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ENSALAS: FAMILIES OF FORTUNE [ OOC / SIGNUPS ]

Postby Greater Hudian Republic » Tue Mar 17, 2020 12:27 pm

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IT IS THE YEAR 1432.

We bring ourselves to a far away planet - one that is, I must confess, quite similar to Earth, and yet, is not quite the same. I'm just as much of an alien to it as you are, and as such, I can educate you little about the world. But I do know one place in that planet, one which I can tell you a lot about...

Welcome to the city of Ensalas.

One of the youngest cities of the world during the time of writing - 1432, if I recall correctly - Ensalas is a burgeoning city-state located on the Deuvine Coast, at the very easternmost edge of the Fioran Empire's borders. Its dominion is focused on the city itself, but it is distanced from the Empire by a few kilometers of plains and countryside - a perfect spot for villas, farms, or hideouts.

It had come into existence only a few centuries ago, around the twelfth century, following the aftermath of the Empire's holy wars against the barbaric Eastern Kingdoms. The Empire had won much loot. Spices, gold and many more unimaginable treasures had to be brought back to the homeland, and they all had gone through a nameless coastal village which we now know as Ensalas. People began settling there, in hopes of making their fortune as trade moved between the Empire and other kingdoms through the city. In recognition of this, the city was granted its own government, a tribute to the many merchants who had helped build the city from the ground up. The merchants were allowed to select a prince of their own choosing, and they chose from among them Girolamo Riari, one of the first merchants to have brought back goods from the east.

Girolamo had helped accelerate the city's prosperity even further. Enjoying the support of his comrades, he employed trade policies which had further attracted people of all walks and wallets of life to settle in the city, be they from the Empire or from the East. Merchants, mercenaries, missionaries - everyone had something they wanted to do in Ensalas. The generations after him did their very best to continue to advocate for this brilliance, winning the city's autonomy from the Empire. Ensalas had grown to become a regional power, frightening even the nearby, expansive noble duchies, and concerning the Emperor himself over the city and its princes' rebellious attitudes.

But then came the fifteenth century. The beginning of the century had brought with it the worst news - the emergence of The Demise - a plague that had wiped out more than half of the 120,000 citizens of the city. The Demise had starved the city of its trade and had severely weakened it. Worst of all - it had wiped out the main Riari line, causing it to fall to the secondary line, at the hands of a young Matteo Riari, a boy who had never been groomed to lead. Matteo had begun leading Ensalas on a shaky journey to restoration only last year.

A weak, sickly boy, he resigned lacked both the authority and the courage to carry out proper decisions. A distant Emperor watched in anticipation as he watched the Prince loosen his grip over his city. The Emperor had a strong desire to restore proper imperial rule over this strategic, prosperous city again, instead of simply allowing Ensalas to enjoy so much autonomy. But it is not only the Empire that seems to cause much concern - the poor administration of the Prince and his court has caused a lot more trouble as well.

The sea and land routes around the city had not been guarded well since The Demise, and as a result, bandits and pirates troubled traders aplenty. The fears of a renewed plague had not abated - instead, it seems more and more likely. Many merchants from the East who had now settled in the city have started preaching their heretic faith, creating significant tensions. It is also clear that there is now a growing disparity between the lowborn merchants (who grow richer) and the nobility (who grow more impoverished due to a weakening Prince). And to top it all off - with the end of the Prince's first year, he is now preparing to choose his Princely Council - a group of fifteen merchants - amid increasing rumors of his sickness worsening. There is no doubt the Prince will rely on his Council - he is almost too eager to simply resign his duties to them.

The city of Ensalas is plagued with uncertainty now. But what will you do? As a family or a guild - a collective of people, the very basis on which this city runs - what will you do? Who will you fight for? How will you do it? The possibilities are endless. Will you be a true and loyal servant to your Prince, or will you try and seize power for yourself? Will you be an icon of piety, a true savior in this time of distress, or will you take advantage of this chaos to make a profit? We shall see.
WHAT DO YOU NEED TO KNOW?
In terms of government, Ensalas is led by a Prince (currently Matteo Riari), who is advised by a Princely Council, consisting of 15 merchants appointed by the Prince, should they stand for election. The Princely Council, in effect, often takes over a lot of the Prince's duties, which is more true now than ever with a Prince who simply does not wish to burden himself with stewardship. The Princely Council is a lifetime role, but the Prince has the option of removing someone from the Council should he choose so.

