Star Wars: A Final Hope (OOC/Singups)[REBOOT/OPEN]

[Atkemri]

Just for the next person making a force-sensitive app, a few Jedi would be appreciated. Especially for the Grandmaster of the order.

I'm more along the line of Sith not Jedi.

I know, I said the next person making a force-sensitive app.

[Dentali]

Just for the next person making a force-sensitive app, a few Jedi would be appreciated. Especially for the Grandmaster of the order.

too many edgelords on NationStates

[Brusia]

Glad to see this back again! Figured I'd bring back my characters from the last iteration, if that's alright:

Name: Martius Shan
Age: 254 (Biological age: 35)
Gender: Male
Allegiance paid to: The Jedi Order
Rank: Jedi Master
Appearance:

Personality: An honorable man and devoted adherent to the Jedi Code, Martius was once a dedicated servant of the Jedi Order and the Old Republic. Having lost his Master and a good many friends during the Clone Wars, Martius can be somewhat cold and closed off for fear of making new friends only to lose them (learning that almost everyone he ever knew is now gone is not likely to help that either). That said, those who manage to get past his defense mechanisms will find that Martius is a caring and loyal companion, as dedicated to the people he cares about as he once was to the Republic.
Force Sensitive: Yes
Skills/Powers: Coming from a family with a long history of a strong connection to the Force, Martius has a good deal of potential to develop a strong connection himself, though he currently has done little to tap into that potential; having studied under an Echani Master who had him focus primarily on perfecting his chosen lightsaber forms of Djem So and Soresu. As such, he primarily knows abilities such as Force Speed and Force Strength which serve to supplement those forms, though he still has at least basic training in many other Light Side and universal Force abilities, and as a Shan has a natural talent for Battle Meditation. This focus on lightsaber combat has helped to make Martius a formidable duelist however, and combined with his extensive experience fighting in the Clone Wars, he is quite deadly with the elegant weapon from his more civilized age. Additionally, Martius is a very talented strategist and tactician, a good pilot, well-educated, and well-versed in Galactic history.
Weaponry: Armor and a vented lightsaber with a blue blade
Ship: Nu-class Attack Shuttle Liberator
Biography:

Born into a family with a long history of a strong connection to the Force going back countless generations, it was no surprise when Martius was discovered to be Force Sensitive. He was brought to the Jedi Temple on Coruscant while still an infant, and was raised by the Order. Like many younglings he trained under Master Yoda for much of his youth, until completing his Initiate Trials at the age of 10 and becoming a Padawan. A natural with a lightsaber, he caught the eye of the Echani Jedi Master Meetra Fenni, who would go on to select him as her apprentice. Eager to impress his new Master, Martius was extremely diligent in his training with Master Fenni, and learned a great deal in a short amount of time. Meetra was impressed enough by Martius' performance that she even began to train him in the Echani martial arts in addition to his Jedi studies.

After learning the basics of the lightsaber forms, Martius decided to focus his studies on Form V Djem So, which he studied with his master and further supplemented with the Echani techniques she taught him, and Form III Soresu, which he learned from the Jedi Battlemaster Cin Drallig alongside a number of other Padawans. When not studying on Coruscant, Martius accompanied his Master on a variety of adventures (and the occasional misadventure) ranging from mediating negotiations to battling pirates in the Outer Rim. While studying for his Trials he also became very interested in Galactic History, particularly when he learned that an ancestor of his named Satele had once been none other than the Grand Master of the Jedi Order. History continued to be a major point of interest for him, even after successfully completing his Trials and becoming a Jedi Knight, to the point that he even once considered becoming a full-fledged Jedi Historian.

The ever growing troubles with the Trade Federation and the increasingly popular separatist movement would, unfortunately, keep him too busy to do so however, and while he still studied as much as he could while in transit or during a rare break, much of the next few years would be spent in skirmishes and (typically unsuccessful) negotiations with the groups. Things would soon come to a head when Martius received a message from his former Master requesting that he join her and her Padawan in a Jedi Strike Team that was being assembled to rescue two Jedi and a Senator who were being held captive on the planet Geonosis. Sadly, though Martius and Meetra both had seen more than their fair share of combat by this point, the small engagements they were accustomed to simply could not prepare them for the scale of combat they would face on that dust-covered world. Though Martius would survive the battle, thanks in large part to ARC Commander Maverick, the clone who would later become his XO, his Master was not so fortunate. In the wake of Meetra's death, Martius began devoting every waking moment to honoring her memory and sacrifice by doing everything in his power to preserve the Republic and the Jedi Order by winning the war they were now faced with, and putting an end to the Separatist uprising once and for all.

The death of Meetra also left her Padawan, Arven Visz, without a Master. Feeling he owed it to his Master to finish the young woman's training, Martius requested to be made Arven's new master and the Council gladly agreed. As the Clone Wars officially began, Martius was made a Jedi General and given command of the 53rd Legion, and new Padawan at his side, he set off to combat the Separatists. His devotion to the cause and desire to find justice for his Master would serve him well over the next two years as he led the 53rd in battles all over the Galaxy: from the crystalline skyscrapers of Christophsis, to the shadow world of Umbara, the dense jungles of Felucia, and most everything in between. Martius, Maverick and the 53rd all fought valiantly in each engagement they found themselves thrust into, and the Jedi General received numerous commendations for his actions in the war.

About a year into the war however, Martius became quite worried about Arven; though she was a good student and progressing well in her training, he noticed a great anger gradually building inside her as she combated the Separatists. No doubt this was due to the death of Meetra, a pain he understood only too well, but as her anger continued to grow unchecked he worried it might draw her towards the dark side. As his methods of emotional control didn't seem to do much to help Arven, he contacted Master Windu to ask if he could help teach his Padawan to better control the darkness growing inside her. After meeting with Arven, Windu agreed to help, and took her under his wing for several months to help train her.

Martius meanwhile was assigned to retake the planet Garos IV in the Mid Rim, and proceeded at once to the world with his Legion. The fighting was brutal, and though Martius was badly injured by Separatist artillery he refused to leave the planet and continued leading his troops from the frontlines. After giving an inspiring speech, Martius personally lead a final push into the enemy's command center, driving the last of the Separatist forces off the world. For his actions on Garos IV, Martius was awarded the Cross of Glory and given a brief leave to recover from his injuries.

Once he'd healed up he was reunited with his Padawan, who thanks to Master Windu's training had managed to get her anger under control. Having successfully accomplished that task, Windu informed her he believed she was ready for her Trials and Martius happily agreed. With her experience in the war, Arven easily passed her Trials after which Martius proudly prepared her for her Knighting Ceremony. A short time later, the High Council informed Martius that, for successfully training a Padawan to Knighthood and his tireless service to the Republic, they were bestowing the title of Jedi Master upon him and promoting him to the rank of Senior Jedi General. Thanks to his extensive study of history, he was also offered a seat on the Council of First Knowledge which he gladly accepted, allowing him access to the Holocron Chamber and Holocron Vault.

Martius studied the incredible knowledge made available to him whenever he could, and took a particular interest in the histories of the ancient conflicts that had been recorded by Master Gnost-Dural. Utilizing the knowledge gained from his studies, Martius adopted new tactics, often preferring surgical strikes and diversionary feint attacks to conventional tactics, which helped lead his Sector Army to numerous victories in the Outer Rim Sieges with minimal casualties.

Everything would soon change for the Jedi however, when he and Maverick were ambushed by a Separatist frigate while en route to Ilum, where Martius was scheduled to meet with a group of younglings to lead them in the Gathering ritual. Though Martius was able to maneuver out of the way of the worst of the enemy fire, his shuttle's shields were still badly damaged, resulting in a failure of the vessel's relativistic shielding that went unnoticed as Martius made an emergency hyperspace jump out of the system and to the pre-set coordinates of Ilum. A few hours later the Jedi and Clone Officer would find themselves in orbit of the icy world, but though the relativistic shield failure didn't interfere with where they arrived, it did interfere with when...

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The APP
Name: CC-1776 "Maverick"
Age: 237 (Biological age: 18, though appears older due to accelerated clone aging)
Gender: Male
Allegiance paid to: The Republic The Jedi Order
Rank: Clone Commander
Appearance:

Personality: Born and bred solely for the purpose of making war, Maverick is a soldier through and through. While more independent than many of his brothers, Maverick is still every bit as dedicated, loyal, and honorable, and is a great asset to whatever force in which he serves.
Force Sensitive: No
Skills/Powers: Elite ARC and Clone Commander training, talented tactician, excellent shot, demolitions expert, decent pilot
Weaponry: Phase II Clone ARC armor, jetpack (not always worn), macrobinoculars, breathmask survival gear (not always worn), DC-15LE blaster rifle, 2x DC-17 handblasters, thermal detonators, and EMP grenades
Ship: Same shuttle as Martius
Biography:

Like all Clones, CC-1776 was born on Kamino and cloned from Jango Fett's DNA. Like other Clone Commanders, he had been bred to be more autonomous and intelligent than standard clones, but CC-1776's autonomy ended up being considerably greater than most of the other commanders, and he ended up with an independent streak that earned him the nickname "Maverick." Maverick initially received poor ratings during his basic training due to his difficulty working well with others and his outright refusal on several occasions to follow orders he deemed to be "stupid." Still, his exceptional combat and tactical prowess managed to get him through basic by the skin of his teeth, and when he began his Clone Commander training, he truly excelled. Where many Commanders lost men in simulations while holing up and waiting for orders when presented with a tactical opportunity to outflank the enemy, Maverick's natural independent streak allowed him to press the advantage as soon as it presented itself, regardless of orders. While this might've made him a lousy trooper, it made him an excellent leader, and he passed his Commander training with top marks; leading to his being selected for additional training as an ARC Commander.

