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Infected Mushroom
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Postby Infected Mushroom » Sat Sep 14, 2019 5:56 pm

Okay Koupel/Cyv a couple of things (please edit):

Cyv starts at the top of Warehouse 46. I will allow it this time (it makes sense that he was infiltrated in to the roof perhaps) but next time, tell me about it first just to confirm.

1. Include an internal monologue before the first paragraph explaining to the audience (for their benefit) how he had joined the AT force. You were saying he was hired by Kalden right? Just mention it very briefly. Otherwise the readers have no idea where this character came from or which side he is on.

2. What does Cyv look like? I know you possibly included a description in the App but in the IC when a PC character first appears, best to give even just a brief description. For example; Is he wearing a mask? What does the costume look like?

3. What does the "Object" that he created look like? Please include a description so that when I RP the NPC Mafia goons turning around, I can describe it in text.

...

I'm looking forward to what happens next. Good job on introducing the character. Please make the edits.
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Krvava Koupel
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Postby Krvava Koupel » Sat Sep 14, 2019 6:07 pm

Infected Mushroom wrote:Okay Koupel/Cyv a couple of things (please edit):

Cyv starts at the top of Warehouse 46. I will allow it this time (it makes sense that he was infiltrated in to the roof perhaps) but next time, tell me about it first just to confirm.

1. Include an internal monologue before the first paragraph explaining to the audience (for their benefit) how he had joined the AT force. You were saying he was hired by Kalden right? Just mention it very briefly. Otherwise the readers have no idea where this character came from or which side he is on.

2. What does Cyv look like? I know you possibly included a description in the App but in the IC when a PC character first appears, best to give even just a brief description. For example; Is he wearing a mask? What does the costume look like?

3. What does the "Object" that he created look like? Please include a description so that when I RP the NPC Mafia goons turning around, I can describe it in text.

...

I'm looking forward to what happens next. Good job on introducing the character. Please make the edits.


Just remember only one of the goons can hear it. Makes him seem delusional a tad
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Postby Infected Mushroom » Sat Sep 14, 2019 6:26 pm

Krvava Koupel wrote:
Infected Mushroom wrote:Okay Koupel/Cyv a couple of things (please edit):

Cyv starts at the top of Warehouse 46. I will allow it this time (it makes sense that he was infiltrated in to the roof perhaps) but next time, tell me about it first just to confirm.

1. Include an internal monologue before the first paragraph explaining to the audience (for their benefit) how he had joined the AT force. You were saying he was hired by Kalden right? Just mention it very briefly. Otherwise the readers have no idea where this character came from or which side he is on.

2. What does Cyv look like? I know you possibly included a description in the App but in the IC when a PC character first appears, best to give even just a brief description. For example; Is he wearing a mask? What does the costume look like?

3. What does the "Object" that he created look like? Please include a description so that when I RP the NPC Mafia goons turning around, I can describe it in text.

...

I'm looking forward to what happens next. Good job on introducing the character. Please make the edits.


Just remember only one of the goons can hear it. Makes him seem delusional a tad


so you're saying one of the guards at the front of the warehouse right now is a mirror image of Cyv's?

I'm confused by the reference to the mirror image

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Postby Polish Prussian Commonwealth » Sat Sep 14, 2019 7:01 pm

tegg
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Postby Infected Mushroom » Sat Sep 14, 2019 7:08 pm

Polish Prussian Commonwealth wrote:tegg


im new to RP terminology what does tag mean?

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Postby Yaruqo » Sat Sep 14, 2019 7:14 pm

Infected Mushroom wrote:
Polish Prussian Commonwealth wrote:tegg


im new to RP terminology what does tag mean?

They're just putting in a post so that they can refer back to the thread. Some folks do it if they're too busy at the moment and want to go back and write up an app in those threads that require one.
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Postby Infected Mushroom » Sat Sep 14, 2019 7:28 pm

Yaruqo wrote:
Infected Mushroom wrote:
im new to RP terminology what does tag mean?

They're just putting in a post so that they can refer back to the thread. Some folks do it if they're too busy at the moment and want to go back and write up an app in those threads that require one.


Ah I see.

This is getting into some seriously crazy/goofed up territory...

I can't even not laugh as I'm typing this stuff up...
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Postby Krvava Koupel » Sun Sep 15, 2019 2:32 pm

Infected Mushroom wrote:
Krvava Koupel wrote:
Just remember only one of the goons can hear it. Makes him seem delusional a tad


so you're saying one of the guards at the front of the warehouse right now is a mirror image of Cyv's?

I'm confused by the reference to the mirror image


Mirror Image allows Cyv to look through a "mirror." It's like a 2 way mirror, but Cyv can form one anywhere and have a way to look in
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Postby Infected Mushroom » Sun Sep 15, 2019 5:38 pm

Krvava Koupel wrote:
Infected Mushroom wrote:
so you're saying one of the guards at the front of the warehouse right now is a mirror image of Cyv's?

