounded by helpful and sage advise from their elders..it didn't seem quite enough. She didn't want any predatory upstarts thinking that they could either take advantage of her or the king due to that inexperience, and so during her research as well as just word she heard around during her travels through the kingdom, she heard about the temple and a powerful artifact that had recently been discovered. It was probably a shot in the dark, but maybe that artifact could be what this kingdom needed. What the people needed...and what the both of them needed. The king of course didn't want her to go, wanted to send someone who had been in more battles, someone who maybe had a bit more experience with this sort of thing but Essie insisted. That in her opinion, this would be an opportunity to increase her strength so she could better help protect the kingdom. And if there was a threat out there, she wasn't going to let it reach them while there was time to stop it before it became a problem. With the royal sorcerer's backing, the young king accepted...with the stipulation that she take at least a few more experienced soldiers with her and to "come back alive, that's an order.". Taking some time to gather her things, she headed out with the reluctant blessing of her worried mother, who wished to come with her but was stopped by her daughter's pleas to stay behind and help protect the king until she got back.

Fighting Style (Warrior, Mage, Archer, etc): Mage
Abilities:
  • [Thunderbolt and Lightning]: Essie's specialty/primary offensive spells have to do with lightning and wind, she's mastered these spells better than any other ones she has under her belt, which is where the nickname Essie Stormcrow comes from (not a spell, just a description)
  • Lightning Strike: Exactly what it says on the tin. She can summon a bolt of lightning and use it to attack enemies
  • Frosty Storm: A blast of cold wind that freezes enemies temporarily, or at least slows their movements
  • Ice Spikes: Spikes of ice burst from the ground around an enemy, causing cold and piercing damage
  • Wind God's Wrath: A spell allowing her to control wind into a small twister that can confuse, slow and even lift enemies.
  • Static Shock: Sends lightning through the ground that shocks nearby enemies
  • Shield: The basic "do not die" spell that mages carry with them if they don't want to die
  • Mass Shield: Like shield, except now she can shield more than one person
  • Heal: Not like a cleric or a professional healer's spell, but can patch up moderate wounds until we get to the medic.


Limitations (Reasons why your char can’t singlehandedly conquer a kingdom):
  • (Student Wizard): She's young, and still an apprentice. She can wield her spells well enough, but a more experienced mage or a powerful enough enemy could cut right through her. She's still got a lot of learning to do, and requires all concentration to cast a spell. If it's broken, the spell fizzles out. Big spells take a lot out of her and can leave her exhausted for quite a while
  • (Made of Clay): As a rule of thumb, most mages tend to be glass cannons and Essie is definitely no exception. Squishy af, can drop a fudgin' fireball on an enemy but get punched hard enough and it's a one-hit KO more often than not.
  • (Teen Spirit): She may be the age of majority, but she's still a kid. She tries to be mature because she has to be, but that childish spirit can and will come out during inconvenient moments.

Equipment:
  • [Staff of Horns]: An ebony staff topped with two long horns curving around a red gem in the center, this is her magical focus/whacking stick
  • [Magic Book]: Grimoire containing all her spells, as well as room for new spells and entries on important magical artifacts/events
  • Robe and Wizard Hat: The standard wizard's uniform
  • Rations: Some water, some food, first-aid supplies, bedroll, change of clothes...simple stuff.


Optional Questionnaire
Personal Quest: To gain enough power to protect her kingdom and its people (and mainly the king)
Favorite Factions: Magi Consortium
Least Favorite Factions: The Enchanter Order (compares them to dogs forced on a leash)
Favorite Memory: Her first kiss with Adrain (don't tell anybody tho)
Goals: To protect Dascus and Adrain, to gain enough power to do so, and to make a name for herself as well as hopefully healing some of this distrust of mages.
Greatest Fear: Losing the people she loves, mainly her mother and Adrain.
Religion:Magicka
Last edited by Ceystile on Mon May 25, 2020 9:16 pm, edited 3 times in total.

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Postby Zjaum » Mon May 25, 2020 5:12 pm

"Mechanism": with regards to a hand-sized mechanism, I imagine a mousetrap, a small puzzle, or a similar device. With regards to a larger-sized mechanism, I imagine a clockwork, a siege engine, and a similar mechanism. Does that clarify?

Thanks to Zarkenis Ultima for the improved code. However, seeing as it is acceptable as is, thus being functional, I'd rather not do anything to jeopardize its legitimacy with regards to the OP.
I use my NationStates stats, because a population of billions/trillions and an economy of hundreds of trillions is totally viable, trust me.
But seriously, aside from the population and GDP, just assume that my NS stats are roughly accurate.