He completed his ARC training just in time for the Clone Wars to kick off, and he was selected to be among those in the first wave deployed to Geonosis. His first taste of combat was in the planet's arena, where he destroyed over a dozen droids and helped to extract a Jedi Knight by the name of Martius Shan. Once out of the arena, Maverick and the rest of his regiment landed on the main battlefield, and were placed under Shan's command. Though a formidable combatant, Martius had no prior experience fighting an all-out war, and just instinctively ordered the regiment to launch a frontal assault against the droid forces. Maverick immediately pointed out what a terrible idea that was, and after bringing up a map of the battlefield, pointed out a natural trench along the enemy's left flank which would both provide excellent cover and allow them to outflank the droid forces. Martius wisely listened to Maverick's suggestion, and led the regiment through the trench, where the narrow space further gave him an excellent advantage against the battle droids stationed there.

Once they'd reached a good position, the regiment laid down covering fire for the clone troopers advancing against the droid army, which now found itself caught in a crossfire. The droids were soon ordered into a full retreat, and as they fell back, Martius, Maverick, and the rest of the regiment left the trench to aid the rest of the clone forces which were pushing forward to gun them down. As the battle neared it's end however, a B2 super battle droid managed to get a lucky shot off which hit Maverick directly in the gut. The clone collapsed to the ground in pain, but when the B2 moved in for the kill, Martius jumped directly in front of Maverick and deflected its blaster fire away long enough for him to close in and slice the droid in half. Using his Force heal ability, Martius was able to stabilize Maverick's injury, then carried the clone back across the battlefield to a Medevac transport.

The battle was won, and in the aftermath Martius was given the rank of Jedi General, and placed in command of the 53rd Legion for his actions on the planet, and he quickly chose the now recovered Maverick as his executive officer. The clone had earned the Jedi's trust, and the Jedi had earned the clone's unwavering loyalty. In what little downtime he had, Martius read every text and studied every holocron he could find on the subject of military tactics and strategies, and drilled constantly with Maverick, Arven, and the rest of the 53rd to be as prepared as possible for whatever battles may come. That preparation paid off, and along with the infinitely more valuable lessons that firsthand experience on battlefields throughout the galaxy taught, the two became excellent and well regarded commanders.

After Martius was made a Jedi Master and promoted to Senior Jedi General, the Jedi kept Maverick on as his XO, and thanks to his ARC training the Clone had no difficulty keeping up with Martius as the Jedi began to more frequently use ARC troopers and Clone Commandos in surgical strikes against the Separatists during the Outer Rim Sieges. During this time, Maverick also attended a briefing with a number of other Clone officers during which he met with an old friend from his ARC training days: Captain Rex of the 501st. While talking with Rex, Maverick learned of the inhibitor chips installed in all Clone troopers that Fives had discovered before his death. Maverick was outraged at the news, and with his independent streak as strong as ever, he joined Rex, Wolffe, and Gregor in having his chip removed.

A short time later, Maverick accompanied Martius to the icy-world of Ilum both to serve as Martius' gunner, and to keep an eye on the ship while the Jedi was occupied guiding the younglings in the planet's ice caves. Martius had hoped a quiet trip would give them some time to discuss new strategies and possible training regimen alterations for the troops as well, but as fate would have it, the trip would turn out to be anything but quiet, and a relativistic shield failure would result in them arriving at their destination a little later than expected...

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[Ormata]

By the Coalition! Unsure if I want to go Grand Admiral yet again or something a little more civil.

[Atkemri]

Just for the next person making a force-sensitive app, a few Jedi would be appreciated. Especially for the Grandmaster of the order.

too many edgelords on NationStates

True.

[Jedi Council]

The APP
Name: Victar Fel
Age: 36
Gender: Male
Allegiance paid to: Jedi Order
Rank: Jedi Knight
Appearance: (Image)
Personality: Victar is more emotionally connected than most of his fellow Jedi, but he still knows how to remain calm in the face of pressure or otherwise in the presence of an emotional situation. He loves to play jokes with his force abilities despite the chagrin it causes other higher ranking Jedi.
Force Sensitive: (Y/N): No, of course not. What Jedi has Force abilities? (Obvious sarcasm is obvious Yes, he does)
Skills/Powers: Victar has all the ordinary telekinesis and telepathy along with other basic Force abilities like Force speed and Force Leap but also is skilled in Malacia, a rare technique, where the opponent's equilibrium is turned against them causing nausea, but no permanent side effects and Force Valor which increase his and his allies capabilities. As a final force-based Ace in the hole, he can use the Electric Judgement, the less powerful light side replication of Force Lighting powered by the user's sense of justice. He is a practitioner of Form V focusing on the Djem So school of thought and is his main form followed by the Shien form of Form V and he dabbles in Form 2 but isn't proficient in it.
Weaponry: He has a standard Lightsaber with an Azure crystal which produces a blue blade
Ship (If you have one): N/A
Biography: Victar was born on Coruscant as a young Force-sensitive boy and was quickly brought to the attention to the Jedi Order and was brought up as a padawan, learning the ways of the Jedi and personally attempting to hone his force abilities mostly because he was impressed with the Jedi he saw daily. He trained vigorously and was a model student of the order skilled in both the Force and Lightsaber combat, but despite his attempts, he was not yet ready to become a Jedi Knight as he wasn't spiritually ready. He realized that his current reasons for becoming a Jedi (The status) was't a suitable reason to become a Knight and so spent a week in deep meditation honing his connection to the force and coming out ready for Knightdom with a noticeable attitude adjustment.

He served as a steadfast member of the order participating in many missions against the Coalition and gaining a bit of renown for his efforts across the galaxy involved in many smaller combat missions and was a member of the strike force on Commenmor in 182 ABY and was present failed assault on Eridu. In 189 ABY he was present in the attack on the Telos IV and managed to escape with a few others to Illum, injured from multiple blaster shots causing him to become resentful. Knowing that he is becoming influenced by the Dark Side he spends most days training and mediating as to keep his mind off the feelings of anger he has, but as time goes on he's noticed it becomes less effective...
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Notes: If he has too many force abilities or you want the links to where I got them, I'll fix it.

Sorry to ask again, but could you add more to the bio? Talk about his youth and childhood, his training. You could also detail what happened to him or his master through the war. Feel free to be creative.

The APP
Name: Amnal Kehy
Age: 25
Gender: M
Allegiance paid to Sith, Previously Jedi Order
Rank: Apprentice
Appearance:

(Image)

Personality: Prone to emotional outbursts, in which he experiences a wide range of emotions, all the way from overwhelming sadness to blind rage, at other times he is a serious and cold person
Force Sensitive: Y
Skills/Powers: Form IV "Ataru", Force Push and Force Jump from normal Force Powers, but the Dark Side Powers are Force Choke and Force Rage
Weaponry: a Red Lightsaber and a Green Lightsaber
Ship: no, but his master has one ( I don't know what types there are, sorry )
Biography: Born in 175 ABY on Vaklin, he had a neglectful family unfortunately which resulted in his personality having such mood swings, fortunately for him, he showed his force sensitivity just as a Jedi was passing by his town in 176 ABY, he was taken to a Jedi temple soon afterward where he was a Youngling, however by the time of Vulpter Armistice he just became a Padawan, probably the last one, at the age of 15.

In 189 he and his master managed to avoid the massacre on Telos IV, but by a close call, since then until 193 ABY when they were cornered by people who appeared as officials, they were surrounded in a building with his master trying to calm him down, which only had an opposite effect, eventually he didn't manage to hold it and in a burst of blind rage he slammed his master against the wall after which he killed his master with a force choke, then he calmed down and saw what he just did, after that someone put a hand on his shoulder and said " Congratulations, You just made your sacrifice", Amnal still shocked walked along the mysterious person onto the outside of the building, where some officials laid dead.

Since then he was an apprentice of a Sith that since then tried to train him in many Dark Force abilities, so far he has managed to master Force Choke and Force Rage throughout the journey for him to become a fully-fledged Sith, why he agreed, because he couldn't hold his emotions any longer, because he tasted the dark side, manipulation, perhaps all and even more
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I guess it's best to go with a Example from a Star Wars RP

Notes: Nah

Similar request here. Could you add more detail to your bio?
Also, the middle paragraph there is essentially one long sentence. Could you break it up a bit?

The APP
Name:Sona Solo,Secretly: Darth Solatus
Age:24
Gender:Female
Allegiance paid to: Publicly: The Galactic Alliance, Secretly: Mandalore the Risen, Darth Anarkus
Rank:Lieutenant in Alliance Navy
Appearance (Picture preferred, if not, detailed description accepted):(Image)
Personality:Friendly to those she calls friends, cold and businesslike to strangers
Force Sensitive: Y
Skills/Powers:Ataru and Vaapad
Force Lightning
Force Choke
Force Push
Force Drain
Force Storm(Learning;not mastered)
Force Healing
Revitalize
Weaponry:Modified A280 Blaster Rifle
Modified DL-44 Heavy Blaster Pistol
Secret: Twin yellow lightsabers
Ship (If you have one):T-85 X-wing
Biography:Wip
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Notes:

Only thing I would highlight is that Vaapad likely died out with Mace Windu.

