Exalted: Age of Sorrows (Always Open/Accepting Applications)

[Parcia]

Editing the name is good. But you didn't fix any of the other concerns.

Hmm. Then I'll just do a new one then. I'll delete the first one.

Also I notice you the name horse after a late general...you're not referencing a certain American Civil War general are you?

I didn't know anything about that. I chose that because it was the surname of one of the characters in Percy Jackson. The more you learn.

Selena Beauregard, Daughter of Aphrodite, Nifty little side character that didn't get enough time in the light as she deserved.

[Abercontin-Jereaux]

Hmm. Then I'll just do a new one then. I'll delete the first one.


I didn't know anything about that. I chose that because it was the surname of one of the characters in Percy Jackson. The more you learn.

Selena Beauregard, Daughter of Aphrodite, Nifty little side character that didn't get enough time in the light as she decided.

Seilena Beauregard, but otherwise the same.

[Parcia]

Selena Beauregard, Daughter of Aphrodite, Nifty little side character that didn't get enough time in the light as she decided.

Seilena Beauregard, but otherwise the same.

Haven't Read the books in years, think all I have atm is book 6 of the original set and book 4 of the second. God, Percy Jackson got me through the shitfest that was Middle school.

[Abercontin-Jereaux]

Seilena Beauregard, but otherwise the same.

Haven't Read the books in years, think all I have atm is book 6 of the original set and book 4 of the second. God, Percy Jackson got me through the shitfest that was Middle school.

Okay... But let's not threadjack, shall we?

[Acerbez]

Pretty awesome combination for Adonis though, A water element that swings a fiery blade.

I dig the contrast.

[Imperialisium]

Editing the name is good. But you didn't fix any of the other concerns.

Hmm. Then I'll just do a new one then. I'll delete the first one.

Also I notice you the name horse after a late general...you're not referencing a certain American Civil War general are you?

I didn't know anything about that. I chose that because it was the surname of one of the characters in Percy Jackson. The more you learn.

NationStates Name: Abercontin-Jereaux
Basic Info:
Given Name: Adonis(it's a bit weird, but meh)
Surname/House: Chung
House Symbol/Sigil: (if applicable)

[img]https://vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/l5r/images/b/ba/Jade_Dragon.jpg/revision/latest?cb=20121001200358
[/img]

Age: 23
Height: 1.85 m
Weight: 77 kg
Body Build: (Athletic, lanky, gaunt etc) Hunky
Eye Color: Turqoise
Image:

Description:( What cannot be seen in an image or additional noteworthy info)Adonis was born to a (surprisingly) Greek mother. His personality is unlike his physical appearance, as Adonis is an introvert, although he can get a bit wild when drunk. He works as a bartender, but in his free time he prefers to read literature. He has blue hair and wears an occasional headband during important occasions. He is the only child.
Sexuality: Heterosexual
Exalted:(Yes or No) Yes
Occupation: (what do you do survive or social status) Bartender by day, private student by night
Allegiance: (if applicable)None.
Biography: His biography is stated in the description.
Starting Equipment: (just need personal effects or important items by your character. Like a family heirloom or what not)
[using the same as what I used for Siarus]
The Fiery Sword- Adonis always carry a fire sword. It emits a fiery heat and legend says it can slice anything up. This sword is a legacy and he found it while playing soldiers when he was 9.

Beauregard- Beauregard is a white stallion who can run quite fast but doesn't have that powerful a stamina. He was named after the late general.(who has got nothing to do with the civil war one)
Intimacy Metrics
(Total of 50 points, may only put a maximum of five in each stat at start, can fluctuate throughout RP as events transpire and basically help visualize the personality of your character. Maximum of ten in each stat metric.)
Honor Rating: 4
Relationship Status: 5
Intelligence: 4
Wit: 4
Academic Knowledge: 4
Sense of Humor: 2
Sociability: 1
Law: (How high your character regards the law and against breaking it) 4
Perception: (seeing through lies, illusion, and surroundings to try and gain the initiative) 3
Compassion: 4
Temperance: 5
Valor: 2

Convictions: (List them)
[b]Justice is the answer- Siarus believes that everything can only be resolved with justice, and that he looks down on biased people and people who are filled with prejudice.
Filial Piety- It explains itself
Exalted Metrics (if applicable)
Primary Focus: (Fire, Wood, Earth, Water, Air) Water
Secondary Focuses: (May not be picked if you have a primary of Adept level. See Mastery parenthesis for explanation)
Anima: (when you display your power it may manifest around you as a visible aura. Sometimes taking the shape of an animal, being, or totem) Winter fox
Mastery: (Novice, Initiate, Adept, Learned, Expert, Master, Grandmaster; capped at Adept to start. Note that you may start with one Adeptcy or two initiate or three novice focuses.) Adept
Essence: (How much raw power you have. Start with fifty points) 50
Motes: (how many times in a day you may use Essence without being drained. Start with five.) 5

