Exalted: Age of Sorrows (Always Open/Accepting Applications)

[Imperialisium]

Tag, thinking of doing a nefarious, Loki-type character here. Would the Chosen of Secrets or the Zenith suit the type?

I don't think non-Terrestrial Exalted are available to RP as.

Also, Imp, the description of the Abyssal Exalted is an exact copy of the Sidereal Exalted. Is that intentional?

Yeah Abyssals are supposed to have a different description than Sidereals. However until I fix it I will explain that Abyssals are former Exalted that got twisted by the Deathlords to be their own dark version.

@Sarderia

The Imperial Treasury is headed by a Vizier who reports to Tepet Fokuf, the regent, and is served by various departments headed by Chief Magistrates, provincial Magistrates, and below them the various rank and file tax collectors, auditors, surveyors, secretaries, and scribes. All of whom normally create a complex but competent system. However, with the Empress vanishing and fragmenting political structure so too is the treasury as officials are bribed, cajoled, sacked and sometimes murdered.

[Imperialisium]

also OP, what is a position in the Empire's money-machine that is high and holding considerable sway, but not over-powered?

probably could play as a Chief Magistrate. Head of a whole department of the Treasury but under the Vizier. Which canonically is Bel Keraz unless someone chooses to play as the Vizier and I can have ole Bel Keraz written out via retiring or something.

[Acerbez]

Tag.

Plan to have an app in by today. It cool if I join the discord to catch any updates not here?

[Imperialisium]

Tag.

Plan to have an app in by today. It cool if I join the discord to catch any updates not here?

Go for it

[Acerbez]

[Withdrawn]

[Imperialisium]

NationStates Name: Aeterna Publicae's Acerbez
Basic Info:
Given Name: Kanen
Surname/House: Bartclutz
House Symbol/Sigil: The Helping hand
Age: 28
Height: 5'7
Weight: 155lbs
Body Build: Unremarkable, not fat, not sculpted. Unremarkable.
Eye Color: brown
Image:

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Description: His short hair retains buoyancy despite weather conditions
Sexuality: Abstinent
Exalted: No
Occupation: Mainly volunteers at the monastery or other charitable works.
Allegiance: Lawful good?

Biography: Kanen Barclutz, is somewhat of a mystery to the monastery and poorer folks of the imperial city. Showing up one random day in a rather random year that nobody seems to care to remember or bother to take note of. Some folks insist it was 2 years ago, some 5, and some even say they've seen him helping around giving handouts and pouring soup from the ladel 10 years ago! Despite his constant conversation and odd presence of "just being around", nobody has actually bothered to ask him about himself. Nope... He just doesn't really have that kind of aura about him, he resembles that random face when you imagine a passerby in the road. His features basic, his voice generic, only his choice of words or odd chuckle have any real personality to them. Quirky little jokes when he asks for help to carry the cauldron, odd retorts followed by a giggle when he requests one pass him their empty bowl... A kind of stupid jolly when he turns back to slightly smile and wink back at you as he departs. Most people who find themselves in his company actually decide rather quickly that they're much more comfortable eating in silence, as he sort of tends to droll on and on about the grace and humility of his patron Saint.

It actually becomes rather annoying, most people say. But despite this, they choose to tolerate his presence due to his efforts to just be of an assistance. "Have you been baptised and blessed in the waters of lake Mauritia?" he asks as you would shove a spoon of porridge into your hungry belly. "Perhaps you should have prayed today" he remarks while smiling with his eyes almost closed just as the apothecary finishes bandaging your wound. "That wouldn't have happened if they just followed the holy word"... He asserts as he interrupts you telling the story of how the loansharks took your cousin's every jade coin.

It's almost as if his unwanted advances toward religion perturb even the closest to the faith, turning away from its grace just by how passively unrelenting or irritating he is about it. Like a gnat in your ear on hot day that for whatever reason demands your attention and is a minor inconvenience entirely in compared to the immediate circumstance but makes itself all the more memorable because of it. One could almost say that he's turned more poor people away from the faith impart of this only If everyone who's made his acquaintance pooled together to write a quantative survey about it but that would never happen... . Somehow though he is tolerated by the public and the poor. Never actually found when he's sought out but somehow always helping somebody out of sheer effort to just be their to do something.

Starting Equipment:
Mollywhop: Kanen's sling, used to remove pesky pigeons from the bell tower's inner ceiling. He's only ever used it 4 times on people for various reasons and he exclaims he doesn't like to but nothing pisses him off more than somebody slandering the God's greatness. At which point he warns the individual but you bet there were those who thought this average guy didn't have it in him and essentially got Molly whopped.

Lucky prayer beads: A rosary like necklace with beads more like full rocks, he wears it under his robe and prays with them everyday. Sometimes even talking to them affectionately. One homeless man started a rumor as a joke that Kanen has 1 rock for every god on that damn thing and how it doesn't break his neck is remarkable in itself.

Pouch of actual rocks: a pouch of actual rocks and bullets that Kanen occasionally finds out and about and deems them ideal for pesky pigeons.

The Simple Word: a rather ornate club for such a simple man. In truth, he refers to any bludgeoning weapon as the simple word because if they don't heed the holy words than surely one will know what the club means.