Glad to see this back again! Figured I'd bring back my characters from the last iteration, if that's alright:

Name: Martius Shan
Age: 254 (Biological age: 35)
Gender: Male
Allegiance paid to: The Jedi Order
Rank: Jedi Master
Appearance:

(Image)

Personality: An honorable man and devoted adherent to the Jedi Code, Martius was once a dedicated servant of the Jedi Order and the Old Republic. Having lost his Master and a good many friends during the Clone Wars, Martius can be somewhat cold and closed off for fear of making new friends only to lose them (learning that almost everyone he ever knew is now gone is not likely to help that either). That said, those who manage to get past his defense mechanisms will find that Martius is a caring and loyal companion, as dedicated to the people he cares about as he once was to the Republic.
Force Sensitive: Yes
Skills/Powers: Coming from a family with a long history of a strong connection to the Force, Martius has a good deal of potential to develop a strong connection himself, though he currently has done little to tap into that potential; having studied under an Echani Master who had him focus primarily on perfecting his chosen lightsaber forms of Djem So and Soresu. As such, he primarily knows abilities such as Force Speed and Force Strength which serve to supplement those forms, though he still has at least basic training in many other Light Side and universal Force abilities, and as a Shan has a natural talent for Battle Meditation. This focus on lightsaber combat has helped to make Martius a formidable duelist however, and combined with his extensive experience fighting in the Clone Wars, he is quite deadly with the elegant weapon from his more civilized age. Additionally, Martius is a very talented strategist and tactician, a good pilot, well-educated, and well-versed in Galactic history.
Weaponry: Armor and a vented lightsaber with a blue blade
Ship: Nu-class Attack Shuttle Liberator
Biography:

Born into a family with a long history of a strong connection to the Force going back countless generations, it was no surprise when Martius was discovered to be Force Sensitive. He was brought to the Jedi Temple on Coruscant while still an infant, and was raised by the Order. Like many younglings he trained under Master Yoda for much of his youth, until completing his Initiate Trials at the age of 10 and becoming a Padawan. A natural with a lightsaber, he caught the eye of the Echani Jedi Master Meetra Fenni, who would go on to select him as her apprentice. Eager to impress his new Master, Martius was extremely diligent in his training with Master Fenni, and learned a great deal in a short amount of time. Meetra was impressed enough by Martius' performance that she even began to train him in the Echani martial arts in addition to his Jedi studies.

After learning the basics of the lightsaber forms, Martius decided to focus his studies on Form V Djem So, which he studied with his master and further supplemented with the Echani techniques she taught him, and Form III Soresu, which he learned from the Jedi Battlemaster Cin Drallig alongside a number of other Padawans. When not studying on Coruscant, Martius accompanied his Master on a variety of adventures (and the occasional misadventure) ranging from mediating negotiations to battling pirates in the Outer Rim. While studying for his Trials he also became very interested in Galactic History, particularly when he learned that an ancestor of his named Satele had once been none other than the Grand Master of the Jedi Order. History continued to be a major point of interest for him, even after successfully completing his Trials and becoming a Jedi Knight, to the point that he even once considered becoming a full-fledged Jedi Historian.

The ever growing troubles with the Trade Federation and the increasingly popular separatist movement would, unfortunately, keep him too busy to do so however, and while he still studied as much as he could while in transit or during a rare break, much of the next few years would be spent in skirmishes and (typically unsuccessful) negotiations with the groups. Things would soon come to a head when Martius received a message from his former Master requesting that he join her and her Padawan in a Jedi Strike Team that was being assembled to rescue two Jedi and a Senator who were being held captive on the planet Geonosis. Sadly, though Martius and Meetra both had seen more than their fair share of combat by this point, the small engagements they were accustomed to simply could not prepare them for the scale of combat they would face on that dust-covered world. Though Martius would survive the battle, thanks in large part to ARC Commander Maverick, the clone who would later become his XO, his Master was not so fortunate. In the wake of Meetra's death, Martius began devoting every waking moment to honoring her memory and sacrifice by doing everything in his power to preserve the Republic and the Jedi Order by winning the war they were now faced with, and putting an end to the Separatist uprising once and for all.

The death of Meetra also left her Padawan, Arven Visz, without a Master. Feeling he owed it to his Master to finish the young woman's training, Martius requested to be made Arven's new master and the Council gladly agreed. As the Clone Wars officially began, Martius was made a Jedi General and given command of the 53rd Legion, and new Padawan at his side, he set off to combat the Separatists. His devotion to the cause and desire to find justice for his Master would serve him well over the next two years as he led the 53rd in battles all over the Galaxy: from the crystalline skyscrapers of Christophsis, to the shadow world of Umbara, the dense jungles of Felucia, and most everything in between. Martius, Maverick and the 53rd all fought valiantly in each engagement they found themselves thrust into, and the Jedi General received numerous commendations for his actions in the war.

About a year into the war however, Martius became quite worried about Arven; though she was a good student and progressing well in her training, he noticed a great anger gradually building inside her as she combated the Separatists. No doubt this was due to the death of Meetra, a pain he understood only too well, but as her anger continued to grow unchecked he worried it might draw her towards the dark side. As his methods of emotional control didn't seem to do much to help Arven, he contacted Master Windu to ask if he could help teach his Padawan to better control the darkness growing inside her. After meeting with Arven, Windu agreed to help, and took her under his wing for several months to help train her.

Martius meanwhile was assigned to retake the planet Garos IV in the Mid Rim, and proceeded at once to the world with his Legion. The fighting was brutal, and though Martius was badly injured by Separatist artillery he refused to leave the planet and continued leading his troops from the frontlines. After giving an inspiring speech, Martius personally lead a final push into the enemy's command center, driving the last of the Separatist forces off the world. For his actions on Garos IV, Martius was awarded the Cross of Glory and given a brief leave to recover from his injuries.

Once he'd healed up he was reunited with his Padawan, who thanks to Master Windu's training had managed to get her anger under control. Having successfully accomplished that task, Windu informed her he believed she was ready for her Trials and Martius happily agreed. With her experience in the war, Arven easily passed her Trials after which Martius proudly prepared her for her Knighting Ceremony. A short time later, the High Council informed Martius that, for successfully training a Padawan to Knighthood and his tireless service to the Republic, they were bestowing the title of Jedi Master upon him and promoting him to the rank of Senior Jedi General. Thanks to his extensive study of history, he was also offered a seat on the Council of First Knowledge which he gladly accepted, allowing him access to the Holocron Chamber and Holocron Vault.

Martius studied the incredible knowledge made available to him whenever he could, and took a particular interest in the histories of the ancient conflicts that had been recorded by Master Gnost-Dural. Utilizing the knowledge gained from his studies, Martius adopted new tactics, often preferring surgical strikes and diversionary feint attacks to conventional tactics, which helped lead his Sector Army to numerous victories in the Outer Rim Sieges with minimal casualties.

Everything would soon change for the Jedi however, when he and Maverick were ambushed by a Separatist frigate while en route to Ilum, where Martius was scheduled to meet with a group of younglings to lead them in the Gathering ritual. Though Martius was able to maneuver out of the way of the worst of the enemy fire, his shuttle's shields were still badly damaged, resulting in a failure of the vessel's relativistic shielding that went unnoticed as Martius made an emergency hyperspace jump out of the system and to the pre-set coordinates of Ilum. A few hours later the Jedi and Clone Officer would find themselves in orbit of the icy world, but though the relativistic shield failure didn't interfere with where they arrived, it did interfere with when...

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The APP
Name: CC-1776 "Maverick"
Age: 237 (Biological age: 18, though appears older due to accelerated clone aging)
Gender: Male
Allegiance paid to: The Republic The Jedi Order
Rank: Clone Commander
Appearance:

(Image)

Personality: Born and bred solely for the purpose of making war, Maverick is a soldier through and through. While more independent than many of his brothers, Maverick is still every bit as dedicated, loyal, and honorable, and is a great asset to whatever force in which he serves.
Force Sensitive: No
Skills/Powers: Elite ARC and Clone Commander training, talented tactician, excellent shot, demolitions expert, decent pilot
Weaponry: Phase II Clone ARC armor, jetpack (not always worn), macrobinoculars, breathmask survival gear (not always worn), DC-15LE blaster rifle, 2x DC-17 handblasters, thermal detonators, and EMP grenades
Ship: Same shuttle as Martius
Biography:

Like all Clones, CC-1776 was born on Kamino and cloned from Jango Fett's DNA. Like other Clone Commanders, he had been bred to be more autonomous and intelligent than standard clones, but CC-1776's autonomy ended up being considerably greater than most of the other commanders, and he ended up with an independent streak that earned him the nickname "Maverick." Maverick initially received poor ratings during his basic training due to his difficulty working well with others and his outright refusal on several occasions to follow orders he deemed to be "stupid." Still, his exceptional combat and tactical prowess managed to get him through basic by the skin of his teeth, and when he began his Clone Commander training, he truly excelled. Where many Commanders lost men in simulations while holing up and waiting for orders when presented with a tactical opportunity to outflank the enemy, Maverick's natural independent streak allowed him to press the advantage as soon as it presented itself, regardless of orders. While this might've made him a lousy trooper, it made him an excellent leader, and he passed his Commander training with top marks; leading to his being selected for additional training as an ARC Commander.

He completed his ARC training just in time for the Clone Wars to kick off, and he was selected to be among those in the first wave deployed to Geonosis. His first taste of combat was in the planet's arena, where he destroyed over a dozen droids and helped to extract a Jedi Knight by the name of Martius Shan. Once out of the arena, Maverick and the rest of his regiment landed on the main battlefield, and were placed under Shan's command. Though a formidable combatant, Martius had no prior experience fighting an all-out war, and just instinctively ordered the regiment to launch a frontal assault against the droid forces. Maverick immediately pointed out what a terrible idea that was, and after bringing up a map of the battlefield, pointed out a natural trench along the enemy's left flank which would both provide excellent cover and allow them to outflank the droid forces. Martius wisely listened to Maverick's suggestion, and led the regiment through the trench, where the narrow space further gave him an excellent advantage against the battle droids stationed there.

Once they'd reached a good position, the regiment laid down covering fire for the clone troopers advancing against the droid army, which now found itself caught in a crossfire. The droids were soon ordered into a full retreat, and as they fell back, Martius, Maverick, and the rest of the regiment left the trench to aid the rest of the clone forces which were pushing forward to gun them down. As the battle neared it's end however, a B2 super battle droid managed to get a lucky shot off which hit Maverick directly in the gut. The clone collapsed to the ground in pain, but when the B2 moved in for the kill, Martius jumped directly in front of Maverick and deflected its blaster fire away long enough for him to close in and slice the droid in half. Using his Force heal ability, Martius was able to stabilize Maverick's injury, then carried the clone back across the battlefield to a Medevac transport.

