Star Wars: A Final Hope (OOC/Singups)[REBOOT/OPEN]

[Jedi Council]

It is a dark time for the Galaxy. Divided between the democratic ALLIANCE and the despotic COALITION, citizen's of numerous worlds live in fear of a resumed war, and the devastation it would bring. With both sides exhausted by nearly a decade of war, and with billions dead, and countless more fleeing into neutral systems, it seems that the Galaxy is ripe for new leadership.

Having been turned on by their own people after the horror's of the war they lead, the JEDI ORDER has been abolished, and their remaining members hunted down by ALLIANCE and COALITION troops, as the FORCE, and those who use it have come to be viewed with disdain and anger.

Working behind the scenes, the ONE SITH are once more plotting a return to power. Having been driven out of power in the Galaxy some sixty years prior, they now scheme to return the Dark Side to prominence. Lead by a mysterious new Master, the SITH have became enmeshed in the corridors of power once more, secretly biding their time, and waiting for their chance to once more reign supreme in the Galaxy.

Poised on the edge of the abyss, ALLIANCE and COALITION negotiators meet on the space station known as the CRUCIBLE, where they hope to renegotitate a fair and eternal peace, unknowing the danger both Civilizations are in...

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IC
Introduction
Welcome everyone! To those of you who participated in the previous incarnation of this RP, welcome back!
Im Jedi, and this is my latest attempt to create a huge, multifaceted, and long lasting, Star Wars RP. In order to offer as many possibilities for character development and foster s much creativity as we can, I have decided to try some new things that are not seen in Star Wars RP's.
Firstly, this RP will take place within the LEGENDS continuity of Star Wars. The sequel trilogy storyline will not be considered canon, rather we will use the pre-Disney plot line that included the Yuuzhan Vong invasion, the Jacen Solo story arc, the rise of Darth Krayt etc etc.
Similarly, this RP will take place some 61 years after the death of Darth Krayt, around 200 ABY. This new time frame has never really been explored, so we have a whole new canvas to try our hand at. A brief history of the Galaxy since 139 ABY will be provided later.
Basically, what I am hoping to create here is a free flowing, living, RP world, where we have numerous characters, plot lines, and objectives that merge into one coherent story.

Help me _____, you're my only hope
With the scale of this RP, I am going to need some help! Co-ops that would like to join in can TG me to apply, but almost more importantly, we need several major characters to move the plot along. They are:

The Exiled Jedi Grandmaster
The Dark Lord of the Sith
The Leader of the Coalition
The Leader of the Alliance

These four characters are really going to be the main drivers of the RP. If you want your character to be any of these, your APP will have to be exceptionally detailed and well crafted, even above the normal benchmark. Experienced players are also preferred here.

Rules
1.) I am the OP, and my word is final. The same goes for CO-OP's.
2.) Standard site rules apply, not Godmodding, metagaming etc etc.
3.) Strive to write good quality posts, one liners are a no no.
4.) Be creative
5.) Have FUN, you are expected to create your own story lines, for feel free to experiment.

A Brief Analysis of the Galactic Powers
The Coalition
A military dictatorship where real power is shared between several important Generals, Admiral's and Bureaucrats. They are "officially" democratic, and are lead by a Consul, who is elected from the Coalition Tribunal m. Both the Consul and Tribunal are merely ceremonial however.

Real power is held by members of the night Coalition military and intelligence services, who jockey for power via plots, schemes, and outright violence. The Four Commissariat's are one of the few organizations within the official Coalition government that can claim to be legitimately in control of their respective branches, though their influence has almost eclipsed that of the military branch in recent years. The Four Commissariate's are 1)Foreign Intelligence 2) Domestic investigation 3)Force User Task Force and 4) Technological Procurement and Development.

The Coalition Fleet is primarily made up of vessels that are akin to those of the Old Empire, and continue to utilize the traingular hull design that has proven so effective.

The Coalition Army is a mixed bag of clones, willing volunteers, conscripts, and prisoners. They are known for their brutality and their incredibly barbaric practices. Despite this, their primary advantage is in numbers rather than organization.

The Coalition does not have a permanent capital, rather, its Headquarters is located aboard a massive space station at the heart of the Maw Cluster, known as The Leviathan. The massive station is a sprawling metropolis of old and new parts, and is well defended by the Coalition Fleet. The Consul and Tribunal are housed here.

The Galactic Alliance
Born out of the ashes of the New Republic, the Galactic Alliance is a democratic organization, based on the old core world of Coruscant. The Galactic Republic is a representative democracy and holds freedom and civil rights dear.

The primary legislative body of the Alliance is the Senate. It is comprised of one senator from every planet in the Coalition. These Senators can then elect a Chancellor to be the de facto head of the Alliance.

The Alliance Military is small but well organized, relying on quality of quantity. It's utilizes light, fast ships, and fighter forces over the Star Cruisers of their Coalition enemies.

Similarly, the Alliance Military is entirely volunteer based, but I'd put through rigorous training and testing, allowing each soldier to become more dangerous than many other fighting groups.

The Jedi and Sith
The Force is viewed with widespread suspicion and hostility by most non-sensitive denizens of the Galaxy. Both the Sith and Jedi are reviled, though, for different reasons.

The Jedi are the public face of the Last Great War between the Coalition and the Alliance, and, as Generals for the latter, lead many of the most devastatingand costly campaigns of the War. With the Vulpter Armistice, the Order was declared illegal and dissolved. The few Jedi who remain are scattered in covens around the Galaxy, the largest being at the Ilum Sanctuary, lead by their last Grand Master.

The Sith are still hated for the actions of Darth Krayt and his One Sith regime some 70 years ago, and for the pain they inflicted on the Galaxy. Since Darth Krayts fall however, no Sith has been seen, and many believe they are all dead. Despite this hope, they have in fact been recruiting disciples and agents, planting moles in the Governments of both the Alliance and Coalition, and some even say shaping the Last Great Wars conclusion.

Galactic History from 139 ABY to the Present Day (The Long Version)
139 ABY - The Galactic Triumvirate is formed, as power in the Galaxy is shared between the Fel Empire, the Galactic Alliance, and the Jedi Order. The One Sith are forced into hiding.

144 ABY- Empress Fel is assassinated by mysterious actors, causing a power vacuum and a civil war within the Fel Empire.

146 ABY- The Galactic Alliance and Jedi Order move to restore order to the Fel Empire, causing a multi front war with various parties.

154 ABY- The Galactic Alliance forces succeed in subjugated much of Imperial space, but at a great cost. The remaining Imperials concentrate on defending their few remaining strongholds as their civil war fades into a resistance movement.

160 ABY- The Galactic Alliance attempts to seize the last remaining Imperial Worlds at the urging of the Jedi Council.

161 ABY- The Alliance is heavily defeated after a botched invasion of Imperial space. Several secessionist worlds join what remains of the Fel Empire and become the Coalition, a united, autocratic government.

163 ABY- The Coalition and Alliance sign a peace treaty, limited the Coalition to the Outer Rim, and setting military restrictions on their production.

173 ABY- A decade of Peace is broken when a group of Jedi discover the rapid mobilization of Coalition forces around the Galaxy. A preemptive strike by Alliance forces are rebuffed with heavy losses. War between the Alliance, Jedi and the Coalition begins.

177 ABY- Coalition forces penetrate the Mid Rim.

180 ABY- Fighting seeps into the Core Worlds, as the Jedi and Alliance forces are hard pressed to hold back the Coaltion. War weariness begins to grow within the Alliance, as does distrust of the Jedi.

182 ABY- A Jedi Strike team succeeds in defending the world of Commenor, stemming the tide of the War.

184 ABY- Alliance forces are able to hold the line in the Expansion Region, but suffer extreme losses against the Coalition onslaught. The Coalition begins anti-Jedi propaganda.

185 ABY- The Alliance suffers a crushing defeat at Eriadu as a Jedi lead counter attack is ambushed and destroyed by Coalition forces.

186 ABY- Protests within the Alliance against the War and the Jedi leadership of it begin. Several planets force the Jedi to leave their worlds. The Alliance enters talks with the Coalition.

187 ABY- The Vulpter Armistice is ratified between the Coalition and Alliance, dividing the Galaxy into two halves. A clause in the treaty bans the Jedi Order, and Alliance/Coalition troops purge the Jedi from the Galaxy. The Jedi Order attempts to go into hiding.

189 ABY- The bulk of the remaining Jedi are slaughtered on Telos IV in a brutal last stand against Alliance and Coalition forces. Some Jedi flee, and hide among many different systems, though a large coven founds a secret Temple on Ilum.

190 ABY- The Carida Concordant is signed, officially ending the War, and silencing the Jedi. This begins the watchful peace between the Coalition and Alliance. The Concordat must be resigned every 10 years.