I'm confused by the reference to the mirror image


Mirror Image allows Cyv to look through a "mirror." It's like a 2 way mirror, but Cyv can form one anywhere and have a way to look in


Oh

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Postby Krvava Koupel » Mon Sep 16, 2019 2:07 pm

Infected Mushroom wrote:
Yaruqo wrote:They're just putting in a post so that they can refer back to the thread. Some folks do it if they're too busy at the moment and want to go back and write up an app in those threads that require one.


Ah I see.

This is getting into some seriously crazy/goofed up territory...

I can't even not laugh as I'm typing this stuff up...


I feel like Cyv is going to add a really interesting twist to future missions
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Postby Shadowwell » Mon Sep 16, 2019 5:33 pm

Gonna have to bow out of this, my internet situation currently makes participating in rps and such rather difficult.
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Postby Sperio » Mon Sep 16, 2019 8:44 pm

Application Format:
Name: Jason Grandant
Age: 34
Skillset: Acrobatics, Knowledge of the streets, marksmanship
Personality: Cold, Standoffish, hates mafia with a vengeance
Weaknesses/Fears: Snakes. Murderous
Likes: the city
Dislikes: The Mafia
Motivation for joining Antihero/Mafia team: Mafia Killed his wife and child
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Postby Infected Mushroom » Mon Sep 16, 2019 8:54 pm

Shadowwell wrote:Gonna have to bow out of this, my internet situation currently makes participating in rps and such rather difficult.


Ok I understand

Feel free to follow the RP for fun and throw out ideas if you want :)

Cheers!

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Postby Infected Mushroom » Mon Sep 16, 2019 8:55 pm

Sperio wrote:Application Format:
Name: Jason Grandant
Age: 34
Skillset: Acrobatics, Knowledge of the streets, marksmanship
Personality: Cold, Standoffish, hates mafia with a vengeance
Weaknesses/Fears: Snakes. Murderous
Likes: the city
Dislikes: The Mafia
Motivation for joining Antihero/Mafia team: Mafia Killed his wife and child


Approved

Please try to read as much if the IC as possible

For now Laura is away yo get more weapons/recruit old friends

Is it okay if your character enters a bit later from Night 3 onward?

We’re on the night 2 attack for now

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Postby Shastasla » Mon Sep 16, 2019 10:28 pm

Application Format:
Name: Charlie Seely
Age: 27
Appearance: A 6'5 man. In general, a big guy that easily weighs somewhere between 205lbs and 220 lbs. He also carries false hazel eyes that sit in a slanted position, his complexion is darker (he's a White man) and his hair is dark but not quite black. He also has several tattoos, mostly anything related to luck. Also has a shaved bald head, twirly moustache and a somewhat forked goatee.
Skillset: Strength, Speed, Endurance all fits well with folk fighting.
Personality: An extrovert that tends to be decisive and independent but as well violent, short-tempered, and vengeful.
Weaknesses/Fears: Clouded Judgement & Fears
Likes: Pervy things, Brotherhood, Fire.
Dislikes: Loudness, Medicine, and People accidentally matching his movements.
Motivation for joining Antihero/Mafia team: He moved in with his brotherly cousin in New York, helping him pay the rent with flipping burgers and occasionally beating the money out of people for the Mob. After being caught by his cousin he stopped, which pissed a few too many people off. In the end the cousin was cremated and those responsible went unpunished.
Though he isn't particularly aligned with the Antiheroes, he's practically a Mafiaman himself.

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Postby Infected Mushroom » Mon Sep 16, 2019 11:16 pm

Shastasla wrote:Application Format:
Name: Charlie Seely
Age: 27
Appearance: A 6'5 man. In general, a big guy that easily weighs somewhere between 205lbs and 220 lbs. He also carries false hazel eyes that sit in a slanted position, his complexion is darker (he's a White man) and his hair is dark but not quite black. He also has several tattoos, mostly anything related to luck. Also has a shaved bald head, twirly moustache and a somewhat forked goatee.
Skillset: Strength, Speed, Endurance all fits well with folk fighting.
Personality: An extrovert that tends to be decisive and independent but as well violent, short-tempered, and vengeful.
Weaknesses/Fears: Clouded Judgement & Fears
Likes: Pervy things, Brotherhood, Fire.
Dislikes: Loudness, Medicine, and People accidentally matching his movements.
Motivation for joining Antihero/Mafia team: He moved in with his brotherly cousin in New York, helping him pay the rent with flipping burgers and occasionally beating the money out of people for the Mob. After being caught by his cousin he stopped, which pissed a few too many people off. In the end the cousin was cremated and those responsible went unpunished.
Though he isn't particularly aligned with the Antiheroes, he's practically a Mafiaman himself.


So which side does he fight for?

