Agarntrop wrote:Second app (I've abandoned Hawkins-Fry coz I'd have to tweak him to the point he was no longer fun.)
NS Nation Name: Agarntrop
Character Name: Tara Misra
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 46 (in RP timeline) (born 29 March 1972)
Character Height: 5' 6''
Character Weight: 169 lbs
Character Position/Role/Job: Acting United States Secretary of Homeland Security (2018-), Chair of the United States House Financial Services Subcommittee on National Security, International Development and Monetary Policy (2015-2017), Member of the United States House Financial Services Subcommittee on National Security, International Development and Monetary Policy (2013-2017), Member of the United States House Financial Services Subcommittee on Domestic Monetary Policy and Technology (2011-2013), United States Representative for Kentucky's 5th Congressional District (2011-2017).
Appearance:
Character State of Origin: New York
Character State of Residence: District of Columbia
Character Party Affiliation: Republican (1990-1995; 1997-), Independent (1995-1997)
Main Strengths: Good at speeches, persuasive, good at answering questions, intelligent.
Main Weaknesses: Accused of lying, manipulative, prone to speak before thinking, allegations of corruption.
Biography:
Other Info: boy that took a long time to make
I have read and accept the rules of the roleplay: Agarntrop
Do Not Remove: 84721
This is an amazing application, very well written! I do have my concerns though, especially with how she became Chair of the Financial Services Subcommittee on National Security, International Development and Monetary Policy.
My other concern is with her being appointed Secretary of Homeland Security. She doesn’t seem to have much experience in the Homeland Security field and her appointment would be very strange. She could probably get away with being appointed to a lower level position, but definitely not a Cabinet-level position.
Unless you are adamant on her age being 48, I would recommend bumping the age up by two years.
Presumably her husband lives and works in New York. It doesn’t much sense to have her in a district in Kentucky with her family living away from her.
There is also no way that Nash could’ve worked part-time as an office manager unless this was only during recess which to my knowledge happens around the same time. Also what office would this be at, D.C or Kentucky?