192 ABY- A series of disappearances and bombings occur through the Coalition. No one is ever found suspect.

195 ABY- The Chancellor of the Alliance is assassinated, a mysterious figure escapes Coruscant, though witnesses claim he bore a crimson lightsaber.

200 ABY- Negotiations for the resigning of the Carida Concordat begin on the Crucible.

Galactic History from 139 ABY to the Present Day (The Short Version)
Essentially, what has occurred since the fall of Darth Krayt is another terrible Galactic War between the Alliance/Jedi and the Coalition. The War became a stalemate the Jedi were largely blamed for the Alliance's poor performance and were abolished by popular demand. The Sith are working behind the scenes in both the Alliance and Coalition, and are working to destabilize or take over both. That's about it.

The Application

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Final Notes
Thanks for reading, I hope this interests you enough to drop a TAG or better yet, an APP!
The Galactic Map can be found here- https://imgur.com/RLhGNqv
Brusia is our excellent Co-OP. Make sure you listen to them as you would me.

[Jedi Council]

Roster

The Galactic Alliance
Chief of State Bren Katar- Dentali
General Randar Vedek- Jedi Council

The Coalition
Consul Serilda Raineheart- Puertollano
Admiral Leon Tchaikovsky- Elerian
Admiral Derek Krassus-Rhinocera

The Jedi Order
Jedi Knight Victar Fel- Atkemri
Jedi Master Martius Shan- Brusia
Maverick- Brusia
Jedi Master Rawson Jedha- The Nordic Model
Padawan Alana Medina- The Nordic Model
Jedi Knight Alora Tahr- Jedi Council

The Hidden Sith
Ubanrimu, Darth Anarkus- Great Confederacy of Commonwealth States
Sith Apprentice Amnal Kehy-Endem

Non-Aligned/Criminal Underworld
Orin Brax- Jedi Council

[Jedi Council]

The APP
Name: Orin Brax
Age: 29
Gender: Male
Allegiance paid to: N/A, Previously Jedi Order
Rank: Jedi Padawan, now Bounty Hunter
Appearance:

Personality: Sour, sarcastic, and wholly disenchanted with existence, Orin is a thoroughly debauched and unpleasant figure. He believes that the Universe robbed him of a better life, and has lived for the past 10 years regretting what happened to the Jedi. He if more often than not drunk, though, his reputation as a Bounty Hunter is well deserved.
Force Sensitive: Yes
Skills/Powers: A skilled Jedi Guardian before the Order's dissolution, Orin was close to completing the Jedi Trials when his Master and most of his colleagues were massacred. He is well trained in Form IV: Ataru, and has a working understanding of Form V: Djem So. However, after years on the streets, his fighting style is far more dynamic and varied than traditional Jedi methods, and he frequently incorporates physical blows, blasters, and dirty tricks when in combat. He has the traditional Jedi aptitude for telepathy and telekenisis, and was singled out in the Order as one of their most promising students of mind tricks. He has some limited knowledge of more advanced techniques, like Heal, and Psychometry.
Weaponry: 1 battle worn lightsaber with an Illum crystal that produces a yellow blade.
2 DL-44 blaster pistols
1 DL-RX Sniper Rifle
1 Rope launcher
Battle Armour capable of resisting light laser fire.
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Biography: Born on Corellia in 270 ABY as the youngest son of a wealthy family, Orin Brax was given to the Jedi early. While his father and mother believed that his force sensitivity and position in the Jedi Order was an honour, they also knew that it would enhance the Brax family prestige within the political sphere.

Brax was trained by Jedi Master Ermik Paro, a Talz Council Member and one of the most powerful Jedi of his day. When war broke out between the Alliance and the Coalition in 277 ABY, Paro was assigned as a General, and the just 7 year old Brax was forced to remain at the Temple, longing to be back at his masters side. After 5 years of conflict, now aged 12, Orin was made a commander, and sent into battle. His first taste was at Commenor, where he proved his worth by leading his battalion in a courageous, and ultimately successful defence of the planet's shield generator. Without his resolute and determined actions, the great Alliance victory there would likely have never happened.

Now a veritable hero among his soldiers, Brax and Paro became the go to team when the fighting was fiercest, seeing much action over the next two years. When Alliance Command planned the ill-conceived assault on Eriadu, Master Paro strongly objected, but was overruled. Brax was given command of the left wing of the Alliance Fighter Fleet during that engagement, and succeeded in keeping Coalition bombers from engaging his own carriers and capital ships. However, the unrivalled power of the Coalition's united fleet decimated the Alliance's cruisers, and tore apart most of their forces. Master Paro was killed and Brax was forced to retreat.

Crash landing his damaged fighter on Corellia, Brax was severely wounded, and remained comatose for some time. In the official records of the Jedi and the Alliance government, he was labeled a casualty of war.

Discovered by his former family and given shelter at their large estate, Brax remained incapacitated for almost 18 months. In the meantime, while the Vulpter Armistice was signed, and the Jedi were disbanded. Force users around the Galaxy were condemned and persecuted. When an Alliance special forces unit raided the Brax compound, they discovered the still comatose Orin alive in his bacta tank. Their botched attempt to remove him triggered an awakening, and despite his weakened state, he dispatched them with ease.

After realizing what had happened, and understanding that his more presence was endangering his family, Orin borrowed a small fortune and bought the Talon, an ancient, underpowered, over-taxed Corvette, and left the Core.

He swiftly made a name for himself as an expert Bounty Hunter, and his jobs became increasingly more lucrative. He worked for almost every cartel in the Galaxy in those early months, and as he became more well known, he realized he would need an alias. After a close encounter with Coalition spies, he took the name "The Warden" as his alter ego. Purchasing a new, powerful ship straight from Kuat, he dubbed in the Sky Screamer due to its excessive engine power. Having spent his growing years working for the various cartels and criminals of the Outer Rim, Orin developed a network of contacts and allies, all while having to evade Coalition and Alliance officials.

Having recently finished a massive job, the result of which left him comfortably wealthy, Orin has gone into a period of retirement, enjoying a debauched lifestyle on the pleasure planet of Canto Bight.
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The APP
Name: Randar Vedek (aka: The Wolf of Commenor)
Age: 72
Gender: Male
Species: Shistavanen
Allegiance paid to: Galactic Alliance
Rank: General (Chairmen of the Joint Chief of Staff)
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Personality: Irascible, generally unpleasant to those in polite society, angry and easily sparked. Despite this, he is extremely caring to his troops, and believes in preservation of life at all costs. He is pragmatic, careful, and temperate. Uniquely, he is also firm in his belief that prisoners must be treated well and honourably.
Force Sensitive: N
Skills/Powers: An incredibly methodical and skilled tactician, one of the greatest of the War for the Alliance. He is infamous for his brilliance, and his honour. He is a decent shot, and can pilot a starfighter well. His natural physiology allows him to be an excellent melee fighter.
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An MC140 Scythe Class Battlecruiser, the Valiant serves as the Flagship of the Home Fleet. While the Coalition relied on larger, more costly vessels such as the Pellaeon and Imperious classes, the Alliance preferred the use of heavily armed and armoured Battlecruisers, faster than their Coalition counterparts.
Biography: Born in 128 ABY, Randar Vedek had service in his blood. His father and elder brother both served in the military of the Alliance during the Sith-Imperial War, with both being slain in the battle against the Fel Empire With the downfall of the Jedi and the rise of Darth Krayt, Randar lived in poverty and fear for much of his childhood, having to survive on the streets of Coruscant with his ill mother and younger sister. Aged 11 when the One Sith fell, Randar was ecstatic and believed the new Triumvirate government was going to truly bring peace to the Galaxy. As such, he was greatly disappointed when the Fel Empress was assassinated, and the Empire collapsed out of the government.

Soon after this event, as the the Fel Empire descended into anarchy and civil war, a series of bombings and terrorist attacks struck the Galactic Capital. In one such bombing, carried out by Fel loyalists against a gang of supposed allies of the Fel rebels, Randar's mother and sister were killed in the blast. With nothing left to work for or support, a hate filled Randar joined the Alliance Army and went to war.

Private Vedek was part of the first wave of soldiers sent by the Alliance to restore order in the former Fel regions. Moving against both thr Fel Remnant and the rebellious Warlords, Vedek served on numerous worlds and under numerous commanders, many of them Jedi from the reconstituted Order. As his obvious skill for warfare became more and more apparent, his initiative, and determination caught the eye of his commanding officer, Lt. Colonel Armistead Vance. With a letter of recommendation from Vance, Vedek was relieved of duty and sent to the Military Academy on Coruscant to become an officer.