Intimacy Metrics
Honor Rating: 5 (Only the gods can judge him)
Relationship Status: 1 (find someone who actually likes him and I'll change it)
Intelligence: 8
Wit: 5
Academic Knowledge: 8
Sense of Humor: 3
Sociability: 4
Law: 4 (the laws of the gods are the only that matter)
Perception: 2
Compassion: 4
Temperance: 5 (10 if you love the holy word)
Valor: 5 (he does his utmost best to be there for his friends)

Convictions: Helping the less fortunate, Prayer, reminding you of prayer, Staying blessed and thanking the God's. Kanen despises those that shun the Holy word but for one reason or another only amps up his rhetoric/references or responses of the God's grace on mankind and the individuals existence.

Exalted Metrics (if applicable)
Primary Focus: (Fire, Wood, Earth, Water, Air)
Secondary Focuses: (May not be picked if you have a primary of Adept level. See Mastery parenthesis for explanation)
Anima: (when you display your power it may manifest around you as a visible aura. Sometimes taking the shape of an animal, being, or totem)
Mastery: (Novice, Initiate, Adept, Learned, Expert, Master, Grandmaster; capped at Adept to start. Note that you may start with one Adeptcy or two initiate or three novice focuses.)
Essence: (How much raw power you have. Start with fifty points)
Motes: (how many times in a day you may use Essence without being drained. Start with five.)

Skills
Language: 3
Able to Read: Yes
Reading Comprehension: 5

Archery: 1
Ranged: 5 (with his sling) 3 for anything else
Riding: 2
Short Arm Melee: 3 (he's clumsy but may get lucky)
Long Arm Melee: 1
Polearms: 2

Crafting
Basic Repair: 5
Advanced Repair: 4
Magitech: 5
Artifice: 5
Metallurgy: 5
Engineering: 5

Magic (For Non-Exalted whom may learn Sorcery though it is considered Low Magic and weaker but able to be mastered by anyone)
Elemental: (list element and stat)
Energy: (Raw pure power)
Animate: (How well you animate machinery)
Necromancy: (How well you animate the dead)
Animalism: (Control of animals)
Shapeshifting: (Temporarily changing your form)
Illusion:
Summoning:

Accepted

[Kingdom of Irhk]

Tag.

[Sarderia]

I don't think non-Terrestrial Exalted are available to RP as.

Also, Imp, the description of the Abyssal Exalted is an exact copy of the Sidereal Exalted. Is that intentional?

Yeah Abyssals are supposed to have a different description than Sidereals. However until I fix it I will explain that Abyssals are former Exalted that got twisted by the Deathlords to be their own dark version.

@Sarderia

The Imperial Treasury is headed by a Vizier who reports to Tepet Fokuf, the regent, and is served by various departments headed by Chief Magistrates, provincial Magistrates, and below them the various rank and file tax collectors, auditors, surveyors, secretaries, and scribes. All of whom normally create a complex but competent system. However, with the Empress banishing and fragmenting political structure so too is the treasury as officials are bribed, cajoled, sacked and sometimes murdered.

finally, what is the suitable age? I prefer being not more than 29 if it lies within common sense to achieve such position in that age, of course, would it serve?

[Acerbez]

NationStates Name: Aeterna Publicae's Acerbez
Basic Info :
Given Name: Beautiful in her brutality, The Weeping Willow's Lament; Rouzen
Surname/House: Terpischora (V'neef lineage)
House Symbol/Sigil: A Blindfolded White Antlered Fox on a dark purple background.
Age: 25
Height: 5'10
Weight: 170lbs
Body Build: Slender and Athletic. Posturing of an acrobat and Prolific performer
Eye Color: Deep Vibrant Green
Image:

Description: Rouzen Terpischora maintains fair and unblemished skin despite the rigorous and strenuous training demanded from her martial arts and practice with Umuri vine whips which resulted in innumerable counts of self injury. The healing techniques combined with wood mastery and medicines is the only process that made this possible. She is adorned with as many ornate gold decorative jewelries as she would have scars, whether it would be piercings, clip rings in her hair, necklaces, small finger rings, or even armlets.

Her dual Urumi vine whips are worn at her side and tend to be wrapped around her waist in a decorative yet unalarming fashion when walking about.

Sexuality: Unknown
Exalted: Yes
Occupation: Initially in her youth, she was an avid performer, both acrobatically and musically. Combining both song and dance. As she grew older and more proficient in martial art and Urumi prowess (requiring proficiency in both sword and whip in order to master) she began to incorporate that into her displays. However at a very young age not long after leaving the heptogram, for a time, she went in service for her house and trained as surgical instrument on the battlefield for its legionnaires. Perhaps a means to release childhood tension, or just a means to get away. She became proficient at "severing the head of the snake" and volunteered it as her purpose to her commanding officers. As she would scour the battlefield for the most covert means to approach an enemy general or revolting patrician and slay them using a myriad of methods to accomplish this end. She has been instrumental in promoting not only her house's interests but also propelling it upwards in the ranks of other houses both V'neef as a great house and within as well earning herself and V'neef prestige.

Now no longer under the House's legion, she seems to follow her own vested interest's while avoiding her return to V'neef territories.

Allegiance: Herself then her house.
Biography:

House V'neef and its Terpischora line, founded by one of V'neef's very own children is like many other smaller major lines yet unlike them in a multitude of ways. Lacking the size and strength of the more militant houses, House Terpischora is more cold and deliberate when achieving its ends for V'neef but does so illusively.

While it seems that the line makes an earnest living in the south- in both caretaking of the sick, poor, and deceased very similar to the immaculate order, supplying healers and apothecaries for its satrapies and legions, or through its gilded performances from its distinct dance like martial arts... Taking a page from their siring father's house Cynis. There is another layer that very few within and without the house are aware of, the lucrative art of death dealing.

