Star Wars: The Station - Character RP - OPEN (OOC/Sign-ups)

[Crimetopolis]

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[Ormata]

5.5 feet tall
Name: Ruger Kalgon
Age: 19
Species: Human
Appearance: White, clean shaven. Flat top blonde crewcut Blue eyed. Wears desert boot. and desert BDUS. Orange shatter proof lens visor googles. These visor lens goggles help him to range find, aim, and see well under all conditions. \desert boonie hat. 99 lbs. 5.5 ft tall.
Gender: Male
Profession: Gunsmith and dealer for Gun Runners LLC.
Equipment/Weapons: Medikit with hand held medical scanner. Rifle: Sturmakov-55 assault carbine. This is a 5.8mm select fire rifle. Reportedly it's slugs can rip through force fields. 80 round quad stack magazines. Iron sights with a picatinny rails. Slung across his back. Pistol: Cyclone Heavy blaster. This looks like a Walther P-38 with coils around the barrel. 40 round capacity.
Pets/Droids/Companions: (If they are armed please specify:
Pet: Peanut a Rotthuahua dog. 5lbs very friendly. Wears harness. Can talk like a human baby.
Droids:
MICRO-VET K99. This is a droid veterinarian that can do even intricate surgery on all manner of animals. Ruger tells to heal an animal, and it heals them. MOst pet owners like having him around. Looks a micro R2D2 with foldable arms. Can talk, but usually work-oriented.
PANZERBOT 35K. Humanoid robot with a heavy blaster rifle with 120 round magazine. Right shoulder flamethrower. Left shoulder 4 barrel missile. Talks but is task-oriented. Attacks if those he recognizes as friends as threatened
Companiao. His wife, Diana Storm-breaker . Jedi with a green light saber. Dog and cat lover like Ruger They were married at a branch store on Tattoine.
How you got to Orondia: [i](Do you own a starship or are you travelling as a passenger?) Passenger
Reason for travel to Orondia:The Gun Runners will be setting up branch stores here. THey didn't have for all their staff, so they paid passage for their employees on their other ship.
Bio: [i](Optional: 1-3 Paragraphs - for ideas think about your homeworld, upbringing and what you would have been doing during the ongoing Clone Wars)
RP Example: (Just post a link or if you don't have anything come up with an excerpt from your backstory or trip to Orondia)

Fuck it. I expect for the massive as all hell quote from the opening post to be edited out. I expect the out of place IC portion to be deleted and as such will not even touch it because frankly my eyes hurt.

Obligatory statement that I am in no way an OP nor do I have any authority but that I do have eyes and a brain and for this that's good enough.

• He's wearing BDUs in a universe that completely lacks BDUs. He has a boonie hat in a universe wherer they do not exist. He is clinically underweight at 99 lbs and as such I'd be concerned for his health.
• The appearance section is lackluster.
• The 'assault carbine' is in a caliber that doesn't exist, is a slugthrower that can fire through force fields, and has 80 rounds. It uses a rail system that does not exist. It is overpowered. The heavy blaster also doesn't exist.
• What is a Rotthuahua dog, why is it tiny, and why can it talk like a human baby.
• The Vet droid doc model also doesn't exist.
• The 'PANZERBOT' is a heavy grade military robot that would likely be illegal if it were to exist. It also doesn't exist. Where is the name 'PANZERBOT' coming from anyways. Germany doesn't exist.
• His wife has both an out of universe name (Storm-breaker? Really?), is a Jedi (They don't marry), and was married in a branch store which is possibly the most hick thing I can think of.
• Orondia is literally the random Styx. Why a company would want to set up a gun shop there, nevermind multiple, makes no sense.
• There is no biography.
• There is no RP example.
• Parenthesis were not deleted.
• The application generally lacks a serious manner, all aspects are stated outright, and there are multiple typos present. Coding is incorrect from 'Name' section to 'Pets/Droids/Companions' section with all bold.

EDIT: Thank you for your cooperation. Merry Christmas.

[Gerdon Laughis]

5.5 feet tall
Name: Ruger Kalgon
Age: 19
Species: Human
Appearance: White, clean shaven. Flat top blonde crewcut Blue eyed. Wears desert boot. and desert BDUS. Orange shatter proof lens visor googles. These visor lens goggles help him to range find, aim, and see well under all conditions. \desert boonie hat. 99 lbs. 5.5 ft tall.
Gender: Male
Profession: Gunsmith and dealer for Gun Runners LLC.
Equipment/Weapons: Medikit with hand held medical scanner. Rifle: Sturmakov-55 assault carbine. This is a 5.8mm select fire rifle. Reportedly it's slugs can rip through force fields. 80 round quad stack magazines. Iron sights with a picatinny rails. Slung across his back. Pistol: Cyclone Heavy blaster. This looks like a Walther P-38 with coils around the barrel. 40 round capacity.
Pets/Droids/Companions: (If they are armed please specify:
Pet: Peanut a Rotthuahua dog. 5lbs very friendly. Wears harness. Can talk like a human baby.
Droids:
MICRO-VET K99. This is a droid veterinarian that can do even intricate surgery on all manner of animals. Ruger tells to heal an animal, and it heals them. MOst pet owners like having him around. Looks a micro R2D2 with foldable arms. Can talk, but usually work-oriented.
PANZERBOT 35K. Humanoid robot with a heavy blaster rifle with 120 round magazine. Right shoulder flamethrower. Left shoulder 4 barrel missile. Talks but is task-oriented. Attacks if those he recognizes as friends as threatened
Companiao. His wife, Diana Storm-breaker . Jedi with a green light saber. Dog and cat lover like Ruger They were married at a branch store on Tattoine.
How you got to Orondia: [i](Do you own a starship or are you travelling as a passenger?) Passenger
Reason for travel to Orondia:The Gun Runners will be setting up branch stores here. THey didn't have for all their staff, so they paid passage for their employees on their other ship.
Bio: [i](Optional: 1-3 Paragraphs - for ideas think about your homeworld, upbringing and what you would have been doing during the ongoing Clone Wars)
RP Example: (Just post a link or if you don't have anything come up with an excerpt from your backstory or trip to Orondia)