The completion of his training coincided with the end of the War, as Fel resistance collapsed and most former worlds, barring a handful in the Outer Rim, were back in Alliance hands. Lieutenant Vedek was assigned as an officer on Corulag, where he grew furious at the reticence Alliance High Command showed at finishing off the last pockets of Fel Resistance. Despite this, in the six yesrs hr was stationed on Corualag, Vedek became beloved by his men and found himself promoted to the rank of Colonel.

When the Alliance finally did decide to invade the fringes of the known Galaxy, Vedek was assigned to lead a regiment of troops on Dromund Kaas. The famed homeworld of the Sith, Dromund Kaas had been turned into a fortress by the Fel Remnant. While Vedek and his men performed admirably, the Alliance offensive was a catastrophe, and it ended up being bogged down in guerilla warfare and pyrrhic victories. When the now General Armistead Vance took over the front from the incompetent men who had run it before him, he gave the young Vedek a provisional promotion to Brigadier, and assigned him to lead the elite Alliance troops into battle.
Before the change of strategy could have any effect, the Alliance made peace with the Remnant, now calling themselves the Coalition after several worlds joined their cause.

The disastrous three year campaign taught Vedek much, especially about military tactics. His disdain for politics and politicians only grew when the Alliance senate pinned the failure of the war on Armistead Vance and had him sacked and demoted. This betrayal of his mentor caused Vedek to distrust the political establishment of the Senate and of politicians in general. In the interwar years of 163 ABY and 173 ABY Vedek, whom many believed to be the most promising rising star in the Alliance military, was often held back by his outspoken distrust of the Coalition, and his abrasive, un-glossed personality. While his less competent contemporaries began to enter the top echelons of the Alliance Military, Vedek saw him repeatedly passed over for promotion, and sent to far flung fortress worlds and other backwaters.

In the run up to the beginning of the second war, the now Major-General Vedek swiftly pounced on the report made by the Jedi High Council that the Coalition was rearming itself. In keeping with his proactive and aggressive views, Vedek joined the Jedi in lobbying for a preemptive attack, yet, when it came, found himself posted as a corps commander in the Home Reserve Army, far from the front lines. Forced into the background and allowed to only watch as his less competent colleagues bungled a campaign that could have dealt a deathblow to the unprepared Coalition. As Alliance forces were thrown back from the Outer Rim, and fell back to the Mid Rim, Vedek finally was appointed to be a field commander.

Major-General Vedek and his 5th Army was placed directly on the main route of the Corellian Trade Spine, and ordered by High Command to hold the Javin system. As a massive Coalition fleet barreled down the Trade Spine, pursing the routing Alliance forces fleeing from the Outer Rim, Vedek found himself awash in refugees and now having to try and reorganize the tattered remains of the Alliance strike force. Realizing that a defeat here would likely allow the Coalition to penetrate the Expansion region and possibly even strike at the Core Worlds, Vedek resolved to hold the Trade route for as long as possible. Yet facing off against an enemy with vast numerical superiority, and with Alliance High Command witholding reinforcements to protect the Galactic Center, the General realized he had to work with what he had. In order to take the Coalition Forces by surprise, Vedek reorganize what was left of the preemptive strike force and have them orbit the planet to repair, while the 5th fleet would hold some light years from the system. When the Coalition forces arrived at Javin, they attacked the ragged Alliance craft in orbit, crippling most of their already damaged ships, not realizing most were simply empty hulks. As the Coalition fleet then entered orbit around Javin and began the land invasion, they found the 5th Army ground forces dug in, and well equipped with defensive structures and anti-bomber defenses, forcing the Coalition into a planet wide siege.
It was at this moment, while the Coalition Fleet was focused on orbital bombardment and scattered around the system, with a vast majority of their troops still on the planet, that he struck. The flotilla of Scythe Class Battle Cruisers that he had hidden in the next system appeared out of no where, concentrated and fresh for battle. They made short work of the dispersed Coalition forces, and routed their Fleet. Face with an entrenched enemy, and no ships with which to either escape or resupply them, the vast majority of the Coalition invaders surrendered.

The victory at Javin stemmed the tide of Coalition troops that had been spilling into the Mid Rim, and boosted Alliance morale after the defeat of their Strike Force. Now a hero for his actions, Vedek finally received his due praise, and was promoted to Lieutenant-General, and placed as the second in command to High Jedi General Ermik Paro. The pair worked well together, owing to Paro's respect for Vedek's competence and Vedek's positive experience with his Jedi commanders when he was in the infantry. Together, they proved to be a potent force, and while the Coalition in the ensuing years the Coalition continued to push the Alliance back, Paro and Vedek often could be found leading their troops to victory, slowing the inevitable advance of evil.

By 177 ABY, the victory at Javin was rendered moot when a Coalition fleet punched a hole in the Alliance lines along the Hydian Way. While Vedek was and his fleet was ordered to retake the planets of Taris and Wayland in order to cut off the salient that had opened on the northern front, the Shistavanenen instead counterattacked above the salient, driving deep into Coalition space, and sacking the planets of Mygeeto and Muunilinst. On the latter planet, Vedek was able to secure vast amounts of financial wealth from the Intergalactic Banking Clan, and have the funds transferred back to Coruscant. While this sortie into Coalition space was highly successful and indeed drew away the forces that had been threatening the Core Worlds, it greatly angered High Command for what they saw as blatant insubordination.

Despite the success of Vedek's counter invasion, the war was going poorly for the Alliance. Five years of seesawing through the Mid Rim ended when the Coalition debuted their newer, more advanced version of the Imperious Class Star destroyer, a fleet that was able to shred the Alliance defenses at Umbara and penetrate into the Colonies for the first time.

Sent with Master Paro's fleet to intercept this new threat, Vedek arrived after his Jedi superior, arriving to find him fighting the Coalition forces to a standstill above Commenor. While Master Paro held the front lines, Vedek used the magnetic field of the planet to mask his arrival, placing his fleet on the planets south pole. As the Coalition was draw further into the system, Vedek sprung the trap, and came upon the enemy from the bottom. His cruisers engaged their larger foes at point blank range, and the superior Alliance fighters made short work of their foes. Ere long, the Coalition was in retreat, and the Core was once again safely behind Alliance front lines.

After the battle of Commenor, Vedek again was promoted, this time to a full General, and awarded several medals. Despite the victory, and his subsequent nicknaming as the "Wolf of Commenor," Vedek knew the war was still not going well. For this reason, as the war quieted and High Command formulated a plan to counterattack, Vedek, despite his aggressive reputation, sided once more with the Jedi, and urged the Chancellor to allow the fleet time to recover, and hold firm in the Expansion region. Outraged by his dissent, High Command went ahead with the strike, selecting Eriadu as a target, and sidelined Vedek by naming him Commander-in-Chief of the Home Defense Force, relegating him to the Capital. While he shared Master Paro's apprehension about the strike, he knew that if the Alliance was committed to this path, he would be the best person to have on the front lines.

When news of the absolutely catastrophic defeat at Eriadu was received, Vedek was livid. Having sacrificed both their best vessels, their entire offensive capability, and the Grandmaster of the Jedi Order in the battle, Vedek realized the foolishness of trusting politicians and sycophants with military planning. Similarly, when the Chancellor announced that peace talks would be held with the now superior Coalition, Vedek had had enough. He retired from duty in 185 ABY, and became a private citizen.

As the peace talks ran their course, Vedek lobbied hard to protect the Jedi, whom he grew to respect for their incredible feats of valour and the immense power they wielded. This, along with his continued anti-Coalition protests, made him a pariah in the Alliance's upper class, but only served to increase his popularity among the rank and file soldiers, and civilians that saw him as one of the few capable leaders the military had.