The line of Terpischora is indeed of the wood aspect, their main patron in fact seems to be to one of the 5th maidens, Saturn. Life and death. They achieve this by acting as the mortician's, as well as the healers. While one branch of the house is dedicated to adhering to life and restoring it, there is another that predicates itself to death further. Perhaps a front for the latter as to not be accused necromancy openly or worse; dabbling with daemons- An accusation none could survive socially. The former having occurred plenty and the latter never.

House Terpischora had a very different objective altogether when dealing with the dead. Although it cannot be proven, it is said that many times agents of the house regularly commune with the recently deceased in times of heinous crimes (or not) to ease their suffering in the afterlife. What sort of deal is struck is uncertain whether it is information or vengeance in exchange of some sort of servitude or payment, one cannot simply explain the comfort or ease Terpischora exalts have when communing or calling upon the dead. However it has certainly aided house V'neef in gaining information or the initiative within the empire. Regardless, the dead speak too and have much to say about the living world and creation.

Rouzen, a child of Terpischora, Her mother passing at birth and her father absent, she was raised by the house's seers. At a ripe young age she was excluded from her peers only by recommendation of a house savant that swore upon her uniqueness. Seeing as V'neef herself is the purest of the dragon bloods born of the Scarlet empress and the belief that children become collectively more potent as the line goes on, this was a justified decision. Excluded and tutored in private, she was exempted of any childhood opportunities others got to experienced. Many times she would disappear and dress herself as a beggar-child panhandling for food and coin, and sing for patronage from the common folk just to get away, only to be found and dragged back to the house. Often times scolded, chastised, and punished for such behavior, she would then be forced to further study in the house's arts and practices.

She quickly surpassed her peers in prowess, magic, and knowledge, and rightfully earned their resentment. She was given the best resources available to the house, and mentored by their greatest achievers via command of the house overseer and eventually sent to the heptogram- where it was believed better knowledge of herself would be known and kept in check. Taught not only the art of healing but also toxicology and herbology that came with knowing medicinal plants at home, Rouzen exceeded in spellcraft and emulates the witching aspects of it.

It wasn't until her maturing and exaltation when her essence manifested itself that her natural gift and talents became recognizable. A voice like no other, her essence empowered itself through her voice and sheer emotion, something that the Savant knew needed to be tamed through sheer will early on, lest it would ravage not only her but everything around her in an unguided rampage of carnage. The savant exclaimed often to the higher standing members of V'neef Terpischora, her essence, her 3rd fraction of soul, it is potent and almost with a mind of its own almost as if inferring she was not the only resident of the body and it an utmost priority she remain at the heptogram.

Coming to terms with her exaltation, many occasions her song would invoke immense guilt and sorrow unto its audience and even at times what seemed like excruciating pain if unchecked. Accounts of other exalt acolytes reporting horrendous nightmares and visitations of "spirits" and dead during and even after her seance like performances or ballads. Even at times when her anima manifested itself during intense exertion, onlookers of both her performances and battles swear they see a faces formulate in the ink like aura that exudes from her just before dissipating.

Although the Terpischora's famous dance like martial art can be accomplished with just a sword or blade, Rouzen herself chose to be tutored in the art of the Urumi after her departure from the heptogram. She is a phenom at festivals and parties held by nobles, invoking much emotion and a ambiance of sights as it seems her aura and anima's vestiges dance with her. The martial art itself already difficult and abstract to master. It is itself a performance of a lifetime.

Only the most underground and prestigious channels had been able to move V'neef Terpischora hesitation to relinquish her as an instrument of death, on or off the battlefield- but it had happened. Not wishing to exacerbate her pride to the point that she feels she no longer needs those who outrank her within her own house or perhaps as to not feed the monster they have allowed live in such close proximity, The house has been reluctant on retrieving her but grow wary of how her sentiments may change the longer she spends away.

Starting Equipment:

Dual Urumi Vine Whips:

Entirely unique and trained in its usage within the confines of House Terpischora, these lethal deadly weapons require extensive training in both sword and whip before one could dream of using them effectively. The probability of self injury is too great in the hands of an untrained user and are chosen as Rouzen's signature weapons. Slithering with a life of their own after charging their wood composite with her own essence, they prove to be greatly effective against multiple foes, requiring very little force to exact fatal injury. They compliment the Terpischora dance martial art to great ends and act as extensions in Rouzen's hands, the vines measuring approximately 5 feet each in length and able to grow exponentially in her hands. They decoratively wrap around her waist and compliment her appearance unassumingly.

The Shorn Twins: 2 ornate throwing daggers that are sheathed at her sides. Highly decorated and balanced to a perfect T, the wooden handles of these small blades are nestled and fixed in a way to appear as her main weapons of choice. Oh, how many have been so wrong.

La Gloria Inmortuae: A First age relic, it was hidden deep within the vaults of House Terpischora and forgotten. This "heirloom" was stolen by Rouzen just before leaving for the Heptogram. Despite the grim construction of soulsteel for it's bridge, its ornate head pieces on its scroll, the soulsteel seeps into the frame of its addition's that rest on the crest of the instrument. Even its Bow of soulsteel is intwined with the hairs of agonized solars. The keepers of the Heptogram were much more tolerant to its origin and qualities than what would be deemed "normal" and allowed her to keep it. Years of practice have unlocked its innate abilities to her while giving her an entirely new and abstract way to display her musical and magical talents. The soulsteel's deep black opaqueness gleems with whirling visages of the contained souls and spirits as their howls and moans perfect and play with the tune's of the Inmortuae Gloria, giving "life" to the small cityscape that resides on its face.