Fuck it. I expect for the massive as all hell quote from the opening post to be edited out. I expect the out of place IC portion to be deleted and as such will not even touch it because frankly my eyes hurt.

Obligatory statement that I am in no way an OP nor do I have any authority but that I do have eyes and a brain and for this that's good enough.

• He's wearing BDUs in a universe that completely lacks BDUs. He has a boonie hat in a universe wherer they do not exist. He is clinically underweight at 99 lbs and as such I'd be concerned for his health.
• The appearance section is lackluster.
• The 'assault carbine' is in a caliber that doesn't exist, is a slugthrower that can fire through force fields, and has 80 rounds. It uses a rail system that does not exist. It is overpowered. The heavy blaster also doesn't exist.
• What is a Rotthuahua dog, why is it tiny, and why can it talk like a human baby.
• The Vet droid doc model also doesn't exist.
• The 'PANZERBOT' is a heavy grade military robot that would likely be illegal if it were to exist. It also doesn't exist. Where is the name 'PANZERBOT' coming from anyways. Germany doesn't exist.
• His wife has both an out of universe name (Storm-breaker? Really?), is a Jedi (They don't marry), and was married in a branch store which is possibly the most hick thing I can think of.
• Orondia is literally the random Styx. Why a company would want to set up a gun shop there, nevermind multiple, makes no sense.
• There is no biography.
• There is no RP example.
• Parenthesis were not deleted.
• The application generally lacks a serious manner, all aspects are stated outright, and there are multiple typos present. Coding is incorrect from 'Name' section to 'Pets/Droids/Companions' section with all bold.

EDIT: Thank you for your cooperation. Merry Christmas.

Bruh really tried to make a Fallout character in this Star Wars RP

[Ormata]

Bruh really tried to make a Fallout character in this Star Wars RP

I don't think that was even a Fallout character.

[Gerdon Laughis]

Bruh really tried to make a Fallout character in this Star Wars RP

I don't think that was even a Fallout character.

Ive met people who haven't seen the movies that know more about Star Wars

[Greater Persian State]

Posted my arrival

[Cheye]

Bruh really tried to make a Fallout character in this Star Wars RP

I don't think that was even a Fallout character.

Had a manic Christmas period but thanks for covering Ormata! I think you summed everything up nicely. And as OP I agree with you completely.

Posted my arrival

I'll be posting shortly!

[Greater Persian State]

I don't think that was even a Fallout character.

Had a manic Christmas period but thanks for covering Ormata! I think you summed everything up nicely. And as OP I agree with you completely.

Posted my arrival

I'll be posting shortly!

Great

[Sarrin]

Name: Jokir Vro
Age: 41
Species: Anomid
Appearance: Dressed in standard Hutt finery, dark grey vocaliser, scatterings of scarring on face, Cybernetics above left eye
Gender: Male
Profession: Slave Hunter / Bounty Hunter
Equipment/Weapons: DL-44 Blaster Pistol, Wrist-Mounted Missile Launcher (Knock-Out Gas), Taser, Slave Collars
Pets/Droids/Companions: Cybernetically enhanced Kowakian Monkey Lizard used to scope locations. Right eye of lizard replaced with cybernetic eye that
Jokir can look through and zoom in with
How you got to Orondia: Owns a starship (TBC)
Reason for travel to Orondia: Laying low after an incident with the Republic
Bio:

Born on Coruscant Jokir began his early life at the Jedi temple after he was found to be force sensitive. The Anomid despised the rigid conditioning and often got into fights with fellow students though none of this would peak until his tenth birthday when he was found choking another student with the force in the dorms. Disgusted by the pupil’s behaviour the council universally met to discuss excluding him from the order only to find at the end of their discussions that the young Anomid had disappeared into the depths of Coruscant.

Jokir found work in the lower levels with an organised crime group using his limited knowledge of the force to hunt and kill rival gang members that allowed him to gather enough credits and knowledge to realise his future lay in Hutt space. At 19 years of age he left Coruscant to Tattooine where he began his career in the service of Neera the Hutt pursuing bounties and capturing runaway slaves.

