The World Capitalist Confederation wrote:Greater Arab State wrote:
On the whole it is a strong app but there are some thing that have been noticed:
1: You might want to add some of the foreign policy weaknesses that Corby had in order to reflect the role to a greater extent.
2: You might want to change the picture to reflect the age.
3: Overall, the tone of the app could perhaps benefit from some greater objectivity, particularly in the sections on the referendum and leadership contest.
The thing about the referendum is actually true to IRL, as even Angela Eagle was praising Corbyn during the referendum and then tried to run against him in 2016.
I meant with regard to how the app itself was written. For example part of the referendum section includes “But sadly, remain did not win.” I am concerned that this could be inferred as having a slant within the app itself which could then impact on the RP as a whole. For example, you could make it more objective by writing “However, the remain campaign was unsuccessful in the referendum.” or something along those lines.