High quality leather Cuirass and assorted light plate fixtures: For the utmost flexability and protection, the set is designed to protect her most vital areas leaving all but the joints exposed. The peculiar quality of this set is that she wears light but fully covered armored gauntlets that protrude small studded spikes at the knuckle. Why her hands are encased in light armor? Well, it would certainly be nice to re-wrap those Urumi blades back up when one is done using them.

Ash: The faithful grey stallion from the south that's taken her all this way...


Intimacy Metrics
Honor Rating: 3 (she believes all is fair in love and war, however is not malicious and only believes this in conflict situations, academic economic, or martial).
Relationship Status: Single
Intelligence: 5
Wit: 4
Academic Knowledge: 5
Sense of Humor: 2
Sociability: 3
Law: 3
Perception: 7
Compassion: 2
Temperance: 4
Valor: 3

(41pts 9 remaining)

Convictions: Die by the sword... : Don't draw your weapon if you don't plan to use it. If you pick up a weapon, you qualify as a combatant- despite age or sex.

The End Justifies the means: Honor your word, bond, or contract. Expectations are to be stated... Somebody might have to die for what you want so be careful what you wish for.

Exalted Metrics
Primary Focus: Wood
Secondary Focuses: N/A
Anima: An inhuman Marionetta.

Once at a party held by House Cynis hosted by her grandfather, Rouzen performed and beguiled known Heptogram-Sorceress, Cynis Belar, who was said to have remarked jokingly (atleast what sounds jokingly for the shrewd woman) during a blade dancing performance that " It seems as if this one dances with a Yozi".

When Rouzen is not using her essence for self physical means; usually her more Prolific ability of manifesting through her voice, her aura essence manifests as a black tar'ish ink like substance that seeps out from various pore points or in her vicinity. Their opaqueness depending and lasting longer or being more concentrated in visibility/length depending on her efforts.

Diplomats and courtesans have witnessed accounts and testimonies exclaiming that her hair-raising melodies were sensationally beautiful and/or lamenting. Coupled with any combination of fact whether it was that they thought they'd heard other soft spoken voices join her ensemble, swear to have seen faces form within her aura throughout the performance, or even more quaintly that her facial expression, although unsullied and without stress, had weeped light streams of tears that resembled "black tar" that would dissipate into thin air after falling from her face- As if they were never there.

Perhaps the God's were too wrapped in their own expertise when sculpting her essence, because her cold demeanor and seemingly lack of compassion in her other "arts and professions" make this portion of her Anima nothing short of an irony.

Mastery: Wood Adept
Essence: 50
Motes: 5

Skills
1pt remaining
Language: 3
Able to Read: Yes
Reading Comprehension: Very High

Archery:4
Ranged:5
Riding:4
Short Arm Melee: 6
Long Arm Melee: 6
Polearms: 2

Crafting
Basic Repair: 4
Advanced Repair: 2
Magitech: 5
Artifice: 4
Metallurgy: 2
Engineering: 2

Magic
Elemental: (list element and stat)
Energy: (Raw pure power)
Animate: (How well you animate machinery)
Necromancy: (How well you animate the dead)
Animalism: (Control of animals)
Shapeshifting: (Temporarily changing your form)
Illusion:
Summoning:

[Imperialisium]

Yeah Abyssals are supposed to have a different description than Sidereals. However until I fix it I will explain that Abyssals are former Exalted that got twisted by the Deathlords to be their own dark version.

@Sarderia

The Imperial Treasury is headed by a Vizier who reports to Tepet Fokuf, the regent, and is served by various departments headed by Chief Magistrates, provincial Magistrates, and below them the various rank and file tax collectors, auditors, surveyors, secretaries, and scribes. All of whom normally create a complex but competent system. However, with the Empress banishing and fragmenting political structure so too is the treasury as officials are bribed, cajoled, sacked and sometimes murdered.

finally, what is the suitable age? I prefer being not more than 29 if it lies within common sense to achieve such position in that age, of course, would it serve?

Normally Viziers and Chief Magistrates would be much older due to the need for experience. However given the issues listed above having a 29 year old get appointed (probably with political help, basically nepotism) could happen. Younger people have been appointed to higher positions in real life anyways if they’ve had the proper connections.

[Imperialisium]

IC in the works. Just need a few more apps to drop.

[The Bio-Regional Cooperative of States]

Tag. Quite interested, expect an app by the end of the day

[Imperialisium]

Tag. Quite interested, expect an app by the end of the day

Awesome! Any questions feel free to drop me a line.

[Imperialisium]

IC will be up in 24 hours

[Imperialisium]

https://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopic.php?f=31&t=469290

IC is up. Also found in the discord and in the third OP post of the OOC.

[Acerbez]

Niiiiiice

[Abercontin-Jereaux]

Tag. finally an RP that interests me. I've been reading Subzero, a webtoon that has a similar Ancient Chinese setting. I think I'll get my app in in no time.