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Against: Stupid people, resistance to industrial progress, alt-right, any form of government at or beyond socialism.

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Takaka Tar' Turayi,
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Postby Tomia » Mon May 25, 2020 5:25 pm

Zjaum wrote:"Mechanism": with regards to a hand-sized mechanism, I imagine a mousetrap, a small puzzle, or a similar device. With regards to a larger-sized mechanism, I imagine a clockwork, a siege engine, and a similar mechanism. Does that clarify?

Thanks to Zarkenis Ultima for the improved code. However, seeing as it is acceptable as is, thus being functional, I'd rather not do anything to jeopardize its legitimacy with regards to the OP.

Yes that makes sense, accepted

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Zarkenis Ultima
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Democratic Socialists

Postby Zarkenis Ultima » Mon May 25, 2020 5:47 pm

Zjaum wrote:"Mechanism": with regards to a hand-sized mechanism, I imagine a mousetrap, a small puzzle, or a similar device. With regards to a larger-sized mechanism, I imagine a clockwork, a siege engine, and a similar mechanism. Does that clarify?

Thanks to Zarkenis Ultima for the improved code. However, seeing as it is acceptable as is, thus being functional, I'd rather not do anything to jeopardize its legitimacy with regards to the OP.


It doesn't jeopardize anything though. It does not alter the content at all, just makes the app look tidier.
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Postby Zjaum » Mon May 25, 2020 5:53 pm

Zarkenis Ultima wrote:
Zjaum wrote:"Mechanism": with regards to a hand-sized mechanism, I imagine a mousetrap, a small puzzle, or a similar device. With regards to a larger-sized mechanism, I imagine a clockwork, a siege engine, and a similar mechanism. Does that clarify?

Thanks to Zarkenis Ultima for the improved code. However, seeing as it is acceptable as is, thus being functional, I'd rather not do anything to jeopardize its legitimacy with regards to the OP.


It doesn't jeopardize anything though. It does not alter the content at all, just makes the app look tidier.

All right, then. I'll make your editions a new post!
I use my NationStates stats, because a population of billions/trillions and an economy of hundreds of trillions is totally viable, trust me.
But seriously, aside from the population and GDP, just assume that my NS stats are roughly accurate.

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Against: Stupid people, resistance to industrial progress, alt-right, any form of government at or beyond socialism.

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Werakoya Eyeketrau (Improved, credit to Zarkenis Ultima

Postby Zjaum » Mon May 25, 2020 5:54 pm

Name: Werakoya Eyeketrau
Age: 27
Gender: Female
Race: Goliath
Appearance:
Image

Mage?: No
Bio: Werakoya was cast out from her family at a very early age. She grew up with the life of an orphan in a human settlement in Dascus and was hired by the local Street Crawlers. You see, she was desperate for a means to keep her large stomach full, and they were desperate for someone with enough strength to break the tough locks and brute force through the tougher situations. Everyone involved quickly learned, however, that Werakoya was not cut out for the life of a thief. No matter how many tricks of the trade they taught her, she was always too clumsy and too... well, big to keep hiding in the shadows. The only reason why she stayed on so long was because the more experienced rogues sacrificed their freedom to get the guards off her tail and keep their strong-woman active. Thus she led to the capture and dissolution of the entire guild, finally banished from the city in which she grew up.

She travelled though Dascus, taking up small jobs: a farmhand, a miner, a traveling performer. Things that required strength and easily-learnable talent. None of the jobs lasted more than a year, and few of them lasted more than a season. All the while, she honed her craft as the sole free survivor of her thieves' guild. The sole survivor. The new chapter of Street Crawlers that settled in Dascus isn't worthy to wear the same name. Her glimpse of good fortune came when a royal Dascian official noticed her skill at crafting small, handheld traps. She wasn't a natural, but she knew exactly where to find problems with the traps. The Dascians needed a representative who could find the relevant booby traps inside the ancient temple. She was offered a position on the spot, and she hesitatingly accepted. Whether this would be just another seasonal gig was a matter to be determined.
Fighting Style: Rogue
Abilities:
  • [Loose Twig]: She can point out any error in any set of machinations as a way to confound the trap. She has to notice the trap first, and even then it will take her some time. If the contraption is anything short of flawless, however, she will find it out.
  • [Not So Secret Anymore]: She can find a secret entrance and, if possible to reach by foot, remove all barriers to entry. The obstacle would be removed by means of strength and by no other way; if impossible to move via strength, it cannot be moved.
  • [Silence and Noise]: She can adjust the volume of her voice and actions to be as quiet or as loud as she sees fit. This does not affect her visual profile, just her auditory profile.
  • [Whittle]: She can take a small pieces of metal and wood and fashion a mechanism, about the size of a human hand, of poor quality. The mechanism must have been seen before and must be able to be replicated without the work of machines or like tools.

