Beyond Light's Reach (Fantasy, OOC, OPEN)

[Finland SSR]

In other news, in absolute defiance of social and cultural norms, I’m calling a Danny x Theo.

Zark you probably hate the idea tho

*sweats nervously*

[New Neros]

One thing: can I keep the magic blast thing? It was very very nerfed, and I don't think it'll be powerful enough for open combat. For the combats I'll use what I wrote on my app.

I honestly don't remember it specifically from the post. But if you can assure it won't be used for combat I'll keep that in mind when you post the revised post.

It spooked his horse, I believe.

[Union Princes]

Sarderia, you spelt Randolf's name wrong in the letter your vice mage wrote.

[Galnius]

Ships for Tenna that make sense from apps alone.

Traven: Similar personality and morals, but Traven has the extraversion and charm to get her out of her cynical shell

Riki: Whilst both are quiet, Riki has the caring and patient foil to Tenna's prideful stubborness.

Brialya: More a what they could become as opposed to what they are, as the two seem like they could learn more ftom the other than anyone else, challenging their viewpoints and altogether kindling at least a friendship.

Emile: The other Street Crawler and honestly the least healthy of the potential ships. Both seem to have scarily similar morals, and could use the other almost as an escape.

[Tomia]

Ships for Tenna that make sense from apps alone.

Traven: Similar personality and morals, but Traven has the extraversion and charm to get her out of her cynical shell

Riki: Whilst both are quiet, Riki has the caring and patient foil to Tenna's prideful stubborness.

Brialya: More a what they could become as opposed to what they are, as the two seem like they could learn more ftom the other than anyone else, challenging their viewpoints and altogether kindling at least a friendship.

Emile: The other Street Crawler and honestly the least healthy of the potential ships. Both seem to have scarily similar morals, and could use the other almost as an escape.

These all make sense to me, hadn't actually considered Traven

[Galnius]

Ships for Tenna that make sense from apps alone.

Traven: Similar personality and morals, but Traven has the extraversion and charm to get her out of her cynical shell

Riki: Whilst both are quiet, Riki has the caring and patient foil to Tenna's prideful stubborness.

Brialya: More a what they could become as opposed to what they are, as the two seem like they could learn more ftom the other than anyone else, challenging their viewpoints and altogether kindling at least a friendship.

Emile: The other Street Crawler and honestly the least healthy of the potential ships. Both seem to have scarily similar morals, and could use the other almost as an escape.

These all make sense to me, hadn't actually considered Traven

He's in the lead atm. Riki and her would have trouble starting off, Bri and Tenna would literally be at each other's throats, and Emile only offers familiarity (though is in second atm).

[Finland SSR]

Ships for Tenna that make sense from apps alone.

Traven: Similar personality and morals, but Traven has the extraversion and charm to get her out of her cynical shell

Riki: Whilst both are quiet, Riki has the caring and patient foil to Tenna's prideful stubborness.

Brialya: More a what they could become as opposed to what they are, as the two seem like they could learn more ftom the other than anyone else, challenging their viewpoints and altogether kindling at least a friendship.

Emile: The other Street Crawler and honestly the least healthy of the potential ships. Both seem to have scarily similar morals, and could use the other almost as an escape.

I approve of the above message.

[The Land of Golden Blobfish]

Name: Aero Keiser
Age: 21
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Appearance (pics if possible):

Mage?: Yes
Bio (Please treat this as a replacement for a writing sample. No more than a few paragraphs is necessary but it should be well written):
Fighting Style (Warrior, Mage, Archer, etc): Support/ Healer
Abilities:

• Blessings of Datune: Through determination and sheer willpower (and possibly a little divine intervention), Aero is an expert at healing magic. Focusing his studies on replenishing others instead of inflicting damage, Aero is able to heal almost any wound or disease , including those that would normally be deemed fatal. However, as wondrous as this ability is, it comes with a catch. For one to be able to wield such powerful magic bestowed upon them by Datune, they must be deemed selfless and of noble heart. To give life by taking yours away: the magika used for this ability feeds off Aero’s own life source. While this normally isn’t a problem, for minor wounds don’t require significant amounts of magika, the greater the injury the more magika required. Extended use of this ability leads to paleness of the skin, fatigue, erratic breathing and in extreme cases, death. While he should be able to heal a fatal wound with no serious drawbacks, it would be best not to test the limits of this ability. He can’t heal himself.
• Armored barrier: Aero can cast an armor-like barrier around others to aid them in battle. The more damage it takes, the more magika it consumes. He can choose 3 different types of barriers, 1 for physical attacks only, 1 for magical attacks only, and 1 for both. The first 2 are easier to cast and maintain.
• Guided Light: The ability to summon a floating orb of light to brighten a dark room or scare off a nocturnal creature of the night. While it passively follows the user around, they can mentally control it to go elsewhere. Consumes very little Magika