[Abercontin-Jereaux]

NationStates Name:
Basic Info:
Given Name: Siarus
Surname/House: Chung(I don't know what username to choose so I chose this)
House Symbol/Sigil: (if applicable)
Age: 27
Height: 5 feet 11.5 inches
Weight: ≈80/81 kg
Body Build: (Athletic, lanky, gaunt etc)Hunky
Eye Color: Turqoise
Image:

Description:( What cannot be seen in an image or additional noteworthy info)(Kyro is a character in Subzero) Siarus's hair is blue(unlike the picture. Despite his age, he can be quite playful and rude. He has sharp eyesight and can be paranoid at times when tgings don't go right for him. He usually wears a blue suit and wears an occasional mask, but no one knows why. He has a knack to make women cry but later he will regret it.
Sexuality: Heterosexual
Exalted:(Yes or No)Yes.
Occupation: (what do you do survive or social status) Seen as the charismatic goof, Siarus is a bureaucrat.
Allegiance: (if applicable)None.
Biography: I don't do well in bios. Born to a noble family, Siarus has always been brought up in a rich family. However, seeing the poor, he felt(surprisingly) sad. When he became an adult, he started working as a bureaucrat.
Starting Equipment: (just need personal effects or important items by your character. Like a family heirloom or what not)
The Fiery Sword- Kyro always carry a fire sword. It emits a fiery heat and legend says it can slice anything up. This sword is a legacy and Kyro found it while playing soldiers when he was 9.

Beauregard- Beauregard is a white stallion who can run quite fast but doesn't have that powerful a stamina. He was named after the late general.

Intimacy Metrics
(Total of 50 points, may only put a maximum of five in each stat at start, can fluctuate throughout RP as events transpire and basically help visualize the personality of your character. Maximum of ten in each stat metric.)
Honor Rating: 4
Relationship Status:4
Intelligence: 3
Wit:4.5
Academic Knowledge:3
Sense of Humor:5
Sociability:4.5
Law: (How high your character regards the law and against breaking it) 4
Perception: (seeing through lies, illusion, and surroundings to try and gain the initiative)5
Compassion:2.5
Temperance: 2.5
Valor: 4

Convictions: (List them)
Justice is the answer- Siarus believes that everything can only be resolved with justice, and that he looks down on biased people and people who are filled with prejudice.
Exalted Metrics (if applicable)
Primary Focus: (Fire, Wood, Earth, Water, Air) Fire
Secondary Focuses: (May not be picked if you have a primary of Adept level. See Mastery parenthesis for explanation)
Anima: (when you display your power it may manifest around you as a visible aura. Sometimes taking the shape of an animal, being, or totem) A winter fox
Mastery: (Novice, Initiate, Adept, Learned, Expert, Master, Grandmaster; capped at Adept to start. Note that you may start with one Adeptcy or two initiate or three novice focuses.) Adept
Essence: (How much raw power you have. Start with fifty points) 50
Motes: (how many times in a day you may use Essence without being drained. Start with five.) 5

Skills
(Total of 50 points and may start with a maximum of six in each category as initial limit. Categories are stat based unless stated.)
Language: (How quick you can learn foreign languages)3
Able to Read: (Yes or No) Yeet
Reading Comprehension: (how well your character reads)5

Archery:
Ranged: (utilizing other ranged weapons like throwing knives etc) 4
Riding:4
Short Arm Melee: (single and hand and half swords, maces, flails, etc)3
Long Arm Melee: (Spears, two hand swords, long axes)4
Polearms: (also includes spears and halberds)3

Crafting
Basic Repair: (Fixing simple things like cartwheels and your starting equipment)6
Advanced Repair: (Advanced machinery) 4
Magitech: (Able to fix magical machinery) 3
Artifice: (Creating things) 4.5
Metallurgy: (How well you fashion metal) 6
Engineering: (Catch all of construction and building knowledges. A 1 is like putting a tent and 100 is building Dimensional Gateways)
10
Magic (For Non-Exalted whom may learn Sorcery though it is considered Low Magic and weaker but able to be mastered by anyone)
Elemental: (list element and stat)
Energy: (Raw pure power)
Animate: (How well you animate machinery)
Necromancy: (How well you animate the dead)
Animalism: (Control of animals)
Shapeshifting: (Temporarily changing your form)
Illusion:
Summoning:

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EdItEd

[Imperialisium]

NationStates Name:
Basic Info:
Given Name: Kyro
Surname/House: Chung(I don't know what username to choose so I chose this)
House Symbol/Sigil: (if applicable)
Age: 27
Height: 5 feet 11.5 inches
Weight: ≈80/81 kg
Body Build: (Athletic, lanky, gaunt etc)Hunky
Eye Color: Amber
Image:

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Description:( What cannot be seen in an image or additional noteworthy info)(Kyro is a character in Subzero) Kyro's hair is red. Despite his age, Kyro can be quite stubborn and rude. He has sharp eyesight and can be paranoid at times. He usually wears a red suit and has a dragon tattoo. He likes rose baths. He has a knack to make women cry but later he will regret it.
Sexuality: Heterosexual
Exalted:(Yes or No)Yes.
Occupation: (what do you do survive or social status) Seen as the charismatic goof, Kyro is a bureaucrat.
Allegiance: (if applicable)None.
Biography: I don't do well in bios. Born to a noble family, Kyro has always been brought up in a rich family. However, seeing the poor, he felt(surprisingly) sad. When he became an adult, he started working as a bureaucrat.
Starting Equipment: (just need personal effects or important items by your character. Like a family heirloom or what not)
The Crimson Sword- Kyro always carry a crimson sword. It emits a fiery heat and legend says it can slice anything up. This sword is a legacy and Kyro found it while playing soldiers when he was 9.

Beauregard- Beauregard is a white stallion who can run quite fast but doesn't have that powerful a stamina. He was named after the late general.