Through this time he made a good reputation for himself often taking in bounties alive with the aid of noxious gasses, many of which came from Teraxi Prime. He also found himself in possession of a Kowakian Monkey Lizard following an expedition to a smugglers camp on Kowak. Named Razius Feizir the lizard has been cybernetically enhanced and trained to scout locations for Jokir to allow him to better plan his attacks.

In recent months Jokir has thrived during the war as contracts with the CSI and Repubic begin to emerge. In a recent job he was tasked with the assassination of an Alderrani Nobleman that led a Republic army brining him alive to a confederate base and costing the Republic the battle. As a result he was black listed from the Republic and a bounty placed on his head. Jokir has thus fled to Orondia to determine his next steps and how to survive the future of the galaxy...



RP Example: (Just post a link or if you don't have anything come up with an excerpt from your backstory or trip to Orondia)

[Cheye]

Name: Jokir Vro
Age: 41
Species: Anomid
Appearance: Dressed in standard Hutt finery, dark grey vocaliser, scatterings of scarring on face, Cybernetics above left eye
Gender: Male
Profession: Slave Hunter / Bounty Hunter
Equipment/Weapons: DL-44 Blaster Pistol, Wrist-Mounted Missile Launcher (Knock-Out Gas), Taser, Slave Collars
Pets/Droids/Companions: Cybernetically enhanced Kowakian Monkey Lizard used to scope locations. Right eye of lizard replaced with cybernetic eye that
Jokir can look through and zoom in with
How you got to Orondia: Owns a starship (TBC)
Reason for travel to Orondia: Laying low after an incident with the Republic
Bio:

Born on Coruscant Jokir began his early life at the Jedi temple after he was found to be force sensitive. The Anomid despised the rigid conditioning and often got into fights with fellow students though none of this would peak until his tenth birthday when he was found choking another student with the force in the dorms. Disgusted by the pupil’s behaviour the council universally met to discuss excluding him from the order only to find at the end of their discussions that the young Anomid had disappeared into the depths of Coruscant.

Jokir found work in the lower levels with an organised crime group using his limited knowledge of the force to hunt and kill rival gang members that allowed him to gather enough credits and knowledge to realise his future lay in Hutt space. At 19 years of age he left Coruscant to Tattooine where he began his career in the service of Neera the Hutt pursuing bounties and capturing runaway slaves.

Through this time he made a good reputation for himself often taking in bounties alive with the aid of noxious gasses, many of which came from Teraxi Prime. He also found himself in possession of a Kowakian Monkey Lizard following an expedition to a smugglers camp on Kowak. Named Razius Feizir the lizard has been cybernetically enhanced and trained to scout locations for Jokir to allow him to better plan his attacks.

In recent months Jokir has thrived during the war as contracts with the CSI and Repubic begin to emerge. In a recent job he was tasked with the assassination of an Alderrani Nobleman that led a Republic army brining him alive to a confederate base and costing the Republic the battle. As a result he was black listed from the Republic and a bounty placed on his head. Jokir has thus fled to Orondia to determine his next steps and how to survive the future of the galaxy...

RP Example: (Just post a link or if you don't have anything come up with an excerpt from your backstory or trip to Orondia)

Accepted

I've done a lot of RP with Sarrin, so I don't personally need to see an RP example here (all the one's he would use are in my sig... )

Glad you are now able to join as know you couldn't when this was first set up!

BUT it would still be good to know what star ship Jokir has come in on and if Jokir will just be renting a landing pad and staying in his ship or if he will be requiring accommodation within the station?

[Cheye]

Hey all! Hope everyone had a good holiday period! I first want to apologise for letting things go quiet over the last few weeks. However...

I have now posted! And I now have an empty schedule again from Monday so will be hoping to re-inject the RP with life as a priority if everyone active is still on board. I'll gradually NPC completely inactive characters if they are left that way, but nobody is at risk of that presently.

PAX NERDVANA & CHARLEMAGNA have Static and Oleg tied up in conversations, so if they could pay for their respective drinks and move them along soon that would be appreciated just for narrative purposes.

ORMATA - Would you like to meet Nat before or after things go down with Oleg?

DERIKA - Let me know when you want to work on the post inside the hangar and I'll send you a description and potential clues you can find via TG for you to have Liehiry discover while he's inside?

[Derika]

Hey all! Hope everyone had a good holiday period! I first want to apologise for letting things go quiet over the last few weeks. However...

I have now posted! And I now have an empty schedule again from Monday so will be hoping to re-inject the RP with life as a priority if everyone active is still on board. I'll gradually NPC completely inactive characters if they are left that way, but nobody is at risk of that presently.

PAX NERDVANA & CHARLEMAGNA have Static and Oleg tied up in conversations, so if they could pay for their respective drinks and move them along soon that would be appreciated just for narrative purposes.

ORMATA - Would you like to meet Nat before or after things go down with Oleg?

DERIKA - Let me know when you want to work on the post inside the hangar and I'll send you a description and potential clues you can find via TG for you to have Liehiry discover while he's inside?