With the signing of the Carida Concordat, Vedek realized that open defense of the Jedi would only lead to his own exile, and therefore returned to Coruscant to live as a civilian, hoping to fade from the limelight. However, as the Galaxy continued to be unstable and unsettled, the Alliance Chancellor was assassinated in 195 ABY. The new chancellor brought together a cabinet of the most talented men and women the Alliance had to offer, and part of this was asking General Vedek to come out of retirement, and take over the Alliance Military as Chairmen of the Joint Chiefs of Staff, in essence, making him the Head of Military High Command. Accepting despite his distrust of politicians, General Vedek now is focusing on rebuilding the fledgling military he once fought with in order to prepare for the next inevitable war with the Coalition.
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The APP
Name: Alora Tahr
Age: 23
Gender: Female
Allegiance paid to: Jedi Order
Rank: Jedi Knight
Appearance:

Personality: Kind, bubbly, and extremely curious, Alora has spent her life with the Order, and was only 8 when they were forced into hiding. As such, she is very naive, and gives the benefit of doubt to nearly everyone. She hates being left out, and is very inquisitive.
Force Sensitive: Yes
Skills/Powers: A fully fledged Jedi Knight, Alora is a Consular, trained as a Healer, and as the only Jedi Seer left in the known Galaxy. Her visions are often painful, and can leave her weakened for hours after. She has the traditional skills in Telepathy and telekinesis, alongside a high degree of aptitude in Mind Trick. As a combatant, she is competent, well trained with her double bladed saber in Form VI: Niman, and she often incorporates her Force abilities into her bladework to compensate for Niman's inherent lack of intensity. She is not an experienced warrior, having mainly learned through sparring and training modules.
Weaponry: One lightsaber with a blue blade produced via an Ilum crystal.
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Biography: Born to an exotic dancer in the Undercity of Courscant, Alora was discovered by the Jedi at a young age, and was taken to the Jedi Temple. Known for her precocious nature, and good spirits, the Twi'lek was a model student. However, she was plagued with visions, and nightmares about the past, and the future. This ability caused her great pain, and few on the Council knew how to resolve them. She remained in the Temple for much of her life as a child, studying history, healing and honing her mind. at the age of 8, she was taken by Master Kara Ka, one of the most renowned Jedi of her time as a Padawan. Ka taught her student everything she knew, and recognized Alora's abilty. She believed that Alora had a destiny, a destiny that might help heal the Galaxy of its divisions.

When the Vulpter Armistice was signed in 187 ABY, Ka and Alora were at the Temple when it was stormed by Alliance troopers. While her Master held off the soldiers, Alora escaped with a handful of prize students. Ka was killed, but her student made it to the Undercity with the other survivors. After months of roving around the slums, hiding from patrols, and being hunted by Crime Syndicates, The 12 year old Alora was rescued by the few remaining Jedi Masters, and fled with them to Ilum.

Despite her Master's death, Alora recognized her sacrifice, and dedicated herself to the Jedi way. Under the tutelage of the exiled Jedi on the frozen world of Ilum, Alora honed her skills, and was soon recognized as having mastered everything that she could possibly learn. She was soon knighted. However, as she grew from a young girl, to a young woman, Alora grew curious. She yearned to be back out in the Galaxy, to go do good as the Jedi of her youth had done. Barred from this by the Jedi Council, the young Twi'lek broke the rules for the first time in her life. Sneaking aboard one of the few ships still operational on Ilum, an old Jedi shuttle called the Windrunner, Alora is now ready to fullfill her dream of being a real Jedi.


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[Atkemri]

The APP
Name: Victar Fel
Age: 36
Gender: Male
Allegiance paid to: Jedi Order
Rank: Jedi Knight
Appearance:
Personality: Victar is more emotionally connected than most of his fellow Jedi, but he still knows how to remain calm in the face of pressure or otherwise in the presence of an emotional situation. He loves to play jokes with his force abilities despite the chagrin it causes other higher ranking Jedi.
Force Sensitive: (Y/N): No, of course not. What Jedi has Force abilities? (Obvious sarcasm is obvious Yes, he does)
Skills/Powers: Victar has all the ordinary telekinesis and telepathy along with other basic Force abilities like Force speed and Force Leap but also is skilled in Malacia, a rare technique, where the opponent's equilibrium is turned against them causing nausea, but no permanent side effects and Force Valor which increase his and his allies capabilities. As a final force-based Ace in the hole, he can use the Electric Judgement, the less powerful light side replication of Force Lighting powered by the user's sense of justice. He is a practitioner of Form V focusing on the Djem So school of thought and is his main form followed by the Shien form of Form V and he dabbles in Form 2 but isn't proficient in it.
Weaponry: He has a standard Lightsaber with an Azure crystal which produces a blue blade
Ship (If you have one): N/A
Biography: Victar was born on Coruscant as a young Force-sensitive boy and was quickly brought to the attention to the Jedi Order and was brought up as a padawan, learning the ways of the Jedi and personally attempting to hone his force abilities mostly because he was impressed with the Jedi particularly his master ma which he saw daily. He trained vigorously under him growing great respect for him and was a model student under his tutelage skilled in both the Force and Lightsaber combat, but despite his attempts, he was not yet ready to become a Jedi Knight as he wasn't spiritually ready. He realized that his current reasons for becoming a Jedi (The status) was't a suitable reason to become a Knight and so spent a week in deep meditation with Audo honing his connection to the force and coming out ready for Knightdom with a noticeable attitude adjustment.

He and his previous master Audo were sent on a mission together early in the war with the coalition to disable an important coalition trade port. The mission was meant to be a stealth mission, but they were discovered when Victar used his force powers to trip a Coalition officer down the stairs. They were quickly discovered and we're drawn into a fierce battle quickly threatening to end both their lives. His master slowly began dipping into the Dark Side of the force using the rage that most Zabrak were raised around. It started slowly with a few uses of Force Lightning, but as the situation became more desperate they became more frequent before he used force rage, irrevocably linking him to the dark side and sending him into a brutal frenzy no longer using form in his attacks, but just slashing through groups causing mass panic in the coalition ranks making it easier for Audo to strike them down while Victar looked on in horror. A few minutes later and what would come to be known among the coalition as the DX-75 Station massacre was over. Victar confronted his master but was only met with the ravenous eyes of a madman who quickly jumped to attack leading to a violent and epic duel being his first of the kind ending with Victar tearfully slicing his former master in half. In his dying words, Audo told Victar told him that he has done well and to continue on the path of the light no matter what tempted him so that he would avoid the fate Audo was in right now. Victar took these words to heart and left the station while the incident was used as anti-Jedi propaganda by the Coalition and severely hurt the reputation of the Jedi Order in the Alliance.

After that, he served as a steadfast member of the order despite criticism about the on the DX-75 station, participating in many missions against the Coalition and gaining a bit of renown for his efforts across the galaxy involved in many smaller combat missions and was a member of the strike force on Commenmor in 182 ABY and was a present failed assault on Eridu. In 189 ABY he was present in the attack on the Telos IV and managed to escape with a few others to Illum, injured from multiple blaster shots causing him to become resentful. Knowing that he is becoming influenced by the Dark Side he spends most days training and mediating as to keep his mind off the feelings of anger he has, but as time goes on he's noticed it becomes less effective...
RP Example :here
Notes: If he has too many force abilities or you want the links to where I got them, I'll fix it.

[Endem]

Hey, can I join, I'm thinking of either a Jedi Knight turned Smuggler ( and dabbled in some dark force powers because I like Grey Jedi's ) or a Jedi Padawan turned Sith apprentice

[Jedi Council]

The APP
Name: Victar Fel
Age: 36
Gender: Male
Allegiance paid to: Jedi Order
Rank: Jedi Knight
Appearance: (Image)
Personality: Victar is more emotionally connected than most of his fellow Jedi, but he still knows how to remain calm in the face of pressure or otherwise in the presence of an emotional situation. He loves to play jokes with his force abilities despite the chagrin it causes other higher ranking Jedi. At times he can be a bit behind on social cues due to his upbringing but can still recognize such things after a while or after it is brought to his attention by a companion.
Force Sensitive: (Y/N): No, of course not. What Jedi has Force abilities? (Obvious sarcasm is obvious Yes, he does)
Skills/Powers: Victar has all the ordinary telekinesis and telepathy along with other basic Force abilities like Force speed and Force Leap but also is skilled in Malacia, a rare technique, where the opponent's equilibrium is turned against them causing nausea, but no permanent side effects and Force Valor which increase his and his allies capabilities. As a final force-based Ace in the hole, he can use the Electric Judgement, the less powerful light side replication of Force Lighting powered by the user's sense of justice. He is a practitioner of Form V focusing on the Djem So school of thought and is his main form followed by the Shien form of Form V and he dabbles in Form 2 but isn't proficient in it.
Weaponry: He has a standard Lightsaber with an Azure crystal which produces a blue blade
Ship (If you have one): N/A
Biography: Victar was born on Coruscant as a young Force-sensitive boy and was quickly brought to the attention to the Jedi Order and was brought up as a padawan, learning the ways of the Jedi and personally attempting to hone his force abilities mostly because he was impressed with the Jedi he saw daily. He trained vigorously, but despite his attempts, he was not yet ready to become a Jedi Knight as he wasn't spiritually ready to become Jedi Knight. He spent a week in deep meditation honing his connection to the force and coming out ready for Knightdom.

He served as a steadfast member of the order participating in many missions against the Coalition and gaining a bit of renown for his efforts across the galaxy until 189 ABY where he was present in the attack on the Telos IV and managed to escape with a few others to Illum. Now he waits for the public to return to their senses so that his work may again continue. He spends most days training and mediating in his abilities.
RP Example: here
Notes: If he has too many force abilities or you want the links to where I got them, I'll fix it.