Outside the city, the Emperor is holding his cards close to his chest. Although Ensalas is under its control, the city-state enjoys a high amount of authority, and does not pay tribute to the Emperor - and as a result, it is obvious that the Emperor desires to regain control of the city. His relatives, in this regard, are also hoping for the same. Lorenz Fiora, a cousin of the Emperor and a nobleman in the city, is being touted as a successor to the Prince. The rising popularity of the Eastern faith has also brought forward the possibility of Imperial agents to help disperse it. The pirates and bandits have been more fearsome in their actions, attacking caravans without rest, causing a significant security problem - who knows, perhaps they may band together to wreak havoc on the city! The Eastern kingdoms, of course, are silent, but the advocacy of their religion may encourage them to foment a rebellion within the walls...

There are two types of faiths people believe in currently: Giannism and the Eastern Creed.

The Giannites make up a majority of religious people in Ensalas. They follow the cult of Gianni Moretti, a merchant-turned-preacher whose friendship with Girolamo Riari, piety and prosperity had attracted many followers. Gianni is regarded as the patron saint of the city, having lived and died through its founding and its rise. Giannites believe in a life focused on trade and charity, considering anything corrupting trade as a sin - such as bribery - as well as anything drawing one away from it - such as adultery. They believe in using trade as a force for charity, although very few truly do carry out charity so religiously. Giannites base themselves in Sanctuaries, with the biggest sanctuary being Gianni's Rest. Each sanctuary consists of a Head and many Disciples. Religious guilds - a collective people advocating for the faith - are uncommon but possible to make.

The Eastern Creed consist of a minority - generally converts from Giannism and people who had originally come from the East. The Creed is an agreement that one cannot worship any human, and one should not strive to worship anything but the world's elements itself, such as the sea and the resources which grant people a living. The Creed believes in a life against idolatry and for moderation. They consider excess a sin - to show wealth, for example - and strongly despise worship of any man. They believe that while trade is acceptable, and so is wealth, hoarding such is not permissible, as it is an affront to the resources sacrificed to make such things. Worship in the Creed is generally solitary, although some religious societies are formed to support one another, especially in fears of persecution by the Empire.

Trade in Ensalas is high. It is a highly developed city, with trade flowing in and out from the Empire to the Eastern kingdoms - exotic goods from the East are often brought back, along with goods of the Empire being sent to the East. High trade encourages many to establish business here, and as such you will find that there is a need for banks to lend money to eager traders. At the same time, basic industries are also present - metalwork, woodwork, cloth-work, food production, etc. - which permit the city to run on its own, although it does make use of imports from the Empire. There is a presence of crime in the city - mercenaries, smugglers, thieves, thugs - Ensalas is also home to an elaborate underworld that gets work done as well. Have a business idea that your family could prosper with? Apply it!

Disparity between the social classes in Ensalas is awfully high - you have the educated noblemen, who lack finance but make up for it with their blood and connections in the city-state military and government. The merchants have become a wealthy elite, held back only by the fact that they are not as highly born, and there is a huge clash between the noblemen and merchants of the city. The poor are despised by both, and are essentially employees who live either in The Maw or Outer Ensalas - they are the weakest and poorest, and often tend to fall prey to the underworld. Some in this social class, especially those high up in the underworld, are actually quite well off. Socially speaking, although the noblemen and merchants do interact in social events, each socioeconomic class in Ensalas is firmly against one another.

Think of this as renaissance Italy otherwise.