Skills
(Total of 50 points and may start with a maximum of six in each category as initial limit. Categories are stat based unless stated.)
Language: (How quick you can learn foreign languages) 5
Able to Read: (Yes or No) Yes
Reading Comprehension: (how well your character reads) 5

Archery: 4
Ranged: (utilizing other ranged weapons like throwing knives etc) 4
Riding: 6
Short Arm Melee: (single and hand and half swords, maces, flails, etc) 5
Long Arm Melee: (Spears, two hand swords, long axes) 4
Polearms: (also includes spears and halberds) 3

Crafting
Basic Repair: (Fixing simple things like cartwheels and your starting equipment)4
Advanced Repair: (Advanced machinery) 2
Magitech: (Able to fix magical machinery)2
Artifice: (Creating things) 1
Metallurgy: (How well you fashion metal) 1
Engineering: (Catch all of construction and building knowledges. A 1 is like putting a tent and 100 is building Dimensional Gateways)
14
Magic (For Non-Exalted whom may learn Sorcery though it is considered Low Magic and weaker but able to be mastered by anyone)
Elemental: (list element and stat)
Energy: (Raw pure power)
Animate: (How well you animate machinery)
Necromancy: (How well you animate the dead)
Animalism: (Control of animals)
Shapeshifting: (Temporarily changing your form)
Illusion:
Summoning:

[/b]

Since the other issues I have weren't addressed, I can't accept.

[Abercontin-Jereaux]

Hmm. Then I'll just do a new one then. I'll delete the first one.


I didn't know anything about that. I chose that because it was the surname of one of the characters in Percy Jackson. The more you learn.

NationStates Name: Abercontin-Jereaux
Basic Info:
Given Name: Adonis(it's a bit weird, but meh)
Surname/House: Chung
House Symbol/Sigil: (if applicable)

[img]https://vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/l5r/images/b/ba/Jade_Dragon.jpg/revision/latest?cb=20121001200358
[/img]

Age: 23
Height: 1.85 m
Weight: 77 kg
Body Build: (Athletic, lanky, gaunt etc) Hunky
Eye Color: Turqoise
Image:

Description:( What cannot be seen in an image or additional noteworthy info)Adonis was born to a (surprisingly) Greek mother. His personality is unlike his physical appearance, as Adonis is an introvert, although he can get a bit wild when drunk. He works as a bartender, but in his free time he prefers to read literature. He has blue hair and wears an occasional headband during important occasions. He is the only child.
Sexuality: Heterosexual
Exalted:(Yes or No) Yes
Occupation: (what do you do survive or social status) Bartender by day, private student by night
Allegiance: (if applicable)None.
Biography: His biography is stated in the description.
Starting Equipment: (just need personal effects or important items by your character. Like a family heirloom or what not)
[using the same as what I used for Siarus]
The Fiery Sword- Adonis always carry a fire sword. It emits a fiery heat and legend says it can slice anything up. This sword is a legacy and he found it while playing soldiers when he was 9.

Beauregard- Beauregard is a white stallion who can run quite fast but doesn't have that powerful a stamina. He was named after the late general.(who has got nothing to do with the civil war one)
Intimacy Metrics
(Total of 50 points, may only put a maximum of five in each stat at start, can fluctuate throughout RP as events transpire and basically help visualize the personality of your character. Maximum of ten in each stat metric.)
Honor Rating: 4
Relationship Status: 5
Intelligence: 4
Wit: 4
Academic Knowledge: 4
Sense of Humor: 2
Sociability: 1
Law: (How high your character regards the law and against breaking it) 4
Perception: (seeing through lies, illusion, and surroundings to try and gain the initiative) 3
Compassion: 4
Temperance: 5
Valor: 2

Convictions: (List them)
[b]Justice is the answer- Siarus believes that everything can only be resolved with justice, and that he looks down on biased people and people who are filled with prejudice.
Filial Piety- It explains itself
Exalted Metrics (if applicable)
Primary Focus: (Fire, Wood, Earth, Water, Air) Water
Secondary Focuses: (May not be picked if you have a primary of Adept level. See Mastery parenthesis for explanation)
Anima: (when you display your power it may manifest around you as a visible aura. Sometimes taking the shape of an animal, being, or totem) Winter fox
Mastery: (Novice, Initiate, Adept, Learned, Expert, Master, Grandmaster; capped at Adept to start. Note that you may start with one Adeptcy or two initiate or three novice focuses.) Adept
Essence: (How much raw power you have. Start with fifty points) 50
Motes: (how many times in a day you may use Essence without being drained. Start with five.) 5

Skills
(Total of 50 points and may start with a maximum of six in each category as initial limit. Categories are stat based unless stated.)
Language: (How quick you can learn foreign languages) 5
Able to Read: (Yes or No) Yes
Reading Comprehension: (how well your character reads) 5

Archery: 4
Ranged: (utilizing other ranged weapons like throwing knives etc) 4
Riding: 6
Short Arm Melee: (single and hand and half swords, maces, flails, etc) 5
Long Arm Melee: (Spears, two hand swords, long axes) 4
Polearms: (also includes spears and halberds) 3