Yeah, that'd be great! Just TG me whenever!

[Pax Nerdvana]

I'm so sorry I haven't been able to post, but I've been really busy.

[Ormata]

Hey all! Hope everyone had a good holiday period! I first want to apologise for letting things go quiet over the last few weeks. However...

I have now posted! And I now have an empty schedule again from Monday so will be hoping to re-inject the RP with life as a priority if everyone active is still on board. I'll gradually NPC completely inactive characters if they are left that way, but nobody is at risk of that presently.

PAX NERDVANA & CHARLEMAGNA have Static and Oleg tied up in conversations, so if they could pay for their respective drinks and move them along soon that would be appreciated just for narrative purposes.

ORMATA - Would you like to meet Nat before or after things go down with Oleg?

DERIKA - Let me know when you want to work on the post inside the hangar and I'll send you a description and potential clues you can find via TG for you to have Liehiry discover while he's inside?

Might as well meet with Nat before. Do you want to do that jumping-off post (An invitation or something along those lines) or shall I?

[Nuxipal]

This looks quite interesting. I'll start working on an app in a few minutes here.

[Cheye]

Might as well meet with Nat before. Do you want to do that jumping-off post (An invitation or something along those lines) or shall I?

Hey, sorry for the delays again - IRL drama...

Given she's currently in the cantina, it might be a good chance for one of your people to approach with an invitation.

I've set up that Oleg's shift is ending in my most recent post, so they could also notice that he's heading to his room while delivering the invitation, signalling to your killer that it's time to strike?

Otherwise I'll just have her idly pop down to the hangars after she's spoken with Alba about installing a spa. Let me know what you'd prefer?

This looks quite interesting. I'll start working on an app in a few minutes here.

Cool - look forward to seeing what you come up with!

[Nuxipal]

Name: Nivea Atrix
Age: 26, (b. 45 BBY)
Species: Dathomirian
Appearance: Chalk-White Skin, Silver Eyes, Chalk-Pale Skin
Wears Powered armor with cloak

Close Up

Gender: Female
Profession: Mercenary
Equipment/Weapons: Silver Lightsaber, Power Armor, Cloak
Pets/Droids/Companions: R2-N7, Astromech Droid
Udam Bilt - Male Duros Mercenary, Tech Specialist (Blaster Pistol, Datapad, Hacking Equipment)
Gus Neda - Male Human Mercenary, Weapon Specialist (Blaster Rifle, Medium Armor)
Astas Ogrik - Female Human Mercenary, Pilot and Vehicle Specialist (Heavy Blaster Pistol)
How you got to Orondia: ZH-40 Tribune-Class Light Freighter Tempest
Reason for travel to Orondia: Running Low on Fuel, and Looking for work.
Bio:

Born on the planet Dathomir, Nivea Atrix was destined to grow up within the NIghtsisters and join their ranks. However, her mother had gained more than her share of enemies within the organization due to her ambition. Fearing what would happen to her daughter if they stayed much longer, the Nightsister fled the world with her young daughter heading away from Dathomir towards the core worlds, hoping to be lost to the stars. What she hadn't come to expect was Republic Customs on the planet Onderon.

While here, both she and her daughter were screened by medics and she was told there would be a delay with her daughter as some unusual patterns had be noticed in her bloodstream. They didn't say anything regarding the mother, however, she began to get a feeling they weren't telling her everything. She tried to get to her daughter, who she had been told was in the next room. She broke out of the waiting room and into the next room over, to find it empty. The woman looked bewildered and tried other rooms. Her daughter was nowhere to be found. Distraught she was about to try and get some answers out of the doctors before she was stunned and put into a cell designed for force-sensitives to prevent her escape. Her child however, had just begun her journey.

The girl was nearly two when the tests on Onderon marked her to be sent to the Jedi to be tested and trained as a Jedi. Her young life she felt a sense of connection with the other children her age, however, as time moved on she surpassed many in her own class and was taken as an apprentice at age 9 by an Arkanian Jedi Master named Ketha Zoth. Nivea flourished under Ketha's watch into a capable Jedi Padawan and skilled warrior. They began going on missions when Nivea was 13, taking them to various parts of the galaxy and aiding in the investigation into the Sith Warrior who struck out at the Jedi on Naboo in 32 BBY. By the year 29 BBY, the now 16 year old Nivea had been found more than capable of dealing with more dangerous foes. Ketha and Zoth debarked from the jedi temple bound for the Outer Rim. They begin investigating a dark side source on the planet Saleucami. The Rural world had little to greet them until they were well off the beaten path. A small village seemed to be a pull of dark side energy on the planet. Unable to find its direct source, the two camped nearby while they studied the force in this place. While here the pair tried to fit in with the locals, however, after a week of getting a feel for the area, Ketha vanished. Not only had Ketha vanished, but Nivea's lightsaber had also vanished with her. Nivea searched the surrounding area and eventually made it back to the spaceport where the ship they took was also missing.