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LEGEND

1. The Princely Palace: This is where the Prince, his family and his advisors live. It is also where the Princely Council convenes, and is the center of defense and political matters in the city. It is a heavily guarded citadel and very luxurious. Access is restricted to all save for the Prince, advisors, family, diplomats and members of the Princely Council.
2. The Gold Quarter: This is where the nobility of the city live, as well as its significant government officials. Extensions of the government are spread out here - barracks, guardhouses, armories, jails - this is also heavily guarded, and quite an affluent area to be in.
3. The Silver Quarter: This is where the affluent merchants of the city live. You will also find banks and shops in this area. It has an average presence of guards, and it is severely lacking in some areas. Several merchants tend to take... precautions of their own. Quite luxurious, and some may believe it to be more so than the Gold Quarter.
4. The Assembly Ground: A big, sprawling ground that is generally a sprawling marketplace for most of the week. It is also home to Gianni's Rest - the city's biggest sanctuary to the patron saint. People generally convene here every Sunday, at the end of the week, to listen to announcements or matters of the state. They also tend to visit the sanctuary once every week before they begin their jobs - the most common day is Monday.
5. The Docks: A place bursting with activity as ships enter and exit the city. Not heavily guarded, but full of tax inspectors both legitimate and illegitimate. Not particularly affluent, but full of traders and fishermen.
6. The Maw: The largest district of all, home to countless homes and minor shops. Poorly guarded, not affluent at all. The Inner Maw is unguarded, full of crime and quite frightening, if I do say so myself - it is where the underworld begins in the city.
7. Outer Ensalas: A shanty town with a few taverns for worn out travelers here and there - unguarded, save for the entry points of the city, and the poorest district of all, as well as the most barren.

REGISTRAR OF FAMILIES
  • The Riaris (TBD)
  • The Fioras (TBD)

SIGNUPS
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[size=120][b]FAMILY / GUILD FORM[/B][/size]
[size=85]For convenience purposes, we will call family / guild a "collective" in this form[/size]
[I]BASIC DATA[/I]
[b]COLLECTIVE'S NAME:[/B]
[B]COLLECTIVE'S CREST (IF ANY):[/B]
[B]COLLECTIVE'S DESCRIPTION:[/B]
[B]COLLECTIVE'S HISTORICAL BACKGROUND:[/B]
[I]MATERIAL DATA[/I]
[B]COLLECTIVE'S ASSETS:[/B]
[B]COLLECTIVE'S MAIN BUSINESSES / MONEYMAKING VENTURES:[/B]
[B]COLLECTIVE'S LOCATION:[/B]
[I]PERSON DATA (RECREATE FOR EACH PERSON)[/I]
[B]COLLECTIVE MEMBER NAMES, DESCRIPTIONS, APPEARANCE (1):[/B]
[B]COLLECTIVE MEMBER NAMES, DESCRIPTIONS, APPEARANCE (2):[/B]
[B]COLLECTIVE MEMBER NAMES, DESCRIPTIONS, APPEARANCE (3):[/B]
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Postby Voxija » Tue Mar 17, 2020 1:54 pm

It would be cool to participate, but I have some questions (not in a bad way).

1. The Demise is the black plague, correct?

2. The Eastern Creed is supposed to be a mix of Islam and Judaism, correct?

3. Can I introduce a new kingdom/name an Eastern kingdom in my app? For a backstory, you know?
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Postby Greater Hudian Republic » Tue Mar 17, 2020 11:07 pm

Voxija wrote:It would be cool to participate, but I have some questions (not in a bad way).

1. The Demise is the black plague, correct?

2. The Eastern Creed is supposed to be a mix of Islam and Judaism, correct?

3. Can I introduce a new kingdom/name an Eastern kingdom in my app? For a backstory, you know?

1. Yeah, essentially The Demise is the Black Plague. Because this isn't Earth I just thought I'd swing a few names around :P But yeah, a bubonic plague.

2. Eh, not really. But I think I'll be editing religions soon, because now that I see it I don't like it much. Feel free to suggest edits for religion.

3. Yeah, take all the creative liberties you want lol, I know I haven't detailed it much so you can write what you please for backstory.
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Postby Voxija » Wed Mar 18, 2020 6:55 am

Greater Hudian Republic wrote:
Voxija wrote:It would be cool to participate, but I have some questions (not in a bad way).

1. The Demise is the black plague, correct?

2. The Eastern Creed is supposed to be a mix of Islam and Judaism, correct?

3. Can I introduce a new kingdom/name an Eastern kingdom in my app? For a backstory, you know?

1. Yeah, essentially The Demise is the Black Plague. Because this isn't Earth I just thought I'd swing a few names around :P But yeah, a bubonic plague.

2. Eh, not really. But I think I'll be editing religions soon, because now that I see it I don't like it much. Feel free to suggest edits for religion.