Intimacy Metrics
(Total of 50 points, may only put a maximum of five in each stat at start, can fluctuate throughout RP as events transpire and basically help visualize the personality of your character. Maximum of ten in each stat metric.)
Honor Rating: 4
Relationship Status:4
Intelligence: 3
Wit:4.5
Academic Knowledge:3
Sense of Humor:5
Sociability:4.5
Law: (How high your character regards the law and against breaking it) 4
Perception: (seeing through lies, illusion, and surroundings to try and gain the initiative)5
Compassion:2.5
Temperance: 2.5
Valor: 4

Convictions: (List them)
Justice is the answer- Kyro believes that everything can only be resolved with justice, and that he looks down on biased people and people who are filled with prejudice.
Exalted Metrics (if applicable)
Primary Focus: (Fire, Wood, Earth, Water, Air) Fire
Secondary Focuses: (May not be picked if you have a primary of Adept level. See Mastery parenthesis for explanation)
Anima: (when you display your power it may manifest around you as a visible aura. Sometimes taking the shape of an animal, being, or totem) A crimson dragon
Mastery: (Novice, Initiate, Adept, Learned, Expert, Master, Grandmaster; capped at Adept to start. Note that you may start with one Adeptcy or two initiate or three novice focuses.) Adept
Essence: (How much raw power you have. Start with fifty points) 50
Motes: (how many times in a day you may use Essence without being drained. Start with five.) 5

Skills
(Total of 50 points and may start with a maximum of six in each category as initial limit. Categories are stat based unless stated.)
Language: (How quick you can learn foreign languages)3
Able to Read: (Yes or No) Yeet
Reading Comprehension: (how well your character reads)5

Archery:
Ranged: (utilizing other ranged weapons like throwing knives etc) 4
Riding:4
Short Arm Melee: (single and hand and half swords, maces, flails, etc)3
Long Arm Melee: (Spears, two hand swords, long axes)4
Polearms: (also includes spears and halberds)3

Crafting
Basic Repair: (Fixing simple things like cartwheels and your starting equipment)6
Advanced Repair: (Advanced machinery) 4
Magitech: (Able to fix magical machinery) 3
Artifice: (Creating things) 4.5
Metallurgy: (How well you fashion metal) 6
Engineering: (Catch all of construction and building knowledges. A 1 is like putting a tent and 100 is building Dimensional Gateways)
10
Magic (For Non-Exalted whom may learn Sorcery though it is considered Low Magic and weaker but able to be mastered by anyone)
Elemental: (list element and stat)
Energy: (Raw pure power)
Animate: (How well you animate machinery)
Necromancy: (How well you animate the dead)
Animalism: (Control of animals)
Shapeshifting: (Temporarily changing your form)
Illusion:
Summoning:

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OOC: If this copys Kyro from Subzero too much I feel free to inform me .

Few things,
I would prefer a more original character (I.e. not a copy from a webtoon though if you wish to use the picture to help with the physical description that’s fine).

If you could beef up your app a bit? It’s a bit thin and barebones.

Lastly you can’t use decimals when doing stats. Bit of an unspoken rule of mine I admit but that’s an easy fix.

[Acerbez]

Changed my chars name to "Rouzen Terpischora".

Apologies for the technical inconvenience lol

[Rodez]

I should have a post up today.

[Imperialisium]

@Acerbez all good

@Rodez awesome!

[Abercontin-Jereaux]

NationStates Name:
Basic Info:
Given Name: Siarus
Surname/House: Chung(I don't know what username to choose so I chose this)
House Symbol/Sigil: (if applicable)
Age: 27
Height: 5 feet 11.5 inches
Weight: ≈80/81 kg
Body Build: (Athletic, lanky, gaunt etc)Hunky
Eye Color: Turqoise
Image:

(Image)

Description:( What cannot be seen in an image or additional noteworthy info)(Kyro is a character in Subzero) Siarus's hair is blue(unlike the picture. Despite his age, he can be quite playful and rude. He has sharp eyesight and can be paranoid at times when tgings don't go right for him. He usually wears a blue suit and wears an occasional mask, but no one knows why. He has a knack to make women cry but later he will regret it.
Sexuality: Heterosexual
Exalted:(Yes or No)Yes.
Occupation: (what do you do survive or social status) Seen as the charismatic goof, Siarus is a bureaucrat.
Allegiance: (if applicable)None.
Biography: I don't do well in bios. Born to a noble family, Siarus has always been brought up in a rich family. However, seeing the poor, he felt(surprisingly) sad. When he became an adult, he started working as a bureaucrat.
Starting Equipment: (just need personal effects or important items by your character. Like a family heirloom or what not)
The Fiery Sword- Kyro always carry a fire sword. It emits a fiery heat and legend says it can slice anything up. This sword is a legacy and Kyro found it while playing soldiers when he was 9.

Beauregard- Beauregard is a white stallion who can run quite fast but doesn't have that powerful a stamina. He was named after the late general.