The young Jedi had been abandoned by her master it had seemed. Several months later, Nivea, who had been working in a cantina after her food rations and credits ran out, came across a group of mercenaries. Though, at the moment, they were working more as pirates and smugglers who would take on dangerous missions for extra pay. They took an interest in Nivea after she proved she was more than just some waitress at a cantina. By the end of the week she ended up leaving with them. However, when they took off, she realized that they weren't exactly taking her to join up with them. They soon put her in chains and flew off into the outer rim looking to sell her off at a slave market on Nar Shaddaa. She had to do something quickly about it. They had already jumped to hyperspace by the time she found an opening.

By using a jedi mind trick, she was able to escape captivity and fight her way out of the holding area. It took time, but she eventually took control over the ship, but not without killing the whole crew. She arrived on Nar Shaddaa and used the credits she took from the dead crew to pay for landing. Over the next few years she built up a small following of mercenaries. They took on jobs in the outer rim. With her cut, Nivea found out that Ketha was never seen by the Jedi again. In 25 BBY, they took a job to clear out some kind of cult. Upon their arrival there, Nivea felt the power of the planet's dark side power. She warned her crew and moved forward. They fought their way past guards before finding that the leaders of the cult. The first, a tall multi-armed darksider kept himself hidden visibly. However, the other was unmistakably Ketha. The battle which ensued was a massacre. Mercenaries fell left and right as multiple lightsabers began flying around the room controlled by the dark side user.

While fighting through the telekinetic combat of the unknown figure, Nivea engages Ketha in lightsaber combat, which eventually leaves the chamber with the dark figure. They work their way towards the exterior of the compound. Already, the surviving mercenaries had withdrawn from the room as well. Nivea and Ketha battled back and forth for what seemed like an eternity, during that time the surviving mercenaries had evacuated to their ship. Aside from the dark figure and Ketha, they had cleared out the cult in its entirety. They wanted to bomb the rest of the structures from orbit to kill the dark figure. While fighting and conversing with Ketha learned Ketha had erased Nivea from the Jedi archives before leaving to join her master, a Neti Dark Side User. She tried to convince Nivea to join her again and learn the dark side and feel the true balance of the force. Struggling with her feelings, Nivea nearly loses concentration on her fighting style giving Ketha an opening which she attempts to exploit. However, Nivea is much younger, and much quicker than her former master. With a quick recovery, Nivea cuts through Ketha's saber before she can use it to harm her. Without a saber Ketha attempts to retreat, but Nivea, feeling betrayed, gives into her emotions and grabs her master with the force and chokes her into unconsciousness. She takes her back towards the core worlds with only a pair of her mercenary friends still with her along with their droids. In the following years she unsuccessfully tries to rejoin the Jedi, but ends up leaving the Jedi Temple heading to find somewhere else to learn the force.

As the clone wars begin, she is in search of holocrons to unlock more force powers and techniques in the outer rim. She feels the great loss of jedi life on Geonosis and investigates while on Onderon. Within a few days she finds herself and her crew hired by the leader of the Confederacy of Independent Systems as mercenaries. Not for frontline duty, but for alternative objectives. The pay is incredible and there were very few instances in which the crew was put into real danger. However, after a few months of no job, her team is growing restless. They are on Nar Shaddaa getting fuel from some Bith, but when they take off they find that they did not have enough fuel to get anywhere except Orondia Station, where they are forced to dock their ship.

RP Example: 1 2

[Cheye]

Name: Nivea Atrix
Age: 26, (b. 45 BBY)
Species: Dathomirian
Appearance: Chalk-White Skin, Silver Eyes, Chalk-Pale Skin
Wears Powered armor with cloak

(Image)Close Up

Gender: Female
Profession: Mercenary
Equipment/Weapons: Silver Lightsaber, Power Armor, Cloak
Pets/Droids/Companions: R2-N7, Astromech Droid
Udam Bilt - Male Duros Mercenary, Tech Specialist (Blaster Pistol, Datapad, Hacking Equipment)
Gus Neda - Male Human Mercenary, Weapon Specialist (Blaster Rifle, Medium Armor)
Astas Ogrik - Female Human Mercenary, Pilot and Vehicle Specialist (Heavy Blaster Pistol)
How you got to Orondia: ZH-40 Tribune-Class Light Freighter Tempest
Reason for travel to Orondia: Running Low on Fuel, and Looking for work.
Bio:

Born on the planet Dathomir, Nivea Atrix was destined to grow up within the NIghtsisters and join their ranks. However, her mother had gained more than her share of enemies within the organization due to her ambition. Fearing what would happen to her daughter if they stayed much longer, the Nightsister fled the world with her young daughter heading away from Dathomir towards the core worlds, hoping to be lost to the stars. What she hadn't come to expect was Republic Customs on the planet Onderon.

While here, both she and her daughter were screened by medics and she was told there would be a delay with her daughter as some unusual patterns had be noticed in her bloodstream. They didn't say anything regarding the mother, however, she began to get a feeling they weren't telling her everything. She tried to get to her daughter, who she had been told was in the next room. She broke out of the waiting room and into the next room over, to find it empty. The woman looked bewildered and tried other rooms. Her daughter was nowhere to be found. Distraught she was about to try and get some answers out of the doctors before she was stunned and put into a cell designed for force-sensitives to prevent her escape. Her child however, had just begun her journey.