3. Yeah, take all the creative liberties you want lol, I know I haven't detailed it much so you can write what you please for backstory.


I have even more questions. I'm also going to wait until you edit the religions before I submit my app.

1. Are there real-life animal species on this world?

2. Can women or LGBT people rise to prominence in this world? Your description only implies religious distrust and xenophobia, so gender might not matter in Ensalas. However, Renaissance Italy was pretty sexist and such.
The Republic of Voxija (pronounced: Voshiya)
I'm a woman. Some weird Jew. Trying to learn French and failing. An American who wishes the US would switch to the metric system. Part of a giant conspiracy. Secret pyromaniac? I will never make an OOC factbook!

my politics are confused and muddled
Most of my grammar errors are on purpose. Sppeling errors, tho...
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Generic MT liberal democracy Meh. | I think that by now I've created more lore for my nation than most real-world nations have.
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Postby Greater Hudian Republic » Wed Mar 18, 2020 1:36 pm

Voxija wrote:
Greater Hudian Republic wrote:1. Yeah, essentially The Demise is the Black Plague. Because this isn't Earth I just thought I'd swing a few names around :P But yeah, a bubonic plague.

2. Eh, not really. But I think I'll be editing religions soon, because now that I see it I don't like it much. Feel free to suggest edits for religion.

3. Yeah, take all the creative liberties you want lol, I know I haven't detailed it much so you can write what you please for backstory.


I have even more questions. I'm also going to wait until you edit the religions before I submit my app.

1. Are there real-life animal species on this world?

2. Can women or LGBT people rise to prominence in this world? Your description only implies religious distrust and xenophobia, so gender might not matter in Ensalas. However, Renaissance Italy was pretty sexist and such.


Give me a day for the religion bit. I love questions~

1. Yeah, for sure.

2. LGBT people are likely a very noble-keep-it-in-the-closet-courtly-pleasure-thing - not openly sanctioned. Women... not as easy as a man, I'd say, but their chances are maybe a bit better than, say, Renaissance Italy. Matriarchs who have respect, for example, will likely have a better shot than say a young girl who'd just come of age.
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Postby Voxija » Fri Mar 20, 2020 2:20 pm

I have even more questions, somehow.

1. Are there guns in this universe? It would work, since the Renaissance also had guns.

2. Shouldn't you have rules against metagaming and godmodding?

3. If no one else joins this RP, can I be more than one collective?


4. Can I just post random worldbuilding stuff in this thread? Or would it be infringing on your right as OP/the wrong thread?
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Most of my grammar errors are on purpose. Sppeling errors, tho...
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Postby Greater Hudian Republic » Sat Mar 21, 2020 6:15 am

Voxija wrote:I have even more questions, somehow.

1. Are there guns in this universe? It would work, since the Renaissance also had guns.

2. Shouldn't you have rules against metagaming and godmodding?

3. If no one else joins this RP, can I be more than one collective?


4. Can I just post random worldbuilding stuff in this thread? Or would it be infringing on your right as OP/the wrong thread?

1. It's only 1432, so guns would be rare, but slowly coming into emergence.

2. I always thought that was a given in RP :P But I will add the rules in IC.

3. Honestly, why not.

4. Of course. I'm very chill, I welcome all additions.
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Postby Voxija » Sat Mar 21, 2020 10:45 am

Worldbuilding things I added: Zeniism is a sect of the Eastern Creed, and a person who belongs to that sect is called a "Zenii". People who follow the Eastern Creed are called "Eastern Creed-ers". The money of Ensalas is a "florin". 300,000 florins is rich. People from Ensalas are "Ensaladians". Izlia is a poor minor Eastern Kingdom.