Intimacy Metrics
(Total of 50 points, may only put a maximum of five in each stat at start, can fluctuate throughout RP as events transpire and basically help visualize the personality of your character. Maximum of ten in each stat metric.)
Honor Rating: 4
Relationship Status:4
Intelligence: 3
Wit:4.5
Academic Knowledge:3
Sense of Humor:5
Sociability:4.5
Law: (How high your character regards the law and against breaking it) 4
Perception: (seeing through lies, illusion, and surroundings to try and gain the initiative)5
Compassion:2.5
Temperance: 2.5
Valor: 4

Convictions: (List them)
Justice is the answer- Siarus believes that everything can only be resolved with justice, and that he looks down on biased people and people who are filled with prejudice.
Exalted Metrics (if applicable)
Primary Focus: (Fire, Wood, Earth, Water, Air) Fire
Secondary Focuses: (May not be picked if you have a primary of Adept level. See Mastery parenthesis for explanation)
Anima: (when you display your power it may manifest around you as a visible aura. Sometimes taking the shape of an animal, being, or totem) A winter fox
Mastery: (Novice, Initiate, Adept, Learned, Expert, Master, Grandmaster; capped at Adept to start. Note that you may start with one Adeptcy or two initiate or three novice focuses.) Adept
Essence: (How much raw power you have. Start with fifty points) 50
Motes: (how many times in a day you may use Essence without being drained. Start with five.) 5

Skills
(Total of 50 points and may start with a maximum of six in each category as initial limit. Categories are stat based unless stated.)
Language: (How quick you can learn foreign languages)3
Able to Read: (Yes or No) Yeet
Reading Comprehension: (how well your character reads)5

Archery:
Ranged: (utilizing other ranged weapons like throwing knives etc) 4
Riding:4
Short Arm Melee: (single and hand and half swords, maces, flails, etc)3
Long Arm Melee: (Spears, two hand swords, long axes)4
Polearms: (also includes spears and halberds)3

Crafting
Basic Repair: (Fixing simple things like cartwheels and your starting equipment)6
Advanced Repair: (Advanced machinery) 4
Magitech: (Able to fix magical machinery) 3
Artifice: (Creating things) 4.5
Metallurgy: (How well you fashion metal) 6
Engineering: (Catch all of construction and building knowledges. A 1 is like putting a tent and 100 is building Dimensional Gateways)
10
Magic (For Non-Exalted whom may learn Sorcery though it is considered Low Magic and weaker but able to be mastered by anyone)
Elemental: (list element and stat)
Energy: (Raw pure power)
Animate: (How well you animate machinery)
Necromancy: (How well you animate the dead)
Animalism: (Control of animals)
Shapeshifting: (Temporarily changing your form)
Illusion:
Summoning:

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EdItEd

I edited!

[Imperialisium]

NationStates Name:
Basic Info:
Given Name: Siarus
Surname/House: Chung(I don't know what username to choose so I chose this)
House Symbol/Sigil: (if applicable)
Age: 27
Height: 5 feet 11.5 inches
Weight: ≈80/81 kg
Body Build: (Athletic, lanky, gaunt etc)Hunky
Eye Color: Turqoise
Image:

(Image)

Description:( What cannot be seen in an image or additional noteworthy info)(Kyro is a character in Subzero) Siarus's hair is blue(unlike the picture. Despite his age, he can be quite playful and rude. He has sharp eyesight and can be paranoid at times when tgings don't go right for him. He usually wears a blue suit and wears an occasional mask, but no one knows why. He has a knack to make women cry but later he will regret it.
Sexuality: Heterosexual
Exalted:(Yes or No)Yes.
Occupation: (what do you do survive or social status) Seen as the charismatic goof, Siarus is a bureaucrat.
Allegiance: (if applicable)None.
Biography: I don't do well in bios. Born to a noble family, Siarus has always been brought up in a rich family. However, seeing the poor, he felt(surprisingly) sad. When he became an adult, he started working as a bureaucrat.
Starting Equipment: (just need personal effects or important items by your character. Like a family heirloom or what not)
The Fiery Sword- Kyro always carry a fire sword. It emits a fiery heat and legend says it can slice anything up. This sword is a legacy and Kyro found it while playing soldiers when he was 9.

Beauregard- Beauregard is a white stallion who can run quite fast but doesn't have that powerful a stamina. He was named after the late general.

Intimacy Metrics
(Total of 50 points, may only put a maximum of five in each stat at start, can fluctuate throughout RP as events transpire and basically help visualize the personality of your character. Maximum of ten in each stat metric.)
Honor Rating: 4
Relationship Status:4
Intelligence: 3
Wit:4.5
Academic Knowledge:3
Sense of Humor:5
Sociability:4.5
Law: (How high your character regards the law and against breaking it) 4
Perception: (seeing through lies, illusion, and surroundings to try and gain the initiative)5
Compassion:2.5
Temperance: 2.5
Valor: 4

Convictions: (List them)
Justice is the answer- Siarus believes that everything can only be resolved with justice, and that he looks down on biased people and people who are filled with prejudice.
Exalted Metrics (if applicable)
Primary Focus: (Fire, Wood, Earth, Water, Air) Fire
Secondary Focuses: (May not be picked if you have a primary of Adept level. See Mastery parenthesis for explanation)
Anima: (when you display your power it may manifest around you as a visible aura. Sometimes taking the shape of an animal, being, or totem) A winter fox
Mastery: (Novice, Initiate, Adept, Learned, Expert, Master, Grandmaster; capped at Adept to start. Note that you may start with one Adeptcy or two initiate or three novice focuses.) Adept
Essence: (How much raw power you have. Start with fifty points) 50
Motes: (how many times in a day you may use Essence without being drained. Start with five.) 5

Skills
(Total of 50 points and may start with a maximum of six in each category as initial limit. Categories are stat based unless stated.)
Language: (How quick you can learn foreign languages)3
Able to Read: (Yes or No) Yeet
Reading Comprehension: (how well your character reads)5

Archery:
Ranged: (utilizing other ranged weapons like throwing knives etc) 4
Riding:4
Short Arm Melee: (single and hand and half swords, maces, flails, etc)3
Long Arm Melee: (Spears, two hand swords, long axes)4
Polearms: (also includes spears and halberds)3