Crafting
Basic Repair: (Fixing simple things like cartwheels and your starting equipment)4
Advanced Repair: (Advanced machinery) 2
Magitech: (Able to fix magical machinery)2
Artifice: (Creating things) 1
Metallurgy: (How well you fashion metal) 1
Engineering: (Catch all of construction and building knowledges. A 1 is like putting a tent and 100 is building Dimensional Gateways)
14
Magic (For Non-Exalted whom may learn Sorcery though it is considered Low Magic and weaker but able to be mastered by anyone)
Elemental: (list element and stat)
Energy: (Raw pure power)
Animate: (How well you animate machinery)
Necromancy: (How well you animate the dead)
Animalism: (Control of animals)
Shapeshifting: (Temporarily changing your form)
Illusion:
Summoning:

[/b]

Since the other issues I have weren't addressed, I can't accept.

Err, I don't really see anything wrong. May you please point it out to me? Sorry.

[Acerbez]

She essentially just wants you to write out a bio with more details, I presume. I would suggest just filling in a background story of his origin, his house's composition (if he has one). You always have the option of being a "lost egg" that doesn't belong to a house and is usually petitioned to join one either way at some point. Regardless, stating that out would do you well I feel. If you're not familiar (like myself) with cities and geography u can always claim the imperial city as your origin. Joining the discord also has details of the RP not listed in the thread such as maps and things like that.

Can always reference other apps on how they did it.

You fixed the decimal issue and also the characters reference from the webtoon, which is cool.

Would love to see ya make it to the IC!

[Abercontin-Jereaux]

She essentially just wants you to write out a bio with more details, I presume. I would suggest just filling in a background story of his origin, his house's composition (if he has one). You always have the option of being a "lost egg" that doesn't belong to a house and is usually petitioned to join one either way at some point. Regardless, stating that out would do you well I feel. If you're not familiar (like myself) with cities and geography u can always claim the imperial city as your origin. Joining the discord also has details of the RP not listed in the thread such as maps and things like that.

Can always reference other apps on how they did it.

You fixed the decimal issue and also the characters reference from the webtoon, which is cool.

Would love to see ya make it to the IC!

Okay! Though I can't make it today because it's nighttime at my place.

[Imperialisium]

Bump

[Acerbez]

No worries! The IC is just commencing so you have time

[Imperialisium]

Bump

[Acerbez]

Is it a given that weapons aren't allowed in the Deliberative? Or just like... they shouldn't be there out of courtesy.

Seems like an obvious answer but just asking to know.

[Imperialisium]

Is it a given that weapons aren't allowed in the Deliberative? Or just like... they shouldn't be there out of courtesy.

Seems like an obvious answer but just asking to know.

Yeah no weapons inside.

[Acerbez]

Is it a given that weapons aren't allowed in the Deliberative? Or just like... they shouldn't be there out of courtesy.

Seems like an obvious answer but just asking to know.

Yeah no weapons inside.

Oof... Alright, noted... What would the damages be if a weapon was pulled? Not that there will be but just for reference purposes. Asking for a friend.

[Imperialisium]

Yeah no weapons inside.

Oof... Alright, noted... What would the damages be if a weapon was pulled? Not that there will be but just for reference purposes. Asking for a friend.

A weapon pulled within the Deliberative would be a dishonorable act. The head of your house would be swift to reprimand you severely for that (I.e. a public beating or whipping would be considered getting off easy).

Outside the Deliberative you may carry freely though drawing a weapon is still considered a serious act and shouldn’t be done carelessly.

[Acerbez]

Really dig the etiquette and aesthetic of exalted.. I wish lore was more readily available outside of source books tho.

[Imperialisium]

Really dig the etiquette and aesthetic of exalted.. I wish lore was more readily available outside of source books tho.

Yeah, but then again the original and current publishers are pretty small. I think only 2-3 guys wrote like 95% of the lore. I know one guy basically did all the magic related lore. So really they depend on the community to spread it via word of mouth.

[Acerbez]

*takes a big wiff of the air in the deliberative*

You can smell the coup d'etat simmering in the aiiir.. Lolol

[Imperialisium]

*takes a big wiff of the air in the deliberative*

You can smell the coup d'etat simmering in the aiiir.. Lolol

No doubt several. Coupception

[Acerbez]

Pretty sure I've overstepped my authority in the house... Lmao. But I'm certain the animosity in the hall among the great houses will put me in hindsight.

Hopefully. Lol

[Imperialisium]

Pretty sure I've overstepped my authority in the house... Lmao. But I'm certain the animosity in the hall among the great houses will put me in hindsight.

Hopefully. Lol

You good

[Imperialisium]

Post coming soon

[Acerbez]

If Ragara keeps making that face... It'll get stuck like that...




... Meaning I'll kill her. Lul

[Imperialisium]

If Ragara keeps making that face... It'll get stuck like that...




... Meaning I'll kill her. Lul

lelelele