Dynasties of Heaven(Alternate History, OPEN, OOC/Signup)

by **Ralnis** » Wed Aug 14, 2019 7:22 pm

Eternal Lotharia wrote:
Aeyariss wrote:You know what, I think it's best for me to lower my writing and take it down a notch to match the existing players as well. Expect over simplified single para-liners from now on.

I'm trying to get them to improve.

Not much to improve on my end, I'm just a simple horde going for the gold.

by **Kowani** » Wed Aug 14, 2019 7:26 pm

Eternal Lotharia wrote:
Ralnis wrote:Not much to improve on my end, I'm just a simple horde going for the gold.

There's a lot to improve on writing wise.

Aren’t politicians supposed to do diplomacy?

by **Ralnis** » Wed Aug 14, 2019 7:27 pm

Eternal Lotharia wrote:
Ralnis wrote:Not much to improve on my end, I'm just a simple horde going for the gold.

There's a lot to improve on writing wise.

Did say I was a fucking idiot.

by **Aeyariss** » Wed Aug 14, 2019 7:27 pm

Yo deian, you mind if I write that sometime in the past the Zhou family rise to become governor and received royal decree that the land in zhou belong to them in exchange for loyalty and service? Consider the Zhous as banner man to....hmm, what's your house in the rp again?

by **Aeyariss** » Wed Aug 14, 2019 7:29 pm

I'm wrapping the origin story and time skip to present.

by **Aeyariss** » Wed Aug 14, 2019 9:17 pm

Someone better post on the IC first.

by **Aeyariss** » Wed Aug 14, 2019 10:22 pm

Eternal Lotharia wrote:Guys what would be the opposite of Dynasties of Heaven/china?

Japan?
India?
Mesopotamia?

Just thinking of a successor RP like 5 years in the future called "Kingdoms of Hell".

Focus on this one for the time being, will you.

by **The World Capitalist Confederation** » Thu Aug 15, 2019 3:26 am

Eternal Lotharia wrote:
The World Capitalist Confederation wrote:Chekhov's Law, remember? Nothing needs to be said that isn't necessary. Writing 10 paragraphs of filler to say "I invite everyone who hates the Xia" isn't efficient nor even following any sort of writing guideline.

Not applicable here.

Really, it's not? Brevity is good, correct? There's no need to put filler paragraphs for an invitation.

by **Aeyariss** » Thu Aug 15, 2019 4:41 am

The World Capitalist Confederation wrote:Really, it's not? Brevity is good, correct? There's no need to put filler paragraphs for an invitation.

All warlords and men who wish to pit themselves against the Xia are hrereby invited to Yunnan 5 days from now.

This is not actionable to my characters, because simply, I have no idea how he received them and how this message was sent out. At this point Yunan is pretty much a backwater power challenging the central imperial power in early China. Marching thousands of miles south...erm. Not doable in five days...especially in 1600BC. Unless we all use teleport.

I'd say you need to elaborate more.

by **Aeyariss** » Thu Aug 15, 2019 5:47 am

Deian, you're not controlling the Xia Dynasty king anymore?
If you are Guanzhong, is still considered a banner man of the Xia dynasty.

by **Kowani** » Thu Aug 15, 2019 7:56 am

Eternal Lotharia wrote:
Kowani wrote:Aren’t politicians supposed to do diplomacy?

Yes.

Like you.
Posting.
Now.

Gotta go, wifi time up now.

Gonna play mount and blade warband(wish there was a romance overhaul mod ).

Wait, the fuck am I s’posed to post? I’m already in a conversation!

by **Strala** » Thu Aug 15, 2019 1:07 pm

Um is my app accepted or denied

by **Kowani** » Thu Aug 15, 2019 1:07 pm

Eternal Lotharia wrote:
Kowani wrote:Wait, the fuck am I s’posed to post? I’m already in a conversation!

He replied.

…I’m blind. :oops:

Posting now!

by **Strala** » Thu Aug 15, 2019 1:56 pm

OP can I get my app reviewed?

by **Endem** » Thu Aug 15, 2019 1:59 pm

Got a bit busy today, once again my post is delayed

by **Strala** » Thu Aug 15, 2019 2:08 pm

Eternal Lotharia wrote:Please don't be lazy, find them.

Done

by **Kowani** » Thu Aug 15, 2019 2:20 pm

Eternal Lotharia wrote:Is that my cue?

Well, the stage is set for you, and both Danceria and I seem to be somewhat set on not revealing too much…

by **Ralnis** » Thu Aug 15, 2019 3:50 pm

So I know that I suck at playing RPs but I wanted to know how the Emperor would feel if Lao sent the head of the minister to him as a message that Lao has Wang province and is coming for his city?

by **Kowani** » Thu Aug 15, 2019 4:03 pm

Eternal Lotharia wrote:So uh Kowani I don't know how to play Go, will you like to play Chess instead to decide who wins?

I'm the best I know at Chess. I've only consistently lost to 1 person, an old man.

Chess works. I just went with Go for immersion. :lol2:

by **Kowani** » Thu Aug 15, 2019 4:04 pm

Eternal Lotharia wrote:
Kowani wrote:Chess works. I just went with Go for immersion.

I'll try at home to play you, I got only 20 minutes left.

Sure thing.

by **Ralnis** » Thu Aug 15, 2019 4:05 pm

I'm going to drop out, sorry for causing problems.

by **The World Capitalist Confederation** » Thu Aug 15, 2019 6:20 pm

I'm going to drop out also, mostly because, despite the good premise of the RP, it's been disorganised and confusing. Also, I have lots of RPs going on, so I thought this one was the best one to drop out of because it's quite early.

by **Aeyariss** » Thu Aug 15, 2019 10:55 pm

Well, I hope this RP can continue.

by **Flarbinia** » Thu Aug 15, 2019 10:59 pm

From the ashes of Xia, Dai will rise. The province is preparing for war, its ruler amassing armies and erecting defenses in preparation for his planned conquests. Will the young king conquer all of China or will he die on the field of battle, leaving his brother as regent for his son?

by **Kowani** » Thu Aug 15, 2019 11:02 pm

Aeyariss wrote:Well, I hope this RP can continue.

Indeed.

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