Could you flesh out the bio a little more? Detail what he has been doing since the Jedi fall and what he did during the war for example.

Hey, can I join, I'm thinking of either a Jedi Knight turned Smuggler ( and dabbled in some dark force powers because I like Grey Jedi's ) or a Jedi Padawan turned Sith apprentice

I would recommend Dark Jedi, or Sith-Apparentice

[Great Confederacy of Commonwealth States]

The APP
Name: Ubanrimu, Mandalore the Risen, Darth Anarkus
Age: 56
Gender: Female
Allegiance paid to: Mandalore, the One Sith
Rank: Mandalore, Dark Lord of the Sith
Appearance:

Personality: Ubanrimu is an emotional, wrathful personality, filled with ideas of vengeance against those who have wronged her, and very sensitive of perceived slights. She believes to be on a holy mission from the Force itself to bring about a form of equality to the galaxy, a Sith justice for all held in place by the power of the Dark Lord. For this, she believes all the existing power structures in the galaxy must be torn down first, burnt to a crisp. As such, she hopes to lead a Great Mandalorian crusade against both the Alliance and the Coalition.

Unlike the Jedi, Ubanrimu has a very morally grey view of the galaxy. She has friends, and she has enemies, but she knows there are people in between that mean here no harm, and that she tries to protect. She sees herself as a saviour, and fuelled with that self-righteous fury she believes she is protecting people against themselves. As such, she opposes meaningless killing and gore for gore’s sake, but she will accept high collateral damage in pursuit of her final goals.
Force Sensitive: Y
Skills/Powers:
Force Horror
Force Lightning
Force Choke
Force Inspire
Force Rage
Light Sabre form: Trakata (Only used in secret)
Weaponry:
Main: F-11D Blaster rifle
Secondary: Dual Nubian blaster pistols
Melee: Combat knife
Secret: Red light sabre
Ship:
Flag ship: Saboath Destroyer, ‘Guillotine’
Personal fighter: Kom'rk-class
Biography: A single, derelict Neimoidian shuttle. That was what the One Sith Order had become in 164 ABY. After lingering within the Imperial bureaucracy after the fall of Kryat, the last members of the Order retreated back to the final imperial strongholds. Before the Alliance could invade to unite these strongholds, the remaining imperial power structures had already purged themselves three times over, leaving the Sith as refugees. Six members remained at this point, among whom the young initiate Ubanrimu. The Twi’lek had been taken forcefully from her parents during the fall of the One Sith, and was one of the last new editions. After this, the One Sith found it too risky to provoke the Jedi and alert them to their survival. This led to the surviving members seeking shelter aboard a shuttle, desperately looking for some semblance of structure that survived their collapse. However, every safe house they found was abandoned, every rendezvous point forgotten.

Eventually, the survivors under the aptly named Darth Invictus started anew. They headed to the court of the Hutts on Nal Hutta, ordering their dark services in secret to one of the Huttese Warlords, Jingo the Hutt. Jingo was a great Hutt, seen as the first among equals, and with the help of his new Sith soldiers his power was concentrated tremendously. This, of course, inspired rivals. Jingo the Hutt was killed during a wedding ceremony, and the members of his Sith cult were captured. First they were held as trophies and agents, but one by one successive Huttese civil wars dwindled these numbers down. The third- and second-to-last members of the Order killed one another in single combat, having viciously wounded each other in some kind of gladiatorial match that was supposed to end the whole affair, but which obviously did nothing.

Only Ubanrimu survived, by the sole virtue of being a Twi’lek woman. She was seen as a slave of high value. Stripped of her weapons, perpetually bound, she was pulled around the Hutt criminal empire. She was a trophy, a proof that these Huttese warlords could succeed where Jabba the Great had failed. They could keep a force sensitive slave in check. She was ridiculed, she had food and other muck thrown at her. She was forced to battle in gladiatorial games with her bound hands, only to be shocked back into a submissive state. For Ubanrimu, who had once commanded legions, this was the height of humiliation.

Yet, at first, she had no will to escape. What was there to escape to? The wretched, toxic swamps of Nal Hutta? The endless deserts of Tatooine? And beyond, the One Sith was dead. She could never return to her brothers and sisters. The Jedi had won. She only thought of liberation after speaking to so many of her fellow enslaved. People who had done nothing wrong all their lives, forced into servitude because someone else had bigger guns. With the Alliance and Jedi powerless to do anything about it, afraid to get their hands dirty. When, in 187, the Jedi order was banned from the Alliance, Ubanrimu took her chance. While in a gladiatorial match on Nimban, under the jurisdiction of Togo the Hutt, she used her force powers to inspire her fellow fighters to take up arms against the Hutts. Taken by surprise, the forces of Togo were overwhelmed. Mercenaries were given the choice to transfer to Ubanrimu or to die, and many chose to live. Hutt infrastructure on Nimban was burned to the ground, and Ubanrimu gave power back to the local people to govern themselves. With the rag-tag army at her back, she cut a bloody, chaotic swath through Hutt territory. There was no fixed strategy, no battle lines. Her fleet would jump out of hyperspace seemingly at random, destroy Hutt properties, liberate a planet, and move on. The last Hutts fortified themselves on Nal Hutta, but the reckoning never came. Ubanrimu and her fleet just disappeared from Hutt space, never to be seen again.

In 195, a fleet of mercenaries and former slaves fell out of hyperspace above Mandalore. The ruler of Mandalore, the Duke Tavosh, had masterfully played the Alliance and the Coalition against one another during his reign, supporting his power base with weapons and goods from both sides, while choosing neither. He even supported some Jedi exiles in his court. He was generally disliked for his craven stance, but his power base was unassailable. Before any combat could commence, Ubanrimu challenged the Duke to single combat. Unwilling to risk his life, the Duke escaped the planet un the dark of night, leaving his throne to be occupied by Ubanrimu. With her help, the Mandalorians reasserted themselves in their own space. After hearing of her exploits in Hutt space, the Mandalorians declared her Mandalore, and she took the title Mandalore the Inspired. Some of the Jedi she broke into joining her new Order, while others she simply executed.

Ubanrimu now has a well-defined plan for the galaxy. She does not seek to rule it in its current state. She hates the corruption in the galaxy, the unfair power structures, the crushing burden upon the common people, and she wishes to rectify that. She believes that can only be done by utterly destroying what exists. The Senate, the officers of the Coalition, the rich owners of Kuat, the shipyards of Mon Calamari, the final Hutt holdouts… She seeks to sow anarchy throughout the galaxy, and rise as its monarch of chaos: an equal playing field where the Sith presides over a free galaxy. She has not yet come forth as the Dark Lord, buy she has grown her following. From the very first day of her rebellion against the Hutts, she has been assembling followers in secret. They are slowly imbedding themselves in the power structures of both the Alliance and the Coalition, feeding her information and preparing the galaxy to rip itself apart. Meanwhole, Ubanrimu prepares the greatest Mandalorian fleet the galaxy has ever seen, not to wage war, but simply to destroy the power of both factions.

[Atkemri]

The APP
Name: Victar Fel
Age: 36
Gender: Male
Allegiance paid to: Jedi Order
Rank: Jedi Knight
Appearance: (Image)
Personality: Victar is more emotionally connected than most of his fellow Jedi, but he still knows how to remain calm in the face of pressure or otherwise in the presence of an emotional situation. He loves to play jokes with his force abilities despite the chagrin it causes other higher ranking Jedi.
Force Sensitive: (Y/N): No, of course not. What Jedi has Force abilities? (Obvious sarcasm is obvious Yes, he does)
Skills/Powers: Victar has all the ordinary telekinesis and telepathy along with other basic Force abilities like Force speed and Force Leap but also is skilled in Malacia, a rare technique, where the opponent's equilibrium is turned against them causing nausea, but no permanent side effects and Force Valor which increase his and his allies capabilities. As a final force-based Ace in the hole, he can use the Electric Judgement, the less powerful light side replication of Force Lighting powered by the user's sense of justice. He is a practitioner of Form V focusing on the Djem So school of thought and is his main form followed by the Shien form of Form V and he dabbles in Form 2 but isn't proficient in it.
Weaponry: He has a standard Lightsaber with an Azure crystal which produces a blue blade
Ship (If you have one): N/A
Biography: Victar was born on Coruscant as a young Force-sensitive boy and was quickly brought to the attention to the Jedi Order and was brought up as a padawan, learning the ways of the Jedi and personally attempting to hone his force abilities mostly because he was impressed with the Jedi he saw daily. He trained vigorously and was a model student of the order skilled in both the Force and Lightsaber combat, but despite his attempts, he was not yet ready to become a Jedi Knight as he wasn't spiritually ready. He realized that his current reasons for becoming a Jedi (The status) was't a suitable reason to become a Knight and so spent a week in deep meditation honing his connection to the force and coming out ready for Knightdom with a noticeable attitude adjustment.