The battle was won, and in the aftermath Martius was given the rank of Jedi General, and placed in command of the 53rd Legion for his actions on the planet, and he quickly chose the now recovered Maverick as his executive officer. The clone had earned the Jedi's trust, and the Jedi had earned the clone's unwavering loyalty. In what little downtime he had, Martius read every text and studied every holocron he could find on the subject of military tactics and strategies, and drilled constantly with Maverick, Arven, and the rest of the 53rd to be as prepared as possible for whatever battles may come. That preparation paid off, and along with the infinitely more valuable lessons that firsthand experience on battlefields throughout the galaxy taught, the two became excellent and well regarded commanders.

After Martius was made a Jedi Master and promoted to Senior Jedi General, the Jedi kept Maverick on as his XO, and thanks to his ARC training the Clone had no difficulty keeping up with Martius as the Jedi began to more frequently use ARC troopers and Clone Commandos in surgical strikes against the Separatists during the Outer Rim Sieges. During this time, Maverick also attended a briefing with a number of other Clone officers during which he met with an old friend from his ARC training days: Captain Rex of the 501st. While talking with Rex, Maverick learned of the inhibitor chips installed in all Clone troopers that Fives had discovered before his death. Maverick was outraged at the news, and with his independent streak as strong as ever, he joined Rex, Wolffe, and Gregor in having his chip removed.

A short time later, Maverick accompanied Martius to the icy-world of Ilum both to serve as Martius' gunner, and to keep an eye on the ship while the Jedi was occupied guiding the younglings in the planet's ice caves. Martius had hoped a quiet trip would give them some time to discuss new strategies and possible training regimen alterations for the troops as well, but as fate would have it, the trip would turn out to be anything but quiet, and a relativistic shield failure would result in them arriving at their destination a little later than expected...

RP Example: viewtopic.php?p=32218354#p32218354
Notes: None

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[Brusia]

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[Atkemri]

The APP
Name: Victar Fel
Age: 36
Gender: Male
Allegiance paid to: Jedi Order
Rank: Jedi Knight
Appearance: (Image)
Personality: Victar is more emotionally connected than most of his fellow Jedi, but he still knows how to remain calm in the face of pressure or otherwise in the presence of an emotional situation. He loves to play jokes with his force abilities despite the chagrin it causes other higher ranking Jedi.
Force Sensitive: (Y/N): No, of course not. What Jedi has Force abilities? (Obvious sarcasm is obvious Yes, he does)
Skills/Powers: Victar has all the ordinary telekinesis and telepathy along with other basic Force abilities like Force speed and Force Leap but also is skilled in Malacia, a rare technique, where the opponent's equilibrium is turned against them causing nausea, but no permanent side effects and Force Valor which increase his and his allies capabilities. As a final force-based Ace in the hole, he can use the Electric Judgement, the less powerful light side replication of Force Lighting powered by the user's sense of justice. He is a practitioner of Form V focusing on the Djem So school of thought and is his main form followed by the Shien form of Form V and he dabbles in Form 2 but isn't proficient in it.
Weaponry: He has a standard Lightsaber with an Azure crystal which produces a blue blade
Ship (If you have one): N/A
Biography: Victar was born on Coruscant as a young Force-sensitive boy and was quickly brought to the attention to the Jedi Order and was brought up as a padawan, learning the ways of the Jedi and personally attempting to hone his force abilities mostly because he was impressed with the Jedi particularly his master Audo which he saw daily. He trained vigorously under him growing great respect for him and was a model student under his tutelage skilled in both the Force and Lightsaber combat, but despite his attempts, he was not yet ready to become a Jedi Knight as he wasn't spiritually ready. He realized that his current reasons for becoming a Jedi (The status) was't a suitable reason to become a Knight and so spent a week in deep meditation with Audo honing his connection to the force and coming out ready for Knightdom with a noticeable attitude adjustment. After his Knighthood was granted Audo took him aside and offered him another lesson about how useful tapping into "other facets of the force" could be. Victar rejected due to his newfound sense of pride, not realizing that he was just offered teachings on how to become a Grey Jedi. He later relented and was taught the Electric Judgement by Audo where he realizing his master was a Grey Jedi. Realizing that he was still on the side of the light he still maintained a relationship with Audo but refused to be taught his ways.

He and his previous master Audo were sent on a mission together early in the war with the coalition to disable an important coalition trade port. The mission was meant to be a stealth mission, but they were discovered when Victar used his force powers to trip a Coalition officer down the stairs. They were quickly discovered and we're drawn into a fierce battle quickly threatening to end both their lives. His master slowly began dipping into the Dark Side of the force using the rage that most Zabrak were raised around. It started slowly with a few uses of Force Lightning, but as the situation became more desperate they became more frequent before he used force rage, irrevocably linking him to the dark side and sending him into a brutal frenzy no longer using form in his attacks, but just slashing through groups causing mass panic in the coalition ranks making it easier for Audo to strike them down while Victar looked on in horror. A few minutes later and what would come to be known among the coalition as the DX-75 Station massacre was over. Victar confronted his master but was only met with the ravenous eyes of a madman who quickly jumped to attack leading to a violent and epic duel being his first of the kind ending with Victar tearfully slicing his former master in half. In his dying words, Audo told Victar told him that he has done well and to continue on the path of the light no matter what tempted him so that he would avoid the fate Audo was in right now. Victar took these words to heart and left the station while the incident was used as anti-Jedi propaganda by the Coalition and severely hurt the reputation of the Jedi Order in the Alliance.

After that, he served as a steadfast member of the order despite criticism about the on the DX-75 station, participating in many missions against the Coalition and gaining a bit of renown for his efforts across the galaxy involved in many smaller combat missions and was a member of the strike force on Commenmor in 182 ABY and was a present failed assault on Eridu. In 189 ABY he was present in the attack on the Telos IV and managed to escape with a few others to Illum, injured from multiple blaster shots causing him to become resentful. Knowing that he is becoming influenced by the Dark Side he spends most days training and mediating as to keep his mind off the feelings of anger he has, but as time goes on he's noticed it becomes less effective...
RP Example :here
Notes: If he has too many force abilities or you want the links to where I got them, I'll fix it.

Well, I added a new paragraph giving him more development. If you want more it'll come tomorrow.

[Elerian]

What kind of character is most needed right now? Coalition, Alliance, Sith, or Jedi?

[The Anarcho-Syndicalist Commune]

The APP
Name: Inera Atala
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Allegiance paid to: The Coalition
Rank: Commander, equivalent rank to a Naval Captain

Appearance:

Personality: Inera is... commanding to say the least. Infected by typical Arkanian arrogance compounded only by her unique heritage and her string of successes as an officer. She demands complete loyalty and expects nothing less of her subordinates. She is incredibly passionate about her work, though what her work is is a matter of debate. What matters to most is that she is loyal to the Coalition.
Force Sensitive: Yes
Skills/Powers: Force/Lightsaber Skills: Force Choke, Mind Trick, and moderate mastery of using a Light Dagger alongside her blaster
General Skills: General Weapons/Demolitions expert, Language master, Poison Mastery, Pilot Skills, and Martial Arts skills

Weaponry: Special Issue Coalition Blaster, similar to that of the Clone Commandos, and a yellow Lightsaber Shoto.
Ship: Devil's Due

Biography: Inera Atala's life begins not as most do. She was not born of a womb, but rather a tank. The Arkanians, since the beginning of time, were masters of genetic manipulation, rivaled only truly by the Kaminoans. Inera represented, in her father's eyes at least, the pinnacle of that genetic achievement. She and her ilk were designed as a new generation of soldier for the Coalition, but Inera and a few other embryos were kept from growing for additional experimentation. It took nearly all the other embryos, but eventually Inera's father achieved what he initially set out to do in his experiments. He managed to stimulate midichlorian counts in an embryo, an embryo that was subsequently grown into Inera.

Inera was not sent like many Arkanian creations to typical training grounds to become a soldier. Instead, she was given over to a group known within the Coalition as the Sectional. The Sectional was a top secret agency within the Foreign Intelligence department based on the Imperial Intelligence division of the heydey of the Galactic Empire. Their goal was to train black ops intelligence operatives who would be able to strike deep within the alliance without ever being caught. Almost all initial members like Inera were genetically engineered projects, each of whom had their own specific strengths. The first 16 years of Inera's life were spent in a secret facility on Hoth. Here she was trained in almost all arts of subterfuge that the Coalition could think of, as well as being taught to hone her inherent connection to the force.

Upon reaching the age of sixteen, Inera and her fellow initiates were declared the first Sectional Agent class and deployed in the war, though their impact was not initially felt. Though they were useful in eliminating republic leaders and obtaining intelligence, their cost-benefit could not really be seen over standard commandos and spies. Indeed, by her nineteenth birthday, Inera was one of only three of the "Martyrs", as her class would come to be know, still standing. However, as the war entered, Inera and her compatriots true use became apparent. With the increase in anti-jedi rhetoric, Inera became an invaluable asset as a Jedi Hunter, being used tactically to eliminate the enemy's greatest weapon in the field.

Inera's next few years were spent performing the assassinations of several Jedi orators and performing false flag operations across the Alliance. It was in this time that she retrieved her own lightsaber from the corpse of a Jedi she slew. Though the blade was small for her, no bigger than a glorified dagger, Inera quickly taught herself how to use it in close quarters combat along with her blaster, and it has remained a main stay of her style ever since. With the signing of the Vulpter Armistice, Inera's role as a Jedi Hunter became a lot less shadowy, and she became feared across the former Alliance space that the Coalition took over as one of the most brutal jedi hunters alive, being one of the key players at Telos IV, bringing down a key shield generator that allowed the bulk of Coalition/Alliance forces to storm the Jedi position.