The girl was nearly two when the tests on Onderon marked her to be sent to the Jedi to be tested and trained as a Jedi. Her young life she felt a sense of connection with the other children her age, however, as time moved on she surpassed many in her own class and was taken as an apprentice at age 9 by an Arkanian Jedi Master named Ketha Zoth. Nivea flourished under Ketha's watch into a capable Jedi Padawan and skilled warrior. They began going on missions when Nivea was 13, taking them to various parts of the galaxy and aiding in the investigation into the Sith Warrior who struck out at the Jedi on Naboo in 32 BBY. By the year 29 BBY, the now 16 year old Nivea had been found more than capable of dealing with more dangerous foes. Ketha and Zoth debarked from the jedi temple bound for the Outer Rim. They begin investigating a dark side source on the planet Saleucami. The Rural world had little to greet them until they were well off the beaten path. A small village seemed to be a pull of dark side energy on the planet. Unable to find its direct source, the two camped nearby while they studied the force in this place. While here the pair tried to fit in with the locals, however, after a week of getting a feel for the area, Ketha vanished. Not only had Ketha vanished, but Nivea's lightsaber had also vanished with her. Nivea searched the surrounding area and eventually made it back to the spaceport where the ship they took was also missing.

The young Jedi had been abandoned by her master it had seemed. Several months later, Nivea, who had been working in a cantina after her food rations and credits ran out, came across a group of mercenaries. Though, at the moment, they were working more as pirates and smugglers who would take on dangerous missions for extra pay. They took an interest in Nivea after she proved she was more than just some waitress at a cantina. By the end of the week she ended up leaving with them. However, when they took off, she realized that they weren't exactly taking her to join up with them. They soon put her in chains and flew off into the outer rim looking to sell her off at a slave market on Nar Shaddaa. She had to do something quickly about it. They had already jumped to hyperspace by the time she found an opening.

By using a jedi mind trick, she was able to escape captivity and fight her way out of the holding area. It took time, but she eventually took control over the ship, but not without killing the whole crew. She arrived on Nar Shaddaa and used the credits she took from the dead crew to pay for landing. Over the next few years she built up a small following of mercenaries. They took on jobs in the outer rim. With her cut, Nivea found out that Ketha was never seen by the Jedi again. In 25 BBY, they took a job to clear out some kind of cult. Upon their arrival there, Nivea felt the power of the planet's dark side power. She warned her crew and moved forward. They fought their way past guards before finding that the leaders of the cult. The first, a tall multi-armed darksider kept himself hidden visibly. However, the other was unmistakably Ketha. The battle which ensued was a massacre. Mercenaries fell left and right as multiple lightsabers began flying around the room controlled by the dark side user.

While fighting through the telekinetic combat of the unknown figure, Nivea engages Ketha in lightsaber combat, which eventually leaves the chamber with the dark figure. They work their way towards the exterior of the compound. Already, the surviving mercenaries had withdrawn from the room as well. Nivea and Ketha battled back and forth for what seemed like an eternity, during that time the surviving mercenaries had evacuated to their ship. Aside from the dark figure and Ketha, they had cleared out the cult in its entirety. They wanted to bomb the rest of the structures from orbit to kill the dark figure. While fighting and conversing with Ketha learned Ketha had erased Nivea from the Jedi archives before leaving to join her master, a Neti Dark Side User. She tried to convince Nivea to join her again and learn the dark side and feel the true balance of the force. Struggling with her feelings, Nivea nearly loses concentration on her fighting style giving Ketha an opening which she attempts to exploit. However, Nivea is much younger, and much quicker than her former master. With a quick recovery, Nivea cuts through Ketha's saber before she can use it to harm her. Without a saber Ketha attempts to retreat, but Nivea, feeling betrayed, gives into her emotions and grabs her master with the force and chokes her into unconsciousness. She takes her back towards the core worlds with only a pair of her mercenary friends still with her along with their droids. In the following years she unsuccessfully tries to rejoin the Jedi, but ends up leaving the Jedi Temple heading to find somewhere else to learn the force.

As the clone wars begin, she is in search of holocrons to unlock more force powers and techniques in the outer rim. She feels the great loss of jedi life on Geonosis and investigates while on Onderon. Within a few days she finds herself and her crew hired by the leader of the Confederacy of Independent Systems as mercenaries. Not for frontline duty, but for alternative objectives. The pay is incredible and there were very few instances in which the crew was put into real danger. However, after a few months of no job, her team is growing restless. They are on Nar Shaddaa getting fuel from some Bith, but when they take off they find that they did not have enough fuel to get anywhere except Orondia Station, where they are forced to dock their ship.

RP Example: 1 2

I really love this app! So much detail and the attention to Star Wars canon is great, particularly like the Ahsoka-esque lightsaber and the reference to the prior station owner's brother at the end there! Be nice to have a proper force user around too!

Accepted

[Pax Nerdvana]

RL's been crazy. Sorry I haven't been able to get a post up recently.