He served as a steadfast member of the order participating in many missions against the Coalition and gaining a bit of renown for his efforts across the galaxy involved in many smaller combat missions and was a member of the strike force on Commenmor in 182 ABY and was a present failed assault on Eridu. In 189 ABY he was present in the attack on the Telos IV and managed to escape with a few others to Illum, injured from multiple blaster shots causing him to become resentful. Knowing that he is becoming influenced by the Dark Side he spends most days training and mediating as to keep his mind off the feelings of anger he has, but as time goes on he's noticed it becomes less effective...
RP Example :here
Notes: If he has too many force abilities or you want the links to where I got them, I'll fix it.

I added a few details and removed a few things that I didn't already from the past version of the character I had planned.

[Great Confederacy of Commonwealth States]

And added a bio!

[Jedi Council]

The APP
Name: Ubanrimu, Mandalore the Risen, Darth Anarkus
Age: 56
Gender: Female
Allegiance paid to: Mandalore, the One Sith
Rank: Mandalore, Sith Lord
Appearance:

(Image)

Personality: Ubanrimu is an emotional, wrathful personality, filled with ideas of vengeance against those who have wronged her, and very sensitive of perceived slights. She believes to be on a holy mission from the Force itself to bring about a form of equality to the galaxy, a Sith justice for all held in place by the power of the Dark Lord. For this, she believes all the existing power structures in the galaxy must be torn down first, burnt to a crisp. As such, she hopes to lead a Great Mandalorian crusade against both the Alliance and the Coalition.

Unlike the Jedi, Ubanrimu has a very morally grey view of the galaxy. She has friends, and she has enemies, but she knows there are people in between that mean here no harm, and that she tries to protect. She sees herself as a saviour, and fuelled with that self-righteous fury she believes she is protecting people against themselves. As such, she opposes meaningless killing and gore for gore’s sake, but she will accept high collateral damage in pursuit of her final goals.
Force Sensitive: Y
Skills/Powers:
Force Horror
Force Lightning
Force Choke
Force Inspire
Force Rage
Light Sabre form: Trakata (Only used in secret)
Weaponry:
Main: F-11D Blaster rifle
Secondary: Dual Nubian blaster pistols
Melee: Combat knife
Secret: Red light sabre
Ship:
Flag ship: Saboath Destroyer, ‘Guillotine’
Personal fighter: Kom'rk-class
Biography: A single, derelict Neimoidian shuttle. That was what the One Sith Order had become in 164 ABY. After lingering within the Imperial bureaucracy after the fall of Kryat, the last members of the Order retreated back to the final imperial strongholds. Before the Alliance could invade to unite these strongholds, the remaining imperial power structures had already purged themselves three times over, leaving the Sith as refugees. Six members remained at this point, among whom the young initiate Ubanrimu. The Twi’lek had been taken forcefully from her parents during the fall of the One Sith, and was one of the last new editions. After this, the One Sith found it too risky to provoke the Jedi and alert them to their survival. This led to the surviving members seeking shelter aboard a shuttle, desperately looking for some semblance of structure that survived their collapse. However, every safe house they found was abandoned, every rendezvous point forgotten.

Eventually, the survivors under the aptly named Darth Invictus started anew. They headed to the court of the Hutts on Nal Hutta, ordering their dark services in secret to one of the Huttese Warlords, Jingo the Hutt. Jingo was a great Hutt, seen as the first among equals, and with the help of his new Sith soldiers his power was concentrated tremendously. This, of course, inspired rivals. Jingo the Hutt was killed during a wedding ceremony, and the members of his Sith cult were captured. First they were held as trophies and agents, but one by one successive Huttese civil wars dwindled these numbers down. The third- and second-to-last members of the Order killed one another in single combat, having viciously wounded each other in some kind of gladiatorial match that was supposed to end the whole affair, but which obviously did nothing.

Only Ubanrimu survived, by the sole virtue of being a Twi’lek woman. She was seen as a slave of high value. Stripped of her weapons, perpetually bound, she was pulled around the Hutt criminal empire. She was a trophy, a proof that these Huttese warlords could succeed where Jabba the Great had failed. They could keep a force sensitive slave in check. She was ridiculed, she had food and other muck thrown at her. She was forced to battle in gladiatorial games with her bound hands, only to be shocked back into a submissive state. For Ubanrimu, who had once commanded legions, this was the height of humiliation.

Yet, at first, she had no will to escape. What was there to escape to? The wretched, toxic swamps of Nal Hutta? The endless deserts of Tatooine? And beyond, the One Sith was dead. She could never return to her brothers and sisters. The Jedi had won. She only thought of liberation after speaking to so many of her fellow enslaved. People who had done nothing wrong all their lives, forced into servitude because someone else had bigger guns. With the Alliance and Jedi powerless to do anything about it, afraid to get their hands dirty. When, in 187, the Jedi order was banned from the Alliance, Ubanrimu took her chance. While in a gladiatorial match on Nimban, under the jurisdiction of Togo the Hutt, she used her force powers to inspire her fellow fighters to take up arms against the Hutts. Taken by surprise, the forces of Togo were overwhelmed. Mercenaries were given the choice to transfer to Ubanrimu or to die, and many chose to live. Hutt infrastructure on Nimban was burned to the ground, and Ubanrimu gave power back to the local people to govern themselves. With the rag-tag army at her back, she cut a bloody, chaotic swath through Hutt territory. There was no fixed strategy, no battle lines. Her fleet would jump out of hyperspace seemingly at random, destroy Hutt properties, liberate a planet, and move on. The last Hutts fortified themselves on Nal Hutta, but the reckoning never came. Ubanrimu and her fleet just disappeared from Hutt space, never to be seen again.

In 195, a fleet of mercenaries and former slaves fell out of hyperspace above Mandalore. The ruler of Mandalore, the Duke Tavosh, had masterfully played the Alliance and the Coalition against one another during his reign, supporting his power base with weapons and goods from both sides, while choosing neither. He even supported some Jedi exiles in his court. He was generally disliked for his craven stance, but his power base was unassailable. Before any combat could commence, Ubanrimu challenged the Duke to single combat. Unwilling to risk his life, the Duke escaped the planet un the dark of night, leaving his throne to be occupied by Ubanrimu. With her help, the Mandalorians reasserted themselves in their own space. After hearing of her exploits in Hutt space, the Mandalorians declared her Mandalore, and she took the title Mandalore the Inspired. Some of the Jedi she broke into joining her new Order, while others she simply executed.

Ubanrimu now has a well-defined plan for the galaxy. She does not seek to rule it in its current state. She hates the corruption in the galaxy, the unfair power structures, the crushing burden upon the common people, and she wishes to rectify that. She believes that can only be done by utterly destroying what exists. The Senate, the officers of the Coalition, the rich owners of Kuat, the shipyards of Mon Calamari, the final Hutt holdouts… She seeks to sow anarchy throughout the galaxy, and rise as its monarch of chaos: an equal playing field where the Sith presides over a free galaxy. She has not yet come forth as the Dark Lord, buy she has grown her following. From the very first day of her rebellion against the Hutts, she has been assembling followers in secret. They are slowly imbedding themselves in the power structures of both the Alliance and the Coalition, feeding her information and preparing the galaxy to rip itself apart. Meanwhole, Ubanrimu prepares the greatest Mandalorian fleet the galaxy has ever seen, not to wage war, but simply to destroy the power of both factions.

Accepted.
Just one clarification: Her status as a Sith Lord is a secret correct?

The APP
Name: Victar Fel
Age: 36
Gender: Male
Allegiance paid to: Jedi Order
Rank: Jedi Knight
Appearance: (Image)
Personality: Victar is more emotionally connected than most of his fellow Jedi, but he still knows how to remain calm in the face of pressure or otherwise in the presence of an emotional situation. He loves to play jokes with his force abilities despite the chagrin it causes other higher ranking Jedi.
Force Sensitive: (Y/N): No, of course not. What Jedi has Force abilities? (Obvious sarcasm is obvious Yes, he does)
Skills/Powers: Victar has all the ordinary telekinesis and telepathy along with other basic Force abilities like Force speed and Force Leap but also is skilled in Malacia, a rare technique, where the opponent's equilibrium is turned against them causing nausea, but no permanent side effects and Force Valor which increase his and his allies capabilities. As a final force-based Ace in the hole, he can use the Electric Judgement, the less powerful light side replication of Force Lighting powered by the user's sense of justice. He is a practitioner of Form V focusing on the Djem So school of thought and is his main form followed by the Shien form of Form V and he dabbles in Form 2 but isn't proficient in it.
Weaponry: He has a standard Lightsaber with an Azure crystal which produces a blue blade
Ship (If you have one): N/A
Biography: Victar was born on Coruscant as a young Force-sensitive boy and was quickly brought to the attention to the Jedi Order and was brought up as a padawan, learning the ways of the Jedi and personally attempting to hone his force abilities mostly because he was impressed with the Jedi he saw daily. He trained vigorously and was a model student of the order skilled in both the Force and Lightsaber combat, but despite his attempts, he was not yet ready to become a Jedi Knight as he wasn't spiritually ready. He realized that his current reasons for becoming a Jedi (The status) was't a suitable reason to become a Knight and so spent a week in deep meditation honing his connection to the force and coming out ready for Knightdom with a noticeable attitude adjustment.