Following the War, the role of the Sectional was hotly debated, though it did not stop the agencies activities. Inera's role became a lot more vague, and though she was technically stationed in the Alliance on a long term undercover operation, the manner of her missions was up to her. As such, Inera took to a pursuit she believed was greatly in the interest of the Coalition, uncovering and decoding abandoned Jedi data centers across the Alliance. Meanwhile, on the home front, the Leader of the Sectional secured his position by taking advantage of the bombings to take out a few rivals of his own. Inera's most recent orders were to come undercover to the Crucible, in order to perform any actions that may be deemed necessary during treaty negotiations.
RP Example: viewtopic.php?f=31&t=438901&p=36031892&hilit=henry#p36031892

Notes: Inera's rank is listed

[Endem]

The APP
Name: Amnal Kehy
Age: 25
Gender: M
Allegiance paid to Sith, Previously Jedi Order
Rank: Apprentice
Appearance:

(Image)

Personality: Prone to emotional outbursts, in which he experiences a wide range of emotions, all the way from overwhelming sadness to blind rage, at other times he is a serious and cold person
Force Sensitive: Y
Skills/Powers: Form IV "Ataru", Force Push and Force Jump from normal Force Powers, but the Dark Side Powers are Force Choke and Force Rage
Weaponry: a Red Lightsaber and a Green Lightsaber
Ship: no, but his master has one ( I don't know what types there are, sorry )
Biography: Born in 175 ABY on Vaklin, he had a neglectful family unfortunately which resulted in his personality having such mood swings, fortunately for him, he showed his force sensitivity just as a Jedi was passing by his town in 176 ABY, he was taken to a Jedi temple soon afterward where he was a Youngling, however by the time of Vulpter Armistice he just became a Padawan, probably the last one, at the age of 15.

In 189 he and his master managed to avoid the massacre on Telos IV, but by a close call, since then until 193 ABY when they were cornered by people who appeared as officials, they were surrounded in a building with his master trying to calm him down, which only had an opposite effect, eventually he didn't manage to hold it and in a burst of blind rage he slammed his master against the wall after which he killed his master with a force choke, then he calmed down and saw what he just did, after that someone put a hand on his shoulder and said " Congratulations, You just made your sacrifice", Amnal still shocked walked along the mysterious person onto the outside of the building, where some officials laid dead.

Since then he was an apprentice of a Sith that since then tried to train him in many Dark Force abilities, so far he has managed to master Force Choke and Force Rage throughout the journey for him to become a fully-fledged Sith, why he agreed, because he couldn't hold his emotions any longer, because he tasted the dark side, manipulation, perhaps all and even more
RP Example:
Notes: Nah

Similar request here. Could you add more detail to your bio?
Also, the middle paragraph there is essentially one long sentence. Could you break it up a bit?

Alright, just specify how many paragraphs should be added

[Endem]

The APP
Name: Amnal Kehy
Age: 25
Gender: M
Allegiance paid to Sith, Previously Jedi Order
Rank: Apprentice
Appearance:

(Image)

Personality: Prone to emotional outbursts, in which he experiences a wide range of emotions, all the way from overwhelming sadness to blind rage, at other times he is a serious and cold person
Force Sensitive: Y
Skills/Powers: Form IV "Ataru", Force Push and Force Jump from normal Force Powers, but the Dark Side Powers are Force Choke, Force Rage and Force Rend
Weaponry: a Red Lightsaber and a Green Lightsaber
Ship: no, but his master has one ( I don't know what types there are, sorry )
Biography: Born in 175 ABY on Vaklin, he had a neglectful and sometimes outright abusive family, for 7 years his anger grew at his father, his father, an drunkard, when he got drunk he would become angry, and when he was angry he would beat his son. In this state his various mood swings formed, sometimes he gone through his father's beating him with remarkable stoicism, which only made his father more angry, sometimes he would simply curl up, sometimes he would laugh histerically and sonetimes he would get angry himself and try to counter attack, usually to no success. Until his force sensitivity showed very late in his life, but, oncee in 182 he just slammed his father against the wall with just a move of his hand, and he would probably continue on if not for a Jedi passing nearby, one Kareh Vunns.

Kareh, saved Amnal's father and seeing the force in Amnal rescued him from his family and life on Vaklin. Amnal was taken into training, progressing among other Younglings rapidly, which was unusual given his age, and how late he showed his force sensitivity, but he progressed into becoming a Padawan in 187 ABY after medidating for a long time in Ilum just a few months before the Armstice. He was probably the last Padawan to go through this process when Jedi Order was still legal, his blade turned out to be a blue one, but, unlike others, it was unstable, pulsating with energy, and his master became the one that saved his father, Kareh Vunns.

For a few months before the Armstice, Kareh and Amnal made a bond akin to this of father and son, Kareh always had the right words to calm Amnal down, and Amnal looked up to Kareh as the moral compass he lacked for most of his life. But then it came, Vulpter Armstice, after that Kareh along with Amnal were on the run. In 189 ABY on Telos IV they miraculously survived, presumed dead they managed to escape the world of Telos IV that saw yet another Jedi Purge.

But this run of theirs ended in 192 ABY where Kareh and Amnal were cornered in an old building by the Coalition officials, they knew they were dead, yet, Kareh still cared about his Padawan, he still attempted to calm him down, but this only resulted in Amnal becoming angry. Then in a stressful response Kareh grabbed Amnal and started shaking him, not knowing why his master was behaving like this and having flashbacks of his father he slammed his Master against the wall, for which a figure unknowingly to everyone watched the whole scene waited for. After Kareh slammed into the wall nearly breaking it Amnal was unable to stop himself and choked his master to death using force.

After Kareh's lifeless body fallen onto the floor Amnal collapsed as well, crying, after he just killed his master and who he considered his father, soon, Kareh's body disappeared, Amnal presumed it disappeared into the Force ( far from thruth actually ) as Amnal picked up his Master's Ligthsaber, and then a mysterious figure put it's hand on Amnal shoulder and said "Congratulations, you just made your sacrifice". They then walked out of the building with bodies of Coalition officials, those that were supposed to kill him and Kareh.

The Figure soon revealed itself as a Sith, he never learned the Sith's name, simply calling him Master, thus you can easily conclude Amnal became the Sith's apprentice, maybe by Manipulation, maybe because Amnal tasted the power of the Dark Side, or something entirely else. Master taught Amnal about many Dark Side powers, by 200 ABY he mastered Force Choke, Force Rage and Force Rend, and still training him in various much more, destructive techniques, usually on unsuspecting anything civilians.
RPIExample:

I guess it's best to go with a Example from a Star Wars RP

Notes: Nah

Also, rewritten the bio

[Atkemri]

What kind of character is most needed right now? Coalition, Alliance, Sith, or Jedi?

Probably Alliance or coalition. Jedi too, but less so

[Jedi Council]

The APP
Name: Victar Fel
Age: 36
Gender: Male
Allegiance paid to: Jedi Order
Rank: Jedi Knight
Appearance: (Image)
Personality: Victar is more emotionally connected than most of his fellow Jedi, but he still knows how to remain calm in the face of pressure or otherwise in the presence of an emotional situation. He loves to play jokes with his force abilities despite the chagrin it causes other higher ranking Jedi.
Force Sensitive: (Y/N): No, of course not. What Jedi has Force abilities? (Obvious sarcasm is obvious Yes, he does)
Skills/Powers: Victar has all the ordinary telekinesis and telepathy along with other basic Force abilities like Force speed and Force Leap but also is skilled in Malacia, a rare technique, where the opponent's equilibrium is turned against them causing nausea, but no permanent side effects and Force Valor which increase his and his allies capabilities. As a final force-based Ace in the hole, he can use the Electric Judgement, the less powerful light side replication of Force Lighting powered by the user's sense of justice. He is a practitioner of Form V focusing on the Djem So school of thought and is his main form followed by the Shien form of Form V and he dabbles in Form 2 but isn't proficient in it.
Weaponry: He has a standard Lightsaber with an Azure crystal which produces a blue blade
Ship (If you have one): N/A
Biography: Victar was born on Coruscant as a young Force-sensitive boy and was quickly brought to the attention to the Jedi Order and was brought up as a padawan, learning the ways of the Jedi and personally attempting to hone his force abilities mostly because he was impressed with the Jedi particularly his master Audo which he saw daily. He trained vigorously under him growing great respect for him and was a model student under his tutelage skilled in both the Force and Lightsaber combat, but despite his attempts, he was not yet ready to become a Jedi Knight as he wasn't spiritually ready. He realized that his current reasons for becoming a Jedi (The status) was't a suitable reason to become a Knight and so spent a week in deep meditation with Audo honing his connection to the force and coming out ready for Knightdom with a noticeable attitude adjustment. After his Knighthood was granted Audo took him aside and offered him another lesson about how useful tapping into "other facets of the force" could be. Victar rejected due to his newfound sense of pride, not realizing that he was just offered teachings on how to become a Grey Jedi. He later relented and was taught the Electric Judgement by Audo where he realizing his master was a Grey Jedi. Realizing that he was still on the side of the light he still maintained a relationship with Audo but refused to be taught his ways.

He and his previous master Audo were sent on a mission together early in the war with the coalition to disable an important coalition trade port. The mission was meant to be a stealth mission, but they were discovered when Victar used his force powers to trip a Coalition officer down the stairs. They were quickly discovered and we're drawn into a fierce battle quickly threatening to end both their lives. His master slowly began dipping into the Dark Side of the force using the rage that most Zabrak were raised around. It started slowly with a few uses of Force Lightning, but as the situation became more desperate they became more frequent before he used force rage, irrevocably linking him to the dark side and sending him into a brutal frenzy no longer using form in his attacks, but just slashing through groups causing mass panic in the coalition ranks making it easier for Audo to strike them down while Victar looked on in horror. A few minutes later and what would come to be known among the coalition as the DX-75 Station massacre was over. Victar confronted his master but was only met with the ravenous eyes of a madman who quickly jumped to attack leading to a violent and epic duel being his first of the kind ending with Victar tearfully slicing his former master in half. In his dying words, Audo told Victar told him that he has done well and to continue on the path of the light no matter what tempted him so that he would avoid the fate Audo was in right now. Victar took these words to heart and left the station while the incident was used as anti-Jedi propaganda by the Coalition and severely hurt the reputation of the Jedi Order in the Alliance.