Limitations:

• Sickly frame: Aero was born with an immune deficiency (a rather worrying case of hemophilia) that is seemingly uncurable. His blood doesn't clot like it’s supposed to so many wounds that wouldn't be considered fatal for others would be life threatening for him. While he’s not going to pass out from Anemia due to some minor cuts and scrapes, he still has to be extra cautious as he cannot heal himself if something were to happen. However, he cheerfully considers this a part of Datune’s bargain though those close to him will claim it’s an act to keep himself from getting down.
• Naive mind: Aero is always looking for the best in people and this trusting nature is what makes him an excellent target for psychological warfare. An easy target to manipulate and pull the heartstrings of.
• Combat Newbie: Because of his medical condition, Aero has made sure to stay away from training in combat. While it wouldn’t necessarily guarantee certain death, he didn’t feel the need to train for he would have no use for it nor did he have a desire to inflict pain.

Equipment:

• [Insert Equipment]
• [Insert Equipment]
  (Note, you do not have a maximum or minimum of 2 equipment. If you don’t need all those, delete them. If you need more, copy and paste. If it is a special piece of equipment please include a description. Also keep in mind your character’s background and what sort of wealth they would have as this greatly influences your starting equipment)

Optional Questionnaire
Personal Quest: To find his father.
Favorite Factions: The Repentant, Oadot’s Chosen, The Foresters
Least Favorite Factions: Faener’s Faithful, The Honor Guild
Favorite Memory: Laying against the apple tree behind his mom’s house during an evening in the Fall.
Goals: To help those around him. To spread peace and heal the victims of war.
Greatest Fear: Losing his mother
Religion: While I wouldn’t say he worships them, he follows the ideals of Datune.

[The Land of Golden Blobfish]

My app is a WIP at the moment. Just wanted to have a rough app with my early ideas posted in case there was anything that needed changing. I'll complete it within a day or two

[Finland SSR]

My app is a WIP at the moment. Just wanted to have a rough app with my early ideas posted in case there was anything that needed changing. I'll complete it within a day or two

Seems interesting so far.

[Skyggeheim]

In other news, in absolute defiance of social and cultural norms, I’m calling a Danny x Theo.

Zark you probably hate the idea tho

*sweats nervously*

Oh wow I’m dumb.

I thought Theo was Zark’s character. My mistake.

Anyways, yeah, it’s a bit of a strange ship, perhaps we’ll leave it as an idea for now

[Skyggeheim]

Ships for Tenna that make sense from apps alone.

Traven: Similar personality and morals, but Traven has the extraversion and charm to get her out of her cynical shell

Riki: Whilst both are quiet, Riki has the caring and patient foil to Tenna's prideful stubborness.

Brialya: More a what they could become as opposed to what they are, as the two seem like they could learn more ftom the other than anyone else, challenging their viewpoints and altogether kindling at least a friendship.

Emile: The other Street Crawler and honestly the least healthy of the potential ships. Both seem to have scarily similar morals, and could use the other almost as an escape.

I’d be down for this, but I also need to evolve Traven as a character. It’s sort of made evident in his bio that he has a natural curiosity and tries to pick apart the stories of people, and he’s especially drawn to the strong silent type, so at the very least I can see him approaching her and trying to make friends with her.

[The Anarcho-Syndicalist Commune]

Ships for Tenna that make sense from apps alone.

Traven: Similar personality and morals, but Traven has the extraversion and charm to get her out of her cynical shell

Riki: Whilst both are quiet, Riki has the caring and patient foil to Tenna's prideful stubborness.

Brialya: More a what they could become as opposed to what they are, as the two seem like they could learn more ftom the other than anyone else, challenging their viewpoints and altogether kindling at least a friendship.

Emile: The other Street Crawler and honestly the least healthy of the potential ships. Both seem to have scarily similar morals, and could use the other almost as an escape.

I’d be down for this, but I also need to evolve Traven as a character. It’s sort of made evident in his bio that he has a natural curiosity and tries to pick apart the stories of people, and he’s especially drawn to the strong silent type, so at the very least I can see him approaching her and trying to make friends with her.