Limitations:
  • Clumsiness: Werakoya has a big and bulky frame, and she spent her entire life trying to fit into crammed and inescapable situations. It's not for lack of trying or experience that she gets stuck all the time; she's just naturally clumsy.
  • Chains of the Past: The loss of her biological, orphan, and professional families have given her a mild depression. Her happy and optimistic personality is a facade. As a result, she makes acquaintances with everyone but doesn't quite get to the level of friendship with anyone.
  • Not Quite Right: Even though she can find flaws in the work of others, she can't replicate the work of others perfectly. She can't set up functional traps larger than a human hand, even if she's seen them before.
  • Timidity: Her strong will had been beaten into submission by her guild, to the point where her future employers had to reteach her self-confidence. Regardless of will, she is a natural follower and can be convinced to do just about anything (within reason).

Equipment:
  • Crowbar
  • Wire Cutters
  • Palette Knife
  • Ball Bearings


Optional Questionnaire
Favorite Factions: Bank of Ashar, Wanderers
Least Favorite Factions: Street Crawlers, Haruza's Horde, Honor Guild
Favorite Memory: Playing marbles with fellow orphans
Greatest Fear: Getting her compatriots killed, dying alone
Last edited by Zjaum on Thu May 28, 2020 4:06 pm, edited 3 times in total.
I use my NationStates stats, because a population of billions/trillions and an economy of hundreds of trillions is totally viable, trust me.
But seriously, aside from the population and GDP, just assume that my NS stats are roughly accurate.

Support: Paleo-imperialism, conservatism, libertarianism, Christianity.
Against: Stupid people, resistance to industrial progress, alt-right, any form of government at or beyond socialism.

I hail from The League of Conservative Nations. Hearts unthawed, hearts unshaken!

Takaka Tar' Turayi,
The stars will be ours someday.

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Postby Zarkenis Ultima » Mon May 25, 2020 5:59 pm

Zjaum wrote:
Zarkenis Ultima wrote:
It doesn't jeopardize anything though. It does not alter the content at all, just makes the app look tidier.

All right, then. I'll make your editions a new post!


Thanks :P I'll add your character to the third post later today.
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Postby Zjaum » Mon May 25, 2020 6:13 pm

Zarkenis Ultima wrote:
Zjaum wrote:All right, then. I'll make your editions a new post!


Thanks :P I'll add your character to the third post later today.

Thanks!
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But seriously, aside from the population and GDP, just assume that my NS stats are roughly accurate.

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Postby Zarkenis Ultima » Mon May 25, 2020 6:15 pm

Zjaum wrote:
Zarkenis Ultima wrote:
Thanks :P I'll add your character to the third post later today.

Thanks!


You're quite welcome :)

One last thing, any idea how tall Werakoya would be? I'm keeping a record of this stuff. If you'd like some references, the other goliaths in the RP (both also females) are 6'8 (Yasema) and 6'10 (Ylva).
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Postby Zjaum » Mon May 25, 2020 6:40 pm

Zarkenis Ultima wrote:
Zjaum wrote:Thanks!


You're quite welcome :)

One last thing, any idea how tall Werakoya would be? I'm keeping a record of this stuff. If you'd like some references, the other goliaths in the RP (both also females) are 6'8 (Yasema) and 6'10 (Ylva).

I noticed that the other two were female as well. Well, since we have a 27-28-29 age trio, let's have a 6'6-6'8-6'10 age trio to match!

They'll be in ascending order by name, by age, and by height!

So, that's six and a half feet, precisely.
Last edited by Zjaum on Mon May 25, 2020 6:41 pm, edited 2 times in total.
I use my NationStates stats, because a population of billions/trillions and an economy of hundreds of trillions is totally viable, trust me.
But seriously, aside from the population and GDP, just assume that my NS stats are roughly accurate.

Support: Paleo-imperialism, conservatism, libertarianism, Christianity.
Against: Stupid people, resistance to industrial progress, alt-right, any form of government at or beyond socialism.

I hail from The League of Conservative Nations. Hearts unthawed, hearts unshaken!

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Postby Zjaum » Mon May 25, 2020 6:43 pm

Also, the Discord invitation is temporary, so I've been denied access to the Discord.
I use my NationStates stats, because a population of billions/trillions and an economy of hundreds of trillions is totally viable, trust me.
But seriously, aside from the population and GDP, just assume that my NS stats are roughly accurate.

Support: Paleo-imperialism, conservatism, libertarianism, Christianity.
Against: Stupid people, resistance to industrial progress, alt-right, any form of government at or beyond socialism.