After that, he served as a steadfast member of the order despite criticism about the on the DX-75 station, participating in many missions against the Coalition and gaining a bit of renown for his efforts across the galaxy involved in many smaller combat missions and was a member of the strike force on Commenmor in 182 ABY and was a present failed assault on Eridu. In 189 ABY he was present in the attack on the Telos IV and managed to escape with a few others to Illum, injured from multiple blaster shots causing him to become resentful. Knowing that he is becoming influenced by the Dark Side he spends most days training and mediating as to keep his mind off the feelings of anger he has, but as time goes on he's noticed it becomes less effective...
RP Example :here
Notes: If he has too many force abilities or you want the links to where I got them, I'll fix it.

Well, I added a new paragraph giving him more development. If you want more it'll come tomorrow.

Much better, thank you.
Accepted

What kind of character is most needed right now? Coalition, Alliance, Sith, or Jedi?

We are doing fine with Force Users at the moment. A non-force member of the Aliance or Coalition would be great

[Jedi Council]

The APP
Name: Inera Atala
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Allegiance paid to: The Coalition
Rank: Commander, equivalent rank to a Naval Captain

Appearance:

(Image)

Personality: Inera is... commanding to say the least. Infected by typical Arkanian arrogance compounded only by her unique heritage and her string of successes as an officer. She demands complete loyalty and expects nothing less of her subordinates. She is incredibly passionate about her work, though what her work is is a matter of debate. What matters to most is that she is loyal to the Coalition.
Force Sensitive: Yes
Skills/Powers: Force/Lightsaber Skills: Force Choke, Mind Trick, and moderate mastery of using a Light Dagger alongside her blaster
General Skills: General Weapons/Demolitions expert, Language master, Poison Mastery, Pilot Skills, and Martial Arts skills

Weaponry: Special Issue Coalition Blaster, similar to that of the Clone Commandos, and a yellow Lightsaber Shoto.
Ship: Devil's Due

Biography: Inera Atala's life begins not as most do. She was not born of a womb, but rather a tank. The Arkanians, since the beginning of time, were masters of genetic manipulation, rivaled only truly by the Kaminoans. Inera represented, in her father's eyes at least, the pinnacle of that genetic achievement. She and her ilk were designed as a new generation of soldier for the Coalition, but Inera and a few other embryos were kept from growing for additional experimentation. It took nearly all the other embryos, but eventually Inera's father achieved what he initially set out to do in his experiments. He managed to stimulate midichlorian counts in an embryo, an embryo that was subsequently grown into Inera.

Inera was not sent like many Arkanian creations to typical training grounds to become a soldier. Instead, she was given over to a group known within the Coalition as the Sectional. The Sectional was a top secret agency within the Foreign Intelligence department based on the Imperial Intelligence division of the heydey of the Galactic Empire. Their goal was to train black ops intelligence operatives who would be able to strike deep within the alliance without ever being caught. Almost all initial members like Inera were genetically engineered projects, each of whom had their own specific strengths. The first 16 years of Inera's life were spent in a secret facility on Hoth. Here she was trained in almost all arts of subterfuge that the Coalition could think of, as well as being taught to hone her inherent connection to the force.

Upon reaching the age of sixteen, Inera and her fellow initiates were declared the first Sectional Agent class and deployed in the war, though their impact was not initially felt. Though they were useful in eliminating republic leaders and obtaining intelligence, their cost-benefit could not really be seen over standard commandos and spies. Indeed, by her nineteenth birthday, Inera was one of only three of the "Martyrs", as her class would come to be know, still standing. However, as the war entered, Inera and her compatriots true use became apparent. With the increase in anti-jedi rhetoric, Inera became an invaluable asset as a Jedi Hunter, being used tactically to eliminate the enemy's greatest weapon in the field.

Inera's next few years were spent performing the assassinations of several Jedi orators and performing false flag operations across the Alliance. It was in this time that she retrieved her own lightsaber from the corpse of a Jedi she slew. Though the blade was small for her, no bigger than a glorified dagger, Inera quickly taught herself how to use it in close quarters combat along with her blaster, and it has remained a main stay of her style ever since. With the signing of the Vulpter Armistice, Inera's role as a Jedi Hunter became a lot less shadowy, and she became feared across the former Alliance space that the Coalition took over as one of the most brutal jedi hunters alive, being one of the key players at Telos IV, bringing down a key shield generator that allowed the bulk of Coalition/Alliance forces to storm the Jedi position.

Following the War, the role of the Sectional was hotly debated, though it did not stop the agencies activities. Inera's role became a lot more vague, and though she was technically stationed in the Alliance on a long term undercover operation, the manner of her missions was up to her. As such, Inera took to a pursuit she believed was greatly in the interest of the Coalition, uncovering and decoding abandoned Jedi data centers across the Alliance. Meanwhile, on the home front, the Leader of the Sectional secured his position by taking advantage of the bombings to take out a few rivals of his own. Inera's most recent orders were to come undercover to the Crucible, in order to perform any actions that may be deemed necessary during treaty negotiations.
RP Example: viewtopic.php?f=31&t=438901&p=36031892&hilit=henry#p36031892

Notes: Inera's rank is listed

Interesting idea.
Just to clarify though, her force abilities are not public knowledge correct?
Also, I would have to assume that she is not as skilled in the force as say a Jedi or Sith might be.

[The Anarcho-Syndicalist Commune]

The APP
Name: Inera Atala
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Allegiance paid to: The Coalition
Rank: Commander, equivalent rank to a Naval Captain

Appearance:

(Image)

Personality: Inera is... commanding to say the least. Infected by typical Arkanian arrogance compounded only by her unique heritage and her string of successes as an officer. She demands complete loyalty and expects nothing less of her subordinates. She is incredibly passionate about her work, though what her work is is a matter of debate. What matters to most is that she is loyal to the Coalition.
Force Sensitive: Yes
Skills/Powers: Force/Lightsaber Skills: Force Choke, Mind Trick, and moderate mastery of using a Light Dagger alongside her blaster
General Skills: General Weapons/Demolitions expert, Language master, Poison Mastery, Pilot Skills, and Martial Arts skills

Weaponry: Special Issue Coalition Blaster, similar to that of the Clone Commandos, and a yellow Lightsaber Shoto.
Ship: Devil's Due

Biography: Inera Atala's life begins not as most do. She was not born of a womb, but rather a tank. The Arkanians, since the beginning of time, were masters of genetic manipulation, rivaled only truly by the Kaminoans. Inera represented, in her father's eyes at least, the pinnacle of that genetic achievement. She and her ilk were designed as a new generation of soldier for the Coalition, but Inera and a few other embryos were kept from growing for additional experimentation. It took nearly all the other embryos, but eventually Inera's father achieved what he initially set out to do in his experiments. He managed to stimulate midichlorian counts in an embryo, an embryo that was subsequently grown into Inera.

Inera was not sent like many Arkanian creations to typical training grounds to become a soldier. Instead, she was given over to a group known within the Coalition as the Sectional. The Sectional was a top secret agency within the Foreign Intelligence department based on the Imperial Intelligence division of the heydey of the Galactic Empire. Their goal was to train black ops intelligence operatives who would be able to strike deep within the alliance without ever being caught. Almost all initial members like Inera were genetically engineered projects, each of whom had their own specific strengths. The first 16 years of Inera's life were spent in a secret facility on Hoth. Here she was trained in almost all arts of subterfuge that the Coalition could think of, as well as being taught to hone her inherent connection to the force.

Upon reaching the age of sixteen, Inera and her fellow initiates were declared the first Sectional Agent class and deployed in the war, though their impact was not initially felt. Though they were useful in eliminating republic leaders and obtaining intelligence, their cost-benefit could not really be seen over standard commandos and spies. Indeed, by her nineteenth birthday, Inera was one of only three of the "Martyrs", as her class would come to be know, still standing. However, as the war entered, Inera and her compatriots true use became apparent. With the increase in anti-jedi rhetoric, Inera became an invaluable asset as a Jedi Hunter, being used tactically to eliminate the enemy's greatest weapon in the field.

Inera's next few years were spent performing the assassinations of several Jedi orators and performing false flag operations across the Alliance. It was in this time that she retrieved her own lightsaber from the corpse of a Jedi she slew. Though the blade was small for her, no bigger than a glorified dagger, Inera quickly taught herself how to use it in close quarters combat along with her blaster, and it has remained a main stay of her style ever since. With the signing of the Vulpter Armistice, Inera's role as a Jedi Hunter became a lot less shadowy, and she became feared across the former Alliance space that the Coalition took over as one of the most brutal jedi hunters alive, being one of the key players at Telos IV, bringing down a key shield generator that allowed the bulk of Coalition/Alliance forces to storm the Jedi position.

Following the War, the role of the Sectional was hotly debated, though it did not stop the agencies activities. Inera's role became a lot more vague, and though she was technically stationed in the Alliance on a long term undercover operation, the manner of her missions was up to her. As such, Inera took to a pursuit she believed was greatly in the interest of the Coalition, uncovering and decoding abandoned Jedi data centers across the Alliance. Meanwhile, on the home front, the Leader of the Sectional secured his position by taking advantage of the bombings to take out a few rivals of his own. Inera's most recent orders were to come undercover to the Crucible, in order to perform any actions that may be deemed necessary during treaty negotiations.
RP Example: viewtopic.php?f=31&t=438901&p=36031892&hilit=henry#p36031892

Notes: Inera's rank is listed

Interesting idea.
Just to clarify though, her force abilities are not public knowledge correct?
Also, I would have to assume that she is not as skilled in the force as say a Jedi or Sith might be.

Yes on both counts.

[Jedi Council]

Interesting idea.
Just to clarify though, her force abilities are not public knowledge correct?
Also, I would have to assume that she is not as skilled in the force as say a Jedi or Sith might be.

Yes on both counts.