He served as a steadfast member of the order participating in many missions against the Coalition and gaining a bit of renown for his efforts across the galaxy involved in many smaller combat missions and was a member of the strike force on Commenmor in 182 ABY and was a present failed assault on Eridu. In 189 ABY he was present in the attack on the Telos IV and managed to escape with a few others to Illum, injured from multiple blaster shots causing him to become resentful. Knowing that he is becoming influenced by the Dark Side he spends most days training and mediating as to keep his mind off the feelings of anger he has, but as time goes on he's noticed it becomes less effective...
RP Example :here
Notes: If he has too many force abilities or you want the links to where I got them, I'll fix it.

I added a few details and removed a few things that I didn't already from the past version of the character I had planned.

Also, just curious, judging by your picture, he is Mirialan. Is this what you had in mind?

[Great Confederacy of Commonwealth States]

Yes! She uses her Sith powers secretly during battle, but only her direct Sith acolytes know of her status. For the rest of the galaxy, she is just a very skilled soldier and tactician. Most probably do not even connect the slaughter of the Hutts to her.

Edit: I just made sure to say that I meant her as the Dark Lord of the Sith, for plot purposes. I hope that's okay with you!

[American Pere Housh]

What would be good for me a Jedi Knight or a Sith Lord?

[Great Confederacy of Commonwealth States]

What would be good for me a Jedi Knight or a Sith Lord?

I would like some Sith insiders in both the Coalition and the Alliance...

[Jedi Council]

Yes! She uses her Sith powers secretly during battle, but only her direct Sith acolytes know of her status. For the rest of the galaxy, she is just a very skilled soldier and tactician. Most probably do not even connect the slaughter of the Hutts to her.

Edit: I just made sure to say that I meant her as the Dark Lord of the Sith, for plot purposes. I hope that's okay with you!

Perfect, sounds like an interesting character.
That works for me.

What would be good for me a Jedi Knight or a Sith Lord?

I would like some Sith insiders in both the Coalition and the Alliance...

We also need some Alliance soldiers and Coalition Warlords.

[American Pere Housh]

What would be good for me a Jedi Knight or a Sith Lord?

I would like some Sith insiders in both the Coalition and the Alliance...

I thinking about being an Sith insider in the Alliance but she will serve under Darth Anarkus. She will be force sensitive and Anarkus's apprentice if that is ok with you,GCCS.

[Great Confederacy of Commonwealth States]

I would like some Sith insiders in both the Coalition and the Alliance...

I thinking about being an Sith insider in the Alliance but she will serve under Darth Anarkus. She will be force sensitive and Anarkus's apprentice if that is ok with you,GCCS.

Since the Rule of Two has been abolished, there isn't really a master-apprentice dynamic anymore. It has been replaced by the Sith order, but you can be a member of that if that's okay with the Jedi council.

[Jedi Council]

I thinking about being an Sith insider in the Alliance but she will serve under Darth Anarkus. She will be force sensitive and Anarkus's apprentice if that is ok with you,GCCS.

Since the Rule of Two has been abolished, there isn't really a master-apprentice dynamic anymore. It has been replaced by the Sith order, but you can be a member of that if that's okay with the Jedi council.

Fine by me.

If we have an abundance of force users I will close apps for them in future.

[Endem]

The APP
Name: Amnal Kehy
Age: 25
Gender: M
Allegiance paid to Sith, Previously Jedi Order
Rank: Apprentice
Appearance:

Personality: Prone to emotional outbursts, in which he experiences a wide range of emotions, all the way from overwhelming sadness to blind rage, at other times he is a serious and cold person
Force Sensitive: Y
Skills/Powers: Form IV "Ataru" ( due to similarities and the fact he took the Lightsaber of his former Jedi Master he can also use Jar'Kai ), Force Push and Force Jump from normal Force Powers, but the Dark Side Powers are Force Choke, Force Rage and Force Rend
Weaponry: a Red Lightsaber and a Green Lightsaber
Ship: no, but his master has one ( I don't know what types there are, sorry )
Biography: Born in 175 ABY on Vaklin, he had a neglectful and sometimes outright abusive family, for 7 years his anger grew at his father, his father, an drunkard, when he got drunk he would become angry, and when he was angry he would beat his son. In this state his various mood swings formed, sometimes he gone through his father's beating him with remarkable stoicism, which only made his father more angry, sometimes he would simply curl up, sometimes he would laugh histerically and sonetimes he would get angry himself and try to counter attack, usually to no success. Until his force sensitivity showed very late in his life, but, oncee in 182 he just slammed his father against the wall with just a move of his hand, and he would probably continue on if not for a Jedi passing nearby, one Kareh Vunns.

Kareh, saved Amnal's father and seeing the force in Amnal rescued him from his family and life on Vaklin. Amal was taken into training, progressing among other Younglings rapidly, which was unusual given his age, and how late he showed his force sensitivity, but he progressed into becoming a Padawan in 187 ABY after meditating for a long time in Ilum just a few months before the Armistice. He was probably the last Padawan to go through this process when Jedi Order was still legal, his blade turned out to be a blue one, but, unlike others, it was unstable, pulsating with energy, and his master became the one that saved his father, Kareh Vunns.

For a few months before the Armstice, Kareh and Amnal made a bond akin to this of father and son, Kareh always had the right words to calm Amnal down, and Amnal looked up to Kareh as the moral compass he lacked for most of his life. But then it came, Vulpter Armistice, after that Kareh along with Amnal were on the run. In 189 ABY on Telos IV they miraculously survived, presumed dead they managed to escape the world of Telos IV that saw yet another Jedi Purge.

But this run of theirs ended in 192 ABY where Kareh and Amnal were cornered in an old building by the Coalition officials, they knew they were dead, yet, Kareh still cared about his Padawan, he still attempted to calm him down, but this only resulted in Amnal becoming angry. Then in a stressful response Kareh grabbed Amnal and started shaking him, not knowing why his master was behaving like this and having flashbacks of his father he slammed his Master against the wall, for which a figure unknowingly to everyone watched the whole scene waited for. After Kareh slammed into the wall nearly breaking it Amnal was unable to stop himself and choked his master to death using force.

After Kareh's lifeless body fallen onto the floor Amnal collapsed as well, crying, after he just killed his master and who he considered his father, soon, Kareh's body disappeared, Amnal presumed it disappeared into the Force ( far from truth actually ) as Amnal picked up his Master's Lightsaber, and then a mysterious figure put it's hand on Amnal shoulder and said "Congratulations, you just made your sacrifice". They then walked out of the building with bodies of Coalition officials, those that were supposed to kill him and Kareh.

The Figure soon revealed itself as a Sith, he never learned the Sith's name, simply calling him Master, thus you can easily conclude Amnal became the Sith's apprentice, maybe by Manipulation, maybe because Amnal tasted the power of the Dark Side, or something entirely else. Master taught Amnal about many Dark Side powers, by 200 ABY he mastered Force Choke, Force Rage, and Force Rend, and still training him in various much more, destructive techniques, usually on unsuspecting anything civilians, yet, a glimmer of hope still remains, if only he would come under the watchful eye of the Jedi and the Light Side.
RPIExample:

I guess it's best to go with an Example from a Star Wars RP

Notes: Nah

[Atkemri]

The APP
Name: Ubanrimu, Mandalore the Risen, Darth Anarkus
Age: 56
Gender: Female
Allegiance paid to: Mandalore, the One Sith
Rank: Mandalore, Sith Lord
Appearance:

(Image)

Personality: Ubanrimu is an emotional, wrathful personality, filled with ideas of vengeance against those who have wronged her, and very sensitive of perceived slights. She believes to be on a holy mission from the Force itself to bring about a form of equality to the galaxy, a Sith justice for all held in place by the power of the Dark Lord. For this, she believes all the existing power structures in the galaxy must be torn down first, burnt to a crisp. As such, she hopes to lead a Great Mandalorian crusade against both the Alliance and the Coalition.