FAMILY / GUILD FORM
For convenience purposes, we will call family / guild a "collective" in this form
BASIC DATA
COLLECTIVE'S NAME: the Zeledis
COLLECTIVE'S CREST (IF ANY): a black pelican on a background of a yellow crest. This crest has been the Zeledis' since before they came to Ensalas, since in the old country, everyone had crests.
COLLECTIVE'S DESCRIPTION: The Zeledis are a medium-power but very wealthy merchant family. The Zeledis still practice a strange sect of the Eastern Creed, a religion called Zeniism. Zeniism emphasizes charity and helping the world, and believes that the best use for money is to help people. However, the Zeledis pretend that they have converted to Giannism, to get ahead. The Zeledi family consists of Salman Zeledi, Eliza Zeledi, Giorgio Zeledi, and three daughters, who only matter for marriage contracts (Eliza's words). The Zeledis are also researching guns, to perfect the weapon and see how they can use it to gain power. They haven't interfered with politics yet, but now with the chaos, an enterprising Zeledi has the perfect opportunity.
COLLECTIVE'S HISTORICAL BACKGROUND: Fifty years ago, the Zeledis came to Ensalas from the poor Eastern Kingdom of Izlia. The Zeledis came to Ensalas mostly to make their fortune, although the fact that Izlia persecuted followers of Zeniism didn't help. The Zeledis prospered for a while, founding a bank to lend money to traders and taking pounds of flesh from them. The Zeledis believed devoutly in the Eastern Creed, but they felt that to gain more power, they should pretend to convert to Giannism. That worked, and more people did business with them. But then the Demise struck. The Demise killed Salman's parents and his older brother, leaving Salman to rebuild the business on his own. He did very well, making Zeledi Bank one of the largest banks in Ensalas. Salman married Eliza Ladevi, a fellow Eastern Creed-er and fake Giannite and they had four children. The Zeledis bought a blacksmith's shop six years ago in order to research guns.
MATERIAL DATA
COLLECTIVE'S ASSETS: a large bank, 300,000 florins (rich!), a lot of gold, and a blacksmith shop bought six years ago. Also a few guns, although none of them shoot straight.
COLLECTIVE'S MAIN BUSINESSES / MONEYMAKING VENTURES: a bank (Zeledi Bank) in the Silver Quarter and a blacksmith's shop on the Docks.
COLLECTIVE'S LOCATION: the Silver Quarter
PERSON DATA (RECREATE FOR EACH PERSON)
COLLECTIVE MEMBER NAMES, DESCRIPTIONS, APPEARANCE (1): Salman Zeledi is the oldest member and patriarch of the Zeledi clan. Salman is fifty-three years old, although he looks older. He is of average height, has a thick white beard, and a tendency towards all-black clothes. Sometimes Salman slips in his cover and acts like a Zenii, but his neighbors have accepted such things as "very rich person eccentricities" like they have. Salman is wise, a shrewd businessman, calm, and caring, and he encourages his family members in any schemes they plan.
COLLECTIVE MEMBER NAMES, DESCRIPTIONS, APPEARANCE (2): Eliza Zeledi is the matriarch. She is in her late forties, but she looks younger. She is very tall with graying hair and a taste for simple clothes. Eliza is known for giving out florins and food in the Maw and Outer Ensalas. Eliza carries a club or sometimes a gun when she does so, and frankly, the poors are more intimidated by Eliza than the weapons. Eliza is condescending towards most people, but warm and loving towards her family. Although she can be described as a "strong woman", Eliza still only thinks her daughters are good for marriage alliances. Eliza doesn't meddle in politics directly, but encourages her family in doing so.
COLLECTIVE MEMBER NAMES, DESCRIPTIONS, APPEARANCE (3): Giorgio Zeledi is the the oldest child in the Zeledi family. He is twenty-eight years old, and he looks just like your average Ensaladian except Giorgio has a bigger nose and he inherited his mother's height. Giorgio is interested in becoming a member of the Prince's Council and being a power behind the throne. Giorgio's goals are to get more power, get more money, convince the people of Ensalas to regard Eastern Creed-ers more warmly, and to help the poor. Giorgio is ambitious but benevolent, if that makes any sense. Giorgio was expected to marry a couple of years ago, but he hasn't yet...
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The Republic of Voxija (pronounced: Voshiya)
I'm a woman. Some weird Jew. Trying to learn French and failing. An American who wishes the US would switch to the metric system. Part of a giant conspiracy. Secret pyromaniac? I will never make an OOC factbook!

my politics are confused and muddled
Most of my grammar errors are on purpose. Sppeling errors, tho...
I'd rather be fishing. | Author of Issues 1324 and 1346.
Generic MT liberal democracy Meh. | I think that by now I've created more lore for my nation than most real-world nations have.
Disclaimer: the views of my characters do not necessarily represent the views of the author.


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