Perfect, you are accepted

[Elerian]

The APP
Name: Leon Tchaikovsky

Age: 62

Gender: Male

Allegiance paid to: Coalition

Rank: Admiral

Personality: Lawful Evil

Force Sensitive: N

Skills/Powers: Strategy, Marksmanship, COIN

Weaponry: Blaster pistol

Ship: The Pellaeon-class Star Destroyer, Shadow of Doubt

Biography: Unlike many in the upper echelons of the Coalition’s Admiralty, Leon was born neither rich, nor anywhere near their center of power. Leon was born in the outer colonies on the world of Telos, but he longed to live on a richer and greener world. One night while his parents slept, Leon ran away from his home and made his way to the nearest ship dock with the hope of sneaking aboard a freighter and getting away from his homeworld. Leon managed to make his way to the ship dock and hide between two crates. At that point, Leon experienced "cold feet" and decided to return home.

However, Leon encountered several members of a local criminal gang, who dealt in Spice and human trafficking. They trapped him and attempted to abduct him. Fortunately for Leon, a passing dock constable managed to chase off the thugs and Leon took the opportunity to flee home. He never told his parents about the incident but never gave up his desire to leave Telos. When a passing Coalition fleet cleared out much of the filth and other criminal groups on his world, this convinced Leon that he would Enlist in the Coalition Navy.

Shortly thereafter, Leon found himself at the Coalition’s premiere Naval Academy. Leon threw himself into his studies, and before long proved himself a capable tactician. His greatest failing during his time at the Academy was his lack of networking. While he got along well with colleagues that held a similar background to himself, he found it difficult to relate to the more affluent and influential students. This would come back to bite him time and again in the future. Despite being in the upper middle of the pack, he was passed over for many of the more prestigious and desirable postings by his social betters. This infuriated Leon to no end, and he would carry a chip on his shoulder through the rest of his career.

For many years, Leon would toil in obscurity. Often lagging behind his peers when it came to promotions, largely because the brass disliked him. By the time many of his friends had earned his first captaincy, Leon was still an Executive Officer. This prompted Leon to work tirelessly to prove himself so as not to be left behind. It would, however, still be sometime before his talent was realized.

When finally Leon made the rank of Captain, he was spurned again by being placed in a particularly dangerous and undesirable corner of space. A place in which careers went to die. Despite this, and the incompetence of those under his command. Over the next several years Leon managed to shape up his crew and bring some semblance of order to the region. But, his time in the far reaches of the galaxy had an adverse effect on Leon. He became a hardened man, and it was reflected in many of his future actions.

Seeing the potential in posting Leon to lawless regions to shape them into productive corners of the Galaxy, the higher ups saw fit to promote him to Commodore. For the next decade, Leon spent his time in the outer reaches of civilization, fighting pirates and suppressing rebellions. The exact opposite of what he’d dreamed for all those years ago. Rather than complain, Leon took his anger out on the outer colonies. And while his methods were certainly questionable, his effectiveness was unquestionable.

By the time he was honored with a promotion to Admiral, the name Tchaikovsky was feared all throughout the Outer Regions. The mere threat of bringing Leon into the region was enough to scatter criminal rackets, send pirates cowering, and make secessionists think twice about rebelling. Recently, Leon has put his counter-terrorist mantle behind him. Instead, he focuses his time and burgeoning influence on preparing for the war with the Alliance, that he sees as inevitable.

RP Example: https://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopic.php?p=34419616#p34419616

Notes: One of Leon’s most well known monikers is the Butcher of Jubilar. During his career as a Commodore, Leon was faced with an unyielding rebellion on the planet of Jubilar. Sending in his own forces to clean up the rebellion would have been incredibly costly, so he sent them a simple message asking only once for their surrender, or they would be liquidated. Thinking he was bluffing, the rebels refused. True to his word, Leon ordered his fleet to fire on Jubilar. Eliminating the rebels, but also causing significant collateral damage. While the Coalition tried to cover up the massacre, it is still a widely circulated story attesting to Leon’s callousness and the Coalition’s negligence.

[Endem]

The APP
Name: Amnal Kehy
Age: 25
Gender: M
Allegiance paid to Sith, Previously Jedi Order
Rank: Apprentice
Appearance:

(Image)

Personality: Prone to emotional outbursts, in which he experiences a wide range of emotions, all the way from overwhelming sadness to blind rage, at other times he is a serious and cold person
Force Sensitive: Y
Skills/Powers: Form IV "Ataru", Force Push and Force Jump from normal Force Powers, but the Dark Side Powers are Force Choke, Force Rage and Force Rend
Weaponry: a Red Lightsaber and a Green Lightsaber
Ship: no, but his master has one ( I don't know what types there are, sorry )
Biography: Born in 175 ABY on Vaklin, he had a neglectful and sometimes outright abusive family, for 7 years his anger grew at his father, his father, an drunkard, when he got drunk he would become angry, and when he was angry he would beat his son. In this state his various mood swings formed, sometimes he gone through his father's beating him with remarkable stoicism, which only made his father more angry, sometimes he would simply curl up, sometimes he would laugh histerically and sonetimes he would get angry himself and try to counter attack, usually to no success. Until his force sensitivity showed very late in his life, but, oncee in 182 he just slammed his father against the wall with just a move of his hand, and he would probably continue on if not for a Jedi passing nearby, one Kareh Vunns.

Kareh, saved Amnal's father and seeing the force in Amnal rescued him from his family and life on Vaklin. Amnal was taken into training, progressing among other Younglings rapidly, which was unusual given his age, and how late he showed his force sensitivity, but he progressed into becoming a Padawan in 187 ABY after medidating for a long time in Ilum just a few months before the Armstice. He was probably the last Padawan to go through this process when Jedi Order was still legal, his blade turned out to be a blue one, but, unlike others, it was unstable, pulsating with energy, and his master became the one that saved his father, Kareh Vunns.

For a few months before the Armstice, Kareh and Amnal made a bond akin to this of father and son, Kareh always had the right words to calm Amnal down, and Amnal looked up to Kareh as the moral compass he lacked for most of his life. But then it came, Vulpter Armstice, after that Kareh along with Amnal were on the run. In 189 ABY on Telos IV they miraculously survived, presumed dead they managed to escape the world of Telos IV that saw yet another Jedi Purge.

But this run of theirs ended in 192 ABY where Kareh and Amnal were cornered in an old building by the Coalition officials, they knew they were dead, yet, Kareh still cared about his Padawan, he still attempted to calm him down, but this only resulted in Amnal becoming angry. Then in a stressful response Kareh grabbed Amnal and started shaking him, not knowing why his master was behaving like this and having flashbacks of his father he slammed his Master against the wall, for which a figure unknowingly to everyone watched the whole scene waited for. After Kareh slammed into the wall nearly breaking it Amnal was unable to stop himself and choked his master to death using force.

After Kareh's lifeless body fallen onto the floor Amnal collapsed as well, crying, after he just killed his master and who he considered his father, soon, Kareh's body disappeared, Amnal presumed it disappeared into the Force ( far from thruth actually ) as Amnal picked up his Master's Ligthsaber, and then a mysterious figure put it's hand on Amnal shoulder and said "Congratulations, you just made your sacrifice". They then walked out of the building with bodies of Coalition officials, those that were supposed to kill him and Kareh.

The Figure soon revealed itself as a Sith, he never learned the Sith's name, simply calling him Master, thus you can easily conclude Amnal became the Sith's apprentice, maybe by Manipulation, maybe because Amnal tasted the power of the Dark Side, or something entirely else. Master taught Amnal about many Dark Side powers, by 200 ABY he mastered Force Choke, Force Rage and Force Rend, and still training him in various much more, destructive techniques, usually on unsuspecting anything civilians, yet, a glimmer of hope still remains, if only he would come under the watchful eye of the Jedi and the Light Side.
RPIExample:
Notes: Nah

Made a small change

[The Orson Empire]

What kind of character is most needed right now? Coalition, Alliance, Sith, or Jedi?

Probably Alliance or coalition. Jedi too, but less so

I'm thinking of setting up an app for the leader of the Galactic Alliance. I've got an idea for a Machiavellian-esque politician from Umbara, after reading up on their culture on the wiki.

[Dentali]

Probably Alliance or coalition. Jedi too, but less so

I'm thinking of setting up an app for the leader of the Galactic Alliance. I've got an idea for a Machiavellian-esque politician from Umbara, after reading up on their culture on the wiki.

I already reserved that

[Dentali]

The APP
Name: Bren Katar
Age: 67
Gender: Bothan
Allegiance paid to: Alliance
Rank: Grand Admiral of the Alliance
Appearance (Picture preferred, if not, detailed description accepted):
Personality: Cold, Calculating, Perceptive,
Force Sensitive: (Y/N) N
Skills/Powers: Strategy, Logistics, Tactics, Reading people, Subterfuge, training and inspiring individuals
Weaponry: Pistol
Ship (If you have one): “The Organa” Viscount-Class Star Defender

Biography:
Bren Katar was born on the Bothan colony and industrial center of Kothlis to a low upper class merchant family in 133 ABY. He was an exceptionally bright but awkward young man and the third of 5 brothers, he realized he would not inherit the family industrial business so instead entered the armed forces.

He attended the Republic Navy War College on Anaxes in 152 ABY and his life was totally changed. His awkward disposition gave way to a life of obedience, discipline and loyalty. He eventually graduated near the top of his class and was commissioned as an officer aboard a cruiser in 156 ABY. Within a year he had distinguished himself in combat in a skirmish outside Hutt Space and was assigned temporary command of a corvette to hunt down pirates.

In 158 ABY he was given formal command of a Corvette in a battlegroup fighting against Imperial Warlord fleets. He continued to perform well, often leading scouting expeditions and raids deep into enemy territory targeting key infrastructure. In 161 ABY he was present at the defeat of the Alliance forces invading Imperial Space at Bonosk during which he sacrificed his ship to save a portion of the fleet. He survived and after a brief hospitalization he returned to active duty commanding a brand new Cruiser in 162 ABY, he was heavily involved in combat with the new Coalition forces most famously leading a daring raid on Mygeeto that heavily damaged Coalition industrial capacity, and for his actions defending Ord Cantrell against invasion.