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Postby Shastasla » Tue Sep 17, 2019 12:08 pm

Infected Mushroom wrote:
Shastasla wrote:Application Format:
Name: Charlie Seely
Age: 27
Appearance: A 6'5 man. In general, a big guy that easily weighs somewhere between 205lbs and 220 lbs. He also carries false hazel eyes that sit in a slanted position, his complexion is darker (he's a White man) and his hair is dark but not quite black. He also has several tattoos, mostly anything related to luck. Also has a shaved bald head, twirly moustache and a somewhat forked goatee.
Skillset: Strength, Speed, Endurance all fits well with folk fighting.
Personality: An extrovert that tends to be decisive and independent but as well violent, short-tempered, and vengeful.
Weaknesses/Fears: Clouded Judgement & Fears
Likes: Pervy things, Brotherhood, Fire.
Dislikes: Loudness, Medicine, and People accidentally matching his movements.
Motivation for joining Antihero/Mafia team: He moved in with his brotherly cousin in New York, helping him pay the rent with flipping burgers and occasionally beating the money out of people for the Mob. After being caught by his cousin he stopped, which pissed a few too many people off. In the end the cousin was cremated and those responsible went unpunished.
Though he isn't particularly aligned with the Antiheroes, he's practically a Mafiaman himself.


So which side does he fight for?

Antiheroes, though he associates with the previous Mafia which existed but is going against the United Mafia & them in turn.
Is that okay or should I change it a little?

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Infected Mushroom
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Postby Infected Mushroom » Tue Sep 17, 2019 3:38 pm

Shastasla wrote:
Infected Mushroom wrote:
So which side does he fight for?

Antiheroes, though he associates with the previous Mafia which existed but is going against the United Mafia & them in turn.
Is that okay or should I change it a little?


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Please show up in IC when we get to Night 3

We are in Night 2 now I will tg

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Postby Infected Mushroom » Thu Sep 19, 2019 8:59 am

Here's some Mafia Queen inspired art.

Image

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Postby Infected Mushroom » Fri Sep 20, 2019 11:22 pm

Please bear with me here

Haven said he’s going on a family trip

When he gets back, hopefully we can move past night 2

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Postby Infected Mushroom » Tue Sep 24, 2019 8:50 am

Thank you for participating in this RP.

However, a number of other projects have come up and I’m afraid I must for now declare an end to this RP for a number of reasons (at least insofar as me acting as the OP).

If the remaining players wish to carry on and nominate a new OP, re-organize things with what’s already been done and even use the existing NPCs, I won’t object and you have my blessing.

I apologize for being unable to coordinate this to the promised ending. Some RPs will reach the end, others won’t and there is definitely a lot of takeaway from how this was managed that I will be applying to other games in the future.

I withdraw as OP and from the RP (if anyone wants to pick up they may do so).

Thank you for your contribution to the game and I really hope you had a lot of fun!

Please note the changes to the IC and the OOC’s titles.
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Postby Infected Mushroom » Wed Sep 25, 2019 6:44 pm

^
^
^

I hate to leave works of art unfinished.

So...

I return as OP.

Let’s continue.

1. Kalden will set up a 1 on 1 meeting with Tom for Night 3
2. Marden can continue the City Hall arc
3. Oklan will enter a new rebels infiltration arc

I’ll figure out a scenario for Styx

...

Gabriels is probably doing some filler stuff now
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Postby Christian Confederation » Fri Sep 27, 2019 5:53 pm

Name: Captian Dixie
Age: 25
Appearance: Tall 6ft 6in, muscular White man, with blue eyes and brown hair. He where's thick body armor and has a helmet kinda like captian America, sometimes he has a Cape that looks like the Rebal battle flag.

Skillset: Sharpshooter, Ex Navy seal
Personality: kind, intelligent, Religious, love for the south and America.

Weaknesses/Fears: fears America loseing the last od it's identity.

Likes: Freedom, old fashioned way of things, America as a superpower

Dislikes: Corruption, Communism, unjustified war

Motivation for joining Antihero team: As a boy he hated seeing the death of the American morals and values, his father had hope the south would stand firm against this perversion of America, but Dixie too fell to Corruption. He will fight to bring America back to it's roots of Truth and justice.
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Postby Christian Confederation » Fri Sep 27, 2019 5:56 pm

Christian Confederation wrote:Name: Captian Dixie
Age: 25
Appearance: Tall 6ft 6in, muscular White man, with blue eyes and brown hair. He where's thick body armor and has a helmet kinda like captian America, sometimes he has a Cape that looks like the Rebal battle flag.

Skillset: Sharpshooter, Ex Navy seal
Personality: kind, intelligent, Religious, love for the south and America.

Weaknesses/Fears: fears America loseing the last od it's identity.

Likes: Freedom, old fashioned way of things, America as a superpower

Dislikes: Corruption, Communism, unjustified war

Motivation for joining Antihero team: As a boy he hated seeing the death of the American morals and values, his father had hope the south would stand firm against this perversion of America, but Dixie too fell to Corruption. He will fight to bring America back to it's roots of Truth and justice.

This is probley crapp but I think u get the idea.
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