It could also see Traven and Natasia potentially at some point.

[Tomia]

Sar, you still need to get rid of mind reading. I told you that that was not allowed.

[Finland SSR]

I dunno about you, but if I saw a seven foot lion-man point his claw at my throat, I'd reasonably expect anyone to be pissing their pants at least a little.

[New Neros]

I dunno about you, but if I saw a seven foot lion-man point his claw at my throat, I'd reasonably expect anyone to be pissing their pants at least a little.

he's just a big ol kitty

[Galnius]

Ships for Tenna that make sense from apps alone.

Traven: Similar personality and morals, but Traven has the extraversion and charm to get her out of her cynical shell

Riki: Whilst both are quiet, Riki has the caring and patient foil to Tenna's prideful stubborness.

Brialya: More a what they could become as opposed to what they are, as the two seem like they could learn more ftom the other than anyone else, challenging their viewpoints and altogether kindling at least a friendship.

Emile: The other Street Crawler and honestly the least healthy of the potential ships. Both seem to have scarily similar morals, and could use the other almost as an escape.

I’d be down for this, but I also need to evolve Traven as a character. It’s sort of made evident in his bio that he has a natural curiosity and tries to pick apart the stories of people, and he’s especially drawn to the strong silent type, so at the very least I can see him approaching her and trying to make friends with her.

That's just the list of potentials. Shipping with Tenna is a long, hard, and dangerous road.

[Gudmund]

Just wanted to point out that Talion's name is spelt wrong on the character list. I'm still reading through most of the IC, hopefully I can post tomorrow.

[Finland SSR]

I’d be down for this, but I also need to evolve Traven as a character. It’s sort of made evident in his bio that he has a natural curiosity and tries to pick apart the stories of people, and he’s especially drawn to the strong silent type, so at the very least I can see him approaching her and trying to make friends with her.

That's just the list of potentials. Shipping with Tenna is a long, hard, and dangerous road.

El Dorado can only be reached through the hardest roads.

[Sarderia]

Sar, you still need to get rid of mind reading. I told you that that was not allowed.

u didn't mention it earlier, but I'll edit it. Thx for da notice

[Galnius]

That's just the list of potentials. Shipping with Tenna is a long, hard, and dangerous road.

El Dorado can only be reached through the hardest roads.

Or by stowing away on a boat, getting captured, escaping with a horse and nearly dying, a musical number, and a theif.

[Zarkenis Ultima]

Hey Tom, in order to clear a sort of sensitive topic - or one that could be - is it okay if Hercynia practices slavery?

I want to avoid any problematic writings, but I figured we're going to address some of the realities of what seems like a relatively brutal universe, so I thought I'd ask before I write it in.

To clarify, I won't write anything disgusting or abhorrent. It's more of a semantics question.

Yeah, Hercynia would definitely practice slavery, so you can go ahead and mention it in future posts. Sorry for not being here to answer sooner!

*sweats nervously*

Oh wow I’m dumb.

I thought Theo was Zark’s character. My mistake.

Anyways, yeah, it’s a bit of a strange ship, perhaps we’ll leave it as an idea for now

RIP. But that explains your fixation with me

Just wanted to point out that Talion's name is spelt wrong on the character list. I'm still reading through most of the IC, hopefully I can post tomorrow.

I'll take a look and fix it!

[Tomia]

Sar, you still need to get rid of mind reading. I told you that that was not allowed.

u didn't mention it earlier, but I'll edit it. Thx for da notice

I very explicitly did

[New Neros]

Done. That was a particularly dark one, I think. Don't have the time to [img] all the doctor strange magic thingies so I suppose you all can figure it out

Few things to address about the post Sarderia. Frist, no mind reading, that wasn't mentioned at all in the app and I don't think its a power magic could reasonably granted. Second, I don' think the General publicly ordered the attack. It would kind of defeat the purpose of the peace expedition in the temple. Thirdly, honestly this post kind of confirmed the fears I was having about the character in the review process. This char seems like an angry unstable villain who openly confessed to murder. I just don't see how that character fits into the hammer of Eboris.

Its not that the quality of the post was off, it really wasn't, in fact it was well written. But I feel like this was exactly the direction of the character I was trying to steer you away from in the review process.

It was literally the first thing mentioned, Sard, knock it off.

[Zarkenis Ultima]

At 6'6", Danica was no midget.

>Not over 7 ft tall

I riot.