[Cheye]

RL's been crazy. Sorry I haven't been able to get a post up recently.

No worries, there's a shifty Quarren hanging around your table for when you have time!

[Pax Nerdvana]

RL's been crazy. Sorry I haven't been able to get a post up recently.

No worries, there's a shifty Quarren hanging around your table for when you have time!

Sounds good.

[Nuxipal]

Name: Nivea Atrix
Age: 26, (b. 45 BBY)
Species: Dathomirian
Appearance: Chalk-White Skin, Silver Eyes, Chalk-Pale Skin
Wears Powered armor with cloak

(Image)Close Up

Gender: Female
Profession: Mercenary
Equipment/Weapons: Silver Lightsaber, Power Armor, Cloak
Pets/Droids/Companions: R2-N7, Astromech Droid
Udam Bilt - Male Duros Mercenary, Tech Specialist (Blaster Pistol, Datapad, Hacking Equipment)
Gus Neda - Male Human Mercenary, Weapon Specialist (Blaster Rifle, Medium Armor)
Astas Ogrik - Female Human Mercenary, Pilot and Vehicle Specialist (Heavy Blaster Pistol)
How you got to Orondia: ZH-40 Tribune-Class Light Freighter Tempest
Reason for travel to Orondia: Running Low on Fuel, and Looking for work.
Bio:

Born on the planet Dathomir, Nivea Atrix was destined to grow up within the NIghtsisters and join their ranks. However, her mother had gained more than her share of enemies within the organization due to her ambition. Fearing what would happen to her daughter if they stayed much longer, the Nightsister fled the world with her young daughter heading away from Dathomir towards the core worlds, hoping to be lost to the stars. What she hadn't come to expect was Republic Customs on the planet Onderon.

While here, both she and her daughter were screened by medics and she was told there would be a delay with her daughter as some unusual patterns had be noticed in her bloodstream. They didn't say anything regarding the mother, however, she began to get a feeling they weren't telling her everything. She tried to get to her daughter, who she had been told was in the next room. She broke out of the waiting room and into the next room over, to find it empty. The woman looked bewildered and tried other rooms. Her daughter was nowhere to be found. Distraught she was about to try and get some answers out of the doctors before she was stunned and put into a cell designed for force-sensitives to prevent her escape. Her child however, had just begun her journey.

The girl was nearly two when the tests on Onderon marked her to be sent to the Jedi to be tested and trained as a Jedi. Her young life she felt a sense of connection with the other children her age, however, as time moved on she surpassed many in her own class and was taken as an apprentice at age 9 by an Arkanian Jedi Master named Ketha Zoth. Nivea flourished under Ketha's watch into a capable Jedi Padawan and skilled warrior. They began going on missions when Nivea was 13, taking them to various parts of the galaxy and aiding in the investigation into the Sith Warrior who struck out at the Jedi on Naboo in 32 BBY. By the year 29 BBY, the now 16 year old Nivea had been found more than capable of dealing with more dangerous foes. Ketha and Zoth debarked from the jedi temple bound for the Outer Rim. They begin investigating a dark side source on the planet Saleucami. The Rural world had little to greet them until they were well off the beaten path. A small village seemed to be a pull of dark side energy on the planet. Unable to find its direct source, the two camped nearby while they studied the force in this place. While here the pair tried to fit in with the locals, however, after a week of getting a feel for the area, Ketha vanished. Not only had Ketha vanished, but Nivea's lightsaber had also vanished with her. Nivea searched the surrounding area and eventually made it back to the spaceport where the ship they took was also missing.

The young Jedi had been abandoned by her master it had seemed. Several months later, Nivea, who had been working in a cantina after her food rations and credits ran out, came across a group of mercenaries. Though, at the moment, they were working more as pirates and smugglers who would take on dangerous missions for extra pay. They took an interest in Nivea after she proved she was more than just some waitress at a cantina. By the end of the week she ended up leaving with them. However, when they took off, she realized that they weren't exactly taking her to join up with them. They soon put her in chains and flew off into the outer rim looking to sell her off at a slave market on Nar Shaddaa. She had to do something quickly about it. They had already jumped to hyperspace by the time she found an opening.

By using a jedi mind trick, she was able to escape captivity and fight her way out of the holding area. It took time, but she eventually took control over the ship, but not without killing the whole crew. She arrived on Nar Shaddaa and used the credits she took from the dead crew to pay for landing. Over the next few years she built up a small following of mercenaries. They took on jobs in the outer rim. With her cut, Nivea found out that Ketha was never seen by the Jedi again. In 25 BBY, they took a job to clear out some kind of cult. Upon their arrival there, Nivea felt the power of the planet's dark side power. She warned her crew and moved forward. They fought their way past guards before finding that the leaders of the cult. The first, a tall multi-armed darksider kept himself hidden visibly. However, the other was unmistakably Ketha. The battle which ensued was a massacre. Mercenaries fell left and right as multiple lightsabers began flying around the room controlled by the dark side user.