I hail from The League of Conservative Nations. Hearts unthawed, hearts unshaken!

Takaka Tar' Turayi,
The stars will be ours someday.

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Postby Zarkenis Ultima » Mon May 25, 2020 6:52 pm

Noted, thanks. And here is a permanent invite; I'll tell Tomia to add it to the OP.
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Ceystile
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Postby Ceystile » Mon May 25, 2020 8:50 pm

Alright OP, she's good and finished.

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Tomia
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Postby Tomia » Mon May 25, 2020 8:57 pm

Ceystile wrote:Thérèse "Essie" Valsier, known as Essie Stormcrow

So the bio looks solid, only note is Adrian is the IV not the V. As for the powers, the spells are a bit too numerous I'd say. My suggestion would be give her one main element, and then a secondary element she is competent if not an expert in. And you can keep the shield and healing stuff as auxiliary spells.

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Ceystile
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Inoffensive Centrist Democracy

Postby Ceystile » Mon May 25, 2020 9:01 pm

Tomia wrote:
Ceystile wrote:Thérèse "Essie" Valsier, known as Essie Stormcrow

So the bio looks solid, only note is Adrian is the IV not the V. As for the powers, the spells are a bit too numerous I'd say. My suggestion would be give her one main element, and then a secondary element she is competent if not an expert in. And you can keep the shield and healing stuff as auxiliary spells.

Ok, no problem...I'll fix it up.

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Ceystile
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Postby Ceystile » Mon May 25, 2020 9:04 pm

Alright, I got rid of some of them so I left her with storm spells: lightning and wind spells since she's proficient in those. I can knock off one or two more if you want me to tho.

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Tomia
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Postby Tomia » Mon May 25, 2020 9:11 pm

Ceystile wrote:Alright, I got rid of some of them so I left her with storm spells: lightning and wind spells since she's proficient in those. I can knock off one or two more if you want me to tho.

Elements look good, last thing I realized is Zark made it canon that detect magic is more of a Tashar thing than one learned in Dascus. So if you get rid of that one then you're accepted

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Ceystile
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Postby Ceystile » Mon May 25, 2020 9:17 pm

Ok, knocked it off. I got some schoolwork to do and then I'll post.

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Tomia
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Postby Tomia » Mon May 25, 2020 9:19 pm

Ceystile wrote:Ok, knocked it off. I got some schoolwork to do and then I'll post.

Awesome, accepted! Looking forward to the post :)

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Awesomeland012345
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Postby Awesomeland012345 » Tue May 26, 2020 9:42 am

Galnius wrote:Any specific requests for look?

oops, heheh. I missed this post. Sorry.

Sorry in advance if this (STILL) isn't good enough.

Could you find someone that has bottles, potions (whatever) stuffed in his pockets (many pockets - it makes it easy to grab lots of potions and throw them). If you can find it, he can have a few daggers on him. He also has a small backpack to carry his things in. He's not very big and strong (doesn't wear lots of armor or swing a big sword), so he doesn't have lots of giant muscles. He looks average in all aspects, except for his pockets.

Edit (b/c the above wasn't good enough): He got burned by the dragon that attacked him, so he has a huge scar all over him. He is white, kind of skinny, has brown hair, has blue eyes.

Is that good enough?
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Zarkenis Ultima
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Postby Zarkenis Ultima » Tue May 26, 2020 9:45 am

Awesomeland012345 wrote:
Galnius wrote:Any specific requests for look?

oops, heheh. I missed this post. Sorry.

Could you find someone that has bottles, potions (whatever) stuffed in his pockets (many pockets - it makes it easy to grab lots of potions and throw them). If you can find it, he can have a few daggers on him. He also has a small backpack to carry his things in. He's not very big and strong (doesn't wear lots of armor or swing a big sword), so he doesn't have lots of giant muscles. He looks average in all aspects, except for his pockets.

Is that good enough?


You'll generally want to look for pictures based on physical appearance rather than clothes - the latter can always be described and changed on the go, after all.

What does your character look like? You said he's white and skinny, so that's a start; you also said scarred for life so I take it that means burned skin? What's his hair look like? What's his eye color?
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Postby Awesomeland012345 » Tue May 26, 2020 9:52 am

Zarkenis Ultima wrote:You'll generally want to look for pictures based on physical appearance rather than clothes - the latter can always be described and changed on the go, after all.

What does your character look like? You said he's white and skinny, so that's a start; you also said scarred for life so I take it that means burned skin? What's his hair look like? What's his eye color?


oh, ok. I'll edit it.

Edit: Now is it good enough?
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