Crafting
Basic Repair: (Fixing simple things like cartwheels and your starting equipment)6
Advanced Repair: (Advanced machinery) 4
Magitech: (Able to fix magical machinery) 3
Artifice: (Creating things) 4.5
Metallurgy: (How well you fashion metal) 6
Engineering: (Catch all of construction and building knowledges. A 1 is like putting a tent and 100 is building Dimensional Gateways)
10
Magic (For Non-Exalted whom may learn Sorcery though it is considered Low Magic and weaker but able to be mastered by anyone)
Elemental: (list element and stat)
Energy: (Raw pure power)
Animate: (How well you animate machinery)
Necromancy: (How well you animate the dead)
Animalism: (Control of animals)
Shapeshifting: (Temporarily changing your form)
Illusion:
Summoning:

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EdItEd

I edited!

Editing the name is good. But you didn't fix any of the other concerns. Also I notice you the name horse after a late general...you're not referencing a certain American Civil War general are you?

[Abercontin-Jereaux]

Editing the name is good. But you didn't fix any of the other concerns.

Hmm. Then I'll just do a new one then. I'll delete the first one.

Also I notice you the name horse after a late general...you're not referencing a certain American Civil War general are you?

I didn't know anything about that. I chose that because it was the surname of one of the characters in Percy Jackson. The more you learn.

NationStates Name: Abercontin-Jereaux
Basic Info:
Given Name: Adonis(it's a bit weird, but meh)
Surname/House: Chung
House Symbol/Sigil: (if applicable)

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Age: 23
Height: 1.85 m
Weight: 77 kg
Body Build: (Athletic, lanky, gaunt etc) Hunky
Eye Color: Turqoise
Image:

Description:( What cannot be seen in an image or additional noteworthy info)Adonis was born to a (surprisingly) Greek mother. His personality is unlike his physical appearance, as Adonis is an introvert, although he can get a bit wild when drunk. He works as a bartender, but in his free time he prefers to read literature. He has blue hair and wears an occasional headband during important occasions. He is the only child.
Sexuality: Heterosexual
Exalted:(Yes or No) Yes
Occupation: (what do you do survive or social status) Bartender by day, private student by night
Allegiance: (if applicable)None.
Biography: His biography is stated in the description.
Starting Equipment: (just need personal effects or important items by your character. Like a family heirloom or what not)
[using the same as what I used for Siarus]
The Fiery Sword- Adonis always carry a fire sword. It emits a fiery heat and legend says it can slice anything up. This sword is a legacy and he found it while playing soldiers when he was 9.

Beauregard- Beauregard is a white stallion who can run quite fast but doesn't have that powerful a stamina. He was named after the late general.(who has got nothing to do with the civil war one)
Intimacy Metrics
(Total of 50 points, may only put a maximum of five in each stat at start, can fluctuate throughout RP as events transpire and basically help visualize the personality of your character. Maximum of ten in each stat metric.)
Honor Rating: 4
Relationship Status: 5
Intelligence: 4
Wit: 4
Academic Knowledge: 4
Sense of Humor: 2
Sociability: 1
Law: (How high your character regards the law and against breaking it) 4
Perception: (seeing through lies, illusion, and surroundings to try and gain the initiative) 3
Compassion: 4
Temperance: 5
Valor: 2

Convictions: (List them)
[b]Justice is the answer- Siarus believes that everything can only be resolved with justice, and that he looks down on biased people and people who are filled with prejudice.
Filial Piety- It explains itself
Exalted Metrics (if applicable)
Primary Focus: (Fire, Wood, Earth, Water, Air) Water
Secondary Focuses: (May not be picked if you have a primary of Adept level. See Mastery parenthesis for explanation)
Anima: (when you display your power it may manifest around you as a visible aura. Sometimes taking the shape of an animal, being, or totem) Winter fox
Mastery: (Novice, Initiate, Adept, Learned, Expert, Master, Grandmaster; capped at Adept to start. Note that you may start with one Adeptcy or two initiate or three novice focuses.) Adept
Essence: (How much raw power you have. Start with fifty points) 50
Motes: (how many times in a day you may use Essence without being drained. Start with five.) 5

Skills
(Total of 50 points and may start with a maximum of six in each category as initial limit. Categories are stat based unless stated.)
Language: (How quick you can learn foreign languages) 5
Able to Read: (Yes or No) Yes
Reading Comprehension: (how well your character reads) 5

Archery: 4
Ranged: (utilizing other ranged weapons like throwing knives etc) 4
Riding: 6
Short Arm Melee: (single and hand and half swords, maces, flails, etc) 5
Long Arm Melee: (Spears, two hand swords, long axes) 4
Polearms: (also includes spears and halberds) 3

Crafting
Basic Repair: (Fixing simple things like cartwheels and your starting equipment)4
Advanced Repair: (Advanced machinery) 2
Magitech: (Able to fix magical machinery)2
Artifice: (Creating things) 1
Metallurgy: (How well you fashion metal) 1
Engineering: (Catch all of construction and building knowledges. A 1 is like putting a tent and 100 is building Dimensional Gateways)
14
Magic (For Non-Exalted whom may learn Sorcery though it is considered Low Magic and weaker but able to be mastered by anyone)
Elemental: (list element and stat)
Energy: (Raw pure power)
Animate: (How well you animate machinery)
Necromancy: (How well you animate the dead)
Animalism: (Control of animals)
Shapeshifting: (Temporarily changing your form)
Illusion:
Summoning:

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