While fighting through the telekinetic combat of the unknown figure, Nivea engages Ketha in lightsaber combat, which eventually leaves the chamber with the dark figure. They work their way towards the exterior of the compound. Already, the surviving mercenaries had withdrawn from the room as well. Nivea and Ketha battled back and forth for what seemed like an eternity, during that time the surviving mercenaries had evacuated to their ship. Aside from the dark figure and Ketha, they had cleared out the cult in its entirety. They wanted to bomb the rest of the structures from orbit to kill the dark figure. While fighting and conversing with Ketha learned Ketha had erased Nivea from the Jedi archives before leaving to join her master, a Neti Dark Side User. She tried to convince Nivea to join her again and learn the dark side and feel the true balance of the force. Struggling with her feelings, Nivea nearly loses concentration on her fighting style giving Ketha an opening which she attempts to exploit. However, Nivea is much younger, and much quicker than her former master. With a quick recovery, Nivea cuts through Ketha's saber before she can use it to harm her. Without a saber Ketha attempts to retreat, but Nivea, feeling betrayed, gives into her emotions and grabs her master with the force and chokes her into unconsciousness. She takes her back towards the core worlds with only a pair of her mercenary friends still with her along with their droids. In the following years she unsuccessfully tries to rejoin the Jedi, but ends up leaving the Jedi Temple heading to find somewhere else to learn the force.

As the clone wars begin, she is in search of holocrons to unlock more force powers and techniques in the outer rim. She feels the great loss of jedi life on Geonosis and investigates while on Onderon. Within a few days she finds herself and her crew hired by the leader of the Confederacy of Independent Systems as mercenaries. Not for frontline duty, but for alternative objectives. The pay is incredible and there were very few instances in which the crew was put into real danger. However, after a few months of no job, her team is growing restless. They are on Nar Shaddaa getting fuel from some Bith, but when they take off they find that they did not have enough fuel to get anywhere except Orondia Station, where they are forced to dock their ship.

RP Example: 1 2

I really love this app! So much detail and the attention to Star Wars canon is great, particularly like the Ahsoka-esque lightsaber and the reference to the prior station owner's brother at the end there! Be nice to have a proper force user around too!

Accepted

That awkward moment when Nationstates doesn't remember that you posted in a thread so it doesn't show up in the "View your posts" section.

Thanks, I'll get posting here in a minute.

[Puertollano]

I'm thinking of joining this. What has happened so far?

[Cheye]

I'm thinking of joining this. What has happened so far?

You are more than welcome to throw a character up here for consideration! The more the merrier!

Here's a brief overview, including whats going on with all the player characters:

Orondia station, which had become something of a ghost town after it was cut off from the fuel line following a disagreement between the previous owner and the Hutts is now back up and running again.

The local Codru-Ji weapons dealer (who doubles as a de facto crime boss) got used to having run of the place while things were quiet, so she's planning to kill the local bartender to send a message to the new owner, while having the security officer on her payroll look into her to find out where her credits are coming from.

A Mon Calamari republic spy has arrived and is offering to fill in as station mechanic until the original mechanic, who went missing while trying to find a wrecked CIS ship somewhere out on the surface of Orondia, returns.

A well-armoured mercenary is meanwhile hot on the trail of said mechanic and a suspicious Anomid bounty hunter has rocked up in an escape pod who the Station Security Chief is trying to rope into helping to find him too.

Meanwhile the local travel agent is half-drunkenly dreaming of setting up a luxury spa at the station and is currently negotiating with the new owner to help make her dreams come true...

In the middle of all this insert a Corellian family freighter crew looking for work, a Dathomiri former-Jedi and her associates looking for fuel, and a Kaminoan scientist and an Ubese bounty hunter who are currently keeping themselves to themselves.

And we're only just nearing the end of the first day IC...

[Puertollano]

I'm thinking of joining this. What has happened so far?

You are more than welcome to throw a character up here for consideration! The more the merrier!

Here's a brief overview, including whats going on with all the player characters:

Orondia station, which had become something of a ghost town after it was cut off from the fuel line following a disagreement between the previous owner and the Hutts is now back up and running again.

The local Codru-Ji weapons dealer (who doubles as a de facto crime boss) got used to having run of the place while things were quiet, so she's planning to kill the local bartender to send a message to the new owner, while having the security officer on her payroll look into her to find out where her credits are coming from.

A Mon Calamari republic spy has arrived and is offering to fill in as station mechanic until the original mechanic, who went missing while trying to find a wrecked CIS ship somewhere out on the surface of Orondia, returns.

A well-armoured mercenary is meanwhile hot on the trail of said mechanic and a suspicious Anomid bounty hunter has rocked up in an escape pod who the Station Security Chief is trying to rope into helping to find him too.

Meanwhile the local travel agent is half-drunkenly dreaming of setting up a luxury spa at the station and is currently negotiating with the new owner to help make her dreams come true...

In the middle of all this insert a Corellian family freighter crew looking for work, a Dathomiri former-Jedi and her associates looking for fuel, and a Kaminoan scientist and an Ubese bounty hunter who are currently keeping themselves to themselves.

And we're only just nearing the end of the first day IC...

Sounds good. Do you reckon I could apply as a Super-Tactical Battle Droid from the crashed CIS ship?