Peacetime saw Katar continued to climb through the ranks, participating in a skirmish against the Hutts and being deployed at various hotspots until the outbreak of the next war with the coalition in 173 ABY. Taking command of a Battle Group in the Mid-Rim, Katar was chronically underfunded as the war engulfed the Core worlds. Tasked with defending an area including Hapes, Onderon and Kshyyyk, Bren Katar relied heavily on local militias to defend the sector and the Perlemian Trade Route. Eventually being promoted to command an entire fleet and being promoted to Fleet Admiral.

Katar would frequently make use of slow fighting retreats coupled with lightning raids to destabilize the forces of the Coalition, keeping them off balance and working with Jedi allies to misdirect the enemy. But the writing was on the wall and by 180 ABY he was defending Commenor with his Jedi allies in the Core Worlds. Thanks to their bravery a massive force of Coalition troops and ships was caught in a trap and destroyed in 182 ABY. He personally decorated a number of Jedi who fought in the battle and was featured in several propaganda campaigns as a hero of the Alliance.

Katar continued to protect the Core Worlds, suffering defeat and victory but in general holding the line and not giving an inch, in some cases even regaining ground. More than anything, he continued to make lightning raids into Coalition territory, frustrating their advance.

In 187 ABY Katar resigned his commission in protest of the Vulpter Armistice for its treatment of the Jedi Order. He is rumored to have even used his family fortune to smuggle Jedi into places to hide. In 195 ABY the assassination of the Chancellor of the Alliance, Katar was called back into service by the new government in order to calm escalating fears. He was appointed as Grand Admiral of the Galactic Alliance (essentially the Secretary of Defense), he made it clear his position that the Jedi be given pardons and re-integrated as part of the Alliance though not in a command role. Regardless he has been preparing the Alliance for war to the best of his ability.


RP Example:
Notes:

[Jedi Council]

The APP
Name: Leon Tchaikovsky

Age: 62

Gender: Male

Allegiance paid to: Coalition

Rank: Admiral

(Image)

Personality: Lawful Evil

Force Sensitive: N

Skills/Powers: Strategy, Marksmanship, COIN

Weaponry: Blaster pistol

Ship: The Pellaeon-class Star Destroyer, Shadow of Doubt

Biography: Unlike many in the upper echelons of the Coalition’s Admiralty, Leon was born neither rich, nor anywhere near their center of power. Leon was born in the outer colonies on the world of Telos, but he longed to live on a richer and greener world. One night while his parents slept, Leon ran away from his home and made his way to the nearest ship dock with the hope of sneaking aboard a freighter and getting away from his homeworld. Leon managed to make his way to the ship dock and hide between two crates. At that point, Leon experienced "cold feet" and decided to return home.

However, Leon encountered several members of a local criminal gang, who dealt in Spice and human trafficking. They trapped him and attempted to abduct him. Fortunately for Leon, a passing dock constable managed to chase off the thugs and Leon took the opportunity to flee home. He never told his parents about the incident but never gave up his desire to leave Telos. When a passing Coalition fleet cleared out much of the filth and other criminal groups on his world, this convinced Leon that he would Enlist in the Coalition Navy.

Shortly thereafter, Leon found himself at the Coalition’s premiere Naval Academy. Leon threw himself into his studies, and before long proved himself a capable tactician. His greatest failing during his time at the Academy was his lack of networking. While he got along well with colleagues that held a similar background to himself, he found it difficult to relate to the more affluent and influential students. This would come back to bite him time and again in the future. Despite being in the upper middle of the pack, he was passed over for many of the more prestigious and desirable postings by his social betters. This infuriated Leon to no end, and he would carry a chip on his shoulder through the rest of his career.

For many years, Leon would toil in obscurity. Often lagging behind his peers when it came to promotions, largely because the brass disliked him. By the time many of his friends had earned his first captaincy, Leon was still an Executive Officer. This prompted Leon to work tirelessly to prove himself so as not to be left behind. It would, however, still be sometime before his talent was realized.

When finally Leon made the rank of Captain, he was spurned again by being placed in a particularly dangerous and undesirable corner of space. A place in which careers went to die. Despite this, and the incompetence of those under his command. Over the next several years Leon managed to shape up his crew and bring some semblance of order to the region. But, his time in the far reaches of the galaxy had an adverse effect on Leon. He became a hardened man, and it was reflected in many of his future actions.

Seeing the potential in posting Leon to lawless regions to shape them into productive corners of the Galaxy, the higher ups saw fit to promote him to Commodore. For the next decade, Leon spent his time in the outer reaches of civilization, fighting pirates and suppressing rebellions. The exact opposite of what he’d dreamed for all those years ago. Rather than complain, Leon took his anger out on the outer colonies. And while his methods were certainly questionable, his effectiveness was unquestionable.

By the time he was honored with a promotion to Admiral, the name Tchaikovsky was feared all throughout the Outer Regions. The mere threat of bringing Leon into the region was enough to scatter criminal rackets, send pirates cowering, and make secessionists think twice about rebelling. Recently, Leon has put his counter-terrorist mantle behind him. Instead, he focuses his time and burgeoning influence on preparing for the war with the Alliance, that he sees as inevitable.

RP Example: https://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopic.php?p=34419616#p34419616

Notes: One of Leon’s most well known monikers is the Butcher of Jubilar. During his career as a Commodore, Leon was faced with an unyielding rebellion on the planet of Jubilar. Sending in his own forces to clean up the rebellion would have been incredibly costly, so he sent them a simple message asking only once for their surrender, or they would be liquidated. Thinking he was bluffing, the rebels refused. True to his word, Leon ordered his fleet to fire on Jubilar. Eliminating the rebels, but also causing significant collateral damage. While the Coalition tried to cover up the massacre, it is still a widely circulated story attesting to Leon’s callousness and the Coalition’s negligence.

Accepted, interesting character.

The APP
Name: Bren Katar
Age: 67
Gender: Bothan
Allegiance paid to: Alliance
Rank: Grand Admiral of the Alliance
Appearance (Picture preferred, if not, detailed description accepted): (Image)
Personality: Cold, Calculating, Perceptive,
Force Sensitive: (Y/N) N
Skills/Powers: Strategy, Logistics, Tactics, Reading people, Subterfuge, training and inspiring individuals
Weaponry: Pistol
Ship (If you have one): “The Organa” Viscount-Class Star Defender

Biography:
Bren Katar was born on the Bothan colony and industrial center of Kothlis to a low upper class merchant family in 133 ABY. He was an exceptionally bright but awkward young man and the third of 5 brothers, he realized he would not inherit the family industrial business so instead entered the armed forces.

He attended the Republic Navy War College on Anaxes in 152 ABY and his life was totally changed. His awkward disposition gave way to a life of obedience, discipline and loyalty. He eventually graduated near the top of his class and was commissioned as an officer aboard a cruiser in 156 ABY. Within a year he had distinguished himself in combat in a skirmish outside Hutt Space and was assigned temporary command of a corvette to hunt down pirates.

In 158 ABY he was given formal command of a Corvette in a battlegroup fighting against Imperial Warlord fleets. He continued to perform well, often leading scouting expeditions and raids deep into enemy territory targeting key infrastructure. In 161 ABY he was present at the defeat of the Alliance forces invading Imperial Space at Bonosk during which he sacrificed his ship to save a portion of the fleet. He survived and after a brief hospitalization he returned to active duty commanding a brand new Cruiser in 162 ABY, he was heavily involved in combat with the new Coalition forces most famously leading a daring raid on Mygeeto that heavily damaged Coalition industrial capacity, and for his actions defending Ord Cantrell against invasion.

Peacetime saw Katar continued to climb through the ranks, participating in a skirmish against the Hutts and being deployed at various hotspots until the outbreak of the next war with the coalition in 173 ABY. Taking command of a Battle Group in the Mid-Rim, Katar was chronically underfunded as the war engulfed the Core worlds. Tasked with defending an area including Hapes, Onderon and Kshyyyk, Bren Katar relied heavily on local militias to defend the sector and the Perlemian Trade Route. Eventually being promoted to command an entire fleet and being promoted to Fleet Admiral.

Katar would frequently make use of slow fighting retreats coupled with lightning raids to destabilize the forces of the Coalition, keeping them off balance and working with Jedi allies to misdirect the enemy. But the writing was on the wall and by 180 ABY he was defending Commenor with his Jedi allies in the Core Worlds. Thanks to their bravery a massive force of Coalition troops and ships was caught in a trap and destroyed in 182 ABY. He personally decorated a number of Jedi who fought in the battle and was featured in several propaganda campaigns as a hero of the Alliance.

Katar continued to protect the Core Worlds, suffering defeat and victory but in general holding the line and not giving an inch, in some cases even regaining ground. More than anything, he continued to make lightning raids into Coalition territory, frustrating their advance.

In 187 ABY Katar resigned his commission in protest of the Vulpter Armistice for its treatment of the Jedi Order. He is rumored to have even used his family fortune to smuggle Jedi into places to hide. In 195 ABY the assassination of the Chancellor of the Alliance, Katar was called back into service by the new government in order to calm escalating fears. He was appointed as Grand Admiral of the Galactic Alliance (essentially the Secretary of Defense), he made it clear his position that the Jedi be given pardons and re-integrated as part of the Alliance though not in a command role. Regardless he has been preparing the Alliance for war to the best of his ability.


RP Example:
Notes:

The Leader of the Alliance is the Supreme Chancellor. This app is fine, but at the moment you have him slated as a role akin to Defence Secretary rather than actual leader.

The role of Head of the Alliance Military is also already taken by General Randar Vedek, a character of mine.

[Ormata]

I reserve the position of Jedi Grandmaster. Fidem returns.

[The Orson Empire]

So is the position of Supreme Chancellor still open?