Unlike the Jedi, Ubanrimu has a very morally grey view of the galaxy. She has friends, and she has enemies, but she knows there are people in between that mean here no harm, and that she tries to protect. She sees herself as a saviour, and fuelled with that self-righteous fury she believes she is protecting people against themselves. As such, she opposes meaningless killing and gore for gore’s sake, but she will accept high collateral damage in pursuit of her final goals.
Force Sensitive: Y
Skills/Powers:
Force Horror
Force Lightning
Force Choke
Force Inspire
Force Rage
Light Sabre form: Trakata (Only used in secret)
Weaponry:
Main: F-11D Blaster rifle
Secondary: Dual Nubian blaster pistols
Melee: Combat knife
Secret: Red light sabre
Ship:
Flag ship: Saboath Destroyer, ‘Guillotine’
Personal fighter: Kom'rk-class
Biography: A single, derelict Neimoidian shuttle. That was what the One Sith Order had become in 164 ABY. After lingering within the Imperial bureaucracy after the fall of Kryat, the last members of the Order retreated back to the final imperial strongholds. Before the Alliance could invade to unite these strongholds, the remaining imperial power structures had already purged themselves three times over, leaving the Sith as refugees. Six members remained at this point, among whom the young initiate Ubanrimu. The Twi’lek had been taken forcefully from her parents during the fall of the One Sith, and was one of the last new editions. After this, the One Sith found it too risky to provoke the Jedi and alert them to their survival. This led to the surviving members seeking shelter aboard a shuttle, desperately looking for some semblance of structure that survived their collapse. However, every safe house they found was abandoned, every rendezvous point forgotten.

Eventually, the survivors under the aptly named Darth Invictus started anew. They headed to the court of the Hutts on Nal Hutta, ordering their dark services in secret to one of the Huttese Warlords, Jingo the Hutt. Jingo was a great Hutt, seen as the first among equals, and with the help of his new Sith soldiers his power was concentrated tremendously. This, of course, inspired rivals. Jingo the Hutt was killed during a wedding ceremony, and the members of his Sith cult were captured. First they were held as trophies and agents, but one by one successive Huttese civil wars dwindled these numbers down. The third- and second-to-last members of the Order killed one another in single combat, having viciously wounded each other in some kind of gladiatorial match that was supposed to end the whole affair, but which obviously did nothing.

Only Ubanrimu survived, by the sole virtue of being a Twi’lek woman. She was seen as a slave of high value. Stripped of her weapons, perpetually bound, she was pulled around the Hutt criminal empire. She was a trophy, a proof that these Huttese warlords could succeed where Jabba the Great had failed. They could keep a force sensitive slave in check. She was ridiculed, she had food and other muck thrown at her. She was forced to battle in gladiatorial games with her bound hands, only to be shocked back into a submissive state. For Ubanrimu, who had once commanded legions, this was the height of humiliation.

Yet, at first, she had no will to escape. What was there to escape to? The wretched, toxic swamps of Nal Hutta? The endless deserts of Tatooine? And beyond, the One Sith was dead. She could never return to her brothers and sisters. The Jedi had won. She only thought of liberation after speaking to so many of her fellow enslaved. People who had done nothing wrong all their lives, forced into servitude because someone else had bigger guns. With the Alliance and Jedi powerless to do anything about it, afraid to get their hands dirty. When, in 187, the Jedi order was banned from the Alliance, Ubanrimu took her chance. While in a gladiatorial match on Nimban, under the jurisdiction of Togo the Hutt, she used her force powers to inspire her fellow fighters to take up arms against the Hutts. Taken by surprise, the forces of Togo were overwhelmed. Mercenaries were given the choice to transfer to Ubanrimu or to die, and many chose to live. Hutt infrastructure on Nimban was burned to the ground, and Ubanrimu gave power back to the local people to govern themselves. With the rag-tag army at her back, she cut a bloody, chaotic swath through Hutt territory. There was no fixed strategy, no battle lines. Her fleet would jump out of hyperspace seemingly at random, destroy Hutt properties, liberate a planet, and move on. The last Hutts fortified themselves on Nal Hutta, but the reckoning never came. Ubanrimu and her fleet just disappeared from Hutt space, never to be seen again.

In 195, a fleet of mercenaries and former slaves fell out of hyperspace above Mandalore. The ruler of Mandalore, the Duke Tavosh, had masterfully played the Alliance and the Coalition against one another during his reign, supporting his power base with weapons and goods from both sides, while choosing neither. He even supported some Jedi exiles in his court. He was generally disliked for his craven stance, but his power base was unassailable. Before any combat could commence, Ubanrimu challenged the Duke to single combat. Unwilling to risk his life, the Duke escaped the planet un the dark of night, leaving his throne to be occupied by Ubanrimu. With her help, the Mandalorians reasserted themselves in their own space. After hearing of her exploits in Hutt space, the Mandalorians declared her Mandalore, and she took the title Mandalore the Inspired. Some of the Jedi she broke into joining her new Order, while others she simply executed.

Ubanrimu now has a well-defined plan for the galaxy. She does not seek to rule it in its current state. She hates the corruption in the galaxy, the unfair power structures, the crushing burden upon the common people, and she wishes to rectify that. She believes that can only be done by utterly destroying what exists. The Senate, the officers of the Coalition, the rich owners of Kuat, the shipyards of Mon Calamari, the final Hutt holdouts… She seeks to sow anarchy throughout the galaxy, and rise as its monarch of chaos: an equal playing field where the Sith presides over a free galaxy. She has not yet come forth as the Dark Lord, buy she has grown her following. From the very first day of her rebellion against the Hutts, she has been assembling followers in secret. They are slowly imbedding themselves in the power structures of both the Alliance and the Coalition, feeding her information and preparing the galaxy to rip itself apart. Meanwhole, Ubanrimu prepares the greatest Mandalorian fleet the galaxy has ever seen, not to wage war, but simply to destroy the power of both factions.

Accepted.
Just one clarification: Her status as a Sith Lord is a secret correct?

I added a few details and removed a few things that I didn't already from the past version of the character I had planned.

Also, just curious, judging by your picture, he is Mirialan. Is this what you had in mind?

No, it just worked for how I envisioned the character

[Dentali]

tag please reserve the leader of the alliance

[American Pere Housh]

The APP
Name:Sona Solo,Secretly: Darth Solatus
Age:24
Gender:Female
Allegiance paid to: Publicly: The Galactic Alliance, Secretly: Mandalore the Risen, Darth Anarkus
Rank:Lieutenant in Alliance Navy
Appearance (Picture preferred, if not, detailed description accepted):
Personality:Friendly to those she calls friends, cold and businesslike to strangers
Force Sensitive: Y
Skills/Powers:Ataru and Vaapad
Force Lightning
Force Choke
Force Push
Force Drain
Force Storm(Learning;not mastered)
Force Healing
Revitalize
Weaponry:Modified A280 Blaster Rifle
Modified DL-44 Heavy Blaster Pistol
Secret: Twin yellow lightsabers
Ship (If you have one):T-85 X-wing
Biography:Wip
RP Example:
Notes:

[American Pere Housh]

The APP
Name:Sona Solo
Age:24
Gender:Female
Allegiance paid to: Publicly: The Galactic Alliance, Secretly: Mandalore the Risen, Darth Anarkus
Rank:Lieutenant in Alliance Navy
Appearance (Picture preferred, if not, detailed description accepted):(Image)
Personality:Friendly to those she calls friends, cold and businesslike to strangers
Force Sensitive: Y
Skills/Powers:Ataru and Vaapad
Force Lightning
Force Choke
Force Push
Force Drain
Force Storm(Learning;not mastered)
Force Healing
Revitalize
Weaponry:Modified A280 Blaster Rifle
Modified DL-44 Heavy Blaster Pistol
Secret: Twin yellow lightsabers
Ship (If you have one):T-85 X-wing
Biography:Wip
RP Example:
Notes:

How is this so far?

[Atkemri]

Just for the next person making a force-sensitive app, a few Jedi would be appreciated. Especially for the Grandmaster of the order.

[American Pere Housh]

Just for the next person making a force-sensitive app, a few Jedi would be appreciated. Especially for the Grandmaster of the order.

I'm more along the line of Sith not Jedi.

[Dentali]

WIP


The APP
Name: Bren Katar
Age: 67
Gender: Bothan
Allegiance paid to: Alliance
Rank: Grand Admiral of the Alliance
Appearance (Picture preferred, if not, detailed description accepted):
Personality: Cold, Calculating, Perceptive,
Force Sensitive: (Y/N) N
Skills/Powers: Strategy, Logistics, Tactics, Reading people, complex manuvers, training and inspiring indivduals
Weaponry: Pistol
Ship (If you have one): The Organa a Viscount-Class Star Defender
Biography:
RP Example:
Notes: